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Nodac64 wrote:
Invu wrote:
Chapter 3 : Rise Up

Lely's House

1PM. Lely invited Fiery to his house to make him a drink. As Lely was making the drinks, Fiery was whispering to himself.

Fiery : What if I became...
Lely : What are you talking about ?
Fiery : No... you're gonna find it ridiculous.
Lely : I won't make fun of you, I promise. I'm just curious.
Fiery : You will laugh...
Lely : What business would I have doing so ??
Fiery : I don't know but I'm scared. You are still just a stranger who's randomly invited me to have a drink in his house.
Lely : And you're some creep who randomly thought I was a killer with multiple murders.
Fiery : That's just about that. I kinda want to...
Lely : Yeah ?
Fiery : Become a vigilante.

Mushrestaurant

1:30PM. Miles and David are standing in front of the restaurant. Miles is disappointed while David

Miles : Can't believe they got a closure notice just for an incident that was caused by some obscure people.
David : Oh, I never liked their dishes anyways.
Miles : You hardly like anything.
David : Eh, true.
Miles : I should contact Lely to actually revive this place. I believe it's worth something.
David : I believe you're wasting your time.
Miles : When you see potential in something, you must never give up.
David : You really see something in a restaurant where the wooden floor is soaked, the kitchens completely burned and the camera room hacked by the Moon group ?
Miles : Oh shut it.

News Presentation Set

UraniumMan : Hello everyone, and welcome to your usual local news. Today we decided to interview two celebrities again, to have their opinion about the new events that occurred, notably Lely being freed due to his innocence seemingly being proved for now.
Leadgaming : Well personnally I still do not care, as long as I'm not affected. To be a leader, you ignore the nobodies.
Scorchy : Oh my God... well anyways, I think these are amazing news ! I was already very doubtful as to why a guy single handedly serving the customers during a particularly rough night could be a murderer. I believe the Moon group are the culprits. We will definitively need to gather more information though.
Leadgaming : I'm sorry but you care too much...
Scorchy : Too much is better than not enough.
Leadgaming : That's your opinion.
Scorchy : It is. What's wrong with it?
Leadgaming : It is less valuable than mine.
Scorchy : Says who ?
Leadgaming : Me. The leader of all.
Scorchy : Just because you wore quality clothes and obtained expensive cars for free doesn't mean you are a great person.
UraniumMan : Stop arguing you rich bitches before I get you off the set. Oh shit, we're on camera. I forgot. Sorry. Anyways, goodbye, MKPCians. We will meet again this evening or tomorrow. When fate will decide.
Leadgaming : Acting like he didn't just speak in low vocabulary.
Scorchy : sighs Why am I here already ?

Police Station

2PM. The two policemen are sat at their office, as usual. They seem perturbated by something.

Jake : We should probably gather more information and interview everyone who was affected by this accident.
Asher : Do what ya want bro.
Jake : I should fire you, but that's illegal.
Asher : Alrighty my man.

Jake called the people that were affected by the incidents, one by one. One hour later, they eventually arrived.

Jake : Welcome everybody, please take a seat. Thank you for attending this meeting. It is about the Lely case. Do you have any information about the Moon group he talked about ?
Fiery : I do. As I was on the crime scene, blood formed a sentence. "WE NEVER DIE, WE ARE EVERYWHERE".
Jake : How is that possible ?
Fiery : Idk but it certainly was.
Jake : It might have been a hallucination, do you have a picture ?
Fiery : I do hands over the phone

The picture shows a puddle of blood with absolutely no trace of the sentence. However, Jake squinted his eyes, and saw the sentence.

