[FANFIC] Pure Darkness
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5368 pts ★ NoviceOn 2023-12-19 at 21:17:13
Since I’m back, I may as well bring this back, and all the continuity with zombie survival is gone and zombie survival is paused until I either cancel it or I’m done with pure darkness (so its the former) because I am lazy.
On 2023-12-19 at 21:56:13
Name: D13t-#k10
Colour#d60000
Species: Human (cyborg)
Personality: very literal. Does not feel emotion (most of the time). Worships a machine deity known as the omnissiah. Believes all machines have a "machine spirit" which must be appeased for the machine to function properly (via the use of incense and rubbing oil on it). Will kill other group members if it provides a benefit.
Abilities: body is mostly made of metal, eyesight is better (as it employs the use of sensors as eyes) (the sensors may or may not have night vision. Your choice), good aim. Will not die of old age and takes much more extreme temperatures to die to.
Weapons: rifle (shown in image). Small tavern goad. Eletric sword.
Extra info: skin is all becoming grey, is becoming skeletal and has no eyes (under mask and robes).
looks like this:
Here's an example of the kind of thing he would say to others:
Colour#d60000
Species: Human (cyborg)
Personality: very literal. Does not feel emotion (most of the time). Worships a machine deity known as the omnissiah. Believes all machines have a "machine spirit" which must be appeased for the machine to function properly (via the use of incense and rubbing oil on it). Will kill other group members if it provides a benefit.
Abilities: body is mostly made of metal, eyesight is better (as it employs the use of sensors as eyes) (the sensors may or may not have night vision. Your choice), good aim. Will not die of old age and takes much more extreme temperatures to die to.
Weapons: rifle (shown in image). Small tavern goad. Eletric sword.
Extra info: skin is all becoming grey, is becoming skeletal and has no eyes (under mask and robes).
looks like this:
Here's an example of the kind of thing he would say to others:
From the moment I understood the weakness of my flesh, it disgusted me. I craved the strength and certainty of steel. I aspired to the purity of the Blessed Machine. Your kind cling to your flesh, as though it will not decay and fail you. One day the crude biomass you call the temple will wither, and you will beg my kind to save you. But I am already saved, for the Machine is immortal.
On 2023-12-19 at 22:02:47
Name:xrunner48
Colour: Purple
Personality: You could probably come up with something from my other posts
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Abilities: Bhop, can bleed out infinitely (a black fluid which is fatal to most life)
Weapons: Knife, Five-Seven pistol, M4A1-S rifle.
Appearance: profile picture
Colour: Purple
Personality: You could probably come up with something from my other posts
.Abilities: Bhop, can bleed out infinitely (a black fluid which is fatal to most life)
Weapons: Knife, Five-Seven pistol, M4A1-S rifle.
Appearance: profile picture
On 2023-12-19 at 22:31:24
Name: Choco
Colour: #795548
Species: Sentient Glass Cup
Personality: Kind and brave but annoying
Abilities: Can use inverted matter (inherited from his evil counterpart, kl1MocohC) (also inverted matter can burn anything and everything, even unburnable material)
Other info (skills / strengths and weaknesses)
Strengths:
Is very good at dodging oncoming attacks
Has a lot of knowledge about many subjects
Can easily comfort people
Weaknesses:
Fragility
Basically dies when the chocolate milk inside him gets poured out i guess
Colour: #795548
Species: Sentient Glass Cup
Personality: Kind and brave but annoying
Abilities: Can use inverted matter (inherited from his evil counterpart, kl1MocohC) (also inverted matter can burn anything and everything, even unburnable material)
Other info (skills / strengths and weaknesses)
Strengths:
Is very good at dodging oncoming attacks
Has a lot of knowledge about many subjects
Can easily comfort people
Weaknesses:
Fragility
Basically dies when the chocolate milk inside him gets poured out i guess
On 2023-12-19 at 23:48:26
Name: Kirby64
Likes: (too much to put)
Dislikes: Dying, The Powerpuff girls, Anybody who likes and/or relate to the Powerpuff girls, Anybody who made the Powerpuff girls.
