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[Fanfic] - The Dark Ages of MKPC - TW : Violence
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6102 pts ★ RacerOn 2024-09-02 at 20:26:03
Well this fanfic is gonna be put on hiatus. It might sound very weird but I prefer to wait to really enjoy writing for this fanfic isntead of forcing and pushing it. I have other ideas in mind.
New drinking game: take a shot every time Lely puts a fanfic on hiatus and never returns to it. I'll start:
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This one is gonna be finished. Promise.
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1On 2024-09-02 at 01:37:05
Well this fanfic is gonna be put on hiatus. It might sound very weird but I prefer to wait to really enjoy writing for this fanfic isntead of forcing and pushing it. I have other ideas in mind.
2On 2024-08-31 at 16:27:10
guys I have an idea
Entity plush in...
...SEASON 2?!?!!?
Entity plush in...
...SEASON 2?!?!!?
There'll be a season 2 but with the same cast I think. And please submit a good character... I may remind you that all the cast here is human, not a fucking brain or idk what else y'all could be thinking about
OH YEAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!! Or not...
Anyways entity plush could be one of those villians.
Your character will not be a plush.
On 2024-08-31 at 01:31:37
I may remind you that all the cast here is human
uh...
well...
the character i submitted (Scorchy [me]) is supposed to be a Pikmin, but im fine with him still being human
Yeah I thought I was gonna be a Toad as well but it's all humans you guys
Let's be honest. A Toad as a vigilante will not do anything, and a Pikmin as a singer will flop.
13On 2024-08-30 at 17:04:13
guys I have an idea
Entity plush in...
...SEASON 2?!?!!?
Entity plush in...
...SEASON 2?!?!!?
There'll be a season 2 but with the same cast I think. And please submit a good character... I may remind you that all the cast here is human, not a fucking brain or idk what else y'all could be thinking about
1On 2024-08-27 at 10:33:34
-69 Trillion out of 10
WHERE THE HECK AM I?!?!?!?
WHERE THE HECK AM I?!?!?!?
Your character wasn't accepted. Second of all, I didn't even start writing a new episode, so where do you expect your character to be ?
On 2024-08-26 at 14:10:11
Sorry for the long ass time this episode took to make lmao, I was sick then had no Wifi, then had the family coming over and then my IRL friends. O was very busy but it's finally here ! Next episode will be a bit better hopefully.
3On 2024-08-26 at 13:31:35
Chapter 4 : Sparkling Night
Lely's House
6PM. Lely was waiting for Fiery to get out of the bathroom to shower. Fiery though, was very meticulous about putting his suit right.
Lely : Will you be done soon ?
Fiery : Yes, I will be out in one minute
Lely : Alright. Dinner will be ready in 10 minutes when I'll get out.
Fiery : Oh about that... I don't want to eat, because I am afraid to feel bloated afterwards.
Lely : Have fun missing out on couscous and grapes then.
Fiery : WHAT-
When Fiery got out...
Fiery : So yeah. This suit is a prototype. I will make a proper one tomorrow. This one will do for tonight.
Lely : Epic. Also I didn't know you had abs
Fiery : That is just a design...
Lely : Ha. Trust me, if you're a vigilante, you will get them soon enough. Anyways, I'm going to shower. You can put the TV on in the meanwhile.
Fiery headed towards the living room and he decided to watch the information channel.
UraniumMan : -As economy was about to crumble, citizens from the land decided to build small shops in order to provide everyone what they needed. Now I'm leaving you with my coallegue, interviewing one of these brave citizens.
IronMan : Why thank you. So anyways, Miles. What was the idea you had in mind while taking this decision ?
Miles : Helping the land as much as I can. After two weeks, I will leave these shops to another citizen that I will hire. In the meanwhile, I plan to restore the Mushrestaurant with a former employee of the place.
IronMan : That is a very good idea. Are you legally permitted to perform such activities ?
Miles : Of course. The papers are here. I got official permission from the land. But even then, I encourage people to help the land even without legal permission. Laws are supposed to control the country in order for things not to get messy. But right now, that should not be the focus. The focus right now is reducing criminality and saving economy.
IronMan : These are very inspiring words. Now I will leave you to UraniumMan again, dear MKPCians. Goodbye, Miles !
Miles : Goodbye !
UraniumMan : See MKPCians. This is what truly helps the land. Selling resources from an almost totally destructed mall. This is much better than being a silly, shitty vigilante.
Fiery : Shitty vigilantes are better than biased presentators...
Police Station
7PM. Jake and Asher were about to leave their job soon, but Jake was still trying to resolve the Moon group affair.
Jake : Hmm... If we take in consideration that the murders happened at the Moonstruck Cave... that means more people might be hiding in there. We need to send someone there. Asher ? Ready for your night shift ?
Asher : Huh ?? Night shift ??
Jake : You slept for the WHOLE day. It's about time you do something.
Moonstruck Cave
8PM. Asher was questioning every of his life decisions.
Asher : Oh my God... this place is full of rats. It smells like blood and puke. I want to go home...
Asher made his way through the darkness, until he tripped on something.
Asher : What was.. AHHHH !!!
Right behind him, a dead body was laying on the ground. And right in front of him, someone was standing.
Leadgaming's House
Leadgaming : Finally, another day that ended. And I felt like I led it all along.
Leadgaming kept saying these sentences, but at home, he felt more alone than ever. He tried to hide his feelings but could never escape from them.
Leadgaming : Time to go in my pool... and listen to some random song.
Leadgaming : I always pretend that I lead something... but what and who am I leading ? I might be rich, but that doesn't change my loneliness...
He kept thinking a little more.
Leadgaming : What if they're all right ? What if I need to stop acting like this ?
And then before he knew it, his cheeks were wet, and not by the pool's water.
Leadgaming : sighs What have I become...
MKPC's Sunken Town
VC : You down for hide and seek ?
K : Please get out of my face...
VC : Oh no, I want to play with you.. I don't want to be alone..
K : That's unfortunate because I do.
VC : Ah... I am so bored.
Peacegor Street
Fireblaze : YOU ! OVER THERE. HANDS UP !
??? : Try to catch me !
Fireblaze : throws grappling hook I'M COMING, I'M COMING !
??? : realizes Fiery is now right behind Oh shit. I need to get out of here quickly. he tries to run but the bag in which he held the jewelry fell to the ground AH, MAN !!!!
Fireblaze : uses this as an opportunity to catch him AHH ! YOU'RE DOOMED !
??? : AHHH ! LET GO OF ME YOU UGLY MUSHROOM !
Fireblaze : In your dreams, you bloody criminal ! Hey Lely ! That yoot's all roped up now !
Lely : Congratulations, Iceblade !
Fireblaze : IT'S FIREBLAZE !!
Lely : Bey..blade ?
Fireblaze : FIRE RUDDY BLAZE !
Lely : Fireruddyblaze... tad long but ok. OH WAIT, BE CAREFUL- FUCK !!!!
Fireblaze : is pushed by the criminal and falls along with him AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
Lely : Oh my... OH MY GOD !!! he runs and throws the safety mattress over the place that Fiery is falling onto
Fireblaze : AHHHHH ! falls right on the mattress OH MY GODDD !!!!
Lely : I'm calling the police...
Fireblaze : No !! DO NOT !!!!
Lely : They're on their way.
Fireblaze : I TOLD YOU NOT TO !!!
