[Fanfic] MKPCvers3 Season 3 : Light of Hope

He joined on the first MKPCverse, I think.

True, but I had trouble with his personnality since at that time he barely interacted at all x)

That isn't a problem with me, but please make sure to do the personnalities accurately. Aside from that thanks a lot

Perfect ! Then good luck, and thanks for your help ! 😃

List:
krazykay
fiery
nydge
max
osc-omb
jey
master
popplio
pianta
illuzhion
fdj
luq
ralsei
chilli
cringeh
Toadboiiiii with five i because it looks cool
mememo
dietsoda
daisypeachandkeeby
vc
bj
starsplitzz
yascamer
knoah
d4rk
toad99
brob2nd
ashton
lely
mysteryman
lemon

if i missed someone then

Chapter 2 : The blue hour
Nudge : Day 1 of me hearing Lely's terrible yet fairly quiet singing at 5:53AM
Lely : My voice isn't even terrible, what are you even on about ? 💀
Pianta : Nah, the problem is not even your voice, it's the songs you're singing  
mememo : nah, in fact both are quite terrible.
Max : Let's hear you then
Dietsoda : Can you guys shut up? I'm trying to sleep. I have time to live, unlike you mayflies, so I use it intelligently.
Luq : Mayflies ? We're still in April
Fiery : That dad joke was horrible, even by my standards, and that's saying a lot
Cringeh : BRUH it funny but it also kinda cringe so idk what should I think
Knoah : HAHAHAHAHA THAT ONE WAS GOOD ACTUALLY
VC : You have incredibly low standards, it's actually quite crazy
KrazeyKay : I mean, it's just a joke. We can move on if we don't like it.
Brint : It's MKPCverse though, so people will make an argument out of the slightest thing. Feels quite ridiculous.
Popplio : Agreed lol. It always happens for some reason. Seems like a time loop.
Ralsei : Yeah because it's fun to argue. Cry about it bitch
Chilli : The solution to every argument is extremely simple : R E V I V A M O G U S
StarSplizz : True, although it can use different tones and different variations sometimes
Toad99 : Anyways, should we take a breakfast ? Also, how is everyone awake ? And why is the sun yellow ? And why---
Toadboiiiiii : Nah, shut up. Nobody cares, and nobody asked for your psychological questions and reflexions. Keep that to yourself. And just don't talk.
DaisyPeachandKeeby : That was kind of rude, also you don't have the right to silence him just because you disagree...
Jey : Agreed. Also stop being toxic. Nobody cares about you neither.
Yascamer : On devrait manger non
Ashton : Ummm... yes... what should---
*HONKKK*
IlluZhion : Koh Lanta Mario intensifies
Master: STOP BREAKING THE FOURTH WALL ! STOP BREAKING THE FOURTH WALL !!! STOPPPP !!!!
KirbyBoy : Huh ? He Didn't Break The Fourth Wall, Tho. It's Kinda Weird, Right ?
xrunner : Nobody breaked any fourth wall. Quit your bullshit. It's getting insane.
osc-omb : I mean someone is literally breaking a wall. It's just that his vocabulary is extremely restricted.
MysteryMan : Wait, what ?? A wall is being broken ? Like, right now ?
Then some Piantas made their appearance after making a huge hole in the wall. They wanted to guide MKPCians to their challenge.
FDJ : Okay, where are we going ?
Pianta 1 : To the cliffs, and you'll get why
Arrived at the cliffs...
Pianta 1 : Here we are. My coworker will explain everything to you in detail about today's challenge.
D4rk : Not gonna lie, it kind of looks like DTNA's music video set
Brob2nd : Everything isn't related to k-pop...
Lemon : Anyways, let's head to the challenge, and let's not lose time.
Arrived at the cliffs...
Pianta 2 : Hello everyone! So here you will be doing the first challenge of MKPC Archipel, a show where you'll defy different citizens of the island. For this first challenge which is abseiling, you'll all get warped to a spot. For example, if Nudge gets warped on the beginning, he has to descend to the lower spot that is closest to him, and it all continues until you've reached the final spot, where the person there has to run to unlock the chest down there, to press a button. You'll have a key that you're forced to transport with you all along. You can throw it, it is a magic key. Enjoy !
Lely : Alright, so who is our opponent?
Pianta 2 : This Pianta can do everything by himself, but he's experienced and a professional in terms of abseiling.
Nudge: Sounds hard but we'll do it anyways
Max : Do we have security
Popplio : Yup, look at the ropes
Luq : This is quite terrifying
VC : We are super high above the goal...
StarSplizz : I can fly, so no problem 👍
Pianta 2 : Umm, no. Every power that comes from your abilities has been deleted. You're a mere human now, with different strengths of course.
Fiery: Shit, that's actually clever
And as they got warped...
Pianta 2 : Ready, get, set, GO !!!
From Max to StarSplizz
Max : Prepare yourself! Even with my mech, I don't have much experience in this so we will be late if I'm first.
StarSplizz : Okay, no problem! Do you want me to get closer ? That's not forbidden
Max : If you could, that would be great
