[Fanfic] MKPC Gore (Current: MKPC Revival)

Sorry, I was just trying to point it out. Ended up sounding not funny. My bad.

Episode 17: Killing Game Finale

Max: N-nudge… he and Lely sacralised themselves for us, so we best make use of it
Ralsei: What did that final thing he said mean?
Luq: Probably means you’re gonna die next
Ralsei: HA! No way I’m going to die
???: convince yourself that all you like
Toady: Who is this mysterious voice?
???: Oh. Did you not remember me. Well, I suppose that makes sense, since I am simply making use of his body
Kris: Who’s there?
???: Oh. I’m not revealing myself until I get bored or you figure me out
Max: Who are you?
???: The mastermind
Luq: So YOU’RE the one responsible for this
???: Yep. I took over someone’s body, and your goal is to figure out who I am. If you fail, then I will have to execute ALL of you, well except Ralsei
Ralsei: Ok. Well I’m that case, I don’t feel like helping
Kris: Why does Ralsei get no punishment?
???: because he got away with murder , so while he did get caught, he doesn’t get a punishment. Don’t worry, because if you do get it, he will face execution by himself
Ralsei: I definitely don’t want to reveal your identity now
Luq: Ralsei, this world doesn’t revolve around you. Living life like only you matter isn’t going to help you
Ralsei: I don’t care. As long as I live, I’m happy
???: by the way, you only have 1 minute
Max: I don’t think it can be any of the executions, since all the bodies were crushed
Luq: And so was Gamerlion
Toady: Both Lely and Parakoopa involved explosions
Kris: Toad had his head ripped off
Ralsei: And that leaves the stabbed bitches
Max: Didn’t think you would actually help
Ralsei: Wait, ou think I’m helping?
Max: Saying they were stabbed is helping…
???: 30 seconds left
Ralsei: See?
Luq: I don’t think even in a new form, they would be able to survive the stab
Toady: And Lely wouldn’t have enough time to come here
Kris: So that leaves Toad and Parakoopa
Luq: Parakoopa had a severe explosion, but could survive when his his body was taken over
???: 10 seconds left
Max: But don’t koopas need their shell in order to walk normally?
Toady: Yeah. There is no way he could have made it to the bottom of Tick Tock Clock in that form
Everyone: So that means you are Toad
Ralsei: SHIT!!!
Toad: Yep. I am the mastermind. I took over Toad’s actual self along time ago, but he was able to fight me off, but at that point, it was too late. Since the killing game has already been hosted
Max: But why was any of this necessary in the first place?
Toad: To set up teams for round 2
Toady: Teams?
Toad: Yep. There are 3 teams: Victims, Culprits, Survivors. The Victims and the Culprits are at war with eachother. Your goal is to stop this war
Kris: But aren’t they dead?
Ralsei: Did you fucking forget what Nudge said to you?
Kris: Oh yeah. About how I will get to see Lemon again
Max: That means, another chance to see Lely
Ralsei: Yeah Yeah. Have fun bragging about how you get to see your friends like little bitches
Luq: What’s the problem? You do t have any?
Ralsei: No. It’s about how I’m about to be executed
Toad: This is your punishment for killing Lemon. For the last time, It’s Punishment Time!
*Ralsei then got trapped inside a room. Then, Toad got into a cage as it started heading towards Ralsei. Ralsei did whatever he could to stop the cage, and eventually it stop, until suddenly gaining a huge burst of speed, crushing Ralsei instantly, as Toad vanished*

This finale is very good, it didn't looked like a finale though, since you know Season 2 is confirmed.
You nailed Season 1, I don't know how should we look to Season 2 !
The theming is great as well.
Now can you rank every character from Season 1 ? You said you were going to