Lely : WHY ???
Fireblaze : BECAUSE I DO NOT HAVE THE PERMIT FOR SUCH ACTIVITIES !!!!
Lely : Oh...
Well, shit.
The Dark Ages of MKPC
Episode 4
The end.
Lely's House
6PM. Lely was waiting for Fiery to get out of the bathroom to shower. Fiery though, was very meticulous about putting his suit right.
Lely : Will you be done soon ?
Fiery : Yes, I will be out in one minute
Lely : Alright. Dinner will be ready in 10 minutes when I'll get out.
Fiery : Oh about that... I don't want to eat, because I am afraid to feel bloated afterwards.
Lely : Have fun missing out on couscous and grapes then.
Fiery : WHAT-
When Fiery got out...
Fiery : So yeah. This suit is a prototype. I will make a proper one tomorrow. This one will do for tonight.
Lely : Epic. Also I didn't know you had abs
Fiery : That is just a design...
Lely : Ha. Trust me, if you're a vigilante, you will get them soon enough. Anyways, I'm going to shower. You can put the TV on in the meanwhile.
Fiery headed towards the living room and he decided to watch the information channel.
UraniumMan : -As economy was about to crumble, citizens from the land decided to build small shops in order to provide everyone what they needed. Now I'm leaving you with my coallegue, interviewing one of these brave citizens.
IronMan : Why thank you. So anyways, Miles. What was the idea you had in mind while taking this decision ?
Miles : Helping the land as much as I can. After two weeks, I will leave these shops to another citizen that I will hire. In the meanwhile, I plan to restore the Mushrestaurant with a former employee of the place.
IronMan : That is a very good idea. Are you legally permitted to perform such activities ?
Miles : Of course. The papers are here. I got official permission from the land. But even then, I encourage people to help the land even without legal permission. Laws are supposed to control the country in order for things not to get messy. But right now, that should not be the focus. The focus right now is reducing criminality and saving economy.
IronMan : These are very inspiring words. Now I will leave you to UraniumMan again, dear MKPCians. Goodbye, Miles !
Miles : Goodbye !
UraniumMan : See MKPCians. This is what truly helps the land. Selling resources from an almost totally destructed mall. This is much better than being a silly, shitty vigilante.
Fiery : Shitty vigilantes are better than biased presentators...
Police Station
7PM. Jake and Asher were about to leave their job soon, but Jake was still trying to resolve the Moon group affair.
Jake : Hmm... If we take in consideration that the murders happened at the Moonstruck Cave... that means more people might be hiding in there. We need to send someone there. Asher ? Ready for your night shift ?
Asher : Huh ?? Night shift ??
Jake : You slept for the WHOLE day. It's about time you do something.
Moonstruck Cave
8PM. Asher was questioning every of his life decisions.
Asher : Oh my God... this place is full of rats. It smells like blood and puke. I want to go home...
Asher made his way through the darkness, until he tripped on something.
Asher : What was.. AHHHH !!!
Right behind him, a dead body was laying on the ground. And right in front of him, someone was standing.
Leadgaming's House
Leadgaming : Finally, another day that ended. And I felt like I led it all along.
Leadgaming kept saying these sentences, but at home, he felt more alone than ever. He tried to hide his feelings but could never escape from them.
Leadgaming : Time to go in my pool... and listen to some random song.
Leadgaming : I always pretend that I lead something... but what and who am I leading ? I might be rich, but that doesn't change my loneliness...
He kept thinking a little more.
Leadgaming : What if they're all right ? What if I need to stop acting like this ?
And then before he knew it, his cheeks were wet, and not by the pool's water.
Leadgaming : sighs What have I become...
MKPC's Sunken Town
VC : You down for hide and seek ?
K : Please get out of my face...
VC : Oh no, I want to play with you.. I don't want to be alone..
K : That's unfortunate because I do.
VC : Ah... I am so bored.
Peacegor Street
Fireblaze : YOU ! OVER THERE. HANDS UP !
??? : Try to catch me !
Fireblaze : throws grappling hook I'M COMING, I'M COMING !
??? : realizes Fiery is now right behind Oh shit. I need to get out of here quickly. he tries to run but the bag in which he held the jewelry fell to the ground AH, MAN !!!!
Fireblaze : uses this as an opportunity to catch him AHH ! YOU'RE DOOMED !
??? : AHHH ! LET GO OF ME YOU UGLY MUSHROOM !
Fireblaze : In your dreams, you bloody criminal ! Hey Lely ! That yoot's all roped up now !
Lely : Congratulations, Iceblade !
Fireblaze : IT'S FIREBLAZE !!
Lely : Bey..blade ?
Fireblaze : FIRE RUDDY BLAZE !
Lely : Fireruddyblaze... tad long but ok. OH WAIT, BE CAREFUL- FUCK !!!!
Fireblaze : is pushed by the criminal and falls along with him AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
Lely : Oh my... OH MY GOD !!! he runs and throws the safety mattress over the place that Fiery is falling onto
Fireblaze : AHHHHH ! falls right on the mattress OH MY GODDD !!!!
Lely : I'm calling the police...
Fireblaze : No !! DO NOT !!!!
Lely : They're on their way.
Fireblaze : I TOLD YOU NOT TO !!!
Lely : WHY ???
Fireblaze : BECAUSE I DO NOT HAVE THE PERMIT FOR SUCH ACTIVITIES !!!!
Lely : Oh...
Well, shit.
The Dark Ages of MKPC
Episode 4
The end.
Line Distribution
Fiery - 17
Lely - 13
Leadgaming - 5
Miles - 3
VC - 3
K - 2
UraniumMan - 2
Fiery - 17
Lely - 13
Leadgaming - 5
Miles - 3
VC - 3
K - 2
UraniumMan - 2
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3On 2024-07-24 at 11:23:51
The whole Fiery-vigilante thing came up quickly!
Anyways great episode! One of the best MKPC fanfics so far
Anyways great episode! One of the best MKPC fanfics so far
Yeah, it did
Someone was getting impatient.Aside from that, thank you so much for the positive feedback ! I really appreciate it 🫶🏼
On 2024-07-24 at 01:01:24
Chapter 3 : Rise Up
Lely's House
1PM. Lely invited Fiery to his house to make him a drink. As Lely was making the drinks, Fiery was whispering to himself.
Fiery : What if I became...
Lely : What are you talking about ?
Fiery : No... you're gonna find it ridiculous.
Lely : I won't make fun of you, I promise. I'm just curious.
Fiery : You will laugh...
Lely : What business would I have doing so ??
Fiery : I don't know but I'm scared. You are still just a stranger who's randomly invited me to have a drink in his house.
Lely : And you're some creep who randomly thought I was a killer with multiple murders.
Fiery : That's just about that. I kinda want to...
Lely : Yeah ?
Fiery : Become a vigilante.
Mushrestaurant
1:30PM. Miles and David are standing in front of the restaurant. Miles is disappointed while David
Miles : Can't believe they got a closure notice just for an incident that was caused by some obscure people.
David : Oh, I never liked their dishes anyways.
Miles : You hardly like anything.
David : Eh, true.
Miles : I should contact Lely to actually revive this place. I believe it's worth something.
David : I believe you're wasting your time.
Miles : When you see potential in something, you must never give up.
David : You really see something in a restaurant where the wooden floor is soaked, the kitchens completely burned and the camera room hacked by the Moon group ?
