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14712 pts ★ Champion
7089 pts ★ RacerOn 2023-09-01 at 09:11:40
WHERE AM I IN THE STORY HUH?
Oh, you? You're in hell because you died
WHEN DID I DIE
You screamed so loud that your voice box broke and killed you
says who? says where?
3On 2023-09-01 at 04:57:12
WHERE AM I IN THE STORY HUH?
Oh, you? You're in hell because you died
That was uncalled for. 💀
On 2023-08-31 at 06:29:31
Also i love how you gave me the font, Lely! /gen
On 2023-08-31 at 06:28:56
I don't exist
You do! You just haven't had a line yet!
On 2023-08-30 at 12:13:17
VC
Colour : Navy Blue
Font : Times New Roman (i know you're not gonna apply unique fonts for each guy but still :P)
Personality:
-Finds inspiration in the weirdest places
-likes peace and quiet
-avid artist (will draw in her sketchbook when idle)
-Can somehow recall any Pokémon's name
-Friendly, but still prefers to be left to her own devices
-hates being bothered
-OCD
-Is quiet, and dislikes bothering others
-Is trying to get a break from all the dark stuff that happened in the previous season
Colour : Navy Blue
Font : Times New Roman (i know you're not gonna apply unique fonts for each guy but still :P)
Personality:
-Finds inspiration in the weirdest places
-likes peace and quiet
-avid artist (will draw in her sketchbook when idle)
-Can somehow recall any Pokémon's name
-Friendly, but still prefers to be left to her own devices
-hates being bothered
-OCD
-Is quiet, and dislikes bothering others
-Is trying to get a break from all the dark stuff that happened in the previous season
1
1i did it
On 2023-08-29 at 05:58:49
i finally got gold on all cups hehe
this topic is extremely useless and i know the existence of SFA but it was a pain
the toughest one for me was flower cup of all cups
this topic is extremely useless and i know the existence of SFA but it was a pain
the toughest one for me was flower cup of all cups
wowza
I had a lot of trouble with the last DS cup purely because of rainbow road
the best i could get was a silver ; _ ;
My views on some holidays...
On 2023-11-09 at 11:39:03
New Year's: Very Flashy. Very New. Very Year's. Wow. 3/5.
Valentine's Day: I'm not even rating this. This doesn't even deserve to be a day.
St. Patrick's: Lotsa green stuff. Green was historically my favourite colour before I wisened up and realised blue was somewhat just better. Overall I don't see enough love for the holiday that celebrates one man driving thepagans snakes off of the green isles. 4/5
April Fools: I agree on this one. Seems fun on paper but it generally gets less and less fun the older you get. That and the non-zero amount of people who go too far and actually scare people or get their hopes up. AND the fact that everyone gets so needlessly suspicious around this time meaning you can't make an unironic announcement unless you want to get chased off the face of the earth. 2/5.
Easter: Nice rabbit. The easter hunts are much appreciated. The candy's good too. Basically a tropical christmas. 5/5
May Day: Why is May a month, name, and day? 2/5
Pride Month: I agree with everyone here on this. It's honestly just better imo if each of the parts of the LGBTQ+ had their own days (e.g. Celebrate Bisexuality Day on Sept 23rd, Transgender Day of Rememberance on Nov 20th, etc.) Pride month itself is still kinda there though, so 2/5.
Arbour Day: Doesn't seem to work. I don't even know what day it's truly on. What is the true arbour day? 1/5 until further notice. Needs an ocean counterpart.
US Independence Day: The US does not need to go THIS hard over just existing but I'm glad they do. 3/5. docking one point because it's terrible to dogs.
Halloween: THE SPOOKIEST TIMES OF THE YEAR ARE THE BEST TIMES OF THE YEAR AND I WILL FIGHT YOU ABOUT THIS 13/5
Bonfire Night: The day where we all celebrate and immortalise one fool man's mistake one long lost time ago. 3/5
Remembrance Day: yeah i appreciate the whole "war is bad" thing but 2/5
Black Friday: no. 0/1.
Christmas: Still overcommercialised but I do recognise that it has some good in it. Then again, it does still have a whole genre of substandard movies that are all the same. (The Nightmare Before Christmas is singlehandedly the best christmas movie on account of being a halloween movie). 4/5
Valentine's Day: I'm not even rating this. This doesn't even deserve to be a day.
St. Patrick's: Lotsa green stuff. Green was historically my favourite colour before I wisened up and realised blue was somewhat just better. Overall I don't see enough love for the holiday that celebrates one man driving the
April Fools: I agree on this one. Seems fun on paper but it generally gets less and less fun the older you get. That and the non-zero amount of people who go too far and actually scare people or get their hopes up. AND the fact that everyone gets so needlessly suspicious around this time meaning you can't make an unironic announcement unless you want to get chased off the face of the earth. 2/5.
Easter: Nice rabbit. The easter hunts are much appreciated. The candy's good too. Basically a tropical christmas. 5/5
May Day: Why is May a month, name, and day? 2/5
Pride Month: I agree with everyone here on this. It's honestly just better imo if each of the parts of the LGBTQ+ had their own days (e.g. Celebrate Bisexuality Day on Sept 23rd, Transgender Day of Rememberance on Nov 20th, etc.) Pride month itself is still kinda there though, so 2/5.
Arbour Day: Doesn't seem to work. I don't even know what day it's truly on. What is the true arbour day? 1/5 until further notice. Needs an ocean counterpart.
US Independence Day: The US does not need to go THIS hard over just existing but I'm glad they do. 3/5. docking one point because it's terrible to dogs.
Halloween: THE SPOOKIEST TIMES OF THE YEAR ARE THE BEST TIMES OF THE YEAR AND I WILL FIGHT YOU ABOUT THIS 13/5
Bonfire Night: The day where we all celebrate and immortalise one fool man's mistake one long lost time ago. 3/5
Remembrance Day: yeah i appreciate the whole "war is bad" thing but 2/5
Black Friday: no. 0/1.
Christmas: Still overcommercialised but I do recognise that it has some good in it. Then again, it does still have a whole genre of substandard movies that are all the same. (The Nightmare Before Christmas is singlehandedly the best christmas movie on account of being a halloween movie). 4/5
2FANFIC - MKPC ARCHIPEL
On 2022-09-27 at 10:39:46
Chapter 4 : Ralsei's revenge
Last time on MKPC Archipel... The heroes were trapped in a burning pipe by Ralsei, while they were sleeping.
Lely : Nudge, don't cry. I don't want you to cry. It's gonna be okay.
Nudge : 😭😭😭
Max : I have already seen times where it got canceled, but I didn't see any show with Lely, which was going wrong like this
Yascamer : ces une catastrophe
Ralsei : Be ready to fight... HAHAHAHAHAHA !
Nudge : Oh yes, we're getting out of this shitty pipe. We're fighting. I like it. Lely, stop hugging me and set me free.
Lely : Nudge, you're risking too much, due to your size. I'm 101% sure it's better for you to be in my arms
Nudge : But you're gonna fall
Lely : I don't want you to die, this is too dangerous for you and all of us know it
Nudge : Lely. Please.
Lely : *sighs* okay. Promise me to be careful, okay ?
Nudge : I'm stronger than you
Max : But
in this environment, you're risking more. However, this place is strange, I can feel something growing in my back
Yascamer : max ton dos y a des aile
Max : N'importe qu... QUOI ?
Lely : Some of the archipel's secret areas are really strange...
Max : definitively... Oh Lely. Your back as well, Nudge's one as well... everyone is getting wings
Lely : That is a great thing, the fight will be easier
Nudge : Exact
VC : Anyways, let's start. This volcano is burning hot and I want to get out.
Ralsei launched them out. He was in a flying Koopa machine, ready to launch his missiles.
Lely : You're doing that for a ban. Terrifying.
Nudge : Anyways, I will try to get on his flying car. I think it's possible, considering I'm now a bird bunny
Max : Be careful.
Ralsei : I've had enough! You guys were always pissing me off ! Max was telling me off, Nudge argued and Lely reported me ! Hellish trio ! But today, I'm going to flip the tables. It's me who will piss yall off. Well I'll even have a chance to end you ! That's a clever pleasure I deserved !
Lely : We're you supposed to look savage and cool ? You're kinda lacking abs and rejoinder
Ralsei : Shut up about the abs. You're fat.
Lely : Not much and anyways it's stupid. It won't make you smarter than me. I have to tell you I prefer being smart over being sportive
Ralsei : ENOUGH ! IM LAUCHING A MISSILE ON YOUR "BESTIE" !
Lely : NOOOOOO !!!!!!
Lely flied across the volcano to save Max and he took the missiles instead, causing his wings to burn and his head to get ached. He was about to fall in the volcano, but VC saved him.
