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Messages 5400 - King Mario King Mario
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Invu wrote:
this is gonna comfort me.

Me rn : Nevermind... 😭

Just removed the bad part of the message. We only need positivity (small exception of murder)
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Messages 11441 - King Mario King Mario
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France
Invu wrote:
this is gonna comfort me.

Me rn : Nevermind... 😭

Just removed the bad part of the message. We only need positivity (small exception of murder)

Positivity my ass. What you said about me is even more crual than the dog jokes I did to you in PM
Messages 4859 - King Mario King Mario
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France
Invu wrote:
this is gonna comfort me.

Me rn : Nevermind... 😭

Just removed the bad part of the message. We only need positivity (small exception of murder)

No but seriously I'm literally crying because I forgot to put a number at midnight on a Discord server, I'M CRYING FOR A STUPID THING
Messages 5400 - King Mario King Mario
vs47334 pts ★ Titan
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United Kingdom
Invu wrote:
Invu wrote:
this is gonna comfort me.

Me rn : Nevermind... 😭

Just removed the bad part of the message. We only need positivity (small exception of murder)

Positivity my ass. What you said about me is even more crual than the dog jokes I did to you in PM

Do you mean my insults to Light Spirits?
Messages 11441 - King Mario King Mario
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France
Max-Bros wrote:
Invu wrote:
this is gonna comfort me.

Me rn : Nevermind... 😭

Just removed the bad part of the message. We only need positivity (small exception of murder)

No but seriously I'm literally crying because I forgot to put a number at midnight on a Discord server, I'M CRYING FOR A STUPID THING

Why was that number important
Messages 11441 - King Mario King Mario
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France
NeonSyrup wrote:
Max-Bros wrote:
MKPC Revival: Episode 4

Max:So we have arrived at the lake
Kay: Thought it would be bigger, but the size is still good
Toady: Be careful of the liquid, since it is lava, and can burn you
Kay: K. I’ll make sure to touch the water

Luq: What are you up to Nudge?
Nudge: This
*At that moment, The T-Rex flung Luq of of it, onto wooded kingdom, but then the lost grip of the inverted pyramid and fell*
THAT WASN’T SUPPOSED TO HAPPEN
Luq: Whatevwr he’s up to, seems to have gone wrong

Lely: *crying* I guess this is over. The only company I have is you guys, and you can’t even talk to me. The place I’m in is terrifying, and I just don’t think it’s worth living anymore. Goodbye pets
*CRASH*
Lely: What was that? Company?
*He went over, just to see what was there, only to see a T-Rex*
Lely: A-another one?
Nudge: AAAAHH!!!
Lely: Nudge? Where is he? And… where did my chain chomp go?
Nudge: AAAAAHH!!! LEAVE ME ALONE!!!
Lely: He sounds scared…
Nudge: SOMEONE HELP MEEEEEEEEE!!!
Lely: I should go find him
*It wasn’t long until he found him, but as much as he wanted to save him, the light spirit on the outside of him refused*
Nudge: HELP ME!!!
Lely: I want to, b-but I-I c-can’t
Nudge: OH YEAH, YOUR A USELESS LIGHT SPIRIT, AREN’T YOU!!!
Lely: I want to help you, but t he re is something preventing me
*At that moment, another T-Tex came and squished the Chain Chomp*
Nudge: Thank goodness. Now to just… escape from here
Lely: How?
Nudge: Why should I tell you? I don’t need you anymore, you useless fool
Lely: Why do you hate me?
Nudge: Because you are a horrible light spirit which doesn’t deserve to exist
Lely: Please, help me out
Nudge: I think I’ll just let the T-Rex’ deal with you
Lely: You h-horrible person

Max: So, who will check where?
Kay: I’m I’ll quickly check everywhere
Toady: Oh yeah, he is speed
Max: Anyway, I’ll get ready to head over to that giant dome over there
Toady: Got it

Nudge: Ah ha. Now I just need to put this nut into one of the seed pots, and a vine will grow
Lely: There is one over there
Nudge: Thank you victim
Lely:  L-leave me alone. I want to talk to nice Nudge, rather than you
*after that he just walked off, then climbed the vine he just grew*
Nudge: Nice. I’ve made it back.
Now I just need to be quiet so Luq doesn’t notice me

*He snuck over to the wooden maze, where he places a vine bellow it*
Lely: Question: what is that vine for?
Nudge: Oh, so you decided to follow me. Guess I’ll have to demonstrate in you
*He proceeded to wrap it around Lely’s neck, and pushed him off, before barely making his way back onto the inverted pyramid*
Lely: h-h-e-e-e-l-l-p

DON'T. TOUCH. MY. FRIEND. IF. SOMETHING. HAPPENS. TO. HIM. THERE. WILL. BE. CONSEQUENCES.

