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One of them the title is something about joining the university of Sydney or something.

So if it was midnight for you and -:-- for me then you live in this time zone;

Ok, time for a very short synopsis

Episode 1; A group of mkpc members are playing around when they hear an explosion. They find that the online mode portal is destroyed and most of them leave to track the culprit.

Episode 2; At Toad's GBA Riverside Park they are ambushed and many of the MKPCians are trapped in a cave. Xrunner48, Popplio, Noob, Knoah, and Dietsoda escape and go for help.

K and Oskar are kidnapped while repairing the online mode portal.

Episode 3; The heroes escape from Riverside Park. Xrunner48 starts repairing a device which is tracking K.The kidnapper throws Oskar over a cliff but Oskar lives.

Episode 4; They track the kidnapper to Bowser's Catwalk. K dies in lava. Most heroes are stuck fighting while Illuzhion and Starsplizz fly after Knoah in his plane thingy.

Episode 5; It turns out Knoah is  the villain. He escapes while Toad meets a blue Toad and Illuzhion almost becomes the next casualty.

Episode 6 coming soon!

Sorry this is taking so long I'm sick (again ). Will try and get the recap in a couple days

Yah not surprised no one did that.

Anyway I am considering reviving this fanfic starting with a recap of the first five chapters. It was very fun and since I'm kinda still half-here (barely any messages but still watching) why not finish. If you want to see this fanfic completed plz react with 👍. If not,👎.

Oh and I'll continue it if this gets saaay, five thumbs up

Actually kind of a good idea. First to post an episode continues the fanfic. Good luck!

Oh sorry tj this fanfic is ended. I've decided to quit the forums due to them being plagued with negativity, arguments, rule-breakers, etc. Really sorry to everyone who liked the fanfic. Bye

The answer
The reason I jokingly said that at the end of the episode

I'll remember that

Episode #5 Green Shell!

We last left our heroes doing battle with a huge dog-like monster at the arena ‘Bowser’s Catwalk.’ Now they must defeat it.

Fiery; I’m going after Popplio.
Nudge; Me too.
Melee; OK bring him back quick. We need to get out of here before this dog thing kills us all.
Dietsoda; It won’t be able to.

Dietsoda began firing arrows into the creature, but most of them stuck in its tough skin, doing little damage.

Noob; We can do this… Look, it’s being distracted by Dietsoda’s arrows. Maybe we can sneak up to it and kill it.
Melee; Dietsoda and I can try to drive it underneath some of those thwomps.

While Melee and Dietsoda shoot at the dog mutant, some of the others sneak around behind it.

MisterCringeh; Noob this was your idea, you kill it. Go on.
Noob; (gulp) alright…

Noob managed to get right behind the creature and stabbed it in one of its back legs. It whirled around and lunged at him, but he backed away and fell down.

Dark; Noob! Get away from there!

Just as the dog was about to end Noob, one of the thwomps came down on its back.

Xrunner48; O that is disgusting!
Fiery; We’re back! Can we leave this place now?
MisterCringeh; Happily.

IlluhZhion and StarSplizz are chasing the flying machine through the air.

StarSplizz; It’s heading for another track!
IlluhZhion; Wow, I didn’t know that! Oh wait, I did. Follow it, genius!
StarSplizz; What is this place anyway?
IlluhZhion; Whatever it is, I don’t like it. We’re flying through darkness. Watch out for lightning strikes.
StarSplizz; There’s the flying thing!
IlluhZhion; Let’s just call it a plane. Close enough.

They flew after the airplane (I’m just gonna call it that cuz “flying machine” is just awkward) IlluZhion summoned flying spirits, and they possessed the machinery, forcing the plane to land.

IlluhZhion; StarSplizz, go back for help. I’m going to rescue Knoah (sigh) Why am I rescuing him?

The others have set off to try and find IlluhZhion and StarSplizz.

Sorbet; Where have they gone? There’s no way we can track them now!
Xrunner; Actually the tracker is following that flying thing. Follow me.
Dietsoda; Gimme that tracker. FOLLOW ME MAYFLIES!!!
Popplio; He’s. Going. So. Fast. Slow down Dietsoda!
Fiery; He’s going to leave us behind!
Toad; He must stop.

