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11333 pts ★ ChampionOn 2024-07-29 at 21:59:39
Good episode! There was lots of drama, action, and a very sweet moment when Brandon sacrifices himself. Got some good insight into the life and feelings of someone like that. This was the first time I listened to the music while reading, the song choices were superb! Wish i could listen to those when I’m using phone . . . Finally I appreciate that you edited some of the swearing in this episode. It detracts from the readability when the episode is loaded with uncensored language tbh. The words have a way of popping out and drawing attention that should be focused on the story itself. Good job there.
I feel the season conclusion approaching. This’ll be good.
I feel the season conclusion approaching. This’ll be good.
1On 2024-07-14 at 23:40:23
Well Lely covered that episode pretty well. I'd like to mention one thing. I like how Johnson is showing he's not merely a grunt. He's actually using words to get his sister to his side. Manipulating her. He's becoming more formidable. It'll definitely be interesting to see how his story goes.
Good luck Warren. Good luck Margaux. Hopefully Brandon accepts Scarlett. And yeah . . . get a belt, Jeanne. Take Johnson's.
Great work as always!
Good luck Warren. Good luck Margaux. Hopefully Brandon accepts Scarlett. And yeah . . . get a belt, Jeanne. Take Johnson's.
Great work as always!
1On 2024-06-28 at 04:31:29
Great episode! The games actually are tougher, which is really good. For a while I was worried it'd be like "AAGH the characters games they're gonna be so hard!" and then they wouldn't be much worse than the ones in season 1. But these are actually harder, forcing tougher decisions (aaaaand a lot more death). Amazing work 
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Anyway not really surprised at the end of the jack of hearts game. Paola wasn't the jack, some (random?) guy was. I honestly expected Paola to play a bigger part and maybe survive, the death of her whole group was a little anticlimactic. Still, a good (and scary) game. Nice detective work at the end. O and Paola was doing some cool manipulation towards the end.
Johnson has a sister. A nice sister. Who doesn't realize he's a total ------------. That's an interesting development. Poor Warren. I hope that works out, it'll be interesting to see how Candice develops as a character.
. Anyway not really surprised at the end of the jack of hearts game. Paola wasn't the jack, some (random?) guy was. I honestly expected Paola to play a bigger part and maybe survive, the death of her whole group was a little anticlimactic. Still, a good (and scary) game. Nice detective work at the end. O and Paola was doing some cool manipulation towards the end.
Johnson has a sister. A nice sister. Who doesn't realize he's a total ------------. That's an interesting development. Poor Warren. I hope that works out, it'll be interesting to see how Candice develops as a character.
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On 2024-06-19 at 21:02:27
Put my review in a spoiler because, well, spoilers!
Episode 3 is good! The way the king of clubs game ended . . . Sad and hopeful at the same time. Logan and his friends took that really well. If you're gonna die, that's how to do it! 🥲 And Scarlett and Brandon made a good team at the end. Glad Marion survived, the story would really be dark if Jeanne had to continue alone.
The jack of hearts game;
So first off, this game has a neat concept. Everyone has a chance to get familiar with the rules in round one, then things start getting harder as the contestants try to find and kill the jack of hearts. I'm kinda thinking Paola is the jack, but that seems too obvious. Maybe she's just a normal player trying to get out by killing everybody until the jack dies. It'll be interesting seeing what she does in the next episode. (Good luck Warren)
Oh yeah winning all the games only makes you a citizen of that world. Oof. I wonder if they can still find a way out. And even more, if Jeanne and Marion can find a way out, will they choose to stay and maybe help others back to their home world? They might be starting to get that idea, it's still hard to tell. Is there any hope to get away? Gosh there are a lot of ways this story could go.
Amazing episode as always, looking forward to the next! 👏👏👏👏👏
The jack of hearts game;
So first off, this game has a neat concept. Everyone has a chance to get familiar with the rules in round one, then things start getting harder as the contestants try to find and kill the jack of hearts. I'm kinda thinking Paola is the jack, but that seems too obvious. Maybe she's just a normal player trying to get out by killing everybody until the jack dies. It'll be interesting seeing what she does in the next episode. (Good luck Warren)
Oh yeah winning all the games only makes you a citizen of that world. Oof. I wonder if they can still find a way out. And even more, if Jeanne and Marion can find a way out, will they choose to stay and maybe help others back to their home world? They might be starting to get that idea, it's still hard to tell. Is there any hope to get away? Gosh there are a lot of ways this story could go.
Amazing episode as always, looking forward to the next! 👏👏👏👏👏
1On 2024-06-04 at 01:16:51
Hmmm good start. The new game dynamic is neat, some new characters introduced (. . .), Johnson survived 👀, strong first episode! Looking forward to seeing how it goes. 👍
1On 2024-03-09 at 02:25:41
Man these games ...