Max slowly made his way. The rock at that place felt sharp and hard to navigate on. It did hurt him a bit, but he kept going until he reached StarSplizz, who went incredibly fast towards the lower spot. The other Pianta seemed at ease, keeping a constant and stable speed.
From StarSplizz to Nudge
StarSplizz : Since I am going rapidly, can you prepare yourself ? We wouldn't want to lose time.
Nudge : Sure, I am ready
The rock between StarSplizz and Nudge was way easier to bear. It didn't provoke any pain, and StarSplizz was used to it anyways. The other Pianta even looked like he was sliding, which did hit the confidence of some.
From Nudge to mememo
Nudge: Ashton, can you be ready?
Ashton : I c-can't... too high..
mememo : Skip him and directly give it to me ! He won't be able to move !
Nudge : Excellent idea
And Nudge skipped Ashton, who was trembling of fear looking at the void underneath him. The rock was extremely soft here. However, under Ashton, it was like spikes, which caused Nudge to get a few wounds and to feel some pain.
Nudge : M-mff... that kind of hurts
mememo : That's okay, take some rest, I'll be going smooth from that point
From mememo to Ralsei
mememo : Ralsei, let's go. Get a little bit closer so you'll be faster faster catch the key, and we will overtake this Pianta
Ralsei : Sure
However, something extremely weird happened. Ralsei's rock cracked down, which caused him to fall all the way down. All of the MKPCians couldn't help but watch him fall as he fell further and further from the cliff. Luckily, he fell down onto the ocean. The person who was at the lower spot, Lely, immediately ran towards the sea. During that time the other Pianta was whistling, a particularly creepy smile on his face. All of the MKPCians used their equipment to go down to the sea. Pianta called the police, since he was a police officer himself, to investigate the situation. Lely didn't even think rationally, he just ran and carried Ralsei's body like a doll to bring him back on the beach. Nudge, who was particularly fast to descend, investigated the body. A part of himself wanted to let him die but he thought he was actually gonna help. Max, who knew the exact order of the spots, immediately came to a conclusion. The case started in the same court as last time.
Luq : Long time no see I guess
Chilli : What do you mean long time ? The case literally occurred yesterday 😭
Judge Pianta : So we are here for the same thing as last time, which is attempted murder. MKPCians, please report every piece of evidence that you have.
Max : Well, first off, we were doing an abseiling challenge.
Lely : It all started in the context of a show, MKPC Archipel.
Popplio : The abseiling challenge details are on this paper.
Jey : The person right above Ralsei was mememo, and the person right below was Brob2nd.
KrazeyKay : Brob2nd was the culprit of yesterday's case, which is also attempted murder, but also identity fraud/usurpation.
Knoah : Brob2nd Repeatedly Says He Wants To Be a Villain.
D4rk : Easiest climax ever, can I explain?
Nudge: No problem.
D4rk : So, it all started yesterday, when Brob2nd was found guilty of attempted murder during the volcano case. Since then, he wanted his revenge. He had one day to do his revenge, and he did. While Ralsei was climbing up, actually the rock fell, because Brob2nd hit it with a hammer. He then fell down and that explains everything.
Lely : There's some holes in your reasonment. First. How would Brob crack the rock without others noticing? Secondly, it sounds way too simple since we aren't giving it much thought. Other pieces of evidence is that Toadboiiiii let someone get away with attempted murder, and murdered someone himself. I wouldn't even doubt he made that hole himself, yesterday. Toadboiiiii is a Toad that has also particularities of a mechanical teddy bear. There's footsteps that not only look like his, but there's also one ear that is slightly damaged, the red part being ripped off. Well, there is indeed a red part in the sand. Do you also remember the method for the crime ? The rock did not crack suddenly, it cracked when Ralsei tried to get up. It's a seesaw effect, Ralsei made pression on a fragilized part. It has also been used for several other murders that many people know, notably with floorboards, and sickles. Now I think Toadboiiiii is the true culprit here.
Judge Pianta : Well, I find Lely's climax more convincing than yours. We'll get to voting time. Let's go.
Everyone voted Toadboiiiii, even Toadboiiiii himself, and Toadboiiiii explained himself. He had no motive except to kill someone for the pleasure of it.
D4rk : Good climax, Lely !
Lely : Thanks ! Yours was good too. You just didn't put much thought, sadly, the obvious isn't necessarily the right solution...
Judge Pianta : Oh, and btw, both Brob2nd and Toadboiiiii are going to jail for a short time. I hereby declare this case to be closed.
To be continued..
Pianta 3 : I won ! I won ! Come on guys... can't I have some congratulations ?
To be continued...