Lely : si owe you one...
But VC accidentally let him fall. His weak body fel into the lava like the rocks thrower by kids fall in water. Some smoke exited that crual, terrifying ocean of lava, being in the shape of Lely.
Max : NOOOOOOOOOOOOO !!!!!
Nudge : Oh well 😕
VC : I'm so sorry 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Nudge : 🙁🙁🙁
Max : 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Nudge : ☹🥺😥😢😭😭
Yascamer : What happened guys/girls
Max : Are you blind ? LELY DIED 😑
Yascamer : ces triste mais bon on passe a autre chose
Nudge : Yascamer, you're not making sense. A human died and you want to move on...
Yascamer : bah en meme temps ça va ces t que lely
VC : BUT THATS STILL A HUMAN ! I
SWEAR !
Max : RALSEEIIIII !!!! THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT !!!! 🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬
Ralsei : OH MY GAWSH DANG LOOK AT THIS BUNCH OF CRYBABIES GO CRY IN A TRASH NOBODY CARES ABOUT LELY HE IS AN ASSHOLE NOW LET ME KILL YOU AND STOP THE WHINING BECAUSE YOU LOOK LIKE DYING BITCHES
Max : I SWEAR WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU SAYING ! YOU WANTED TO KILL ME ! AND YOU KILLED MY BESTIE ! YOU TRAPPED US BECAUSE WE REPORTED YOU ON A WEBSITE ! BOOH HOOH HOOH !
Nudge : RALSEI I SWEAR HOW CAN YOU BE THIS OBNOXIOUS ! YOU KILLED SOMEONE WHO DESERVES TO LIVE AND YOU DONT HAVE ANY REGRETS ! YOUR MINDSET IS TERRIBLE ! WHAT IS THAT ! I LIKE FICTIONAL DEATHS BUT REAL DEATHS ARENT GOOD AT ALL !!!!
VC : YES I ACCIDENTALLY LET LELY FALL AND I WILL FEEL FOREVER GUILTY ABOUT THAT, BUT IF WE'RE INTO THIS CRAPPY PLACE, ITS BECAUSE YOU TRAPPED US ! YOURE THE PROBLEM IN THAT CASE !
Yascamer : Ah
d accord j ai compris
RALSEI TU VAS VOIR RAAAH
Max : I DONT WANT TO KILL YOU ! BUT I ALMOST DO ! AND I SWEAR ! YOURE GONNA PAY A PRICE ! I DONT KNOW WHAT WILL THE PRICE BE, BUT YOU WONT GET OUT OF THIS WITHOUT ANY PROBLEMS ! TRUST ME, IM DOING WHAT IM SAYING !
Nudge : ENOUGH OF THE PUNCHLINE FIGHT ! COME HERE RALSEI ! WE WILL FIX THIS WITH CLAWS, PAWS, HANDS, FISTS, TEETH AND NAILS !
Ralsei : Let's go ! Anyways I don't care, I'LL WIN ! YOU'RE JUST GONNA DIE LIKE LELY DID !
Nudge : I DON'T CARE !!! *jumps straight to Ralsei*
Nudge reached Ralsei's flying ship. Ralsei was protected from any damage, but Bunny was smart enough to sneak in. After only 5 minutes he found Ralsei. Ralsei pushed him in another room of the ship, and made the ship shake. That caused Bunny's head to be hurt many times. Ralsei went in every direction. Happily, Max slapped the fragile glass with his Snorlax hands. Ralsei almost fell in lava and screamed a lot. Though, he managed to jump off from the plane. Nudge was unlocking him out but the ship sunk in lava and Bunny burnt like Lely did, with smoke getting out.
Max : NOOOO !!!! *cries* RALSEI YOU ARE DONE. NOW YOUR SHIP SUNK, WE WILL TRULY FIGHT IN EQUAL POSITIONS. I DONT CARE ABOUT DYING. TONIGHT WILL BE DEPRESSING ANYWAYS SINCE YOU KILLED NUDGE AND LELY, MY TWO BEST FRIENDS. VC AND YASCAMER ARE EVEN UNABLE TO FIGHT BECAUSE THE HOTNESS OF THIS AREA IS CAUSING THEM HEADACHES. SO NOW IT'S 1V1. THE TWO OF US. NO MORE SHIP. NO MORE FRIENDS. I WANT TO TAKE MY REVENGE
ON YOU, SO TONIGHT I CAN GIVE MYSELF DEATH, BUT WHILE BEING HAPPY ! IF I EVER GIVE MYSELF DEATH WITHOUT WINNING OVER YOU, THEN YOU'LL CONTINUE TO BE PROUD OF YOURSELF, OF YOUR HORRIBLE ACTIONS. I SWEAR I WILL MAKE YOU UNDERSTAND.
Ralsei : IM READY IM READY ! IM ONLY WAITING FOR THAT YOU IDIOT !
An intense fight started between Max and Ralsei started. Max hitted Ralsei strongly many times, and it didn't left Ralsei safe. Though, he had healing potions in his pockets, which rubbed out the pain from him. Max was hitting Ralsei passionately, without ever thinking it would stop someday. He was taking the revenge he deserved. Though he was going hard on Ralsei. Ralsei couldn't help it, but only tried to defend himself from Max. Max noticed Ralsei's potions and threw them in the volcano. The color of the lava turned green, and the weather was now pretty cool. It gave some chills to the fighters.
What Max did would actually help the next chapter of this story a lot. Though the fight continued, continued, and Ralsei was more and more exhausted. Though, he ripped Max's wings off, and Max fell down from where he was. He started to scream alot, and Yascamer, plus VC, screamed as well. It sounded done for them. Ralsei had won.
Though Ralsei fell off as well. Max could touch him and he pushed him under himself. (Max pushed Ralsei under himself) it caused Ralsei to be a boat for Max, and Max was able to reach a shore before Ralsei sunk under Max's snorlax weight. As soon as he reached it, he fainted for 5 minutes. When he woke up, he was sweating and he was still on the same shoreline. All the lava was drained though. Max had a headache and several injuries, but he was able to walk. He went to VC and Yascamer, who went pretty well since then. The trio was very sad of how it turned out. They found Lely, Nudge and Ralsei laying on the ground. They took the three bodies, and Max called the hospital and the firemen. Both helped them to get out of the volcano. It was now 11PM and Piantas were partying. The Archipelago looked so nice but without their friends, it felt weird and sad. So Max, VC and Yascamer carried the dead bodies into the cold water. While the sky was rosé from the last remains of the sunset, they bathed the bodies in cold water, then they dried them. They brought them back at the huts and put them on the beds.
Max : Guys, let's take a snack. It will comfort us a bit.
VC : Agreed...
Max cried, thinking to Lely and Nudge, and to all the people who left. They just wanted to have fun and spend some time together, they ended up seeing some of them dead, some of them leaving, some of them fainting...
What was that?
They would hope for better days in the future. They would like Lely and Nudge to wake up. But life doesn't works like that. Sadly, you have sometimes to face the worst shits you haven't deserved.
Max : 😭😭😭
🎶But tonight I'll be the happiest girl in the world,
You'll see it, like it doesn't matters
Tonight, I'll be the happiest girl in the world
You'll see it, like it never happened🎶
Lely : Ouch... what just happened...
Nudge : Do you think I know ?
-----------------------------------------------------------
Please share your thoughts
❤🧡💛💚💙💜💖
Last time on MKPC Archipel... The heroes were trapped in a burning pipe by Ralsei, while they were sleeping.
Lely : Nudge, don't cry. I don't want you to cry. It's gonna be okay.
Nudge : 😭😭😭
Max : I have already seen times where it got canceled, but I didn't see any show with Lely, which was going wrong like this
Yascamer : ces une catastrophe
Ralsei : Be ready to fight... HAHAHAHAHAHA !
Nudge : Oh yes, we're getting out of this shitty pipe. We're fighting. I like it. Lely, stop hugging me and set me free.
Lely : Nudge, you're risking too much, due to your size. I'm 101% sure it's better for you to be in my arms
Nudge : But you're gonna fall
Lely : I don't want you to die, this is too dangerous for you and all of us know it
Nudge : Lely. Please.
Lely : *sighs* okay. Promise me to be careful, okay ?
Nudge : I'm stronger than you
Max : But
in this environment, you're risking more. However, this place is strange, I can feel something growing in my back
Yascamer : max ton dos y a des aile
Max : N'importe qu... QUOI ?
Lely : Some of the archipel's secret areas are really strange...
Max : definitively... Oh Lely. Your back as well, Nudge's one as well... everyone is getting wings
Lely : That is a great thing, the fight will be easier
Nudge : Exact
VC : Anyways, let's start. This volcano is burning hot and I want to get out.