Species: Kirby
Description: Likes videogames, is mentally biased, Is dim witted sometimes. A pro at anything FORTNITE related (or anyone).
Age: 10
Smartness: 62% IQ
Home: Lives In Dimension #578346
Likes: (too much to put)
Dislikes: Dying, The Powerpuff girls, Anybody who likes and/or relate to the Powerpuff girls, Anybody who made the Powerpuff girls.
Species: Kirby
Description: Likes videogames, is mentally biased, Is dim witted sometimes. A pro at anything FORTNITE related (or anyone).
Age: 10
Smartness: 62% IQ
Home: Lives In Dimension #578346
On 2023-12-19 at 23:52:21
Name: Kirby64
Likes: (too much to put)
Dislikes: Dying, The Powerpuff girls, Anybody who likes and/or relate to the Powerpuff girls, Anybody who made the Powerpuff girls.
Species: Kirby
Description: Likes videogames, is mentally biased, Is dim witted sometimes. A pro at anything FORTNITE related (or anyone).
Age: 10
Smartness: 62% IQ
Home: Lives In Dimension #578346 (Dream Land)
Looks: https://www.pixilart.com/draw?ref=home-pageLooks just like kirby but with a 64 on my head
Abilities: Copy Ability (just like kirby), Hacking Defenses, Summoning Friends In Battle, Invisibility.
Likes: (too much to put)
Dislikes: Dying, The Powerpuff girls, Anybody who likes and/or relate to the Powerpuff girls, Anybody who made the Powerpuff girls.
Species: Kirby
Description: Likes videogames, is mentally biased, Is dim witted sometimes. A pro at anything FORTNITE related (or anyone).
Age: 10
Smartness: 62% IQ
Home: Lives In Dimension #578346 (Dream Land)
Looks: https://www.pixilart.com/draw?ref=home-pageLooks just like kirby but with a 64 on my head
Abilities: Copy Ability (just like kirby), Hacking Defenses, Summoning Friends In Battle, Invisibility.
On 2023-12-20 at 00:27:47
Name: Kirby64
Likes: (too much to put)
Dislikes: Dying, The Powerpuff girls, Anybody who likes and/or relate to the Powerpuff girls, Anybody who made the Powerpuff girls.
Species: Kirby
Description: Likes videogames, is mentally biased, Is dim witted sometimes. A pro at anything FORTNITE related (or anyone).
Age: 10
Smartness: 62% IQ
Home: Lives In Dimension #578346
Likes: (too much to put)
Dislikes: Dying, The Powerpuff girls, Anybody who likes and/or relate to the Powerpuff girls, Anybody who made the Powerpuff girls.
Species: Kirby
Description: Likes videogames, is mentally biased, Is dim witted sometimes. A pro at anything FORTNITE related (or anyone).
Age: 10
Smartness: 62% IQ
Home: Lives In Dimension #578346
Bro has severe hate for the powderpuff girls
On 2023-12-20 at 00:59:17
Prologue: Shit no title
Coconut Mall is dark, I mean like really dark, it’s been like that for a couple of hours.
Fiery: *yawn* What’s the time? Hold on. 9 AM? It’s so dark outside, this is shady. I have a feeling CoconutNews has some news that are actually breaking this time around.
BREAKING NEWS: THE SUN HAS VANISHED. SCIENTISTS SAY THIS HAPPENED DUE TO THEIR TESTS TO NOT END UP BEING IN THE EXPLOSION. MORE DETAILS WILL BE CONFIRMED LATER.
Fiery: This can’t be good. Those scientists must have been placing orbit tests to escape this fate. And now that they’ve succeeded, I have a feeling all hell is about to break loose.
Sorry for short one I needed to get this out
Coconut Mall is dark, I mean like really dark, it’s been like that for a couple of hours.
Fiery: *yawn* What’s the time? Hold on. 9 AM? It’s so dark outside, this is shady. I have a feeling CoconutNews has some news that are actually breaking this time around.
