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Messages 1926 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
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Ireland
EP1

In a mysterious land, our heroes (and villains) are relaxing at Elija’s place.

Dietsoda: I wish something interesting would happen today… it’s just like every other day.
xrunner: I know.
Max: Would you two shut up for once, I’m trying to sleep.
Nudge: Lighten up a bit Max, Elija did make us pizza after all.
Max: I’m trying to sleep it off, Nudge.
Lemon: Hey guys, sorry to sound off topic, but what is THAT?!

A rift between space and time had opened up in Elija’s backyard. Bowser stormed out of it, appearing to have kidnapped Mario, Peach and Luigi.

Elija: Jeez, does this guy EVER stop bugging people?
*Elija kills Bowser*
Bowser: OH GREAAAAT!!

But that didn’t stop the rift from expanding. Mario, Luigi and Peach wandered off home, leaving the others to the mercy of the ever-expanding void.

Chilli: Oh great, now we’re all about to DIE!!!
Elija: Of course we’re going to die, genius(!)
Max: How on earth do you stay calm when our lives are at risk?
Elija: Has it never occurred to you that I’m part feline? I have nine lives, Max, nine!
Max: Oh yeah, so you and Lemon should be just fine!
Nudge: Well, let’s at least accept our fate.
Lely: I don’t wanna die yet, I’m halfway through a BTS song!
Elija: I’m the most intelligent being of all you lot, we’re not going to die. This void is probably linked to a wormhole, so we’ll be OK.
Flabebseth: Why didn’t you say so earlier, Einstein?
Elija: Just wanted to see the look on your stupid faces.
Paratroopa: If I was on an MKPC forum right now, I’d give you a Mario facepalm.
Elija: Anyone gonna jump in?
Lely: I’m too scared!
Lemon: Eh sure, why not?
Nudge and Dietsoda: Fine.

Everyone eventually agreed to jump into the wormhole. But what happened next? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

Can you change my name to Popplio?

Sure :)
Messages 1172 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs13740 pts ★ Champion
battle9374 pts ★ Expert
United Kingdom
Could my personality be changed to be more deceitful. I think it would fit the double agent idea better.
Messages 451 - Metal Luigi Metal Luigi
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battle5234 pts ★ Novice
Japan
Thank you for letting me participate even if you don't reply
Of course I want to participate, and it's okay to have the personality you feel
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Messages 1926 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs11652 pts ★ Champion
battle6099 pts ★ Racer
Ireland
EP2:

Our heroes and villains have thus far arrived in a mysterious universe. Lemon, Dietsoda and Lely have sustained some damage, but with some help they were restored to full health. Elija's still searching for the others, but while doing so he realized it wasn't a sustainable plan. With help from the others who landed in the same galaxy, he created a neo-mechanical space hub, but is it all that nice and selfless? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

Lemon: Wha... where am I?
Elija: We arrived here 24 hours ago. Nudge, take her to the center.
Nudge: Got it, boss.
Lemon: Jeez Elija, how much did you spend on this?
Elija: Not a cent. I just found some crystals lying about and decided to set up a place to live.

While The Villains were enjoying themselves, unfortunately for The Heroes, things weren't so great...

Dietsoda: Report to base. I repeat, REPORT TO BASE!
Lely: Hey, what's going on, Dietsoda?
*Dietsoda puts transceiver on hold*
Dietsoda: Uhhh... nothing.
xrunner48: Hey, DS, what's going on?
Dietsoda POV: Lely's being a jerk, that's what.
Dietsoda IRL: I don't know. Lely just thought it was a good idea to question me out of the blue.
Nudge: Hey, what you got against Lely, huh?
Dietsoda POV: He's foiling our plans of intergalactic domination, stupid.
Elija: You OK, DS? You seem... kinda self-centered all of a sudden.
Lely: OWWWW!
Dietsoda: Sorry, got to go. Lely just hurt himself for the millionth time today. DS out.
Max: Hey, what's up Lely?
Lely: Chilli just punched me for no reason!
Chilli: No I didn't!
Lely: Liar!
Chilli: Well, what on earth do you expect me to do? You're listening to K-Pop and we're on an important mission!
Max: Honestly?


