[FANFIC] Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising
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4991 pts ★ Budding pilotOn 2022-11-03 at 20:03:24
Three Episodes in and I not introduced yet
On 2022-11-03 at 22:49:32
Between episodes, I like to go on holidays back home.
Here, I sent a postcard:
Here, I sent a postcard:
W I N D O W S
On 2022-11-03 at 22:50:24
EP3
After getting pushed back by a deadly cactus demon, The Heroes have to fight. Slowly but surely, both sides discover new galaxies... and new ambitions. What will each of them find? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
Max: Whoa! How are we gonna beat this thing?
Lely: I don't know! I've never played Super Mario Galaxy!
Chilli: Haha, noob.
Lely: When will you learn to SHUT UP?!
Saguantuan: GROOOAAAARRGH!
Lely: I thought I just told humanity to SHUT UP! That applies to monsters as well!
Saguantuan: WAAAAAAAAA!
*Saguantuan starts weeping*
Max: Way to make him cry, Lely.
Chilli: I don't like you, Lely!
Lely: I'm sorry! Besides, Chilli, I'd figured.
*Saguantuan stops crying all of a sudden*
Saguantuan: Wait, where's Elija?
Jey: That's what we're trying to find out! Wanna come with us?
Saguantuan: Uhhh, sure. I'd better give you this Power Star in case you need it.
Now The Heroes have 1 out of 7 Power Stars! As they travel to another galaxy, Saguantuan the Mutant Cactus joins them on their adventures.
Max: So this is the new galaxy.
Lely: 'Tropical District Galaxy' - not the most creative name - I swear there was a similarly named Mario Kart track.
Saguantuan: Yeah, the inhabitants apparently named it after Coconut Mall.
Chilli: Avid gamers, huh? Hey Lely, bet you can't relate!
Lely: SHUT UP, CHILLI!!
Max: Both of you, stop fighting!
So they made their way into the central plaza. But what will they find? Is Saguantuan trustworthy? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
After getting pushed back by a deadly cactus demon, The Heroes have to fight. Slowly but surely, both sides discover new galaxies... and new ambitions. What will each of them find? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
Max: Whoa! How are we gonna beat this thing?
Lely: I don't know! I've never played Super Mario Galaxy!
Chilli: Haha, noob.
Lely: When will you learn to SHUT UP?!
Saguantuan: GROOOAAAARRGH!
Lely: I thought I just told humanity to SHUT UP! That applies to monsters as well!
Saguantuan: WAAAAAAAAA!
*Saguantuan starts weeping*
Max: Way to make him cry, Lely.
Chilli: I don't like you, Lely!
Lely: I'm sorry! Besides, Chilli, I'd figured.
*Saguantuan stops crying all of a sudden*
Saguantuan: Wait, where's Elija?
Jey: That's what we're trying to find out! Wanna come with us?
Saguantuan: Uhhh, sure. I'd better give you this Power Star in case you need it.
Now The Heroes have 1 out of 7 Power Stars! As they travel to another galaxy, Saguantuan the Mutant Cactus joins them on their adventures.
Max: So this is the new galaxy.
Lely: 'Tropical District Galaxy' - not the most creative name - I swear there was a similarly named Mario Kart track.
Saguantuan: Yeah, the inhabitants apparently named it after Coconut Mall.
Chilli: Avid gamers, huh? Hey Lely, bet you can't relate!
Lely: SHUT UP, CHILLI!!
Max: Both of you, stop fighting!
So they made their way into the central plaza. But what will they find? Is Saguantuan trustworthy? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
Avid gamer myself bruh
On 2022-11-03 at 22:51:16
Three Episodes in and I not introduced yet
Sorry for the triple-post, but that was your 222nd message and that is very much true
On 2022-11-04 at 07:00:47
Three Episodes in and I not introduced yet
I'll try to include you in the next one
On 2022-11-04 at 10:55:45
Three Episodes in and I not introduced yet
Sorry for the triple-post, but that was your 222nd message and that is very much true
It's a triple post no matter what you say
Was there a need for this statement again?
1On 2022-11-04 at 20:13:37
EP4
The Heroes have successfully made it to Tropical District Galaxy. What will they find there? What became of Dietsoda? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
BJ: Wow... this place is amazing...
Lely: BJ, this isn't a shopping trip. We're here to search for the second Power Star.
BJ: Uhhh... OK.
Dietsoda: Heh heh heh. Just where I wanted them.
Meanwhile, back at The Villains' base...
Paratroopa: So, Dietsoda's finally made himself useful.
Elija: Yes, and it's only a matter of time before they reach Power Star number six.
Paratroopa: What do you mean? They only have two.
