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Messages 11378 - King Mario King Mario
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ok but i still dont entirely understand...
you don't need to explain

You'll get lines later, when it will be relevant to the story.
Messages 89 - Boo Boo
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Can I please be in chapter three
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Messages 4760 - King Mario King Mario
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Leadgaming wrote:
Can I please be in chapter three

Please read everything, Lely said that he wouldn't add anyone else for now
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Messages 11378 - King Mario King Mario
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Leadgaming wrote:
Can I please be in chapter three

Please read everything, Lely said that he wouldn't add anyone else for now

He is part of the fanfic though
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Messages 4680 - King Mario King Mario
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skymin wrote:
Leadgaming wrote:
Can I please be in chapter three

Please read everything, Lely said that he wouldn't add anyone else for now

He is part of the fanfic though

Oh damn then @Leadgaming you'll probably be in when you're relevant to the plot
Messages 4760 - King Mario King Mario
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skymin wrote:
Leadgaming wrote:
Can I please be in chapter three

Please read everything, Lely said that he wouldn't add anyone else for now

He is part of the fanfic though

Well I guess it's me who needs to read everything 💀 my bad lmao
Messages 11378 - King Mario King Mario
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Fiery wrote:
skymin wrote:
Leadgaming wrote:
Can I please be in chapter three

Please read everything, Lely said that he wouldn't add anyone else for now

He is part of the fanfic though

Oh damn then @Leadgaming you'll probably be in when you're relevant to the plot

I actually planned to give him lines in Chapter 2 but they were cancelled out. They will be in Chapter 3 instead.
Messages 608 - Mario Mario
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Invu wrote:
Fiery wrote:
skymin wrote:
Leadgaming wrote:
Can I please be in chapter three

Please read everything, Lely said that he wouldn't add anyone else for now

He is part of the fanfic though

Oh damn then @Leadgaming you'll probably be in when you're relevant to the plot

I actually planned to give him lines in Chapter 2 but they were cancelled out. They will be in Chapter 3 instead.

Why did you change your username? @lely
Messages 1422 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
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Puerto Rico
Yoshi649 wrote:
Invu wrote:
Fiery wrote:
skymin wrote:
Leadgaming wrote:
Can I please be in chapter three

Please read everything, Lely said that he wouldn't add anyone else for now

He is part of the fanfic though

Oh damn then @Leadgaming you'll probably be in when you're relevant to the plot

I actually planned to give him lines in Chapter 2 but they were cancelled out. They will be in Chapter 3 instead.

Why did you change your username?

because yes
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Messages 470 - Metal Luigi Metal Luigi
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Canada
Yoshi649 wrote:
Invu wrote:
Fiery wrote:
skymin wrote:
Leadgaming wrote:
Can I please be in chapter three

Please read everything, Lely said that he wouldn't add anyone else for now

He is part of the fanfic though

Oh damn then @Leadgaming you'll probably be in when you're relevant to the plot

I actually planned to give him lines in Chapter 2 but they were cancelled out. They will be in Chapter 3 instead.

Why did you change your username? lely

Why do you care so much about usernames? @yoshi649
Messages 719 - Mario Mario
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United States
UraniumMan wrote:
Yoshi649 wrote:
Invu wrote:
Fiery wrote:
skymin wrote:
Leadgaming wrote:
Can I please be in chapter three

Please read everything, Lely said that he wouldn't add anyone else for now

He is part of the fanfic though

Oh damn then @Leadgaming you'll probably be in when you're relevant to the plot

I actually planned to give him lines in Chapter 2 but they were cancelled out. They will be in Chapter 3 instead.

Why did you change your username? lely

Why do you care so much about usernames? yoshi649

You pinged lely just now
Messages 470 - Metal Luigi Metal Luigi
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Canada
Kommisar_K wrote:
UraniumMan wrote:
Yoshi649 wrote:
Invu wrote:
Fiery wrote:
skymin wrote:
Leadgaming wrote:
Can I please be in chapter three

Please read everything, Lely said that he wouldn't add anyone else for now

He is part of the fanfic though

Oh damn then @Leadgaming you'll probably be in when you're relevant to the plot

I actually planned to give him lines in Chapter 2 but they were cancelled out. They will be in Chapter 3 instead.

