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6102 pts ★ RacerOn 2024-05-14 at 23:29:22
MKPC Archipel 2024 Season - Arc 2
Coming soon...
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5On 2024-05-14 at 01:46:31
Decided not to count line distribution for the three last episodes because they were too short or had external characters so yeah, not even everybody had lines.
On 2024-05-14 at 01:45:21
Chapter 10 : Run Aw2y
So that nobody gets hurt anymore...
MKPC Archipel's Court
Pianta : Officer, I found these people. They crushed an innocent Pianta with a boulder. They are public nuisances. They need to be imprisoned.
Lely : *cries* He was--
Pianta : Shut up and let me finish ! This society is falling apart because of you ! You are the ones violenting the rules and making this place such a hellhole. AND NOW YOU MAY TALK !
Nudge : Um excuse me, but I think there is a concept called self defense. This man broke Max's ankle : he damaged us just like we did to him. He also threw boulders at us. I did threaten him with a knife, but--
Pianta : KNIVES !!! OH MY !!!
Nudge : -- but he had some too, and I never ever touched him with the knife. Also you have selective hearing.
VC : This is bullshit ! We have no business being here !
Pianta : SHUT UP !! THE SENTENCE WILL BE EVEN HEAVIER FOR YOU !!
Hearing these words, Lely just broke down, crying. Nobody wanted to say anything anymore. The judge had spit his venom, and no MKPCian was going to make things worse.
Pianta : Oh, and to be cruel. You know what's in the mountain ? Cameron has imprisoned him there. It's your friend, Eli. The fragments were to save him and he will forever be stuck--
Alice : EXCUSE ME WHAT ??
Furious, Alice jumped on the judge. The rest of the courtroom looked either shocked or disgusted by the judge.
Nudge : Everything's going down
But then, Lely stood up, seemed to see something...
And started to run away towards the exit. Soon after, everyone followed him, the judge choking on the ground and completely helpless while the courtroom was just filming the chaos unfold. Alice was done, and she even stole the judge's car. Furious, she invited everyone inside, and since it was a police car, they fit in. Her driving was kind of drunken looking since she was seeing red, but she managed to lead them to the mountain anyways. The moon was shining.
Dayzi : So we can't have a normal competition just like before ?
Choco : I would have said tomorrow, cause we will all be together...
Lely : No... we will be seen as criminals... we won't be together by tomorrow...
Max : How could the judges be this dumb ? I'm probably even less dumb than they are !
Krazey : That is yet to confirm.
Suddenly, they arrived. Ster and Chuck had, to their surprise, already created a tunnel inside of the mountain.
Ster : Hello ! We used the same boulders Cameron used to dig a tunnel. We didn't know Eli was in there but we heard the live info, so we got to work. Here, he is waiting for you inside.
So Alice walked in first, Lely following her. Nudge was following Lely, and the other followed as well. They arrived and saw someone crying on the ground.
And it was Eli.
Eli : You... guys are here ?
Alice : We are.
As they all hugged, they heard the police coming over again, but they were stopped by Ster and Chuck. James, who was checking social media, notuced the judge getting cancelled on the ex blue bird app. They were so happy, just being all together again, and they just stayed here together.
They would be, together by tomorrow...
So that nobody gets hurt anymore...
MKPC Archipel's Court
Pianta : Officer, I found these people. They crushed an innocent Pianta with a boulder. They are public nuisances. They need to be imprisoned.
Lely : *cries* He was--
Pianta : Shut up and let me finish ! This society is falling apart because of you ! You are the ones violenting the rules and making this place such a hellhole. AND NOW YOU MAY TALK !
Nudge : Um excuse me, but I think there is a concept called self defense. This man broke Max's ankle : he damaged us just like we did to him. He also threw boulders at us. I did threaten him with a knife, but--
Pianta : KNIVES !!! OH MY !!!
Nudge : -- but he had some too, and I never ever touched him with the knife. Also you have selective hearing.
VC : This is bullshit ! We have no business being here !
Pianta : SHUT UP !! THE SENTENCE WILL BE EVEN HEAVIER FOR YOU !!
Hearing these words, Lely just broke down, crying. Nobody wanted to say anything anymore. The judge had spit his venom, and no MKPCian was going to make things worse.
Pianta : Oh, and to be cruel. You know what's in the mountain ? Cameron has imprisoned him there. It's your friend, Eli. The fragments were to save him and he will forever be stuck--
Alice : EXCUSE ME WHAT ??
Furious, Alice jumped on the judge. The rest of the courtroom looked either shocked or disgusted by the judge.
Nudge : Everything's going down
But then, Lely stood up, seemed to see something...
And started to run away towards the exit. Soon after, everyone followed him, the judge choking on the ground and completely helpless while the courtroom was just filming the chaos unfold. Alice was done, and she even stole the judge's car. Furious, she invited everyone inside, and since it was a police car, they fit in. Her driving was kind of drunken looking since she was seeing red, but she managed to lead them to the mountain anyways. The moon was shining.
Dayzi : So we can't have a normal competition just like before ?
Choco : I would have said tomorrow, cause we will all be together...
Lely : No... we will be seen as criminals... we won't be together by tomorrow...
Max : How could the judges be this dumb ? I'm probably even less dumb than they are !
Krazey : That is yet to confirm.
Suddenly, they arrived. Ster and Chuck had, to their surprise, already created a tunnel inside of the mountain.
Ster : Hello ! We used the same boulders Cameron used to dig a tunnel. We didn't know Eli was in there but we heard the live info, so we got to work. Here, he is waiting for you inside.
So Alice walked in first, Lely following her. Nudge was following Lely, and the other followed as well. They arrived and saw someone crying on the ground.
And it was Eli.
Eli : You... guys are here ?
Alice : We are.
As they all hugged, they heard the police coming over again, but they were stopped by Ster and Chuck. James, who was checking social media, notuced the judge getting cancelled on the ex blue bird app. They were so happy, just being all together again, and they just stayed here together.
They would be, together by tomorrow...
MKPC Archipel 2024 Season
The end
The end
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4On 2024-05-13 at 07:53:55
Chapter 9 : Run Away
We need to be together to find out,
What's hiding at 9 and three quarters...
9:45PM
Cameron : Hahahaha... so you were not able to make it out safe. A broken ankle for your captain, oh isn't it unfortunate ?
James : What ? Oh no...
Cameron : Hmm... You all are so naive and weak. How can you search the fragments now, huh ?
Choco : That won't be our objective. Our objective will be to destroy you. I am texting the Green Team right now to rally them to us.
"hey everyone, pls come back. max's ankle is broken and we won't fight for the fragments. we need to emprison cameron, or worse. he hurt us, and badly.
When Lely received the message...
Lely : WAIT ! Choco texted me saying we need to emprison Cameron because he broke Max's ankle. We need to go back to help them fight him.
Nudge : What ? Huh ? No we won't. Eliminates concurrence.
Lely : But Cameron is a nuisance to the island, not less than Eli. We need to fight him and asap.
Nudge : Istg this kid....
Back to the Teal Team.
Krazey : C'mon bro. We barely did anything to you, why are you so mean ?
Cameron : Well, I have a story. But I'll spare you of it. Death is better than boredom, don't you think so ?
James : You are a horrible person !!!
Cameron : Heh. I know. But what can you do ? Nothing except crying.
Choco : Tell us the story ! WE WANT TO KNOW THE ANSWER !