Miles : Oh shut it.
News Presentation Set
UraniumMan : Hello everyone, and welcome to your usual local news. Today we decided to interview two celebrities again, to have their opinion about the new events that occurred, notably Lely being freed due to his innocence seemingly being proved for now.
Leadgaming : Well personnally I still do not care, as long as I'm not affected. To be a leader, you ignore the nobodies.
Scorchy : Oh my God... well anyways, I think these are amazing news ! I was already very doubtful as to why a guy single handedly serving the customers during a particularly rough night could be a murderer. I believe the Moon group are the culprits. We will definitively need to gather more information though.
Leadgaming : I'm sorry but you care too much...
Scorchy : Too much is better than not enough.
Leadgaming : That's your opinion.
Scorchy : It is. What's wrong with it?
Leadgaming : It is less valuable than mine.
Scorchy : Says who ?
Leadgaming : Me. The leader of all.
Scorchy : Just because you wore quality clothes and obtained expensive cars for free doesn't mean you are a great person.
UraniumMan : Stop arguing you rich bitches before I get you off the set. Oh shit, we're on camera. I forgot. Sorry. Anyways, goodbye, MKPCians. We will meet again this evening or tomorrow. When fate will decide.
Leadgaming : Acting like he didn't just speak in low vocabulary.
Scorchy : sighs Why am I here already ?
Police Station
2PM. The two policemen are sat at their office, as usual. They seem perturbated by something.
Jake : We should probably gather more information and interview everyone who was affected by this accident.
Asher : Do what ya want bro.
Jake : I should fire you, but that's illegal.
Asher : Alrighty my man.
Jake called the people that were affected by the incidents, one by one. One hour later, they eventually arrived.
Jake : Welcome everybody, please take a seat. Thank you for attending this meeting. It is about the Lely case. Do you have any information about the Moon group he talked about ?
Fiery : I do. As I was on the crime scene, blood formed a sentence. "WE NEVER DIE, WE ARE EVERYWHERE".
Jake : How is that possible ?
Fiery : Idk but it certainly was.
Jake : It might have been a hallucination, do you have a picture ?
Fiery : I do hands over the phone
The picture shows a puddle of blood with absolutely no trace of the sentence. However, Jake squinted his eyes, and saw the sentence.
Jake : It's very weird... it might prove that more members of the group might be out in the nature. Some of them might actually have caused the 9:29 incidents. Anyone else ?
Lely : I remember noting down something in my phone that they said "we shall unite to be stronger" or something like that..
Jake : reads it out loud In a place where no rules are here to regulate the world, hell breaks loose. Terrible people unite and they become stronger. To be as strong as them, we need to unite.
Lely : Oh yeah. They told me "they had enough power to destroy the peace of a whole land, and that they were united. And that unison was what made them strong."
Jake : That proves that Moon and her boyfriend were part of an organization that caused these five incidents...
Blobby : And why would they choose 9:29PM ?
David : That's so random !
Blobby : I believe there is a reason behind !
David : Tssk, another one wasting his time.
Blobby : No ! I want to find out what might be hiding behind !
Miles : Is it like the name of a song ?
Lely : Yeah. 21:29, which was almost called 9:29.
Miles : What if they're just fans ?
Leadgaming : No, that's wrong.
Miles : Then you shall explain why. You have been useless for the whole time you were here.
Leadgaming : That explanation just sounded stupid to me. You are lazy to find out a real reason.
Miles : That is real hypocritical. And not everything is about you.
SM7 : ✋️💥🧠👍🏼 (Stop arguing, I think I know the reason)
Scorchy : Huh ?? What now ??
Leadgaming : Ignore, ignore...
Miles : OH MY GOD SHUT UP FOR A SECOND !
SM7 : 😱🤚9️⃣2️⃣9️⃣🔚👷♀️ (Due to trauma, I can only rely on sign language. 9:29 is the hour where employees end their shift.)
Blobby : Haven't understood much but I think he said 9:29 is the hour where employees end their shift.
Babymario : It is also the hour where employees in restaurants are serving customers and less in the kitchens...
K : The hour where big shops close...
Dietsoda : The hour where little, smaller criminals cause havoc in the hidden parts of the city... like VC, a mentally sick ghost I have met yesterday.
K : A what ?
Dietsoda : A ghost.
K : Does that exist ?
Dietsoda : I was surprised as well.
K : Wow...
Dietsoda : Right.
Babymario : So we now know it's a group who is causing this... and Moon was part of it. They also chose a very strategic hour... thank you SM7. You triggered the system no one could start.
SM7 : 😊🙏 (You are welcome)
Babymario : Wow, the missing pieces are really starting to come together...
Fiery : On that topic, why didn't Max and Wal come ? Their building got bombed down...
Jake : Their phone was not responding. Just like Asher.
Asher : Wait? Huh? What? Oh, I need to pull out a good excuse. I need to use the bathroom, I will go now.
Jake : I think you did not mean to say that out loud... anyways, what could they be doing ?
Oscar : They must be so busy !
Dudzi : I guess they are. They might be planning to organize a TV intervention...
Oscar : Right ? Well, I hope they will enlighten us soon.
Dudzi : They might be of great help.
Miles : I agree, we need them...
Wal's House
In the meanwhile, Max and Wal...
Max : Oh my God, your spa is actually so good. Resting is key in such moments.
Wal68 : Right ? I thought it could indeed be of great use. ^^
Max : Do you have cocktails around there ?
Wal68 : I do. I wish Mushrestaurant was still open though, so that we could get greater drinks.
Max : It doesn't matter. Bring them all out.
Wal68 : On it !
Max : Ah, reminds me of the time I was a Snorlax...
Wal68 : Oh, you were ?
Max : Long story...
Wal68 : Yeah, you're right. Let's relax for now.
The Dark Ages of MKPC
Chapter 3
The end
...?
VC : Is this a joke ? Everyone had lines but me. Well, I guess I will make them myself. Oh, and I feel like someone just talked about me... and they didn't say very nice things. But anyways, hope you had a good read ! Wait, I broke character. And the fourth wall as well. HAHAHAHA ! Well, good night, you lovely reader...
The real end.
I also don't have a line ! ^^Lely's House
1PM. Lely invited Fiery to his house to make him a drink. As Lely was making the drinks, Fiery was whispering to himself.
Fiery : What if I became...
Lely : What are you talking about ?
Fiery : No... you're gonna find it ridiculous.
Lely : I won't make fun of you, I promise. I'm just curious.
Fiery : You will laugh...
Lely : What business would I have doing so ??
Fiery : I don't know but I'm scared. You are still just a stranger who's randomly invited me to have a drink in his house.
Lely : And you're some creep who randomly thought I was a killer with multiple murders.
Fiery : That's just about that. I kinda want to...
Lely : Yeah ?
Fiery : Become a vigilante.
Mushrestaurant
1:30PM. Miles and David are standing in front of the restaurant. Miles is disappointed while David
Miles : Can't believe they got a closure notice just for an incident that was caused by some obscure people.
David : Oh, I never liked their dishes anyways.
Miles : You hardly like anything.
David : Eh, true.
Miles : I should contact Lely to actually revive this place. I believe it's worth something.
David : I believe you're wasting your time.
Miles : When you see potential in something, you must never give up.
David : You really see something in a restaurant where the wooden floor is soaked, the kitchens completely burned and the camera room hacked by the Moon group ?