Lely and Chilli were so engrossed in their little brawl that nobody realized that Dietsoda had gone AWOL. Suddenly, a humongous mutant cactus emerged from the ground, sending all of them flying away while they were oblivious. For some reason, Dietsoda made it back to base unscathed.

What will happen next? Will The Heroes defeat the cactus demon? Or will they all perish in the attempt? What are Dietsoda's true intentions? Is Elija as nice as he appears? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
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Messages 10886 - King Mario King Mario
vs35265 pts ★ Legend
battle6102 pts ★ Racer
France
Y'all decided to hate me while I just live on the same planet as yours. Should I go to another universe ?
Messages 1926 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs11652 pts ★ Champion
battle6099 pts ★ Racer
Ireland
Invu wrote:
Y'all decided to hate me while I just live on the same planet as yours. Should I go to another universe ?

Yeah... actually, The Heroes have to defend all the planets and in next episode you do decide you need a break from everyone and Chilli ends up getting kidnapped by the cactus demon.
You're just supposed to be an envious guy who likes K-Pop but is quite antisocial.
Also, you're not the only one who constantly gets scapegoated. It's a Villain thing, you know. We hate the Heroes and like to think of them as jerks.
Messages 1926 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs11652 pts ★ Champion
battle6099 pts ★ Racer
Ireland
Invu wrote:
Y'all decided to hate me while I just live on the same planet as yours. Should I go to another universe ?

Yeah... actually, The Heroes have to defend all the planets and in next episode you do decide you need a break from everyone and Chilli ends up getting kidnapped by the cactus demon.
You're just supposed to be an envious guy who likes K-Pop but is quite antisocial.
Also, you're not the only one who constantly gets scapegoated. It's a Villain thing, you know. We hate the Heroes and like to think of them as jerks.

Also,
Spoiler [ShowHide]
Dietsoda's the main antagonist lol
ok1
Messages 2116 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs5325 pts ★ Novice
battle5601 pts ★ Novice
United States
EP2:

Our heroes and villains have thus far arrived in a mysterious universe. Lemon, Dietsoda and Lely have sustained some damage, but with some help they were restored to full health. Elija's still searching for the others, but while doing so he realized it wasn't a sustainable plan. With help from the others who landed in the same galaxy, he created a neo-mechanical space hub, but is it all that nice and selfless? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

Lemon: Wha... where am I?
Elija: We arrived here 24 hours ago. Nudge, take her to the center.
Nudge: Got it, boss.
Lemon: Jeez Elija, how much did you spend on this?
Elija: Not a cent. I just found some crystals lying about and decided to set up a place to live.

While The Villains were enjoying themselves, unfortunately for The Heroes, things weren't so great...

Dietsoda: Report to base. I repeat, REPORT TO BASE!
Lely: Hey, what's going on, Dietsoda?
*Dietsoda puts transceiver on hold*
Dietsoda: Uhhh... nothing.
xrunner48: Hey, DS, what's going on?
Dietsoda POV: Lely's being a jerk, that's what.
Dietsoda IRL: I don't know. Lely just thought it was a good idea to question me out of the blue.
Nudge: Hey, what you got against Lely, huh?
Dietsoda POV: He's foiling our plans of intergalactic domination, stupid.
Elija: You OK, DS? You seem... kinda self-centered all of a sudden.
Lely: OWWWW!
Dietsoda: Sorry, got to go. Lely just hurt himself for the millionth time today. DS out.
Max: Hey, what's up Lely?
Lely: Chilli just punched me for no reason!
Chilli: No I didn't!
Lely: Liar!
Chilli: Well, what on earth do you expect me to do? You're listening to K-Pop and we're on an important mission!
Max: Honestly?


Lely and Chilli were so engrossed in their little brawl that nobody realized that Dietsoda had gone AWOL. Suddenly, a humongous mutant cactus emerged from the ground, sending all of them flying away while they were oblivious. For some reason, Dietsoda made it back to base unscathed.