Cameron : Heh. Okay, I guess. What can it hurt ? So basically, when I was a child, I was always unloved. Truth is, Ster and Chuck are my brothers. Chuck is the oldest, and Ster is the youngest. I am the middle child, I was always neglected. My parents did not care. They didn't scream at me, but they would always leave me on the side, as bored as I could be. So I want to handle my life all by myself, but, heh... Chuck and Ster keep me in check. But I had enough. I want to have fun and I want to have importance.
Nudge : Pick me ahh energy...
Choco : Oh thank lord, you are back !
Nudge : Yeah, 'cause Lely is right...
Lely : To fight a nuisance, we need to be together ! So the teams don't matter anymore. We'll be as one.
Choco : That's so true !
Krazey : First of all, yay. Second of all, why are you such an attention seeker ? I thought you were abused and disciplined as child, THAT would have been hella cool, but no, you're just the middle child. Oh welp.
Cameron : Do not try to play with the fire that runs within my veins and with the fire that I am...
Alice : That's my line, you unoriginal copycat. Build some personnality instead of being a blank copy of the others. That will build you, unlike all the attention seeking
Cameron : Okay that's it...
Cameron then got another boulder ; they were erupting from the mountain frequently. The rock was much faster than the last one.
Lely : No ! MAX !
Max : I can't move...
Lely hurried and carried Max out of the boulder's trajectory. It fell, and pushed the precedent one that stopped right before a cliff. The precedent boulder fell and made a huge hole in the hills. When this happened, some cars started to come towards the mountain.
Cameron then used another boulder to get down from the mountaintop and to fight the MKPCians.
VC : NO ! DO NOT TOUCH ME !
Cameron : I don't need consent, consent needs me. Heh.
Lely : DO NOT TOUCH HER ! *jumps*
Cameron : I will, and you along with her!
Max : Oh no you won't.
Nudge : You thought you were some sort of built monster ? You remain a Pianta, strong for sure, but not even that big. *throws a knife he kept in his pocket*
Cameron : OW !!! NO YOU WON'T LITTLE AMOUNT OF FUR SHIT, COME HERE !
Cameron had VC and Lely in his arms and threw both towards the rock. Luckily, they did not hit the cliff, but fell brutally on the ground and had trouble standing up. Cameron started to bleed from the sides, which made him even more angrier. Nudge was planning to throw another knife in Cameron's face, but Cameron took off the knife and threw it on Nudge. It only hurt one of his ears, but Nudge hissed at the pain.
Nudge : I will not waste my time with someone like you. *gets the knife off and throws him right in Cameron's face, but it gets caught in his tree*
Cameron : Heh... I don't intend to neither.
Both started running around in circles, trying to attack with knives and failed. In the meanwhile, Ben and Lely were talking.
Ben : We need to get one of these boulders, but how?
Lely : I don't know. Maybe try to throw Cameron on the cliff to generate vibrations and to make the rock crush him while he is unconscious.
Lely and Ben told everyone about their plan. Suddenly, Nudge tripped on a rock and Cameron was about to stab him with the knife. But by behind, Lely and Ben grabbed Cameron by the tree, threatening him with the knife on the edge of his neck.
Lely : Move and you die.
Cameron : You think you are scary ? Tears are dropping from your eyes and you are trembling.
Lely : Ve careful.
And when Cameron was about to stand up from the ground, James and Choco grabbed him by the sides, lift him up and threw him towards the cliff. Since his body was strong, the cliff slightly vibrated, and a boulder started getting down.
Cameron : NO... AHHH !
He tried to run but the boulder fell on his ankle, breaking it just like Max's.
Max : SEE HOW THAT FEELS !
Lely : DON'T EVER TRY AGAIN !
Nudge : Keep away from us.
VC : Umm... guys, wait.
Nudge : What?
VC : The police has arrived...
MKPC Archipel - 2024 Season
The end
We need to be together to find out,
What's hiding at 9 and three quarters...
9:45PM
Cameron : Hahahaha... so you were not able to make it out safe. A broken ankle for your captain, oh isn't it unfortunate ?
James : What ? Oh no...
Cameron : Hmm... You all are so naive and weak. How can you search the fragments now, huh ?
Choco : That won't be our objective. Our objective will be to destroy you. I am texting the Green Team right now to rally them to us.
"hey everyone, pls come back. max's ankle is broken and we won't fight for the fragments. we need to emprison cameron, or worse. he hurt us, and badly.
When Lely received the message...
Lely : WAIT ! Choco texted me saying we need to emprison Cameron because he broke Max's ankle. We need to go back to help them fight him.
Nudge : What ? Huh ? No we won't. Eliminates concurrence.
Lely : But Cameron is a nuisance to the island, not less than Eli. We need to fight him and asap.
Nudge : Istg this kid....
Back to the Teal Team.
Krazey : C'mon bro. We barely did anything to you, why are you so mean ?
Cameron : Well, I have a story. But I'll spare you of it. Death is better than boredom, don't you think so ?
James : You are a horrible person !!!
Cameron : Heh. I know. But what can you do ? Nothing except crying.
Choco : Tell us the story ! WE WANT TO KNOW THE ANSWER !
Cameron : Heh. Okay, I guess. What can it hurt ? So basically, when I was a child, I was always unloved. Truth is, Ster and Chuck are my brothers. Chuck is the oldest, and Ster is the youngest. I am the middle child, I was always neglected. My parents did not care. They didn't scream at me, but they would always leave me on the side, as bored as I could be. So I want to handle my life all by myself, but, heh... Chuck and Ster keep me in check. But I had enough. I want to have fun and I want to have importance.
Nudge : Pick me ahh energy...
Choco : Oh thank lord, you are back !
Nudge : Yeah, 'cause Lely is right...
Lely : To fight a nuisance, we need to be together ! So the teams don't matter anymore. We'll be as one.
Choco : That's so true !
Krazey : First of all, yay. Second of all, why are you such an attention seeker ? I thought you were abused and disciplined as child, THAT would have been hella cool, but no, you're just the middle child. Oh welp.
Cameron : Do not try to play with the fire that runs within my veins and with the fire that I am...
Alice : That's my line, you unoriginal copycat. Build some personnality instead of being a blank copy of the others. That will build you, unlike all the attention seeking
Cameron : Okay that's it...
Cameron then got another boulder ; they were erupting from the mountain frequently. The rock was much faster than the last one.
Lely : No ! MAX !
Max : I can't move...
Lely hurried and carried Max out of the boulder's trajectory. It fell, and pushed the precedent one that stopped right before a cliff. The precedent boulder fell and made a huge hole in the hills. When this happened, some cars started to come towards the mountain.
Cameron then used another boulder to get down from the mountaintop and to fight the MKPCians.
VC : NO ! DO NOT TOUCH ME !
Cameron : I don't need consent, consent needs me. Heh.
Lely : DO NOT TOUCH HER ! *jumps*
Cameron : I will, and you along with her!
Max : Oh no you won't.
Nudge : You thought you were some sort of built monster ? You remain a Pianta, strong for sure, but not even that big. *throws a knife he kept in his pocket*
Cameron : OW !!! NO YOU WON'T LITTLE AMOUNT OF FUR SHIT, COME HERE !
Cameron had VC and Lely in his arms and threw both towards the rock. Luckily, they did not hit the cliff, but fell brutally on the ground and had trouble standing up. Cameron started to bleed from the sides, which made him even more angrier. Nudge was planning to throw another knife in Cameron's face, but Cameron took off the knife and threw it on Nudge. It only hurt one of his ears, but Nudge hissed at the pain.