Jake : It's very weird... it might prove that more members of the group might be out in the nature. Some of them might actually have caused the 9:29 incidents. Anyone else ?
Lely : I remember noting down something in my phone that they said "we shall unite to be stronger" or something like that..
Jake : reads it out loud In a place where no rules are here to regulate the world, hell breaks loose. Terrible people unite and they become stronger. To be as strong as them, we need to unite.
Lely : Oh yeah. They told me "they had enough power to destroy the peace of a whole land, and that they were united. And that unison was what made them strong."
Jake : That proves that Moon and her boyfriend were part of an organization that caused these five incidents...
Blobby : And why would they choose 9:29PM ?
David : That's so random !
Blobby : I believe there is a reason behind !
David : Tssk, another one wasting his time.
Blobby : No ! I want to find out what might be hiding behind !
Miles : Is it like the name of a song ?
Lely : Yeah. 21:29, which was almost called 9:29.
Miles : What if they're just fans ?
Leadgaming : No, that's wrong.
Miles : Then you shall explain why. You have been useless for the whole time you were here.
Leadgaming : That explanation just sounded stupid to me. You are lazy to find out a real reason.
Miles : That is real hypocritical. And not everything is about you.
SM7 : ✋️💥🧠👍🏼 (Stop arguing, I think I know the reason)
Scorchy : Huh ?? What now ??
Leadgaming : Ignore, ignore...
Miles : OH MY GOD SHUT UP FOR A SECOND !
SM7 : 😱🤚9️⃣2️⃣9️⃣🔚👷‍♀️ (Due to trauma, I can only rely on sign language. 9:29 is the hour where employees end their shift.)
Blobby : Haven't understood much but I think he said 9:29 is the hour where employees end their shift.
Babymario : It is also the hour where employees in restaurants are serving customers and less in the kitchens...
K : The hour where big shops close...
Dietsoda : The hour where little, smaller criminals cause havoc in the hidden parts of the city... like VC, a mentally sick ghost I have met yesterday.
K : A what ?
Dietsoda : A ghost.
K : Does that exist ?
Dietsoda : I was surprised as well.
K : Wow...
Dietsoda : Right.
Babymario : So we now know it's a group who is causing this... and Moon was part of it. They also chose a very strategic hour... thank you SM7. You triggered the system no one could start.
SM7 : 😊🙏 (You are welcome)
Babymario : Wow, the missing pieces are really starting to come together...
Fiery : On that topic, why didn't Max and Wal come ? Their building got bombed down...
Jake : Their phone was not responding. Just like Asher.
Asher : Wait? Huh? What? Oh, I need to pull out a good excuse. I need to use the bathroom, I will go now.
Jake : I think you did not mean to say that out loud... anyways, what could they be doing ?
Oscar : They must be so busy !
Dudzi : I guess they are. They might be planning to organize a TV intervention...
Oscar : Right ? Well, I hope they will enlighten us soon.
Dudzi : They might be of great help.
Miles : I agree, we need them...

Wal's House

In the meanwhile, Max and Wal...

Max : Oh my God, your spa is actually so good. Resting is key in such moments.
Wal68 : Right ? I thought it could indeed be of great use. ^^
Max : Do you have cocktails around there ?
Wal68 : I do. I wish Mushrestaurant was still open though, so that we could get greater drinks.
Max : It doesn't matter. Bring them all out.
Wal68 : On it !
Max : Ah, reminds me of the time I was a Snorlax...
Wal68 : Oh, you were ?
Max : Long story...
Wal68 : Yeah, you're right. Let's relax for now.

The Dark Ages of MKPC
Chapter 3

The end
...?




VC : Is this a joke ? Everyone had lines but me. Well, I guess I will make them myself. Oh, and I feel like someone just talked about me... and they didn't say very nice things. But anyways, hope you had a good read ! Wait, I broke character. And the fourth wall as well. HAHAHAHA ! Well, good night, you lovely reader...

The real end.
I also don't have a line ! ^^

i don’t know how to respond other than, you didn’t join the fanfic when applications were still open
Messages 11375 - King Mario King Mario
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Nodac64 wrote:
Invu wrote:
Chapter 3 : Rise Up

Lely's House

1PM. Lely invited Fiery to his house to make him a drink. As Lely was making the drinks, Fiery was whispering to himself.

Fiery : What if I became...
Lely : What are you talking about ?
Fiery : No... you're gonna find it ridiculous.
Lely : I won't make fun of you, I promise. I'm just curious.
Fiery : You will laugh...
Lely : What business would I have doing so ??
Fiery : I don't know but I'm scared. You are still just a stranger who's randomly invited me to have a drink in his house.
Lely : And you're some creep who randomly thought I was a killer with multiple murders.
Fiery : That's just about that. I kinda want to...
Lely : Yeah ?
Fiery : Become a vigilante.

Mushrestaurant

1:30PM. Miles and David are standing in front of the restaurant. Miles is disappointed while David

Miles : Can't believe they got a closure notice just for an incident that was caused by some obscure people.
David : Oh, I never liked their dishes anyways.
Miles : You hardly like anything.
David : Eh, true.
Miles : I should contact Lely to actually revive this place. I believe it's worth something.
David : I believe you're wasting your time.
Miles : When you see potential in something, you must never give up.
David : You really see something in a restaurant where the wooden floor is soaked, the kitchens completely burned and the camera room hacked by the Moon group ?
Miles : Oh shut it.

