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KrazeyKay wrote:
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Episode 8 (Part 1): Additional house space

MonoBoi: Now that Master is dead, it is time for your talents.
Nudge, you are the ultimate mathematician.
Lely, you are the ultimate animal protector.
Yascamer, you are the ultimate racer.
Luq, you are the ultimate protector.
Bj, you are the ultimate caver.
Tyshawn, you are the ultimate park designer.
Parakoopa, you are the ultimate pilot.
Lemon, you are the ultimate gardener
Jey was the ultimate game developer
Toad was the ultimate royal servant.
Kris, you were the ultimate mayor
Max, you have no talent. The only reason you came is because Lely begged for peach to let you come

Max: I’m here because Lely begged me?
Lely: I did?
Ralsei: So max is a talentless loser. Surprised he has made it this far
Lely: Leave him alone!
Ralsei: You aren’t related to me so don’t boss me around!
Lely: So I should just let you be annoying?
Ralsei: Yeah. I can do what you want, so if you don’t want to get involved, then piss of
Max: Why are you like this
Toady: He probably wants to steal the attention I get from my pranks
Ralsei: HEY!!! I’m not an attention seeker!
Nudge: Let’s go back to our rooms. I’m tired
MonoBoi Already? It’s only 6:00pm. You still have 4 hours until you need to sleep
Nudge: Well I certainly will
MonoBoi: Well then, I guess I best tell you that I have opened up an extra room for each of you under your rooms. They also have an extra room for personal stuff
Nudge: I’ll make sure to check that out before I go to sleep
Ralsei: Honestly, same
Kris: Before we go, please may I say something?
Lemon: What would that be?
Kris: About how I was the ultimate mayor
MonoBoi: That’s because you got tired of everyone going to you for help, so you resigned
Ralsei: That doesn’t sound like a very good mayor to me
Kris: Wait, so if I no longer am that, then why was I invited?
MonoBoi: Since the population in the castle is significantly smaller
Parakoopa: Me, Bj, and Tyshawn will be investigating the new floor while you do that

Ralsei: Have fun checking your rooms everyone. I’m going to make sure to find a good weapon to deal with mr. talentless
Max: Why do you want to kill me?!
Ralsei: Because talentless people like you don’t belong here
Lely: Learn respect for once
Ralsei: Last time I tried that I fell asleep for a while week
Luq: Max, I want to speak to you later.
Max: Ok

Max: So, what did you want to speak to me about?
Luq: It’s about how your ‘talentless.’ While I might not be right, I feel like that was a lie to make sure another murder happens
Max: What do you mean?
Luq: It’s an attempt to mentally weaken you, making you susceptible to an attack, which will keep the killing game alive
Max: Honestly, the only problem I have with being talentless is Ralsei
Luq: Also, i have an idea to help prevent a murder
Max: What would that be?
Luq: We need to get everyone to reveal what there secret item/s are
Max: Ok. For me, it was just filled with snorlax statues
Luq: I had close ranged weapons[/colod]
[color=teal]Max: I’m going to try getting Lely to join. See you next time

Luq: I’ll try getting Yascamer, to make our group ‘The French Preventers’

Lely: Hi max. So, what to you want to talk about?
Max:  A group me and Luq made named ‘The French Preventers’ where we do what we can to prevent a killing from happening
Lely: Yes please. What do I need to do?
Max: Check everyone’s secret room
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. It is now 10pm. Paintings will no longer be usable unless leaving an area or going to bob-omb battlefield
Lely: Of course that got in our way… but anyway, isn’t that an invasion of privacy?
Max: In situations like this, we need to make exceptions
Lely: Then I guess I’m in
Luq: Glad that you accepted it. I managed to get Yascamer, though he being quite quiet
Lely: I suppose I should say what is in my room. In there, is a giant animal cage filled with the cutest animals
Yascamer: Me… have… race… maps…
Luq: Yascamer, I just want to say something. I know the death of your 2 best friends hurts a lot, but I’m the situation we are in, we have to adapt. We can’t spend our entire lives here depressed. We have to move last thisendeaths, and make them mere memories
Yascamer:Oh… ok
Lely: Anyway, let’s go to sleep

You messed up the letter color near the end? (Luq & Max)
F for Max the Talentless.

Fixed
L for Mr. Talentless

(Insert 12th letter of the alphabet here)
As someone who knows nothing about the show or the games(or any anime)how much sense will the ending make?

The ending should make some sense, since it will follow up into a season 2 (won’t reveal what it is about yet)

The ending makes sense without a 10 minute explanation? Finally, something that doesn't make me feel stupid.

It should make sense to where ou don’t need a 10 minute/hour/day explanation
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KrazeyKay wrote:
KrazeyKay wrote:
KrazeyKay wrote:
Episode 8 (Part 1): Additional house space

MonoBoi: Now that Master is dead, it is time for your talents.
Nudge, you are the ultimate mathematician.
Lely, you are the ultimate animal protector.
Yascamer, you are the ultimate racer.
Luq, you are the ultimate protector.
Bj, you are the ultimate caver.
Tyshawn, you are the ultimate park designer.
Parakoopa, you are the ultimate pilot.
Lemon, you are the ultimate gardener
Jey was the ultimate game developer
Toad was the ultimate royal servant.
Kris, you were the ultimate mayor
Max, you have no talent. The only reason you came is because Lely begged for peach to let you come

Max: I’m here because Lely begged me?
Lely: I did?
Ralsei: So max is a talentless loser. Surprised he has made it this far
Lely: Leave him alone!
Ralsei: You aren’t related to me so don’t boss me around!
Lely: So I should just let you be annoying?
Ralsei: Yeah. I can do what you want, so if you don’t want to get involved, then piss of
Max: Why are you like this
Toady: He probably wants to steal the attention I get from my pranks
Ralsei: HEY!!! I’m not an attention seeker!
Nudge: Let’s go back to our rooms. I’m tired
MonoBoi Already? It’s only 6:00pm. You still have 4 hours until you need to sleep
Nudge: Well I certainly will
MonoBoi: Well then, I guess I best tell you that I have opened up an extra room for each of you under your rooms. They also have an extra room for personal stuff
Nudge: I’ll make sure to check that out before I go to sleep
Ralsei: Honestly, same
Kris: Before we go, please may I say something?
Lemon: What would that be?
Kris: About how I was the ultimate mayor
MonoBoi: That’s because you got tired of everyone going to you for help, so you resigned
Ralsei: That doesn’t sound like a very good mayor to me
Kris: Wait, so if I no longer am that, then why was I invited?
MonoBoi: Since the population in the castle is significantly smaller
Parakoopa: Me, Bj, and Tyshawn will be investigating the new floor while you do that

Ralsei: Have fun checking your rooms everyone. I’m going to make sure to find a good weapon to deal with mr. talentless
Max: Why do you want to kill me?!
Ralsei: Because talentless people like you don’t belong here
Lely: Learn respect for once
Ralsei: Last time I tried that I fell asleep for a while week
Luq: Max, I want to speak to you later.
Max: Ok

Max: So, what did you want to speak to me about?
Luq: It’s about how your ‘talentless.’ While I might not be right, I feel like that was a lie to make sure another murder happens
Max: What do you mean?
Luq: It’s an attempt to mentally weaken you, making you susceptible to an attack, which will keep the killing game alive
Max: Honestly, the only problem I have with being talentless is Ralsei
Luq: Also, i have an idea to help prevent a murder
Max: What would that be?
Luq: We need to get everyone to reveal what there secret item/s are
Max: Ok. For me, it was just filled with snorlax statues
Luq: I had close ranged weapons[/colod]
[color=teal]Max: I’m going to try getting Lely to join. See you next time

Luq: I’ll try getting Yascamer, to make our group ‘The French Preventers’

Lely: Hi max. So, what to you want to talk about?
Max:  A group me and Luq made named ‘The French Preventers’ where we do what we can to prevent a killing from happening
Lely: Yes please. What do I need to do?
Max: Check everyone’s secret room
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. It is now 10pm. Paintings will no longer be usable unless leaving an area or going to bob-omb battlefield
Lely: Of course that got in our way… but anyway, isn’t that an invasion of privacy?
Max: In situations like this, we need to make exceptions
Lely: Then I guess I’m in
Luq: Glad that you accepted it. I managed to get Yascamer, though he being quite quiet
Lely: I suppose I should say what is in my room. In there, is a giant animal cage filled with the cutest animals
Yascamer: Me… have… race… maps…
Luq: Yascamer, I just want to say something. I know the death of your 2 best friends hurts a lot, but I’m the situation we are in, we have to adapt. We can’t spend our entire lives here depressed. We have to move last thisendeaths, and make them mere memories
Yascamer:Oh… ok
Lely: Anyway, let’s go to sleep

You messed up the letter color near the end? (Luq & Max)
F for Max the Talentless.