Nudge : I will not waste my time with someone like you. *gets the knife off and throws him right in Cameron's face, but it gets caught in his tree*
Cameron : Heh... I don't intend to neither.
Both started running around in circles, trying to attack with knives and failed. In the meanwhile, Ben and Lely were talking.
Ben : We need to get one of these boulders, but how?
Lely : I don't know. Maybe try to throw Cameron on the cliff to generate vibrations and to make the rock crush him while he is unconscious.
Lely and Ben told everyone about their plan. Suddenly, Nudge tripped on a rock and Cameron was about to stab him with the knife. But by behind, Lely and Ben grabbed Cameron by the tree, threatening him with the knife on the edge of his neck.
Lely : Move and you die.
Cameron : You think you are scary ? Tears are dropping from your eyes and you are trembling.
Lely : Ve careful.
And when Cameron was about to stand up from the ground, James and Choco grabbed him by the sides, lift him up and threw him towards the cliff. Since his body was strong, the cliff slightly vibrated, and a boulder started getting down.
Cameron : NO... AHHH !
He tried to run but the boulder fell on his ankle, breaking it just like Max's.
Max : SEE HOW THAT FEELS !
Lely : DON'T EVER TRY AGAIN !
Nudge : Keep away from us.
VC : Umm... guys, wait.
Nudge : What?
VC : The police has arrived...
MKPC Archipel - 2024 Season
The end
Run away, run away
Run away and save your life
Run away, run away
Run away if you want to survive
It's time to break free, oh oh oh oh
Run away, oh oh oh oh
You better break free, oh oh oh oh
Run away, oh oh oh oh
Pretty sure that's not where you got the title but xd
I was thinking of ONE OK ROCK or BTS
You both got it wrong
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1On 2024-05-12 at 23:29:18
Chapter 9 : Run Away
We need to be together to find out,
What's hiding at 9 and three quarters...
9:45PM
Cameron : Hahahaha... so you were not able to make it out safe. A broken ankle for your captain, oh isn't it unfortunate ?
James : What ? Oh no...
Cameron : Hmm... You all are so naive and weak. How can you search the fragments now, huh ?
Choco : That won't be our objective. Our objective will be to destroy you. I am texting the Green Team right now to rally them to us.
"hey everyone, pls come back. max's ankle is broken and we won't fight for the fragments. we need to emprison cameron, or worse. he hurt us, and badly.
When Lely received the message...
Lely : WAIT ! Choco texted me saying we need to emprison Cameron because he broke Max's ankle. We need to go back to help them fight him.
Nudge : What ? Huh ? No we won't. Eliminates concurrence.
Lely : But Cameron is a nuisance to the island, not less than Eli. We need to fight him and asap.
Nudge : Istg this kid....
Back to the Teal Team.
Krazey : C'mon bro. We barely did anything to you, why are you so mean ?
Cameron : Well, I have a story. But I'll spare you of it. Death is better than boredom, don't you think so ?
James : You are a horrible person !!!
Cameron : Heh. I know. But what can you do ? Nothing except crying.
Choco : Tell us the story ! WE WANT TO KNOW THE ANSWER !
Cameron : Heh. Okay, I guess. What can it hurt ? So basically, when I was a child, I was always unloved. Truth is, Ster and Chuck are my brothers. Chuck is the oldest, and Ster is the youngest. I am the middle child, I was always neglected. My parents did not care. They didn't scream at me, but they would always leave me on the side, as bored as I could be. So I want to handle my life all by myself, but, heh... Chuck and Ster keep me in check. But I had enough. I want to have fun and I want to have importance.
Nudge : Pick me ahh energy...
Choco : Oh thank lord, you are back !
Nudge : Yeah, 'cause Lely is right...
Lely : To fight a nuisance, we need to be together ! So the teams don't matter anymore. We'll be as one.
Choco : That's so true !
Krazey : First of all, yay. Second of all, why are you such an attention seeker ? I thought you were abused and disciplined as child, THAT would have been hella cool, but no, you're just the middle child. Oh welp.
Cameron : Do not try to play with the fire that runs within my veins and with the fire that I am...
Alice : That's my line, you unoriginal copycat. Build some personnality instead of being a blank copy of the others. That will build you, unlike all the attention seeking
Cameron : Okay that's it...
Cameron then got another boulder ; they were erupting from the mountain frequently. The rock was much faster than the last one.
Lely : No ! MAX !
Max : I can't move...
Lely hurried and carried Max out of the boulder's trajectory. It fell, and pushed the precedent one that stopped right before a cliff. The precedent boulder fell and made a huge hole in the hills. When this happened, some cars started to come towards the mountain.
Cameron then used another boulder to get down from the mountaintop and to fight the MKPCians.
VC : NO ! DO NOT TOUCH ME !
Cameron : I don't need consent, consent needs me. Heh.
Lely : DO NOT TOUCH HER ! *jumps*
Cameron : I will, and you along with her!
Max : Oh no you won't.
Nudge : You thought you were some sort of built monster ? You remain a Pianta, strong for sure, but not even that big. *throws a knife he kept in his pocket*
Cameron : OW !!! NO YOU WON'T LITTLE AMOUNT OF FUR SHIT, COME HERE !
Cameron had VC and Lely in his arms and threw both towards the rock. Luckily, they did not hit the cliff, but fell brutally on the ground and had trouble standing up. Cameron started to bleed from the sides, which made him even more angrier. Nudge was planning to throw another knife in Cameron's face, but Cameron took off the knife and threw it on Nudge. It only hurt one of his ears, but Nudge hissed at the pain.
Nudge : I will not waste my time with someone like you. *gets the knife off and throws him right in Cameron's face, but it gets caught in his tree*
Cameron : Heh... I don't intend to neither.
Both started running around in circles, trying to attack with knives and failed. In the meanwhile, Ben and Lely were talking.
Ben : We need to get one of these boulders, but how?
Lely : I don't know. Maybe try to throw Cameron on the cliff to generate vibrations and to make the rock crush him while he is unconscious.
Lely and Ben told everyone about their plan. Suddenly, Nudge tripped on a rock and Cameron was about to stab him with the knife. But by behind, Lely and Ben grabbed Cameron by the tree, threatening him with the knife on the edge of his neck.
Lely : Move and you die.
Cameron : You think you are scary ? Tears are dropping from your eyes and you are trembling.
Lely : Ve careful.
And when Cameron was about to stand up from the ground, James and Choco grabbed him by the sides, lift him up and threw him towards the cliff. Since his body was strong, the cliff slightly vibrated, and a boulder started getting down.
Cameron : NO... AHHH !
He tried to run but the boulder fell on his ankle, breaking it just like Max's.
Max : SEE HOW THAT FEELS !
Lely : DON'T EVER TRY AGAIN !
Nudge : Keep away from us.
VC : Umm... guys, wait.
Nudge : What?
VC : The police has arrived...
MKPC Archipel - 2024 Season
The end
We need to be together to find out,
What's hiding at 9 and three quarters...
9:45PM
Cameron : Hahahaha... so you were not able to make it out safe. A broken ankle for your captain, oh isn't it unfortunate ?
James : What ? Oh no...
Cameron : Hmm... You all are so naive and weak. How can you search the fragments now, huh ?
Choco : That won't be our objective. Our objective will be to destroy you. I am texting the Green Team right now to rally them to us.
"hey everyone, pls come back. max's ankle is broken and we won't fight for the fragments. we need to emprison cameron, or worse. he hurt us, and badly.
