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[FANFIC] Magma Island

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Dietsoda wrote:
Approximately how long will it be until the next episode releases?

As soon as I have enough time to write more. I'll try and get it out in 3 days.
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Hello, sorry for such constant updates, but I'm getting closer to finishing episode 2.
I'm letting everyone know so no one thinks that this fanfic has been cancelled.

Hope you enjoy episode 2 when it releases :D!
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Lely wrote:
I know I'm kind of... late, but can I join ?
Name : Lely
Personnality : Sensitive, kind of annoying, slightly stupid but also slightly smart at the same time, protective, and likes everything that can be qualified as cute

I'll find a way to add you into the story :D
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FieryToad wrote:
xrunner48 wrote:
Dietsoda wrote:
xrunner48 wrote:
Dawn of the first day (Day 1)

It is morning, and everyone are finding themselves in the island's various sections. Next to the waterfall, MisterCringeh wakes up.

MisterCringeh: Huh? Where am I? Is that Buzzma?
Buzzma: Who is that on the hill?
MisterCringeh: Hey Buzzma! It's me, MisterCringeh!
Buzzma: Oh hi :)!

Meanwhile, by the rocks...

Max: I seem to be on a beach of black rocks. Is that a spear over there? Alright, I'll send out snorl-
The Host: I took the strange ball in your pocket during your sleep.
Max: WHAT? WHY WERE YOU LOOKING THROUGH MY POCKETS? AND WHY CAN I HEAR YOU WHEN YOU'RE NOWHERE NEARBY?
The Host: I have speakers, cameras and microphones all around here. Remember, you're all on TV...
Max: OK. Phew. No privacy around here. Got it. Anyway, why don't I pick up that spear?
*Max picks up the spear*
Max: Perfect.

Deep into the forest...

Dietsoda: Hmm... Could do with some knives down here.
Noob: Did somebody say "knives"?
Dietsoda: Yes, I did. And if you don't give me any, I will find some other way to stab you.
Noob: OK, jeez. I found these combat knives here, if I give them to you, can we work together?
Dietsoda: Just hand over the knives.
Noob: I'll give them if you let m-
Dietsoda: I SAID, HAND OVER THE KNIVES!
Noob: OK, I'm sorry.
*Noob gives 2 of the knives, but keeps one*
Dietsoda: Give me the other one.
Noob: No, unless y-
*Dietsoda pushes Noob forwards, knocking him other and covering his cloak and mask in mud*
Dietsoda: Alright, see you later! If you survive, that is...
Noob: Oh no, I'm stuck in this mud. HELP!
StarSplizz: Do you need help?
Noob: Yes please.
StarSplizz: Alright, I'll pull you out.

Back at the rocks...

K: What is this place? Is it a cave?
Nudge: HEY!
K: (OH NO) H-Hello?
Nudge: Don't move, or I'll stab you!
K: With what? You have no weapons! I'm not scared of a little bunny! (Or am I..?)
StarSplizz: STOP!
Noob: Uh... Stop?
Nudge: Oh hello, I was just about to stab K over here, do you want to watch?
Noob: No thanks, we actually came to... what did we come for?
StarSplizz: To stop Nudge from hurting anyone...
Nudge: Like that's going to work...

Back by the waterfall...

MisterCringeh: What time is it?
Buzzma: It's five O' clock!
Noob: Wait, what's that by the river?
K: Some strange yellow object approaching us...
StarSplizz: Should we run?
Buzzma: Oh, Hello everyone!
MisterCringeh: Hello :)
Nudge: Oh no, more people to deal with...
Buzzma: Mean!
*Nudge throws a pebble at Buzzma, hitting her in the forehead*
Buzzma: OUCH! Why are you so mean :(.
Nudge: And why are you so upset over a pebble?
Keeby: Oh hey guys! Fiery and I have been gathering medical supplies on the beach, do you need some?
Fiery: I also found 6 weapons! A pistol, knife, axe, a-
D4rk: That's great, but why are we all here on this tiny rocky area? And where's Max?
*Popplio can be seen sliding down the river like a waterslide*
Popplio: Wheeeeee!
*Popplio flies out of the river, knocking K over*
K: OOF!

The Host: Alright everyone, it is the end of the day. Helicopters will be sent to pick you up.
*Max comes out from a cave, holding a flashlight, two batteries and his spear*
Max: Alright, let's go find a searchlight, everyone. Noob?
*Noob has fallen over and has a knife in his back. Dietsoda can be seen running away.*
Noob: H-help me!
Buzzma: Huh :o
D4rk: I knew that guy was up to something! His gas mask is so shady!
*A helicopter arrives overhead*
Keeby: OK, Let's go!