Ralsei launched them out. He was in a flying Koopa machine, ready to launch his missiles.
Lely : You're doing that for a ban. Terrifying.
Nudge : Anyways, I will try to get on his flying car. I think it's possible, considering I'm now a bird bunny
Max : Be careful.
Ralsei : I've had enough! You guys were always pissing me off ! Max was telling me off, Nudge argued and Lely reported me ! Hellish trio ! But today, I'm going to flip the tables. It's me who will piss yall off. Well I'll even have a chance to end you ! That's a clever pleasure I deserved !
Lely : We're you supposed to look savage and cool ? You're kinda lacking abs and rejoinder
Ralsei : Shut up about the abs. You're fat.
Lely : Not much and anyways it's stupid. It won't make you smarter than me. I have to tell you I prefer being smart over being sportive
Ralsei : ENOUGH ! IM LAUCHING A MISSILE ON YOUR "BESTIE" !
Lely : NOOOOOO !!!!!!
Lely flied across the volcano to save Max and he took the missiles instead, causing his wings to burn and his head to get ached. He was about to fall in the volcano, but VC saved him.
Lely : si owe you one...
But VC accidentally let him fall. His weak body fel into the lava like the rocks thrower by kids fall in water. Some smoke exited that crual, terrifying ocean of lava, being in the shape of Lely.
Max : NOOOOOOOOOOOOO !!!!!
Nudge : Oh well 😕
VC : I'm so sorry 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Nudge : 🙁🙁🙁
Max : 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Nudge : ☹🥺😥😢😭😭
Yascamer : What happened guys/girls
Max : Are you blind ? LELY DIED 😑
Yascamer : ces triste mais bon on passe a autre chose
Nudge : Yascamer, you're not making sense. A human died and you want to move on...
Yascamer : bah en meme temps ça va ces t que lely
VC : BUT THATS STILL A HUMAN ! I
SWEAR !
Max : RALSEEIIIII !!!! THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT !!!! 🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬
Ralsei : OH MY GAWSH DANG LOOK AT THIS BUNCH OF CRYBABIES GO CRY IN A TRASH NOBODY CARES ABOUT LELY HE IS AN ASSHOLE NOW LET ME KILL YOU AND STOP THE WHINING BECAUSE YOU LOOK LIKE DYING BITCHES
Max : I SWEAR WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU SAYING ! YOU WANTED TO KILL ME ! AND YOU KILLED MY BESTIE ! YOU TRAPPED US BECAUSE WE REPORTED YOU ON A WEBSITE ! BOOH HOOH HOOH !
Nudge : RALSEI I SWEAR HOW CAN YOU BE THIS OBNOXIOUS ! YOU KILLED SOMEONE WHO DESERVES TO LIVE AND YOU DONT HAVE ANY REGRETS ! YOUR MINDSET IS TERRIBLE ! WHAT IS THAT ! I LIKE FICTIONAL DEATHS BUT REAL DEATHS ARENT GOOD AT ALL !!!!
VC : YES I ACCIDENTALLY LET LELY FALL AND I WILL FEEL FOREVER GUILTY ABOUT THAT, BUT IF WE'RE INTO THIS CRAPPY PLACE, ITS BECAUSE YOU TRAPPED US ! YOURE THE PROBLEM IN THAT CASE !
Yascamer : Ah
d accord j ai compris
RALSEI TU VAS VOIR RAAAH
Max : I DONT WANT TO KILL YOU ! BUT I ALMOST DO ! AND I SWEAR ! YOURE GONNA PAY A PRICE ! I DONT KNOW WHAT WILL THE PRICE BE, BUT YOU WONT GET OUT OF THIS WITHOUT ANY PROBLEMS ! TRUST ME, IM DOING WHAT IM SAYING !
Nudge : ENOUGH OF THE PUNCHLINE FIGHT ! COME HERE RALSEI ! WE WILL FIX THIS WITH CLAWS, PAWS, HANDS, FISTS, TEETH AND NAILS !
Ralsei : Let's go ! Anyways I don't care, I'LL WIN ! YOU'RE JUST GONNA DIE LIKE LELY DID !
Nudge : I DON'T CARE !!! *jumps straight to Ralsei*
Nudge reached Ralsei's flying ship. Ralsei was protected from any damage, but Bunny was smart enough to sneak in. After only 5 minutes he found Ralsei. Ralsei pushed him in another room of the ship, and made the ship shake. That caused Bunny's head to be hurt many times. Ralsei went in every direction. Happily, Max slapped the fragile glass with his Snorlax hands. Ralsei almost fell in lava and screamed a lot. Though, he managed to jump off from the plane. Nudge was unlocking him out but the ship sunk in lava and Bunny burnt like Lely did, with smoke getting out.
Max : NOOOO !!!! *cries* RALSEI YOU ARE DONE. NOW YOUR SHIP SUNK, WE WILL TRULY FIGHT IN EQUAL POSITIONS. I DONT CARE ABOUT DYING. TONIGHT WILL BE DEPRESSING ANYWAYS SINCE YOU KILLED NUDGE AND LELY, MY TWO BEST FRIENDS. VC AND YASCAMER ARE EVEN UNABLE TO FIGHT BECAUSE THE HOTNESS OF THIS AREA IS CAUSING THEM HEADACHES. SO NOW IT'S 1V1. THE TWO OF US. NO MORE SHIP. NO MORE FRIENDS. I WANT TO TAKE MY REVENGE
ON YOU, SO TONIGHT I CAN GIVE MYSELF DEATH, BUT WHILE BEING HAPPY ! IF I EVER GIVE MYSELF DEATH WITHOUT WINNING OVER YOU, THEN YOU'LL CONTINUE TO BE PROUD OF YOURSELF, OF YOUR HORRIBLE ACTIONS. I SWEAR I WILL MAKE YOU UNDERSTAND.
Ralsei : IM READY IM READY ! IM ONLY WAITING FOR THAT YOU IDIOT !
An intense fight started between Max and Ralsei started. Max hitted Ralsei strongly many times, and it didn't left Ralsei safe. Though, he had healing potions in his pockets, which rubbed out the pain from him. Max was hitting Ralsei passionately, without ever thinking it would stop someday. He was taking the revenge he deserved. Though he was going hard on Ralsei. Ralsei couldn't help it, but only tried to defend himself from Max. Max noticed Ralsei's potions and threw them in the volcano. The color of the lava turned green, and the weather was now pretty cool. It gave some chills to the fighters.
What Max did would actually help the next chapter of this story a lot. Though the fight continued, continued, and Ralsei was more and more exhausted. Though, he ripped Max's wings off, and Max fell down from where he was. He started to scream alot, and Yascamer, plus VC, screamed as well. It sounded done for them. Ralsei had won.
Though Ralsei fell off as well. Max could touch him and he pushed him under himself. (Max pushed Ralsei under himself) it caused Ralsei to be a boat for Max, and Max was able to reach a shore before Ralsei sunk under Max's snorlax weight. As soon as he reached it, he fainted for 5 minutes. When he woke up, he was sweating and he was still on the same shoreline. All the lava was drained though. Max had a headache and several injuries, but he was able to walk. He went to VC and Yascamer, who went pretty well since then. The trio was very sad of how it turned out. They found Lely, Nudge and Ralsei laying on the ground. They took the three bodies, and Max called the hospital and the firemen. Both helped them to get out of the volcano. It was now 11PM and Piantas were partying. The Archipelago looked so nice but without their friends, it felt weird and sad. So Max, VC and Yascamer carried the dead bodies into the cold water. While the sky was rosé from the last remains of the sunset, they bathed the bodies in cold water, then they dried them. They brought them back at the huts and put them on the beds.
Max : Guys, let's take a snack. It will comfort us a bit.
VC : Agreed...
Max cried, thinking to Lely and Nudge, and to all the people who left. They just wanted to have fun and spend some time together, they ended up seeing some of them dead, some of them leaving, some of them fainting...
What was that?
They would hope for better days in the future. They would like Lely and Nudge to wake up. But life doesn't works like that. Sadly, you have sometimes to face the worst shits you haven't deserved.
Max : 😭😭😭
🎶But tonight I'll be the happiest girl in the world,
You'll see it, like it doesn't matters
Tonight, I'll be the happiest girl in the world
You'll see it, like it never happened🎶
Lely : Ouch... what just happened...
Nudge : Do you think I know ?
-----------------------------------------------------------
Please share your thoughts
❤🧡💛💚💙💜💖
please tell me this isn't the end. please.
Not at all. MKPC Archipel is gonna be a long as ride. I think it's gonna last at least 20 episodes, it's my goal, and it could last... I don't know, but that's not the end.