Great episode, great finish for season 1, you are a legend sir. That little bit with Elena was a good way to end.
Awesome story, looking forward to season 2 😃!
Great episode, great finish for season 1, you are a legend sir. That little bit with Elena was a good way to end.
Awesome story, looking forward to season 2 😃!
1On 2024-03-03 at 00:05:37
Amazing. Amazing. This fanfic is emotional, humorous, exciting ... Even though it's written in the sort of movie-script form of most mkpc fanfics it still manages to be very good and descriptive. Can't say I like the amount of swearing but I'm the only one who will complain about that, and I understand your reasons for it.
Really great, suspense is good, concept is neat. And the characters are so well made! Really looking forward to the next episode! 👏👏👏
Really great, suspense is good, concept is neat. And the characters are so well made! Really looking forward to the next episode! 👏👏👏
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On 2025-04-28 at 23:54:30
How bout automatic locks for copied topics
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1/!\ PUBLISHING YOUR CHALLENGES / SUR LA PUBLICATION DES DÉFIS /!\
On 2023-12-18 at 22:37:17
Bonjour, si on ne peut pas créer de défi IMPOSIBLE pourquoi après extrême il y a impossible ???? il faudrait changer le nom car impossible veut dire impossible et non autre chose.
Ever learned about hyperbole in school? Impossible is an exaggeration, meant to be a fun title for the level of difficulty. It's figurative, not literal. this 3rd grade stuff why is it so hard to understand lol
1On 2023-03-24 at 23:49:01
Couple of my challenges've been rejected recently too. They're like, hidden areas you have to get to. For example, one has a jump hidden along a yellow wall section. You have to hit that jump to reach the zone. It was rejected because "can't get to the pipe" (pipe = goal). My intent is to make people study the map a little in order to complete the challenges. Is that wrong?
PS If it sounds like I'm mad about it I'm not. Just a wanna know where I'm going wrong so I can do better challenges
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PS If it sounds like I'm mad about it I'm not. Just a wanna know where I'm going wrong so I can do better challenges
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1/!\ IMPORTANT PASSWORD NOTICE / REMARQUE IMPORTANTE SUR LES MDP /!\
On 2025-04-01 at 23:57:18
Well. Add that to the pile
[FANFIC] Magma Island
On 2024-04-03 at 01:23:48
@40KsKool68 and I are about to go on a massacre. 
Not if I have anything to say about it (pls dont kill me i give you snickers)
can i have too
Will you help defend me against dietsoda and K???
Ah so everything blew up, but not everyone. Got it. Keep lookin' over your shoulder fiery 😈
Can we compromise or negotiate
I'll need a petition with three signatures, and four Reese's candies
On 2024-04-03 at 00:41:39
@40KsKool68 and I are about to go on a massacre.
Not if I have anything to say about it (pls dont kill me i give you snickers)
can i have too
Will you help defend me against dietsoda and K???
Ah so everything blew up, but not everyone. Got it. Keep lookin' over your shoulder fiery 😈
On 2024-04-02 at 00:30:34
Dawn of the 5th day (Day 5)
everything blew up
everything blew up
All is dust...
1On 2023-09-10 at 23:55:21
So.
So.
When can we go on that rampage? Also I'm totally gonna end up dead in the next two episodes. This'll be interesting.
So.
When can we go on that rampage? Also I'm totally gonna end up dead in the next two episodes. This'll be interesting.
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On 2023-03-22 at 23:36:53
Dawn of the third day (Day 3)
Sorbet: So where are we going again?
???: Do I have to say this to all of them? You're going to an island to fight some strangers from around the world. Clear enough for your simple little mind?
Yesterday on the island, Nudge's plane turned around and crashed into the island. Max awakes by the wreckage.
Max: Well, It's another day. Is that the plane Nudge was on? Maybe there's some supplies inside...
Max enters the plane and looks around.
Max: Oh... that must be Nudge's body. I should look a-
Nudge: What are you doing in here?
Max: AAAAHH! DON'T DO THAT!
Lely: Hey w- WAIT IS THAT A GHOST?!?!?!?
Nudge: No.
Max: How did you survive?
Nudge: Nevermind. I must get rid of those who have wronged me.
Max: What do you mean?
Lely: I think he's going to kill the people who voted him last night.
Max: Oh. Well, should we stay as a group?
Nudge: Sure, why not?
Lely: Could this mean that d4-
Max: Alright, let's go!
On the black rock beach...
Fiery: Perhaps I should find a group, maybe I would be safer that way.
