[Fanfic] Alien Invasion

I don't really expect a bunch of people to join but I'm doing this for fun. So basically the fanfic is about an alien invasion where you have to survive and destroy the mother spaceship. So I'm gonna need a name, color, personality, and species. That's all.
People who might join
@RS_Senko68
@Lely
@TheNudgyHampter
@Bjthebuzzybeetle
@CG_osc-omb

Name: Popplio
Colour: Blue
Species: Popplio
Personality: Kind, cool, smart and never backs down from a good challenge. Loves waterparks, especially waterslides, and is afraid of dogs.  Like, if a dog without a leash exists within a one mile radius, he YEETS himself into the nearest airport. Yeah. THAT afraid. (true story)

StarSplizz, dodgerblue, lazy, Paratroopa

Name: IlluZhion
Color: Purple
Species: Vampire (male but has drastically long pink and black hair like a rockstar - kinda skinny - ribcage shows through insanely pale skin)
Personality: Lazy, Chill, Gluttonous, Envious, Intelligent, sometimes flirty around girls, likes to drink blood for some reason, a bit of a kleptomaniac and a bit nihilistic (fits well as an anti-hero)
ABSOLUTELY LOVES THE DARK AND THE COLD (but is ok with the sun and hot weather too)
ALLERGIC TO GARLIC SEVERELY

Basically me irl lol
(And yes, I really am allergic to garlic and yes I do like to drink blood randomly)

Name: Fiery
Color: Aqua (it’s cyan when you put it in a comment)
Species: Toad
Personality: funny not too smart but brainy if you get me.

I do dw!

Nickname: Osc
Colour: dark blue
Personality: Extremely sassy and cracks jokes way too often. A bit of a sailor mouth and tends to stay quite quiet. Also very bri'ish.
Species: Bob-Omb

Name Ssg
Color white
Species shy guy
Personality extremely laid back and smart but can rude if absolutely needed

Name: Noob

Colour: orange

Species: Shy Guy

Personality: I’m pretty smart but sometimes lacks common sense, I’m funny and like to joke around with friends. I’m pretty optimistic and will hope for the best.

Species?

Note: You may still join!
Episode 1: The Start of the Invasion
*Everyone in SM64 Peach's Castle*
Popplio: I'm so bored today, can we play outside?
FieryToad: Sure, let's go.
Lely: The fresh air smells so good.
*Suddenly, 5 alien ships appear in the sky*
Noob: Does anyone see those UFOs?
Max:UFOs don't exist!!!
Osc-omb: I think Noob's right.
*Suddenly, an alien comes down*
Illuzhion: OH MY GOD, IT'S AN ALIEN!!!
Ssg: Run in the castle or else we're gonna get abducted!
*Everyone runs in the house*
Dark: Um...are we screwed???
Osc-omb: Holy sh**, am I in a dream?
Max: Watch your language!
StarSplizz: Now is not the time to give a lecture, let's sit back and relax.
Nudge: I'm gonna go grab my minigun from the storage closet.
Lely: Can I go with you to hide?
Nudge: Sure, I can use a human sacrifice.
Lely: Nevermind...
Illuzhion: I'm gonna go suck their blood.
FieryToad: I'd rather not do that...
Ssg: Let's just focus on surviving, let's stay in side.
Lely: Does anyone have any ideas to escape or kill those green aliens?
*Suddenly Peach comes in*
Peach: Uh, I thought you guys went out, what happened?
Dark: There are a billion aliens out there!!!
Peach: Don't be silly Dark, it's probably just some crazy people who think it's still Halloween.
*Peach goes out and gets abducted*
Popplio: So...should we board the windows and doors?
Max: It works, let's go!
Nudge: Ok I'm ready, I got my minigun!!!
Illuzhion: Woah, woah, we don't want to start World War 3 with aliens!
StarSplizz: Me and Popplio boarded up the walls.
*Suddenly, an alien shoots a wall and explodes*
Nudge: Time to go to war!!! *Shoots aggressively*
*Alien dies*
Osc-omb: Well, that works. I'm gonna go grab more weaponry.
[color=white]Ssg: I'm gonna go too
Noob: I know, let's just go to the castle's sewers.
What will happen next? Will anyone get abducted? Find out on Episode 2!

It's good, but:
1) I wouldn't freak out at an alien invasion, to be honest I wouldn't necessarily care much at all
2) Max isn't that mean, he wouldn't call someone stupid like that
3) I doubt that Nudge would actually sacrifice Lely unless it was of utmost priority
4) I agree with Nudge, it's kinda short
5) Where's Lemon I need someone to flirt with in this fanfic lol

Ok!

No complaints from me, other than it being super short.

Currently editing!

Thanks ! I forgot to follow the topic

I may only've had 2 lines but GOD DAMN you nailed them