There's even a hint about it
also: sidenote: what's the song at the end of this episode?
On 2022-09-27 at 05:37:02
Chapter 4 : Ralsei's revenge
Last time on MKPC Archipel... The heroes were trapped in a burning pipe by Ralsei, while they were sleeping.
Lely : Nudge, don't cry. I don't want you to cry. It's gonna be okay.
Nudge : 😭😭😭
Max : I have already seen times where it got canceled, but I didn't see any show with Lely, which was going wrong like this
Yascamer : ces une catastrophe
Ralsei : Be ready to fight... HAHAHAHAHAHA !
Nudge : Oh yes, we're getting out of this shitty pipe. We're fighting. I like it. Lely, stop hugging me and set me free.
Lely : Nudge, you're risking too much, due to your size. I'm 101% sure it's better for you to be in my arms
Nudge : But you're gonna fall
Lely : I don't want you to die, this is too dangerous for you and all of us know it
Nudge : Lely. Please.
Lely : *sighs* okay. Promise me to be careful, okay ?
Nudge : I'm stronger than you
Max : But
in this environment, you're risking more. However, this place is strange, I can feel something growing in my back
Yascamer : max ton dos y a des aile
Max : N'importe qu... QUOI ?
Lely : Some of the archipel's secret areas are really strange...
Max : definitively... Oh Lely. Your back as well, Nudge's one as well... everyone is getting wings
Lely : That is a great thing, the fight will be easier
Nudge : Exact
VC : Anyways, let's start. This volcano is burning hot and I want to get out.
Ralsei launched them out. He was in a flying Koopa machine, ready to launch his missiles.
Lely : You're doing that for a ban. Terrifying.
Nudge : Anyways, I will try to get on his flying car. I think it's possible, considering I'm now a bird bunny
Max : Be careful.
Ralsei : I've had enough! You guys were always pissing me off ! Max was telling me off, Nudge argued and Lely reported me ! Hellish trio ! But today, I'm going to flip the tables. It's me who will piss yall off. Well I'll even have a chance to end you ! That's a clever pleasure I deserved !
Lely : We're you supposed to look savage and cool ? You're kinda lacking abs and rejoinder
Ralsei : Shut up about the abs. You're fat.
Lely : Not much and anyways it's stupid. It won't make you smarter than me. I have to tell you I prefer being smart over being sportive
Ralsei : ENOUGH ! IM LAUCHING A MISSILE ON YOUR "BESTIE" !
Lely : NOOOOOO !!!!!!
Lely flied across the volcano to save Max and he took the missiles instead, causing his wings to burn and his head to get ached. He was about to fall in the volcano, but VC saved him.
Lely : si owe you one...
But VC accidentally let him fall. His weak body fel into the lava like the rocks thrower by kids fall in water. Some smoke exited that crual, terrifying ocean of lava, being in the shape of Lely.
Max : NOOOOOOOOOOOOO !!!!!
Nudge : Oh well 😕
VC : I'm so sorry 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Nudge : 🙁🙁🙁
Max : 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Nudge : ☹🥺😥😢😭😭
Yascamer : What happened guys/girls
Max : Are you blind ? LELY DIED 😑
Yascamer : ces triste mais bon on passe a autre chose
Nudge : Yascamer, you're not making sense. A human died and you want to move on...
Yascamer : bah en meme temps ça va ces t que lely
VC : BUT THATS STILL A HUMAN ! I
SWEAR !
Max : RALSEEIIIII !!!! THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT !!!! 🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬
Ralsei : OH MY GAWSH DANG LOOK AT THIS BUNCH OF CRYBABIES GO CRY IN A TRASH NOBODY CARES ABOUT LELY HE IS AN ASSHOLE NOW LET ME KILL YOU AND STOP THE WHINING BECAUSE YOU LOOK LIKE DYING BITCHES
Max : I SWEAR WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU SAYING ! YOU WANTED TO KILL ME ! AND YOU KILLED MY BESTIE ! YOU TRAPPED US BECAUSE WE REPORTED YOU ON A WEBSITE ! BOOH HOOH HOOH !
Nudge : RALSEI I SWEAR HOW CAN YOU BE THIS OBNOXIOUS ! YOU KILLED SOMEONE WHO DESERVES TO LIVE AND YOU DONT HAVE ANY REGRETS ! YOUR MINDSET IS TERRIBLE ! WHAT IS THAT ! I LIKE FICTIONAL DEATHS BUT REAL DEATHS ARENT GOOD AT ALL !!!!
VC : YES I ACCIDENTALLY LET LELY FALL AND I WILL FEEL FOREVER GUILTY ABOUT THAT, BUT IF WE'RE INTO THIS CRAPPY PLACE, ITS BECAUSE YOU TRAPPED US ! YOURE THE PROBLEM IN THAT CASE !
Yascamer : Ah
d accord j ai compris
RALSEI TU VAS VOIR RAAAH
Max : I DONT WANT TO KILL YOU ! BUT I ALMOST DO ! AND I SWEAR ! YOURE GONNA PAY A PRICE ! I DONT KNOW WHAT WILL THE PRICE BE, BUT YOU WONT GET OUT OF THIS WITHOUT ANY PROBLEMS ! TRUST ME, IM DOING WHAT IM SAYING !
Nudge : ENOUGH OF THE PUNCHLINE FIGHT ! COME HERE RALSEI ! WE WILL FIX THIS WITH CLAWS, PAWS, HANDS, FISTS, TEETH AND NAILS !
Ralsei : Let's go ! Anyways I don't care, I'LL WIN ! YOU'RE JUST GONNA DIE LIKE LELY DID !
Nudge : I DON'T CARE !!! *jumps straight to Ralsei*
Nudge reached Ralsei's flying ship. Ralsei was protected from any damage, but Bunny was smart enough to sneak in. After only 5 minutes he found Ralsei. Ralsei pushed him in another room of the ship, and made the ship shake. That caused Bunny's head to be hurt many times. Ralsei went in every direction. Happily, Max slapped the fragile glass with his Snorlax hands. Ralsei almost fell in lava and screamed a lot. Though, he managed to jump off from the plane. Nudge was unlocking him out but the ship sunk in lava and Bunny burnt like Lely did, with smoke getting out.
Max : NOOOO !!!! *cries* RALSEI YOU ARE DONE. NOW YOUR SHIP SUNK, WE WILL TRULY FIGHT IN EQUAL POSITIONS. I DONT CARE ABOUT DYING. TONIGHT WILL BE DEPRESSING ANYWAYS SINCE YOU KILLED NUDGE AND LELY, MY TWO BEST FRIENDS. VC AND YASCAMER ARE EVEN UNABLE TO FIGHT BECAUSE THE HOTNESS OF THIS AREA IS CAUSING THEM HEADACHES. SO NOW IT'S 1V1. THE TWO OF US. NO MORE SHIP. NO MORE FRIENDS. I WANT TO TAKE MY REVENGE
ON YOU, SO TONIGHT I CAN GIVE MYSELF DEATH, BUT WHILE BEING HAPPY ! IF I EVER GIVE MYSELF DEATH WITHOUT WINNING OVER YOU, THEN YOU'LL CONTINUE TO BE PROUD OF YOURSELF, OF YOUR HORRIBLE ACTIONS. I SWEAR I WILL MAKE YOU UNDERSTAND.
Ralsei : IM READY IM READY ! IM ONLY WAITING FOR THAT YOU IDIOT !
An intense fight started between Max and Ralsei started. Max hitted Ralsei strongly many times, and it didn't left Ralsei safe. Though, he had healing potions in his pockets, which rubbed out the pain from him. Max was hitting Ralsei passionately, without ever thinking it would stop someday. He was taking the revenge he deserved. Though he was going hard on Ralsei. Ralsei couldn't help it, but only tried to defend himself from Max. Max noticed Ralsei's potions and threw them in the volcano. The color of the lava turned green, and the weather was now pretty cool. It gave some chills to the fighters.
What Max did would actually help the next chapter of this story a lot. Though the fight continued, continued, and Ralsei was more and more exhausted. Though, he ripped Max's wings off, and Max fell down from where he was. He started to scream alot, and Yascamer, plus VC, screamed as well. It sounded done for them. Ralsei had won.