When Lely received the message...
Lely : WAIT ! Choco texted me saying we need to emprison Cameron because he broke Max's ankle. We need to go back to help them fight him.
Nudge : What ? Huh ? No we won't. Eliminates concurrence.
Lely : But Cameron is a nuisance to the island, not less than Eli. We need to fight him and asap.
Nudge : Istg this kid....
Back to the Teal Team.
Krazey : C'mon bro. We barely did anything to you, why are you so mean ?
Cameron : Well, I have a story. But I'll spare you of it. Death is better than boredom, don't you think so ?
James : You are a horrible person !!!
Cameron : Heh. I know. But what can you do ? Nothing except crying.
Choco : Tell us the story ! WE WANT TO KNOW THE ANSWER !
Cameron : Heh. Okay, I guess. What can it hurt ? So basically, when I was a child, I was always unloved. Truth is, Ster and Chuck are my brothers. Chuck is the oldest, and Ster is the youngest. I am the middle child, I was always neglected. My parents did not care. They didn't scream at me, but they would always leave me on the side, as bored as I could be. So I want to handle my life all by myself, but, heh... Chuck and Ster keep me in check. But I had enough. I want to have fun and I want to have importance.
Nudge : Pick me ahh energy...
Choco : Oh thank lord, you are back !
Nudge : Yeah, 'cause Lely is right...
Lely : To fight a nuisance, we need to be together ! So the teams don't matter anymore. We'll be as one.
Choco : That's so true !
Krazey : First of all, yay. Second of all, why are you such an attention seeker ? I thought you were abused and disciplined as child, THAT would have been hella cool, but no, you're just the middle child. Oh welp.
Cameron : Do not try to play with the fire that runs within my veins and with the fire that I am...
Alice : That's my line, you unoriginal copycat. Build some personnality instead of being a blank copy of the others. That will build you, unlike all the attention seeking
Cameron : Okay that's it...
Cameron then got another boulder ; they were erupting from the mountain frequently. The rock was much faster than the last one.
Lely : No ! MAX !
Max : I can't move...
Lely hurried and carried Max out of the boulder's trajectory. It fell, and pushed the precedent one that stopped right before a cliff. The precedent boulder fell and made a huge hole in the hills. When this happened, some cars started to come towards the mountain.
Cameron then used another boulder to get down from the mountaintop and to fight the MKPCians.
VC : NO ! DO NOT TOUCH ME !
Cameron : I don't need consent, consent needs me. Heh.
Lely : DO NOT TOUCH HER ! *jumps*
Cameron : I will, and you along with her!
Max : Oh no you won't.
Nudge : You thought you were some sort of built monster ? You remain a Pianta, strong for sure, but not even that big. *throws a knife he kept in his pocket*
Cameron : OW !!! NO YOU WON'T LITTLE AMOUNT OF FUR SHIT, COME HERE !
Cameron had VC and Lely in his arms and threw both towards the rock. Luckily, they did not hit the cliff, but fell brutally on the ground and had trouble standing up. Cameron started to bleed from the sides, which made him even more angrier. Nudge was planning to throw another knife in Cameron's face, but Cameron took off the knife and threw it on Nudge. It only hurt one of his ears, but Nudge hissed at the pain.
Nudge : I will not waste my time with someone like you. *gets the knife off and throws him right in Cameron's face, but it gets caught in his tree*
Cameron : Heh... I don't intend to neither.
Both started running around in circles, trying to attack with knives and failed. In the meanwhile, Ben and Lely were talking.
Ben : We need to get one of these boulders, but how?
Lely : I don't know. Maybe try to throw Cameron on the cliff to generate vibrations and to make the rock crush him while he is unconscious.
Lely and Ben told everyone about their plan. Suddenly, Nudge tripped on a rock and Cameron was about to stab him with the knife. But by behind, Lely and Ben grabbed Cameron by the tree, threatening him with the knife on the edge of his neck.
Lely : Move and you die.
Cameron : You think you are scary ? Tears are dropping from your eyes and you are trembling.
Lely : Ve careful.
And when Cameron was about to stand up from the ground, James and Choco grabbed him by the sides, lift him up and threw him towards the cliff. Since his body was strong, the cliff slightly vibrated, and a boulder started getting down.
Cameron : NO... AHHH !
He tried to run but the boulder fell on his ankle, breaking it just like Max's.
Max : SEE HOW THAT FEELS !
Lely : DON'T EVER TRY AGAIN !
Nudge : Keep away from us.
VC : Umm... guys, wait.
Nudge : What?
VC : The police has arrived...
MKPC Archipel - 2024 Season
The end
Cameron having lots of lines
Ben: give me your lines?
lol but all jokes aside best episode yet, also epic cliffhanger cameron be gettin arrested 11/10
Who said that he was the one to be arrested ?
2On 2024-05-12 at 16:46:19
Chapter 9 : Run Away
We need to be together to find out,
What's hiding at 9 and three quarters...
9:45PM
Cameron : Hahahaha... so you were not able to make it out safe. A broken ankle for your captain, oh isn't it unfortunate ?
James : What ? Oh no...
Cameron : Hmm... You all are so naive and weak. How can you search the fragments now, huh ?
Choco : That won't be our objective. Our objective will be to destroy you. I am texting the Green Team right now to rally them to us.
"hey everyone, pls come back. max's ankle is broken and we won't fight for the fragments. we need to emprison cameron, or worse. he hurt us, and badly.
When Lely received the message...
Lely : WAIT ! Choco texted me saying we need to emprison Cameron because he broke Max's ankle. We need to go back to help them fight him.
Nudge : What ? Huh ? No we won't. Eliminates concurrence.
Lely : But Cameron is a nuisance to the island, not less than Eli. We need to fight him and asap.
Nudge : Istg this kid....
Back to the Teal Team.
Krazey : C'mon bro. We barely did anything to you, why are you so mean ?
Cameron : Well, I have a story. But I'll spare you of it. Death is better than boredom, don't you think so ?
James : You are a horrible person !!!
Cameron : Heh. I know. But what can you do ? Nothing except crying.
Choco : Tell us the story ! WE WANT TO KNOW THE ANSWER !
Cameron : Heh. Okay, I guess. What can it hurt ? So basically, when I was a child, I was always unloved. Truth is, Ster and Chuck are my brothers. Chuck is the oldest, and Ster is the youngest. I am the middle child, I was always neglected. My parents did not care. They didn't scream at me, but they would always leave me on the side, as bored as I could be. So I want to handle my life all by myself, but, heh... Chuck and Ster keep me in check. But I had enough. I want to have fun and I want to have importance.
Nudge : Pick me ahh energy...
Choco : Oh thank lord, you are back !
Nudge : Yeah, 'cause Lely is right...
Lely : To fight a nuisance, we need to be together ! So the teams don't matter anymore. We'll be as one.
Choco : That's so true !
Krazey : First of all, yay. Second of all, why are you such an attention seeker ? I thought you were abused and disciplined as child, THAT would have been hella cool, but no, you're just the middle child. Oh welp.
Cameron : Do not try to play with the fire that runs within my veins and with the fire that I am...
Alice : That's my line, you unoriginal copycat. Build some personnality instead of being a blank copy of the others. That will build you, unlike all the attention seeking
Cameron : Okay that's it...
Cameron then got another boulder ; they were erupting from the mountain frequently. The rock was much faster than the last one.
Lely : No ! MAX !