Fixed
L for Mr. Talentless

(Insert 12th letter of the alphabet here)
As someone who knows nothing about the show or the games(or any anime)how much sense will the ending make?

The ending should make some sense, since it will follow up into a season 2 (won’t reveal what it is about yet)

The ending makes sense without a 10 minute explanation? Finally, something that doesn't make me feel stupid.

It should make sense to where ou don’t need a 10 minute/hour/day explanation

On behalf of other "dumb" people, much appreciated.
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Episode 8 (Part 2): Chilling in the igloo

MonoBoi: Ding Dong. It is now 7am, so you are free to use paintings again
Parakoopa: Good morning everyone. Now, here is the information we got about the third floor
Tyshawn: There is a giant water town to have fun in
Bj: There was also an island that changes size whenever you enter a pipe.
Parakoopa: There is also a giant mountain
Tyshawn: It even has a slide
Bj: Finally, there is also another snow area filled with snowmen, and even has a big igloo
Kris: Hey Lemon, want to go to the igloo?
Lemon: Sure
Toady: I’m going to climb to the top of the mountain
Ralsei: To push someone off? If you do I’ll give you all the money I have on me
Lely: And how much would that be?
Ralsei: 0 Dollars
Toady: Sounds like a good deal
Luq: Before you all go, we need to check what is in everyone’s secret room
Kris: Why? I’m sure going to the igloo is more important
Max: Safety reasons
Nudge: Safety? What dangerous stiff wool be in our secret room? Anyway, I’m going to be going to the volcano
Lely: I’m sorry but, we need to be safe. We were told that our room would have things we really want, so we need to make sure people don’t have weapons
Nudge: And? The only person I see having weapons is Luq
Luq: I have them to defend someone when they are being attacked
Nudge: Yeah, I don’t feel like wasting my time with you
Ralsei: Same. I’d rather go to the volcano then follow along with this garbage
Max: Then I’ll go with you
Lely: But Max! Isn’t that dangerous?
Max: If I die, it will be obvious that one of them did it
Lely: But… I don’t want the risk of you dying
Max: Look. I need to show Ralsei that I’m more than a talentless fool and also need to teach him respect
Ralsei: Oh, I’ve already realised that
Max: Oh, so you will show some respect to me?
Ralsei: Of course I won’t, bitchless
Max: Is this what I’m going to have to put up with?
Ralsei: Yep
Lemon: Before I go, just felt like saying that all that is in my secret room is giant storage of plants
Kris: All I have is a statue of my inspiration
Luq: Can we have your secret key to confirm it?
Lemon: Sure

Ralsei: Let’s get into the volcano
Max: I’ll go first
Nudge: I’ll go next
Ralsei: And I’ll go never
Max: Great. He’s abandoned us

Lemon: This place is cool
Kris: Yep. What a cool place
Lemon: So, what shall we do?
Kris: I don’t know, but first, I want to go to the bathroom
Lemon: I’ll wait around the corner for you

Kris: Were is he? Wait, he said around the corner
*But the only thing around the corner, was Lemons dead body*
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Episode 8 (Part 2): Chilling in the igloo

MonoBoi: Ding Dong. It is now 7am, so you are free to use paintings again
Parakoopa: Good morning everyone. Now, here is the information we got about the third floor
Tyshawn: There is a giant water town to have fun in
Bj: There was also an island that changes size whenever you enter a pipe.
Parakoopa: There is also a giant mountain
Tyshawn: It even has a slide
Bj: Finally, there is also another snow area filled with snowmen, and even has a big igloo
Kris: Hey Lemon, want to go to the igloo?
Lemon: Sure
Toady: I’m going to climb to the top of the mountain
Ralsei: To push someone off? If you do I’ll give you all the money I have on me
Lely: And how much would that be?
Ralsei: 0 Dollars
Toady: Sounds like a good deal
Luq: Before you all go, we need to check what is in everyone’s secret room
Kris: Why? I’m sure going to the igloo is more important
Max: Safety reasons
Nudge: Safety? What dangerous stiff wool be in our secret room? Anyway, I’m going to be going to the volcano
Lely: I’m sorry but, we need to be safe. We were told that our room would have things we really want, so we need to make sure people don’t have weapons
Nudge: And? The only person I see having weapons is Luq
Luq: I have them to defend someone when they are being attacked
Nudge: Yeah, I don’t feel like wasting my time with you
Ralsei: Same. I’d rather go to the volcano then follow along with this garbage
Max: Then I’ll go with you
Lely: But Max! Isn’t that dangerous?
Max: If I die, it will be obvious that one of them did it
Lely: But… I don’t want the risk of you dying
Max: Look. I need to show Ralsei that I’m more than a talentless fool and also need to teach him respect
Ralsei: Oh, I’ve already realised that
Max: Oh, so you will show some respect to me?
Ralsei: Of course I won’t, bitchless
Max: Is this what I’m going to have to put up with?
Ralsei: Yep
Lemon: Before I go, just felt like saying that all that is in my secret room is giant storage of plants
Kris: All I have is a statue of my inspiration
Luq: Can we have your secret key to confirm it?
Lemon: Sure

Ralsei: Let’s get into the volcano
Max: I’ll go first
Nudge: I’ll go next
Ralsei: And I’ll go never
Max: Great. He’s abandoned us

Lemon: This place is cool
Kris: Yep. What a cool place
Lemon: So, what shall we do?
Kris: I don’t know, but first, I want to go to the bathroom
Lemon: I’ll wait around the corner for you

Kris: Were is he? Wait, he said around the corner
*But the only thing around the corner, was Lemons dead body*

I was wishing for another episode of the Danganronpa fanfic and you did it ! Nice. I like the Super Mario 64 references, and there is a lot of character deaths which I obviously expected.
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Episode 9: Investigation in the igloo

Kris: LEMON!!! Why did you have to die? I-I wanted to survive with you. I-I will m-make sure your murderer gets caught!
*However, the only thing he saw as he exited was Tyshawn’s dead body*
Kris: ANOTHER ONE!!! W-where are the others? I-I will avenge both of you

Max: Finally. We escaped. Now to find where Ralsei ran off to
*As he said that, Kris came running in crying*
Max: What’s wrong?
Nudge: Lemme guess. Another death?
Kris: Y-yes
Max: Where?
Kris: I-igloo
Nudge: Then let’s go to the igloo
Ralsei: Hi guys
Max: Where have you been?
Ralsei: That doesn’t matter. Nudge said we need to go to the igloo, so let’s get going