Back at the cabin...

The Host: Alright everybody, I see that there have been no deaths today?
Fiery: None at all.
The Host: I see. Maybe we need to do something to make you hate eachother? Hey D4rk! Buzzma says you have silly tastes in music!
D4rk: YOU WHAT!?!?!?
Buzzma: I'm sorry, It's true that your Cake-Pop is wacky.
D4rk: FIRST OF ALL, IT'S K-POP, AND SECONDLY, I AM GOING TO BEAT YOU TO DEATH!
Buzzma: You're such a meanie :(! I will kill you first!
The Host: And Dietsoda, did Keeby ever tell you about how violence is wrong?
Dietsoda: You're dead.

This goes on for a while, until everyone has something against eachother...

The Host: So who are you voting off the island?
Popplio: I vote for K. Water parks aren't just for babies!
Dietsoda: Keeby is dead in my eyes.
MisterCringeh: I vote Buzzma. We can no longer be allies.
Max: I have to go with Dietsoda here, he was really violent towards Noob today.
Noob: Yeah, I have to vote for Dietsoda here.
Buzzma: D4rk is such a meanie!
Fiery: Yeah, D4rk overreacted a bit, I'd rather not have him on the island.
Nudge: How would you feel if I voted K?
Keeby: I'm going for D4rk, I care about Buzzma's feelings!
Buzzma: Thank you!
D4rk: I'm voting Buzzma!
StarSplizz: I think that I will vote Dietsoda.
K: I vote for...




D4rk!

D4rk: NOOOOOOO!
The Host: So it's settled. Get on the boat, demon.

The boat is sent off the island...

Max: There's something sad abo-
*The boat explodes in the distance*
Popplio: WOAH!
The Host: I personally strapped 50 tonnes of remote explosives to that boat...
Max: SO YOU JUST KILLED D4RK?!?!
The Host: yes *[
MisterCringeh: Don't get voted off. Noted.
The Host: Get to bed. Goodnight.
*Max is still shocked*
To be continued...

Poor Dark…I should have voted Dietsoda.


If you tried that you wouldn't like the result. paf

Woah woah chill out dude

I'm going to make you say this in Episode 2...

no please i surrender

If the skull emoji was a reaction, I would insert it here.
Also, I'm going to try to release episode 2 today :D
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Hey everyone, I'm sorry I haven't been able to put out episode 2, I've not had much time to write it in, but I'm just letting you know that I am still working on it :D.
Please give suggestions and ideas for later on.
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xrunner48 wrote:
Dawn of the first day (Day 1)

It is morning, and everyone are finding themselves in the island's various sections. Next to the waterfall, MisterCringeh wakes up.

MisterCringeh: Huh? Where am I? Is that Buzzma?
Buzzma: Who is that on the hill?
MisterCringeh: Hey Buzzma! It's me, MisterCringeh!
Buzzma: Oh hi :)!

Meanwhile, by the rocks...

Max: I seem to be on a beach of black rocks. Is that a spear over there? Alright, I'll send out snorl-
The Host: I took the strange ball in your pocket during your sleep.
Max: WHAT? WHY WERE YOU LOOKING THROUGH MY POCKETS? AND WHY CAN I HEAR YOU WHEN YOU'RE NOWHERE NEARBY?
The Host: I have speakers, cameras and microphones all around here. Remember, you're all on TV...
Max: OK. Phew. No privacy around here. Got it. Anyway, why don't I pick up that spear?
*Max picks up the spear*
Max: Perfect.

Deep into the forest...

Dietsoda: Hmm... Could do with some knives down here.
Noob: Did somebody say "knives"?
Dietsoda: Yes, I did. And if you don't give me any, I will find some other way to stab you.
Noob: OK, jeez. I found these combat knives here, if I give them to you, can we work together?
Dietsoda: Just hand over the knives.
Noob: I'll give them if you let m-
Dietsoda: I SAID, HAND OVER THE KNIVES!
Noob: OK, I'm sorry.
*Noob gives 2 of the knives, but keeps one*
Dietsoda: Give me the other one.
Noob: No, unless y-
*Dietsoda pushes Noob forwards, knocking him other and covering his cloak and mask in mud*
Dietsoda: Alright, see you later! If you survive, that is...
Noob: Oh no, I'm stuck in this mud. HELP!
StarSplizz: Do you need help?
Noob: Yes please.
StarSplizz: Alright, I'll pull you out.