Max : I can't move...
Lely hurried and carried Max out of the boulder's trajectory. It fell, and pushed the precedent one that stopped right before a cliff. The precedent boulder fell and made a huge hole in the hills. When this happened, some cars started to come towards the mountain.
Cameron then used another boulder to get down from the mountaintop and to fight the MKPCians.
VC : NO ! DO NOT TOUCH ME !
Cameron : I don't need consent, consent needs me. Heh.
Lely : DO NOT TOUCH HER ! *jumps*
Cameron : I will, and you along with her!
Max : Oh no you won't.
Nudge : You thought you were some sort of built monster ? You remain a Pianta, strong for sure, but not even that big. *throws a knife he kept in his pocket*
Cameron : OW !!! NO YOU WON'T LITTLE AMOUNT OF FUR SHIT, COME HERE !
Cameron had VC and Lely in his arms and threw both towards the rock. Luckily, they did not hit the cliff, but fell brutally on the ground and had trouble standing up. Cameron started to bleed from the sides, which made him even more angrier. Nudge was planning to throw another knife in Cameron's face, but Cameron took off the knife and threw it on Nudge. It only hurt one of his ears, but Nudge hissed at the pain.
Nudge : I will not waste my time with someone like you. *gets the knife off and throws him right in Cameron's face, but it gets caught in his tree*
Cameron : Heh... I don't intend to neither.
Both started running around in circles, trying to attack with knives and failed. In the meanwhile, Ben and Lely were talking.
Ben : We need to get one of these boulders, but how?
Lely : I don't know. Maybe try to throw Cameron on the cliff to generate vibrations and to make the rock crush him while he is unconscious.
Lely and Ben told everyone about their plan. Suddenly, Nudge tripped on a rock and Cameron was about to stab him with the knife. But by behind, Lely and Ben grabbed Cameron by the tree, threatening him with the knife on the edge of his neck.
Lely : Move and you die.
Cameron : You think you are scary ? Tears are dropping from your eyes and you are trembling.
Lely : Ve careful.
And when Cameron was about to stand up from the ground, James and Choco grabbed him by the sides, lift him up and threw him towards the cliff. Since his body was strong, the cliff slightly vibrated, and a boulder started getting down.
Cameron : NO... AHHH !
He tried to run but the boulder fell on his ankle, breaking it just like Max's.
Max : SEE HOW THAT FEELS !
Lely : DON'T EVER TRY AGAIN !
Nudge : Keep away from us.
VC : Umm... guys, wait.
Nudge : What?
VC : The police has arrived...
MKPC Archipel - 2024 Season
The end
We need to be together to find out,
What's hiding at 9 and three quarters...
9:45PM
Cameron : Hahahaha... so you were not able to make it out safe. A broken ankle for your captain, oh isn't it unfortunate ?
James : What ? Oh no...
Cameron : Hmm... You all are so naive and weak. How can you search the fragments now, huh ?
Choco : That won't be our objective. Our objective will be to destroy you. I am texting the Green Team right now to rally them to us.
"hey everyone, pls come back. max's ankle is broken and we won't fight for the fragments. we need to emprison cameron, or worse. he hurt us, and badly.
When Lely received the message...
Lely : WAIT ! Choco texted me saying we need to emprison Cameron because he broke Max's ankle. We need to go back to help them fight him.
Nudge : What ? Huh ? No we won't. Eliminates concurrence.
Lely : But Cameron is a nuisance to the island, not less than Eli. We need to fight him and asap.
Nudge : Istg this kid....
Back to the Teal Team.
Krazey : C'mon bro. We barely did anything to you, why are you so mean ?
Cameron : Well, I have a story. But I'll spare you of it. Death is better than boredom, don't you think so ?
James : You are a horrible person !!!
Cameron : Heh. I know. But what can you do ? Nothing except crying.
Choco : Tell us the story ! WE WANT TO KNOW THE ANSWER !
Cameron : Heh. Okay, I guess. What can it hurt ? So basically, when I was a child, I was always unloved. Truth is, Ster and Chuck are my brothers. Chuck is the oldest, and Ster is the youngest. I am the middle child, I was always neglected. My parents did not care. They didn't scream at me, but they would always leave me on the side, as bored as I could be. So I want to handle my life all by myself, but, heh... Chuck and Ster keep me in check. But I had enough. I want to have fun and I want to have importance.
Nudge : Pick me ahh energy...
Choco : Oh thank lord, you are back !
Nudge : Yeah, 'cause Lely is right...
Lely : To fight a nuisance, we need to be together ! So the teams don't matter anymore. We'll be as one.
Choco : That's so true !
Krazey : First of all, yay. Second of all, why are you such an attention seeker ? I thought you were abused and disciplined as child, THAT would have been hella cool, but no, you're just the middle child. Oh welp.
Cameron : Do not try to play with the fire that runs within my veins and with the fire that I am...
Alice : That's my line, you unoriginal copycat. Build some personnality instead of being a blank copy of the others. That will build you, unlike all the attention seeking
Cameron : Okay that's it...
Cameron then got another boulder ; they were erupting from the mountain frequently. The rock was much faster than the last one.
Lely : No ! MAX !
Max : I can't move...
Lely hurried and carried Max out of the boulder's trajectory. It fell, and pushed the precedent one that stopped right before a cliff. The precedent boulder fell and made a huge hole in the hills. When this happened, some cars started to come towards the mountain.
Cameron then used another boulder to get down from the mountaintop and to fight the MKPCians.
VC : NO ! DO NOT TOUCH ME !
Cameron : I don't need consent, consent needs me. Heh.
Lely : DO NOT TOUCH HER ! *jumps*
Cameron : I will, and you along with her!
Max : Oh no you won't.
Nudge : You thought you were some sort of built monster ? You remain a Pianta, strong for sure, but not even that big. *throws a knife he kept in his pocket*
Cameron : OW !!! NO YOU WON'T LITTLE AMOUNT OF FUR SHIT, COME HERE !
Cameron had VC and Lely in his arms and threw both towards the rock. Luckily, they did not hit the cliff, but fell brutally on the ground and had trouble standing up. Cameron started to bleed from the sides, which made him even more angrier. Nudge was planning to throw another knife in Cameron's face, but Cameron took off the knife and threw it on Nudge. It only hurt one of his ears, but Nudge hissed at the pain.
Nudge : I will not waste my time with someone like you. *gets the knife off and throws him right in Cameron's face, but it gets caught in his tree*
Cameron : Heh... I don't intend to neither.
Both started running around in circles, trying to attack with knives and failed. In the meanwhile, Ben and Lely were talking.
Ben : We need to get one of these boulders, but how?
Lely : I don't know. Maybe try to throw Cameron on the cliff to generate vibrations and to make the rock crush him while he is unconscious.
Lely and Ben told everyone about their plan. Suddenly, Nudge tripped on a rock and Cameron was about to stab him with the knife. But by behind, Lely and Ben grabbed Cameron by the tree, threatening him with the knife on the edge of his neck.
Lely : Move and you die.
Cameron : You think you are scary ? Tears are dropping from your eyes and you are trembling.
Lely : Ve careful.
And when Cameron was about to stand up from the ground, James and Choco grabbed him by the sides, lift him up and threw him towards the cliff. Since his body was strong, the cliff slightly vibrated, and a boulder started getting down.
Cameron : NO... AHHH !
He tried to run but the boulder fell on his ankle, breaking it just like Max's.
Max : SEE HOW THAT FEELS !