What will happen next? Will The Heroes defeat the cactus demon? Or will they all perish in the attempt? What are Dietsoda's true intentions? Is Elija as nice as he appears? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

The fight part really fits my personality.
I hate K-pop.
Also, unexpected Dietsoda cactus moment!
Messages 10886 - King Mario King Mario
vs35265 pts ★ Legend
battle6102 pts ★ Racer
France
EP2:

Our heroes and villains have thus far arrived in a mysterious universe. Lemon, Dietsoda and Lely have sustained some damage, but with some help they were restored to full health. Elija's still searching for the others, but while doing so he realized it wasn't a sustainable plan. With help from the others who landed in the same galaxy, he created a neo-mechanical space hub, but is it all that nice and selfless? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

Lemon: Wha... where am I?
Elija: We arrived here 24 hours ago. Nudge, take her to the center.
Nudge: Got it, boss.
Lemon: Jeez Elija, how much did you spend on this?
Elija: Not a cent. I just found some crystals lying about and decided to set up a place to live.

While The Villains were enjoying themselves, unfortunately for The Heroes, things weren't so great...

Dietsoda: Report to base. I repeat, REPORT TO BASE!
Lely: Hey, what's going on, Dietsoda?
*Dietsoda puts transceiver on hold*
Dietsoda: Uhhh... nothing.
xrunner48: Hey, DS, what's going on?
Dietsoda POV: Lely's being a jerk, that's what.
Dietsoda IRL: I don't know. Lely just thought it was a good idea to question me out of the blue.
Nudge: Hey, what you got against Lely, huh?
Dietsoda POV: He's foiling our plans of intergalactic domination, stupid.
Elija: You OK, DS? You seem... kinda self-centered all of a sudden.
Lely: OWWWW!
Dietsoda: Sorry, got to go. Lely just hurt himself for the millionth time today. DS out.
Max: Hey, what's up Lely?
Lely: Chilli just punched me for no reason!
Chilli: No I didn't!
Lely: Liar!
Chilli: Well, what on earth do you expect me to do? You're listening to K-Pop and we're on an important mission!
Max: Honestly?


Lely and Chilli were so engrossed in their little brawl that nobody realized that Dietsoda had gone AWOL. Suddenly, a humongous mutant cactus emerged from the ground, sending all of them flying away while they were oblivious. For some reason, Dietsoda made it back to base unscathed.

What will happen next? Will The Heroes defeat the cactus demon? Or will they all perish in the attempt? What are Dietsoda's true intentions? Is Elija as nice as he appears? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

The fight part really fits my personality.
I hate K-pop.
Also, unexpected Dietsoda cactus moment!

That doesn't gives you the right to hit me. Imagine me being like "Let's beat up people that likes heavy metal, or rap, because I feel like doing so"
Messages 2116 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs5325 pts ★ Novice
battle5601 pts ★ Novice
United States
Invu wrote:
EP2:

Our heroes and villains have thus far arrived in a mysterious universe. Lemon, Dietsoda and Lely have sustained some damage, but with some help they were restored to full health. Elija's still searching for the others, but while doing so he realized it wasn't a sustainable plan. With help from the others who landed in the same galaxy, he created a neo-mechanical space hub, but is it all that nice and selfless? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

Lemon: Wha... where am I?
Elija: We arrived here 24 hours ago. Nudge, take her to the center.
Nudge: Got it, boss.
Lemon: Jeez Elija, how much did you spend on this?
Elija: Not a cent. I just found some crystals lying about and decided to set up a place to live.

While The Villains were enjoying themselves, unfortunately for The Heroes, things weren't so great...