Why did you change your username? lely

Why do you care so much about usernames? yoshi649

You pinged lely just now

My bad, sorry
Messages 11378 - King Mario King Mario
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Chapter 3 : Rise Up

Lely's House

1PM. Lely invited Fiery to his house to make him a drink. As Lely was making the drinks, Fiery was whispering to himself.

Fiery : What if I became...
Lely : What are you talking about ?
Fiery : No... you're gonna find it ridiculous.
Lely : I won't make fun of you, I promise. I'm just curious.
Fiery : You will laugh...
Lely : What business would I have doing so ??
Fiery : I don't know but I'm scared. You are still just a stranger who's randomly invited me to have a drink in his house.
Lely : And you're some creep who randomly thought I was a killer with multiple murders.
Fiery : That's just about that. I kinda want to...
Lely : Yeah ?
Fiery : Become a vigilante.

Mushrestaurant

1:30PM. Miles and David are standing in front of the restaurant. Miles is disappointed while David

Miles : Can't believe they got a closure notice just for an incident that was caused by some obscure people.
David : Oh, I never liked their dishes anyways.
Miles : You hardly like anything.
David : Eh, true.
Miles : I should contact Lely to actually revive this place. I believe it's worth something.
David : I believe you're wasting your time.
Miles : When you see potential in something, you must never give up.
David : You really see something in a restaurant where the wooden floor is soaked, the kitchens completely burned and the camera room hacked by the Moon group ?
Miles : Oh shut it.

News Presentation Set

UraniumMan : Hello everyone, and welcome to your usual local news. Today we decided to interview two celebrities again, to have their opinion about the new events that occurred, notably Lely being freed due to his innocence seemingly being proved for now.
Leadgaming : Well personnally I still do not care, as long as I'm not affected. To be a leader, you ignore the nobodies.
Scorchy : Oh my God... well anyways, I think these are amazing news ! I was already very doubtful as to why a guy single handedly serving the customers during a particularly rough night could be a murderer. I believe the Moon group are the culprits. We will definitively need to gather more information though.
Leadgaming : I'm sorry but you care too much...
Scorchy : Too much is better than not enough.
Leadgaming : That's your opinion.
Scorchy : It is. What's wrong with it?
Leadgaming : It is less valuable than mine.
Scorchy : Says who ?
Leadgaming : Me. The leader of all.
Scorchy : Just because you wore quality clothes and obtained expensive cars for free doesn't mean you are a great person.
UraniumMan : Stop arguing you rich bitches before I get you off the set. Oh shit, we're on camera. I forgot. Sorry. Anyways, goodbye, MKPCians. We will meet again this evening or tomorrow. When fate will decide.
Leadgaming : Acting like he didn't just speak in low vocabulary.
Scorchy : sighs Why am I here already ?

Police Station

2PM. The two policemen are sat at their office, as usual. They seem perturbated by something.

Jake : We should probably gather more information and interview everyone who was affected by this accident.
Asher : Do what ya want bro.
Jake : I should fire you, but that's illegal.
Asher : Alrighty my man.

Jake called the people that were affected by the incidents, one by one. One hour later, they eventually arrived.

Jake : Welcome everybody, please take a seat. Thank you for attending this meeting. It is about the Lely case. Do you have any information about the Moon group he talked about ?
Fiery : I do. As I was on the crime scene, blood formed a sentence. "WE NEVER DIE, WE ARE EVERYWHERE".
Jake : How is that possible ?
Fiery : Idk but it certainly was.
Jake : It might have been a hallucination, do you have a picture ?
Fiery : I do hands over the phone

The picture shows a puddle of blood with absolutely no trace of the sentence. However, Jake squinted his eyes, and saw the sentence.