Max: Poor Tyshawn…
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. A dead body had been discovered. Please head over to the igloo
Kris: Th-that’s not all
Ralsei: OOH! A double kill
Nudge: So Lemon is also dead
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. A dead body had been discovered. Please head over to the igloo
Kris: Y-yes
Nudge: Can somebody get Toady? I want to ask him soemthing
Max: What do you want him for?
Nudge: I want to ask him about this string by Lemon’s body
Max: Ok. I’ll go get him
Ralsei: I think it is obvious what the murder weapon for both of them are
Kris: Th-the knifes?
Ralsei: Yep
Yascamer: Why… two announcements?
Kris: T-two dead bodies
Lely: Two dead bodies?!
*Lely then faints*
Luq: It seems like we will have to solve two different murders at once
MonoBoi: Actually, you only have to solve who commuted the first one
Nudge: So the second murderer gets away with no punishment?
MonoBoi: Yep. However, they also can’t make use of there murder to escape
Ralsei: So one of these deaths were completely worthless
Kris: D-don’t say that about a-anyone
Ralsei: Who cares?
Parakoopa: I care
Bj: Just ignore Ralsei
Ralsei: Committing that crime has severe consequences
Nudge: Attention Seeker
Ralsei: Who are you calling attenti-
Max: You. Also, I can’t find Toady
Nudge: Then we will have to ask him in the trial
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. Please head over to the entrance, so that we can start our third class trial
Luq: Clearly, there is nothing else to investigate

Max: Before we go in, I want to say that me and Nudge are innocent, since we were in the volcano together
*After he said that, they all got into the elevator, ready for the third lass trial*
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Episode 9: Investigation in the igloo

Kris: LEMON!!! Why did you have to die? I-I wanted to survive with you. I-I will m-make sure your murderer gets caught!
*However, the only thing he saw as he exited was Tyshawn’s dead body*
Kris: ANOTHER ONE!!! W-where are the others? I-I will avenge both of you

Max: Finally. We escaped. Now to find where Ralsei ran off to
*As he said that, Kris came running in crying*
Max: What’s wrong?
Nudge: Lemme guess. Another death?
Kris: Y-yes
Max: Where?
Kris: I-igloo
Nudge: Then let’s go to the igloo
Ralsei: Hi guys
Max: Where have you been?
Ralsei: That doesn’t matter. Nudge said we need to go to the igloo, so let’s get going

Max: Poor Tyshawn…
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. A dead body had been discovered. Please head over to the igloo
Kris: Th-that’s not all
Ralsei: OOH! A double kill
Nudge: So Lemon is also dead
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. A dead body had been discovered. Please head over to the igloo
Kris: Y-yes
Nudge: Can somebody get Toady? I want to ask him soemthing
Max: What do you want him for?
Nudge: I want to ask him about this string by Lemon’s body
Max: Ok. I’ll go get him
Ralsei: I think it is obvious what the murder weapon for both of them are
Kris: Th-the knifes?
Ralsei: Yep
Yascamer: Why… two announcements?
Kris: T-two dead bodies
Lely: Two dead bodies?!
*Lely then faints*
Luq: It seems like we will have to solve two different murders at once
MonoBoi: Actually, you only have to solve who commuted the first one
Nudge: So the second murderer gets away with no punishment?
MonoBoi: Yep. However, they also can’t make use of there murder to escape
Ralsei: So one of these deaths were completely worthless
Kris: D-don’t say that about a-anyone
Ralsei: Who cares?
Parakoopa: I care
Bj: Just ignore Ralsei
Ralsei: Committing that crime has severe consequences
Nudge: Attention Seeker
Ralsei: Who are you calling attenti-
Max: You. Also, I can’t find Toady
Nudge: Then we will have to ask him in the trial
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. Please head over to the entrance, so that we can start our third class trial
Luq: Clearly, there is nothing else to investigate

Max: Before we go in, I want to say that me and Nudge are innocent, since we were in the volcano together
*After he said that, they all got into the elevator, ready for the third lass trial*

It looks like Lely can be relied on to go down everytime.
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Episode 10: Dual Mysteries

MonoBoi: Get ready for the 3rd trial, where you will have to figure out who commuted the murder first, or if the murderer of each victim are the same. TRIAL! BEGIN!!!
Nudge: Before we start throwing blame on each other, I would like to know what Toady was doing at the time of the murder
Toady: I was waiting for Tyshawn to come back to the top of the mountain. Before then, we were just hanging out, and I even taught him one of my pranks
Lely: Which would be?
Toady: Tripping somebody with a string
Nudge: That would match up to what was found near Lemon’s body. Now, why didn’t you go to the igloo?
Toady: Because what use am I going to have at the igloo? I may be a prankster, but I don’t want to interfere with death
Ralsei: That sounds boring
Toady: Anyway, does anyone have any ideas on who killed Tyshawn?
Ralsei: Why do you suddenly care about trials?
Toady: I cared before, just didn’t need to say anything, since I had no importance. But this trial, I feel like I’m more needed, so I’m going to make sure to help
Kris: D-does anyone have any ideas o-on who killed lemon?
Bj: I think it would have to be someone who wasn’t with someone else
Max: So me and Nudge, and we can eliminate Lely, since there is no way he would manage a murder
Toady: Question, what was Kris doing at the time of the murders?
Kris: B-bathroom
Bj: Can anyone confirm this?
Ralsei: I can
Max: You can?
Ralsei: Yes. After all, it is obvious that the killer can confirm a suspects innocence
Kris: WHAT!!!
Ralsei: Yeah. I killed Lemon. It’s not a big deal, since we are meant to be solving the murder that came first
Kris: DUMB LOGIC LIKE THAT WONT SOLVE ANYTHING!!!
Nudge: Let’s not get ahead of ourselves. Ralsei is right. While he may have murdered lemon, how do we know it came first?
Max: There is no way Ralsei is getting away with this
MonoBoi: Ooh. Is that a controversial opinion I see? Get split in half, you lot

Kris: Ralsei deserves execution
Ralsei: No. Only the person who killed first deserves execution
Max: No way you didn’t kill first
Nudge: Is there any proof he did kill first?
Luq: Who else would kill anyone baring in mind our plan?
Bj: Me, Parakoopa, Toady, or a traitor could all kill
Lely: There is no way anyone would betray us
Bj: I only said there was a chance that someone betrayed you
Yascamer: Who else… at igloo
Parakoopa: There could have been quite a few people at the igloo
Luq: Based on the evidence we have, the only person it could have been is Ralsei
Ralsei: Oh, but it isn’t me. After all, my evidence is that I witnessed it
Kris: You’re obviously lying
Toady: How do we know that he is lying

Luq: If you really did witness it, then tell us who did it?
Ralsei: No because that would ruin the fun
Max: You’re only saying that since you don’t know a good person to frame
Ralsei: Would you like a hint?
Kris: NO!!! WE NEED TO GET RID OF YOU!!!
Ralsei: But then the killer of Tyshawn will survive
Luq: Give us the hint
Ralsei: Sure. The killer is French
Max: You must… be lying
Ralsei: Believe that all you want. All that will get you is death
Max: Th-then it’s true?
Luq: Ignore him. He’s just trying to get in the way
Nudge: Actually, you’re the one getting in my way
Luq: HOW?!
Nudge: Simple. You are trying to take me along the wrong path
Toady: So, what are you hiding?
Luq: Nothing. I’m innocent
Parakoopa: Ralsei, can you confirm this?
Ralsei: Yep. Luq didn’t do ir
Nudge: So now, it’s between Yascamer and Ralsei
Ralsei: Oops. Wasn’t meant to reveal that Yascamer did it
Yascamer: Me… No… do it
Lely: You must be lying
Parakoopa: I trust Ralsei
Kris: HOW!?!?!?
Ralsei: I suppose I should explain how it happened.
It started when Kris went to the bathroom. I decide to sneak in, and caught Lemon on the floor. I was about to stab him, but I heard something in g from behind. Ut was Yascamer. I then threw the knife at him, but he caught it. Then, Tyshawn showed up. I didn’t know what happened between those 2 at the time. After they did whatever they did, I then killed Lemon, then as I went to exit, realised Yascamer had already killed Tyshawn

