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Messages 3629 - King Mario King Mario
vs13568 pts ★ Champion
battle5368 pts ★ Novice
United Kingdom
Is it too late to join?
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Messages 5032 - King Mario King Mario
vs37826 pts ★ Legend
battle16626 pts ★ Master
Nepal
Dietsoda wrote:
Episode 1: Experimentation Part 1

A ship, larger than company standard, hovers above a moon.

Nudge: Alright so since I'm the boss I think we should go to this moon so we can collect some scrap.
Lely: Why even are you the boss?
Nudge: the company said so.


Nudge pulls a lever and the ship goes down towards the moon. The movement wakes many of the ships inhabitants from their rest. Many slowly stumble into the main room with their company regulated suit on.

Max: *yawns*
K: What's happening?
Lely: Nudge said we are going down to the moon to collect scrap.
Alice: Why did I even sign up for this job?
Chickeny: I know why I'm here.
Dietsoda: And why is that?
Chickeny: So I can beat the world record for the longest fart.
Dietsoda: How does working this dead-end job help in this? - you know what, I'm not even going to ask.


The ship lands onto the moon and the doors open up to reveal a facility near the landing zone.

Nudge: go into the facility then.

All 11 employees rush out towards the door so they can enter it and collect scrap for their job. As they enter Nudge orders them around.

Nudge: Alright, Lely, Cringeh, Max, you all go into the dark corridor that's emanating ominous sounds.
Cringeh: Is it because we're Frenc-
Nudge: YES
Alice: well I'm going with them.
Nudge: yeah sure I don't care.
Max: Are you trying to get us killed?
Nudge: Ye-No, why would I be doing that. The company will deduct from my pay
Max: What was that?
Dietsoda: He didn't say anything.
Twilight: I thought I heard him say something.
Dietsoda: Well I didn't.
Nudge: Stop arguing, just go.
Cringeh: Alright, let's go.


He opens the door to the corridor and, alongside Max, Lely and Alice, walks through.

Nudge: Alright, Chilli, Twilight, K, you go into that corridor.
Chilli: sure, I guess you, Dietsoda and Osc will go the other way.
Nudge: Absolutely.
Chickeny: What about me?
Nudge: Oh yeah, what benefits do you provide?
Chickeny: I brought eggs to eat and a few foxes.
Osc: What. How did you get those foxes?
Dietsoda: Just don't question him.
Nudge: Let's go then, hurry up. We only have until midnight.
Chickeny: Where do I go?
Nudge: Just like, walk around or something, frankly I don't care what you do.


With that, everyone goes down their assigned corridors and Chickeny follows K's group.

Yay finally more than 1 line !!!!1!11!
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Messages 376 - Luigi Luigi
vs10268 pts ★ Champion
battle4991 pts ★ Budding pilot
United States
Name: Brint

Color: Blue

Species: Buzzy Beetle

Personality: Creative

Likes: Building

Dislikes: Going ignored, stuff that required arms to do, being called short
Gender: Male

Weight: the same as any other Buzzy Beetle

Height: the same as any other Buzzy Beetle
Messages 1198 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs13767 pts ★ Champion
battle9374 pts ★ Expert
United Kingdom
Dislikes: being called short


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Messages 1198 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs13767 pts ★ Champion
battle9374 pts ★ Expert
United Kingdom
Experimentation: Part 2

A group of 4 people all walks down a corridor into the dark the covers it.

Cringeh: It's a bit spooky in here.
Lely: Why did Nudge have to send us here.
Alice: Might aswell do our job while we're here.
Max: The job isn't even hard, is it?
Alice: No, it's fairly easy to pick things up,
but we need pay.

Lely: Wait
Cringeh: What?
Lely: I heard something, it was growling.
Alice: It's probably some dog or something, I'll go check it out.


The group follow behind her, rounding a corner and seeing a large creature with gleaming white eyes that is mostly hidden in the shadows.

Alice: So, it isn't a dog then.

Alice keeps on staring at it until it growls again. It sprints down the corridor and, with 2 massive hands, snaps her neck before dragging the body away.

Lely: is she?
Max: it would seem she is dead yes.
Cringeh: 💀
Lely: Should we recover the body?
Cringeh: I'm not going near that thing.
Max: Yeah we will probably all die.


In their state of shock they stand there for a few more seconds before turning to go back the way they came. They see two shining white eyes staring back at them.

Cringeh: No! stay back!
Xrunner48: Bit rude innit.


The eyes disappear as he goes around the corner, seemingly not from the creature that attacked them, but rather someone else.

On the way back the group stumble across a large bolt on the floor that they pick up, to make it seem like they were not completely useless.

Walking into the entrance room they see Nudge, Dietsoda and Osc. They eem to be waiting for the other group.

Nudge: Where is that other one.
Max: She's dead
Nudge:That's a shame I was hoping it would be one of you, guess we still lost someone I don't like.
Did you recover the body?

Cringeh: No, were we supposed to?
Nudge: YES. If we don't we get a fairly large fine.


The group argue in the room, waiting for the other group to show up.
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Messages 1198 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs13767 pts ★ Champion
battle9374 pts ★ Expert
United Kingdom
If you die at any point, you can dm me with a slightly different character (different name and colour) and I will add you into the next moon.
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Messages 291 - Toadsworth Toadsworth
vs5000 pts ★ Novice
battle5000 pts ★ Novice
France
I have 2 characters that are slightly different

name:Cariot
person:loves carriots but is anxious as hell
color: carrot orange
likes: carrots, gay people
dislikes: heights, the dark, and Roblox doors :p
name:  dark Cariots
person: hates carrots and wants to kill him, and everyone else, teams with entities in the 5th episode
color: black, only thing making him see-able (totally a word) is his back having orange stripes
likes:death, anyone who can help him cause death, red paint
dislikes:evrything else except for red paint apparently
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Messages 291 - Toadsworth Toadsworth
vs5000 pts ★ Novice
battle5000 pts ★ Novice
France
when next episode
Messages 10981 - King Mario King Mario
vs35052 pts ★ Legend
battle6102 pts ★ Racer
France
when next episode

When he will be able to write it, and if he does feel like it

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