Jake : It's very weird... it might prove that more members of the group might be out in the nature. Some of them might actually have caused the 9:29 incidents. Anyone else ?
Lely : I remember noting down something in my phone that they said "we shall unite to be stronger" or something like that..
Jake : reads it out loud In a place where no rules are here to regulate the world, hell breaks loose. Terrible people unite and they become stronger. To be as strong as them, we need to unite.
Lely : Oh yeah. They told me "they had enough power to destroy the peace of a whole land, and that they were united. And that unison was what made them strong."
Jake : That proves that Moon and her boyfriend were part of an organization that caused these five incidents...
Blobby : And why would they choose 9:29PM ?
David : That's so random !
Blobby : I believe there is a reason behind !
David : Tssk, another one wasting his time.
Blobby : No ! I want to find out what might be hiding behind !
Miles : Is it like the name of a song ?
Lely : Yeah. 21:29, which was almost called 9:29.
Miles : What if they're just fans ?
Leadgaming : No, that's wrong.
Miles : Then you shall explain why. You have been useless for the whole time you were here.
Leadgaming : That explanation just sounded stupid to me. You are lazy to find out a real reason.
Miles : That is real hypocritical. And not everything is about you.
SM7 : ✋️💥🧠👍🏼 (Stop arguing, I think I know the reason)
Scorchy : Huh ?? What now ??
Leadgaming : Ignore, ignore...
Miles : OH MY GOD SHUT UP FOR A SECOND !
SM7 : 😱🤚9️⃣2️⃣9️⃣🔚👷‍♀️ (Due to trauma, I can only rely on sign language. 9:29 is the hour where employees end their shift.)
Blobby : Haven't understood much but I think he said 9:29 is the hour where employees end their shift.
Babymario : It is also the hour where employees in restaurants are serving customers and less in the kitchens...
K : The hour where big shops close...
Dietsoda : The hour where little, smaller criminals cause havoc in the hidden parts of the city... like VC, a mentally sick ghost I have met yesterday.
K : A what ?
Dietsoda : A ghost.
K : Does that exist ?
Dietsoda : I was surprised as well.
K : Wow...
Dietsoda : Right.
Babymario : So we now know it's a group who is causing this... and Moon was part of it. They also chose a very strategic hour... thank you SM7. You triggered the system no one could start.
SM7 : 😊🙏 (You are welcome)
Babymario : Wow, the missing pieces are really starting to come together...
Fiery : On that topic, why didn't Max and Wal come ? Their building got bombed down...
Jake : Their phone was not responding. Just like Asher.
Asher : Wait? Huh? What? Oh, I need to pull out a good excuse. I need to use the bathroom, I will go now.
Jake : I think you did not mean to say that out loud... anyways, what could they be doing ?
Oscar : They must be so busy !
Dudzi : I guess they are. They might be planning to organize a TV intervention...
Oscar : Right ? Well, I hope they will enlighten us soon.
Dudzi : They might be of great help.
Miles : I agree, we need them...

Wal's House

In the meanwhile, Max and Wal...

Max : Oh my God, your spa is actually so good. Resting is key in such moments.
Wal68 : Right ? I thought it could indeed be of great use. ^^
Max : Do you have cocktails around there ?
Wal68 : I do. I wish Mushrestaurant was still open though, so that we could get greater drinks.
Max : It doesn't matter. Bring them all out.
Wal68 : On it !
Max : Ah, reminds me of the time I was a Snorlax...
Wal68 : Oh, you were ?
Max : Long story...
Wal68 : Yeah, you're right. Let's relax for now.

The Dark Ages of MKPC
Chapter 3

The end
...?




VC : Is this a joke ? Everyone had lines but me. Well, I guess I will make them myself. Oh, and I feel like someone just talked about me... and they didn't say very nice things. But anyways, hope you had a good read ! Wait, I broke character. And the fourth wall as well. HAHAHAHA ! Well, good night, you lovely reader...

The real end.
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Messages 349 - Peach Peach
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AWESOME! i talk a lot in this chapter. just like irl.
also quite well written, i think its better than the prologue. well done, new best chapter!
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Messages 4680 - King Mario King Mario
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Algeria
Y’all if you wanna see vigilante me just…stay tuned for Chapter 4 I’m hoping I’m gonna put a show on the road
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Messages 594 - Mario Mario
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United States
Oh yeah!!
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Messages 11378 - King Mario King Mario
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France
AWESOME! i talk a lot in this chapter. just like irl.
also quite well written, i think its better than the prologue. well done, new best chapter!