Max: There is no way this is true
Yascamer: It-it is
Lely: Why did you do it? We agreed not to kill anyone
Yascamer: I-i was scared. I though he was going to accuse me of killing Lemon so I panicked and threw the knife
MonoBoi: That’s right. It’s time for the punishment
Parakoopa: What about voting time?
MonoBoi: It’s way to late for that. We need to get Yascamer killed asap since I need to recharge
*Yascamer then got forced into a race car, but as he tried driving towards everyone, traps came from everywhere. In the end, a crusher from toads factory Andes up squishing him, and his car*
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Episode 10: Dual Mysteries

MonoBoi: Get ready for the 3rd trial, where you will have to figure out who commuted the murder first, or if the murderer of each victim are the same. TRIAL! BEGIN!!!
Nudge: Before we start throwing blame on each other, I would like to know what Toady was doing at the time of the murder
Toady: I was waiting for Tyshawn to come back to the top of the mountain. Before then, we were just hanging out, and I even taught him one of my pranks
Lely: Which would be?
Toady: Tripping somebody with a string
Nudge: That would match up to what was found near Lemon’s body. Now, why didn’t you go to the igloo?
Toady: Because what use am I going to have at the igloo? I may be a prankster, but I don’t want to interfere with death
Ralsei: That sounds boring
Toady: Anyway, does anyone have any ideas on who killed Tyshawn?
Ralsei: Why do you suddenly care about trials?
Toady: I cared before, just didn’t need to say anything, since I had no importance. But this trial, I feel like I’m more needed, so I’m going to make sure to help
Kris: D-does anyone have any ideas o-on who killed lemon?
Bj: I think it would have to be someone who wasn’t with someone else
Max: So me and Nudge, and we can eliminate Lely, since there is no way he would manage a murder
Toady: Question, what was Kris doing at the time of the murders?
Kris: B-bathroom
Bj: Can anyone confirm this?
Ralsei: I can
Max: You can?
Ralsei: Yes. After all, it is obvious that the killer can confirm a suspects innocence
Kris: WHAT!!!
Ralsei: Yeah. I killed Lemon. It’s not a big deal, since we are meant to be solving the murder that came first
Kris: DUMB LOGIC LIKE THAT WONT SOLVE ANYTHING!!!
Nudge: Let’s not get ahead of ourselves. Ralsei is right. While he may have murdered lemon, how do we know it came first?
Max: There is no way Ralsei is getting away with this
MonoBoi: Ooh. Is that a controversial opinion I see? Get split in half, you lot

Kris: Ralsei deserves execution
Ralsei: No. Only the person who killed first deserves execution
Max: No way you didn’t kill first
Nudge: Is there any proof he did kill first?
Luq: Who else would kill anyone baring in mind our plan?
Bj: Me, Parakoopa, Toady, or a traitor could all kill
Lely: There is no way anyone would betray us
Bj: I only said there was a chance that someone betrayed you
Yascamer: Who else… at igloo
Parakoopa: There could have been quite a few people at the igloo
Luq: Based on the evidence we have, the only person it could have been is Ralsei
Ralsei: Oh, but it isn’t me. After all, my evidence is that I witnessed it
Kris: You’re obviously lying
Toady: How do we know that he is lying

Luq: If you really did witness it, then tell us who did it?
Ralsei: No because that would ruin the fun
Max: You’re only saying that since you don’t know a good person to frame
Ralsei: Would you like a hint?
Kris: NO!!! WE NEED TO GET RID OF YOU!!!
Ralsei: But then the killer of Tyshawn will survive
Luq: Give us the hint
Ralsei: Sure. The killer is French
Max: You must… be lying
Ralsei: Believe that all you want. All that will get you is death
Max: Th-then it’s true?
Luq: Ignore him. He’s just trying to get in the way
Nudge: Actually, you’re the one getting in my way
Luq: HOW?!
Nudge: Simple. You are trying to take me along the wrong path
Toady: So, what are you hiding?
Luq: Nothing. I’m innocent
Parakoopa: Ralsei, can you confirm this?
Ralsei: Yep. Luq didn’t do ir
Nudge: So now, it’s between Yascamer and Ralsei
Ralsei: Oops. Wasn’t meant to reveal that Yascamer did it
Yascamer: Me… No… do it
Lely: You must be lying
Parakoopa: I trust Ralsei
Kris: HOW!?!?!?
Ralsei: I suppose I should explain how it happened.
It started when Kris went to the bathroom. I decide to sneak in, and caught Lemon on the floor. I was about to stab him, but I heard something in g from behind. Ut was Yascamer. I then threw the knife at him, but he caught it. Then, Tyshawn showed up. I didn’t know what happened between those 2 at the time. After they did whatever they did, I then killed Lemon, then as I went to exit, realised Yascamer had already killed Tyshawn

Max: There is no way this is true
Yascamer: It-it is
Lely: Why did you do it? We agreed not to kill anyone
Yascamer: I-i was scared. I though he was going to accuse me of killing Lemon so I panicked and threw the knife
MonoBoi: That’s right. It’s time for the punishment
Parakoopa: What about voting time?
MonoBoi: It’s way to late for that. We need to get Yascamer killed asap since I need to recharge
*Yascamer then got forced into a race car, but as he tried driving towards everyone, traps came from everywhere. In the end, a crusher from toads factory Andes up squishing him, and his car*

I don't have anything to say, you nailed it.
But...
Kris, next time, just hold it in and DONT GO TO THE BATHROOM
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Invu wrote:
Episode 10: Dual Mysteries

MonoBoi: Get ready for the 3rd trial, where you will have to figure out who commuted the murder first, or if the murderer of each victim are the same. TRIAL! BEGIN!!!
Nudge: Before we start throwing blame on each other, I would like to know what Toady was doing at the time of the murder
Toady: I was waiting for Tyshawn to come back to the top of the mountain. Before then, we were just hanging out, and I even taught him one of my pranks
Lely: Which would be?
Toady: Tripping somebody with a string
Nudge: That would match up to what was found near Lemon’s body. Now, why didn’t you go to the igloo?
Toady: Because what use am I going to have at the igloo? I may be a prankster, but I don’t want to interfere with death
Ralsei: That sounds boring
Toady: Anyway, does anyone have any ideas on who killed Tyshawn?
Ralsei: Why do you suddenly care about trials?
Toady: I cared before, just didn’t need to say anything, since I had no importance. But this trial, I feel like I’m more needed, so I’m going to make sure to help
Kris: D-does anyone have any ideas o-on who killed lemon?
Bj: I think it would have to be someone who wasn’t with someone else
Max: So me and Nudge, and we can eliminate Lely, since there is no way he would manage a murder
Toady: Question, what was Kris doing at the time of the murders?
Kris: B-bathroom
Bj: Can anyone confirm this?
Ralsei: I can
Max: You can?
Ralsei: Yes. After all, it is obvious that the killer can confirm a suspects innocence
Kris: WHAT!!!
Ralsei: Yeah. I killed Lemon. It’s not a big deal, since we are meant to be solving the murder that came first
Kris: DUMB LOGIC LIKE THAT WONT SOLVE ANYTHING!!!
Nudge: Let’s not get ahead of ourselves. Ralsei is right. While he may have murdered lemon, how do we know it came first?
Max: There is no way Ralsei is getting away with this
MonoBoi: Ooh. Is that a controversial opinion I see? Get split in half, you lot