Back at the rocks...

K: What is this place? Is it a cave?
Nudge: HEY!
K: (OH NO) H-Hello?
Nudge: Don't move, or I'll stab you!
K: With what? You have no weapons! I'm not scared of a little bunny! (Or am I..?)
StarSplizz: STOP!
Noob: Uh... Stop?
Nudge: Oh hello, I was just about to stab K over here, do you want to watch?
Noob: No thanks, we actually came to... what did we come for?
StarSplizz: To stop Nudge from hurting anyone...
Nudge: Like that's going to work...

Back by the waterfall...

MisterCringeh: What time is it?
Buzzma: It's five O' clock!
Noob: Wait, what's that by the river?
K: Some strange yellow object approaching us...
StarSplizz: Should we run?
Buzzma: Oh, Hello everyone!
MisterCringeh: Hello :)
Nudge: Oh no, more people to deal with...
Buzzma: Mean!
*Nudge throws a pebble at Buzzma, hitting her in the forehead*
Buzzma: OUCH! Why are you so mean :(.
Nudge: And why are you so upset over a pebble?
Keeby: Oh hey guys! Fiery and I have been gathering medical supplies on the beach, do you need some?
Fiery: I also found 6 weapons! A pistol, knife, axe, a-
D4rk: That's great, but why are we all here on this tiny rocky area? And where's Max?
*Popplio can be seen sliding down the river like a waterslide*
Popplio: Wheeeeee!
*Popplio flies out of the river, knocking K over*
K: OOF!

The Host: Alright everyone, it is the end of the day. Helicopters will be sent to pick you up.
*Max comes out from a cave, holding a flashlight, two batteries and his spear*
Max: Alright, let's go find a searchlight, everyone. Noob?
*Noob has fallen over and has a knife in his back. Dietsoda can be seen running away.*
Noob: H-help me!
Buzzma: Huh :o
D4rk: I knew that guy was up to something! His gas mask is so shady!
*A helicopter arrives overhead*
Keeby: OK, Let's go!

Back at the cabin...

The Host: Alright everybody, I see that there have been no deaths today?
Fiery: None at all.
The Host: I see. Maybe we need to do something to make you hate eachother? Hey D4rk! Buzzma says you have silly tastes in music!
D4rk: YOU WHAT!?!?!?
Buzzma: I'm sorry, It's true that your Cake-Pop is wacky.
D4rk: FIRST OF ALL, IT'S K-POP, AND SECONDLY, I AM GOING TO BEAT YOU TO DEATH!
Buzzma: You're such a meanie :(! I will kill you first!
The Host: And Dietsoda, did Keeby ever tell you about how violence is wrong?
Dietsoda: You're dead.

This goes on for a while, until everyone has something against eachother...

The Host: So who are you voting off the island?
Popplio: I vote for K. Water parks aren't just for babies!
Dietsoda: Keeby is dead in my eyes.
MisterCringeh: I vote Buzzma. We can no longer be allies.
Max: I have to go with Dietsoda here, he was really violent towards Noob today.
Noob: Yeah, I have to vote for Dietsoda here.
Buzzma: D4rk is such a meanie!
Fiery: Yeah, D4rk overreacted a bit, I'd rather not have him on the island.
Nudge: How would you feel if I voted K?
Keeby: I'm going for D4rk, I care about Buzzma's feelings!
Buzzma: Thank you!
D4rk: I'm voting Buzzma!
StarSplizz: I think that I will vote Dietsoda.
K: I vote for...




D4rk!

D4rk: NOOOOOOO!
The Host: So it's settled. Get on the boat, demon.

The boat is sent off the island...

Max: There's something sad abo-
*The boat explodes in the distance*
Popplio: WOAH!
The Host: I personally strapped 50 tonnes of remote explosives to that boat...
Max: SO YOU JUST KILLED D4RK?!?!
The Host: yes *[
MisterCringeh: Don't get voted off. Noted.
The Host: Get to bed. Goodnight.
*Max is still shocked*
To be continued...

Can't beat Buzzma to death if you got exploded to death

Mission Failed 💀
Buzzma has not been beaten to death yet.
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Dietsoda wrote:
xrunner48 wrote:
Dawn of the first day (Day 1)

It is morning, and everyone are finding themselves in the island's various sections. Next to the waterfall, MisterCringeh wakes up.