News Presentation Set

UraniumMan : Hello everyone, and welcome to your usual local news. Today we decided to interview two celebrities again, to have their opinion about the new events that occurred, notably Lely being freed due to his innocence seemingly being proved for now.
Leadgaming : Well personnally I still do not care, as long as I'm not affected. To be a leader, you ignore the nobodies.
Scorchy : Oh my God... well anyways, I think these are amazing news ! I was already very doubtful as to why a guy single handedly serving the customers during a particularly rough night could be a murderer. I believe the Moon group are the culprits. We will definitively need to gather more information though.
Leadgaming : I'm sorry but you care too much...
Scorchy : Too much is better than not enough.
Leadgaming : That's your opinion.
Scorchy : It is. What's wrong with it?
Leadgaming : It is less valuable than mine.
Scorchy : Says who ?
Leadgaming : Me. The leader of all.
Scorchy : Just because you wore quality clothes and obtained expensive cars for free doesn't mean you are a great person.
UraniumMan : Stop arguing you rich bitches before I get you off the set. Oh shit, we're on camera. I forgot. Sorry. Anyways, goodbye, MKPCians. We will meet again this evening or tomorrow. When fate will decide.
Leadgaming : Acting like he didn't just speak in low vocabulary.
Scorchy : sighs Why am I here already ?

Police Station

2PM. The two policemen are sat at their office, as usual. They seem perturbated by something.

Jake : We should probably gather more information and interview everyone who was affected by this accident.
Asher : Do what ya want bro.
Jake : I should fire you, but that's illegal.
Asher : Alrighty my man.

Jake called the people that were affected by the incidents, one by one. One hour later, they eventually arrived.

Jake : Welcome everybody, please take a seat. Thank you for attending this meeting. It is about the Lely case. Do you have any information about the Moon group he talked about ?
Fiery : I do. As I was on the crime scene, blood formed a sentence. "WE NEVER DIE, WE ARE EVERYWHERE".
Jake : How is that possible ?
Fiery : Idk but it certainly was.
Jake : It might have been a hallucination, do you have a picture ?
Fiery : I do hands over the phone

The picture shows a puddle of blood with absolutely no trace of the sentence. However, Jake squinted his eyes, and saw the sentence.

Jake : It's very weird... it might prove that more members of the group might be out in the nature. Some of them might actually have caused the 9:29 incidents. Anyone else ?
Lely : I remember noting down something in my phone that they said "we shall unite to be stronger" or something like that..
Jake : reads it out loud In a place where no rules are here to regulate the world, hell breaks loose. Terrible people unite and they become stronger. To be as strong as them, we need to unite.
Lely : Oh yeah. They told me "they had enough power to destroy the peace of a whole land, and that they were united. And that unison was what made them strong."
Jake : That proves that Moon and her boyfriend were part of an organization that caused these five incidents...
Blobby : And why would they choose 9:29PM ?
David : That's so random !
Blobby : I believe there is a reason behind !
David : Tssk, another one wasting his time.
Blobby : No ! I want to find out what might be hiding behind !
Miles : Is it like the name of a song ?
Lely : Yeah. 21:29, which was almost called 9:29.
Miles : What if they're just fans ?
Leadgaming : No, that's wrong.
Miles : Then you shall explain why. You have been useless for the whole time you were here.
Leadgaming : That explanation just sounded stupid to me. You are lazy to find out a real reason.
Miles : That is real hypocritical. And not everything is about you.
SM7 : ✋️💥🧠👍🏼 (Stop arguing, I think I know the reason)
Scorchy : Huh ?? What now ??
Leadgaming : Ignore, ignore...
Miles : OH MY GOD SHUT UP FOR A SECOND !
SM7 : 😱🤚9️⃣2️⃣9️⃣🔚👷‍♀️ (Due to trauma, I can only rely on sign language. 9:29 is the hour where employees end their shift.)
Blobby : Haven't understood much but I think he said 9:29 is the hour where employees end their shift.
Babymario : It is also the hour where employees in restaurants are serving customers and less in the kitchens...
K : The hour where big shops close...
Dietsoda : The hour where little, smaller criminals cause havoc in the hidden parts of the city... like VC, a mentally sick ghost I have met yesterday.
K : A what ?
Dietsoda : A ghost.
K : Does that exist ?
Dietsoda : I was surprised as well.
K : Wow...
Dietsoda : Right.
Babymario : So we now know it's a group who is causing this... and Moon was part of it. They also chose a very strategic hour... thank you SM7. You triggered the system no one could start.
SM7 : 😊🙏 (You are welcome)
Babymario : Wow, the missing pieces are really starting to come together...
Fiery : On that topic, why didn't Max and Wal come ? Their building got bombed down...
Jake : Their phone was not responding. Just like Asher.
Asher : Wait? Huh? What? Oh, I need to pull out a good excuse. I need to use the bathroom, I will go now.
Jake : I think you did not mean to say that out loud... anyways, what could they be doing ?
Oscar : They must be so busy !
Dudzi : I guess they are. They might be planning to organize a TV intervention...
Oscar : Right ? Well, I hope they will enlighten us soon.
Dudzi : They might be of great help.
Miles : I agree, we need them...

