Ashton's House (STORY MODE)

Characters:
Parts 1 to 3
Ashton (Me)
MaxBros
TheNudgyHampter
Wargor
Parts 4 and over
Ashton (Me)
MaxBros
TheNudgyHampter
Wargor
Master8
Lol248
Ralsei

Ashton: Ah. What a nice day it is today.
Door: *Knock on the door*
Ashton: Who is that?
Ashton: *Runs to the door*
Ashton: *Opens the door*
???: Hey! I want to play with you!
Ashton: But who are you?
MaxBros: I am MaxBros!
Ashton: OK!
Ashton and MaxBros: *Plays on MKPC*
Door: *Knock on the door*
Ashton: Stay there MaxBros. I will be very quick.
Ashton: *Opens the door*
???: I am from the UK!
Ashton: Who are you?
TheNudgyHampter: I am TheNudgyHampter!
Ashton, MaxBros and TheNudgyHampter: *Plays on MKPC*
Make sure you follow me for Part 2!

TheNudgyHampter:
Ashton and MaxBros: *Passes out*
50 Minutes Later
???: When it shouts Green Light, you run. When it shouts red light, you stop.
Numbers: Ashton is 005 and MaxBros is 456
It: Green Light!
Everyone: *Running*
Red Light!
016 is eliminated!
Green Light!
Everyone: *Running*
Red Light!
455 is eliminated!
Everyone except 016 and 455 have made it to the finish line!
Follow me for Part 3!

Great, you totally ignored me
DID YOU ASK FOR OPINION FOR HAMPTER TO BE IN YOUR FANFIC?
Because with me no
However I don't want to get out of this fanfic, just to see how I'm going to be slaughtered in it XD
And if not you switch to Suqid Game all of a sudden, plus I can't see the video because despite the fact that I'm 14 years old I have the restricted mode x(

Why did you suddenly take me out of it?

What's the video?
I have a horrible thing called restricted mode

Its just a clip saying: “Fuck this shit I’m out of here.” Also, I didn’t give permission for him to use me before he used me, but I am fine with it

And I can't watch this video?

Illogical logic.

They're just coming to your house... There's nothing funny, nothing exciting, nothing.
Sorry to be rude.
Also the door is knocking on herself. I didn't know she could do that.
And why switching to Sh(qu)it Game all of a sudden ?

I wanna take part of this.

???: *Falling from the sky*
You have found a TheNudgyHampter!
Everyone: *Teleported to Ashton's House*
Ashton: I don't have enough devices for you guys to play on.
TheNudgyHampter: Ok...
Ashton: So MaxBros and TheNudgyHampter can play on MKPC first, OK?
MaxBros and TheNudgyHampter: Yes.
MaxBros and TheNudgyHampter: *Plays on MKPC*
24 hours later
Ashton: Alright! Everyone is done!
Door: *Knock on the door*
Ashton: *Opens the door*
Wargor: Hello Ashton!
Ashton: Hello!
Follow me for Part 4

Positive :
Negative : - Hampter is falling from the sky ? Couldn't you introduce him in a better way ?
- It's very hard to stay awake 24 hours and it's very unhealthy. So irrealistic. I woke up very early this morning though, just to see BLACKPINK. but I went to sleep very early compared to usual (I was asleep at 11:30PM which never happens)
  - Plus Max is a Snorlax.
  - 24 hours straight of playing MKPC ; even me, I would have had enough
- Did you as Wargor and where is he from...
- This is still short and boring

EDIT : YOU HAVE 9 YEARS OLD AND YOU KNOW SQUID GAME ? TRAUMATIZING

Luckily TheNudgyHampter landed on a trampoline.

Can I take part?

Yes

Its still a boring introduction. Also, please go back to squid game.

I'm no longer a Snorlax

Seriously Ashton, at least ask people permission to find out if they want to be in your fanfic
And how do you know Squid Game at 9 years old?
I didn't watch that kind of stuff at that age.
And like Lely said, It's just me, Hampter, and you playing MKPC, it's just BORING

Previously
Door: *Knock on the door*
Ashton: *Opens the door*
Wargor: Hello Ashton!
Ashton: Hello!
Time for Part 4
Ashton: Come in!
Wargor: *Asks Ahmad to come online*
Door: *Knock on the door*
Ashton: Opens the door*
???: Who is that Pokémon?
Ashton: Who are you?
Master8: I am Master8!
Master8 Joins the Crew!
Wargor and Master8: Guys, a helicopter in the sky!
Helicopter: *Lands in front of Ashton's House*
Everyone: What is your name whoever is driving that?
Lol248: I am Lol248 and my brother was Lol247 who is dead.
Lol248: Come in this big helicopter of mine!
Everyone: *Listens to Lol248*
Follow me for Part 5!

I'm sorry, but this story doesn't really make any sense.
Random things just... happen.
I had to re-read this many times just to understand what was going on.


Also, using people without their permission isn't the greatest idea .