Welcome to Beheading, As we are joined by Max-Bros, we kill people. This is known as: Lely-Heading. :D How to do this:
1. Kill Lely
(THIS WAS A JOKE PLEASE DON'T BAN ME!!!)

I really came here just to see Ralsei encouraging people to KILL me, I can't believe how HORRIBLE my day is. My life is so meaningless.

This joke doesn't makes any sense and it's truly unfunny. It also kinda hurt my feelings so yeah. Kinda messed up.
I reported you in PM, to Ahmad,
because seriously you're still doing the same stupidities as before
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Messages 563 - Mario Mario
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United Arab Emirates
NeonSyrup wrote:
Max-Bros wrote:
MKPC Revival: Episode 4

Max:So we have arrived at the lake
Kay: Thought it would be bigger, but the size is still good
Toady: Be careful of the liquid, since it is lava, and can burn you
Kay: K. I’ll make sure to touch the water

Luq: What are you up to Nudge?
Nudge: This
*At that moment, The T-Rex flung Luq of of it, onto wooded kingdom, but then the lost grip of the inverted pyramid and fell*
THAT WASN’T SUPPOSED TO HAPPEN
Luq: Whatevwr he’s up to, seems to have gone wrong

Lely: *crying* I guess this is over. The only company I have is you guys, and you can’t even talk to me. The place I’m in is terrifying, and I just don’t think it’s worth living anymore. Goodbye pets
*CRASH*
Lely: What was that? Company?
*He went over, just to see what was there, only to see a T-Rex*
Lely: A-another one?
Nudge: AAAAHH!!!
Lely: Nudge? Where is he? And… where did my chain chomp go?
Nudge: AAAAAHH!!! LEAVE ME ALONE!!!
Lely: He sounds scared…
Nudge: SOMEONE HELP MEEEEEEEEE!!!
Lely: I should go find him
*It wasn’t long until he found him, but as much as he wanted to save him, the light spirit on the outside of him refused*
Nudge: HELP ME!!!
Lely: I want to, b-but I-I c-can’t
Nudge: OH YEAH, YOUR A USELESS LIGHT SPIRIT, AREN’T YOU!!!
Lely: I want to help you, but t he re is something preventing me
*At that moment, another T-Tex came and squished the Chain Chomp*
Nudge: Thank goodness. Now to just… escape from here
Lely: How?
Nudge: Why should I tell you? I don’t need you anymore, you useless fool
Lely: Why do you hate me?
Nudge: Because you are a horrible light spirit which doesn’t deserve to exist
Lely: Please, help me out
Nudge: I think I’ll just let the T-Rex’ deal with you
Lely: You h-horrible person

Max: So, who will check where?
Kay: I’m I’ll quickly check everywhere
Toady: Oh yeah, he is speed
Max: Anyway, I’ll get ready to head over to that giant dome over there
Toady: Got it

Nudge: Ah ha. Now I just need to put this nut into one of the seed pots, and a vine will grow
Lely: There is one over there
Nudge: Thank you victim
Lely:  L-leave me alone. I want to talk to nice Nudge, rather than you
*after that he just walked off, then climbed the vine he just grew*
Nudge: Nice. I’ve made it back.
Now I just need to be quiet so Luq doesn’t notice me

*He snuck over to the wooden maze, where he places a vine bellow it*
Lely: Question: what is that vine for?
Nudge: Oh, so you decided to follow me. Guess I’ll have to demonstrate in you
*He proceeded to wrap it around Lely’s neck, and pushed him off, before barely making his way back onto the inverted pyramid*
Lely: h-h-e-e-e-l-l-p

DON'T. TOUCH. MY. FRIEND. IF. SOMETHING. HAPPENS. TO. HIM. THERE. WILL. BE. CONSEQUENCES.

Welcome to Beheading, As we are joined by Max-Bros, we kill people. This is known as: Lely-Heading. :D How to do this:
1. Kill Lely
(THIS WAS A JOKE PLEASE DON'T BAN ME!!!)


