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Messages 1918 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
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Lely wrote:
I know I'm kind of... late, but can I join ?
Name : Lely
Personnality : Sensitive, kind of annoying, slightly stupid but also slightly smart at the same time, protective, and likes everything that can be qualified as cute

I'll find a way to add you into the story :D
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Name: Jenwren
Personality: Humorous and hyperactive
Colour: White

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Messages 1918 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
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Hello, sorry for such constant updates, but I'm getting closer to finishing episode 2.
I'm letting everyone know so no one thinks that this fanfic has been cancelled.

Hope you enjoy episode 2 when it releases :D!
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Approximately how long will it be until the next episode releases?
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Dietsoda wrote:
Approximately how long will it be until the next episode releases?

As soon as I have enough time to write more. I'll try and get it out in 3 days.
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Been 3 days. Now's your chance to release it, please.
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Dietsoda wrote:
Been 3 days. Now's your chance to release it, please.

You know what, I'll release it in 2 parts. Part 1 today, Part 2 later.
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Morning of the second day (Part 1 of Day 2)

In the wooded area:

Max: Alright, another day. Hey, this bag over here has a label!
Dear Max,
Here are all your items from yesterday.
Good Luck!
-The Host

Max: Neat!

Near the volcano...

MisterCringeh: Uhh! My head hurts so much!
Popplio: OK, cool.
MisterCringeh: Are you still angry from last night?
Popplio: What do you think?

Last Night:

The Host: Hey Popplio, MisterCringeh over here said that you're "not smart enough"!
Popplio: WHAT?!?!?

Back in the present...

MisterCringeh: OK, I'm sorry?
Popplio: Try harder next time.
*Popplio runs away*
MisterCringeh: WAIT!
Nudge: Need some help here?
MisterCringeh: Oh No...
*Nudge smashes MisterCringeh's head with a rock, knocking him out*

Near the cabins...
Buzzma: YESH! I'VE FOUND A SHOTGUN! :D
K: SHUSH! You don't want to alert any of our competitors!
Buzzma: OK :(:(:(

Back in the woods...

Max: Hmm... It's been about one day without food, I should find something
Up in a tree...
Dietsoda: I see my target, bow ready!
*Dietsoda shoots at Max, hitting his leg*
Max: OK, time to g- AAHHH!
*Max tries to climb up Dietsoda's tree, but falls down*
Dietsoda: Time for the final kill! Just need to choose a knife...
Some unknown competitors enter the scene...
Jenwren: What's going on here?
Lely: Yeah, what's going on here?
Max: Wait, who are you?
Jenwren: We arrived here "later than expected"
Lely: Yeah!
Dietsoda: Do you want to die too?
Lely: Yeah! WAIT N-
Dietsoda: So no?
Lely: Ye-
Max: Wow, this is irritating and uncomfortable.
Jenwren: Why is it uncomfortable?
Max: I don't know, maybe I'M BLEEDING OUT ONTO THE GRASS!?
Lely: Y-
Max: DON'T EV-
Lely: Calm down, seriously. I was just agreeing!
Jenwren: Yeah!
Dietsoda: Back on topic, who shall I stab first?
Jenwren: Maybe that one who's on the ground who you shot in the leg?
Dietsoda: I would say "good idea", but then you could just run away.
Max: What do you mean, "good idea"!?

Over on the black rocks...