MisterCringeh: Hello
Fiery: Oh hi! Didn't see you there.
MisterCringeh: I hear you need a group?
Fiery: Yes, do you want to group up with me?
MisterCringeh: That would be great! Can Buzzma join us too? She's only a little bit... stuck.
Buzzma: WHO LEAVES RANDOM HOLES IN THE GROUND
?
IlluZhion: Need some help there?
MisterCringeh: You're the one who kil-
IlluZhion: The one and only. My companion is in one of these holes, and I need some help.
Fiery: Oh well, any companion of yours is likely stronger than Buzzma. Let's go save this person!
Buzzma:
???: IlluZhion? Are you there?
IlluZhion: Of course.
MisterCringeh: Hello mystery person! What is your full name, date of birth, home address, IP address and favourite colour?
???: I can't tell you that. I'm going to have to stay here all day.
Fiery: And why is that?
A crackling can be heard...
???: Hello? I don't know if you can hear me, but I compromised their speaker's security. You have to go to the do- I've got to go, I will be seeing you shortly.
The Host: We apologize for that... mistake.
In the woods, a fight is taking place...
Jenwren: Just hand it over!
Popplio: NO! I SAW IT FIRST!
Jenwren: Let's have a fight for it.
Popplio: OK, I accept your challenge.
Jenwren dives for the pistol...
Popplio: YOU CAN'T DO THAT!
Noob: GUYS, STO-
Jenwren: Who said?
Jenwren shoots Popplio in the head...
Noob: Now that was completely unnecessary.
Lely: What was that on the speakers?
Max: I don't know, but I think someone's here to save us.
Nudge: But whom? And where?
Max: That we do not know. I think the docks?
Lely: Then let's go there.
Max: But what's going on there? I see something.
Lely: Is that... Jenwren? And Popplio?
Nudge: *Was Popplio
Lely: wait what
Max: I think he just died.
Lely: But how?
Jenwren: Gun
Noob: That wasn't very descriptive
Jenwren: I used a gun to shoot this guy in the head.
Max: I see. In that case, I'm going to throw this spear at you.
Jenwren: OK.
Max throws the spear through Jenwren's head, killing her instantly.
Lely:
Nudge: Clean shot. Could've been better though.
The Host: Alright everyone, I see that some of you have been "eliminated" today. Well then, should we get on with the votes?
Dietsoda: I am tired of Noob's existence.
MisterCringeh: I'll vote myself because why not.
Max: I don't really have anyone to vote for, but I will vote myself as I murdered someone today.
Noob: I think I'll vote for Dietsoda, in that case.
Buzzma: Fiery didn't help me get out of that STUPID HOLE
!
Fiery: I think I'll go for MisterCringeh for wasting my time. I shouldn't waste existence to save some weird lady in a hole.
Nudge: Max could've gotten a better kill.
StarSplizz: I vote for MisterCringeh, because why not?
K: I'll go with myself as no one has justification to target me.
Lely: I would vote Max for murdering someone, even though he could've just captured Jenwren, but I'll go with Nudge for being a crazy person.
Sorbet: I only just arrived here, but I agree with this "Lely" person.
The Host: Well, your votes have been placed...
and MisterCringeh is eliminated!
MisterCringeh: At least I get to be with bread in heaven...
The Host: Step into this chamber, please.
Cringeh enters, the door closes behind him and a button is pressed...
MisterCringeh: Woah, is that bread coming out of the celling?
The Host: It is! And now you don't have to be with bread only in heaven, you can die with it! Or should I say, by it...
MisterCringeh: What?
The bread falls in faster and faster, and MisterCringeh suffocates in bread. The participants can see how he died...
Lely: I'm going to be sick.
Max: JUST DO IT IN THE SE-
End of Part 3...
Sorbet: So where are we going again?
???: Do I have to say this to all of them? You're going to an island to fight some strangers from around the world. Clear enough for your simple little mind?
Yesterday on the island, Nudge's plane turned around and crashed into the island. Max awakes by the wreckage.
Max: Well, It's another day. Is that the plane Nudge was on? Maybe there's some supplies inside...
Max enters the plane and looks around.
Max: Oh... that must be Nudge's body. I should look a-
Nudge: What are you doing in here?
Max: AAAAHH! DON'T DO THAT!
Lely: Hey w- WAIT IS THAT A GHOST?!?!?!?
Nudge: No.
Max: How did you survive?
Nudge: Nevermind. I must get rid of those who have wronged me.
Max: What do you mean?
Lely: I think he's going to kill the people who voted him last night.
Max: Oh. Well, should we stay as a group?
Nudge: Sure, why not?