Miles : Oh shut it.
News Presentation Set
UraniumMan : Hello everyone, and welcome to your usual local news. Today we decided to interview two celebrities again, to have their opinion about the new events that occurred, notably Lely being freed due to his innocence seemingly being proved for now.
Leadgaming : Well personnally I still do not care, as long as I'm not affected. To be a leader, you ignore the nobodies.
Scorchy : Oh my God... well anyways, I think these are amazing news ! I was already very doubtful as to why a guy single handedly serving the customers during a particularly rough night could be a murderer. I believe the Moon group are the culprits. We will definitively need to gather more information though.
Leadgaming : I'm sorry but you care too much...
Scorchy : Too much is better than not enough.
Leadgaming : That's your opinion.
Scorchy : It is. What's wrong with it?
Leadgaming : It is less valuable than mine.
Scorchy : Says who ?
Leadgaming : Me. The leader of all.
Scorchy : Just because you wore quality clothes and obtained expensive cars for free doesn't mean you are a great person.
UraniumMan : Stop arguing you rich bitches before I get you off the set. Oh shit, we're on camera. I forgot. Sorry. Anyways, goodbye, MKPCians. We will meet again this evening or tomorrow. When fate will decide.
Leadgaming : Acting like he didn't just speak in low vocabulary.
Scorchy : sighs Why am I here already ?
Police Station
2PM. The two policemen are sat at their office, as usual. They seem perturbated by something.
Jake : We should probably gather more information and interview everyone who was affected by this accident.
Asher : Do what ya want bro.
Jake : I should fire you, but that's illegal.
Asher : Alrighty my man.
Jake called the people that were affected by the incidents, one by one. One hour later, they eventually arrived.
Jake : Welcome everybody, please take a seat. Thank you for attending this meeting. It is about the Lely case. Do you have any information about the Moon group he talked about ?
Fiery : I do. As I was on the crime scene, blood formed a sentence. "WE NEVER DIE, WE ARE EVERYWHERE".
Jake : How is that possible ?
Fiery : Idk but it certainly was.
Jake : It might have been a hallucination, do you have a picture ?
Fiery : I do hands over the phone
The picture shows a puddle of blood with absolutely no trace of the sentence. However, Jake squinted his eyes, and saw the sentence.
Jake : It's very weird... it might prove that more members of the group might be out in the nature. Some of them might actually have caused the 9:29 incidents. Anyone else ?
Lely : I remember noting down something in my phone that they said "we shall unite to be stronger" or something like that..
Jake : reads it out loud In a place where no rules are here to regulate the world, hell breaks loose. Terrible people unite and they become stronger. To be as strong as them, we need to unite.
Lely : Oh yeah. They told me "they had enough power to destroy the peace of a whole land, and that they were united. And that unison was what made them strong."
Jake : That proves that Moon and her boyfriend were part of an organization that caused these five incidents...
Blobby : And why would they choose 9:29PM ?
David : That's so random !
Blobby : I believe there is a reason behind !
David : Tssk, another one wasting his time.
Blobby : No ! I want to find out what might be hiding behind !
Miles : Is it like the name of a song ?
Lely : Yeah. 21:29, which was almost called 9:29.
Miles : What if they're just fans ?
Leadgaming : No, that's wrong.
Miles : Then you shall explain why. You have been useless for the whole time you were here.
Leadgaming : That explanation just sounded stupid to me. You are lazy to find out a real reason.
Miles : That is real hypocritical. And not everything is about you.
SM7 : ✋️💥🧠👍🏼 (Stop arguing, I think I know the reason)
Scorchy : Huh ?? What now ??
Leadgaming : Ignore, ignore...
Miles : OH MY GOD SHUT UP FOR A SECOND !
SM7 : 😱🤚9️⃣2️⃣9️⃣🔚👷♀️ (Due to trauma, I can only rely on sign language. 9:29 is the hour where employees end their shift.)
Blobby : Haven't understood much but I think he said 9:29 is the hour where employees end their shift.
Babymario : It is also the hour where employees in restaurants are serving customers and less in the kitchens...
K : The hour where big shops close...
Dietsoda : The hour where little, smaller criminals cause havoc in the hidden parts of the city... like VC, a mentally sick ghost I have met yesterday.
K : A what ?
Dietsoda : A ghost.
K : Does that exist ?
Dietsoda : I was surprised as well.
K : Wow...
Dietsoda : Right.
Babymario : So we now know it's a group who is causing this... and Moon was part of it. They also chose a very strategic hour... thank you SM7. You triggered the system no one could start.
SM7 : 😊🙏 (You are welcome)
Babymario : Wow, the missing pieces are really starting to come together...
Fiery : On that topic, why didn't Max and Wal come ? Their building got bombed down...
Jake : Their phone was not responding. Just like Asher.
Asher : Wait? Huh? What? Oh, I need to pull out a good excuse. I need to use the bathroom, I will go now.
Jake : I think you did not mean to say that out loud... anyways, what could they be doing ?
Oscar : They must be so busy !
Dudzi : I guess they are. They might be planning to organize a TV intervention...
Oscar : Right ? Well, I hope they will enlighten us soon.
Dudzi : They might be of great help.
Miles : I agree, we need them...
Wal's House
In the meanwhile, Max and Wal...
Max : Oh my God, your spa is actually so good. Resting is key in such moments.
Wal68 : Right ? I thought it could indeed be of great use. ^^
Max : Do you have cocktails around there ?
Wal68 : I do. I wish Mushrestaurant was still open though, so that we could get greater drinks.
Max : It doesn't matter. Bring them all out.
Wal68 : On it !
Max : Ah, reminds me of the time I was a Snorlax...
Wal68 : Oh, you were ?
Max : Long story...
Wal68 : Yeah, you're right. Let's relax for now.
The Dark Ages of MKPC
Chapter 3
The end
...?
VC : Is this a joke ? Everyone had lines but me. Well, I guess I will make them myself. Oh, and I feel like someone just talked about me... and they didn't say very nice things. But anyways, hope you had a good read ! Wait, I broke character. And the fourth wall as well. HAHAHAHA ! Well, good night, you lovely reader...
The real end.
Yeah I'm sorry for this terrible discrimination
On 2024-07-23 at 23:58:27
AWESOME! i talk a lot in this chapter. just like irl.
also quite well written, i think its better than the prologue. well done, new best chapter!
also quite well written, i think its better than the prologue. well done, new best chapter!
Thank you so much for the positive feedback, it feels even more meaningful since you weren't the biggest fan of the last two chapters
I really appreciate it, thank you soo much 🫶🏼
2On 2024-07-23 at 23:32:09
Chapter 3 : Rise Up
Lely's House
1PM. Lely invited Fiery to his house to make him a drink. As Lely was making the drinks, Fiery was whispering to himself.
Fiery : What if I became...
Lely : What are you talking about ?
Fiery : No... you're gonna find it ridiculous.
Lely : I won't make fun of you, I promise. I'm just curious.
Fiery : You will laugh...
Lely : What business would I have doing so ??
Fiery : I don't know but I'm scared. You are still just a stranger who's randomly invited me to have a drink in his house.
Lely : And you're some creep who randomly thought I was a killer with multiple murders.
Fiery : That's just about that. I kinda want to...
Lely : Yeah ?
Fiery : Become a vigilante.