Lemon: Yeah, but what Elija's trying to tell you is that they've got strength.
Popplio: Loads of power?! FREAK OUT!!
Lemon and Elija: Calm down Popplio, they ain't going nowhere.
Back at Tropical District Galaxy...
Ashton: Honestly? I've looked everywhere and I still can't find the Power Star!
Chilli: Well look harder. We can afford to-
Chilli's speech was cut off by the sound of asphalt bursting. Shortly after a gigantic robot emerged from the rift. Thankfully nobody was harmed, apart from a few Piantas.
Elija: What? I didn't put this here!
Lemon: Then who did?
Dietsoda: Well hello there pipsqueaks!
Paratroopa: DS? Are you serious?
Dietsoda: DS? Dietsoda? Are YOU serious, Paratroopa?
Elija: Who the heck are you tryin' ta fool?
Dietsoda: That's not even my real name! I am the most powerful entity in the universe, Cursa! Or if you call us two combined, Cursoda!
Max: That's about as uncreative as you can get with a name.
Cursoda: Coconator, would you oh so kindly teach these chumps a lesson?
Coconator: DEPLOY BODILY MISSILES. TARGETS CONFIRMED. ANNIHILATE ALL TARGETS. HELP CURSA CONQUER WORLD.
With a blast from Coconator's missiles, everyone was knocked back. 'Dietsoda,' now named Cursoda, made a tactical retreat to its secret galactic base.
Max: Over 5 weeks in and we haven't even got 2 Power Stars.
Elija: Don't feel too down on yourself, Max. Of course I don't mean that, but we've got to work together and retrieve the other Power Stars. Hey Lely, do you still have the one from Saguantuan?
Saguantuan: I don't think so.
Lely: Oh, come on! Now that little punk's taken my Power Star!
Lemon: That wasn't Dietsoda, Lely. That was Cursa, a powerful intergalactic entity. It should have died at the hands of Rosalina, but...
Elija: Well either way, we've got a universe to save.
But will they be able to do it? Find out in the next few episodes of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
The Heroes have successfully made it to Tropical District Galaxy. What will they find there? What became of Dietsoda? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
BJ: Wow... this place is amazing...
Lely: BJ, this isn't a shopping trip. We're here to search for the second Power Star.
BJ: Uhhh... OK.
Dietsoda: Heh heh heh. Just where I wanted them.
Meanwhile, back at The Villains' base...
Paratroopa: So, Dietsoda's finally made himself useful.
Elija: Yes, and it's only a matter of time before they reach Power Star number six.
Paratroopa: What do you mean? They only have two.
Lemon: Yeah, but what Elija's trying to tell you is that they've got strength.
Popplio: Loads of power?! FREAK OUT!!
Lemon and Elija: Calm down Popplio, they ain't going nowhere.
Back at Tropical District Galaxy...
Ashton: Honestly? I've looked everywhere and I still can't find the Power Star!
Chilli: Well look harder. We can afford to-
Chilli's speech was cut off by the sound of asphalt bursting. Shortly after a gigantic robot emerged from the rift. Thankfully nobody was harmed, apart from a few Piantas.
Elija: What? I didn't put this here!
Lemon: Then who did?
Dietsoda: Well hello there pipsqueaks!
Paratroopa: DS? Are you serious?
Dietsoda: DS? Dietsoda? Are YOU serious, Paratroopa?
Elija: Who the heck are you tryin' ta fool?
Dietsoda: That's not even my real name! I am the most powerful entity in the universe, Cursa! Or if you call us two combined, Cursoda!
Max: That's about as uncreative as you can get with a name.
Cursoda: Coconator, would you oh so kindly teach these chumps a lesson?
Coconator: DEPLOY BODILY MISSILES. TARGETS CONFIRMED. ANNIHILATE ALL TARGETS. HELP CURSA CONQUER WORLD.
With a blast from Coconator's missiles, everyone was knocked back. 'Dietsoda,' now named Cursoda, made a tactical retreat to its secret galactic base.
Max: Over 5 weeks in and we haven't even got 2 Power Stars.
Elija: Don't feel too down on yourself, Max. Of course I don't mean that, but we've got to work together and retrieve the other Power Stars. Hey Lely, do you still have the one from Saguantuan?
Saguantuan: I don't think so.
Lely: Oh, come on! Now that little punk's taken my Power Star!
Lemon: That wasn't Dietsoda, Lely. That was Cursa, a powerful intergalactic entity. It should have died at the hands of Rosalina, but...
Elija: Well either way, we've got a universe to save.
But will they be able to do it? Find out in the next few episodes of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
On 2022-11-04 at 20:41:20
EP4
The Heroes have successfully made it to Tropical District Galaxy. What will they find there? What became of Dietsoda? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
BJ: Wow... this place is amazing...
