[Fanfic] MKPC Gore (Current: MKPC Revival)

I have even more rediculous deaths coming later

Thank you for your hard work as always
I have a question, how do you draw scenarios?
(Word or something)

I think of them during the day or on the spot. However, I already have all the killers and victims planned, so all i need to think about is how it was done (which have basically finished doing )

Episode 6: A boiling investigation

Max: ANOTHER DEATH!?!?!?
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. A dead body has been discovered. Head inside the volcano for more information
Ralsei: It’s obvious who we are  putting in the suspect list. Actually, there are 2
Max: Let me guess, me and Yascamer… WAIT I’M A SUSPECT!?!?!?
Yascamer: …
Nudge: I wonder is MonoBoi will remember to give us the MonoBoi file this time…
MonoBoi: HEY!!! Of course I am
Nudge: The only information we have is that the victim has a stab hole on the back and has been completely crushed
Max: A stab hole on the back? Let’s flip him over and see what is there
Master: It would also appear that a spike has been placed here.
Ralsei: It seems like the person who placed this spike wasn’t very neat. They are lucky to have managed to have work as a weapon
Max: LUCKY!?!?!?
Master: So it seems like he dealt with 2 attacks. The challenge is, which one killed him?
Nudge: I would like to bring up how there since to be a hole where his body is.
Master: Maybe Yascamer will have something to say
Yascamer: …
Ralsei: No, it seems like he is being a coward

Tyshawn: Let’s join them in the volcano
Lely:N-No.
Tsyahwn: But it will be fun
Lely: B-but there is-s a d-dead body.
Tyshawn: So what if ther-
Luq: Leave Lely alone.
Lely: T-thanks
Tyshawn: Well, since you’re so boring, what else shall we do?
Luq: Investigate up here
Lely: That doesn’t involve looking at a d-dead body, so yes
Lemon: It looks like we came on time
Kris: Now we can solve this murder together
Lely: Yes
Luq: Not much so far, all that stands out is the damaged volcano
Tyshawn: Tou know what I’m bored. Weeeeeeeeeeeee
Parakoopa: I think that might be for the better
Lemon: So me and Kris aren’t the only extra investigators
Parakoopa: What would you expect me to do? Sit down and wait for you to finish investigating?
Luq: New information: Thunder cloud
Kris: So, is anyone else going to show up
Toady: No
Parakoopa: Since you decided to come, I would like to know what the prank was that you mentioned earlier
Toady: The prank was that there was no prank
Lely: But wouldn’t that mean there was a prank?
Kris: But then that would mean there was no prank
Lely: Nothing makes sense anymore. What is life? Why am I here? What is in the volcano?
Toady: A nice large hot tub
Lely: Well them I’m going to jum-
Bj:Don’t jump in, it’s a trap
Lely: What trap?
Bj: A dead body
*Lely faints and falls in*
Luq: Final piece of information: iron shard
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. Please head over to the entrance, and step into the elevator as normal

Nudge: You all ready for the second trial?
Lely: Not really, but I do want justice to fill this place
Ralsei: I’m ready to find the idiot who thought he was smart enough to get away with murder, isn’t that right, Yascamer?
Yascamer: …
*They all entered the elevator, ready for the second, and hopefully last trial*