MisterCringeh: Huh? Where am I? Is that Buzzma?
Buzzma: Who is that on the hill?
MisterCringeh: Hey Buzzma! It's me, MisterCringeh!
Buzzma: Oh hi :)!

Meanwhile, by the rocks...

Max: I seem to be on a beach of black rocks. Is that a spear over there? Alright, I'll send out snorl-
The Host: I took the strange ball in your pocket during your sleep.
Max: WHAT? WHY WERE YOU LOOKING THROUGH MY POCKETS? AND WHY CAN I HEAR YOU WHEN YOU'RE NOWHERE NEARBY?
The Host: I have speakers, cameras and microphones all around here. Remember, you're all on TV...
Max: OK. Phew. No privacy around here. Got it. Anyway, why don't I pick up that spear?
*Max picks up the spear*
Max: Perfect.

Deep into the forest...

Dietsoda: Hmm... Could do with some knives down here.
Noob: Did somebody say "knives"?
Dietsoda: Yes, I did. And if you don't give me any, I will find some other way to stab you.
Noob: OK, jeez. I found these combat knives here, if I give them to you, can we work together?
Dietsoda: Just hand over the knives.
Noob: I'll give them if you let m-
Dietsoda: I SAID, HAND OVER THE KNIVES!
Noob: OK, I'm sorry.
*Noob gives 2 of the knives, but keeps one*
Dietsoda: Give me the other one.
Noob: No, unless y-
*Dietsoda pushes Noob forwards, knocking him other and covering his cloak and mask in mud*
Dietsoda: Alright, see you later! If you survive, that is...
Noob: Oh no, I'm stuck in this mud. HELP!
StarSplizz: Do you need help?
Noob: Yes please.
StarSplizz: Alright, I'll pull you out.

Back at the rocks...

K: What is this place? Is it a cave?
Nudge: HEY!
K: (OH NO) H-Hello?
Nudge: Don't move, or I'll stab you!
K: With what? You have no weapons! I'm not scared of a little bunny! (Or am I..?)
StarSplizz: STOP!
Noob: Uh... Stop?
Nudge: Oh hello, I was just about to stab K over here, do you want to watch?
Noob: No thanks, we actually came to... what did we come for?
StarSplizz: To stop Nudge from hurting anyone...
Nudge: Like that's going to work...

Back by the waterfall...

MisterCringeh: What time is it?
Buzzma: It's five O' clock!
Noob: Wait, what's that by the river?
K: Some strange yellow object approaching us...
StarSplizz: Should we run?
Buzzma: Oh, Hello everyone!
MisterCringeh: Hello :)
Nudge: Oh no, more people to deal with...
Buzzma: Mean!
*Nudge throws a pebble at Buzzma, hitting her in the forehead*
Buzzma: OUCH! Why are you so mean :(.
Nudge: And why are you so upset over a pebble?
Keeby: Oh hey guys! Fiery and I have been gathering medical supplies on the beach, do you need some?
Fiery: I also found 6 weapons! A pistol, knife, axe, a-
D4rk: That's great, but why are we all here on this tiny rocky area? And where's Max?
*Popplio can be seen sliding down the river like a waterslide*
Popplio: Wheeeeee!
*Popplio flies out of the river, knocking K over*
K: OOF!

The Host: Alright everyone, it is the end of the day. Helicopters will be sent to pick you up.
*Max comes out from a cave, holding a flashlight, two batteries and his spear*
Max: Alright, let's go find a searchlight, everyone. Noob?
*Noob has fallen over and has a knife in his back. Dietsoda can be seen running away.*
Noob: H-help me!
Buzzma: Huh :o
D4rk: I knew that guy was up to something! His gas mask is so shady!
*A helicopter arrives overhead*
Keeby: OK, Let's go!

Back at the cabin...

The Host: Alright everybody, I see that there have been no deaths today?
Fiery: None at all.
The Host: I see. Maybe we need to do something to make you hate eachother? Hey D4rk! Buzzma says you have silly tastes in music!
D4rk: YOU WHAT!?!?!?
Buzzma: I'm sorry, It's true that your Cake-Pop is wacky.
D4rk: FIRST OF ALL, IT'S K-POP, AND SECONDLY, I AM GOING TO BEAT YOU TO DEATH!
Buzzma: You're such a meanie :(! I will kill you first!
The Host: And Dietsoda, did Keeby ever tell you about how violence is wrong?
Dietsoda: You're dead.

This goes on for a while, until everyone has something against eachother...