Lely: BJ, this isn't a shopping trip. We're here to search for the second Power Star.
BJ: Uhhh... OK.
Dietsoda: Heh heh heh. Just where I wanted them.
Meanwhile, back at The Villains' base...
Paratroopa: So, Dietsoda's finally made himself useful.
Elija: Yes, and it's only a matter of time before they reach Power Star number six.
Paratroopa: What do you mean? They only have two.
Lemon: Yeah, but what Elija's trying to tell you is that they've got strength.
Popplio: Loads of power?! FREAK OUT!!
Lemon and Elija: Calm down Popplio, they ain't going nowhere.
Back at Tropical District Galaxy...
Ashton: Honestly? I've looked everywhere and I still can't find the Power Star!
Chilli: Well look harder. We can afford to-
Chilli's speech was cut off by the sound of asphalt bursting. Shortly after a gigantic robot emerged from the rift. Thankfully nobody was harmed, apart from a few Piantas.
Elija: What? I didn't put this here!
Lemon: Then who did?
Dietsoda: Well hello there pipsqueaks!
Paratroopa: DS? Are you serious?
Dietsoda: DS? Dietsoda? Are YOU serious, Paratroopa?
Elija: Who the heck are you tryin' ta fool?
Dietsoda: That's not even my real name! I am the most powerful entity in the universe, Cursa! Or if you call us two combined, Cursoda!
Max: That's about as uncreative as you can get with a name.
Cursoda: Coconator, would you oh so kindly teach these chumps a lesson?
Coconator: DEPLOY BODILY MISSILES. TARGETS CONFIRMED. ANNIHILATE ALL TARGETS. HELP CURSA CONQUER WORLD.
With a blast from Coconator's missiles, everyone was knocked back. 'Dietsoda,' now named Cursoda, made a tactical retreat to its secret galactic base.
Max: Over 5 weeks in and we haven't even got 2 Power Stars.
Elija: Don't feel too down on yourself, Max. Of course I don't mean that, but we've got to work together and retrieve the other Power Stars. Hey Lely, do you still have the one from Saguantuan?
Saguantuan: I don't think so.
Lely: Oh, come on! Now that little punk's taken my Power Star!
Lemon: That wasn't Dietsoda, Lely. That was Cursa, a powerful intergalactic entity. It should have died at the hands of Rosalina, but...
Elija: Well either way, we've got a universe to save.
But will they be able to do it? Find out in the next few episodes of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
The Heroes have successfully made it to Tropical District Galaxy. What will they find there? What became of Dietsoda? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
BJ: Wow... this place is amazing...
Lely: BJ, this isn't a shopping trip. We're here to search for the second Power Star.
BJ: Uhhh... OK.
Dietsoda: Heh heh heh. Just where I wanted them.
Meanwhile, back at The Villains' base...
Paratroopa: So, Dietsoda's finally made himself useful.
Elija: Yes, and it's only a matter of time before they reach Power Star number six.
Paratroopa: What do you mean? They only have two.
Lemon: Yeah, but what Elija's trying to tell you is that they've got strength.
Popplio: Loads of power?! FREAK OUT!!
Lemon and Elija: Calm down Popplio, they ain't going nowhere.
Back at Tropical District Galaxy...
Ashton: Honestly? I've looked everywhere and I still can't find the Power Star!
Chilli: Well look harder. We can afford to-
Chilli's speech was cut off by the sound of asphalt bursting. Shortly after a gigantic robot emerged from the rift. Thankfully nobody was harmed, apart from a few Piantas.
Elija: What? I didn't put this here!
Lemon: Then who did?
Dietsoda: Well hello there pipsqueaks!
Paratroopa: DS? Are you serious?
Dietsoda: DS? Dietsoda? Are YOU serious, Paratroopa?
Elija: Who the heck are you tryin' ta fool?
Dietsoda: That's not even my real name! I am the most powerful entity in the universe, Cursa! Or if you call us two combined, Cursoda!
Max: That's about as uncreative as you can get with a name.
Cursoda: Coconator, would you oh so kindly teach these chumps a lesson?
Coconator: DEPLOY BODILY MISSILES. TARGETS CONFIRMED. ANNIHILATE ALL TARGETS. HELP CURSA CONQUER WORLD.
With a blast from Coconator's missiles, everyone was knocked back. 'Dietsoda,' now named Cursoda, made a tactical retreat to its secret galactic base.
Max: Over 5 weeks in and we haven't even got 2 Power Stars.
Elija: Don't feel too down on yourself, Max. Of course I don't mean that, but we've got to work together and retrieve the other Power Stars. Hey Lely, do you still have the one from Saguantuan?