After several delays, it's finally back!

And apparently the Pianta police for are actually quite competent, loving the dev arc they got going on over there.

A dev arc ? I don't think I understand... anyways, thanks, and it's true, it was heavily delayed, but it's finally here ! Thanks for the heartwarming and helping feedback, it seriously helps me to improve and motivates me to keep on going.

Dev as in development, character development.

Anyways, this is a good fill in as I wait for people to risk jail time for the new Pokemon  anime, and it's pretty good even outside that! Can't wait to see where it goes....

Chapter 3 : When the facade breaks
Max : How about going to the beach for a night stroll under the stars ?
Nudge : Sounds cheesy as fuck
StarSplizz : Yeah but that's that's typical teenagers would do when they are about to break down and cry about their life
Nudge : Why would we cry ? This is not even a bad life to begin with
Popplio : It's not a bad life ? It's legit terrible, how could you like it
Nudge : It's better than a lovey dovey life
IlluZhion : Excuse me ? ~ it's not !
Pianta : Here goes the simp 💀
Nudge : The second hand embarassment has escalated quicker than the time it takes to Max to protect Lely against something
Max : I don't feel so well. Could we lower with the mockery please
Pianta : Keep on dreaming sweetie 😍
Max : Alright ! Alright ! If that's what you want then I'm heading out
Lely : Wait ! No, come on, just stay here, it's not a big deal, plea--
But Max kept on going. He got out of the huts, Lely running after him.
Pianta : Man what a dickeater 🤡
StarSplizz : They aren't the dickeaters. You're the asshole
Popplio : Wait, did StarSplizz... JUST SWEARED ? WHAT ON EARTH ?
StarSplizz : Wait, no ! I-i mean... well... fine. You're the asshole. I'll repeat that.
Popplio : He even repeats it 😭
Fiery : Get the fudging camera! THIS IS COURT WORTHY ! AAAAH
KrazeyKay : Man if someone made StarSplizz swear then I'm--
Chilli : We just got out of the court ! I'm not getting back to it !
IlluZhion : Nah, but he's right. You're annoying. You're arrogant. Just stop.
Pianta : You're cringe, you're a simp, you're annoying and you're a victim. Bro stop crying. You're worse.
Chilli : Nah, he's not worse than you !
Luq : Everyone let's just relax, take a deeper breath than the ocean and chill
KrazeyKay : Agreed, it's getting really messy over nothing. Calm down.
Ashton : True... I feel sad about it. Can't we stop arguing for just one day?
Pianta : You were the ones creating the argument. I'm just stating the truth.
And as he said that, he walked away.
Luq : Sigh... Talk about a very nice, calm and friendly evening between friends...
Ashton : But that is all Pianta's fault !
DaisyPeachandKeeby : Somewhat true...
Dietsoda : This is a mere and empathetic excuse. All of you mayflies are guilty for contributing, directly or not, to the argument.
Cringeh : Stop using such fancy words
D4rk : Fancy ~ You
Cringeh : Why are you singing
D4rk : Oh sorry, it was just automatic
Dietsoda : What a ridiculous view of the situation. Those aren't fancy words. Your vocabulary, as a mayfly, is obviously very limited. I'm the standard here.
DaisyPeachandKeeby : Yeah but it's still complicated... think about others too...
Dietsoda : Why should I, and why would I need to adapt to my surroundings if their stupidity isn't something I was able to control myself ?
xrunner : That's how a conversation works... sorry to break it to you
Dietsoda : Oh, everyone, mayflies, look at this right now. It is now a betrayal coming from my own brother. You'd be crying over someone stealing your scooby snack, yet I am being betrayed by my own brother at this very right moment. And I'm not even yelling. However, that is such ungratefulness towards someone who loves you... tssk. You're a ghost to me now.