Mushrestaurant
1:30PM. Miles and David are standing in front of the restaurant. Miles is disappointed while David
Miles : Can't believe they got a closure notice just for an incident that was caused by some obscure people.
David : Oh, I never liked their dishes anyways.
Miles : You hardly like anything.
David : Eh, true.
Miles : I should contact Lely to actually revive this place. I believe it's worth something.
David : I believe you're wasting your time.
Miles : When you see potential in something, you must never give up.
David : You really see something in a restaurant where the wooden floor is soaked, the kitchens completely burned and the camera room hacked by the Moon group ?
Miles : Oh shut it.
News Presentation Set
UraniumMan : Hello everyone, and welcome to your usual local news. Today we decided to interview two celebrities again, to have their opinion about the new events that occurred, notably Lely being freed due to his innocence seemingly being proved for now.
Leadgaming : Well personnally I still do not care, as long as I'm not affected. To be a leader, you ignore the nobodies.
Scorchy : Oh my God... well anyways, I think these are amazing news ! I was already very doubtful as to why a guy single handedly serving the customers during a particularly rough night could be a murderer. I believe the Moon group are the culprits. We will definitively need to gather more information though.
Leadgaming : I'm sorry but you care too much...
Scorchy : Too much is better than not enough.
Leadgaming : That's your opinion.
Scorchy : It is. What's wrong with it?
Leadgaming : It is less valuable than mine.
Scorchy : Says who ?
Leadgaming : Me. The leader of all.
Scorchy : Just because you wore quality clothes and obtained expensive cars for free doesn't mean you are a great person.
UraniumMan : Stop arguing you rich bitches before I get you off the set. Oh shit, we're on camera. I forgot. Sorry. Anyways, goodbye, MKPCians. We will meet again this evening or tomorrow. When fate will decide.
Leadgaming : Acting like he didn't just speak in low vocabulary.
Scorchy : sighs Why am I here already ?
Police Station
2PM. The two policemen are sat at their office, as usual. They seem perturbated by something.
Jake : We should probably gather more information and interview everyone who was affected by this accident.
Asher : Do what ya want bro.
Jake : I should fire you, but that's illegal.
Asher : Alrighty my man.
Jake called the people that were affected by the incidents, one by one. One hour later, they eventually arrived.
Jake : Welcome everybody, please take a seat. Thank you for attending this meeting. It is about the Lely case. Do you have any information about the Moon group he talked about ?
Fiery : I do. As I was on the crime scene, blood formed a sentence. "WE NEVER DIE, WE ARE EVERYWHERE".
Jake : How is that possible ?
Fiery : Idk but it certainly was.
Jake : It might have been a hallucination, do you have a picture ?
Fiery : I do hands over the phone
The picture shows a puddle of blood with absolutely no trace of the sentence. However, Jake squinted his eyes, and saw the sentence.
Jake : It's very weird... it might prove that more members of the group might be out in the nature. Some of them might actually have caused the 9:29 incidents. Anyone else ?
Lely : I remember noting down something in my phone that they said "we shall unite to be stronger" or something like that..
Jake : reads it out loud In a place where no rules are here to regulate the world, hell breaks loose. Terrible people unite and they become stronger. To be as strong as them, we need to unite.
Lely : Oh yeah. They told me "they had enough power to destroy the peace of a whole land, and that they were united. And that unison was what made them strong."
Jake : That proves that Moon and her boyfriend were part of an organization that caused these five incidents...
Blobby : And why would they choose 9:29PM ?
David : That's so random !
Blobby : I believe there is a reason behind !
David : Tssk, another one wasting his time.
Blobby : No ! I want to find out what might be hiding behind !
Miles : Is it like the name of a song ?
Lely : Yeah. 21:29, which was almost called 9:29.
Miles : What if they're just fans ?
Leadgaming : No, that's wrong.
Miles : Then you shall explain why. You have been useless for the whole time you were here.
Leadgaming : That explanation just sounded stupid to me. You are lazy to find out a real reason.
Miles : That is real hypocritical. And not everything is about you.
SM7 : ✋️💥🧠👍🏼 (Stop arguing, I think I know the reason)
Scorchy : Huh ?? What now ??
Leadgaming : Ignore, ignore...
Miles : OH MY GOD SHUT UP FOR A SECOND !
SM7 : 😱🤚9️⃣2️⃣9️⃣🔚👷♀️ (Due to trauma, I can only rely on sign language. 9:29 is the hour where employees end their shift.)
Blobby : Haven't understood much but I think he said 9:29 is the hour where employees end their shift.
Babymario : It is also the hour where employees in restaurants are serving customers and less in the kitchens...
K : The hour where big shops close...
Dietsoda : The hour where little, smaller criminals cause havoc in the hidden parts of the city... like VC, a mentally sick ghost I have met yesterday.
K : A what ?
Dietsoda : A ghost.
K : Does that exist ?
Dietsoda : I was surprised as well.
K : Wow...
Dietsoda : Right.
Babymario : So we now know it's a group who is causing this... and Moon was part of it. They also chose a very strategic hour... thank you SM7. You triggered the system no one could start.
SM7 : 😊🙏 (You are welcome)
Babymario : Wow, the missing pieces are really starting to come together...
Fiery : On that topic, why didn't Max and Wal come ? Their building got bombed down...
Jake : Their phone was not responding. Just like Asher.
Asher : Wait? Huh? What? Oh, I need to pull out a good excuse. I need to use the bathroom, I will go now.
Jake : I think you did not mean to say that out loud... anyways, what could they be doing ?
Oscar : They must be so busy !
Dudzi : I guess they are. They might be planning to organize a TV intervention...
Oscar : Right ? Well, I hope they will enlighten us soon.
Dudzi : They might be of great help.
Miles : I agree, we need them...
Wal's House
In the meanwhile, Max and Wal...
Max : Oh my God, your spa is actually so good. Resting is key in such moments.
Wal68 : Right ? I thought it could indeed be of great use. ^^
Max : Do you have cocktails around there ?
Wal68 : I do. I wish Mushrestaurant was still open though, so that we could get greater drinks.
Max : It doesn't matter. Bring them all out.
Wal68 : On it !
Max : Ah, reminds me of the time I was a Snorlax...
Wal68 : Oh, you were ?
Max : Long story...
Wal68 : Yeah, you're right. Let's relax for now.
The Dark Ages of MKPC
Chapter 3
The end
...?
VC : Is this a joke ? Everyone had lines but me. Well, I guess I will make them myself. Oh, and I feel like someone just talked about me... and they didn't say very nice things. But anyways, hope you had a good read ! Wait, I broke character. And the fourth wall as well. HAHAHAHA ! Well, good night, you lovely reader...
The real end.
Lely's House
1PM. Lely invited Fiery to his house to make him a drink. As Lely was making the drinks, Fiery was whispering to himself.
Fiery : What if I became...
Lely : What are you talking about ?
Fiery : No... you're gonna find it ridiculous.
Lely : I won't make fun of you, I promise. I'm just curious.
Fiery : You will laugh...
Lely : What business would I have doing so ??
Fiery : I don't know but I'm scared. You are still just a stranger who's randomly invited me to have a drink in his house.
Lely : And you're some creep who randomly thought I was a killer with multiple murders.
Fiery : That's just about that. I kinda want to...
Lely : Yeah ?
Fiery : Become a vigilante.