Saguantuan: I don't think so.
Lely: Oh, come on! Now that little punk's taken my Power Star!
Lemon: That wasn't Dietsoda, Lely. That was Cursa, a powerful intergalactic entity. It should have died at the hands of Rosalina, but...
Elija: Well either way, we've got a universe to save.
But will they be able to do it? Find out in the next few episodes of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
so dietsoda is possessed?
On 2022-11-05 at 03:42:08
EP4
The Heroes have successfully made it to Tropical District Galaxy. What will they find there? What became of Dietsoda? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
BJ: Wow... this place is amazing...
Lely: BJ, this isn't a shopping trip. We're here to search for the second Power Star.
BJ: Uhhh... OK.
Dietsoda: Heh heh heh. Just where I wanted them.
Meanwhile, back at The Villains' base...
Paratroopa: So, Dietsoda's finally made himself useful.
Elija: Yes, and it's only a matter of time before they reach Power Star number six.
Paratroopa: What do you mean? They only have two.
Lemon: Yeah, but what Elija's trying to tell you is that they've got strength.
Popplio: Loads of power?! FREAK OUT!!
Lemon and Elija: Calm down Popplio, they ain't going nowhere.
Back at Tropical District Galaxy...
Ashton: Honestly? I've looked everywhere and I still can't find the Power Star!
Chilli: Well look harder. We can afford to-
Chilli's speech was cut off by the sound of asphalt bursting. Shortly after a gigantic robot emerged from the rift. Thankfully nobody was harmed, apart from a few Piantas.
Elija: What? I didn't put this here!
Lemon: Then who did?
Dietsoda: Well hello there pipsqueaks!
Paratroopa: DS? Are you serious?
Dietsoda: DS? Dietsoda? Are YOU serious, Paratroopa?
Elija: Who the heck are you tryin' ta fool?
Dietsoda: That's not even my real name! I am the most powerful entity in the universe, Cursa! Or if you call us two combined, Cursoda!
Max: That's about as uncreative as you can get with a name.
Cursoda: Coconator, would you oh so kindly teach these chumps a lesson?
Coconator: DEPLOY BODILY MISSILES. TARGETS CONFIRMED. ANNIHILATE ALL TARGETS. HELP CURSA CONQUER WORLD.
With a blast from Coconator's missiles, everyone was knocked back. 'Dietsoda,' now named Cursoda, made a tactical retreat to its secret galactic base.
Max: Over 5 weeks in and we haven't even got 2 Power Stars.
Elija: Don't feel too down on yourself, Max. Of course I don't mean that, but we've got to work together and retrieve the other Power Stars. Hey Lely, do you still have the one from Saguantuan?
Saguantuan: I don't think so.
Lely: Oh, come on! Now that little punk's taken my Power Star!
Lemon: That wasn't Dietsoda, Lely. That was Cursa, a powerful intergalactic entity. It should have died at the hands of Rosalina, but...
Elija: Well either way, we've got a universe to save.
But will they be able to do it? Find out in the next few episodes of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
The Heroes have successfully made it to Tropical District Galaxy. What will they find there? What became of Dietsoda? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
BJ: Wow... this place is amazing...
Lely: BJ, this isn't a shopping trip. We're here to search for the second Power Star.
BJ: Uhhh... OK.
Dietsoda: Heh heh heh. Just where I wanted them.
Meanwhile, back at The Villains' base...
Paratroopa: So, Dietsoda's finally made himself useful.
Elija: Yes, and it's only a matter of time before they reach Power Star number six.
Paratroopa: What do you mean? They only have two.
Lemon: Yeah, but what Elija's trying to tell you is that they've got strength.
Popplio: Loads of power?! FREAK OUT!!
Lemon and Elija: Calm down Popplio, they ain't going nowhere.
Back at Tropical District Galaxy...
Ashton: Honestly? I've looked everywhere and I still can't find the Power Star!
Chilli: Well look harder. We can afford to-
Chilli's speech was cut off by the sound of asphalt bursting. Shortly after a gigantic robot emerged from the rift. Thankfully nobody was harmed, apart from a few Piantas.
Elija: What? I didn't put this here!
Lemon: Then who did?
Dietsoda: Well hello there pipsqueaks!
Paratroopa: DS? Are you serious?
Dietsoda: DS? Dietsoda? Are YOU serious, Paratroopa?
Elija: Who the heck are you tryin' ta fool?
Dietsoda: That's not even my real name! I am the most powerful entity in the universe, Cursa! Or if you call us two combined, Cursoda!
Max: That's about as uncreative as you can get with a name.