Kris: Ralsei deserves execution
Ralsei: No. Only the person who killed first deserves execution
Max: No way you didn’t kill first
Nudge: Is there any proof he did kill first?
Luq: Who else would kill anyone baring in mind our plan?
Bj: Me, Parakoopa, Toady, or a traitor could all kill
Lely: There is no way anyone would betray us
Bj: I only said there was a chance that someone betrayed you
Yascamer: Who else… at igloo
Parakoopa: There could have been quite a few people at the igloo
Luq: Based on the evidence we have, the only person it could have been is Ralsei
Ralsei: Oh, but it isn’t me. After all, my evidence is that I witnessed it
Kris: You’re obviously lying
Toady: How do we know that he is lying

Luq: If you really did witness it, then tell us who did it?
Ralsei: No because that would ruin the fun
Max: You’re only saying that since you don’t know a good person to frame
Ralsei: Would you like a hint?
Kris: NO!!! WE NEED TO GET RID OF YOU!!!
Ralsei: But then the killer of Tyshawn will survive
Luq: Give us the hint
Ralsei: Sure. The killer is French
Max: You must… be lying
Ralsei: Believe that all you want. All that will get you is death
Max: Th-then it’s true?
Luq: Ignore him. He’s just trying to get in the way
Nudge: Actually, you’re the one getting in my way
Luq: HOW?!
Nudge: Simple. You are trying to take me along the wrong path
Toady: So, what are you hiding?
Luq: Nothing. I’m innocent
Parakoopa: Ralsei, can you confirm this?
Ralsei: Yep. Luq didn’t do ir
Nudge: So now, it’s between Yascamer and Ralsei
Ralsei: Oops. Wasn’t meant to reveal that Yascamer did it
Yascamer: Me… No… do it
Lely: You must be lying
Parakoopa: I trust Ralsei
Kris: HOW!?!?!?
Ralsei: I suppose I should explain how it happened.
It started when Kris went to the bathroom. I decide to sneak in, and caught Lemon on the floor. I was about to stab him, but I heard something in g from behind. Ut was Yascamer. I then threw the knife at him, but he caught it. Then, Tyshawn showed up. I didn’t know what happened between those 2 at the time. After they did whatever they did, I then killed Lemon, then as I went to exit, realised Yascamer had already killed Tyshawn

Max: There is no way this is true
Yascamer: It-it is
Lely: Why did you do it? We agreed not to kill anyone
Yascamer: I-i was scared. I though he was going to accuse me of killing Lemon so I panicked and threw the knife
MonoBoi: That’s right. It’s time for the punishment
Parakoopa: What about voting time?
MonoBoi: It’s way to late for that. We need to get Yascamer killed asap since I need to recharge
*Yascamer then got forced into a race car, but as he tried driving towards everyone, traps came from everywhere. In the end, a crusher from toads factory Andes up squishing him, and his car*

I don't have anything to say, you nailed it.
But...
Kris, next time, just hold it in and DONT GO TO THE BATHROOM

Dont forget that Toady should never teach anyone his pranks again
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Invu wrote:
Episode 10: Dual Mysteries

MonoBoi: Get ready for the 3rd trial, where you will have to figure out who commuted the murder first, or if the murderer of each victim are the same. TRIAL! BEGIN!!!
Nudge: Before we start throwing blame on each other, I would like to know what Toady was doing at the time of the murder
Toady: I was waiting for Tyshawn to come back to the top of the mountain. Before then, we were just hanging out, and I even taught him one of my pranks
Lely: Which would be?
Toady: Tripping somebody with a string
Nudge: That would match up to what was found near Lemon’s body. Now, why didn’t you go to the igloo?
Toady: Because what use am I going to have at the igloo? I may be a prankster, but I don’t want to interfere with death
Ralsei: That sounds boring
Toady: Anyway, does anyone have any ideas on who killed Tyshawn?
Ralsei: Why do you suddenly care about trials?
Toady: I cared before, just didn’t need to say anything, since I had no importance. But this trial, I feel like I’m more needed, so I’m going to make sure to help
Kris: D-does anyone have any ideas o-on who killed lemon?
Bj: I think it would have to be someone who wasn’t with someone else
Max: So me and Nudge, and we can eliminate Lely, since there is no way he would manage a murder
Toady: Question, what was Kris doing at the time of the murders?
Kris: B-bathroom
Bj: Can anyone confirm this?
Ralsei: I can
Max: You can?
Ralsei: Yes. After all, it is obvious that the killer can confirm a suspects innocence
Kris: WHAT!!!
Ralsei: Yeah. I killed Lemon. It’s not a big deal, since we are meant to be solving the murder that came first
Kris: DUMB LOGIC LIKE THAT WONT SOLVE ANYTHING!!!
Nudge: Let’s not get ahead of ourselves. Ralsei is right. While he may have murdered lemon, how do we know it came first?
Max: There is no way Ralsei is getting away with this
MonoBoi: Ooh. Is that a controversial opinion I see? Get split in half, you lot

Kris: Ralsei deserves execution
Ralsei: No. Only the person who killed first deserves execution
Max: No way you didn’t kill first
Nudge: Is there any proof he did kill first?
Luq: Who else would kill anyone baring in mind our plan?
Bj: Me, Parakoopa, Toady, or a traitor could all kill
Lely: There is no way anyone would betray us
Bj: I only said there was a chance that someone betrayed you
Yascamer: Who else… at igloo
Parakoopa: There could have been quite a few people at the igloo
Luq: Based on the evidence we have, the only person it could have been is Ralsei
Ralsei: Oh, but it isn’t me. After all, my evidence is that I witnessed it
Kris: You’re obviously lying
Toady: How do we know that he is lying

Luq: If you really did witness it, then tell us who did it?
Ralsei: No because that would ruin the fun
Max: You’re only saying that since you don’t know a good person to frame
Ralsei: Would you like a hint?
Kris: NO!!! WE NEED TO GET RID OF YOU!!!
Ralsei: But then the killer of Tyshawn will survive
Luq: Give us the hint
Ralsei: Sure. The killer is French
Max: You must… be lying
Ralsei: Believe that all you want. All that will get you is death
Max: Th-then it’s true?
Luq: Ignore him. He’s just trying to get in the way
Nudge: Actually, you’re the one getting in my way
Luq: HOW?!
Nudge: Simple. You are trying to take me along the wrong path
Toady: So, what are you hiding?
Luq: Nothing. I’m innocent
Parakoopa: Ralsei, can you confirm this?
Ralsei: Yep. Luq didn’t do ir
Nudge: So now, it’s between Yascamer and Ralsei
Ralsei: Oops. Wasn’t meant to reveal that Yascamer did it
Yascamer: Me… No… do it
Lely: You must be lying
Parakoopa: I trust Ralsei
Kris: HOW!?!?!?
Ralsei: I suppose I should explain how it happened.
It started when Kris went to the bathroom. I decide to sneak in, and caught Lemon on the floor. I was about to stab him, but I heard something in g from behind. Ut was Yascamer. I then threw the knife at him, but he caught it. Then, Tyshawn showed up. I didn’t know what happened between those 2 at the time. After they did whatever they did, I then killed Lemon, then as I went to exit, realised Yascamer had already killed Tyshawn

Max: There is no way this is true
Yascamer: It-it is
Lely: Why did you do it? We agreed not to kill anyone
Yascamer: I-i was scared. I though he was going to accuse me of killing Lemon so I panicked and threw the knife
MonoBoi: That’s right. It’s time for the punishment
Parakoopa: What about voting time?
MonoBoi: It’s way to late for that. We need to get Yascamer killed asap since I need to recharge
*Yascamer then got forced into a race car, but as he tried driving towards everyone, traps came from everywhere. In the end, a crusher from toads factory Andes up squishing him, and his car*

I don't have anything to say, you nailed it.
But...
Kris, next time, just hold it in and DONT GO TO THE BATHROOM

Dont forget that Toady should never teach anyone his pranks again

I feel he's gonna kill someone at some point.
Why do I think it will be me ???
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Episode 11 (Part 1): The final floor