16.) Jey: Died too early to become a good character
15.) Toad: Jey but with a personality. The toad at the end doesn’t count sknce different personality
14.) Master: Yet another character with no personality dying early. Also forgot to make a choco lake reference for him
13.) Parakoopa: A later death that lacked personality. I seriously need to work on character personalities, don’t I
12.) Gamerlion: He just wanted no one to die
11.) Bj: He new what he had to do, but failed
10.) Tyshawn:  Yoy could change his name to Ashton, and no one would notice a difference
9.) Lemon: He was just a loyal friend of Kris
8.) Kris: He is just an upbeat character, who was downbeat during case 3. My least favourite survivor
7.) Luq: He either hated on Ralsei, or started a stupid group. Cool character though
6.) Yascamer: Liked how he was brain dead and sowed a lot of emotion
5.) Ralsei: He’s an absolute bitch
4.) Nudge: The genius who new how to end the killing game by poisoning himself to get everyone to leave him so he could secretly get the info
3.) Lely: A loveable yet emotional character. Saddest death of them all
2.) Max: Great character development. He started out as a character that doesn’t really stand out with emotion, but in case 2 you could sense anger, and until Lely’s death, his goal was to be useful
1.) Toady: Get pranked LOL. This season was actually fake. Real season at 69 followers

MKPC Revival: Episode 1

Max: So, now that the killing game is over, where now?
Kris: Up the elevator, I guess
*When they got to the top of the elevator, they noticed they were in a competition different area*
Luq: Where are we?
Toady: In a dark place full of hats
???: Ah. Hello there. Would you be the survivors of the killing game?
Max: Yes but, who are you?
???: Bitch, I’m Ralsei’s ghost
Luq: So you became a hat when you died…
???: No. I never said anything about being Ralsei
Kris: Was it you, Toady?
Toady: No, it was that hat over there
Kris: No, it was you
Toady: Good job
???: Anyway, who I am doesn’t matter. What does matter, is that your base will be at the top of the tower
Luq: Our base?
???: Yes. The survivor’s base is on top of that giant hat
Max: One last question? Why is there a giant hat, and why are all of you hats?
???: because, this place is named Cap Kingdom
Max: Anyway, we should get going. We need to save our friends
Luq: Agreed

Kris: So this is what the tower is like…
Max: This is going to be fun to climb up…
Toady: This is fun and easy
Luq: I don’t think bouncing off your mushroom will do you any good…
Kris: Let’s just leave him to bounce around like a maniac
Max: Anyway, we have to climb up this…
*1 hour later*
Toady: Hey, what took you guys so long?
Luq: The fact that we had to climb normally
Toady: Anyway, we should almost be there

Kris: Ao this is the view from the top of the tower… kind of I settling
Max: Well, I guess we just need to go up that ladder, or the ra-
Toady: Weeeeeeeeeee
Max: Or just bounce up…
Luq: I’ll take the ladder. You 2 can take the ramp
Kris: Ok
Max: Anyway, do you have any idea on how to save our friends?
Kris: I guess we just have to find them. However, we should never give up, no matter the scenario, since friendship is what it is all about
Max: Agreed. Anyway, what is the special stuff that’s up here?
Luq: It seems to be a special item  for each of us. Mine looks like a pair of super strength gloves
Kris: Mine is a wand that says ‘Army Summoner’
Toady: Seems like we have perfect things for our talents. Mine is a portable pair of portals
Max: And mine is a snorlax mech… Seems kind of underwhelming compared to all of yours
Toady: Yes but it could have a missile launcher, or engines to propel yourself
Max: There is only one way to find out
*Max got into the Mech, and found out everything Toady said was true*
Max: Woah. So I do get special abilities with this mech
*out of nowhere, and electronic web caught Kris, and started flying way, revealing the dark spirit of Master*

Yay, it takes place in Super Mario Odyssey !
I hope this new season will be as good as the original, with a similar formula, and if it's even better, then I'm startled