Cursoda: Coconator, would you oh so kindly teach these chumps a lesson?
Coconator: DEPLOY BODILY MISSILES. TARGETS CONFIRMED. ANNIHILATE ALL TARGETS. HELP CURSA CONQUER WORLD.
With a blast from Coconator's missiles, everyone was knocked back. 'Dietsoda,' now named Cursoda, made a tactical retreat to its secret galactic base.
Max: Over 5 weeks in and we haven't even got 2 Power Stars.
Elija: Don't feel too down on yourself, Max. Of course I don't mean that, but we've got to work together and retrieve the other Power Stars. Hey Lely, do you still have the one from Saguantuan?
Saguantuan: I don't think so.
Lely: Oh, come on! Now that little punk's taken my Power Star!
Lemon: That wasn't Dietsoda, Lely. That was Cursa, a powerful intergalactic entity. It should have died at the hands of Rosalina, but...
Elija: Well either way, we've got a universe to save.
But will they be able to do it? Find out in the next few episodes of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
so dietsoda is possessed?
No it's just Cursa pretending to be him... I know this fanfic is weird sometimes lol
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On 2022-11-05 at 09:10:27
EP4
The Heroes have successfully made it to Tropical District Galaxy. What will they find there? What became of Dietsoda? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
BJ: Wow... this place is amazing...
Lely: BJ, this isn't a shopping trip. We're here to search for the second Power Star.
BJ: Uhhh... OK.
Dietsoda: Heh heh heh. Just where I wanted them.
Meanwhile, back at The Villains' base...
Paratroopa: So, Dietsoda's finally made himself useful.
Elija: Yes, and it's only a matter of time before they reach Power Star number six.
Paratroopa: What do you mean? They only have two.
Lemon: Yeah, but what Elija's trying to tell you is that they've got strength.
Popplio: Loads of power?! FREAK OUT!!
Lemon and Elija: Calm down Popplio, they ain't going nowhere.
Back at Tropical District Galaxy...
Ashton: Honestly? I've looked everywhere and I still can't find the Power Star!
Chilli: Well look harder. We can afford to-
Chilli's speech was cut off by the sound of asphalt bursting. Shortly after a gigantic robot emerged from the rift. Thankfully nobody was harmed, apart from a few Piantas.
Elija: What? I didn't put this here!
Lemon: Then who did?
Dietsoda: Well hello there pipsqueaks!
Paratroopa: DS? Are you serious?
Dietsoda: DS? Dietsoda? Are YOU serious, Paratroopa?
Elija: Who the heck are you tryin' ta fool?
Dietsoda: That's not even my real name! I am the most powerful entity in the universe, Cursa! Or if you call us two combined, Cursoda!
Max: That's about as uncreative as you can get with a name.
Cursoda: Coconator, would you oh so kindly teach these chumps a lesson?
Coconator: DEPLOY BODILY MISSILES. TARGETS CONFIRMED. ANNIHILATE ALL TARGETS. HELP CURSA CONQUER WORLD.
With a blast from Coconator's missiles, everyone was knocked back. 'Dietsoda,' now named Cursoda, made a tactical retreat to its secret galactic base.
Max: Over 5 weeks in and we haven't even got 2 Power Stars.
Elija: Don't feel too down on yourself, Max. Of course I don't mean that, but we've got to work together and retrieve the other Power Stars. Hey Lely, do you still have the one from Saguantuan?
Saguantuan: I don't think so.
Lely: Oh, come on! Now that little punk's taken my Power Star!
Lemon: That wasn't Dietsoda, Lely. That was Cursa, a powerful intergalactic entity. It should have died at the hands of Rosalina, but...
Elija: Well either way, we've got a universe to save.
But will they be able to do it? Find out in the next few episodes of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
The Heroes have successfully made it to Tropical District Galaxy. What will they find there? What became of Dietsoda? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
BJ: Wow... this place is amazing...
Lely: BJ, this isn't a shopping trip. We're here to search for the second Power Star.
BJ: Uhhh... OK.
Dietsoda: Heh heh heh. Just where I wanted them.
Meanwhile, back at The Villains' base...
Paratroopa: So, Dietsoda's finally made himself useful.
Elija: Yes, and it's only a matter of time before they reach Power Star number six.
Paratroopa: What do you mean? They only have two.
Lemon: Yeah, but what Elija's trying to tell you is that they've got strength.
Popplio: Loads of power?! FREAK OUT!!
Lemon and Elija: Calm down Popplio, they ain't going nowhere.
Back at Tropical District Galaxy...
Ashton: Honestly? I've looked everywhere and I still can't find the Power Star!