Wal's House

In the meanwhile, Max and Wal...

Max : Oh my God, your spa is actually so good. Resting is key in such moments.
Wal68 : Right ? I thought it could indeed be of great use. ^^
Max : Do you have cocktails around there ?
Wal68 : I do. I wish Mushrestaurant was still open though, so that we could get greater drinks.
Max : It doesn't matter. Bring them all out.
Wal68 : On it !
Max : Ah, reminds me of the time I was a Snorlax...
Wal68 : Oh, you were ?
Max : Long story...
Wal68 : Yeah, you're right. Let's relax for now.

The Dark Ages of MKPC
Chapter 3

The end
...?




VC : Is this a joke ? Everyone had lines but me. Well, I guess I will make them myself. Oh, and I feel like someone just talked about me... and they didn't say very nice things. But anyways, hope you had a good read ! Wait, I broke character. And the fourth wall as well. HAHAHAHA ! Well, good night, you lovely reader...

The real end.
I also don't have a line ! ^^

Yeah I'm sorry for this terrible discrimination
Messages 713 - Mario Mario
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The whole Fiery-vigilante thing came up quickly!

Anyways great episode! One of the best MKPC fanfics so far genial
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Messages 11375 - King Mario King Mario
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Kommisar_K wrote:
The whole Fiery-vigilante thing came up quickly!

Anyways great episode! One of the best MKPC fanfics so far genial

Yeah, it did :p Someone was getting impatient.

Aside from that, thank you so much for the positive feedback ! I really appreciate it 🫶🏼
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Invu wrote:
Kommisar_K wrote:
The whole Fiery-vigilante thing came up quickly!

Anyways great episode! One of the best MKPC fanfics so far genial

Yeah, it did :p Someone was getting impatient.

Aside from that, thank you so much for the positive feedback ! I really appreciate it 🫶🏼

No but to be fair who wouldnt want to be a cool epic vigilante
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Messages 565 - Mario Mario
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Nodac64 wrote:
Invu wrote:
Chapter 3 : Rise Up

Lely's House

1PM. Lely invited Fiery to his house to make him a drink. As Lely was making the drinks, Fiery was whispering to himself.

Fiery : What if I became...
Lely : What are you talking about ?
Fiery : No... you're gonna find it ridiculous.
Lely : I won't make fun of you, I promise. I'm just curious.
Fiery : You will laugh...
Lely : What business would I have doing so ??
Fiery : I don't know but I'm scared. You are still just a stranger who's randomly invited me to have a drink in his house.
Lely : And you're some creep who randomly thought I was a killer with multiple murders.
Fiery : That's just about that. I kinda want to...
Lely : Yeah ?
Fiery : Become a vigilante.

Mushrestaurant

1:30PM. Miles and David are standing in front of the restaurant. Miles is disappointed while David

Miles : Can't believe they got a closure notice just for an incident that was caused by some obscure people.
David : Oh, I never liked their dishes anyways.
Miles : You hardly like anything.
David : Eh, true.
Miles : I should contact Lely to actually revive this place. I believe it's worth something.
David : I believe you're wasting your time.
Miles : When you see potential in something, you must never give up.
David : You really see something in a restaurant where the wooden floor is soaked, the kitchens completely burned and the camera room hacked by the Moon group ?
Miles : Oh shut it.

News Presentation Set

UraniumMan : Hello everyone, and welcome to your usual local news. Today we decided to interview two celebrities again, to have their opinion about the new events that occurred, notably Lely being freed due to his innocence seemingly being proved for now.
Leadgaming : Well personnally I still do not care, as long as I'm not affected. To be a leader, you ignore the nobodies.
Scorchy : Oh my God... well anyways, I think these are amazing news ! I was already very doubtful as to why a guy single handedly serving the customers during a particularly rough night could be a murderer. I believe the Moon group are the culprits. We will definitively need to gather more information though.
Leadgaming : I'm sorry but you care too much...
Scorchy : Too much is better than not enough.
Leadgaming : That's your opinion.
Scorchy : It is. What's wrong with it?
Leadgaming : It is less valuable than mine.
Scorchy : Says who ?
Leadgaming : Me. The leader of all.
Scorchy : Just because you wore quality clothes and obtained expensive cars for free doesn't mean you are a great person.
UraniumMan : Stop arguing you rich bitches before I get you off the set. Oh shit, we're on camera. I forgot. Sorry. Anyways, goodbye, MKPCians. We will meet again this evening or tomorrow. When fate will decide.
Leadgaming : Acting like he didn't just speak in low vocabulary.
Scorchy : sighs Why am I here already ?