Lely : DON'T EVER TRY AGAIN !
Nudge : Keep away from us.
VC : Umm... guys, wait.
Nudge : What?
VC : The police has arrived...
MKPC Archipel - 2024 Season
The end
63On 2024-05-07 at 23:50:04
im still doing the series cause why not 
Do it... in your phone notes
Yeah I don't even care you won't get a word in the writing. But can you actually listen to what others have told you ? Others find it annoying, and I also told you it'd lead nowhere. Why are you so stubborn ? On a public forum, not only your opinion matters. You're playing with fire, but you are gonna get sanctioned someday. These little actions piss off everyone, including the mods.
5On 2024-05-07 at 08:02:31
Chapter 9 : Run Away
Coming soon...
Coming soon...
5On 2024-05-06 at 22:52:08
Im just gonna start i mini series where i put possible development for characters who dont have it at the moment
Episode 1, Ben
Ben being the Brat that nobody likes, i think it would be good for to slowly become less bratty.
But in a soon episode, he could get mad at his team for maybe cheating or something liek that, and go in his cabin, everyone thinks hes just being bratty but in episode 1 james said something nice about Ben i belive, and i want to build on that, so how about they ahve a talk and become freinds, James teaches Ben to be less bratty, And Ben can teach James to do better at challenges, i think this could be a improvment to both of their characters.
Thoughts?
Episode 1, Ben
Ben being the Brat that nobody likes, i think it would be good for to slowly become less bratty.
But in a soon episode, he could get mad at his team for maybe cheating or something liek that, and go in his cabin, everyone thinks hes just being bratty but in episode 1 james said something nice about Ben i belive, and i want to build on that, so how about they ahve a talk and become freinds, James teaches Ben to be less bratty, And Ben can teach James to do better at challenges, i think this could be a improvment to both of their characters.
Thoughts?
I have already planned character development for every character, leave it to me
On 2024-05-06 at 16:53:16
Chapter 8 : Good At Love
Is it your fault, or is it my thoughts ?
Max : Okay so. To whoever is in my team, I want us to stay together at all times. No separation, not even a single one.
Lely : I think we should go in small groups. VC and Noob, you should go for the beaches. Alice and Ben, try to not fight with each other and go for the hills and the caverns. Me and Nudge will go in the cities, if that is alright, and our meeting point will be the huts.
VC : You have great leadership skills
Nudge : I should complain but I feel like despite being the dumbest, you also have a lot of experience
Max : I think we should head for the mountaintop. There must be something high up there.
And with that, both teams began.
VC : Going from the mountain to the beach is gonna be so hard.
Noob : We should ask for vehicles.
VC : But we don't even have a license !
Noob : Tell me, who cares ?
VC : It's not that, but how do we even find one ?
Noob : True...
Max : Okay, this might be tough. The pathway is very thin, and the slope seems steep. I don't know if it's worth it.
Krazey : At least from there, you can see the fragments shining !
Max : What if they're just lampposts ?
Krazey : Something is up there ! I have a gut feeling.
Max : I think it's kind of dangerous... but okay, if you say so.
And with that, the Teal Team began climbing. Max's feet were slowly trying to walk carefully on the slope that felt almost like it was vertical. After five minutes, people got tired.
Choco : Ahh... I cannot feel my foot...
Angrybird : I feel so tired...
James : I don't trust any of this.
Max : It really does seem dangerous...
Krazey : Everything will be fine... we will get there.
Choco : Wait... I smell something...
Max : What ?
Choco : AHHHH ! BLOOD IS ON MY HAND ! THERE IS BLOOD !
As they started yelling, every of their teammates turned to them. Max used his phone's light to figure out what was happening ; and a dead, crushed Pianta was on the floor, full of blood.
Angrybird : WHAT ??? OH MY GOD !! WE NEED TO GO BACK !!!!
Dayzi : This seems to mean something... but what ?
Max : I don't know... but I'm scared.
Krazey : I... don't know.
And then suddenly, a boulder fell from the top of the mountain. He was going rapidly and was about to crush them. They all started yelling and running for their life, as the boulder continued to roll. After some time they ended up to the point where they were before, scared. Sadly, Max's ankle had twisted and he could not stand up anymore.
Max : I... can't even stand up.
The boy cried, as he felt weak and pained at the same time. The rest of his team was shocked. Why did a boulder fall ? What was happening ? Then they saw a figure lit up by the moon at the top of the mountain... and they understood.
Is it your fault, or is it my thoughts ?
Max : Okay so. To whoever is in my team, I want us to stay together at all times. No separation, not even a single one.
Lely : I think we should go in small groups. VC and Noob, you should go for the beaches. Alice and Ben, try to not fight with each other and go for the hills and the caverns. Me and Nudge will go in the cities, if that is alright, and our meeting point will be the huts.
VC : You have great leadership skills
Nudge : I should complain but I feel like despite being the dumbest, you also have a lot of experience
Max : I think we should head for the mountaintop. There must be something high up there.
And with that, both teams began.
VC : Going from the mountain to the beach is gonna be so hard.
Noob : We should ask for vehicles.
VC : But we don't even have a license !
Noob : Tell me, who cares ?
VC : It's not that, but how do we even find one ?
Noob : True...
Max : Okay, this might be tough. The pathway is very thin, and the slope seems steep. I don't know if it's worth it.
Krazey : At least from there, you can see the fragments shining !
Max : What if they're just lampposts ?
Krazey : Something is up there ! I have a gut feeling.
Max : I think it's kind of dangerous... but okay, if you say so.
And with that, the Teal Team began climbing. Max's feet were slowly trying to walk carefully on the slope that felt almost like it was vertical. After five minutes, people got tired.
Choco : Ahh... I cannot feel my foot...
Angrybird : I feel so tired...
James : I don't trust any of this.
Max : It really does seem dangerous...
Krazey : Everything will be fine... we will get there.
Choco : Wait... I smell something...
Max : What ?
Choco : AHHHH ! BLOOD IS ON MY HAND ! THERE IS BLOOD !
As they started yelling, every of their teammates turned to them. Max used his phone's light to figure out what was happening ; and a dead, crushed Pianta was on the floor, full of blood.
Angrybird : WHAT ??? OH MY GOD !! WE NEED TO GO BACK !!!!
Dayzi : This seems to mean something... but what ?
Max : I don't know... but I'm scared.
Krazey : I... don't know.
And then suddenly, a boulder fell from the top of the mountain. He was going rapidly and was about to crush them. They all started yelling and running for their life, as the boulder continued to roll. After some time they ended up to the point where they were before, scared. Sadly, Max's ankle had twisted and he could not stand up anymore.
Max : I... can't even stand up.
The boy cried, as he felt weak and pained at the same time. The rest of his team was shocked. Why did a boulder fall ? What was happening ? Then they saw a figure lit up by the moon at the top of the mountain... and they understood.
Very short, but very good.
Well I was really tired and did not feel like putting it on hold so yeah. Cliffhanger was voluntary
On 2024-05-06 at 00:00:49
Chapter 8 : Good At Love
Is it your fault, or is it my thoughts ?
Max : Okay so. To whoever is in my team, I want us to stay together at all times. No separation, not even a single one.
Lely : I think we should go in small groups. VC and Noob, you should go for the beaches. Alice and Ben, try to not fight with each other and go for the hills and the caverns. Me and Nudge will go in the cities, if that is alright, and our meeting point will be the huts.