BREAKING NEWS: THE SUN HAS VANISHED. SCIENTISTS SAY THIS HAPPENED DUE TO THEIR TESTS TO NOT END UP BEING IN THE EXPLOSION. MORE DETAILS WILL BE CONFIRMED LATER.
Fiery: This can’t be good. Those scientists must have been placing orbit tests to escape this fate. And now that they’ve succeeded, I have a feeling all hell is about to break loose.
Sorry for short one I needed to get this out
UGHHHHHHHH WHEN WILL YOU DO THE NEXT PIECE OF STORYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
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3On 2023-12-20 at 01:43:09
Prologue: Shit no title
Coconut Mall is dark, I mean like really dark, it’s been like that for a couple of hours.
Fiery: *yawn* What’s the time? Hold on. 9 AM? It’s so dark outside, this is shady. I have a feeling CoconutNews has some news that are actually breaking this time around.
BREAKING NEWS: THE SUN HAS VANISHED. SCIENTISTS SAY THIS HAPPENED DUE TO THEIR TESTS TO NOT END UP BEING IN THE EXPLOSION. MORE DETAILS WILL BE CONFIRMED LATER.
Fiery: This can’t be good. Those scientists must have been placing orbit tests to escape this fate. And now that they’ve succeeded, I have a feeling all hell is about to break loose.
Sorry for short one I needed to get this out
Coconut Mall is dark, I mean like really dark, it’s been like that for a couple of hours.
Fiery: *yawn* What’s the time? Hold on. 9 AM? It’s so dark outside, this is shady. I have a feeling CoconutNews has some news that are actually breaking this time around.
BREAKING NEWS: THE SUN HAS VANISHED. SCIENTISTS SAY THIS HAPPENED DUE TO THEIR TESTS TO NOT END UP BEING IN THE EXPLOSION. MORE DETAILS WILL BE CONFIRMED LATER.
Fiery: This can’t be good. Those scientists must have been placing orbit tests to escape this fate. And now that they’ve succeeded, I have a feeling all hell is about to break loose.
Sorry for short one I needed to get this out
UGHHHHHHHH WHEN WILL YOU DO THE NEXT PIECE OF STORYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
UGGGGGGGHHHHHHH
Give him time (certainly more than the hour you gave him), he can't instantly appease you. He probably hasn't even been online in the one hour you gave him to respond
On 2023-12-20 at 03:20:34
Name: Kirby64
Likes: (too much to put)
Dislikes: Dying, The Powerpuff girls, Anybody who likes and/or relate to the Powerpuff girls, Anybody who made the Powerpuff girls.
Species: Kirby
Description: Likes videogames, is mentally biased, Is dim witted sometimes. A pro at anything FORTNITE related (or anyone).
Age: 10
Smartness: 62% IQ
Home: Lives In Dimension #578346 (Dream Land)
Looks: https://www.pixilart.com/draw?ref=home-pageLooks just like kirby but with a 64 on my head
Abilities: Copy Ability (just like kirby), Hacking Defenses, Summoning Friends In Battle, Invisibility.
Info: Kirby64's Brother is Kirby. Who is more kind and caring. The two brothers' nemesis is The Powerpuff girls. They hate that another cute group is getting attention. When Kirby64 saw that the sun is gone, He thought it was a solar eclipse. And he thought *Maybe I can take the Powerpuff girls down with a solar eclipse* And then he told the Powerpuff girls that he had a surprise but in all there little'de'knows, There were monsters.
Edit: Weapons: Nintendo Switch (as said before,
Likes: (too much to put)
Dislikes: Dying, The Powerpuff girls, Anybody who likes and/or relate to the Powerpuff girls, Anybody who made the Powerpuff girls.
Species: Kirby
Description: Likes videogames, is mentally biased, Is dim witted sometimes. A pro at anything FORTNITE related (or anyone).
Age: 10
Smartness: 62% IQ
Home: Lives In Dimension #578346 (Dream Land)
Looks: https://www.pixilart.com/draw?ref=home-pageLooks just like kirby but with a 64 on my head
Abilities: Copy Ability (just like kirby), Hacking Defenses, Summoning Friends In Battle, Invisibility.