Dietsoda: Report to base. I repeat, REPORT TO BASE!
Lely: Hey, what's going on, Dietsoda?
*Dietsoda puts transceiver on hold*
Dietsoda: Uhhh... nothing.
xrunner48: Hey, DS, what's going on?
Dietsoda POV: Lely's being a jerk, that's what.
Dietsoda IRL: I don't know. Lely just thought it was a good idea to question me out of the blue.
Nudge: Hey, what you got against Lely, huh?
Dietsoda POV: He's foiling our plans of intergalactic domination, stupid.
Elija: You OK, DS? You seem... kinda self-centered all of a sudden.
Lely: OWWWW!
Dietsoda: Sorry, got to go. Lely just hurt himself for the millionth time today. DS out.
Max: Hey, what's up Lely?
Lely: Chilli just punched me for no reason!
Chilli: No I didn't!
Lely: Liar!
Chilli: Well, what on earth do you expect me to do? You're listening to K-Pop and we're on an important mission!
Max: Honestly?


Lely and Chilli were so engrossed in their little brawl that nobody realized that Dietsoda had gone AWOL. Suddenly, a humongous mutant cactus emerged from the ground, sending all of them flying away while they were oblivious. For some reason, Dietsoda made it back to base unscathed.

What will happen next? Will The Heroes defeat the cactus demon? Or will they all perish in the attempt? What are Dietsoda's true intentions? Is Elija as nice as he appears? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

The fight part really fits my personality.
I hate K-pop.
Also, unexpected Dietsoda cactus moment!

That doesn't gives you the right to hit me. Imagine me being like "Let's beat up people that likes heavy metal, or rap, because I feel like doing so"

Yeah, I said that for entertainment purposes
xd3
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Messages 2116 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs5325 pts ★ Novice
battle5601 pts ★ Novice
United States

Also, @Dietsoda's the main antagonist lol

What the...
Dietsoda, I just caught your attention lol
Messages 10886 - King Mario King Mario
vs35265 pts ★ Legend
battle6102 pts ★ Racer
France
This fanfic is gonna divide MKPC in two sides, istg.
That ultimate family feeling will get away with those two names, heroes and villains. This is gonna divide us.
(This is a joke)
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xd4
Messages 1172 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs13740 pts ★ Champion
battle9374 pts ★ Expert
United Kingdom
Invu wrote:
Y'all decided to hate me while I just live on the same planet as yours. Should I go to another universe ?


Wouldn't say hate. I would just say that if you back off and let me take over the universe you will be a fine subject under my rule.
Messages 10886 - King Mario King Mario
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battle6102 pts ★ Racer
France
Dietsoda wrote:
Invu wrote:
Y'all decided to hate me while I just live on the same planet as yours. Should I go to another universe ?


Wouldn't say hate. I would just say that if you back off and let me take over the universe you will be a fine subject under my rule.

I just can't let you do that... :p
Messages 1172 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs13740 pts ★ Champion
battle9374 pts ★ Expert
United Kingdom
Invu wrote:
Dietsoda wrote:
Invu wrote:
Y'all decided to hate me while I just live on the same planet as yours. Should I go to another universe ?


Wouldn't say hate. I would just say that if you back off and let me take over the universe you will be a fine subject under my rule.

I just can't let you do that... :p


You sure?
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Messages 10886 - King Mario King Mario
vs35265 pts ★ Legend
battle6102 pts ★ Racer
France
Dietsoda wrote:
Invu wrote:
Dietsoda wrote:
Invu wrote:
Y'all decided to hate me while I just live on the same planet as yours. Should I go to another universe ?


Wouldn't say hate. I would just say that if you back off and let me take over the universe you will be a fine subject under my rule.

I just can't let you do that... :p


You sure?

I will try to stop you as much as I can. There needs to be people to control the galaxy, but they shouldn't be dictators, and do whatever they want, they should actually respect people, and hearing them out, and helping them out.
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Messages 1172 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs13740 pts ★ Champion
battle9374 pts ★ Expert
United Kingdom
Invu wrote:
Dietsoda wrote:
Invu wrote:
Dietsoda wrote:
Invu wrote:
Y'all decided to hate me while I just live on the same planet as yours. Should I go to another universe ?


Wouldn't say hate. I would just say that if you back off and let me take over the universe you will be a fine subject under my rule.

I just can't let you do that... :p


You sure?

I will try to stop you as much as I can. There needs to be people to control the galaxy, but they shouldn't be dictators, and do whatever they want, they should actually respect people, and hearing them out, and helping them out.