Fiery: Well, this is the spot. Yesterday we all met up here.
StarSplizz: Yes, it would appear that I remember that.
Lely: Oh hey guys!
StarSplizz: Who are you?
Fiery: I second that.
Lely: Another person who got kidnapped by those people.
Fiery: How did you end up here on this beach?
To be continued...
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Can I join? (I know I'm kinda late)

Name: IlluZhion
Color: Anything dark
Personality: Nihilistic, bloodthirsty, hates anyone mortal, extremely protective of what I cherish, someone saying shit about Lemon makes me go absolutely feral, intelligent, edgy
Species: Vampire
Appearance: Tall, slightly underweight, skin extremely pale, one eye is red, the other is yellow, extremely long black and pink hair that drapes over the yellow eye, has 3 pairs of pitch black wings, wears a white bloodstained tunic that has been scratched along the chest
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xrunner48 wrote:


Near the cabins...
Buzzma: YESH! I'VE FOUND A SHOTGUN! :D
K: SHUSH! You don't want to alert any of our competitors!
Buzzma: OK :(:(:(


K(Steals shotgun)
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40KsKool68 wrote:
xrunner48 wrote:


Near the cabins...
Buzzma: YESH! I'VE FOUND A SHOTGUN! :D
K: SHUSH! You don't want to alert any of our competitors!
Buzzma: OK :(:(:(


K(Steals shotgun)

I'll add that into part 2 lol
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xrunner48 wrote:
40KsKool68 wrote:
xrunner48 wrote:


Near the cabins...
Buzzma: YESH! I'VE FOUND A SHOTGUN! :D
K: SHUSH! You don't want to alert any of our competitors!
Buzzma: OK :(:(:(


K(Steals shotgun)

I'll add that into part 2 lol

I was joking around but ya, that'd be fun. ;)
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Greetings :D!

Just letting everyone know that you will be able to join before the release of Episode 2 - Part 2.

I'm working on it at the moment ;)!

Please provide suggestions :$.

Goodbye for now :)!
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xrunner48 wrote:
Dawn of the first day (Day 1)

It is morning, and everyone are finding themselves in the island's various sections. Next to the waterfall, MisterCringeh wakes up.

MisterCringeh: Huh? Where am I? Is that Buzzma?
Buzzma: Who is that on the hill?
MisterCringeh: Hey Buzzma! It's me, MisterCringeh!
Buzzma: Oh hi :)!

Meanwhile, by the rocks...

Max: I seem to be on a beach of black rocks. Is that a spear over there? Alright, I'll send out snorl-
The Host: I took the strange ball in your pocket during your sleep.
Max: WHAT? WHY WERE YOU LOOKING THROUGH MY POCKETS? AND WHY CAN I HEAR YOU WHEN YOU'RE NOWHERE NEARBY?
The Host: I have speakers, cameras and microphones all around here. Remember, you're all on TV...
Max: OK. Phew. No privacy around here. Got it. Anyway, why don't I pick up that spear?
*Max picks up the spear*
Max: Perfect.

Deep into the forest...

Dietsoda: Hmm... Could do with some knives down here.
Noob: Did somebody say "knives"?
Dietsoda: Yes, I did. And if you don't give me any, I will find some other way to stab you.
Noob: OK, jeez. I found these combat knives here, if I give them to you, can we work together?
Dietsoda: Just hand over the knives.
Noob: I'll give them if you let m-
Dietsoda: I SAID, HAND OVER THE KNIVES!
Noob: OK, I'm sorry.
*Noob gives 2 of the knives, but keeps one*
Dietsoda: Give me the other one.
Noob: No, unless y-
*Dietsoda pushes Noob forwards, knocking him other and covering his cloak and mask in mud*
Dietsoda: Alright, see you later! If you survive, that is...
Noob: Oh no, I'm stuck in this mud. HELP!
StarSplizz: Do you need help?
Noob: Yes please.
StarSplizz: Alright, I'll pull you out.

Back at the rocks...

K: What is this place? Is it a cave?
Nudge: HEY!
K: (OH NO) H-Hello?
Nudge: Don't move, or I'll stab you!
K: With what? You have no weapons! I'm not scared of a little bunny! (Or am I..?)
StarSplizz: STOP!
Noob: Uh... Stop?
Nudge: Oh hello, I was just about to stab K over here, do you want to watch?
Noob: No thanks, we actually came to... what did we come for?
StarSplizz: To stop Nudge from hurting anyone...
Nudge: Like that's going to work...