Lely: W-why did he betray us?
Ralsei: Wasn’t you listening, or have you gone deaf?
Max: Leave Lely alone!
Ralsei: I can do whatever I want, you talentless bitch
Lely: NEVER SAY THAT TO MY BEST FRIENDS!!!
Nudge: I think I’m going to stay behind
MonoBoi: Why? Do you want to spend time with me?
Nudge: I would rather poison myself
Toady: Why do you want to stay behind?
Nudge: None of your business!
Bj: Let’s just lea-
Max: NO! We can’t let him be by himself when he hasn’t identified what is in his secret room
Luq: Max. There is no need for that anymore
Max: Why?
Luq: Because if  it didn’t work last time, then it won’t work again
Max: But, I still need to keep an eye on him
Nudge: No you don’t!
Lely: Max! Leave him
Max: No. I need to do something. I need to show that I’m just a talentless snorlax
*As he said that, Nudge took out poison and drunk it all, collapsing to the ground*
Lely: NUDGE!!!
Parakoopa: Just leave him. There is no way that Nudge would give up that easily. For now, let’s just head back
Lely: I CANT JUST LEAVE HIM!!! He is about to die so I nee-
Bj: Parakoopa is right. We just need to have hope

Lely: Poor Nudge. I hope he is ok
Max: I don’t care if he is or not. He is a big threat, and if he is dead, then we know who killed him
Lely: M-max. What has happened to you. Ever since you learnt your talentless, you have been focusing solely on dealing with threats
Max: I just want to be useful, and prevent any murders from happening
Luq: Remember what I said, about how you should ignore the fact that you are talentless
Max: Yes but I… I just wan-
Ralsei: What is all this bullshit you are spewing?  What do you have against max being useful. Anyway, Toady, Kris, Bj, and Parakoopa shall go investigate the final floor. You 3 can fight it out down here while I help keep it alive
Max: SHUT UP!!! All you do is cause problems. We make an attempt to have piece, and you just have to come at us and say NO!!! We will go investigate the final floor aswell, while you will be staying here by yourself, waiting for your so called ‘friend’ to show up!!!
Ralsei: Nice. I’m in a conflict.
Luq: Attention seeker

Max: Now that we have checked out the new rooms, does anyone have anything to share?
Parakoopa: Tick Tock Clock seems to have a giant simulator at the top. Maybe we should try it out at some point
Bj: Rainbow Ride was filled with random floating things, with the only think notable was a steerable ship
Lely: There was nothing interesting in our room
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. It is now 10:00PM, so paintings are now disabled
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Episode 11 (Part 1): The final floor

Lely: W-why did he betray us?
Ralsei: Wasn’t you listening, or have you gone deaf?
Max: Leave Lely alone!
Ralsei: I can do whatever I want, you talentless bitch
Lely: NEVER SAY THAT TO MY BEST FRIENDS!!!
Nudge: I think I’m going to stay behind
MonoBoi: Why? Do you want to spend time with me?
Nudge: I would rather poison myself
Toady: Why do you want to stay behind?
Nudge: None of your business!
Bj: Let’s just lea-
Max: NO! We can’t let him be by himself when he hasn’t identified what is in his secret room
Luq: Max. There is no need for that anymore
Max: Why?
Luq: Because if  it didn’t work last time, then it won’t work again
Max: But, I still need to keep an eye on him
Nudge: No you don’t!
Lely: Max! Leave him
Max: No. I need to do something. I need to show that I’m just a talentless snorlax
*As he said that, Nudge took out poison and drunk it all, collapsing to the ground*
Lely: NUDGE!!!
Parakoopa: Just leave him. There is no way that Nudge would give up that easily. For now, let’s just head back
Lely: I CANT JUST LEAVE HIM!!! He is about to die so I nee-
Bj: Parakoopa is right. We just need to have hope

Lely: Poor Nudge. I hope he is ok
Max: I don’t care if he is or not. He is a big threat, and if he is dead, then we know who killed him
Lely: M-max. What has happened to you. Ever since you learnt your talentless, you have been focusing solely on dealing with threats
Max: I just want to be useful, and prevent any murders from happening
Luq: Remember what I said, about how you should ignore the fact that you are talentless
Max: Yes but I… I just wan-
Ralsei: What is all this bullshit you are spewing?  What do you have against max being useful. Anyway, Toady, Kris, Bj, and Parakoopa shall go investigate the final floor. You 3 can fight it out down here while I help keep it alive
Max: SHUT UP!!! All you do is cause problems. We make an attempt to have piece, and you just have to come at us and say NO!!! We will go investigate the final floor aswell, while you will be staying here by yourself, waiting for your so called ‘friend’ to show up!!!
Ralsei: Nice. I’m in a conflict.
Luq: Attention seeker

Max: Now that we have checked out the new rooms, does anyone have anything to share?
Parakoopa: Tick Tock Clock seems to have a giant simulator at the top. Maybe we should try it out at some point
Bj: Rainbow Ride was filled with random floating things, with the only think notable was a steerable ship
Lely: There was nothing interesting in our room
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. It is now 10:00PM, so paintings are now disabled

You really nail this fanfic more than the others. I don't know, it's just more passionating. I'm looking at every line carefully, more than once... the fanfics that make me do that are very rare
Anyways, I also like the character development.
And I have a fact to spill... FDJ, aka DaisyFan370, aka DaisyandToad, wanted to be a character but he never appeared in the fanfic
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Invu wrote:
Episode 11 (Part 1): The final floor

Lely: W-why did he betray us?
Ralsei: Wasn’t you listening, or have you gone deaf?
Max: Leave Lely alone!
Ralsei: I can do whatever I want, you talentless bitch
Lely: NEVER SAY THAT TO MY BEST FRIENDS!!!
Nudge: I think I’m going to stay behind
MonoBoi: Why? Do you want to spend time with me?
Nudge: I would rather poison myself
Toady: Why do you want to stay behind?
Nudge: None of your business!
Bj: Let’s just lea-
Max: NO! We can’t let him be by himself when he hasn’t identified what is in his secret room
Luq: Max. There is no need for that anymore
Max: Why?
Luq: Because if  it didn’t work last time, then it won’t work again
Max: But, I still need to keep an eye on him
Nudge: No you don’t!
Lely: Max! Leave him
Max: No. I need to do something. I need to show that I’m just a talentless snorlax
*As he said that, Nudge took out poison and drunk it all, collapsing to the ground*
Lely: NUDGE!!!
Parakoopa: Just leave him. There is no way that Nudge would give up that easily. For now, let’s just head back
Lely: I CANT JUST LEAVE HIM!!! He is about to die so I nee-
Bj: Parakoopa is right. We just need to have hope

Lely: Poor Nudge. I hope he is ok
Max: I don’t care if he is or not. He is a big threat, and if he is dead, then we know who killed him
Lely: M-max. What has happened to you. Ever since you learnt your talentless, you have been focusing solely on dealing with threats
Max: I just want to be useful, and prevent any murders from happening
Luq: Remember what I said, about how you should ignore the fact that you are talentless
Max: Yes but I… I just wan-
Ralsei: What is all this bullshit you are spewing?  What do you have against max being useful. Anyway, Toady, Kris, Bj, and Parakoopa shall go investigate the final floor. You 3 can fight it out down here while I help keep it alive
Max: SHUT UP!!! All you do is cause problems. We make an attempt to have piece, and you just have to come at us and say NO!!! We will go investigate the final floor aswell, while you will be staying here by yourself, waiting for your so called ‘friend’ to show up!!!
Ralsei: Nice. I’m in a conflict.
Luq: Attention seeker