Chilli: Well look harder. We can afford to-
Chilli's speech was cut off by the sound of asphalt bursting. Shortly after a gigantic robot emerged from the rift. Thankfully nobody was harmed, apart from a few Piantas.
Elija: What? I didn't put this here!
Lemon: Then who did?
Dietsoda: Well hello there pipsqueaks!
Paratroopa: DS? Are you serious?
Dietsoda: DS? Dietsoda? Are YOU serious, Paratroopa?
Elija: Who the heck are you tryin' ta fool?
Dietsoda: That's not even my real name! I am the most powerful entity in the universe, Cursa! Or if you call us two combined, Cursoda!
Max: That's about as uncreative as you can get with a name.
Cursoda: Coconator, would you oh so kindly teach these chumps a lesson?
Coconator: DEPLOY BODILY MISSILES. TARGETS CONFIRMED. ANNIHILATE ALL TARGETS. HELP CURSA CONQUER WORLD.
With a blast from Coconator's missiles, everyone was knocked back. 'Dietsoda,' now named Cursoda, made a tactical retreat to its secret galactic base.
Max: Over 5 weeks in and we haven't even got 2 Power Stars.
Elija: Don't feel too down on yourself, Max. Of course I don't mean that, but we've got to work together and retrieve the other Power Stars. Hey Lely, do you still have the one from Saguantuan?
Saguantuan: I don't think so.
Lely: Oh, come on! Now that little punk's taken my Power Star!
Lemon: That wasn't Dietsoda, Lely. That was Cursa, a powerful intergalactic entity. It should have died at the hands of Rosalina, but...
Elija: Well either way, we've got a universe to save.
But will they be able to do it? Find out in the next few episodes of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
I like the fanfic, but I find my personnality annoying overall, and not in the right sense, I'm more like a sensitive crybaby that stands up for his friends rather than someone who is often cussing at others while being annoying. As an example, I would say the environment is nice, rather than being too serious and saying rudely to Bj that we're not here for that, especially in that way.
Other than that the fanfic is ok
1On 2022-11-05 at 18:45:23
EP4
The Heroes have successfully made it to Tropical District Galaxy. What will they find there? What became of Dietsoda? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
BJ: Wow... this place is amazing...
Lely: BJ, this isn't a shopping trip. We're here to search for the second Power Star.
BJ: Uhhh... OK.
Dietsoda: Heh heh heh. Just where I wanted them.
Meanwhile, back at The Villains' base...
Paratroopa: So, Dietsoda's finally made himself useful.
Elija: Yes, and it's only a matter of time before they reach Power Star number six.
Paratroopa: What do you mean? They only have two.
Lemon: Yeah, but what Elija's trying to tell you is that they've got strength.
Popplio: Loads of power?! FREAK OUT!!
Lemon and Elija: Calm down Popplio, they ain't going nowhere.
Back at Tropical District Galaxy...
Ashton: Honestly? I've looked everywhere and I still can't find the Power Star!
Chilli: Well look harder. We can afford to-
Chilli's speech was cut off by the sound of asphalt bursting. Shortly after a gigantic robot emerged from the rift. Thankfully nobody was harmed, apart from a few Piantas.
Elija: What? I didn't put this here!
Lemon: Then who did?
Dietsoda: Well hello there pipsqueaks!
Paratroopa: DS? Are you serious?
Dietsoda: DS? Dietsoda? Are YOU serious, Paratroopa?
Elija: Who the heck are you tryin' ta fool?
Dietsoda: That's not even my real name! I am the most powerful entity in the universe, Cursa! Or if you call us two combined, Cursoda!
Max: That's about as uncreative as you can get with a name.
Cursoda: Coconator, would you oh so kindly teach these chumps a lesson?
Coconator: DEPLOY BODILY MISSILES. TARGETS CONFIRMED. ANNIHILATE ALL TARGETS. HELP CURSA CONQUER WORLD.
With a blast from Coconator's missiles, everyone was knocked back. 'Dietsoda,' now named Cursoda, made a tactical retreat to its secret galactic base.
Max: Over 5 weeks in and we haven't even got 2 Power Stars.
Elija: Don't feel too down on yourself, Max. Of course I don't mean that, but we've got to work together and retrieve the other Power Stars. Hey Lely, do you still have the one from Saguantuan?
Saguantuan: I don't think so.
Lely: Oh, come on! Now that little punk's taken my Power Star!
Lemon: That wasn't Dietsoda, Lely. That was Cursa, a powerful intergalactic entity. It should have died at the hands of Rosalina, but...
Elija: Well either way, we've got a universe to save.
But will they be able to do it? Find out in the next few episodes of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
The Heroes have successfully made it to Tropical District Galaxy. What will they find there? What became of Dietsoda? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
BJ: Wow... this place is amazing...