The Host: So who are you voting off the island?
Popplio: I vote for K. Water parks aren't just for babies!
Dietsoda: Keeby is dead in my eyes.
MisterCringeh: I vote Buzzma. We can no longer be allies.
Max: I have to go with Dietsoda here, he was really violent towards Noob today.
Noob: Yeah, I have to vote for Dietsoda here.
Buzzma: D4rk is such a meanie!
Fiery: Yeah, D4rk overreacted a bit, I'd rather not have him on the island.
Nudge: How would you feel if I voted K?
Keeby: I'm going for D4rk, I care about Buzzma's feelings!
Buzzma: Thank you!
D4rk: I'm voting Buzzma!
StarSplizz: I think that I will vote Dietsoda.
K: I vote for...




D4rk!

D4rk: NOOOOOOO!
The Host: So it's settled. Get on the boat, demon.

The boat is sent off the island...

Max: There's something sad abo-
*The boat explodes in the distance*
Popplio: WOAH!
The Host: I personally strapped 50 tonnes of remote explosives to that boat...
Max: SO YOU JUST KILLED D4RK?!?!
The Host: yes *[
MisterCringeh: Don't get voted off. Noted.
The Host: Get to bed. Goodnight.
*Max is still shocked*
To be continued...

Poor Dark…I should have voted Dietsoda.


If you tried that you wouldn't like the result. paf

Woah woah chill out dude

I'm going to make you say this in Episode 2...
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Dawn of the first day (Day 1)

It is morning, and everyone are finding themselves in the island's various sections. Next to the waterfall, MisterCringeh wakes up.

MisterCringeh: Huh? Where am I? Is that Buzzma?
Buzzma: Who is that on the hill?
MisterCringeh: Hey Buzzma! It's me, MisterCringeh!
Buzzma: Oh hi :)!

Meanwhile, by the rocks...

Max: I seem to be on a beach of black rocks. Is that a spear over there? Alright, I'll send out snorl-
The Host: I took the strange ball in your pocket during your sleep.
Max: WHAT? WHY WERE YOU LOOKING THROUGH MY POCKETS? AND WHY CAN I HEAR YOU WHEN YOU'RE NOWHERE NEARBY?
The Host: I have speakers, cameras and microphones all around here. Remember, you're all on TV...
Max: OK. Phew. No privacy around here. Got it. Anyway, why don't I pick up that spear?
*Max picks up the spear*
Max: Perfect.

Deep into the forest...

Dietsoda: Hmm... Could do with some knives down here.
Noob: Did somebody say "knives"?
Dietsoda: Yes, I did. And if you don't give me any, I will find some other way to stab you.
Noob: OK, jeez. I found these combat knives here, if I give them to you, can we work together?
Dietsoda: Just hand over the knives.
Noob: I'll give them if you let m-
Dietsoda: I SAID, HAND OVER THE KNIVES!
Noob: OK, I'm sorry.
*Noob gives 2 of the knives, but keeps one*
Dietsoda: Give me the other one.
Noob: No, unless y-
*Dietsoda pushes Noob forwards, knocking him other and covering his cloak and mask in mud*
Dietsoda: Alright, see you later! If you survive, that is...
Noob: Oh no, I'm stuck in this mud. HELP!
StarSplizz: Do you need help?
Noob: Yes please.
StarSplizz: Alright, I'll pull you out.

Back at the rocks...

K: What is this place? Is it a cave?
Nudge: HEY!
K: (OH NO) H-Hello?
Nudge: Don't move, or I'll stab you!
K: With what? You have no weapons! I'm not scared of a little bunny! (Or am I..?)
StarSplizz: STOP!
Noob: Uh... Stop?
Nudge: Oh hello, I was just about to stab K over here, do you want to watch?
Noob: No thanks, we actually came to... what did we come for?
StarSplizz: To stop Nudge from hurting anyone...
Nudge: Like that's going to work...

Back by the waterfall...

MisterCringeh: What time is it?
Buzzma: It's five O' clock!
Noob: Wait, what's that by the river?
K: Some strange yellow object approaching us...
StarSplizz: Should we run?
Buzzma: Oh, Hello everyone!
MisterCringeh: Hello :)
Nudge: Oh no, more people to deal with...
Buzzma: Mean!
*Nudge throws a pebble at Buzzma, hitting her in the forehead*
Buzzma: OUCH! Why are you so mean :(.
Nudge: And why are you so upset over a pebble?
Keeby: Oh hey guys! Fiery and I have been gathering medical supplies on the beach, do you need some?
Fiery: I also found 6 weapons! A pistol, knife, axe, a-
D4rk: That's great, but why are we all here on this tiny rocky area? And where's Max?
*Popplio can be seen sliding down the river like a waterslide*
Popplio: Wheeeeee!
*Popplio flies out of the river, knocking K over*
K: OOF!