I stress a lot, but REALLY A LOT

I feel like I'm dying in every episode yet surviving in the next one

Well maybe, the ‘death’ will be PERMANENT at some point

Sadly. 😐
You're nailing the death concept though

Episode 7: A second start

MonoBoi: Welcome to the second class trial. Your goal is to once again figure out whodunnit. TRIAL! BEGIN!!!
Ralsei: Yascamer is sus
Yascamer: …
Max: Leave him alone. There is no guarantee that it is him
Ralsei: Is that a confession I hear?
Lely: There is NO way Max is the killer!
Nudge: Lely, the point of this is to use evidence to find the killer, not use your heart to defend a huge suspect
Lely: And how is he a suspect?
Tyshawn: Isn’t it because he crushed the body?
Lely: Yes. He crushed the d-dead body
Ralsei: Are you already scared that your best friend is going to be caught?
Max: IT WASN’T ME!!!
Lely: Ralsei, STOP!!! This is just provoking, and what do you get out of this?
Ralsei: The truth
Nudge: Ralsei, save that for later. For now, we need to make use of our evid-
Ralsei: But we already know it was max
Nudge: No. At the moment he’s only a suspect. Anyway, I think we should start by talking about the spike in the crater
Master: I remember Ralsei saying about how it wasn’t neatly placed. Could that have anything to do with this?
Luq: Perhaps the spike was placed in a rush
Ralsei: Maybe, since a bit was chipped off
Luq: That would explain the iron shard on top of the volcano
Lemon: Wouldn’t that mean the spike had to be placed from outside the volcano?
Kris: Which makes me, you, Bj, Toady, and Parakoopa innocent
Ralsei: I mean, that doesn’t really matter, since it’s clear max is the culprit
Lely: Leave him alone!
Nudge: Actually, I can see some logic  behind his accusation this time
Max: How could there be logic to a lie?!
Parakoopa: His claim is reasonable. I guess we will have to explain it together
MonoBoi: Dam right you will. It’s time for you to be split in half again

Bj: Based on the evidence, It seems like max has been framed
Ralsei: There is a difference between an accidental murder, and being framed
Lely: But there is no logic behind this claim
Tyshawn: But didn’t Nudge and Parakoopa say they found some logic?
Max: They must have… BEEN LYING!!!
Parakoopa: But the crater isn’t a [b]lie
Lemon: But what has the crater got to do with this?
Nudge: The impact of Max hitting the ground caused the crater
Kris: But what is the purpose of the spike then?
Master: The spike would have been hidden underground, stabbing him when Max fell
Luq: But only Yascamer can confirm this
Yascamer: … it… true…

Ralsei: Yascamer finally remembered how to speak. Now we just need to execute Max
Lely: N-no. There is n-no way Max d-did it
Max: Please. I’m begging you. DONT! VOTE! ME!!!
Nudge: I agree, since there is only one person that the spike could have come from
Toady: Did you find out that I hid a spike under my hair
Tyshawn: Was that the prank?
Kris: The prank was that there was no prank…
Toady: Correct. Take a reward of £69420
Lemon: Why would an American get pounds when we are in Italy?
Nudge: Actually we used a warp pipe from Italy to get to this planet
Lemon: We’re on a different planet?!
Nudge: Anyway, back to what I was talking about before which was… Hey master, what was I talking about again?
Master: I don’t know
Nudge: You mean, you don’t want to know
Master: What do you mean?
Nudge: We were talking about how you are the only person the spike could have come from. I know, since I’ve seen you with electricity off
Master: That’s… slightly creepy
Nudge: Actually, to be more precise, Ralsei has
Ralsei: Yep. Your spikes make you look like a steel bug type at night
Max: So… Master did it?
Lely: That would be why he struck you with Lightning. It was to get you to crush him before he found out
Master: FINE!!!
MonoBoi: It’s officially voting time. Vote for who you think did it
MonoBoi: Great news, the votes are in. And 11 people voted Master, compared to the 2 who voted max
Yascamer:… Why?
Master: Truth is, monokuma told me, and 3 other student top secret information about the reason we were invited here. He told me that I was the Ultimate Power Supplier, and about how America is having a massive power crisis right now
Ralsei: He told me that I needed to sabotage a sabotage attempt, since I’m the Ultimate Sabotager
Toady:  I was told that the world got bored without the pranks of the Ultimate Prankster
MonoBoi: And Gamerlion was the Ultimate Therapist, where without him, a lot more people gained depression, increasing the suicide rates in France.
Also, I suppose I should tell everyone there talent… AFTER THE EXECUTION!!!

*Master was in a city, where the power went out, and all the buildings started collapsing. He tried powering things but nothing happened. He then got caught underneath a power line, where he waited as a skyscraper fell on him*

Max is literally at the edge of dying and I'm at the edge of suicide

So this is the wargor (e) that nudge committed, I see how hes a sadist

So what if I right a fanfic where MKPC members kill each other? That’s completely normal among us people

get out of my head
get out of my head
get out of my head
get out of my head
get out of my head

I don't even think I have anything to respond to this statement - your case is lost