Info: Kirby64's Brother is Kirby. Who is more kind and caring. The two brothers' nemesis is The Powerpuff girls. They hate that another cute group is getting attention. When Kirby64 saw that the sun is gone, He thought it was a solar eclipse. And he thought *Maybe I can take the Powerpuff girls down with a solar eclipse* And then he told the Powerpuff girls that he had a surprise but in all there little'de'knows, There were monsters.
Edit: Weapons: Nintendo Switch (as said before,
Summoning Friends In Battle
), Sword.On 2023-12-20 at 11:01:20
Name: Kirby64
Likes: (too much to put)
Dislikes: Dying, The Powerpuff girls, Anybody who likes and/or relate to the Powerpuff girls, Anybody who made the Powerpuff girls.
Species: Kirby
Description: Likes videogames, is mentally biased, Is dim witted sometimes. A pro at anything FORTNITE related (or anyone).
Age: 10
Smartness: 62% IQ
Home: Lives In Dimension #578346 (Dream Land)
Looks: https://www.pixilart.com/draw?ref=home-pageLooks just like kirby but with a 64 on my head
Abilities: Copy Ability (just like kirby), Hacking Defenses, Summoning Friends In Battle, Invisibility.
Info: Kirby64's Brother is Kirby. Who is more kind and caring. The two brothers' nemesis is The Powerpuff girls. They hate that another cute group is getting attention. When Kirby64 saw that the sun is gone, He thought it was a solar eclipse. And he thought *Maybe I can take the Powerpuff girls down with a solar eclipse* And then he told the Powerpuff girls that he had a surprise but in all there little'de'knows, There were monsters.
Likes: (too much to put)
Dislikes: Dying, The Powerpuff girls, Anybody who likes and/or relate to the Powerpuff girls, Anybody who made the Powerpuff girls.
Species: Kirby
Description: Likes videogames, is mentally biased, Is dim witted sometimes. A pro at anything FORTNITE related (or anyone).
Age: 10
Smartness: 62% IQ
Home: Lives In Dimension #578346 (Dream Land)
Looks: https://www.pixilart.com/draw?ref=home-pageLooks just like kirby but with a 64 on my head
Abilities: Copy Ability (just like kirby), Hacking Defenses, Summoning Friends In Battle, Invisibility.
Info: Kirby64's Brother is Kirby. Who is more kind and caring. The two brothers' nemesis is The Powerpuff girls. They hate that another cute group is getting attention. When Kirby64 saw that the sun is gone, He thought it was a solar eclipse. And he thought *Maybe I can take the Powerpuff girls down with a solar eclipse* And then he told the Powerpuff girls that he had a surprise but in all there little'de'knows, There were monsters.
You know you could just edit your original message and then add all this extra info.
1On 2023-12-20 at 11:02:11
Prologue: Shit no title
Coconut Mall is dark, I mean like really dark, it’s been like that for a couple of hours.
Fiery: *yawn* What’s the time? Hold on. 9 AM? It’s so dark outside, this is shady. I have a feeling CoconutNews has some news that are actually breaking this time around.
BREAKING NEWS: THE SUN HAS VANISHED. SCIENTISTS SAY THIS HAPPENED DUE TO THEIR TESTS TO NOT END UP BEING IN THE EXPLOSION. MORE DETAILS WILL BE CONFIRMED LATER.
Fiery: This can’t be good. Those scientists must have been placing orbit tests to escape this fate. And now that they’ve succeeded, I have a feeling all hell is about to break loose.
Sorry for short one I needed to get this out
Coconut Mall is dark, I mean like really dark, it’s been like that for a couple of hours.
Fiery: *yawn* What’s the time? Hold on. 9 AM? It’s so dark outside, this is shady. I have a feeling CoconutNews has some news that are actually breaking this time around.
BREAKING NEWS: THE SUN HAS VANISHED. SCIENTISTS SAY THIS HAPPENED DUE TO THEIR TESTS TO NOT END UP BEING IN THE EXPLOSION. MORE DETAILS WILL BE CONFIRMED LATER.