Lely: BJ, this isn't a shopping trip. We're here to search for the second Power Star.
BJ: Uhhh... OK.
Dietsoda: Heh heh heh. Just where I wanted them.
Meanwhile, back at The Villains' base...
Paratroopa: So, Dietsoda's finally made himself useful.
Elija: Yes, and it's only a matter of time before they reach Power Star number six.
Paratroopa: What do you mean? They only have two.
Lemon: Yeah, but what Elija's trying to tell you is that they've got strength.
Popplio: Loads of power?! FREAK OUT!!
Lemon and Elija: Calm down Popplio, they ain't going nowhere.
Back at Tropical District Galaxy...
Ashton: Honestly? I've looked everywhere and I still can't find the Power Star!
Chilli: Well look harder. We can afford to-
Chilli's speech was cut off by the sound of asphalt bursting. Shortly after a gigantic robot emerged from the rift. Thankfully nobody was harmed, apart from a few Piantas.
Elija: What? I didn't put this here!
Lemon: Then who did?
Dietsoda: Well hello there pipsqueaks!
Paratroopa: DS? Are you serious?
Dietsoda: DS? Dietsoda? Are YOU serious, Paratroopa?
Elija: Who the heck are you tryin' ta fool?
Dietsoda: That's not even my real name! I am the most powerful entity in the universe, Cursa! Or if you call us two combined, Cursoda!
Max: That's about as uncreative as you can get with a name.
Cursoda: Coconator, would you oh so kindly teach these chumps a lesson?
Coconator: DEPLOY BODILY MISSILES. TARGETS CONFIRMED. ANNIHILATE ALL TARGETS. HELP CURSA CONQUER WORLD.
With a blast from Coconator's missiles, everyone was knocked back. 'Dietsoda,' now named Cursoda, made a tactical retreat to its secret galactic base.
Max: Over 5 weeks in and we haven't even got 2 Power Stars.
Elija: Don't feel too down on yourself, Max. Of course I don't mean that, but we've got to work together and retrieve the other Power Stars. Hey Lely, do you still have the one from Saguantuan?
Saguantuan: I don't think so.
Lely: Oh, come on! Now that little punk's taken my Power Star!
Lemon: That wasn't Dietsoda, Lely. That was Cursa, a powerful intergalactic entity. It should have died at the hands of Rosalina, but...
Elija: Well either way, we've got a universe to save.
But will they be able to do it? Find out in the next few episodes of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
I like the fanfic, but I find my personnality annoying overall, and not in the right sense, I'm more like a sensitive crybaby that stands up for his friends rather than someone who is often cussing at others while being annoying. As an example, I would say the environment is nice, rather than being too serious and saying rudely to Bj that we're not here for that, especially in that way.
Other than that the fanfic is ok
Yeah, that line was meant for 5072 originally
On 2022-11-05 at 19:41:14
Forgotten
On 2022-11-05 at 19:55:37
Forgotten
I'm writing the next episode now, and your character will continue developing as the story progresses
1On 2022-11-05 at 20:17:04
EP5
The Heroes and The Villains have now joined forces against Cursa. Both sides are now getting ready to take on Cursa's new creation, the Coconator. But will they emerge victorious? Find out in this Bonfire Night Special of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
Lemon: So where are we going to find Cursa?
Lely: According to these readings, he's on a deserted island to the west of this place.
5072: But how are we meant to get there?! It's not like we have a boat or something!
Paratroopa: Hey guys, the airship's not working.
Elija: Great, just what we needed(!)
Max: Easy-peasy.
Elija: What do you mean 'easy-peasy?' We've got to repair the ship!
Lely: Elija's right Max, I just can't stand seeing my friends in trouble like this, even if they're toxic, dark or evil or even all three.
Max: I agree. That's what I meant by 'easy-peasy.' If only we had some metal around here...
Saguantuan: Coconator left a few scraps over here.
5072 and Paratroopa: There are more here too!
Elija: Excellent. Now my plan is nascent.
Everyone: Huh?
Elija: Lemon! Grab my flare, please.
Lemon: Here it is! I found it among a few pieces of robotic space junk.
Elija: Great. Everyone, in the newly-repaired airship!
They sailed into the vast blue yonder, cutting the air beneath their very feet.
Elija: Now let's give that Cursa a bonfire night it'll never forget!
Chilli: Yay, fireworks!
Lemon: And not the good kind! Elija packed it with heated nitrogen! Something random, sure, but it'll at least burn and freeze the enemy!
Elija: Perfect. Lely, do you have the false white flags?
Lely: Yep! I'm holding them right now!