Max: Now that we have checked out the new rooms, does anyone have anything to share?
Parakoopa: Tick Tock Clock seems to have a giant simulator at the top. Maybe we should try it out at some point
Bj: Rainbow Ride was filled with random floating things, with the only think notable was a steerable ship
Lely: There was nothing interesting in our room
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. It is now 10:00PM, so paintings are now disabled

You really nail this fanfic more than the others. I don't know, it's just more passionating. I'm looking at every line carefully, more than once... the fanfics that make me do that are very rare
Anyways, I also like the character development.
And I have a fact to spill... FDJ, aka DaisyFan370, aka DaisyandToad, wanted to be a character but he never appeared in the fanfic

I could only have a max of 17 characters (16 if you don’t count MonoBoi) so I had to get rid of him and XBOX since i felt like they wouldn’t have good characters/ too similar to others (specifically with Tyshawn for XBOX, and Ralsei for DaisyFan)
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Episode 11 (Part 2): Simulation Clock

MonoBoi: Ding Dong. It is now 7am, so you now have access to paintings again
Max: So, what shall we do today?
Lely: First, I want to look for Nudge
Parakoopa: Why? There is no use. We aren’t going to fin-
Bj: We should still try anyway, just in case
Toady: I agree. We should still look just incase we do find him
Ralsei: I’m not going to look for him. It’s a waste of time. I’m going to use my time for more valuable things
Max: Then I’m going with you
Ralsei: No you aren’t
*As he said that, he took out some poison*
Lely: MAX!!! Leave him alone
Max: Fine!
Lely: Remember what I said. It’s not about being useful, it’s about being part of the group
Max: Fair. I think I’m going to go to my room and try to relax
Lely: Anyway, I’m going to check the basement

Lely: I guess I should start in Leathal Lava Land
Nudge: Hi Lely
Lely: Nudge?
Nudge: Yeah. Look to your left
Lely: There is nothing there…
Nudge: Sorry. I meant right
Lely: I don’t see you there either… WAIT TOADY!!!
Toady: He isn’t here. Sorry
Lely: That wasn’t funny!
Ralsei: Yes it was
Lely: What are you doing here?
Ralsei: I was giving Toady an audience
Toady: Anyway, we should head back now

*10 minutes later*
Luq: So, what now?
Bj: How about we try the simulation out
Parakoopa: That sounds fun

Parakoopa: So this is the simulation
Bj: Yep. Let’s put our VR headset on and start

Lely: So this is a survival game
Luq: Seems like it
MonoBoi: Max has been eliminated
Max: So we have to deal with him during every elimination
Ralsei: How are you out already?
MonoBoi: Ralsei has Ben eliminated
Bj: How are you out already?
Ralsei: Bruh my game glitched
MonoBoi: That is impossible, since this is glitchless
Ralsei: Then how did I lose?
MonoBoi: Because you suck.
Lely has been eliminated

Lely: That was tough. I wonder how much longer they will last
MonoBoi: Bj has been eliminated
Toady has been eliminated

Bj: Damn. A lot of bad luck at one moment
Toady: Go Luq. Go Parakoopa. Go Luq. Go Parakoopa
Ralsei: Who are you even rooting for? Choose one you idiot!
MonoBoi: Luq has been eliminated. Congratulations Parakoopa, here is your reward
*After that, Parakoopa’s headset exploded, smashing his shell, and dropping him dead onto the ground*
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Episode 11 (Part 2): Simulation Clock

MonoBoi: Ding Dong. It is now 7am, so you now have access to paintings again
Max: So, what shall we do today?
Lely: First, I want to look for Nudge
Parakoopa: Why? There is no use. We aren’t going to fin-
Bj: We should still try anyway, just in case
Toady: I agree. We should still look just incase we do find him
Ralsei: I’m not going to look for him. It’s a waste of time. I’m going to use my time for more valuable things
Max: Then I’m going with you
Ralsei: No you aren’t
*As he said that, he took out some poison*
Lely: MAX!!! Leave him alone
Max: Fine!
Lely: Remember what I said. It’s not about being useful, it’s about being part of the group
Max: Fair. I think I’m going to go to my room and try to relax
Lely: Anyway, I’m going to check the basement

Lely: I guess I should start in Leathal Lava Land
Nudge: Hi Lely
Lely: Nudge?
Nudge: Yeah. Look to your left
Lely: There is nothing there…
Nudge: Sorry. I meant right
Lely: I don’t see you there either… WAIT TOADY!!!
Toady: He isn’t here. Sorry
Lely: That wasn’t funny!
Ralsei: Yes it was
Lely: What are you doing here?
Ralsei: I was giving Toady an audience
Toady: Anyway, we should head back now

*10 minutes later*
Luq: So, what now?
Bj: How about we try the simulation out
Parakoopa: That sounds fun

Parakoopa: So this is the simulation
Bj: Yep. Let’s put our VR headset on and start

Lely: So this is a survival game
Luq: Seems like it
MonoBoi: Max has been eliminated
Max: So we have to deal with him during every elimination
Ralsei: How are you out already?
MonoBoi: Ralsei has Ben eliminated
Bj: How are you out already?
Ralsei: Bruh my game glitched
MonoBoi: That is impossible, since this is glitchless
Ralsei: Then how did I lose?
MonoBoi: Because you suck.
Lely has been eliminated

Lely: That was tough. I wonder how much longer they will last
MonoBoi: Bj has been eliminated
Toady has been eliminated

Bj: Damn. A lot of bad luck at one moment
Toady: Go Luq. Go Parakoopa. Go Luq. Go Parakoopa
Ralsei: Who are you even rooting for? Choose one you idiot!
MonoBoi: Luq has been eliminated. Congratulations Parakoopa, here is your reward
*After that, Parakoopa’s headset exploded, smashing his shell, and dropping him dead onto the ground*

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Episode 12: Simulation Investigation

Lely: PARAKOOPA!!!
Max: Another death…
Toady: Something’s off
Bj: Of course something is off. Another one of our friends has died
Nudge: He means about Lely…
Lely: NUDGE! You’re back! Please help us solve this murd- Oh. It’s just Toady…
Ralsei: Of course something is off about him. He is using half of his braincells, so one
Max: WHO ARE YOU CALLING STUPID!!!
Ralsei: Lely
Toady: Actually, that is not what I meant…
Luq: You man the fact that he hasn’t collapsed yet?
*As he said that, Lely fainted*
Toady: Nevermind. It doesn’t matter anymore
Kris: What does matter is solving who killed Parakoopa
Max: MONOKUMA!!! He was the one who gave Parakoopa a prize known as death
MonoBoi: How dare you accuse me. Because of that, you aren’t allowed to investigate
Max: WHAT!!!
*Max immedietly disappeared*
Lely: HOW DARE YOU DO THAT TO MAX!!!
Kris: Didn’t you just faint…?
Toady: Of course I didn't
Ralsei: Maybe it would have been better if you went to prank them at the igloo instead
Kris: NEVER WISH THAT UPON SOMEONE!!!
Ralsei: You probably wish I killed someone else, don’t you
Luq: Ralsei, cut it out. We need to focus on investigating.
Bj: Sadly, we can’t check for information with the headset, since that got blown up
Toady: Then what else can we check
Ralsei: Your dead body!
Luq: Ralsei, I just told you to stop
Ralsei: Don’t care + didn’t ask
Luq: Fine then, for the sake of the rest of us
*Luq immediately knocked Ralsei out*
Kris: Wow. This really has turned into a small investigation group
Toady: Let’s start with alibis for who could have sabotaged it
Luq: Your deduction if it being sabotaged seams logical. As for alibis, I checked the useless room with Lely and Max
Kris: I have a question, why did we get the biggest group to investigate useless room?
Toady: That was my idea
Kris: Why though?
Luq: Why doesn’t matter. What matters is who
Kris: Sorry
Toady: Anyway. Me and Parakoopa were in Tick Tock Clock, I investigated the bottom while Parakoopa flew up to the top
Bj: This morning, we went looking for Nudge. I went to the second floor, Luq went to the third floor, Parakoopa stayed on the first floor with Kris, while Lely and Toady were in the basement
Ralsei: Don’t forget me[:color]
[color=lime]Luq: I though that you were knocked out to not disturb us