Toad tackled Dietsoda and everyone gathered around.

Toad; Dietsoda, you can’t go without us. We need the tracker to know where to go.
Xrunner; If we split up, we’re vulnerable. You won’t be able to stop the flying machine alone.
StarSplizz; Come on guys IlluhZhion needs your help!
Dietsoda; I’m going. Now. *runs off*
Nudge; Forget him. Let’s follow StarSplizz.

Everyone followed StarSplizz to the track where IlluhZhion was. They went through the portal and appeared on the starting line of a cement raceway floating in what seemed to be the middle of a storm.

Popplio; At least there’s water. Anyone see a slide anywhere?
Dark; Look it’s IlluhZhion
Toad; And he’s in trouble…

IlluhZhion was lying on the ground surrounded by a crowd. The people were beating him and starting to drag him to the plane.

Melee; There’s a bus coming, if we ride it we can reach IlluhZhion faster.
Dark; Got it.

Dark jumped into the bus as it passed and made the blue toad driver stop it. Then everyone got in.

Nudge; I’m driving. *jams the accelerator down*
Noob; I didn’t know buses could drift around corners. *goes back to screaming*

The bus plowed into the crowd, scattering people everywhere.

Nudge; Look at them fly!
Melee; Are they… Knoah?
Popplio; They’re the clones!
Blue Toad Bus Driver; What is going on here😭😭😭?!?!?!
Dark; Wait… Knoah is… What? Who?
Xrunner48; No time for that. We need to help IlluhZhion!
Melee; Die, puny Knoahs!
MisterCringeh; I’ll get IlluhZhion. *vanishes*

Melee, Nudge, and Dark fought the clones, while Sorbet started sneaking toward the plane. The Blue Toad started slinging a variety of bob-ombs, green shells, and profanities at the clones as well.

Fiery; That’s the last of the clones, is IlluhZhion here?
MisterCringeh; He’s here, but unconscious.
Xrunner48; Sorbet is sabotaging the plane. Soon we’ll find Knoah.
Knoah; It’s too late for that!
Dark; Oh no
Knoah; Now that you know who I am, let me personally give you this message. K and Toad99 are dead, and soon you will be too! I forced K to create a weapon that will destroy MKPC city, soon my clones will have placed it.
Popplio; O come on.
Blue Toad Bus Driver; Green Shell!
Knoah; Ow! You will pay for that. OOF! *sees arrow sticking out of his back*
Dietsoda; Get him!

They all ran to grab Knoah, but he locked himself into the plane. However, it wouldn’t start, and he couldn’t make it take off.

Knoah; Not good
Fiery; WE”VE GOT HIM! WE”VE GOT HIM! YESSSSSS!!!
Knoah; Fortunately there’s the backup system. *flips a switch*

The plane began to fly away.

Fiery; Aw BLEEP
Dietsoda; You lost him! After all that! Stupid mayflies!
Nudge; Hey, Sorbet was supposed to stop it from working!
Sorbet; Sorry, I didn’t know there was a backup.
Dietsoda; SORRY isn’t enough!

As Knoah flew away, the heroes argued on the track. They were frustrated that no matter how hard they tried, they couldn’t stop Knoah. And he’d been pretending to be a friend all this time.

Will the heroes be able to mend the hard feelings and work on stopping Knoah? What is the weapon and how can they find out about it? Is anyone else mixed up in the villain’s plot? Find out in episode #6!


Sorry Dark😢. Maybe you can join him later on. @TJ_K4RT I need your personality for this fanfic if you still want to join.

Been working on Episode #5, The Enemy Revealed, for a couple days now. Hopefully will come out before saturday.

However, there are a lot of fanfics on the site right now, so I'm thinking of taking a break from it or dropping this fanfic permanently (It's not really very mario). I'm motivated to finish it, but it might not be a good time right now, there are just so many fanfics. Plz tell me if you want this to continue, and be honest, 'cause I'm fine either way.

What? I used google translate to change that to english and it didn't make a lot of sense.