The Host: Alright everyone, it is the end of the day. Helicopters will be sent to pick you up.
*Max comes out from a cave, holding a flashlight, two batteries and his spear*
Max: Alright, let's go find a searchlight, everyone. Noob?
*Noob has fallen over and has a knife in his back. Dietsoda can be seen running away.*
Noob: H-help me!
Buzzma: Huh :o
D4rk: I knew that guy was up to something! His gas mask is so shady!
*A helicopter arrives overhead*
Keeby: OK, Let's go!

Back at the cabin...

The Host: Alright everybody, I see that there have been no deaths today?
Fiery: None at all.
The Host: I see. Maybe we need to do something to make you hate eachother? Hey D4rk! Buzzma says you have silly tastes in music!
D4rk: YOU WHAT!?!?!?
Buzzma: I'm sorry, It's true that your Cake-Pop is wacky.
D4rk: FIRST OF ALL, IT'S K-POP, AND SECONDLY, I AM GOING TO BEAT YOU TO DEATH!
Buzzma: You're such a meanie :(! I will kill you first!
The Host: And Dietsoda, did Keeby ever tell you about how violence is wrong?
Dietsoda: You're dead.

This goes on for a while, until everyone has something against eachother...

The Host: So who are you voting off the island?
Popplio: I vote for K. Water parks aren't just for babies!
Dietsoda: Keeby is dead in my eyes.
MisterCringeh: I vote Buzzma. We can no longer be allies.
Max: I have to go with Dietsoda here, he was really violent towards Noob today.
Noob: Yeah, I have to vote for Dietsoda here.
Buzzma: D4rk is such a meanie!
Fiery: Yeah, D4rk overreacted a bit, I'd rather not have him on the island.
Nudge: How would you feel if I voted K?
Keeby: I'm going for D4rk, I care about Buzzma's feelings!
Buzzma: Thank you!
D4rk: I'm voting Buzzma!
StarSplizz: I think that I will vote Dietsoda.
K: I vote for...




D4rk!

D4rk: NOOOOOOO!
The Host: So it's settled. Get on the boat, demon.

The boat is sent off the island...

Max: There's something sad abo-
*The boat explodes in the distance*
Popplio: WOAH!
The Host: I personally strapped 50 tonnes of remote explosives to that boat...
Max: SO YOU JUST KILLED D4RK?!?!
The Host: yes *[
MisterCringeh: Don't get voted off. Noted.
The Host: Get to bed. Goodnight.
*Max is still shocked*
To be continued...
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Episode 1 has been delayed a bit - it's almost finished ;).
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Night 0 (The Introduction)

The boats of participants have nearly arrived on Magma Island, and they can see it in the distance.

Buzzma: YESH! WE'RE NEARLY AT THE ISLAND!!
StarSplizz: That's not a good thing, we just got kidnapped and brought to this place.
Noob: It's going to be fine. We're arriving on the docks now.
Keeby: Alright, let's see if there is anyone on the island and ask for help.

All of the participants arrive on the beach, only to encounter a strange being.

???: Welcome to Magma Island. I hope you enjoy your stay.
Nudge: Who are you and what do you want with us?
???: Might want to work on your manners, if you survive, that is.
The Host: I am The Host, and you know why you're here, you signed the contract!
Max: Oh my...
D4rk: What contract?
The Host: The contract you signed before your trip here! Have you forgotten everything from before your trip?
Popplio: Actually, I have. What happened, Cringeh?
MisterCringeh: You fell asleep and I made friends with Max.
Dietsoda: If Max let me hit you, you would have been asleep forever.
Fiery: I'm going to admit, I didn't read the contract. What did it say?
The Host: You pretty much entered this erm... competition! It's going to be on television!
Buzzma: YAY, I LOOOOVE COMPETITONS!
The Host: Good. Do you like violence and death?
Nudge and Dietsoda: I DO!!!
The Host: That's great. I'll explain everything to you all, and then you need rest. You'll all have a big day tomorrow!
K: One question?
The Host: Yes?
K: How long were we on the boats?
The Host: 3 hours. Now here's what you need to know...