*Luq then knocked out Toady*
Kris: You just got rid of another person…
Bj: At least it will be easier to investigate
Luq: From that, I gathered 5 suspects, from most to least likely
Myself,
Toady,
Bj,
Max,
And Parakoopa

Kris: You consider yourself most suspicious?
Luq: Based on those possibilities, I am the most likely
Bj: I like your honesty, but I think Toady is more suspicious than you
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. Please head over to the entrance to start the fourth class trial

Toady: Why did you knock me out?
Luq: Because you voice pranked as Ralsei
Lely: I’ve just realised, we might get a chance so see Nudge again
*They all got into elevator, but when they got to the bottom, nobody appeared outside the elevator door*
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Episode 13: Mystery of the Clock

Lely: W-where’s Nudge?
MonoBoi: Why does that matter? You need to solve the murder, not solve where Nudge isn
Lely: But nudge is our friend. We can’t just leave him
MonoBoi: Anyway. Trial! BEGIN!!!
Luq: We can already narrow it down to 5 suspects.
Myself
Toady
Bj
Max
Parakoopa

Lely: We can eliminate max because-
Luq: This is about the power of our brains, not friendship. I know you want to believe in Max, but we still need to consider him a suspect
Lely: But-
Ralsei: Please, no bullshit
Max: What did you say about Lely?
Ralsei: To stop with the bullshit
Max: DONT!!!
Ralsei: Fine. If it will get you to shut up
Lely: Leave max alone!
Ralsei: Anyway, let’s talk about Toady
Toady: What about me?
Ralsei: How you and Parakoopa are the only known people to enter Tick Tock Clock before the incident
Toady: I promise I’m innocent
Bj: I can confirm he is
Kris: How?
Bj: Because I did it
Kris: WHY? What did Parakoopa do to you?
Bj: Nothing. The truth is, I was trying to confuse MonoBoi by killing myself
Max: YOU WHAT!?!?!?
Bj: I was hoping that killing myself would make MonoBoi see you as killers and let you all escape, but my plan failed when I ended up killing Parakoopa myself
MonoBoi: Hey! I haven’t split you in half yet

MonoBoi: Hey! You still need to debate. We can’t have a boring trial like this
Lely: We don’t care about how boring the trial is, and do not want to debate
MonoBoi: Hey! This trial isn’t about you
Max: This trial isn’t about you either
MonoBoi: You know what, let’s just end this trial, since you guys ruin EVERYTHING!!!
Bj: No, you ruin it for us, and cause us to murder like I did

MonoBoi: Bj, just die before I get EVEN MORE ANNOYED AT YOU!!!
Bj: Mo hesitation. You just want me dead. So, where is my cave?
MonoBoi: Just in there
Bj: It is time to get out of here. Goodbye people, and isn’t let another murder happen.
*After he said that, we walked into the cave and under a falling rock, getting crushed*
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The quality of this fanfic is amazing, even though Fways is 10 times better lol
Keep it up ;)
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Episode 13: Mystery of the Clock

Lely: W-where’s Nudge?
MonoBoi: Why does that matter? You need to solve the murder, not solve where Nudge isn
Lely: But nudge is our friend. We can’t just leave him
MonoBoi: Anyway. Trial! BEGIN!!!
Luq: We can already narrow it down to 5 suspects.
Myself
Toady
Bj
Max
Parakoopa

Lely: We can eliminate max because-
Luq: This is about the power of our brains, not friendship. I know you want to believe in Max, but we still need to consider him a suspect
Lely: But-
Ralsei: Please, no bullshit
Max: What did you say about Lely?
Ralsei: To stop with the bullshit
Max: DONT!!!
Ralsei: Fine. If it will get you to shut up
Lely: Leave max alone!
Ralsei: Anyway, let’s talk about Toady
Toady: What about me?
Ralsei: How you and Parakoopa are the only known people to enter Tick Tock Clock before the incident
Toady: I promise I’m innocent
Bj: I can confirm he is
Kris: How?
Bj: Because I did it
Kris: WHY? What did Parakoopa do to you?
Bj: Nothing. The truth is, I was trying to confuse MonoBoi by killing myself
Max: YOU WHAT!?!?!?
Bj: I was hoping that killing myself would make MonoBoi see you as killers and let you all escape, but my plan failed when I ended up killing Parakoopa myself
MonoBoi: Hey! I haven’t split you in half yet

MonoBoi: Hey! You still need to debate. We can’t have a boring trial like this
Lely: We don’t care about how boring the trial is, and do not want to debate
MonoBoi: Hey! This trial isn’t about you
Max: This trial isn’t about you either
MonoBoi: You know what, let’s just end this trial, since you guys ruin EVERYTHING!!!
Bj: No, you ruin it for us, and cause us to murder like I did

MonoBoi: Bj, just die before I get EVEN MORE ANNOYED AT YOU!!!
Bj: Mo hesitation. You just want me dead. So, where is my cave?
MonoBoi: Just in there
Bj: It is time to get out of here. Goodbye people, and isn’t let another murder happen.
*After he said that, we walked into the cave and under a falling rock, getting crushed*

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Episode 14 (Part 1): The return

Lely: 9 people dead, and 1 person missing. All that’s left is… us 6
Max: Don’t cry. We just need to have hope
Lely: B-but, how am I mean to to have hope, when my friends are constantly killing eachother?
MonoBoi: Do whatever. Anyway, I’m going to leave you fools
Toady: Thank god he’s gone
MonoBoi: What are you doing in here?
Nudge: Isn’t it obvious? I’m finding out the secrets to the killing game

Lely: Nudge?!
MonoBoi: GET OUT OF HERE!!!
Nudge: No. I need to reveal the secrets to the killing game
MonoBoi: The you leave me with no choice. SELF DESTRUCT ACTIVATED!!!

*BANG!!! The wall slid open and Nudge came flying out*
Lely: NUDGE!!! Not again!!!
Nudge: D-don’t worry. I’m f-fine
Luq: You don’t seem fine, but I can’t think of any way to heal you
Ralsei: I can
Max: NO!!! That is far too dangerous!
Ralsei: Fine. I’ll just leave Nudge to die from his injuries
Lely: NO!!! Please, save him
Nudge: You… guys are b-being way too dram-matic about… this
Kris: No, we aren’t. We can tell you are badly injured, and just want to help you
Nudge: I-I mean I guess I… will go, since it w-will make things easier
Max: But is it a good idea to let Ralsei take care of you?
Lely: YES!!! It is. Even if there is a chance of danger, Nudge needs healing
Max: But… Oh they’ve already left us…
Kris: I suppose we should get going too
Lely: Let’s go check the new area

Toady: So, it seems like the new area is a staircase to a painting. Let’s go inside
MonoBoi: Ding Dong.  It is now 10pm, so painting date no longer usable
Toady: So he decided to pre-record all the night time announcements
Lely: Let’s go to sleep now

MonoBoi: Ding Dong. It is now, 7am, so access to the paintings is now re-allowed
Lely: Let’s go investigate the new paintings
Nudge: Ok. I’ll check the one on this floor
Kris: There’s one on this floor?
Nudge: Yep. There is one on every floor, though the basement does kind of have 3, being the cage, a water area, and a bowser room, and floor 2 has none
Max: I’ll check the bowser room in the basement
Lely: I’ll go check the one up top
Ralsei: I’ll check the haunted house
Toady: Same
Luq: So that leaves me and Kris in the water area

*After the search, an explosion could be heard in Bob-Omb Battlefield*
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