Police Station

2PM. The two policemen are sat at their office, as usual. They seem perturbated by something.

Jake : We should probably gather more information and interview everyone who was affected by this accident.
Asher : Do what ya want bro.
Jake : I should fire you, but that's illegal.
Asher : Alrighty my man.

Jake called the people that were affected by the incidents, one by one. One hour later, they eventually arrived.

Jake : Welcome everybody, please take a seat. Thank you for attending this meeting. It is about the Lely case. Do you have any information about the Moon group he talked about ?
Fiery : I do. As I was on the crime scene, blood formed a sentence. "WE NEVER DIE, WE ARE EVERYWHERE".
Jake : How is that possible ?
Fiery : Idk but it certainly was.
Jake : It might have been a hallucination, do you have a picture ?
Fiery : I do hands over the phone

The picture shows a puddle of blood with absolutely no trace of the sentence. However, Jake squinted his eyes, and saw the sentence.

Jake : It's very weird... it might prove that more members of the group might be out in the nature. Some of them might actually have caused the 9:29 incidents. Anyone else ?
Lely : I remember noting down something in my phone that they said "we shall unite to be stronger" or something like that..
Jake : reads it out loud In a place where no rules are here to regulate the world, hell breaks loose. Terrible people unite and they become stronger. To be as strong as them, we need to unite.
Lely : Oh yeah. They told me "they had enough power to destroy the peace of a whole land, and that they were united. And that unison was what made them strong."
Jake : That proves that Moon and her boyfriend were part of an organization that caused these five incidents...
Blobby : And why would they choose 9:29PM ?
David : That's so random !
Blobby : I believe there is a reason behind !
David : Tssk, another one wasting his time.
Blobby : No ! I want to find out what might be hiding behind !
Miles : Is it like the name of a song ?
Lely : Yeah. 21:29, which was almost called 9:29.
Miles : What if they're just fans ?
Leadgaming : No, that's wrong.
Miles : Then you shall explain why. You have been useless for the whole time you were here.
Leadgaming : That explanation just sounded stupid to me. You are lazy to find out a real reason.
Miles : That is real hypocritical. And not everything is about you.
SM7 : ✋️💥🧠👍🏼 (Stop arguing, I think I know the reason)
Scorchy : Huh ?? What now ??
Leadgaming : Ignore, ignore...
Miles : OH MY GOD SHUT UP FOR A SECOND !
SM7 : 😱🤚9️⃣2️⃣9️⃣🔚👷‍♀️ (Due to trauma, I can only rely on sign language. 9:29 is the hour where employees end their shift.)
Blobby : Haven't understood much but I think he said 9:29 is the hour where employees end their shift.
Babymario : It is also the hour where employees in restaurants are serving customers and less in the kitchens...
K : The hour where big shops close...
Dietsoda : The hour where little, smaller criminals cause havoc in the hidden parts of the city... like VC, a mentally sick ghost I have met yesterday.
K : A what ?
Dietsoda : A ghost.
K : Does that exist ?
Dietsoda : I was surprised as well.
K : Wow...
Dietsoda : Right.
Babymario : So we now know it's a group who is causing this... and Moon was part of it. They also chose a very strategic hour... thank you SM7. You triggered the system no one could start.
SM7 : 😊🙏 (You are welcome)
Babymario : Wow, the missing pieces are really starting to come together...
Fiery : On that topic, why didn't Max and Wal come ? Their building got bombed down...
Jake : Their phone was not responding. Just like Asher.
Asher : Wait? Huh? What? Oh, I need to pull out a good excuse. I need to use the bathroom, I will go now.
Jake : I think you did not mean to say that out loud... anyways, what could they be doing ?
Oscar : They must be so busy !
Dudzi : I guess they are. They might be planning to organize a TV intervention...
Oscar : Right ? Well, I hope they will enlighten us soon.
Dudzi : They might be of great help.
Miles : I agree, we need them...

Wal's House

In the meanwhile, Max and Wal...

Max : Oh my God, your spa is actually so good. Resting is key in such moments.
Wal68 : Right ? I thought it could indeed be of great use. ^^
Max : Do you have cocktails around there ?
Wal68 : I do. I wish Mushrestaurant was still open though, so that we could get greater drinks.
Max : It doesn't matter. Bring them all out.
Wal68 : On it !
Max : Ah, reminds me of the time I was a Snorlax...
Wal68 : Oh, you were ?
Max : Long story...
Wal68 : Yeah, you're right. Let's relax for now.

The Dark Ages of MKPC
Chapter 3

The end
...?