The Host: Each morning, you will find yourself in a random spot on the island. You can find or make your own weapons. As previously mentioned, you will kill each other. Teaming is allowed, but there is only one winner. Once the sun has set, you will be taken to the campfire over here, where you will choose someone to vote to take a boat uhh... home. Each night, you will sleep in the aperture science restoration and transportation cots inside the cabin over there. Do you understand?
All: Yes!
The Host: Alright then, good night, and good luck.
To be continued...
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I will give a few more hours for contestants to join. Episodes 0 and 1 will release today if all goes to plan.

This is my first fanfic, please provide feedback so I can make it better :):$.
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ItzD4rk wrote:
xrunner48 wrote:
Hey everyone, so if you're active on Space For Anything, you'll know that I had an idea for a fanfic. Well, this is it!

DISCLAIMER

This fanfic may contain violence. Do not read ahead or join if you are not ok with that. Also, characters may will get killed off, so please do not get offended if you or any others die, this is a work of fiction intended for entertainment and does not reflect my views on this community and it's members ;).

Anyways, back to the fanfic :).

I will need:

-Your Name
-Colour
-Personality

I would like:

-Character description (appearance, species)

This is about a group of people who must fight to the death and be the last one standing. There will be more explanation in Episode 1.

MEMBER LIST:

Popplio
Dietsoda
MisterCringeh
Max
Noob
Buzzma
Fiery
Nudge
Keeby

Name: D4rk/Dark
Color: Maroon
Personality: Half smart, half stupid. Funny. I always try to entertain anyone with jokes or riddles. Also a BIGGGGGGGG K-Pop fan on BTS, Twice, and Enhypen. So yea
Species: Demon
Appearance: A guy with black clothes, black skin, black hair, and black horns

Maroon is taken, are you fine with crimson?
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Name: Noob

Colour: orange

Personality: I’m pretty smart and I don’t want to kill unless protecting my friends or myself. Also I’m pretty optimistic and won’t give up hope about surviving on the island.

Species: Shy Guy

Appearance: The shy guy in pfp

See you in Episode 1 :p (or episode 0 if I make that)!
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Prologue

It is a warm, sunny day. Three friends are enjoying the beach as a mysterious boat appears by the docks.

Poppilo: Hey Dietsoda! How long do you think I could stay in the water?
Dietsoda: Not long if I have anything to say about it.
MisterCringeh: Guys, stop fighting. It's been 5 minutes and you two keep arguing. It's really hard to concentrate with you two fighting!
Dietsoda: Alright, two murders on the beach today.
Popplio: What did I do? I'll buy ice lollies to cheer us all up, then can we go to the water park? PLEASE!?
???: Hey, you guys!
All: Huh?
???: I've got a um... petition for you to sign!
MisterCringeh: It's a trap, I know.
???: uhhh... No, it isn't.
Popplio: Then where is it?
???: It's on my boat, I can take you all there.
Dietsoda: Sounds fine to me, as long as there are weapons on the boat.
MisterCringeh: What is this about?
???: Cleaning up the uhh... beaches! Hiring people to clean the beaches!
Popplio: Good, these shores are really dirty.
???: Alright, come with me!

The group follow this stranger to his boat, even though no one trusts him.

???: So I need to sign here and- Oh. Hello!

MisterCringeh: Who are you?
Max: My name is Max, are you also here to sign this petition?
Popplio: Yes, although it sounds a bit suspicious.
???: OK, you three need to sign here.

The mystery man points to a large sheet of paper, which has many small words printed into it.

???: Each of you pick a coloured crayon, and write your name here.
Dietsoda: Is it alright if a draw a shovel next to it?
???: Why?
Dietsoda: Nevermind...

The gang and their new friend Max sign the contract petition.

???: HehehehehAHEAHEHAHEAHEHEHASEAWEEAAAAAAAAA!
MisterCringeh: Well this guy certainly isn't a maniac for sure. He's not going to kill us, right Popplio?
Popplio: Oh yes, of course he isn't. We're all perfectly safe and we'll be fine!

The stranger steps off the boat as it drifts away.

Max: What are you doing?!
???: Calling in to base, mission success. Four participants coming your way!
MisterCringeh and Popplio: I KNEW IT WAS A TRICK!
Dietsoda: Who cares if it was a trick unless murder is involved?
???: Alright, got some more over here coming over. Talk later.
???: Alright, I understand. Alright, you lot. I will be seeing you on Magma Island...
To be continued...
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RS_Senko68 wrote:
-Max
-Teal
-Kind, but violent towards those who attack his friends, and can quickly get angry in certain situations, ah and owns a Snorlax as a Pokemon
Appearance: Pfp

Then you can take elements from other fanfics in which I am

Alright, I'll try to add you in but I've almost finished writing the prologue :s.
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I will write a prologue when the next person joins :).
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Hey everyone, so if you're active on Space For Anything, you'll know that I had an idea for a fanfic. Well, this is it!