This is not good. Don't joke about things like that. It can hurt people's feeling and encourage killing. You receive a warn but the next time you do this, you'll receive a sanction.
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Messages 2175 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
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Indian Ocean
NeonSyrup wrote:
Max-Bros wrote:
MKPC Revival: Episode 4

Max:So we have arrived at the lake
Kay: Thought it would be bigger, but the size is still good
Toady: Be careful of the liquid, since it is lava, and can burn you
Kay: K. I’ll make sure to touch the water

Luq: What are you up to Nudge?
Nudge: This
*At that moment, The T-Rex flung Luq of of it, onto wooded kingdom, but then the lost grip of the inverted pyramid and fell*
THAT WASN’T SUPPOSED TO HAPPEN
Luq: Whatevwr he’s up to, seems to have gone wrong

Lely: *crying* I guess this is over. The only company I have is you guys, and you can’t even talk to me. The place I’m in is terrifying, and I just don’t think it’s worth living anymore. Goodbye pets
*CRASH*
Lely: What was that? Company?
*He went over, just to see what was there, only to see a T-Rex*
Lely: A-another one?
Nudge: AAAAHH!!!
Lely: Nudge? Where is he? And… where did my chain chomp go?
Nudge: AAAAAHH!!! LEAVE ME ALONE!!!
Lely: He sounds scared…
Nudge: SOMEONE HELP MEEEEEEEEE!!!
Lely: I should go find him
*It wasn’t long until he found him, but as much as he wanted to save him, the light spirit on the outside of him refused*
Nudge: HELP ME!!!
Lely: I want to, b-but I-I c-can’t
Nudge: OH YEAH, YOUR A USELESS LIGHT SPIRIT, AREN’T YOU!!!
Lely: I want to help you, but t he re is something preventing me
*At that moment, another T-Tex came and squished the Chain Chomp*
Nudge: Thank goodness. Now to just… escape from here
Lely: How?
Nudge: Why should I tell you? I don’t need you anymore, you useless fool
Lely: Why do you hate me?
Nudge: Because you are a horrible light spirit which doesn’t deserve to exist
Lely: Please, help me out
Nudge: I think I’ll just let the T-Rex’ deal with you
Lely: You h-horrible person

Max: So, who will check where?
Kay: I’m I’ll quickly check everywhere
Toady: Oh yeah, he is speed
Max: Anyway, I’ll get ready to head over to that giant dome over there
Toady: Got it

Nudge: Ah ha. Now I just need to put this nut into one of the seed pots, and a vine will grow
Lely: There is one over there
Nudge: Thank you victim
Lely:  L-leave me alone. I want to talk to nice Nudge, rather than you
*after that he just walked off, then climbed the vine he just grew*
Nudge: Nice. I’ve made it back.
Now I just need to be quiet so Luq doesn’t notice me

*He snuck over to the wooden maze, where he places a vine bellow it*
Lely: Question: what is that vine for?
Nudge: Oh, so you decided to follow me. Guess I’ll have to demonstrate in you
*He proceeded to wrap it around Lely’s neck, and pushed him off, before barely making his way back onto the inverted pyramid*
Lely: h-h-e-e-e-l-l-p

DON'T. TOUCH. MY. FRIEND. IF. SOMETHING. HAPPENS. TO. HIM. THERE. WILL. BE. CONSEQUENCES.

Welcome to Beheading, As we are joined by Max-Bros, we kill people. This is known as: Lely-Heading. :D How to do this:
1. Kill Lely
(THIS WAS A JOKE PLEASE DON'T BAN ME!!!)


This is not good. Don't joke about things like that. It can hurt people's feeling and encourage killing. You receive a warn but the next time you do this, you'll receive a sanction.