VC : Is this a joke ? Everyone had lines but me. Well, I guess I will make them myself. Oh, and I feel like someone just talked about me... and they didn't say very nice things. But anyways, hope you had a good read ! Wait, I broke character. And the fourth wall as well. HAHAHAHA ! Well, good night, you lovely reader...

The real end.
I also don't have a line ! ^^

i don’t know how to respond other than, you didn’t join the fanfic when applications were still open
I was joking mate.
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Messages 213 - Toad Toad
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@Invu dropped a new fanfic and I didn’t know about it? Oh well, the past is past. Once again (as always) @Invu has made another smashing hit with the fanfic! I always love the emotion and story of the fanfic, and this is a great read! I wish I was in it, but… after the… thing, with me and the mods, and me feeling more like shit everyday, I haven’t really been on this site as much as I used to. At least I still have friends like @RedPikmin95 and @Dudzi, and it seems that @BFDI_Ahmad17 has forgiven me, along with the other mods. Hopefully, I can start to feel better about myself, and maybe be a better person, not just here, but in the world and my community. (At least reading this helps, even though I missed the “sign up” part. Beautiful fanfic, keep up the amazing work!)
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Mario100 wrote:
@Invu dropped a new fanfic and I didn’t know about it? Oh well, the past is past. Once again (as always) @Invu has made another smashing hit with the fanfic! I always love the emotion and story of the fanfic, and this is a great read! I wish I was in it, but… after the… thing, with me and the mods, and me feeling more like shit everyday, I haven’t really been on this site as much as I used to. At least I still have friends like @RedPikmin95 and @Dudzi, and it seems that @BFDI_Ahamd17 has forgiven me, along with the other mods. Hopefully, I can start to feel better about myself, and maybe be a better person, not just here, but in the world and my community. (At least reading this helps, even though I missed the “sign up” part. Beautiful fanfic, keep up the amazing work!)
You misspelled Ahmad. He didn't get notified.
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Messages 4659 - King Mario King Mario
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Also you people Lely’s having technical difficulties so expect a bit of a delay
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Messages 11375 - King Mario King Mario
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Chapter 4 : Sparkling Night

Lely's House

6PM. Lely was waiting for Fiery to get out of the bathroom to shower. Fiery though, was very meticulous about putting his suit right.

Lely : Will you be done soon ?
Fiery : Yes, I will be out in one minute
Lely : Alright. Dinner will be ready in 10 minutes when I'll get out.
Fiery : Oh about that... I don't want to eat, because I am afraid to feel bloated afterwards.
Lely : Have fun missing out on couscous and grapes then.
Fiery : WHAT-

When Fiery got out...

Fiery : So yeah. This suit is a prototype. I will make a proper one tomorrow. This one will do for tonight.
Lely : Epic. Also I didn't know you had abs
Fiery : That is just a design...
Lely : Ha. Trust me, if you're a vigilante, you will get them soon enough. Anyways, I'm going to shower. You can put the TV on in the meanwhile.

Fiery headed towards the living room and he decided to watch the information channel.

UraniumMan : -As economy was about to crumble, citizens from the land decided to build small shops in order to provide everyone what they needed. Now I'm leaving you with my coallegue, interviewing one of these brave citizens.

IronMan : Why thank you. So anyways, Miles. What was the idea you had in mind while taking this decision ?
Miles : Helping the land as much as I can. After two weeks, I will leave these shops to another citizen that I will hire. In the meanwhile, I plan to restore the Mushrestaurant with a former employee of the place.
IronMan : That is a very good idea. Are you legally permitted to perform such activities ?
Miles : Of course. The papers are here. I got official permission from the land. But even then, I encourage people to help the land even without legal permission. Laws are supposed to control the country in order for things not to get messy. But right now, that should not be the focus. The focus right now is reducing criminality and saving economy.
IronMan : These are very inspiring words. Now I will leave you to UraniumMan again, dear MKPCians. Goodbye, Miles !
Miles : Goodbye !

UraniumMan : See MKPCians. This is what truly helps the land. Selling resources from an almost totally destructed mall. This is much better than being a silly, shitty vigilante.

Fiery : Shitty vigilantes are better than biased presentators...

Police Station

7PM. Jake and Asher were about to leave their job soon, but Jake was still trying to resolve the Moon group affair.

Jake : Hmm... If we take in consideration that the murders happened at the Moonstruck Cave... that means more people might be hiding in there. We need to send someone there. Asher ? Ready for your night shift ?
Asher : Huh ?? Night shift ??
Jake : You slept for the WHOLE day. It's about time you do something.

Moonstruck Cave

8PM. Asher was questioning every of his life decisions.

Asher : Oh my God... this place is full of rats. It smells like blood and puke. I want to go home...