Though Ralsei fell off as well. Max could touch him and he pushed him under himself. (Max pushed Ralsei under himself) it caused Ralsei to be a boat for Max, and Max was able to reach a shore before Ralsei sunk under Max's snorlax weight. As soon as he reached it, he fainted for 5 minutes. When he woke up, he was sweating and he was still on the same shoreline. All the lava was drained though. Max had a headache and several injuries, but he was able to walk. He went to VC and Yascamer, who went pretty well since then. The trio was very sad of how it turned out. They found Lely, Nudge and Ralsei laying on the ground. They took the three bodies, and Max called the hospital and the firemen. Both helped them to get out of the volcano. It was now 11PM and Piantas were partying. The Archipelago looked so nice but without their friends, it felt weird and sad. So Max, VC and Yascamer carried the dead bodies into the cold water. While the sky was rosé from the last remains of the sunset, they bathed the bodies in cold water, then they dried them. They brought them back at the huts and put them on the beds.
Max : Guys, let's take a snack. It will comfort us a bit.
VC : Agreed...
Max cried, thinking to Lely and Nudge, and to all the people who left. They just wanted to have fun and spend some time together, they ended up seeing some of them dead, some of them leaving, some of them fainting...
What was that?
They would hope for better days in the future. They would like Lely and Nudge to wake up. But life doesn't works like that. Sadly, you have sometimes to face the worst shits you haven't deserved.
Max : 😭😭😭
🎶But tonight I'll be the happiest girl in the world,
You'll see it, like it doesn't matters
Tonight, I'll be the happiest girl in the world
You'll see it, like it never happened🎶
Lely : Ouch... what just happened...
Nudge : Do you think I know ?
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Last time on MKPC Archipel... The heroes were trapped in a burning pipe by Ralsei, while they were sleeping.
Lely : Nudge, don't cry. I don't want you to cry. It's gonna be okay.
Nudge : 😭😭😭
Max : I have already seen times where it got canceled, but I didn't see any show with Lely, which was going wrong like this
Yascamer : ces une catastrophe
Ralsei : Be ready to fight... HAHAHAHAHAHA !
Nudge : Oh yes, we're getting out of this shitty pipe. We're fighting. I like it. Lely, stop hugging me and set me free.
Lely : Nudge, you're risking too much, due to your size. I'm 101% sure it's better for you to be in my arms
Nudge : But you're gonna fall
Lely : I don't want you to die, this is too dangerous for you and all of us know it
Nudge : Lely. Please.
Lely : *sighs* okay. Promise me to be careful, okay ?
Nudge : I'm stronger than you
Max : But
in this environment, you're risking more. However, this place is strange, I can feel something growing in my back
Yascamer : max ton dos y a des aile
Max : N'importe qu... QUOI ?
Lely : Some of the archipel's secret areas are really strange...
Max : definitively... Oh Lely. Your back as well, Nudge's one as well... everyone is getting wings
Lely : That is a great thing, the fight will be easier
Nudge : Exact
VC : Anyways, let's start. This volcano is burning hot and I want to get out.
Ralsei launched them out. He was in a flying Koopa machine, ready to launch his missiles.
Lely : You're doing that for a ban. Terrifying.
Nudge : Anyways, I will try to get on his flying car. I think it's possible, considering I'm now a bird bunny
Max : Be careful.
Ralsei : I've had enough! You guys were always pissing me off ! Max was telling me off, Nudge argued and Lely reported me ! Hellish trio ! But today, I'm going to flip the tables. It's me who will piss yall off. Well I'll even have a chance to end you ! That's a clever pleasure I deserved !
Lely : We're you supposed to look savage and cool ? You're kinda lacking abs and rejoinder
Ralsei : Shut up about the abs. You're fat.
Lely : Not much and anyways it's stupid. It won't make you smarter than me. I have to tell you I prefer being smart over being sportive
Ralsei : ENOUGH ! IM LAUCHING A MISSILE ON YOUR "BESTIE" !
Lely : NOOOOOO !!!!!!
Lely flied across the volcano to save Max and he took the missiles instead, causing his wings to burn and his head to get ached. He was about to fall in the volcano, but VC saved him.
Lely : si owe you one...
But VC accidentally let him fall. His weak body fel into the lava like the rocks thrower by kids fall in water. Some smoke exited that crual, terrifying ocean of lava, being in the shape of Lely.
Max : NOOOOOOOOOOOOO !!!!!
Nudge : Oh well 😕
VC : I'm so sorry 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Nudge : 🙁🙁🙁
Max : 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Nudge : ☹🥺😥😢😭😭
Yascamer : What happened guys/girls
Max : Are you blind ? LELY DIED 😑
Yascamer : ces triste mais bon on passe a autre chose
Nudge : Yascamer, you're not making sense. A human died and you want to move on...
Yascamer : bah en meme temps ça va ces t que lely
VC : BUT THATS STILL A HUMAN ! I
SWEAR !
Max : RALSEEIIIII !!!! THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT !!!! 🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬
Ralsei : OH MY GAWSH DANG LOOK AT THIS BUNCH OF CRYBABIES GO CRY IN A TRASH NOBODY CARES ABOUT LELY HE IS AN ASSHOLE NOW LET ME KILL YOU AND STOP THE WHINING BECAUSE YOU LOOK LIKE DYING BITCHES
Max : I SWEAR WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU SAYING ! YOU WANTED TO KILL ME ! AND YOU KILLED MY BESTIE ! YOU TRAPPED US BECAUSE WE REPORTED YOU ON A WEBSITE ! BOOH HOOH HOOH !
Nudge : RALSEI I SWEAR HOW CAN YOU BE THIS OBNOXIOUS ! YOU KILLED SOMEONE WHO DESERVES TO LIVE AND YOU DONT HAVE ANY REGRETS ! YOUR MINDSET IS TERRIBLE ! WHAT IS THAT ! I LIKE FICTIONAL DEATHS BUT REAL DEATHS ARENT GOOD AT ALL !!!!
VC : YES I ACCIDENTALLY LET LELY FALL AND I WILL FEEL FOREVER GUILTY ABOUT THAT, BUT IF WE'RE INTO THIS CRAPPY PLACE, ITS BECAUSE YOU TRAPPED US ! YOURE THE PROBLEM IN THAT CASE !
Yascamer : Ah
d accord j ai compris
RALSEI TU VAS VOIR RAAAH
Max : I DONT WANT TO KILL YOU ! BUT I ALMOST DO ! AND I SWEAR ! YOURE GONNA PAY A PRICE ! I DONT KNOW WHAT WILL THE PRICE BE, BUT YOU WONT GET OUT OF THIS WITHOUT ANY PROBLEMS ! TRUST ME, IM DOING WHAT IM SAYING !
Nudge : ENOUGH OF THE PUNCHLINE FIGHT ! COME HERE RALSEI ! WE WILL FIX THIS WITH CLAWS, PAWS, HANDS, FISTS, TEETH AND NAILS !
Ralsei : Let's go ! Anyways I don't care, I'LL WIN ! YOU'RE JUST GONNA DIE LIKE LELY DID !
Nudge : I DON'T CARE !!! *jumps straight to Ralsei*
Nudge reached Ralsei's flying ship. Ralsei was protected from any damage, but Bunny was smart enough to sneak in. After only 5 minutes he found Ralsei. Ralsei pushed him in another room of the ship, and made the ship shake. That caused Bunny's head to be hurt many times. Ralsei went in every direction. Happily, Max slapped the fragile glass with his Snorlax hands. Ralsei almost fell in lava and screamed a lot. Though, he managed to jump off from the plane. Nudge was unlocking him out but the ship sunk in lava and Bunny burnt like Lely did, with smoke getting out.
Max : NOOOO !!!! *cries* RALSEI YOU ARE DONE. NOW YOUR SHIP SUNK, WE WILL TRULY FIGHT IN EQUAL POSITIONS. I DONT CARE ABOUT DYING. TONIGHT WILL BE DEPRESSING ANYWAYS SINCE YOU KILLED NUDGE AND LELY, MY TWO BEST FRIENDS. VC AND YASCAMER ARE EVEN UNABLE TO FIGHT BECAUSE THE HOTNESS OF THIS AREA IS CAUSING THEM HEADACHES. SO NOW IT'S 1V1. THE TWO OF US. NO MORE SHIP. NO MORE FRIENDS. I WANT TO TAKE MY REVENGE
ON YOU, SO TONIGHT I CAN GIVE MYSELF DEATH, BUT WHILE BEING HAPPY ! IF I EVER GIVE MYSELF DEATH WITHOUT WINNING OVER YOU, THEN YOU'LL CONTINUE TO BE PROUD OF YOURSELF, OF YOUR HORRIBLE ACTIONS. I SWEAR I WILL MAKE YOU UNDERSTAND.
Ralsei : IM READY IM READY ! IM ONLY WAITING FOR THAT YOU IDIOT !
