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Too lazy to translate Lely's french rn (just crashed at a hotel after a like 6-hour drive I'm so tired) so I'll build this little review from scratch!

First off, super hyped about this new season. This is probably the single best fanfic on MKPC. Going into this episode I was expecting a really good read and you still managed to surprise me! This is an amazing first episode! So packed with drama and plot twists that at times I wondered what the heck you'd write about in the rest of the season. Christophe's story is honestly ... not what I'd expected. Johnson and his dad were Christophe's coworkers and they swindled him! Wow. I wonder if Jeanne and Marion getting stuck in Borderland was a coincidence, or if there's some darker plan at work . . . As for Candice, so sorry for the poor gal, her day went downhill fast and just didn't stop. I'm glad Jeanne and Marion (and Christophe) made up with her tho, she'll definitely need support in the coming episodes. And Johnson blew himself up? That part was a little confusing and I haven't had time to go back and reread, but that's what it looks like. Still, somehow I feel like he'll pop up again. That guy just isn't capable of dying.

Episode one has set this up to be the best season yet. Somehow you still manage to raise the bar with each episode! Hats off to you! Looking forward to the rest of Season 3!!!

Ooohhhhh excited!

Wowwwwww . . . Amazing! Not gonna comment on anything specific, Lely'll take care of that I'm sure. You finished this season perfectly man. Hats off to you.

Woweeeeee . . .

You are building serious tension man. This was a great episode with lots of really well done action and sacrifice. This final game is gonna be insane. Love the way it references the mini golf arena, where Kyle died. That ties it into the story really well. Hoping the group can win! 🤞🤞

Good episode! There was lots of drama, action, and a very sweet moment when Brandon sacrifices himself. Got some good insight into the life and feelings of someone like that. This was the first time I listened to the music while reading, the song choices were superb! Wish i could listen to those when I’m using phone . . . Finally I appreciate that you edited some of the swearing in this episode. It detracts from the readability when the episode is loaded with uncensored language tbh. The words have a way of popping out and drawing attention that should be focused on the story itself. Good job there.

I feel the season conclusion approaching. This’ll be good.

Well Lely covered that episode pretty well. I'd like to mention one thing. I like how Johnson is showing he's not merely a grunt. He's actually using words to get his sister to his side. Manipulating her. He's becoming more formidable. It'll definitely be interesting to see how his story goes.

Good luck Warren. Good luck Margaux. Hopefully Brandon accepts Scarlett. And yeah . . . get a belt, Jeanne. Take Johnson's.

Great work as always!

Great episode! The games actually are tougher, which is really good. For a while I was worried it'd be like "AAGH the characters games they're gonna be so hard!" and then they wouldn't be much worse than the ones in season 1. But these are actually harder, forcing tougher decisions (aaaaand a lot more death). Amazing work .

Anyway not really surprised at the end of the jack of hearts game. Paola wasn't the jack, some (random?) guy was. I honestly expected Paola to play a bigger part and maybe survive, the death of her whole group was a little anticlimactic. Still, a good (and scary) game. Nice detective work at the end. O and Paola was doing some cool manipulation towards the end.

Johnson has a sister. A nice sister. Who doesn't realize he's a total ------------. That's an interesting development. Poor Warren. I hope that works out, it'll be interesting to see how Candice develops as a character.

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Put my review in a spoiler because, well, spoilers!

Hmmm good start. The new game dynamic is neat, some new characters introduced (. . .), Johnson survived 👀, strong first episode! Looking forward to seeing how it goes. 👍

Man these games ...

Great episode, great finish for season 1, you are a legend sir. That little bit with Elena was a good way to end.

Awesome story, looking forward to season 2 😃!

Amazing. Amazing. This fanfic is emotional, humorous, exciting ... Even though it's written in the sort of movie-script form of most mkpc fanfics it still manages to be very good and descriptive. Can't say I like the amount of swearing but I'm the only one who will complain about that, and I understand your reasons for it.

Really great, suspense is good, concept is neat. And the characters are so well made! Really looking forward to the next episode! 👏👏👏

Let's see if i can finally figure lounge out

I'll need a petition with three signatures, and four Reese's candies

Ah so everything blew up, but not everyone. Got it. Keep lookin' over your shoulder fiery 😈

All is dust...

So.

So.

When can we go on that rampage? Also I'm totally gonna end up dead in the next two episodes. This'll be interesting.

FOR THE HOOOORDE!!!!!

Live in bread
Dead in bread
Just don't let it go to your head

Bad poetry is the best poetry