Elija: Now on the count of three, I'll fire this spark several times while each of you waves one of these flags whilst pretending to surrender.
Paratroopa and Lemon: Which will lure Cursa right into our trap! Elija, you're a genius!
Elija: Thank you both. Now, are ye all ready?
Max POV: He's getting serious now... That strong Irish accent isn't there for the sake of it...
Elija: AON! DHÁ! TRÍ!
Ashton POV: Wait, was that one, two, three in Irish? How does Elija expect us to know THAT?!
Everyone started to pretend to surrender whilst Elija periodically blasted the flare. It went as expected - both Cursa and Coconator fell for it! But what will happen next? Will they obtain the second Power Star? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
The Heroes and The Villains have now joined forces against Cursa. Both sides are now getting ready to take on Cursa's new creation, the Coconator. But will they emerge victorious? Find out in this Bonfire Night Special of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
Lemon: So where are we going to find Cursa?
Lely: According to these readings, he's on a deserted island to the west of this place.
5072: But how are we meant to get there?! It's not like we have a boat or something!
Paratroopa: Hey guys, the airship's not working.
Elija: Great, just what we needed(!)
Max: Easy-peasy.
Elija: What do you mean 'easy-peasy?' We've got to repair the ship!
Lely: Elija's right Max, I just can't stand seeing my friends in trouble like this, even if they're toxic, dark or evil or even all three.
Max: I agree. That's what I meant by 'easy-peasy.' If only we had some metal around here...
Saguantuan: Coconator left a few scraps over here.
5072 and Paratroopa: There are more here too!
Elija: Excellent. Now my plan is nascent.
Everyone: Huh?
Elija: Lemon! Grab my flare, please.
Lemon: Here it is! I found it among a few pieces of robotic space junk.
Elija: Great. Everyone, in the newly-repaired airship!
They sailed into the vast blue yonder, cutting the air beneath their very feet.
Elija: Now let's give that Cursa a bonfire night it'll never forget!
Chilli: Yay, fireworks!
Lemon: And not the good kind! Elija packed it with heated nitrogen! Something random, sure, but it'll at least burn and freeze the enemy!
Elija: Perfect. Lely, do you have the false white flags?
Lely: Yep! I'm holding them right now!
Elija: Now on the count of three, I'll fire this spark several times while each of you waves one of these flags whilst pretending to surrender.
Paratroopa and Lemon: Which will lure Cursa right into our trap! Elija, you're a genius!
Elija: Thank you both. Now, are ye all ready?
Max POV: He's getting serious now... That strong Irish accent isn't there for the sake of it...
Elija: AON! DHÁ! TRÍ!
Ashton POV: Wait, was that one, two, three in Irish? How does Elija expect us to know THAT?!
Everyone started to pretend to surrender whilst Elija periodically blasted the flare. It went as expected - both Cursa and Coconator fell for it! But what will happen next? Will they obtain the second Power Star? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
1On 2022-11-06 at 00:10:32
Pretty nice so far, but why am I called "Paratroopa"?
On 2022-11-06 at 08:35:52
Elija: Perfect. Lely, do you have the false white flags
Everyone started to pretend to surrender
Warcrimes? I thought some of you were the "heroes".
On 2022-11-06 at 12:24:32
Pretty nice so far, but why am I called "Paratroopa"?
It's just a nickname which I thought would match your character's personality and development throughout the fanfic
On 2022-11-06 at 12:56:29
Elija: Perfect. Lely, do you have the false white flags
Everyone started to pretend to surrender
Warcrimes? I thought some of you were the "heroes".
I never accepted to actually hold them and to do this. I never accepted.
2On 2022-11-06 at 13:02:27
Elija: Perfect. Lely, do you have the false white flags
Everyone started to pretend to surrender
Warcrimes? I thought some of you were the "heroes".
Nobody's at war, Dietsoda
At least, not in the fanfic
And 'warcrimes'? Everyone's just trying to save the universe by fighting evil and collecting Power Stars. I don't think that trying to do that is criminal lol
On 2022-11-06 at 13:08:07
Elija: Perfect. Lely, do you have the false white flags
Everyone started to pretend to surrender
Warcrimes? I thought some of you were the "heroes".
Nobody's at war, Dietsoda
At least, not in the fanfic
And 'warcrimes'? Everyone's just trying to save the universe by fighting evil and collecting Power Stars. I don't think that trying to do that is criminal lol
And yes, I know some of them are 'The Villains', including myself, but right now the focus isn't crimes committed solely by me, but rather defeating Cursa and restoring peace to the galaxy
You'll see in today's episode...
EDIT: Bruh, I'm trying to keep things comedic but people just talk about random stuff istg I don't associate with the fanfic lol