If I can't rule the galaxy nobody can.
*presses big red button*
Messages 1912 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
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battle13472 pts ★ Champion
United Kingdom
Between episodes, I like to go on holidays back home.
Here, I sent a postcard:
https://i.imgur.com/Nkz4W6C.png
xd2
Messages 1926 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs11652 pts ★ Champion
battle6099 pts ★ Racer
Ireland
EP3

After getting pushed back by a deadly cactus demon, The Heroes have to fight. Slowly but surely, both sides discover new galaxies... and new ambitions. What will each of them find? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

Max: Whoa! How are we gonna beat this thing?
Lely: I don't know! I've never played Super Mario Galaxy!
Chilli: Haha, noob.
Lely: When will you learn to SHUT UP?!
Saguantuan: GROOOAAAARRGH!
Lely: I thought I just told humanity to SHUT UP! That applies to monsters as well!
Saguantuan: WAAAAAAAAA!
*Saguantuan starts weeping*
Max: Way to make him cry, Lely.
Chilli: I don't like you, Lely!
Lely: I'm sorry! Besides, Chilli, I'd figured.
*Saguantuan stops crying all of a sudden*
Saguantuan: Wait, where's Elija?
Jey: That's what we're trying to find out! Wanna come with us?
Saguantuan: Uhhh, sure. I'd better give you this Power Star in case you need it.

Now The Heroes have 1 out of 7 Power Stars! As they travel to another galaxy, Saguantuan the Mutant Cactus joins them on their adventures.

Max: So this is the new galaxy.
Lely: 'Tropical District Galaxy' - not the most creative name - I swear there was a similarly named Mario Kart track.
Saguantuan: Yeah, the inhabitants apparently named it after Coconut Mall.
Chilli: Avid gamers, huh? Hey Lely, bet you can't relate!
Lely: SHUT UP, CHILLI!!
Max: Both of you, stop fighting!

So they made their way into the central plaza. But what will they find? Is Saguantuan trustworthy? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!
Messages 10886 - King Mario King Mario
vs35265 pts ★ Legend
battle6102 pts ★ Racer
France
EP3

After getting pushed back by a deadly cactus demon, The Heroes have to fight. Slowly but surely, both sides discover new galaxies... and new ambitions. What will each of them find? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

Max: Whoa! How are we gonna beat this thing?
Lely: I don't know! I've never played Super Mario Galaxy!
Chilli: Haha, noob.
Lely: When will you learn to SHUT UP?!
Saguantuan: GROOOAAAARRGH!
Lely: I thought I just told humanity to SHUT UP! That applies to monsters as well!
Saguantuan: WAAAAAAAAA!
*Saguantuan starts weeping*
Max: Way to make him cry, Lely.
Chilli: I don't like you, Lely!
Lely: I'm sorry! Besides, Chilli, I'd figured.
*Saguantuan stops crying all of a sudden*
Saguantuan: Wait, where's Elija?
Jey: That's what we're trying to find out! Wanna come with us?
Saguantuan: Uhhh, sure. I'd better give you this Power Star in case you need it.

Now The Heroes have 1 out of 7 Power Stars! As they travel to another galaxy, Saguantuan the Mutant Cactus joins them on their adventures.

Max: So this is the new galaxy.
Lely: 'Tropical District Galaxy' - not the most creative name - I swear there was a similarly named Mario Kart track.
Saguantuan: Yeah, the inhabitants apparently named it after Coconut Mall.
Chilli: Avid gamers, huh? Hey Lely, bet you can't relate!
Lely: SHUT UP, CHILLI!!
Max: Both of you, stop fighting!

So they made their way into the central plaza. But what will they find? Is Saguantuan trustworthy? Find out next time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

Good, but there's a few things that don't fit me at all :
- I've played SMG but it was for the gag so OK
- I wouldn't say shut up to something I don't even know, especially if I'm just angry at Chilli
- I wouldn't say this name is uncreative, but ok
- I wouldn't scream at Chilli, in this case he's just annoying, I would stay calm and I would just tell him to stop

But still, it's kinda good
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