Back by the waterfall...

MisterCringeh: What time is it?
Buzzma: It's five O' clock!
Noob: Wait, what's that by the river?
K: Some strange yellow object approaching us...
StarSplizz: Should we run?
Buzzma: Oh, Hello everyone!
MisterCringeh: Hello :)
Nudge: Oh no, more people to deal with...
Buzzma: Mean!
*Nudge throws a pebble at Buzzma, hitting her in the forehead*
Buzzma: OUCH! Why are you so mean :(.
Nudge: And why are you so upset over a pebble?
Keeby: Oh hey guys! Fiery and I have been gathering medical supplies on the beach, do you need some?
Fiery: I also found 6 weapons! A pistol, knife, axe, a-
D4rk: That's great, but why are we all here on this tiny rocky area? And where's Max?
*Popplio can be seen sliding down the river like a waterslide*
Popplio: Wheeeeee!
*Popplio flies out of the river, knocking K over*
K: OOF!

The Host: Alright everyone, it is the end of the day. Helicopters will be sent to pick you up.
*Max comes out from a cave, holding a flashlight, two batteries and his spear*
Max: Alright, let's go find a searchlight, everyone. Noob?
*Noob has fallen over and has a knife in his back. Dietsoda can be seen running away.*
Noob: H-help me!
Buzzma: Huh :o
D4rk: I knew that guy was up to something! His gas mask is so shady!
*A helicopter arrives overhead*
Keeby: OK, Let's go!

Back at the cabin...

The Host: Alright everybody, I see that there have been no deaths today?
Fiery: None at all.
The Host: I see. Maybe we need to do something to make you hate eachother? Hey D4rk! Buzzma says you have silly tastes in music!
D4rk: YOU WHAT!?!?!?
Buzzma: I'm sorry, It's true that your Cake-Pop is wacky.
D4rk: FIRST OF ALL, IT'S K-POP, AND SECONDLY, I AM GOING TO BEAT YOU TO DEATH!
Buzzma: You're such a meanie :(! I will kill you first!
The Host: And Dietsoda, did Keeby ever tell you about how violence is wrong?
Dietsoda: You're dead.

This goes on for a while, until everyone has something against eachother...

The Host: So who are you voting off the island?
Popplio: I vote for K. Water parks aren't just for babies!
Dietsoda: Keeby is dead in my eyes.
MisterCringeh: I vote Buzzma. We can no longer be allies.
Max: I have to go with Dietsoda here, he was really violent towards Noob today.
Noob: Yeah, I have to vote for Dietsoda here.
Buzzma: D4rk is such a meanie!
Fiery: Yeah, D4rk overreacted a bit, I'd rather not have him on the island.
Nudge: How would you feel if I voted K?
Keeby: I'm going for D4rk, I care about Buzzma's feelings!
Buzzma: Thank you!
D4rk: I'm voting Buzzma!
StarSplizz: I think that I will vote Dietsoda.
K: I vote for...




D4rk!

D4rk: NOOOOOOO!
The Host: So it's settled. Get on the boat, demon.

The boat is sent off the island...

Max: There's something sad abo-
*The boat explodes in the distance*
Popplio: WOAH!
The Host: I personally strapped 50 tonnes of remote explosives to that boat...
Max: SO YOU JUST KILLED D4RK?!?!
The Host: yes *[
MisterCringeh: Don't get voted off. Noted.
The Host: Get to bed. Goodnight.
*Max is still shocked*
To be continued...

I forgot to follow. Anyways, now that I've died, I'm gonna haunt y'all now
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Afternoon of the second day (Part 2 of day 2)

K: This is the same cave that I was going to go in last time.
Keeby: Alright, let's go! I have a flashlight here, so we can see.
Nudge: Hi there :D
K: RUN!

The pair dash into the cave to escape Nudge...