VC : You have great leadership skills
Nudge : I should complain but I feel like despite being the dumbest, you also have a lot of experience
Max : I think we should head for the mountaintop. There must be something high up there.
And with that, both teams began.
VC : Going from the mountain to the beach is gonna be so hard.
Noob : We should ask for vehicles.
VC : But we don't even have a license !
Noob : Tell me, who cares ?
VC : It's not that, but how do we even find one ?
Noob : True...
Max : Okay, this might be tough. The pathway is very thin, and the slope seems steep. I don't know if it's worth it.
Krazey : At least from there, you can see the fragments shining !
Max : What if they're just lampposts ?
Krazey : Something is up there ! I have a gut feeling.
Max : I think it's kind of dangerous... but okay, if you say so.
And with that, the Teal Team began climbing. Max's feet were slowly trying to walk carefully on the slope that felt almost like it was vertical. After five minutes, people got tired.
Choco : Ahh... I cannot feel my foot...
Angrybird : I feel so tired...
James : I don't trust any of this.
Max : It really does seem dangerous...
Krazey : Everything will be fine... we will get there.
Choco : Wait... I smell something...
Max : What ?
Choco : AHHHH ! BLOOD IS ON MY HAND ! THERE IS BLOOD !
As they started yelling, every of their teammates turned to them. Max used his phone's light to figure out what was happening ; and a dead, crushed Pianta was on the floor, full of blood.
Angrybird : WHAT ??? OH MY GOD !! WE NEED TO GO BACK !!!!
Dayzi : This seems to mean something... but what ?
Max : I don't know... but I'm scared.
Krazey : I... don't know.
And then suddenly, a boulder fell from the top of the mountain. He was going rapidly and was about to crush them. They all started yelling and running for their life, as the boulder continued to roll. After some time they ended up to the point where they were before, scared. Sadly, Max's ankle had twisted and he could not stand up anymore.
Max : I... can't even stand up.
The boy cried, as he felt weak and pained at the same time. The rest of his team was shocked. Why did a boulder fall ? What was happening ? Then they saw a figure lit up by the moon at the top of the mountain... and they understood.
Is it your fault, or is it my thoughts ?
Max : Okay so. To whoever is in my team, I want us to stay together at all times. No separation, not even a single one.
Lely : I think we should go in small groups. VC and Noob, you should go for the beaches. Alice and Ben, try to not fight with each other and go for the hills and the caverns. Me and Nudge will go in the cities, if that is alright, and our meeting point will be the huts.
VC : You have great leadership skills
Nudge : I should complain but I feel like despite being the dumbest, you also have a lot of experience
Max : I think we should head for the mountaintop. There must be something high up there.
And with that, both teams began.
VC : Going from the mountain to the beach is gonna be so hard.
Noob : We should ask for vehicles.
VC : But we don't even have a license !
Noob : Tell me, who cares ?
VC : It's not that, but how do we even find one ?
Noob : True...
Max : Okay, this might be tough. The pathway is very thin, and the slope seems steep. I don't know if it's worth it.
Krazey : At least from there, you can see the fragments shining !
Max : What if they're just lampposts ?
Krazey : Something is up there ! I have a gut feeling.
Max : I think it's kind of dangerous... but okay, if you say so.
And with that, the Teal Team began climbing. Max's feet were slowly trying to walk carefully on the slope that felt almost like it was vertical. After five minutes, people got tired.
Choco : Ahh... I cannot feel my foot...
Angrybird : I feel so tired...
James : I don't trust any of this.
Max : It really does seem dangerous...
Krazey : Everything will be fine... we will get there.
Choco : Wait... I smell something...
Max : What ?
Choco : AHHHH ! BLOOD IS ON MY HAND ! THERE IS BLOOD !
As they started yelling, every of their teammates turned to them. Max used his phone's light to figure out what was happening ; and a dead, crushed Pianta was on the floor, full of blood.
Angrybird : WHAT ??? OH MY GOD !! WE NEED TO GO BACK !!!!
Dayzi : This seems to mean something... but what ?
Max : I don't know... but I'm scared.
Krazey : I... don't know.
And then suddenly, a boulder fell from the top of the mountain. He was going rapidly and was about to crush them. They all started yelling and running for their life, as the boulder continued to roll. After some time they ended up to the point where they were before, scared. Sadly, Max's ankle had twisted and he could not stand up anymore.
Max : I... can't even stand up.
The boy cried, as he felt weak and pained at the same time. The rest of his team was shocked. Why did a boulder fall ? What was happening ? Then they saw a figure lit up by the moon at the top of the mountain... and they understood.
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1On 2024-04-23 at 01:12:08
can i join?
name: golend (last name: emerdal)
colour:#6c2791 (hex code)
personality: kind but can be mean
species: idk something to do with dragons?
annoyed by: being told carrots are good for your I sight and being defeated by weak attacks
gender: Female (but they are GAY)
name: golend (last name: emerdal)
colour:#6c2791 (hex code)
personality: kind but can be mean
species: idk something to do with dragons?
annoyed by: being told carrots are good for your I sight and being defeated by weak attacks
gender: Female (but they are GAY)
No spots left. And even if there were it would be first came first served, so RedPikmin
whatever but a fanfic shouldnt have a limit on people
Yes it should. Last time I literally had 36 people on the roster. How am I supposed to remember all of them ?? To give all of them good lines ?? And it is super pissy to write overall.
And I'm over here with 20+ people in mine lol 💀
which fanfic?
Darkness Overtaking (MATURE WARNING)
On 2024-04-22 at 13:06:50
can i join?
name: golend (last name: emerdal)
colour:#6c2791 (hex code)
personality: kind but can be mean
species: idk something to do with dragons?
annoyed by: being told carrots are good for your I sight and being defeated by weak attacks
gender: Female (but they are GAY)
name: golend (last name: emerdal)
colour:#6c2791 (hex code)
personality: kind but can be mean
species: idk something to do with dragons?
annoyed by: being told carrots are good for your I sight and being defeated by weak attacks
gender: Female (but they are GAY)
No spots left. And even if there were it would be first came first served, so RedPikmin
whatever but a fanfic shouldnt have a limit on people
Yes it should. Last time I literally had 36 people on the roster. How am I supposed to remember all of them ?? To give all of them good lines ?? And it is super pissy to write overall.
4On 2024-04-21 at 20:58:26
can i join?
name: golend (last name: emerdal)
colour:#6c2791 (hex code)
personality: kind but can be mean
species: idk something to do with dragons?
annoyed by: being told carrots are good for your I sight and being defeated by weak attacks
gender: Female (but they are GAY)
name: golend (last name: emerdal)
colour:#6c2791 (hex code)
personality: kind but can be mean
species: idk something to do with dragons?
annoyed by: being told carrots are good for your I sight and being defeated by weak attacks
gender: Female (but they are GAY)
No spots left. And even if there were it would be first came first served, so RedPikmin
2On 2024-04-21 at 10:09:53
To everyone here, would you rather :
- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, Krazey is mediumorchid, Max is teal) - react with mario facepalm
- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, Krazey is mediumorchid, Max is teal) - react with mario facepalm
The vote has ended. 6 people who are in the fanfic voted for the first option and 2 voted for the second option.
I will be having every member in their team color for Chapter 8.
1On 2024-04-21 at 10:06:39
I think that @TheNudgyHampter
@Senko
@Dietsoda
@Xx-Alyssa-xX
@osc-omb
@Noob68
@NotThatKrazey
@VC
@Dayzi_MK
@TwilightGD
make excellent and top quality tracks, don't you think?