Mushrestaurant
1:30PM. Miles and David are standing in front of the restaurant. Miles is disappointed while David
Miles : Can't believe they got a closure notice just for an incident that was caused by some obscure people.
David : Oh, I never liked their dishes anyways.
Miles : You hardly like anything.
David : Eh, true.
Miles : I should contact Lely to actually revive this place. I believe it's worth something.
David : I believe you're wasting your time.
Miles : When you see potential in something, you must never give up.
David : You really see something in a restaurant where the wooden floor is soaked, the kitchens completely burned and the camera room hacked by the Moon group ?
Miles : Oh shut it.
News Presentation Set
UraniumMan : Hello everyone, and welcome to your usual local news. Today we decided to interview two celebrities again, to have their opinion about the new events that occurred, notably Lely being freed due to his innocence seemingly being proved for now.
Leadgaming : Well personnally I still do not care, as long as I'm not affected. To be a leader, you ignore the nobodies.
Scorchy : Oh my God... well anyways, I think these are amazing news ! I was already very doubtful as to why a guy single handedly serving the customers during a particularly rough night could be a murderer. I believe the Moon group are the culprits. We will definitively need to gather more information though.
Leadgaming : I'm sorry but you care too much...
Scorchy : Too much is better than not enough.
Leadgaming : That's your opinion.
Scorchy : It is. What's wrong with it?
Leadgaming : It is less valuable than mine.
Scorchy : Says who ?
Leadgaming : Me. The leader of all.
Scorchy : Just because you wore quality clothes and obtained expensive cars for free doesn't mean you are a great person.
UraniumMan : Stop arguing you rich bitches before I get you off the set. Oh shit, we're on camera. I forgot. Sorry. Anyways, goodbye, MKPCians. We will meet again this evening or tomorrow. When fate will decide.
Leadgaming : Acting like he didn't just speak in low vocabulary.
Scorchy : sighs Why am I here already ?
Police Station
2PM. The two policemen are sat at their office, as usual. They seem perturbated by something.
Jake : We should probably gather more information and interview everyone who was affected by this accident.
Asher : Do what ya want bro.
Jake : I should fire you, but that's illegal.
Asher : Alrighty my man.
Jake called the people that were affected by the incidents, one by one. One hour later, they eventually arrived.
Jake : Welcome everybody, please take a seat. Thank you for attending this meeting. It is about the Lely case. Do you have any information about the Moon group he talked about ?
Fiery : I do. As I was on the crime scene, blood formed a sentence. "WE NEVER DIE, WE ARE EVERYWHERE".
Jake : How is that possible ?
Fiery : Idk but it certainly was.
Jake : It might have been a hallucination, do you have a picture ?
Fiery : I do hands over the phone
The picture shows a puddle of blood with absolutely no trace of the sentence. However, Jake squinted his eyes, and saw the sentence.
Jake : It's very weird... it might prove that more members of the group might be out in the nature. Some of them might actually have caused the 9:29 incidents. Anyone else ?
Lely : I remember noting down something in my phone that they said "we shall unite to be stronger" or something like that..
Jake : reads it out loud In a place where no rules are here to regulate the world, hell breaks loose. Terrible people unite and they become stronger. To be as strong as them, we need to unite.
Lely : Oh yeah. They told me "they had enough power to destroy the peace of a whole land, and that they were united. And that unison was what made them strong."
Jake : That proves that Moon and her boyfriend were part of an organization that caused these five incidents...
Blobby : And why would they choose 9:29PM ?
David : That's so random !
Blobby : I believe there is a reason behind !
David : Tssk, another one wasting his time.
Blobby : No ! I want to find out what might be hiding behind !
Miles : Is it like the name of a song ?
Lely : Yeah. 21:29, which was almost called 9:29.
Miles : What if they're just fans ?
Leadgaming : No, that's wrong.
Miles : Then you shall explain why. You have been useless for the whole time you were here.
Leadgaming : That explanation just sounded stupid to me. You are lazy to find out a real reason.
Miles : That is real hypocritical. And not everything is about you.
SM7 : ✋️💥🧠👍🏼 (Stop arguing, I think I know the reason)
Scorchy : Huh ?? What now ??
Leadgaming : Ignore, ignore...
Miles : OH MY GOD SHUT UP FOR A SECOND !
SM7 : 😱🤚9️⃣2️⃣9️⃣🔚👷♀️ (Due to trauma, I can only rely on sign language. 9:29 is the hour where employees end their shift.)
Blobby : Haven't understood much but I think he said 9:29 is the hour where employees end their shift.
Babymario : It is also the hour where employees in restaurants are serving customers and less in the kitchens...
K : The hour where big shops close...
Dietsoda : The hour where little, smaller criminals cause havoc in the hidden parts of the city... like VC, a mentally sick ghost I have met yesterday.
K : A what ?
Dietsoda : A ghost.
K : Does that exist ?
Dietsoda : I was surprised as well.
K : Wow...
Dietsoda : Right.
Babymario : So we now know it's a group who is causing this... and Moon was part of it. They also chose a very strategic hour... thank you SM7. You triggered the system no one could start.
SM7 : 😊🙏 (You are welcome)
Babymario : Wow, the missing pieces are really starting to come together...
Fiery : On that topic, why didn't Max and Wal come ? Their building got bombed down...
Jake : Their phone was not responding. Just like Asher.
Asher : Wait? Huh? What? Oh, I need to pull out a good excuse. I need to use the bathroom, I will go now.
Jake : I think you did not mean to say that out loud... anyways, what could they be doing ?
Oscar : They must be so busy !
Dudzi : I guess they are. They might be planning to organize a TV intervention...
Oscar : Right ? Well, I hope they will enlighten us soon.
Dudzi : They might be of great help.
Miles : I agree, we need them...
Wal's House
In the meanwhile, Max and Wal...
Max : Oh my God, your spa is actually so good. Resting is key in such moments.
Wal68 : Right ? I thought it could indeed be of great use. ^^
Max : Do you have cocktails around there ?
Wal68 : I do. I wish Mushrestaurant was still open though, so that we could get greater drinks.
Max : It doesn't matter. Bring them all out.
Wal68 : On it !
Max : Ah, reminds me of the time I was a Snorlax...
Wal68 : Oh, you were ?
Max : Long story...
Wal68 : Yeah, you're right. Let's relax for now.
The Dark Ages of MKPC
Chapter 3
The end
...?
VC : Is this a joke ? Everyone had lines but me. Well, I guess I will make them myself. Oh, and I feel like someone just talked about me... and they didn't say very nice things. But anyways, hope you had a good read ! Wait, I broke character. And the fourth wall as well. HAHAHAHA ! Well, good night, you lovely reader...
The real end.
784On 2024-07-23 at 01:39:26
Can I please be in chapter three
Please read everything, Lely said that he wouldn't add anyone else for now
He is part of the fanfic though
Oh damn then @Leadgaming you'll probably be in when you're relevant to the plot
I actually planned to give him lines in Chapter 2 but they were cancelled out. They will be in Chapter 3 instead.
On 2024-07-23 at 00:39:58
Can I please be in chapter three
Please read everything, Lely said that he wouldn't add anyone else for now
He is part of the fanfic though
1On 2024-07-21 at 00:03:07
ok but i still dont entirely understand...
you don't need to explain
you don't need to explain
You'll get lines later, when it will be relevant to the story.