MKPC Revival: Episode 2

Max: Kris!
Kris: HELP!!!
Max: Luq, get onto the back on my me h suit. Toady, I’ll just hol-
Toady: Weeeeeeeeeeee
Max: Or just bounce on ahead… Anyway, LETS GO!!!
Master: SSOORRRRYY!!! Kris is ours. I need him for a choco lake at our base
Luq: So we aren’t the only ones with a base
Master: NNNNNOOOOOPPPPPEEEEE!!! We all have a base
Kris: HELP ME FROM THIS INSANE PERSON!!!
Max: We are trying!
Luq: It looks like we need to move up to avoid crashing into that mountain
Toady: Weeeeeeeeeeeee
*As he said that, he bounced into Master, and fell directly onto Max, causing an electricity overflow, shutting down the suit*
Max: BRACE YOURSELF!!!
Luq: He need to head after them
Max: But how? I can’t use my mech suit due to the electricity overflow, which let me say burns quite a bit
Toady: I’ll bounce over to him, and use one of my portals over there. Oh yeah, and I will leave this portal here. Weeeeeeeeeeeeee
Max: So it’s just us two now
Luq: So we just have to wait…
Tyshawn: Please could you play with me? I have nothing else to do now that I’ve dealt with Nudge, so I hope you say yes
Max: Nudge is here?
Luq: Where is he?
Tyshawn: He is just up there
Max: It looks like there is quite an open space up there
Tyshawn: Not when he’s playing with the Chain Chomps
Nudge: AAAAAHH!!!
Luq: He sounds terrified. What exactly is going on there
Tyshawn: All I did is let him play with them. Have no idea why he is terrified
Max: Now that we are looking at it, it doesn’t look scary at all…
Nudge: IT MAY NOT BE SCARY FOR YOU, BUT DIFFERENT PEOPLE HAVE DIFFERENT FEARS!!!
Luq: So you’re scared of dogs…
Nudge: NO, IM NOT… OF COURSE I FUCKING AM!!!
Tyshawn: No idea how he is scared of dogs, but it makes him quite easy to deal with. Let’s just ignore him and climb to the top of the cliff
Max: I’m not just gonna leave him!
Luq: Max, I don’t think you really can help him from that situation
Max: NO! I’m going to help him!
Tyshawn: Are you suggesting saving a villain?
Max: He isn’t a villain. He has been brainwashed into starting a war with your group, and so are you and the other light spirits
Tyshawn: Are you considering ME the villain. I think I’ll just play Luq and leave you out
Max: Go ahead, because I care about my friends
Luq: I’ll stay back to stop Tyshawn from sabotaging you
Tyshawn: Yay. Let’s go play at the top of the cliff
Max: That was a quick mood change…
Nudge: YOU WANNA HURRY UP AND HELP ME!?!?!?
Max: sorry for getting distracted. Anyway, you should be able to escape now that I’m holding this chain chomp
Nudge: Thank you. NOW JUST DONT LET GO!!!
*As, said that, Max lost grip and let go, but Nydge barely dodged in time*
Nudge: I JUST SAID DONT LET GO!!!Anyway, I’m gonna catch some breath quickly
Max: You do that

Tyshawn: So, what would you like to play?
Luq: How about catch
Tyshawn: Ok. I’ll get out my basic ball
Luq: Basic ball?
Tyshawn: Yeah. I have loads of different balls as my special item
Luq: Ah, so if you needed a poisonous ball, you could
Tyshawn: Yeah, but every time I try throwing one at Nudge, he dodges it. I hope I manage to hit him at some point
Luq: I don’t think murder is the right strategy…

Nudge: Anyway, time for the thing I came here for: that T-Rex
Max: Why do you want a T-Rex?
Nudge: Because I have an item which can change the size of anything
Max: Why didn’t you use it om the chain chomps?
Nudge:Because I was too terrified!
Max: Ok, but how do you plan on using it on the T-Rex?
Nudge: So I can shrink and grow it whenever I like, and when it is small, I can carry it around, granting me a portable T-Rex
Max: The fact that you thought of this is both unsurprising, but also a bit startling…
Nudge: Anyway, it’s time to get on it. Max, you wanna join?
Max: I think I’ll just stick to the side