Thank you so much for the positive feedback, it feels even more meaningful since you weren't the biggest fan of the last two chapters :D I really appreciate it, thank you soo much 🫶🏼
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Messages 1422 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
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Puerto Rico
in my opinion, Leadgaming (in the fanfic) is a bitch.
randomly calling himself a leader and not caring at all about a literal APOCALYPSE is very wrong. being rich and famous doesn’t give you the right to act like this
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Messages 3033 - King Mario King Mario
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Barbados
Yoshi649 wrote:
Invu wrote:
Fiery wrote:
skymin wrote:
Leadgaming wrote:
Can I please be in chapter three

Please read everything, Lely said that he wouldn't add anyone else for now

He is part of the fanfic though

Oh damn then @Leadgaming you'll probably be in when you're relevant to the plot

I actually planned to give him lines in Chapter 2 but they were cancelled out. They will be in Chapter 3 instead.

Why did you change your username? @lely

Bc neurodivergency. (Not really)
Bc he can. He's running out of ideas tho, cuz he's used this one before.
xd1
Messages 568 - Mario Mario
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France
Invu wrote:
Chapter 3 : Rise Up

Lely's House

1PM. Lely invited Fiery to his house to make him a drink. As Lely was making the drinks, Fiery was whispering to himself.

Fiery : What if I became...
Lely : What are you talking about ?
Fiery : No... you're gonna find it ridiculous.
Lely : I won't make fun of you, I promise. I'm just curious.
Fiery : You will laugh...
Lely : What business would I have doing so ??
Fiery : I don't know but I'm scared. You are still just a stranger who's randomly invited me to have a drink in his house.
Lely : And you're some creep who randomly thought I was a killer with multiple murders.
Fiery : That's just about that. I kinda want to...
Lely : Yeah ?
Fiery : Become a vigilante.

Mushrestaurant

1:30PM. Miles and David are standing in front of the restaurant. Miles is disappointed while David

Miles : Can't believe they got a closure notice just for an incident that was caused by some obscure people.
David : Oh, I never liked their dishes anyways.
Miles : You hardly like anything.
David : Eh, true.
Miles : I should contact Lely to actually revive this place. I believe it's worth something.
David : I believe you're wasting your time.
Miles : When you see potential in something, you must never give up.
David : You really see something in a restaurant where the wooden floor is soaked, the kitchens completely burned and the camera room hacked by the Moon group ?
Miles : Oh shut it.

News Presentation Set

UraniumMan : Hello everyone, and welcome to your usual local news. Today we decided to interview two celebrities again, to have their opinion about the new events that occurred, notably Lely being freed due to his innocence seemingly being proved for now.
Leadgaming : Well personnally I still do not care, as long as I'm not affected. To be a leader, you ignore the nobodies.
Scorchy : Oh my God... well anyways, I think these are amazing news ! I was already very doubtful as to why a guy single handedly serving the customers during a particularly rough night could be a murderer. I believe the Moon group are the culprits. We will definitively need to gather more information though.
Leadgaming : I'm sorry but you care too much...
Scorchy : Too much is better than not enough.
Leadgaming : That's your opinion.
Scorchy : It is. What's wrong with it?
Leadgaming : It is less valuable than mine.
Scorchy : Says who ?
Leadgaming : Me. The leader of all.
Scorchy : Just because you wore quality clothes and obtained expensive cars for free doesn't mean you are a great person.
UraniumMan : Stop arguing you rich bitches before I get you off the set. Oh shit, we're on camera. I forgot. Sorry. Anyways, goodbye, MKPCians. We will meet again this evening or tomorrow. When fate will decide.
Leadgaming : Acting like he didn't just speak in low vocabulary.
Scorchy : sighs Why am I here already ?

Police Station

2PM. The two policemen are sat at their office, as usual. They seem perturbated by something.

Jake : We should probably gather more information and interview everyone who was affected by this accident.
Asher : Do what ya want bro.
Jake : I should fire you, but that's illegal.
Asher : Alrighty my man.

Jake called the people that were affected by the incidents, one by one. One hour later, they eventually arrived.

Jake : Welcome everybody, please take a seat. Thank you for attending this meeting. It is about the Lely case. Do you have any information about the Moon group he talked about ?
Fiery : I do. As I was on the crime scene, blood formed a sentence. "WE NEVER DIE, WE ARE EVERYWHERE".
Jake : How is that possible ?
Fiery : Idk but it certainly was.
Jake : It might have been a hallucination, do you have a picture ?
Fiery : I do hands over the phone

The picture shows a puddle of blood with absolutely no trace of the sentence. However, Jake squinted his eyes, and saw the sentence.