On 2024-07-20 at 02:36:04
2 chapters and i still dont appear?
oh, i must be a minor character.
annoying!
oh, i must be a minor character.
annoying!
You did have a line, and if you find it annoying, you can just ignore the episodes.
not in chapter 1 or 2
also, do the people who are in fanfics alot get bigger roles?
No, it's about personnality. VC was here in like 93% of my fanfics and she has a pretty minor role here, in comparison to Wal which has a very important role despite this being his first appearance.
Ah and yes, I thought you ignored your line from the prologue.
On 2024-07-20 at 02:24:56
2 chapters and i still dont appear?
oh, i must be a minor character.
annoying!
oh, i must be a minor character.
annoying!
You did have a line, and if you find it annoying, you can just ignore the episodes.
On 2024-07-20 at 01:18:27
Chapter 2 : Unhealed Wounds
11PM. Fiery stood there, not understanding what might have happened. Blood everywhere, nobody knows who did it. Dead people all over the floor. It was a ghoulish spectacle. And an enigma.
Fiery : Oh my God... what happened... and why am I here ? Oh my... blood is all over my shoe. I should probably just let them know where it is and then leave.
Not knowing what to do, he just waited there for the police to arrive. He alerted them that he had no evidence of anything that occurred. And he left.
The next day, 8AM, Max's house
Max was sitting in front of a table along with Wal68. Both had been talking about how bad the situation had gotten. The day was cold, rain was falling outside, leaving a thin layer of water all over the ground. Both were drinking hot chocolate.
Max : What should we do ? Actually, I know. We should rest to feel better, but we cannot.
Wal68 : As much as I'd like to rest, our duty is very important as of right now. We have meetings planned for tomorrow. Today, we have a day off. Let's just be at peace today. We need that.
Max : You're right, by the way, do you want something to warm you up ? I don't want you catching a cold around here. The isolation is not really good.
Wal68 : If you have a oversized hoodie, that might actually be nice. I guess I can invite you at my place tomorrow, but we need to remain together. We are the only ones single handedly deciding what the country will do, so let's stick together.
8:30AM, News Presentation Set
UraniumMan : Hello everyone, welcome to MKPCTV again. Today, we decided to invited several people to interview them about the current situation. You shall now come forward !
Dudzi : It's absolutely unacceptable. We need to find out who is behind all this. Five attacks occured at a very precise hour, 9:29PM. And we need to figure out why. It's probably a group. Someone has to know, but the information needs to spread. And if they do know, they must be traumatized.
SM7 : Violence has never been this high. Since the five attacks, including one that hugely damaged our track making factory, criminality has raised. I agree with Dudzi, it has to be a group. And this group had the courage to step forward and cause havoc. And now, all the little villains in the shadow are unveiling slowly, one by one. And the land is in doom.
K : Personnally, I can hardly think of anything as of right now. Some tension was definitively growing and an outburst has occurred. We all witnessed it. Is it for the best ? I don't know. If people, innocent people died, then no it's for the worse.
UraniumMan : Thank you for your views on the situation, I hope it can help people move forward. Also I don't know if I should say this but... Lely has been found last night, surrounded with blood and corpses. Nobody knows if he committed these crimes, but the police is investigating.
MKPC's Police Station
The policemen were in front of Lely, facing him.
Jake : Can you recall killing these people ? Or can you recall someone killing anyone ?
Lely : I swear... i-it wasn't me. It was a group... s-some girl n-named Moon. And her boyfriend as well. These two h-had a repair... somewhere... they kidnapped me...
Jake : shows the picture of the policeman that tried to rescue Lely Do you recall seeing this man ?
Lely : A-actually... yes I-I do...
Asher : He the murderer bro, he the murderer. I know it. I seen it. I am sure. All the evidence points to him.
Jake : Oh my God, shut the hell up. I don't even know why you're here. You cannot form a sentence with proper grammar. We can go without your opinion.
Lely : Umm, I don't think I-I can properly speak... so I'll write it down on a note.
Jake : Sure !
Lely starts writing. After a good minute of careful writing, he handed the note to Jake.
I was crying in the Mushrestaurant until a customer came up to me. They told me to check the cameras. When I did so, a girl named Moon broke into the room and kidnapped me. She brought me to her repair, where her boyfriend started to threaten me. They locked me up in a cage. I wrote something in my phone notes, and then I called the police. The policeman shot Moon, but that woke up her boyfriend who shot the policeman. And as he was about to kill me, I flipped the gun and he pulled the trigger. It was self defense, trust me.
Jake read the note. Asher seemed to laugh at it, but Jake was serious.
Jake : You did not pull the trigger and you did not intend to kill. Since we have no proof of what you said, you are now free to go, but we will still go over your case and contact you if anything's wrong.
Lely : T-thank you so much. Goodbye.
As he got out of the station, a younger guy approached him. It was the man he met at Moon's Repair last night.
Fiery : So they let you go ?
Lely : Listen, I don't know who you are and why you were there last night but I am not guilty. I feel broken and traumatized by this. This has to stop.
Fiery : I guess, you don't seem like a violent guy. I am Fiery btw.
Lely : I'm Lely, nice to meet you. Should I fix you a drink ?
Fiery : Oh no, sorry. I have a very strict and precise boycott plan.
Lely : Oh, no. By that I mean a cocktail. I used to work at a restaurant but it was attacked. And despite me being in charge of the meals, I have some skills to actually prepare drinks.
Fiery : That sounds... acceptable.
And after that, they decided to sit, talk and drink. They didn't know much about each other yet, but they knew they had something in common.
That will to save people.
MKPC's Sunken Town
9AM. In this very dark and mysterious place, VC was roaming around.
VC : My mind... will not find peace if I don't haunt towns. And this one is very fun. Underwater, it's even easier to scare people... Hahaha...
In the meanwhile, Dietsoda was exploring the sunken town to find any trace of the group that people were talking about.
Dietsoda : There doesn't seem to be anybody... the houses are all empty. he dives again, and this time he sees VC. oh my God, what the hell is that...
VC : I am... your worst nightmare ! I died in this city... I drowned and called out for help... but HAHAHA ! Nobody came, so I became... a ghost,
and I haunt this place.
Dietsoda : I think you're insane.
VC : Insane ? I was not insane... I became insane. Because of the apocalypse... I unveil as a new form... HAHAHAHA !
Dietsoda : I know some good therapists if you want.
VC : No... hahaha... hahahahaha... No... Nooo... NOOOO... HAHAHAHAHA ! I DON'T NEED THERAPISTS ! NONEEE !
Dietsoda : This is really lame and boring now, I expected some action, like in Warhammer. But this thing is just completely insane. When water gets in your brain, it must cause a lot of damage.
VC : Damage... damage, damage pouring on my heart ! Falling like knives... breaking through as I... fly and fall down... HAHAHAHAHA !
Dietsoda : I wonder if I should kill her for her own mental health. She is probably suffering from such a mind as of right now.
VC : Yeah... I'm going down.... hahaha...
And with that, she just disappeared, leaving Dietsoda confused.
Dietsoda : What was that...
After her interference, he just stood there for a minute, then kept exploring the town, until...
Dietsoda : Huh ? What's that ?
As he grabs the diamond collar and decides to wear it around his neck, the water reveals a message written on a wall.
We will find a place to hide. We are everywhere, all around the world...
We shall look for the remaining pieces...