An intense fight started between Max and Ralsei started. Max hitted Ralsei strongly many times, and it didn't left Ralsei safe. Though, he had healing potions in his pockets, which rubbed out the pain from him. Max was hitting Ralsei passionately, without ever thinking it would stop someday. He was taking the revenge he deserved. Though he was going hard on Ralsei. Ralsei couldn't help it, but only tried to defend himself from Max. Max noticed Ralsei's potions and threw them in the volcano. The color of the lava turned green, and the weather was now pretty cool. It gave some chills to the fighters.
What Max did would actually help the next chapter of this story a lot. Though the fight continued, continued, and Ralsei was more and more exhausted. Though, he ripped Max's wings off, and Max fell down from where he was. He started to scream alot, and Yascamer, plus VC, screamed as well. It sounded done for them. Ralsei had won.
Though Ralsei fell off as well. Max could touch him and he pushed him under himself. (Max pushed Ralsei under himself) it caused Ralsei to be a boat for Max, and Max was able to reach a shore before Ralsei sunk under Max's snorlax weight. As soon as he reached it, he fainted for 5 minutes. When he woke up, he was sweating and he was still on the same shoreline. All the lava was drained though. Max had a headache and several injuries, but he was able to walk. He went to VC and Yascamer, who went pretty well since then. The trio was very sad of how it turned out. They found Lely, Nudge and Ralsei laying on the ground. They took the three bodies, and Max called the hospital and the firemen. Both helped them to get out of the volcano. It was now 11PM and Piantas were partying. The Archipelago looked so nice but without their friends, it felt weird and sad. So Max, VC and Yascamer carried the dead bodies into the cold water. While the sky was rosé from the last remains of the sunset, they bathed the bodies in cold water, then they dried them. They brought them back at the huts and put them on the beds.
Max : Guys, let's take a snack. It will comfort us a bit.
VC : Agreed...
Max cried, thinking to Lely and Nudge, and to all the people who left. They just wanted to have fun and spend some time together, they ended up seeing some of them dead, some of them leaving, some of them fainting...
What was that?
They would hope for better days in the future. They would like Lely and Nudge to wake up. But life doesn't works like that. Sadly, you have sometimes to face the worst shits you haven't deserved.
Max : 😭😭😭
🎶But tonight I'll be the happiest girl in the world,
You'll see it, like it doesn't matters
Tonight, I'll be the happiest girl in the world
You'll see it, like it never happened🎶
Lely : Ouch... what just happened...
Nudge : Do you think I know ?
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Chapter 4 : Cute night gone wrong
Lely : So... after this cute moment... What are we doing next ?
Nudge : We can wait on the Archipelago. I heard most of the MKPCians are gone, but VC didn't actually left. She decided to stay here with us, apparently. It's what she told me.
Max : What about Ralsei's lifeless body ? He's surely drown. Though the lagoon isn't deep. We can search him a bit. At least we will have his body
Lely : Sure. What about we stay awake this night. We will sleep tomorrow.
Nudge : Sure. I'm afraid of lacking sleep to the point where I'm completely exhausted and where I pass out in a burning pipe, but why not. Promise me I will be safe though. Today was already a big day.
Lely : Don't worry. We will be safe. This is now 8PM. Don't forget MKPC Archipel also works like that. Some people are awake at night, so the Archipelago is living at night. Let's go back to the huts though. We can take some rest then do our party night.
Nudge : Yes. Let's take 3 hours and a half to sleep. That's the bare minimum, but we will rest tomorrow anyways.
Max : Yeah. I'm going to put an alarm. 🙂
Lely : What about a sunset stroll on the beach ? That would be very cute and nice to start our night. 🥰
Ralsei : hell this sounds so gay
Max : WHO SAID THAT ???
Nudge : When you think he's dead, he's alive...
Ralsei : And why would I be dead ?
Lely : Well... I did a challenge where I launched everyone in the sky, but they went
too high and fainted (they reached an area where the things are weirdly deadly). You as well, and I didn't find your body.
Ralsei : Oh yeah. This was an illusion. I have magic powers since the Twilightverse era, don't you remember ? But I asked the gods if they could get my power changed.
Nudge : And what were you doing during all this time ?
Ralsei : You don't wanna know
Nudge : Yes I do
Ralsei : Max is gonna throw a tantrum
Max : I won't
Nudge : Go on Ralsei
Ralsei : I taught the Piantas to say revive and amogus 24/7
Max : Ok, you're not coming to our night party
Ralsei : Yes I will
Nudge : Then go get some sleep.
At the huts...
Lely : The sunset is now... I think we should actually go to it and come back to sleep a bit...
Max : What about we sleep on the beach ?
Lely : GENIUS
Nudge : This is really smart. Let's pack our bags and go.
Lely : I packed my bag, but something is left
Nudge : Then put it in your bag
Lely :*grabs Nudge and puts it in his bag*
Nudge : *scratches the bag* Lemme get out---- oh well. That's not so bad
Max : This is cute 😍
VC : Ummm. Hello...
Lely : Hello !
VC : Where are you going ?
Lely : To the beach, for a sunset stroll
VC : Can I join you ?
Lely : Sure !
Max : Well let's go then.
They took a path that passes through a maze. Happily they found out how to reach the beach.
Lely : Wow ! It's really really cute !
Max : I don't have any words, this is just beautiful.
Yascamer : Hi, what are you doing
Lely : How did you came here ?
Yascamer : Euh, je vis ici
Lely : Ah ok
Max : Anyways, what do you think of the sunset Nudge ?
Nudge : It's beautiful. I've never seen a bloody red sunset. That evocates death, pain and killing. Deliciously sinful.
Lely : I don't even want to understand if this is a kink or a weird obsession for something horrible.
Ralsei : What about sleeping a bit guys ? I'm tired.
Lely : Yeah, why not.
Yascamer : si vous voulez, je pense que c'est une bonne idée
Nudge : Yeah let's get some rest.
Max : 😴😴😴
Lely : POV : You're a Snorlax
Nudge : Correct. Plus we lived something... unusual, but that was so cool though.
Lely : I'm so sorry about that. Though, the sunset is beautiful!
VC : Agreed.
The calm waves that hitted the beach slowly, the soft breeze... it made Nudge, Lely, Max, Yascamer and VC asleep in a minute. Though, Ralsei prepared something...
Ralsei : I got banned from MKPCverse, thanks to those idiots. Let's get some revenge BAHAHAHAHAHA !
To realize the perfect crime, Ralsei paid some Piantas off to silently bring the squad to a peculiarly horrible place.
Nudge : Wait where are we ??? Oh noooo... not in this kind of place... hey ! Lely ! Wake up please! *his eyes are becoming watery*
Lely : Whats happening Nudge ? *worried voice tone*
Nudge : Don't you feel hot ? God HAPPILY Toadboi isn't here.
Lely : Yes I do... oh, did Ralsei... r---
Nudge : LELY !!! NOT THE TIME TO BE DUMB ! *cries and bites his lips*
Lely : Oh gosh... don't tell me we are AGAIN in a burning pipe
Nudge : Yes we are! 😭
Lely : Oh no Nudge. Don't cry. You're too cute to cry. I don't want you to be sad.
Max : no.
No. NO. NOOOOO. NOOOOOOOOOOOO. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO !
To be continued...
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Yeah. I always saw MKPC Archipel as a feel good fanfic. That's why I wanted to sugarcoat this episode. Though, I'm also interested by darker tones and stories.
Is there any questions or requests you have to send ? I'll respond to them.
I love how I'm progressing, but the plane needs to quit the ground. He's about to quit it but he's unable so far...
Anyways, have a good day/evening/night !
~ Lely / Invu
Lely : So... after this cute moment... What are we doing next ?
Nudge : We can wait on the Archipelago. I heard most of the MKPCians are gone, but VC didn't actually left. She decided to stay here with us, apparently. It's what she told me.
Max : What about Ralsei's lifeless body ? He's surely drown. Though the lagoon isn't deep. We can search him a bit. At least we will have his body
Lely : Sure. What about we stay awake this night. We will sleep tomorrow.
Nudge : Sure. I'm afraid of lacking sleep to the point where I'm completely exhausted and where I pass out in a burning pipe, but why not. Promise me I will be safe though. Today was already a big day.
Lely : Don't worry. We will be safe. This is now 8PM. Don't forget MKPC Archipel also works like that. Some people are awake at night, so the Archipelago is living at night. Let's go back to the huts though. We can take some rest then do our party night.
Nudge : Yes. Let's take 3 hours and a half to sleep. That's the bare minimum, but we will rest tomorrow anyways.
Max : Yeah. I'm going to put an alarm. 🙂
Lely : What about a sunset stroll on the beach ? That would be very cute and nice to start our night. 🥰
Ralsei : hell this sounds so gay
Max : WHO SAID THAT ???
Nudge : When you think he's dead, he's alive...
Ralsei : And why would I be dead ?