Lely: Could this mean that d4-
Max: Alright, let's go!
On the black rock beach...
Fiery: Perhaps I should find a group, maybe I would be safer that way.
MisterCringeh: Hello
Fiery: Oh hi! Didn't see you there.
MisterCringeh: I hear you need a group?
Fiery: Yes, do you want to group up with me?
MisterCringeh: That would be great! Can Buzzma join us too? She's only a little bit... stuck.
Buzzma: WHO LEAVES RANDOM HOLES IN THE GROUND
?IlluZhion: Need some help there?
MisterCringeh: You're the one who kil-
IlluZhion: The one and only. My companion is in one of these holes, and I need some help.
Fiery: Oh well, any companion of yours is likely stronger than Buzzma. Let's go save this person!
Buzzma:
???: IlluZhion? Are you there?
IlluZhion: Of course.
MisterCringeh: Hello mystery person! What is your full name, date of birth, home address, IP address and favourite colour?
???: I can't tell you that. I'm going to have to stay here all day.
Fiery: And why is that?
A crackling can be heard...
???: Hello? I don't know if you can hear me, but I compromised their speaker's security. You have to go to the do- I've got to go, I will be seeing you shortly.
The Host: We apologize for that... mistake.
In the woods, a fight is taking place...
Jenwren: Just hand it over!
Popplio: NO! I SAW IT FIRST!
Jenwren: Let's have a fight for it.
Popplio: OK, I accept your challenge.
Jenwren dives for the pistol...
Popplio: YOU CAN'T DO THAT!
Noob: GUYS, STO-
Jenwren: Who said?
Jenwren shoots Popplio in the head...
Noob: Now that was completely unnecessary.
Lely: What was that on the speakers?
Max: I don't know, but I think someone's here to save us.
Nudge: But whom? And where?
Max: That we do not know. I think the docks?
Lely: Then let's go there.
Max: But what's going on there? I see something.
Lely: Is that... Jenwren? And Popplio?
Nudge: *Was Popplio
Lely: wait what
Max: I think he just died.
Lely: But how?
Jenwren: Gun
Noob: That wasn't very descriptive
Jenwren: I used a gun to shoot this guy in the head
.Max: I see. In that case, I'm going to throw this spear at you.
Jenwren: OK
.Max throws the spear through Jenwren's head, killing her instantly.
Lely:
Nudge: Clean shot. Could've been better though.
The Host: Alright everyone, I see that some of you have been "eliminated" today. Well then, should we get on with the votes?
Dietsoda: I am tired of Noob's existence.
MisterCringeh: I'll vote myself because why not.
Max: I don't really have anyone to vote for, but I will vote myself as I murdered someone today.
Noob: I think I'll vote for Dietsoda, in that case.
Buzzma: Fiery didn't help me get out of that STUPID HOLE
!Fiery: I think I'll go for MisterCringeh for wasting my time. I shouldn't waste existence to save some weird lady in a hole.
Nudge: Max could've gotten a better kill.
StarSplizz: I vote for MisterCringeh, because why not?
K: I'll go with myself as no one has justification to target me.
Lely: I would vote Max for murdering someone, even though he could've just captured Jenwren, but I'll go with Nudge for being a crazy person.
Sorbet: I only just arrived here, but I agree with this "Lely" person.
The Host: Well, your votes have been placed...
and MisterCringeh is eliminated!
MisterCringeh: At least I get to be with bread in heaven...
The Host: Step into this chamber, please.
Cringeh enters, the door closes behind him and a button is pressed...
MisterCringeh: Woah, is that bread coming out of the celling?
The Host: It is! And now you don't have to be with bread only in heaven, you can die with it! Or should I say, by it...
MisterCringeh: What?
The bread falls in faster and faster, and MisterCringeh suffocates in bread. The participants can see how he died...
Lely: I'm going to be sick.
Max: JUST DO IT IN THE SE-
End of Part 3...
According to the fanfic...oh no I become a...
He lived with bread and died with bread. 💀
Live in bread
Dead in bread
Just don't let it go to your head
Bad poetry is the best poetry
1On 2023-01-02 at 22:25:43
Near the cabins...
Buzzma: YESH! I'VE FOUND A SHOTGUN!
K: SHUSH! You don't want to alert any of our competitors!
Buzzma: OK
K(Steals shotgun)
I'll add that into part 2 lol
I was joking around but ya, that'd be fun.
On 2023-01-02 at 05:16:13
Near the cabins...
Buzzma: YESH! I'VE FOUND A SHOTGUN!
K: SHUSH! You don't want to alert any of our competitors!
Buzzma: OK
K(Steals shotgun)
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