Luq: You seem to be quite good at this
Tyshawn: Thanks. I’m quite experienced with children’s games, so finding someone who can beat me at this is quite rare, but you’ve managed it a cou-
*CRASH*
Luq: What was that?!
Nudge: Tyshawn, did you really think your plan would work? Because unfortunately for you, but the only thing that will succeed for you is the end of you life
Tyshawn: Aaahhh!!! Leave me alone!
*After that, the T-Rex lunged in for an attack, and mauled Tyshawn*
Luq: You… horrible being! That death was permanent, you know!
Max: What! If I had known you would have done that, I wouldn’t have saved you
Nudge: One of us we’re gonna die anyway, so it might as well have just been me
Max: You sacrafised yourself to end the killing game, so that people could be revived, but you kill someone anyway?
Nudge: Don’t worry, I’m only killing those pesky light spirits.You and the other dark’s are fine
Toady: Hi, I’m back
Nudge: Hi back
Toady: Hey Nudge… why do you have a dinosaur?
Nudge: Because I can shrink it. See?
Toady: That’s so cool
Luq: Anyway, let’s go. Let’s leave this monster who used his T-Rex to kill for no reason
Toady: Ok. To the desert
*They all ran down to the portal. Max jumped in first, then Luq, then Toady, but as it was closing, Nudge also jumped in with him tiny T-Rex*

I FINALLY FOUND YOUR WEAK SPOT ! THE DOGS ! YOURE TERRIFIED OF DOGS ! YOU COULD CRY FOR THEM ! HAHAHAHAHAHA ! *insert psychopath laugh*

Prepare yourself to see a lot of cute puppies in MKPCverse

This is giving me "villain watched the previous episodes to beat the protagonist" vibes.

MKPC Revival: Episode 3

Max: Now that we’ve made it to this desert, where should we go now?
Toady: Let’s go to the town and ask for information on this place
Nudge: You can do that. I have somewhere else to go, so bye
Luq: Hurry up. We don’t want to be around a killer like you
Nudge: Ok. But one question, why do you only care about Tyshawn’s death, and not any of the deaths during the killing game?
Luq: During the killing game, we were pressured to do it. But here, there is NO excuse
Nudge: Anyway, I’ll get going now
Max: Anyway, to the town

???: have you heard that the inverted pyramid is being invaded
???: yes. it’s all over the news dispute only starting an hour ago
Max: What’s going on?
???: Basically, the inverted pyramid over there has started levitating and seems like it is being used for some sort of travel
Toady: I’m gonna assume it’s being used by the dark spirits
???: Dark spirits?
Luq: Basiaccly, 16 unlucky people were invited to a killing game at peaches castle. There were 6 killers, 6 victims, and 4 survivors. The killers got turned into dark spirits, and the victims became light spirits, however, the victims and the killers are at war for no reason
???: So there were multiple killing game groups?
Max: Huh?
???: I suppose I should introduce myself. My name is Kay
Toady: Ok, now what was that thing about another killing game?
Kay: You see, I was put into the exact same situation as you lot, however, the round 2 didn’t go very well. It is said that there are a few survivors, but I haven’t found any of them yet
Max: I feel sorry for you… We are right now in the process of trying to revive our friends, but I will also try to help you re-unite with the missing survivors
Kay: Thanks. I will also join you, but sorry if I get in the way
Max: Trust me, you won’t get in our way. Any form of help for success in our mission is helpful
Kay: So, what’s the plan at the moment?
Toady: Right now we are searching for spirits in the desert
Kay: The only sprite I’ve seen are the ones on the pyramid, however I will quickly double check just in case
Luq: I’ll go after the ones on the pyramid. You two can stay here[/colod]
[color=teal]Max: Ok
Kay: K, I’m back, and I only saw spirits on the pyramid
Toady: That was quick
Kay: That’s due to my special item. It allows me to run around super quick, since I’m the ultimate speed runner
Max: Nice. That skill will come to be quite handy in finding your friends and the spirits
Kay: Thanks. Now, where now?
Max: There seems to be a giant rock structure in the distance. Let’s head over there
Kay: K but how?
Toady: Using his mech suit that got overcharged with electricity
Max: Don’t worry, it works now
Kay: K, but how does this work?
Toady: Could you please find a better word to start most of your sentences other than your name?
Kay: K
Toady: We can’t just turn this into a comedy show…
Max: Anyway. Kay, get into my back. Don’t worry, you will be able to strap yourself in, since we aren’t in a rush
Kay: K, got it
Max: Toady, you can get strapped in infront
Toady: Cool. Also, why does it feel like I’m going to die?
Kay: Domt worry, you have that giant mushroom on your head to prevent you from slipping out
Toady: Yes but, don’t tell anyone, it’s just a hat
Max: So your not a real toad…