Lely : Well... I did a challenge where I launched everyone in the sky, but they went
too high and fainted (they reached an area where the things are weirdly deadly). You as well, and I didn't find your body.
Ralsei : Oh yeah. This was an illusion. I have magic powers since the Twilightverse era, don't you remember ? But I asked the gods if they could get my power changed.
Nudge : And what were you doing during all this time ?
Ralsei : You don't wanna know
Nudge : Yes I do
Ralsei : Max is gonna throw a tantrum
Max : I won't
Nudge : Go on Ralsei
Ralsei : I taught the Piantas to say revive and amogus 24/7
Max : Ok, you're not coming to our night party
Ralsei : Yes I will
Nudge : Then go get some sleep.
At the huts...
Lely : The sunset is now... I think we should actually go to it and come back to sleep a bit...
Max : What about we sleep on the beach ?
Lely : GENIUS
Nudge : This is really smart. Let's pack our bags and go.
Lely : I packed my bag, but something is left
Nudge : Then put it in your bag
Lely :*grabs Nudge and puts it in his bag*
Nudge : *scratches the bag* Lemme get out---- oh well. That's not so bad
Max : This is cute 😍
VC : Ummm. Hello...
Lely : Hello !
VC : Where are you going ?
Lely : To the beach, for a sunset stroll
VC : Can I join you ?
Lely : Sure !
Max : Well let's go then.
They took a path that passes through a maze. Happily they found out how to reach the beach.
Lely : Wow ! It's really really cute !
Max : I don't have any words, this is just beautiful.
Yascamer : Hi, what are you doing
Lely : How did you came here ?
Yascamer : Euh, je vis ici
Lely : Ah ok
Max : Anyways, what do you think of the sunset Nudge ?
Nudge : It's beautiful. I've never seen a bloody red sunset. That evocates death, pain and killing. Deliciously sinful.
Lely : I don't even want to understand if this is a kink or a weird obsession for something horrible.
Ralsei : What about sleeping a bit guys ? I'm tired.
Lely : Yeah, why not.
Yascamer : si vous voulez, je pense que c'est une bonne idée
Nudge : Yeah let's get some rest.
Max : 😴😴😴
Lely : POV : You're a Snorlax
Nudge : Correct. Plus we lived something... unusual, but that was so cool though.
Lely : I'm so sorry about that. Though, the sunset is beautiful!
VC : Agreed.
The calm waves that hitted the beach slowly, the soft breeze... it made Nudge, Lely, Max, Yascamer and VC asleep in a minute. Though, Ralsei prepared something...
Ralsei : I got banned from MKPCverse, thanks to those idiots. Let's get some revenge BAHAHAHAHAHA !
To realize the perfect crime, Ralsei paid some Piantas off to silently bring the squad to a peculiarly horrible place.
Nudge : Wait where are we ??? Oh noooo... not in this kind of place... hey ! Lely ! Wake up please! *his eyes are becoming watery*
Lely : Whats happening Nudge ? *worried voice tone*
Nudge : Don't you feel hot ? God HAPPILY Toadboi isn't here.
Lely : Yes I do... oh, did Ralsei... r---
Nudge : LELY !!! NOT THE TIME TO BE DUMB ! *cries and bites his lips*
Lely : Oh gosh... don't tell me we are AGAIN in a burning pipe
Nudge : Yes we are! 😭
Lely : Oh no Nudge. Don't cry. You're too cute to cry. I don't want you to be sad.
Max : no.
No. NO. NOOOOO. NOOOOOOOOOOOO. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO !
To be continued...
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Yeah. I always saw MKPC Archipel as a feel good fanfic. That's why I wanted to sugarcoat this episode. Though, I'm also interested by darker tones and stories.
Is there any questions or requests you have to send ? I'll respond to them.
I love how I'm progressing, but the plane needs to quit the ground. He's about to quit it but he's unable so far...
Anyways, have a good day/evening/night !
~ Lely / Invu
It looks like you’ve set it up perfoctky for a character death. Now just to wait and see who does die
why are you so obsessed with character deaths?
On 2022-09-23 at 11:50:32
waitwaitwait if yascamer can debut then can i rejoin?
1On 2022-09-13 at 01:03:52
@VC
@/Ralsei
I need your personnalities
@/Ralsei
I need your personnalities
don't you already have mine?-
On 2022-09-12 at 23:31:45
I'll join too! (gonna enjoy the lack of toadpool!)
114[Given up]
On 2022-07-03 at 00:45:54
you can't be immortal. that's cheating.
On 2022-07-01 at 18:12:14
very very nice so far! kinda lost, though. maybe because we only have the names to go off of when imagining these scenarios... maybe give each pair a colour?
On 2022-07-01 at 06:27:46
looking forward to the rest of this!
On 2022-07-01 at 03:04:20
Launching chapter
Host : Hello to you all. I'm glad to see people there, it's been long since I didn't have anyone to tortu*cough* play with !
Redshell : And what we doing there ?
VC : You accepted to come, bruh.
Redshell : Dude I just wanna know what we doing there.
VC : So shut up and let's listen to him.
Redshell : But what we doing there ?
VC : You stupid.
Host : So yeah, welcome to MKPC Archipel. That's a tropical island where you can eat a lot of exotic fruits and stuff... It has verdant forests and you can walk on beaches when sun is setting.
Max : ... but ?
Host : You'll be paired, yup. With whoever you want. You'll have to showdown sometimes. But you'll have free time too. So... Have a nice day finding your huts by yourself. They're pretty comfortable, but you'll have to sleep together--
Toadboi : 😏😏😏
Lely : That's absolutely disgusting. 😒
Max : Ew. I'm not sleeping with you Toadboi.
Arrived to the huts...
Max : Well they're simple but they looks so comfortable ! Look at this sofa !
😴...
DarkShell : I'm gonna take the biggest room, I need personal space.
Gamerlion : Please stop being savage. I wanna be friend with you... 🥺
DarkShell : Get outta my view ! 😤
Gamerlion : 😭
Lely : Hey ! Be nice to him or else ! 🤬
DarkShell : You wouldn't cause much damage, you're 11 years old, kidass. 😒
Lely : ⚒️😘
DarkShell : What could you do to me LMAO.
Lely : Ummm... Death, several injuries, aches, being in pain while moving... 🤔
MysteryMan : Guys please stop. Lely, please leave this rude ass be. DarkShell, frick off.
VC : Or else we're throwing your dark shell outta here and it will broke in a million pieces.
Osc-omb : Hey let's chill. It's 12AM. Wanna take a snack ? 😋
Toadboi : The only snack is me 😏😏😏
Hampter : Sorry but you're not even cute or anything. 😘
Toadboi : Shut up, I'm so hot. 🤤🥵
Max : Didn't knew he is forced to tell the opposite of what he is...
Toadboi : Roast me harder, daddy 😏
Lely : Stop it...
MysteryMan : They left 🍣 and some fried meat.
Lely : Lemme eat all the sushis or you'll become one 🤬
Max : Sure Lely.
Fways : Sushi shouldn't be edible lol
Lely : How is he here ? 😱
Everyone : Who ? 🧐
Lely : Guess I'm becoming crazier and crazier... 😐
MysteryMan : You eat whatever you want. They also put some veggie things, in case any of us would want to eat this.
VC : Anyways, do I look pretty ? 🤔
Max : Sort of.
Redshell : Yeah.
Gamerlion : Yes you really do. 🤩
VC : Awww, thanks. 🥰
DarkShell : No, you look 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
Max : Stop it DarkShell ! That's not nice ! 😤
DarkShell : Come on I'm not a crybaby, I'm afraid of nothing. 😎
Hampter : Uh, why is there a spider on your shoulder ? 😖
DarkShell : Haaa ! 😰
Lely : AAAAAAAAEEEEEEE 😱😱😱😱😱
Max : It's enormous and it's... Horrendous. 😨
Osc-omb : Come on guys. Take a quick snack and let's go to the beach. Our host is certainly waiting us right there.
MysteryMan : Sure Baby Bomb. 🙂
Osc-omb : I'm not a baby ! 😑
Arrived to the beach...
Host : You like the place ?
Lely : Yeah, it feels like Gelato Beach.
Max : Anyways, what's the challenge ?
Host : That's simple. You see those wooden bars over the sea ?
Everybody : Yep. 🤔
Host : You'll have to stand there for the longest possible time. The last who falls is winning.
Max : And what do we win ?
Host : You'll see later. Now... See you later !
Everybody appeared on the bars. The challenge is starting.
After 2 hours...
MysteryMan : Aish, my arms are so tired. 😩
Max : Let's say I have another problem.