Uh-oh triple post.😱

Ep#4. The Tracker

At the entrance to the official tracks

IlluhZhion; Everyone keep looking around. We need to find a clue about K and Oskar.
Popplio; I-I-I’d r-rather stay away from h-here. Y-you guys l-look.
Dietsoda; You really are terrified of whatever made those paw prints.
Dark; Ya. It looks like a dog made them. A BIG dog.
Popplio; Th-thanks for summing that up. I-I’m outta h-here.
Nudge; Think I’ll go with him. Keep him safe. You know. Let me know if anything attacks us so I can kill it and mutilate its pitiful remains.
MisterCringeh; That is extremely cringe-worthy.
Fiery; Hey everyone come here! Look!
Knoah; What is it?
StarSplizz; It looks like something took off from here, just a little way from the official tracks portal.
Dietsoda; Yes. Let me educate you mayflies. The grass is flattened in a circular shape here, and the ground is scorched in some places. A fairly big flying machine of some sort took off from here… last night. Definitely last night.
Noob; How do you know it was last knight?
Dietsoda; Why me? I am surrounded by fools! Noob, look. The stalk of this plant was clearly broken when the machine took off. The sap is starting to dry out, but isn’t fully dry yet. It takes about a day and a half for this kind of plant’s sap to really dry.
Fiery; Wow. That’s kinda neat.
Xrunner48; People, enough of this useless dithering. I have repaired the tracking device, it’s indicating something at a custom track called Rock Rock Valley. I think that is where we should go. But here’s something important. That track was built by K.
Sorbet; What would K be doing th-Could he be doing all this?
Xrunner48; There is only one way to find out. We go immediately.

At Rock Rock Valley

Dark; Look! There’s something at the foot of that cliff!
Melee; It’s Oskar! He’s hurt.
Toad; The blood…
IlluhZhion; Toad and I will look around for K. If we stick around we’ll have trouble keeping away from Oskar’s bright, red, shining, delicious, bloo-
Fiery; SHUT UP!!!
IlluhZhion; Oops, sorry to disturb you. We will go now.

Sorbet; Oskar, how badly are you hurt?
Oskar; Feels like - like every bone in my - body - is broken.
MisterCringeh; Don’t worry, we can help you. We’ll get you out of here.
Dietsoda; Who did this? K or someone else?
Oskar; No. Not - him. Don’t know - who.
Dark; Oh, perfect. He doesn’t know. That means we don’t know. And that means we’re stuck. We need to catch this bad guy before he hurts anyone else.
MisterCringeh; We need to get Oskar to the hospital before we do anything else. Can someone call a doctor?
Xrunner48; On it.
Oskar; The cloaked one. He said - he’s - one of you. - Watch for him. One - of you - is a trai - a traitor.

A while later, medical personnel have removed Oskar, who has become unconscious. The rest of the heroes hold a council of war.

Xrunner48; The tracker is indicating a new place. Our enemy is on the move. We need to follow.
Noob; There are some things we need to talk about  on the way.

Fiery; Did you all hear what Oskar said? One of our group is a traitor. I think we can narrow it down to just a couple of people. K disappeared with Oskar, and he isn’t here now. It could be him. However Oskar did say he was not the one who harmed Oskar.
MisterCringeh; Toad99 vanished during the battle at GBA Riverside Park. No one has seen him since. Add him to our list of suspects.
StarSplizz; Come on, we can’t go suspecting everyone here. Oskar might be wrong. I hope he is, anyway.
Nudge; StarSplizz doesn’t want us to listen to Oskar! It’s probably him.
StarSplizz; NO! I wouldn’t do all of this! Your just trying to pick a fight!
Xrunner48; Both of you shut up, I’ve figured out exactly where the tracker is showing. We’re going to Bowser Catwalk, another of K’s creations.
MisterCringeh; I’m starting to suspect him more and more…
Toad; Let’s go already
Dietsoda & Nudge; Dibs on the bad guy’s head!

Later

Popplio; Well, here we are. Bowser’s Catwalk.
Toad; Nothing seems out of place. Let’s check the balconies surrounding the arena.
Knoah; I’ll make some clones and send them up. There’s a door over there I can send them through.

Knoah’s clones go through the door. There is a long silence, broken only by the sound of the clones footsteps. Then the heroes hear a crash. K falls of a balcony-

K;EEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!

-and falls in the magma.

