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Could I join?
Name: Dietsoda
Colour:#0e6609
Species: elf (not Christmas kind, I hate them for some reason)
Personality: mysterious and begrudgingly works with the others while not wanting to.

Not really an og if they joined this year like you. This site has been up probably longer than you've been alive.

But there have only been 6 including Nudge ending the world.

But how though?

Lack of realism

That is alot better with characters who actually have character traits and everything makes sense. Sadly the fact Master and LOL were in it makes it slightly inaccurate to the original although it makes more narrative sense for them to have been there from the start.

Please don't put me in your next part. I really don't want to end up within your fan-fic. Especially not as a corpse.

I fully agree with you.

I mean like, Lol248 wanted to join, I'm fine with that, but 2/3 of the other people that you added said they didn't ask to join your fanfic and I really think you should just remove them from it.

I kind of feel like this fan fic is extremely uncalled for, besides, it's not that good. It literally turns into squid game and only 2/456 people die, thats more unrealistic than Wargor going over to somebody's house he doesnt know. I feel this could be interesting if it was only Ashton, people who wanted to be in his fanfic and maybe some fictional people.

Cope

Also to make slight edits to a part of Rylanor's last stand

The Wii deserved better than you, oh Wii U
The Wii deserved better than all of us.

You mean the music box?

Episode 1: A security briefing:

A large group of people sit in a room. They wait. They are all wearing the purple uniform of their new employers. A few of them make general chatter, having learnt eachothers names earlier.

Cringeh: So, why did you get the job?
Popplio: well there is a water park in this mall and they give us 50% off in select locations in the mall, including the water park. Why did you sign up?
Cringeh: well I need some money while I get a better job and this seemed fairly easy.
Nodac: I got the job so I could protect the local shops.

Someone suddenly began speaking through the radio system.

Sm7: Uh, hello. All of you have been employed to keep this mall secure during the night. As you may know, Freddy Fazbear's Pizza has been shut down after the incident however, the company that own this mall have told me to inform you that the animitronic characters from there do get a bit quirky at night. They will wander around and may... they may... they might stuff your body into a suit, believing you to be an endoskeleton without its outer costume. If you see one of the approaching you I would suggest you hide as quickly as possible. Also in the contract you signed you acknowledged any injuries, or death, were not caused by us and you, or your family, can not sue. Uh, that should be all. See you on the flip side.

The information causes some uproar within the group. Many of the gaurds had not believed there was a risk of death.

Cringeh: What even was the incident
Nodac: It's not confirmed but a toddler in the kids cove section was heard screaming in fright and everything closed right after.

Nodac chuckles slightly

Nodac: apparently they found the body of a girl within the Mangle animitronic suit, or at least parts of it. It seems someone reassembled it after hiding the body inside just the night before it occurred.
Popplio: That's horrible. Do they know who it was?
Nodac: the body might match up with a girl who went missing near here. Not even the first missing person case. There have been more in the last 7 weeks. The streak began after Someone was murdered just outside this building.
Cringeh: So there is a killer on the loose? I no longer feel that safe with this job.

The radio suddenly goes back on.

Sm7: I forgot to mention, you will be split up among the mall, and from what I've heard, you should keep someone in the Freddy Fazbear's Pizza winding up the music box in the prize corner because if you don't, the puppet will come out. It seems the puppet is especially hostile. I never liked it much, it always creeped me out a bit. The toy animitronics also have the functionality to recognise people with criminal records so if you have a criminal record, that may be an issue...

..oh yeah, before I forget, all of you have been given a firearm, a flashlight and a company phone. The phone should show you where you've been assigned. Good luck and I'll see you on the flip side, again.

All the guards check their company phones to see where they have been assigned.

Cringeh: where are you assigned?
Popplio: I've been assigned to the toy shop.
Cringeh: same!!!

What will happen next. death
Find out later.

Of course, I want more characters to kill

Sorry but the only possession option left is Chica. You could either go with that or be one of the other roles (preferably investigator )

Edit: I'm just adding you as investigator with the colour olive

Prologue: A string of unfortunate events:

A group of friends walk towards the car park. The nights gloom covers all and they walk on in the shade. The trees and bushes barely visible. The whirring of machinery is audible as they pass by a door entering one of the many businesses in the mall. Amongst them, one looks at their shoe, their shoelace was undone and it caused some annoyance. He goes down to his knees to tie it once again. The others in the group look at him and halt their advance.

Dietsoda: Guys, just go on without me. I just need to tie my shoelace, I'll be with you in a few seconds.
Krazey: You sure you don't need all of us to watch over you like guards. In the night. Like some night guards.
Dietsoda: Yes, I am fairly certain nothing bad will happen.
K: Are you sure? I mean it won't take too much time.
Lely: Dietsoda wants us to leave so we should just go.
Nudge: And we can leave without him.

The group decide to go on without Dietsoda, round the corner. As they do, from the nearby bushes, a car drives out. It's headlights illuminate Dietsoda and blind him with their light.

A man steps out.

Seven weeks later:

The same group, depleted in number, stand around in Chili's flat. The atmosphere within the room is grim.

Krazey: Has anyone else gone "missing"
Chili: Why do you say missing as if they are dead. I mean, no bodies have been found since...
Krazey: ...Since Dietsoda was found. We could have stopped that from happening. If only we has stayed a few seconds longer.
Chili: Do you genuinely think it would have made a difference if we stayed? They had a knife. They knew how to use it. Where to aim to kill quickly. They were gone the instant they had killed him. We couldn't have done anything.
Krazey: How do you know that? The killer may have stayed away if we remained as a group.
Lely: I agree. I mean, they have only killed people when they are alone. If we stayed as a group we could have stopped all the disappearances. Nudge, Hikari, K, Choco.
Chili: You just have survivours guilt.
Krazey: I have an idea.
Lely: And it is?
Krazey: All the murders took place at the mall right? Why don't we go there to investigate it and see if we can find the killer.
Lely: I don't know. There isn't much of a benefit in going there.
Krazey: What about the music store? Surely they will have Kpop you can "take"
Lely: I'm in.
Chili: Sure, why not.
Krazey: I'll call a friend or two. They could join us.

What happened to the dead people. (Stuffed into suits)
Who was the killer.
Find out when I decide to write more I guess.

I'm, currently writing the prologue so if you want to join (especially as deceased or investigator) you should do it now.

By the way if you choose deceased the options are:

Freddy (taken)
Bonnie (taken)
Chica
Foxy (taken)
Mangle (taken)
The puppet (taken)

I'm putting you as a guard but I may add you acting like Afton for the plot.

When I was thinking the idea for this I thought "Oh shit, this is simular to the silver eyes" and I hoped nobody would notice.