Lely : What's the problem Max ? 🙁
Max : Look, I have to go to the bathroom really bad. It's painful to stay here, while hearing the waves moving. 😖
Lely : Guess you'll have to hold it... 😕
Max : It's really hard though, it's pressuring on my abs, while I'm stucked on this freaking bar... 😑
Lely : Look, I also have to go to the bathroom... But we can't leave like this. And I'm not gonna lose this for a freaking stupid need.
Hours later...
Max : Lely, I feel like I'm dying by inside...😣
Lely : Me too but we're the two last. We just have to wait DarkShell to fall--
*DarkShell falling*
Max : Yay ! 😓
Host : Congrats to Max and Lely because they have won... Ah yeah, I forgot to mention : there is 2 winners per round. Now you're free, take a break !
*Max and Lely arguing on their way back home while walking fast*
Max : I was focused on this freaking stupid need during all the round so I think we did incredible, without realizing it.
Lely : But getting stucked on a bar was a bad experience. And let's say we weren't in the best settings to do this. Anyways Max, you okay with us pairing ? Because I have to admit, I like you...
Max : No, I was about to suggest it to you. ^^
Lely : Nice ! Thanks. 😁
Max : Anything for you to be happy. Wanna do something this evening ?
Lely : Nothing special, just spending time together. I don't feel in ease with the others, I don't know why. Oh look, there's a cute crab over here !
After a sunset stroll on the beach, and various activities, everybody got back to the camp.
During the dinner...
DarkShell : I and Toadboi decided to pair !
Lely : I'm gonna avoid this team as much as possible.
Max : I paired with Lely, he's very nice ! 😁
*Lely's blushing*
Redshell : I don't paired with anyone so far...
Hampter : I paired with Osc-omb, he's genius like me.
VC : And I paired with MysteryMan.
This evening, let's say they were having fun. It would be less fun tomorrow, but after all, let them have fun. It was a nice evening for everbuddy and the pairs slept together (so Redshell paired with Gamerlion). They're all sleeping and that's why I'm whispering. See you tomorrow... For the next chapter !
Yeah I did it.
That's done. I'm not respecting personnalities you gave, sorry.
Give a feedback please !
Host : Hello to you all. I'm glad to see people there, it's been long since I didn't have anyone to tortu*cough* play with !
Redshell : And what we doing there ?
VC : You accepted to come, bruh.
Redshell : Dude I just wanna know what we doing there.
VC : So shut up and let's listen to him.
Redshell : But what we doing there ?
VC : You stupid.
Host : So yeah, welcome to MKPC Archipel. That's a tropical island where you can eat a lot of exotic fruits and stuff... It has verdant forests and you can walk on beaches when sun is setting.
Max : ... but ?
Host : You'll be paired, yup. With whoever you want. You'll have to showdown sometimes. But you'll have free time too. So... Have a nice day finding your huts by yourself. They're pretty comfortable, but you'll have to sleep together--
Toadboi : 😏😏😏
Lely : That's absolutely disgusting. 😒
Max : Ew. I'm not sleeping with you Toadboi.
Arrived to the huts...
Max : Well they're simple but they looks so comfortable ! Look at this sofa !
😴...
DarkShell : I'm gonna take the biggest room, I need personal space.
Gamerlion : Please stop being savage. I wanna be friend with you... 🥺
DarkShell : Get outta my view ! 😤
Gamerlion : 😭
Lely : Hey ! Be nice to him or else ! 🤬
DarkShell : You wouldn't cause much damage, you're 11 years old, kidass. 😒
Lely : ⚒️😘
DarkShell : What could you do to me LMAO.
Lely : Ummm... Death, several injuries, aches, being in pain while moving... 🤔
MysteryMan : Guys please stop. Lely, please leave this rude ass be. DarkShell, frick off.
VC : Or else we're throwing your dark shell outta here and it will broke in a million pieces.
Osc-omb : Hey let's chill. It's 12AM. Wanna take a snack ? 😋
Toadboi : The only snack is me 😏😏😏
Hampter : Sorry but you're not even cute or anything. 😘
Toadboi : Shut up, I'm so hot. 🤤🥵
Max : Didn't knew he is forced to tell the opposite of what he is...
Toadboi : Roast me harder, daddy 😏
Lely : Stop it...
MysteryMan : They left 🍣 and some fried meat.
Lely : Lemme eat all the sushis or you'll become one 🤬
Max : Sure Lely.
Fways : Sushi shouldn't be edible lol
Lely : How is he here ? 😱
Everyone : Who ? 🧐
Lely : Guess I'm becoming crazier and crazier... 😐
MysteryMan : You eat whatever you want. They also put some veggie things, in case any of us would want to eat this.
VC : Anyways, do I look pretty ? 🤔
Max : Sort of.
Redshell : Yeah.
Gamerlion : Yes you really do. 🤩
VC : Awww, thanks. 🥰
DarkShell : No, you look 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
Max : Stop it DarkShell ! That's not nice ! 😤
DarkShell : Come on I'm not a crybaby, I'm afraid of nothing. 😎
Hampter : Uh, why is there a spider on your shoulder ? 😖
DarkShell : Haaa ! 😰
Lely : AAAAAAAAEEEEEEE 😱😱😱😱😱
Max : It's enormous and it's... Horrendous. 😨
Osc-omb : Come on guys. Take a quick snack and let's go to the beach. Our host is certainly waiting us right there.
MysteryMan : Sure Baby Bomb. 🙂
Osc-omb : I'm not a baby ! 😑
Arrived to the beach...
Host : You like the place ?
Lely : Yeah, it feels like Gelato Beach.
Max : Anyways, what's the challenge ?
Host : That's simple. You see those wooden bars over the sea ?
Everybody : Yep. 🤔
Host : You'll have to stand there for the longest possible time. The last who falls is winning.
Max : And what do we win ?
Host : You'll see later. Now... See you later !
Everybody appeared on the bars. The challenge is starting.
After 2 hours...
MysteryMan : Aish, my arms are so tired. 😩
Max : Let's say I have another problem.
Lely : What's the problem Max ? 🙁
Max : Look, I have to go to the bathroom really bad. It's painful to stay here, while hearing the waves moving. 😖
Lely : Guess you'll have to hold it... 😕
Max : It's really hard though, it's pressuring on my abs, while I'm stucked on this freaking bar... 😑
Lely : Look, I also have to go to the bathroom... But we can't leave like this. And I'm not gonna lose this for a freaking stupid need.
Hours later...
Max : Lely, I feel like I'm dying by inside...😣
Lely : Me too but we're the two last. We just have to wait DarkShell to fall--
*DarkShell falling*
Max : Yay ! 😓
Host : Congrats to Max and Lely because they have won... Ah yeah, I forgot to mention : there is 2 winners per round. Now you're free, take a break !
*Max and Lely arguing on their way back home while walking fast*
Max : I was focused on this freaking stupid need during all the round so I think we did incredible, without realizing it.
Lely : But getting stucked on a bar was a bad experience. And let's say we weren't in the best settings to do this. Anyways Max, you okay with us pairing ? Because I have to admit, I like you...
Max : No, I was about to suggest it to you. ^^
Lely : Nice ! Thanks. 😁
Max : Anything for you to be happy. Wanna do something this evening ?
Lely : Nothing special, just spending time together. I don't feel in ease with the others, I don't know why. Oh look, there's a cute crab over here !
After a sunset stroll on the beach, and various activities, everybody got back to the camp.
During the dinner...
DarkShell : I and Toadboi decided to pair !
Lely : I'm gonna avoid this team as much as possible.
Max : I paired with Lely, he's very nice ! 😁
*Lely's blushing*
Redshell : I don't paired with anyone so far...
Hampter : I paired with Osc-omb, he's genius like me.
VC : And I paired with MysteryMan.
This evening, let's say they were having fun. It would be less fun tomorrow, but after all, let them have fun. It was a nice evening for everbuddy and the pairs slept together (so Redshell paired with Gamerlion). They're all sleeping and that's why I'm whispering. See you tomorrow... For the next chapter !
Yeah I did it.
That's done. I'm not respecting personnalities you gave, sorry.
Give a feedback please !
Ooooooh neat. Kinda made sense that I didn't have many lines since i naturally am very quiet.
On 2022-06-26 at 03:36:16
-kinda smart
-not entirely too strong
-good at racing
-honestly looking for good tracks and good challenges
-not entirely too strong
-good at racing
-honestly looking for good tracks and good challenges
On 2022-06-23 at 21:13:33
@VC @Yascamer/@Yascamer26 @DarkShell please give an opinion about you being in the fanfic (if you refuse then you'll not be in, in the other case yes)
my opinion is that i still want to be in this
On 2022-06-21 at 05:16:11
yeah, how do we play?