Asher made his way through the darkness, until he tripped on something.

Asher : What was.. AHHHH !!!

Right behind him, a dead body was laying on the ground. And right in front of him, someone was standing.

Leadgaming's House

Leadgaming : Finally, another day that ended. And I felt like I led it all along.

Leadgaming kept saying these sentences, but at home, he felt more alone than ever. He tried to hide his feelings but could never escape from them.

Leadgaming : Time to go in my pool... and listen to some random song.

Leadgaming : I always pretend that I lead something... but what and who am I leading ? I might be rich, but that doesn't change my loneliness...

He kept thinking a little more.

Leadgaming : What if they're all right ? What if I need to stop acting like this ?

And then before he knew it, his cheeks were wet, and not by the pool's water.

Leadgaming : sighs What have I become...

MKPC's Sunken Town

VC : You down for hide and seek ?
K : Please get out of my face...
VC : Oh no, I want to play with you.. I don't want to be alone..
K : That's unfortunate because I do.
VC : Ah... I am so bored.

Peacegor Street



Fireblaze : YOU ! OVER THERE. HANDS UP !
??? : Try to catch me !
Fireblaze : throws grappling hook I'M COMING, I'M COMING !
??? : realizes Fiery is now right behind Oh shit. I need to get out of here quickly. he tries to run but the bag in which he held the jewelry fell to the ground AH, MAN !!!!
Fireblaze : uses this as an opportunity to catch him AHH ! YOU'RE DOOMED !
??? : AHHH ! LET GO OF ME YOU UGLY MUSHROOM !
Fireblaze : In your dreams, you bloody criminal ! Hey Lely ! That yoot's all roped up now !
Lely : Congratulations, Iceblade !
Fireblaze : IT'S FIREBLAZE !!
Lely : Bey..blade ?
Fireblaze : FIRE RUDDY BLAZE !
Lely : Fireruddyblaze... tad long but ok. OH WAIT, BE CAREFUL- FUCK !!!!
Fireblaze : is pushed by the criminal and falls along with him AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
Lely : Oh my... OH MY GOD !!! he runs and throws the safety mattress over the place that Fiery is falling onto
Fireblaze : AHHHHH ! falls right on the mattress OH MY GODDD !!!!
Lely : I'm calling the police...
Fireblaze : No !! DO NOT !!!!
Lely : They're on their way.
Fireblaze : I TOLD YOU NOT TO !!!
Lely : WHY ???
Fireblaze : BECAUSE I DO NOT HAVE THE PERMIT FOR SUCH ACTIVITIES !!!!
Lely : Oh...
Well, shit.


The Dark Ages of MKPC
Episode 4

The end.

Line Distribution

Fiery - 17
Lely - 13
Leadgaming - 5
Miles - 3
VC - 3
K - 2
UraniumMan - 2
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Sorry for the long ass time this episode took to make lmao, I was sick then had no Wifi, then had the family coming over and then my IRL friends. O was very busy but it's finally here ! Next episode will be a bit better hopefully.
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Invu wrote:
Chapter 4 : Sparkling Night

Lely's House

6PM. Lely was waiting for Fiery to get out of the bathroom to shower. Fiery though, was very meticulous about putting his suit right.

Lely : Will you be done soon ?
Fiery : Yes, I will be out in one minute
Lely : Alright. Dinner will be ready in 10 minutes when I'll get out.
Fiery : Oh about that... I don't want to eat, because I am afraid to feel bloated afterwards.
Lely : Have fun missing out on couscous and grapes then.
Fiery : WHAT-

When Fiery got out...

Fiery : So yeah. This suit is a prototype. I will make a proper one tomorrow. This one will do for tonight.
Lely : Epic. Also I didn't know you had abs
Fiery : That is just a design...
Lely : Ha. Trust me, if you're a vigilante, you will get them soon enough. Anyways, I'm going to shower. You can put the TV on in the meanwhile.

Fiery headed towards the living room and he decided to watch the information channel.

UraniumMan : -As economy was about to crumble, citizens from the land decided to build small shops in order to provide everyone what they needed. Now I'm leaving you with my coallegue, interviewing one of these brave citizens.

IronMan : Why thank you. So anyways, Miles. What was the idea you had in mind while taking this decision ?
Miles : Helping the land as much as I can. After two weeks, I will leave these shops to another citizen that I will hire. In the meanwhile, I plan to restore the Mushrestaurant with a former employee of the place.
IronMan : That is a very good idea. Are you legally permitted to perform such activities ?
Miles : Of course. The papers are here. I got official permission from the land. But even then, I encourage people to help the land even without legal permission. Laws are supposed to control the country in order for things not to get messy. But right now, that should not be the focus. The focus right now is reducing criminality and saving economy.
IronMan : These are very inspiring words. Now I will leave you to UraniumMan again, dear MKPCians. Goodbye, Miles !
Miles : Goodbye !