xrunner : No, you're being dramatic. I just contradicted you. Calling that a betrayal... sorry not sorry man
Brint : Is it just me, or is the argument getting bad ? I feel like nobody can get along
Chilli : Yeah... I don't like it
Dietsoda : Ha. That just proves being around is a waste. Your low intelligence is capable of making me throw up. I'll go away now.
He was now the 4th person to just leave the situation. People were starting to panic and the situation got chaotic.
Nudge : Osc, just come to my room, we'll play Danganronpa while this world is burning, as it should
osc-omb : Yeah okay why not I guess
Knoah : Oh Dear Lidelle My Savior. Please Save My Soul From All Of This
Chilli : SHUT THE HELL UP WITH YOUR LIDELLE ! NOBODY GIVES A SHIT !!!
Knoah : YES ! IT IS A THOUSAND TIMES BETTER THAN YOUR SHITTY AMOGUS !
Chilli : HOW DARE YOU INSULT AMOGUS ! FUCK OFF ! YOU ASSHOLE !
Fiery : NONE OF THEM IS A SAVIOR ! STOP BEING DELUSIONAL !
StarSplizz : IS THAT EVEN THE SUBJECT ?
VC : STOP YELLING AROUND FOR NOTHING !
Luq : Woah woah woah, everyone, calm down, there's no need to--
mememo : Shut up ! You're not helping in the slightest !
IlluZhion : AT LEAST HE ISN'T MAKING THE MATTERS WORSE, UNLIKE YOU !
mememo : Oh really? Am I making the matters worse ?
VC : Of course ! You're going at people without any freaking reason !
Master : Everyone, shut up.
Lemon : Can we just stop arguing...
Chilli : DO YOU REALLY THINK PEOPLE WILL LISTEN TO A CRINGE CRYING BABYCATGIRL ? GET LOST
IlluZhion : EXCUSE ME WHAT WAS THAT NAME YOU HAVE GIVEN HER ???
Brint : DOES THAT EVEN MATTER AT THE MOMENT ! HUH ? HUH ? NO !
Cringeh : WHY WON'T WE CALM DOWN
Ralsei : YOU DUMB BITCH ! DO YOU THINK YOU ARE HELPING !
Jey : STOP INSULTING OTHER PEOPLE !
Master : SHUT UPPPPPPPP !!!!!
He screamed that at top of his lungs. Everyone then just collectively packed their bags with almost nothing and went somewhere random on the island.
Meanwhile, what are our lovey dovey birds friends doing on the beach while the rest of the squad is arguing ferociously ?
Lely : Wait Max. What is happening ? Why are you feeling bad ? What---
Max : Lely, give me a break.
Lely : Why ? I hate to see you like---
Max : Give me a fucking break.
Lely : But----
Max : I. Said. GIVE. ME. A. BREAAK !!!
And as he said that, he threw Lely in the hollow waters of the night.
Meanwhile, IlluZhion... Was rethinking everything. Everything that happened. Blurred memories, uncomfortable feelings, and somewhat a... skip ? Why was Lely held hostage ? Nobody knew. Someone got rid of their memories. And someone heated up their minds. Maybe this was just the collective burn out. It made them forget everything. Anyways, what mattered now is... the argument. MKPCverse always argued, but to this point ?
The very next day, in a hotel room...
Pianta : Let me check the news...
MKPC Archipel has been attacked by a team of what seems to be teenagers. They were reported to be part of the squad that came from MKPCverse. They are facing court now, will they win the case ? The police is shocked and all the Piantas can agree on the fact that this raid was unexpected---
Pianta : Sigh. Let me just put these crazy ass ret**ds in jail so we'll be done with their superiority complex.
In the meanwhile, on the beach where the squad arrived...
Cringeh : I heard there was an attack done by our fellow MKPC members... I have to form a team with Luq, Max and Lely to chill down the situation.
What is the actual attack ?
Dietsoda : So, you've came back to the right side, brother ? Good choice. You won't regret it. Let's show to those empathetic mere mayflies what we can do once we're reunited as one.