Well I kinda realised that it was a bad joke. I didn't mean to hurt people feelings. apart from the fact people are so sensitive that even the smallest curse would make them cry
But I did delete the message.
:D
sorry for bad joke :s
Also, I feel like I have to say Lely hates me
I kinda feel that way.
It should be mentioned
anyways, REVIVAMOGUS
and I don't think Lely hates because of the joke.
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Messages 3135 - King Mario King Mario
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battle11947 pts ★ Champion
Barbados
What happened? I know I said war path, but that was a joke. How many deleted messages did I miss?
Messages 5400 - King Mario King Mario
vs47334 pts ★ Titan
battle6798 pts ★ Racer
United Kingdom
MKPC Revival: Episode 5

Max: Looks like we’ve reached the dome
Kay: K, but how do we get through?
Toady: Portals
*he threw the portals, and one somehow ended up in the other side*
Max: Nice. We can now enter
Kay: K
Toady: Oh look, I see Luq
Luq: Hello
Max: Hello. What happened while we were at the lake?
Luq: I got launched off the T-Rex, which fell, along with Nudge
Max: Do you have any idea where Nudge went?
Luq: Sadly not
Kay: Let’s go looking for him
Max: Agreed. We need to find him
*They started by going through the tunnel, then they went up the wall, but then they saw the horrifying sight of Lely being hung*
Max: L-l-ely!
Luq: He looks to be barely alive right now. We need to heal him as fast a possible
Max: B-but h-how?
Kay: There should be some purification machines back at your base. These will turn him back in his base form, AND heal them. The faster you set the process to be will decide how much pain he will feel during it, but other than that, he will be fine
Luq He looks to be in a critical state. He could die at any moment. We need someone that is fast
Toady: That’s an easy decision
Max: M-me
Kay: K. I would do it, but I don’t have enough strength to do it
Toady: By the way, please may you put a warp portal at every kingdom to our base, so we have easy travel to and from kingdoms. Here they are
Max: G-got it
Luq: Max, you don’t have to do this if you don’t want to
Max: B-but I d-do want t-to. I-I w-want to h-help Lely
Luq: If that’s what you want, then go ahead
Max: A-anyway, I’ll g-go now
*He rushed off, with Lely’s barely alive spirit, along with the portals*
Toady: What should we do?
Luq: Go after Nudge, who seems to be up there
*He pointed at the inverted pyramid in the distance*
Kay: K. Let’s get going
*they climbed all the way to the top of the kingdom, but saw no way of reaching them*
Luq: What now?
Toady: Idk. Maybe there is a random UFO in that room
Luq: Maybe you should stop messing around and- oh you’ve already ran off…
Kay: Does he seriously think that there is a UFO? He thinks my ‘K’ thing is stupid, but this is a whole other level
Toady: Great news I found a UFO
Kay: K… (nevermind what I just said)
Luq: Honestly I should just expect anything to be real at this point…

Max: I-I’ve made it. N-now to find a m-machine… t-they seem to be a-specialised for each p-person. T-time to find L-Lely’s one
*After he found it, he attached Lely, went to the control lever*
Max: I-I’m sorry I h-have to go t-this strong
*He set it to 50% and in 1 minute, Lely was back to his original, human state*
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Messages 5400 - King Mario King Mario
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United Kingdom
I've decided i'm going to end this fanfic, because it's been less and less fun to make the episodes. This fanfic might be uped if i feel lke it, but other than that, it's over. I might make a new fanfic, i might not. I have an idea for one, but whether i make it is up for motivation to decide
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Messages 11441 - King Mario King Mario
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France
I've decided i'm going to end this fanfic, because it's been less and less fun to make the episodes. This fanfic might be uped if i feel lke it, but other than that, it's over. I might make a new fanfic, i might not. I have an idea for one, but whether i make it is up for motivation to decide

Do you want me to help you about this fanfic ? I don't want it to stop
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Messages 5400 - King Mario King Mario
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United Kingdom
CG_Invu wrote:
I've decided i'm going to end this fanfic, because it's been less and less fun to make the episodes. This fanfic might be uped if i feel lke it, but other than that, it's over. I might make a new fanfic, i might not. I have an idea for one, but whether i make it is up for motivation to decide

Do you want me to help you about this fanfic ? I don't want it to stop

Sure. I'll tell you some of my plans for later episodes in PMs, and i'll le you change them a bit
Messages 5400 - King Mario King Mario
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United Kingdom
MKPC Revival: Episode 6

Max: LELY!!!
Lely: M-max?
Max: Yes, it’s me. It is so good to see you again
Lely: Y-you too. W-Would it be ok if I get some rest?
Max: Of course. I’ll wait outside for you
Lely: T-thanks. We can have a proper reunion later
Max: Ok