Jake : It's very weird... it might prove that more members of the group might be out in the nature. Some of them might actually have caused the 9:29 incidents. Anyone else ?
Lely : I remember noting down something in my phone that they said "we shall unite to be stronger" or something like that..
Jake : reads it out loud In a place where no rules are here to regulate the world, hell breaks loose. Terrible people unite and they become stronger. To be as strong as them, we need to unite.
Lely : Oh yeah. They told me "they had enough power to destroy the peace of a whole land, and that they were united. And that unison was what made them strong."
Jake : That proves that Moon and her boyfriend were part of an organization that caused these five incidents...
Blobby : And why would they choose 9:29PM ?
David : That's so random !
Blobby : I believe there is a reason behind !
David : Tssk, another one wasting his time.
Blobby : No ! I want to find out what might be hiding behind !
Miles : Is it like the name of a song ?
Lely : Yeah. 21:29, which was almost called 9:29.
Miles : What if they're just fans ?
Leadgaming : No, that's wrong.
Miles : Then you shall explain why. You have been useless for the whole time you were here.
Leadgaming : That explanation just sounded stupid to me. You are lazy to find out a real reason.
Miles : That is real hypocritical. And not everything is about you.
SM7 : ✋️💥🧠👍🏼 (Stop arguing, I think I know the reason)
Scorchy : Huh ?? What now ??
Leadgaming : Ignore, ignore...
Miles : OH MY GOD SHUT UP FOR A SECOND !
SM7 : 😱🤚9️⃣2️⃣9️⃣🔚👷‍♀️ (Due to trauma, I can only rely on sign language. 9:29 is the hour where employees end their shift.)
Blobby : Haven't understood much but I think he said 9:29 is the hour where employees end their shift.
Babymario : It is also the hour where employees in restaurants are serving customers and less in the kitchens...
K : The hour where big shops close...
Dietsoda : The hour where little, smaller criminals cause havoc in the hidden parts of the city... like VC, a mentally sick ghost I have met yesterday.
K : A what ?
Dietsoda : A ghost.
K : Does that exist ?
Dietsoda : I was surprised as well.
K : Wow...
Dietsoda : Right.
Babymario : So we now know it's a group who is causing this... and Moon was part of it. They also chose a very strategic hour... thank you SM7. You triggered the system no one could start.
SM7 : 😊🙏 (You are welcome)
Babymario : Wow, the missing pieces are really starting to come together...
Fiery : On that topic, why didn't Max and Wal come ? Their building got bombed down...
Jake : Their phone was not responding. Just like Asher.
Asher : Wait? Huh? What? Oh, I need to pull out a good excuse. I need to use the bathroom, I will go now.
Jake : I think you did not mean to say that out loud... anyways, what could they be doing ?
Oscar : They must be so busy !
Dudzi : I guess they are. They might be planning to organize a TV intervention...
Oscar : Right ? Well, I hope they will enlighten us soon.
Dudzi : They might be of great help.
Miles : I agree, we need them...

Wal's House

In the meanwhile, Max and Wal...

Max : Oh my God, your spa is actually so good. Resting is key in such moments.
Wal68 : Right ? I thought it could indeed be of great use. ^^
Max : Do you have cocktails around there ?
Wal68 : I do. I wish Mushrestaurant was still open though, so that we could get greater drinks.
Max : It doesn't matter. Bring them all out.
Wal68 : On it !
Max : Ah, reminds me of the time I was a Snorlax...
Wal68 : Oh, you were ?
Max : Long story...
Wal68 : Yeah, you're right. Let's relax for now.

The Dark Ages of MKPC
Chapter 3

The end
...?




VC : Is this a joke ? Everyone had lines but me. Well, I guess I will make them myself. Oh, and I feel like someone just talked about me... and they didn't say very nice things. But anyways, hope you had a good read ! Wait, I broke character. And the fourth wall as well. HAHAHAHA ! Well, good night, you lovely reader...

The real end.
I also don't have a line ! ^^
xd1
gamba1

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