xrunner : I'm all ears. It feels so good to finally be back to what I feel like I was bound to do. Let's tear these islands down.
Court Pianta : Cease this chit-chattering !
Meanwhile, the situation was becoming worse elsewhere...
Nudge : I mean... We've only stolen one pineapple. How insignificant. The police isn't gonna be occupied with that. Also, it's such despair inducing to be in such a situation...
osc-omb : We've also stolen 69 bananas and 420 coconuts. But yes, only a little robbery. And such despair.
What are planning some of the good ones ?
KrazeyKay : We need to save this place. We'll plan a way to help the police in a flawless way. We can do that.
Lely : I mean, yes. This chaos can't keep on going. If it's just small and inoffensive, it's fine, but now... it's starting to get dangerous.
Max : Damn I lowkey have enough of always feeling like a mom... and now the kids are getting completely crazy...
Luq : The four of us ? It's enough. If our four brains work as hard as they can to bring the peace back, it will be fine.
There were even fights between the MKPCverse members.
Chilli : This money is mine. Stop acting like you deserved it, spoiled brat !
Fiery : At least I WORKED to earn it ! Get your fudging money by yourself !
Yascamer : Damn, this is a critical situation
Ralsei : BITCH GO BACK TO SPEAKING FRENCH OR SHUT UP !
Mystery : Sigh... why are we even fighting between each other, for fucking money, at the age of 9-10-11
Toad99 : That's what I was thinking. Let's help Luq, Max, Kraze and Lely in their plan to save the day and us all along with it
Mystery : Good idea... anyways, anything would be a good excuse to get out of this trashfire... because this is annoying.
Toad99 : Yeah, and it even became problematic... sigh.
Yascamer : What is the problem ?
Toad99 : Nothing, don't worry... I just feel like I failed my duty as a Toad...
Mystery : No, don't worry. It was a collective duty based on the confidence we had for each other. Sadly, it had to break apart and now it's rolling in the deep.
Yascamer : Yeah. There's a fire... starting around here.
And even the ones in jail are plotting their revenge and evading...
Brob2nd : So, what's your name again ?
Toadboi : Toadboiiiii with five i's because it looks cool
Brob2nd : Interesting...
What will happen ? Are these islands truly doomed ? Find out soon...
FDJ : I am in the credits zone because I dont have any lines if I don't 💀😭
KirbyBoy : What a Mess... Wario Collostadium ? Can You Help Us ?
No, I said let's end with something meaningful!
IlluZhion : Well, my turn. These islands are left to the doom. When teenagers of the chaotic type get released in nature while being burnt out by their hard life and their pressure, well they break down... and become what they never wished to be. We don't know what they are capable of yet... but just wait.
Thanks for this beautiful sentence ! Finally, someone who can say meaningful and deep things here...
To continued...

Well, he made it part of his personnality, that's it. And he isn't saying it as much as in the deleted season. I tried to make him look like Gundham Tanaka outside of the mayfly thing (eloquence, fancy words, dramatic...)

Fiery got 3 lines. That's more than  he usually gets.

He did get 12 lines in the TRUE Season 2, but I stopped focusing on him, and on top of tha, he became inactive.
Also, the line distribution is fairer than I thought. Max and Chilli got 7 lines and the lowest amount of lines was 1 so the difference as been lowered. I am trying to make everyone shine, but it can get hard, since the cast has legit 34 members in it (the biggest cast ever I think)

Is it okay if I join?

Is it ok if I also join?

learn to read pls, you're already in it