Dietsoda; Well that’s it for K. He’s dead.
IlluhZhion; StarSplizz, come with me. I think I saw someone push K over.
StarSplizz; Alright coming.
Melee; Is there any way we can get K’s body back? Dark, you can handle fire, do you think you can swim through lava?
Dark; Uuuuh not sure. But I guess I’ll try. -*insert battle cry*- *Dark dives into the lava*
Knoah; I need to go in and check on my clones. I’ll be back in a minute.

IlluhZhion; Look, cloaked person at 3 o'clock!
StarSplizz; On it!

StarSplizz flew as fast as he could, but couldn’t catch up to the fleeing person. IlluhZhion passed him and caught them, wrestling with the enemy until they suddenly disintegrated, leaving him holding an old cloak.

StarSplizz; No, no, no no nonononoooo!
Toad; Who was it? IlluhZhion! StarSpizz!
Dark; I got what’s left of K. He’s got severe burns and his armor is gone, but it saved him from being totally incinerated.
Melee; Alright, good. AAH! Cover it!
Dietsoda; *throws his a cape over K’s body* I did not know lava could do that. It’s scary.
Dark; He’s dead. Can you at least respect him now?
Dietsoda; I respect no one.
Popplio; Grrrrrrrrrrr

Dietsoda backs away from Popplio a little. Then they are surprised by a loud crash. An armored flying vehicle blasted through the walls above the balconies and went through the portal. Knoah, looking terrified, was looking through its window.

Xrunner48; Chase it!
IlluhZhion; StarSplizz and I are going after it! Follow us as soon as you can!

IlluhZhion and StarSplizz flew through the portal, but the others, following behind with K’s body, were blocked by the mutant dog and a group of masked people.

Nudge; AAAAAAAGH!
Popplio; AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!
Melee; Popplio come back!

And that is the end of the episode. Can the heroes overcome these new obstacles and find the  one causing all this chaos? Is one of them really a traitor? And will Knoah survive his capture? Find out in Episode #5.

Currently working on next episode. Sorry it's taking so long, but school started again and I have less time.

personality plz

Weeeellll I stopped admissions/applications/whatever a li'l while ago, but maybe you can join. If not now, there will hopefully be a point later where I can introduce new characters.

As you wish.

Thanks!

Episode #3 The Siege

Dietsoda; So, everyone listen up. The others, mayflies, losers, and psychos all, are still stuck in the cave at Toad’s Riverside Park track. You need to get them out. I’m going to go find whoever rigged that trap.
Popplio; Huh?
Xrunner48; He said we have to rescue the others while he goes alone to find whoever blew up the official track’s entrance and trapped the others.  
Popplio; Oh no you don’t! *he grabs Dietsoda’s collar* We’re going to need everyone to get our friends out of that cave, and you’re not going to go off on your own, d’you hear me?! And you will not be so rude to MKPCians, got it?!
Dietsoda; O-o-ok.
Noob; Nice work, Popplio!
Popplio; Was it? It feels so weird. I was mad just now.
Xrunner48; Aaand that’s settled, so let’s figure out how we’re going to get our friends out. Popplio, can you go get K and Oskar? We might be able to use their explosives to break open the cave and confuse those water-creatures.
Popplio; I think I can do that.

Popplio left to find K and Oskar.

Noob; Popplio’s been gone awhile now. Maybe we should go after him.
Dietsoda; Alright, let’s go find the yelling mayfly.
Noob; Enough!
Dietsoda; Alright alright! Let’s go.
Knoah; Yes, quickly, hurry

At GBA Riverside Park by Toadboiiiii

Sorbet; OK, does everyone know what they have to do? As soon as we’re out, we head across the track and into the trees.
Fiery; I’m terrified.
Nudge; Ya, you go ahead and be terrified. Let’s just get this done.
Sorbet; Alright. Melee, Dark, can you start breaking the barricade?
Melee; Hoho yaaa!

Melee and and Dark blast away at the wall of collapsed rock,  Melee with lasers, while Dark touches them and they melt and fall away.

Melee; Here it comes!
Fiery; Outta the way quick quick!
IlluZhion; *cough, cough* The dust! Whoah! Look at that!
Toad99; What are those things?
Toad; No time to figure it out. Get to the trees!