DISCLAIMER

This fanfic may contain violence. Do not read ahead or join if you are not ok with that. Also, characters may will get killed off, so please do not get offended if you or any others die, this is a work of fiction intended for entertainment and does not reflect my views on this community and it's members ;).

Anyways, back to the fanfic :).

I will need:

-Your Name
-Colour
-Personality

I would like:

-Character description (appearance, species)

This is about a group of people who must fight to the death and be the last one standing. There will be more explanation in Episode 1.

MEMBER LIST:

Popplio
Dietsoda
MisterCringeh
Max
Noob
Buzzma
Fiery
Nudge
Keeby
D4rk
Starsplizz
K
Lely
Jenwren
IlluZhion
@ashton68 (needs to provide info)
Sorbet
DEAD PARTICIPANTS:
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D4rk (Kicked off island)
Keeby (Crushed by Illuzhion)
Popplio (Shot by Jenwren)
Jenwren (Speared by Max)
MisterCringeh (Dead by bread)
Buzzma (Skill Issue)
StarSplizz (Suffocation)

EXTRA CHARACTERS:
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??? (Soon to be revealed...)
xrunner
??? (Again, soon to be revealed)
coolguy439 (will be relevant trust)

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Wal68 wrote:
Some stuff on my profile isn't translated at all:
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Advent Calendar (year) ------> (year) Advent Calendar

(NOTE: For the 2022 and 2023 editions of the Advent Calendar, the language in which de title is displayed seems to depend on the country from which the title owner comes, regardless of the language currently selected by the profile viewer (ex.: Max has the 2022/2023 titles always displayed in french even if the website is set to english, whereas Nudge has them always displayed in english even if the website is set to french)! You should fix that so that the title is always displayed in the same language as the one chosen by the profile viewer!
The 2018 edition, on the other hand, has all of its titles displayed in french no matter what, even though it uses the same titles as the 2022/2023 editions, you should fix that to make them appear in english when the website is set to that language!)

I also suggest to change the english name of the Advent Calendar winner title Winter Prodigy to Winter Wonder (sounds better imo)

Festival MKPC ------> MKPC Festival
Gagnant du Concours de Création de Niveaux ------> Level Building Contest Winner
Oscars (year) ------> (year) Oscars
Meilleur rédacteur de news ------> Best news publisher
Meilleur coureur ------> Best racer

Translation suggestions for stuff like this that isn't on my profile:
Meilleur créateur de circuits ------> Best track builder
Meilleur créateur de fanfic ------> Best fanfic writer
Membre le plus populaire ------> Most popular member
Meilleur animateur ------> Best event host
Joueur de l'année ------> Player of the year
Gagnant du Concours de Création Artistique ------> Artistic Creation Contest Winner
Festivalier ------> Festival Goer
Grand Festivalier ------> Great Festival Goer
Héraut du Chaos ------> Chaos Hero
Héros Chaotique de Bronze ------> Bronze Chaotic Hero
Héros Chaotique d'Argent ------> Silver Chaotic Hero
Héros Chaotique d'Or ------> Golden Chaotic Hero
Concours de Fanfic Hivernal ------> Winter Fanfic Contest
Écrivain devant la Cheminée ------> Writer in front of the Chimney
Écrivain avec un Chocolat Chaud ------> Writer with a Hot Chocolate
Combattant Aérien ------> Aerial Fighter
Guerrier Céleste de Bronze ------> Bronze Celestial Warrior
Guerrier Céleste d'Argent ------> Silver Celestial Warrior
Guerrier Céleste d'Or ------> Golden Celestial Warrior

Also, the MKWC winner prediction titles always appear in english and aren't translated to french!

(I hope I forgot nothing and included all non-translated event-specific titles here...)

Oh, and also the forum rank associated with a number of messages superior or equal to 400 but inferior to 500 is called Luigi d'argent in french, but Metal Luigi in english! Which one is correct? :p

I mostly agree with this except switching the year from end to start doesn't really matter (it makes sense either way).
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in the game when you go on a track it says "Rate this circuit!" It should have been "Rate this track!"

No, this game calls courses "circuits" which is still proper English so it doesn't matter.
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I just want to apologise for my messages in that chain, I know I should've just stopped posting 😅.

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