Keeby: I think we're safe... this cave is massive!
K: Let's not go too d-
IlluZhion: Hello!
Keeby: RUUUUUN!!!!
K: WHERE DO WE RUN!?!?!?!?!
IlluZion: Nowhere :p
*The pair run deeper into the cave, but IlluZion grabs Keeby*
K: KEEBY!
Keeby: AAAAHHHH!
*IlluZion grabs a rock and smashes Keeby to death with it*
IlluZion: Sorry, I had to clean my knives...
Buzzma: Why did they leave me here :(
Jenwren: Well, I heard some screams down there, and maybe you're too loud and annoying to be down there 8).
Buzzma: Nerd Warning :}!
Jenwren: I split up with Lely for this?!?!?
*Buzzma shoots Jenwren in the arm*
Buzzma: Strike one :).

Back in the woods...

Max: If you try and kill me, I swear I'm go-
Dietsoda: Going to do what?
Max: I'll-
Dietsoda: I don't care what it is, you can't do it.
Noob: HEY!
*Noob hops out of a tree and lands on Dietsoda*
Noob: That's what you get for stabbing me! Looks like someone needs some help here...
*Noob uses some experimental healing fluid on Max's wound*
Max: Thanks!
Noob: Wanna travel together?
Max: Sure!

Back on the beach...

Lely: I found something weird nearby...
StarSplizz: What is it?
Lely: I think it's a door?
???: Hello!
Fiery: AAAHHH!
Lely: Who are you?
The Host: You all know what to do, helicopter.
???: OK, I have to go... bye!
StarSplizz: But who are you?
The mysterious figure runs towards the rock beach, and everyone goes back to the cabins...

The Host: So, what happened today?
K: Something in the cave killed Keeby...
The Host: Oh, that would be IlluZion. I'll bring him here now.
A helicopter flies over to the cave...
IlluZion: Go as deep as you can. We can't have them finding you...
???: Alright. What will you do?
IlluZion: I'll turn myself in. We can't have you die.
??? runs deep into the cave.
The Host: Alright, come here. Now.

Now, for the votes...

Popplio: I vote MisterCringeh
Dietsoda: Noob. Just Noob.
MisterCringeh: I'm going for Nudge here.
Max: I feel like I should go for Dietsoda.
Noob: I don't want to vote...
The Host: OK, you vote yourself.
Buzzma: Jenwren :D:D:D
Fiery: I'll vote for Nudge, as he seems quite violent.
Nudge: Fiery
Starsplizz: Fiery
Fiery: WHY?
K: I vote for IlluZion.
Lely: I feel like I should vote for Nudge, as that seems to be the best vote.
Jenwren: Buzzma :(:(:(
IlluZion: I'll vote for K, so I can finish of everyone from the cave.

The Host: The loser is...




Nudge!


Nudge: Alright, bye everyone.
Max: WAIT!
The Host: What now?
Max: Don't send him on a boat...
Nudge gets into a plane and it flies away...










...But it turns around and crashes into the island.

Max: :o

To be continued...
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You think a measly plane crash will kill me? Anyway i'm going to climb to the highest point possible
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Chihiro wrote:
You think a measly plane crash will kill me? Anyway i'm going to climb to the highest point possible

Yes. This is true. I never said you died in the crash...
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Chihiro wrote:
You think a measly plane crash will kill me? Anyway i'm going to climb to the highest point possible

oh thank god so that means you’re not gonna kill me while i’m on the island?
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FieryToad wrote:
Chihiro wrote:
You think a measly plane crash will kill me? Anyway i'm going to climb to the highest point possible

oh thank god so that means you’re not gonna kill me while i’m on the island?

Don't worry you'll be the last of the 3 who voted me that i kill
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Chihiro wrote:
FieryToad wrote:
Chihiro wrote:
You think a measly plane crash will kill me? Anyway i'm going to climb to the highest point possible

oh thank god so that means you’re not gonna kill me while i’m on the island?

Don't worry you'll be the last of the 3 who voted me that i kill

well that’s reassuring…😅

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