Kraze: Is there a way we can speed with thing up?
Toady: I wish there was, since I would like to speed at them so fast that we crash
Luq: I don’t think wanting to crash is a good thing…
Kraze: K. Anyway, it seems like there is an arena in the clouds
Luq: And Nudge seems to be on it
Toady: And he seems to be fighting someone else
Kraze: Wait, I think that is someone from my killing game
*Before he could get a closer look, Nudge finished him off, making him vanish*
Kraze: Oh come on. Of course someone I’m on a mission to find immediately dies the moment I find them
*Meanwhile, on the top of the inverted pyramid*
Kris: Why have we stopped?
Master: Because that arena is in the way
Kris: Also, what do you want from me in the first place?
Master: Well, I kind of need you and your people for my chocolate lake
Kris: Is that, seriously it…
*Back to the arena*
Nudge: Oh would you look at that, they have arrived to try and stop me
Kraze: What do you mean by try?
Nudge: So you think you can beat me?
Luq: We don’t think, we will
*At this point, the battle began. Nudge went for the first attack, and struck Toady in the neck with his claws. Luq quickly returned with a powerful fist attack, which was followed up by Kraze charging into Nudge at max speed, which was enough to knock him out*
Kraze: That was an easy fight…
Luq: But it would appear Toady got a cut in the neck
Toady: AAAAAAAHH!!! I’M GONNA DIE!!!
*At this moment, the inverted pyramid crashed through the arena, and it started to crack*
Toady: AAAAAAAHH!!! I’M GONNA THROW A PORTAL AND HOPE MAX USES ONE!!!
*As he used it, Max and Lely came out from the other side, collected Nudge, then left*
Toady: THEY JUST IGNORED US!?!?!?
*At this moment, the portal fell through a crack, but as Kraze tried jumping through, the crack caught his shoes and he feel down, losing his super speed. Luq raj and picked up toady, before the two of them also fell through a crack*

Max: Time to put nudge into the healer
Lely: It looks like he is going to get shocked…
Max: Pain is required for the person going through the process
Lely: But… I don’t want to hurt him
Max: Don’t worry, we can set it to low charge, all that means is that it will take longer, and he isn’t in a dire situation like you were, so I guess we can do that
Lely: Sounds good, since it won’t hurt him
*They proceeded to put him in, then waited*
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Messages 11441 - King Mario King Mario
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France
MKPC Revival: Episode 6

Max: LELY!!!
Lely: M-max?
Max: Yes, it’s me. It is so good to see you again
Lely: Y-you too. W-Would it be ok if I get some rest?
Max: Of course. I’ll wait outside for you
Lely: T-thanks. We can have a proper reunion later
Max: Ok

Kraze: Is there a way we can speed with thing up?
Toady: I wish there was, since I would like to speed at them so fast that we crash
Luq: I don’t think wanting to crash is a good thing…
Kraze: K. Anyway, it seems like there is an arena in the clouds
Luq: And Nudge seems to be on it
Toady: And he seems to be fighting someone else
Kraze: Wait, I think that is someone from my killing game
*Before he could get a closer look, Nudge finished him off, making him vanish*
Kraze: Oh come on. Of course someone I’m on a mission to find immediately dies the moment I find them
*Meanwhile, on the top of the inverted pyramid*
Kris: Why have we stopped?
Master: Because that arena is in the way
Kris: Also, what do you want from me in the first place?
Master: Well, I kind of need you and your people for my chocolate lake
Kris: Is that, seriously it…
*Back to the arena*
Nudge: Oh would you look at that, they have arrived to try and stop me
Kraze: What do you mean by try?
Nudge: So you think you can beat me?
Luq: We don’t think, we will
*At this point, the battle began. Nudge went for the first attack, and struck Toady in the neck with his claws. Luq quickly returned with a powerful fist attack, which was followed up by Kraze charging into Nudge at max speed, which was enough to knock him out*
Kraze: That was an easy fight…
Luq: But it would appear Toady got a cut in the neck
Toady: AAAAAAAHH!!! I’M GONNA DIE!!!
*At this moment, the inverted pyramid crashed through the arena, and it started to crack*
Toady: AAAAAAAHH!!! I’M GONNA THROW A PORTAL AND HOPE MAX USES ONE!!!
*As he used it, Max and Lely came out from the other side, collected Nudge, then left*
Toady: THEY JUST IGNORED US!?!?!?
*At this moment, the portal fell through a crack, but as Kraze tried jumping through, the crack caught his shoes and he feel down, losing his super speed. Luq raj and picked up toady, before the two of them also fell through a crack*