Fiery: This can’t be good. Those scientists must have been placing orbit tests to escape this fate. And now that they’ve succeeded, I have a feeling all hell is about to break loose.
Sorry for short one I needed to get this out
UGHHHHHHHH WHEN WILL YOU DO THE NEXT PIECE OF STORYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
He hasn't been active for months and is now waiting for people to join so you should give him time.
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2On 2023-12-20 at 15:37:23
Prologue: Shit no title
Coconut Mall is dark, I mean like really dark, it’s been like that for a couple of hours.
Fiery: *yawn* What’s the time? Hold on. 9 AM? It’s so dark outside, this is shady. I have a feeling CoconutNews has some news that are actually breaking this time around.
BREAKING NEWS: THE SUN HAS VANISHED. SCIENTISTS SAY THIS HAPPENED DUE TO THEIR TESTS TO NOT END UP BEING IN THE EXPLOSION. MORE DETAILS WILL BE CONFIRMED LATER.
Fiery: This can’t be good. Those scientists must have been placing orbit tests to escape this fate. And now that they’ve succeeded, I have a feeling all hell is about to break loose!
Sorry for short one I needed to get this out
Coconut Mall is dark, I mean like really dark, it’s been like that for a couple of hours.
Fiery: *yawn* What’s the time? Hold on. 9 AM? It’s so dark outside, this is shady. I have a feeling CoconutNews has some news that are actually breaking this time around.
BREAKING NEWS: THE SUN HAS VANISHED. SCIENTISTS SAY THIS HAPPENED DUE TO THEIR TESTS TO NOT END UP BEING IN THE EXPLOSION. MORE DETAILS WILL BE CONFIRMED LATER.
Fiery: This can’t be good. Those scientists must have been placing orbit tests to escape this fate. And now that they’ve succeeded, I have a feeling all hell is about to break loose!
Sorry for short one I needed to get this out
UGHHHHHHHH WHEN WILL YOU DO THE NEXT PIECE OF STORYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
Please do not use the mic to type your messages after eating Taco Bell, thank you very much
43On 2023-12-20 at 16:37:22
It’s crazy how I keep on thinking of plot elements later in the story but I can’t find a way to make the first episode not full of filler
5On 2023-12-20 at 17:13:18
It’s crazy how I keep on thinking of plot elements later in the story but I can’t find a way to make the first episode not full of filler
Honestly the first episodes are generally filler. I'd say just do the filler and have everyone meet up and stuff but maybe add hints to a plot element maybe.
4On 2023-12-21 at 00:38:20
Hmmmmm.. I wonder what the first episode will be?
On 2023-12-21 at 01:24:14
Hmmmmm.. I wonder what the first episode will be?
Hmmmm.. I wonder when you will shut up!
Also since I'm here...
Name:Iam
Species: Human, Wolf
Personality: Kind, is smart (for the most part), i can and should kill you if you touch my friends or family, is a tarus.
Other Facts
Is the founder of Founders AFC
Can and will pull out a gun when in his wolf form
Can jump over people 5"3' and shorter
1On 2023-12-21 at 01:29:04
Hmmmmm.. I wonder what the first episode will be?
Hmmmm.. I wonder when you will shut up!
Also since I'm here...
Name:Iam
Species: Human, Wolf
Personality: Kind, is smart (for the most part), i can and should kill you if you touch my friends or family, is a tarus.
Other Facts
Is the founder of Founders AFC
Can and will pull out a gun when in his wolf form
Can jump over people 5"3' and shorter
What the heck man that was unprecidented
2On 2023-12-21 at 08:59:36
Hmmmmm.. I wonder what the first episode will be?
Might make it a Christmas Special
On 2023-12-21 at 12:59:28
It’s crazy how I keep on thinking of plot elements later in the story but I can’t find a way to make the first episode not full of filler
Yeah I'm in the same situation here. I have good plans for later episodes of my fanfic, but the current episode it's hard to think of anything interesting
@KirbytripleDX_2014 very relatable