@Senko
@Dietsoda
@Xx-Alyssa-xX
@osc-omb
@Noob68
@NotThatKrazey
@VC
@Dayzi_MK
@TwilightGD
make excellent and top quality tracks, don't you think?
C'mon bro that's my topic, you could've at least mentioned me.
More seriously, this is not the place
On 2024-04-20 at 23:26:17
To everyone here, would you rather :
- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, [quote=CyClops][quote=Lely][color=green]To everyone here, would you rather :
- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, Krazey is mediumorchid, Max is teal) - react with mario facepalm
the rest?- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, [quote=CyClops][quote=Lely][color=green]To everyone here, would you rather :
- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, Krazey is mediumorchid, Max is teal) - react with mario facepalm
What do you mean the rest ???
like Alyssia, ben, etc
Well yeah I am only giving a few examples...
k also do you wanna rank all the characters cause why not
Yeah I guess lol
13 - James
I literally struggle to find good lines for him. I failed to make a good personnality for him so he's just kind of an airhead in his own world I guess, but his character is my least favorite.
12 - Choco
They were an introvert and did not reveal much, so I decided to give them sort of the basic personnality. But that kind of character is good to balance things out and to have some normal lines I guess. Although individually, not much for them...
11 - Angrybird
Same for him but he has a lot more personnality on the forums so I guess it's my fault. I will give him a lot of character development later.
10 - Dayzi
The last of the NPCish characters. He doesn't give much of a fuck about anything though, which is a good personnality trait to add. He is also mostly sleepy so his lines can be more on the "idc do what you want lol" side instead of the boring side.
9. Noob
Okay, we did step forward. But not totally, which is the situation for our Nooby noob. I failed to give him the more... edgy personnality he can sometimes. But that is also my fault, a lot of development is planned.
8. Krazey
For a guy that has a lot of personnality, I used some, but not enough I think. On the other side though, his edgy pervert personnality does not fit the fanfic as much as MKPCverse which is much darker. So there is that too. He is still a fun character to write though.
7. Max
Despite being an OG I failed to reconstitute his personnality since it changed a lot, and his character is kind of lacking. He is protective and at the center of things, but that is actually about it. I expected more to be honest.
6. Eli
For the plot he is amazing, but I would have gotten tired of his violent personnality with time even if he wasn't kicked out. I never know how to moderate things without them becoming too peaceful, so there is that too.
5. Ben
Another character that is awesome for the plot. He is basically the brat that nobody likes, and a lot of character development is possible, but for now he is still not my favorite to work with.
4. Lely
My character is pretty sensitive as for now. I think me being the author of this fanfic, my character is not actually a huge crybaby, which is good. But I also feel like I could go further with my personnality. Since, I like writing my own character lmao.
3. Alice
An amazing character with the right amount of fire that I was able to stop with a transition episode. I think her being kind of sassy without being outright mean to people most of the time is an amazing character trait tbh.
2. VC
She is the favorite child, and I am not ashamed. I love working with her easy going personnality, I love the fact she gets overwhelmed by the fighting very quick and yet has some personnality. Her being an OG adds to that special feel I have, overall I love writing with her lmao. Call me biased I don't care.
1. Nudge
Who the hell do you want at the top except Nudge ? Maybe he is not mean enough, yeah. But his personnality can be used a lot, mean and serious at the same time, and yet not a complete asshole with some moments where it is toned down. The coldness is quite balanced actually, which I guess is good. It's crazy how he hates me but he's my favorite character to write lol
fight me but Ben is 1 otherwise just put Krazey higher
Krazey would have been higher if he had a personnality like in my other fanfics. Ben can be 1st if you are a reader like you, since he contrinutes a lot to the plot, but he is not the most enjoyable to write lol
On 2024-04-20 at 23:05:03
To everyone here, would you rather :
- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, [quote=CyClops][quote=Lely][color=green]To everyone here, would you rather :
- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, Krazey is mediumorchid, Max is teal) - react with mario facepalm
the rest?- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, [quote=CyClops][quote=Lely][color=green]To everyone here, would you rather :
- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, Krazey is mediumorchid, Max is teal) - react with mario facepalm
What do you mean the rest ???
like Alyssia, ben, etc
Well yeah I am only giving a few examples...
k also do you wanna rank all the characters cause why not
Yeah I guess lol
13 - James
I literally struggle to find good lines for him. I failed to make a good personnality for him so he's just kind of an airhead in his own world I guess, but his character is my least favorite.
12 - Choco
They were an introvert and did not reveal much, so I decided to give them sort of the basic personnality. But that kind of character is good to balance things out and to have some normal lines I guess. Although individually, not much for them...
11 - Angrybird
Same for him but he has a lot more personnality on the forums so I guess it's my fault. I will give him a lot of character development later.
10 - Dayzi
The last of the NPCish characters. He doesn't give much of a fuck about anything though, which is a good personnality trait to add. He is also mostly sleepy so his lines can be more on the "idc do what you want lol" side instead of the boring side.
9. Noob
Okay, we did step forward. But not totally, which is the situation for our Nooby noob. I failed to give him the more... edgy personnality he can sometimes. But that is also my fault, a lot of development is planned.
8. Krazey
For a guy that has a lot of personnality, I used some, but not enough I think. On the other side though, his edgy pervert personnality does not fit the fanfic as much as MKPCverse which is much darker. So there is that too. He is still a fun character to write though.
7. Max
Despite being an OG I failed to reconstitute his personnality since it changed a lot, and his character is kind of lacking. He is protective and at the center of things, but that is actually about it. I expected more to be honest.
6. Eli
For the plot he is amazing, but I would have gotten tired of his violent personnality with time even if he wasn't kicked out. I never know how to moderate things without them becoming too peaceful, so there is that too.
5. Ben
Another character that is awesome for the plot. He is basically the brat that nobody likes, and a lot of character development is possible, but for now he is still not my favorite to work with.
4. Lely
My character is pretty sensitive as for now. I think me being the author of this fanfic, my character is not actually a huge crybaby, which is good. But I also feel like I could go further with my personnality. Since, I like writing my own character lmao.
3. Alice
An amazing character with the right amount of fire that I was able to stop with a transition episode. I think her being kind of sassy without being outright mean to people most of the time is an amazing character trait tbh.
2. VC
She is the favorite child, and I am not ashamed. I love working with her easy going personnality, I love the fact she gets overwhelmed by the fighting very quick and yet has some personnality. Her being an OG adds to that special feel I have, overall I love writing with her lmao. Call me biased I don't care.
1. Nudge
Who the hell do you want at the top except Nudge ? Maybe he is not mean enough, yeah. But his personnality can be used a lot, mean and serious at the same time, and yet not a complete asshole with some moments where it is toned down. The coldness is quite balanced actually, which I guess is good. It's crazy how he hates me but he's my favorite character to write lol
22On 2024-04-20 at 22:42:38
To everyone here, would you rather :
- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, Krazey is mediumorchid, Max is teal) - react with mario facepalm
the rest?- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, Krazey is mediumorchid, Max is teal) - react with mario facepalm
What do you mean the rest ???
like Alyssia, ben, etc
Well yeah I am only giving a few examples...
On 2024-04-20 at 22:38:58
To everyone here, would you rather :
- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, Krazey is mediumorchid, Max is teal) - react with mario facepalm
the rest?- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, Krazey is mediumorchid, Max is teal) - react with mario facepalm
What do you mean the rest ???