The Dark Ages of MKPC
Chapter 2
The end
11PM. Fiery stood there, not understanding what might have happened. Blood everywhere, nobody knows who did it. Dead people all over the floor. It was a ghoulish spectacle. And an enigma.
Fiery : Oh my God... what happened... and why am I here ? Oh my... blood is all over my shoe. I should probably just let them know where it is and then leave.
Not knowing what to do, he just waited there for the police to arrive. He alerted them that he had no evidence of anything that occurred. And he left.
The next day, 8AM, Max's house
Max was sitting in front of a table along with Wal68. Both had been talking about how bad the situation had gotten. The day was cold, rain was falling outside, leaving a thin layer of water all over the ground. Both were drinking hot chocolate.
Max : What should we do ? Actually, I know. We should rest to feel better, but we cannot.
Wal68 : As much as I'd like to rest, our duty is very important as of right now. We have meetings planned for tomorrow. Today, we have a day off. Let's just be at peace today. We need that.
Max : You're right, by the way, do you want something to warm you up ? I don't want you catching a cold around here. The isolation is not really good.
Wal68 : If you have a oversized hoodie, that might actually be nice. I guess I can invite you at my place tomorrow, but we need to remain together. We are the only ones single handedly deciding what the country will do, so let's stick together.
8:30AM, News Presentation Set
UraniumMan : Hello everyone, welcome to MKPCTV again. Today, we decided to invited several people to interview them about the current situation. You shall now come forward !
Dudzi : It's absolutely unacceptable. We need to find out who is behind all this. Five attacks occured at a very precise hour, 9:29PM. And we need to figure out why. It's probably a group. Someone has to know, but the information needs to spread. And if they do know, they must be traumatized.
SM7 : Violence has never been this high. Since the five attacks, including one that hugely damaged our track making factory, criminality has raised. I agree with Dudzi, it has to be a group. And this group had the courage to step forward and cause havoc. And now, all the little villains in the shadow are unveiling slowly, one by one. And the land is in doom.
K : Personnally, I can hardly think of anything as of right now. Some tension was definitively growing and an outburst has occurred. We all witnessed it. Is it for the best ? I don't know. If people, innocent people died, then no it's for the worse.
UraniumMan : Thank you for your views on the situation, I hope it can help people move forward. Also I don't know if I should say this but... Lely has been found last night, surrounded with blood and corpses. Nobody knows if he committed these crimes, but the police is investigating.
MKPC's Police Station
The policemen were in front of Lely, facing him.
Jake : Can you recall killing these people ? Or can you recall someone killing anyone ?
Lely : I swear... i-it wasn't me. It was a group... s-some girl n-named Moon. And her boyfriend as well. These two h-had a repair... somewhere... they kidnapped me...
Jake : shows the picture of the policeman that tried to rescue Lely Do you recall seeing this man ?
Lely : A-actually... yes I-I do...
Asher : He the murderer bro, he the murderer. I know it. I seen it. I am sure. All the evidence points to him.
Jake : Oh my God, shut the hell up. I don't even know why you're here. You cannot form a sentence with proper grammar. We can go without your opinion.
Lely : Umm, I don't think I-I can properly speak... so I'll write it down on a note.
Jake : Sure !
Lely starts writing. After a good minute of careful writing, he handed the note to Jake.
I was crying in the Mushrestaurant until a customer came up to me. They told me to check the cameras. When I did so, a girl named Moon broke into the room and kidnapped me. She brought me to her repair, where her boyfriend started to threaten me. They locked me up in a cage. I wrote something in my phone notes, and then I called the police. The policeman shot Moon, but that woke up her boyfriend who shot the policeman. And as he was about to kill me, I flipped the gun and he pulled the trigger. It was self defense, trust me.
Jake read the note. Asher seemed to laugh at it, but Jake was serious.
Jake : You did not pull the trigger and you did not intend to kill. Since we have no proof of what you said, you are now free to go, but we will still go over your case and contact you if anything's wrong.
Lely : T-thank you so much. Goodbye.
As he got out of the station, a younger guy approached him. It was the man he met at Moon's Repair last night.
Fiery : So they let you go ?
Lely : Listen, I don't know who you are and why you were there last night but I am not guilty. I feel broken and traumatized by this. This has to stop.
Fiery : I guess, you don't seem like a violent guy. I am Fiery btw.
Lely : I'm Lely, nice to meet you. Should I fix you a drink ?
Fiery : Oh no, sorry. I have a very strict and precise boycott plan.
Lely : Oh, no. By that I mean a cocktail. I used to work at a restaurant but it was attacked. And despite me being in charge of the meals, I have some skills to actually prepare drinks.
Fiery : That sounds... acceptable.
And after that, they decided to sit, talk and drink. They didn't know much about each other yet, but they knew they had something in common.
That will to save people.
MKPC's Sunken Town
9AM. In this very dark and mysterious place, VC was roaming around.
VC : My mind... will not find peace if I don't haunt towns. And this one is very fun. Underwater, it's even easier to scare people... Hahaha...
In the meanwhile, Dietsoda was exploring the sunken town to find any trace of the group that people were talking about.
Dietsoda : There doesn't seem to be anybody... the houses are all empty. he dives again, and this time he sees VC. oh my God, what the hell is that...
VC : I am... your worst nightmare ! I died in this city... I drowned and called out for help... but HAHAHA ! Nobody came, so I became... a ghost,
and I haunt this place.
Dietsoda : I think you're insane.
VC : Insane ? I was not insane... I became insane. Because of the apocalypse... I unveil as a new form... HAHAHAHA !
Dietsoda : I know some good therapists if you want.
VC : No... hahaha... hahahahaha... No... Nooo... NOOOO... HAHAHAHAHA ! I DON'T NEED THERAPISTS ! NONEEE !
Dietsoda : This is really lame and boring now, I expected some action, like in Warhammer. But this thing is just completely insane. When water gets in your brain, it must cause a lot of damage.
VC : Damage... damage, damage pouring on my heart ! Falling like knives... breaking through as I... fly and fall down... HAHAHAHAHA !
Dietsoda : I wonder if I should kill her for her own mental health. She is probably suffering from such a mind as of right now.
VC : Yeah... I'm going down.... hahaha...
And with that, she just disappeared, leaving Dietsoda confused.
Dietsoda : What was that...
After her interference, he just stood there for a minute, then kept exploring the town, until...
Dietsoda : Huh ? What's that ?
As he grabs the diamond collar and decides to wear it around his neck, the water reveals a message written on a wall.
We will find a place to hide. We are everywhere, all around the world...
We shall look for the remaining pieces...
The Dark Ages of MKPC
Chapter 2
The end
101On 2024-07-18 at 00:51:31
lely, can you make me scared of anything to do with the apocalypse (like so much i either freeze or flee to the nearby yoshious empire because of it) and also maybe make the yoshious empire a safe place and important in some other part of the story (if you do do it maybe make me the main character in the part, well me and any other yoshis in it)
just ideas of mine, do what you want idk + idc
just ideas of mine, do what you want idk + idc
No Yoshious empire, that has literally no link to the story and I don't feel like having a "safe place" in an apocalyptic fanfic that kinda ruins the point.
And also why would it be an important part of the story ?? Lmfao
On 2024-07-16 at 11:15:41
Also, the reason why Chapter 1 is really confusing is because I intended it to spread confusion. Bit Chapter 2 will completely clear up everything.
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