UraniumMan : See MKPCians. This is what truly helps the land. Selling resources from an almost totally destructed mall. This is much better than being a silly, shitty vigilante.

Fiery : Shitty vigilantes are better than biased presentators...

Police Station

7PM. Jake and Asher were about to leave their job soon, but Jake was still trying to resolve the Moon group affair.

Jake : Hmm... If we take in consideration that the murders happened at the Moonstruck Cave... that means more people might be hiding in there. We need to send someone there. Asher ? Ready for your night shift ?
Asher : Huh ?? Night shift ??
Jake : You slept for the WHOLE day. It's about time you do something.

Moonstruck Cave

8PM. Asher was questioning every of his life decisions.

Asher : Oh my God... this place is full of rats. It smells like blood and puke. I want to go home...

Asher made his way through the darkness, until he tripped on something.

Asher : What was.. AHHHH !!!

Right behind him, a dead body was laying on the ground. And right in front of him, someone was standing.

Leadgaming's House

Leadgaming : Finally, another day that ended. And I felt like I led it all along.

Leadgaming kept saying these sentences, but at home, he felt more alone than ever. He tried to hide his feelings but could never escape from them.

Leadgaming : Time to go in my pool... and listen to some random song.

Leadgaming : I always pretend that I lead something... but what and who am I leading ? I might be rich, but that doesn't change my loneliness...

He kept thinking a little more.

Leadgaming : What if they're all right ? What if I need to stop acting like this ?

And then before he knew it, his cheeks were wet, and not by the pool's water.

Leadgaming : sighs What have I become...

MKPC's Sunken Town

VC : You down for hide and seek ?
K : Please get out of my face...
VC : Oh no, I want to play with you.. I don't want to be alone..
K : That's unfortunate because I do.
VC : Ah... I am so bored.

Peacegor Street



Fireblaze : YOU ! OVER THERE. HANDS UP !
??? : Try to catch me !
Fireblaze : throws grappling hook I'M COMING, I'M COMING !
??? : realizes Fiery is now right behind Oh shit. I need to get out of here quickly. he tries to run but the bag in which he held the jewelry fell to the ground AH, MAN !!!!
Fireblaze : uses this as an opportunity to catch him AHH ! YOU'RE DOOMED !
??? : AHHH ! LET GO OF ME YOU UGLY MUSHROOM !
Fireblaze : In your dreams, you bloody criminal ! Hey Lely ! That yoot's all roped up now !
Lely : Congratulations, Iceblade !
Fireblaze : IT'S FIREBLAZE !!
Lely : Bey..blade ?
Fireblaze : FIRE RUDDY BLAZE !
Lely : Fireruddyblaze... tad long but ok. OH WAIT, BE CAREFUL- FUCK !!!!
Fireblaze : is pushed by the criminal and falls along with him AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
Lely : Oh my... OH MY GOD !!! he runs and throws the safety mattress over the place that Fiery is falling onto
Fireblaze : AHHHHH ! falls right on the mattress OH MY GODDD !!!!
Lely : I'm calling the police...
Fireblaze : No !! DO NOT !!!!
Lely : They're on their way.
Fireblaze : I TOLD YOU NOT TO !!!
Lely : WHY ???
Fireblaze : BECAUSE I DO NOT HAVE THE PERMIT FOR SUCH ACTIVITIES !!!!
Lely : Oh...
Well, shit.


The Dark Ages of MKPC
Episode 4

The end.

Line Distribution

Fiery - 17
Lely - 13
Leadgaming - 5
Miles - 3
VC - 3
K - 2
UraniumMan - 2

PureTech engine/5 i'm not in the episode at all :}
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Entity plush
Pink mixed with LOTS of black
The dark soul of a mystical kirby plushie.
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Entity plush
Pink mixed with LOTS of black
The dark soul of a mystical kirby plushie.

This could be in chapter 5.
PLEASE
If im in then call the chapter:
A mystic dark soul
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Entity plush
Pink mixed with LOTS of black
The dark soul of a mystical kirby plushie.

This could be in chapter 5.
PLEASE
If im in then call the chapter:
A mystic dark soul

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Fiery wrote:
Entity plush
Pink mixed with LOTS of black
The dark soul of a mystical kirby plushie.

This could be in chapter 5.
PLEASE
If im in then call the chapter:
A mystic dark soul

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IronMan exists now ig how many different variations of my name do we have at this point
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IronMan exists now ig how many different variations of my name do we have at this point

Spider-Man way better
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