This one was pretty fun, it was mostly discussions but it ain't a problem xD, just stating what I noticed. Also sorry for the late response, but someone banned me from the website by accident, so I couldn't post, I couldn't even react. Anyways, 5/5

You read my bio & didn't link a breezeless tutorial smh
I really like this so far. I might actually emulate try out one of the games after this.

Shortest ban ever?

A toxic player insulted Jey's fanfic on the community account, so Max decided to use the IP ban on this account,
but since I logged in, I got banned from the website after that

So your besty indirectly caused your temporary ban. Top 10 anime betrayals

Canon MKPC Lore?

MKPC Revival: Episode 4

Max:So we have arrived at the lake
Kay: Thought it would be bigger, but the size is still good
Toady: Be careful of the liquid, since it is lava, and can burn you
Kay: K. I’ll make sure to touch the water

Luq: What are you up to Nudge?
Nudge: This
*At that moment, The T-Rex flung Luq of of it, onto wooded kingdom, but then the lost grip of the inverted pyramid and fell*
THAT WASN’T SUPPOSED TO HAPPEN
Luq: Whatevwr he’s up to, seems to have gone wrong

Lely: *crying* I guess this is over. The only company I have is you guys, and you can’t even talk to me. The place I’m in is terrifying, and I just don’t think it’s worth living anymore. Goodbye pets
*CRASH*
Lely: What was that? Company?
*He went over, just to see what was there, only to see a T-Rex*
Lely: A-another one?
Nudge: AAAAHH!!!
Lely: Nudge? Where is he? And… where did my chain chomp go?
Nudge: AAAAAHH!!! LEAVE ME ALONE!!!
Lely: He sounds scared…
Nudge: SOMEONE HELP MEEEEEEEEE!!!
Lely: I should go find him
*It wasn’t long until he found him, but as much as he wanted to save him, the light spirit on the outside of him refused*
Nudge: HELP ME!!!
Lely: I want to, b-but I-I c-can’t
Nudge: OH YEAH, YOUR A USELESS LIGHT SPIRIT, AREN’T YOU!!!
Lely: I want to help you, but t he re is something preventing me
*At that moment, another T-Tex came and squished the Chain Chomp*
Nudge: Thank goodness. Now to just… escape from here
Lely: How?
Nudge: Why should I tell you? I don’t need you anymore, you useless fool
Lely: Why do you hate me?
Nudge: Because you are a horrible light spirit which doesn’t deserve to exist
Lely: Please, help me out
Nudge: I think I’ll just let the T-Rex’ deal with you
Lely: You h-horrible person

Max: So, who will check where?
Kay: I’m I’ll quickly check everywhere
Toady: Oh yeah, he is speed
Max: Anyway, I’ll get ready to head over to that giant dome over there
Toady: Got it

Nudge: Ah ha. Now I just need to put this nut into one of the seed pots, and a vine will grow
Lely: There is one over there
Nudge: Thank you victim
Lely:  L-leave me alone. I want to talk to nice Nudge, rather than you
*after that he just walked off, then climbed the vine he just grew*
Nudge: Nice. I’ve made it back.
Now I just need to be quiet so Luq doesn’t notice me
*He snuck over to the wooden maze, where he places a vine bellow it*
Lely: Question: what is that vine for?
Nudge: Oh, so you decided to follow me. Guess I’ll have to demonstrate in you
*He proceeded to wrap it around Lely’s neck, and pushed him off, before barely making his way back onto the inverted pyramid*
Lely: h-h-e-e-e-l-l-p

DON'T. TOUCH. MY. FRIEND. IF. SOMETHING. HAPPENS. TO. HIM. THERE. WILL. BE. CONSEQUENCES.

Permaban incoming
Max is on the war path