Episode 8 (Part 1): Additional house space

MonoBoi: Now that Master is dead, it is time for your talents.
Nudge, you are the ultimate mathematician.
Lely, you are the ultimate animal protector.
Yascamer, you are the ultimate racer.
Luq, you are the ultimate protector.
Bj, you are the ultimate caver.
Tyshawn, you are the ultimate park designer.
Parakoopa, you are the ultimate pilot.
Lemon, you are the ultimate gardener
Jey was the ultimate game developer
Toad was the ultimate royal servant.
Kris, you were the ultimate mayor
Max, you have no talent. The only reason you came is because Lely begged for peach to let you come
Max: I’m here because Lely begged me?
Lely: I did?
Ralsei: So max is a talentless loser. Surprised he has made it this far
Lely: Leave him alone!
Ralsei: You aren’t related to me so don’t boss me around!
Lely: So I should just let you be annoying?
Ralsei: Yeah. I can do what you want, so if you don’t want to get involved, then piss of
Max: Why are you like this
Toady: He probably wants to steal the attention I get from my pranks
Ralsei: HEY!!! I’m not an attention seeker!
Nudge: Let’s go back to our rooms. I’m tired
MonoBoi Already? It’s only 6:00pm. You still have 4 hours until you need to sleep
Nudge: Well I certainly will
MonoBoi: Well then, I guess I best tell you that I have opened up an extra room for each of you under your rooms. They also have an extra room for personal stuff
Nudge: I’ll make sure to check that out before I go to sleep
Ralsei: Honestly, same
Kris: Before we go, please may I say something?
Lemon: What would that be?
Kris: About how I was the ultimate mayor
MonoBoi: That’s because you got tired of everyone going to you for help, so you resigned
Ralsei: That doesn’t sound like a very good mayor to me
Kris: Wait, so if I no longer am that, then why was I invited?
MonoBoi: Since the population in the castle is significantly smaller
Parakoopa: Me, Bj, and Tyshawn will be investigating the new floor while you do that

Ralsei: Have fun checking your rooms everyone. I’m going to make sure to find a good weapon to deal with mr. talentless
Max: Why do you want to kill me?!
Ralsei: Because talentless people like you don’t belong here
Lely: Learn respect for once
Ralsei: Last time I tried that I fell asleep for a while week
Luq: Max, I want to speak to you later.
Max: Ok

Max: So, what did you want to speak to me about?
Luq: It’s about how your ‘talentless.’ While I might not be right, I feel like that was a lie to make sure another murder happens
Max: What do you mean?
Luq: It’s an attempt to mentally weaken you, making you susceptible to an attack, which will keep the killing game alive
Max: Honestly, the only problem I have with being talentless is Ralsei
Luq: Also, i have an idea to help prevent a murder
Max: What would that be?
Luq: We need to get everyone to reveal what there secret item/s are
Max: Ok. For me, it was just filled with snorlax statues
Luq: I had close ranged weapons
Max: I’m going to try getting Lely to join. See you next time
Luq: I’ll try getting Yascamer, to make our group ‘The French Preventers’

Lely: Hi max. So, what to you want to talk about?
Max:  A group me and Luq made named ‘The French Preventers’ where we do what we can to prevent a killing from happening
Lely: Yes please. What do I need to do?
Max: Check everyone’s secret room
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. It is now 10pm. Paintings will no longer be usable unless leaving an area or going to bob-omb battlefield
Lely: Of course that got in our way… but anyway, isn’t that an invasion of privacy?
Max: In situations like this, we need to make exceptions
Lely: Then I guess I’m in
Luq: Glad that you accepted it. I managed to get Yascamer, though he being quite quiet
Lely: I suppose I should say what is in my room. In there, is a giant animal cage filled with the cutest animals
Yascamer: Me… have… race… maps…
Luq: Yascamer, I just want to say something. I know the death of your 2 best friends hurts a lot, but I’m the situation we are in, we have to adapt. We can’t spend our entire lives here depressed. We have to move last thisendeaths, and make them mere memories
Yascamer:Oh… ok
Lely: Anyway, let’s go to sleep

You messed up the letter color near the end? (Luq & Max)
F for Max the Talentless.

Fixed
L for Mr. Talentless

(Insert 12th letter of the alphabet here)
As someone who knows nothing about the show or the games(or any anime)how much sense will the ending make?

The ending should make some sense, since it will follow up into a season 2 (won’t reveal what it is about yet)

The ending makes sense without a 10 minute explanation? Finally, something that doesn't make me feel stupid.