Max: Time to put nudge into the healer
Lely: It looks like he is going to get shocked…
Max: Pain is required for the person going through the process
Lely: But… I don’t want to hurt him
Max: Don’t worry, we can set it to low charge, all that means is that it will take longer, and he isn’t in a dire situation like you were, so I guess we can do that
Lely: Sounds good, since it won’t hurt him
*They proceeded to put him in, then waited*

I LOVE how you "revived" the topic the day where we were talking about Ralsei. It's a really fun fact. Other than that, the episode is very great, and yes Toady I'm ignoring you because YOU PRANKED ME TOO MUCH BEFORE
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Messages 5400 - King Mario King Mario
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MKPC Revival: Episode 7

Max: So, what shall we do while waiting for Nudge?
Lely: I guess we can have a nice chat with each-other
Max: I’m down for that

*Kraze, Luq, and Toady all fell onto lost kingdom*
Kraze: Ouch… where are my speed shoes???
Luq: They got stuck by the cracks
*At that moment, the shoes fell down, into the poison*
Kraze: K… Wait I’m powerless!!!
Toady: HELP ME I’M DYING AND AM BEIMG ATTACKED BY THIS WEIRD CREATURE
*The creature hit him, launching him onto one of the small side islands*
Luq: What should we do now?
Kraze:idK but should we be questioning the fact that the poison is rising?
Toady: THAT DOESNT CHANGE THE FACT THAT IM ABOUT TO DIE IN MILTIPLE DIFFERENT WAYS
*Luq proceeded to jump down, and threw Toady to the top of the kingdom, but didn’t have enough time to make it back, becoming victim of the poison*
Kraze: Luq! Well, I’d better catch up to Toady, to avoid getting in the way of success

Max: Nudge should be finished by now
Lely: I can’t wait to hug Nudge back in his normal form
*They went in, but saw that he was missing*
Lely: W-where did Nudge go?
Max: I have no idea. Let’s looks around
Lely: I’ll check cascade, sand, and cloud… Wait, why is there poison coming out of the portal?
*As he said that, he took a step backwards and tripped off the banister*
Max: LELY!!!
*He jumped down and grabbed Lely just in time*
Lely: Thanks Max
Max: No problem
Lely: Btw, is Nudge going to be safe?
Max: While I can’t say for certainty, I’m sure he is

Kraze: Hello Toady
Toady: How did you made it up the mountain?
Kraze: I climbed up. Anyway, I think we should use thing glidon here to reach a new area
*As they got on it, they started flying to the next kingdom, but as they approached the city, a huge swarm of bees approached them. Kraze started by throwing Toady to the city, to gain easier control*
Toady: WHY IS EVERYONE TRYING TO KILL ME?!?!?!
Kraze: We aren’t… Anyway, please may you throw a teleporter down here so that I can make it onto the city?
Toady: I’LL TRY SINCE ONE JUST FELL PUT OF MY POCKET ANYWAY
*He threw one down in completely the wrong direction, but Kraze managed to jump into it anyway*
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Messages 1 - Goomba Goomba
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United States
Dear Nudge,
 Hello there! I was one of the readers of your fanfic and I must say I enjoyed it very much. I read the first part with a few friends on call and we had the time of our lives. So I must say, would you kindly consider adding more to the fanfic so we can begin reading the second part? I would want nothing more than to read it with my friends and have the time of my life.
               -best wishes,
                Your biggest fan
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Messages 1 - Goomba Goomba
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battle5000 pts ★ Novice
United States
please contuinue this fanficdtion my father introduced this story to me when iwas a child and read it to me and my sister before going to bed but now he's gone and he left and rereading this is the only thing that keeps me going pleaescoucousnif:}
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battle6798 pts ★ Racer
United Kingdom
Dear Nudge,
 Hello there! I was one of the readers of your fanfic and I must say I enjoyed it very much. I read the first part with a few friends on call and we had the time of our lives. So I must say, would you kindly consider adding more to the fanfic so we can begin reading the second part? I would want nothing more than to read it with my friends and have the time of my life.
               -best wishes,
                Your biggest fan

1.) Inappropriate Username
2.) This fanfic is boring to write and read
3.) I don’t have any ideas for the future episodes
4.) This is an old topic
5.) I have moved on to a different fanfic anyway
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