Everyone runs out of the cave toward the trees. The blue-green creatures swarm up the track toward them. Melee fired laser shots into the mob, and some of the monsters fell with black-edged holes in them.

Toad99; We’re almost there! Let’s go through that gap in the trees!
StarSplizz; Yes! We’re here! Are they close behind us?
MisterCringeh; Yes, and there are only about thirty of them.
Nudge; Well then let’s have some fun! I found a nice sharp stick over here.
MisterCringeh; Can you only think of killing right now?
Nudge; Yes.
Dark; Guys, they’re here!
StarSplizz; It was nice knowing you guys. 😢
Nudge; HAHAHAA! *thwack* Take that, funny guy! Get your hands off me, slimebrain! *smack, squelch* creatures die.
Toad; Let’s go help! I’ve got a stick! *smack* creature dies
A moment later
IlluZhion; These are not good fighters. We seem to have laid them all out already.
Dark; Well, there’s enough of them to whoop our-
StarSplizz; to beat us in a fight.
Dark; Ok, There’s enough to beat us in a fight. It doesn’t matter if they’re not very good fighters, there are just so many.
MisterCringeh; He’s right. We need a plan, and quickly. The rest of those monsters are coming now.
Fiery; S-save us… WHAT’LL WE DO?

Xrunner48, Dietsoda, Noob, and Knoah are searching the official tracks entrance.

Dietsoda; There was a fight, something big. Look at these paw-prints. K and Oskar aren’t here. What is this metal box thing?
Xrunner48; It’s a tracking device. Gimme. Hmmm, it’s damaged. I’ll need to fix this and we can see what it is tracking.
Noob; Well, we need to go help the others escape from Riverside Park. We’ll figure this out later.
Knoah; We need to find out what’s up here though.
Xrunner48; No time now, come on!

In the trees at the racetrack, the MKPCians have built a barricade to keep the attackers away.

Nudge; Never thought I’d say this, but I don’t think I can hold these things back anymore!
Dark; We need to get out of here!
StarSplizz; We can’t.
Fiery; WE”RE GONNA DIEEEE!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭
MisterCringeh; Stay calm, there has to be a way out of this.
Melee; Die, foul fiends! *shoots lasers* creatures die
IlluZhion; If I could get a moment without distractions, I could help. Can you all try to keep them away?
Fiery; Everyone give him some room! Please please please!!! Hurry it up lads!
MisterCringeh; Yes, make some room. IlluZhion, I hope you can help with this. We’ll hold these things off.

Fiery; They’re coming through! HELP!
IlluhZhion; Not yet they aren’t.

IlluhZhion pointed at the swarm of water-creatures, and a group of wraiths rose out of the ground. Shimmering silver-white, they attacked the enemy and drove them back, flickering as they warped from one place to another.

IlluhZhion; That will buy us some time. Dead people are so... helpful.
Xrunner48; Well hurry up and use it!

Explosions blew through the larger groups of enemies, and the MKPCians charged again. The creatures fled back to the water, and the MKPCians made it through and escaped the track.

Fiery; Whew. Thanks IlluZhion, that helped. And thanks Xrunner48, Dietsoda, Noob, Popplio, Knoah, I thought we were gonna die in there!
Popplio; *blows bubbles happily* I’m so happy you all survived!
Dark; Well, that ‘parting gift’ you gave those monsters helped a lot!
StarSplizz; Now we just need to track down whoever is responsible for all of this.
Noob; Where is Toad99?
Popplio; *stops blowing bubbles*

Meanwhile, at another track…

Oskar; What are you doing?! You can’t kill us!
???; Really? And who will stop me? You and K have gotten in the way of my plans, you and all your friends must die. You first.
K; Whatever your “plans” are, our friends will stop you.
???; But you don’t understand, I am in their group. I am one of your “friends.” No one will suspect me. You poor peace-loving MKPCians are about to get a rude awakening. Oskar dies now, K will die soon. His skill with technology will be useful to me before I remove him.

Then the person threw Oskar over a cliff, where he landed on a pile of dirt, rocks, and thorny bushes. Then he boarded an armored flying vehicle with K and flew away.


"Nudge; HAHAHAA! *thwack* Take that, funny guy! Get your hands off me, slimebrain! *smack, squelch*"... I think I've been reading too much Brian Jacques