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Messages 968 - Mario Mario
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Yeah,what is the story basically : People will try to understand why bad peoples try to sow chaos in the world of MKPC, for that, they will try to travel in time: The past to understand what happened, and the future to see the consequences

If you want to join :

Your Name in the Fanfic (obligatory)

Personality and ability (Not obligatory)

And if you are in the :

Neutral :
Me (MisterCringeh) Im powerful, can make a lot of large elements appear: black hole, etc...
Goonoo, can't speak but read in the mind of people (since he didnt what team he is, he is Neutral
xrunner48, Noclip, Unmatched Reaction Times.

Bad team :
Nudge, good power and climbing
Popplio, Can blow bubbles with his nose
Brint, Can summon stuff like bridges and what not
Dietsoda, Very good eyesight, great with a bow, good at tracking.

Good team :
Cosmo, Can fly, can summon other Lumas to come fight.
Lely, switch to his stronger alter ego
Max,Can instantly heal someone but this power costs a lot of energy, to the point that sometimes it can even pass out, so I only use it in an emergency
and make things levitate but the heavier it is the more complicated it is


And your color

If you dont want to join I respect that

PS : I love saying "Bread."


Name: pingouin
Color: Cyan
Abilities: Can turn into an animal

Et tu es du coté : Équipe Gentille ou Méchante ? Sinon je te met dans les neutres si sa te convient?

Team gentille

Cool ! Bon je t'ajoute, et la suite arriveras cette après midi


Je change de nom, maintenant je m'appelle: pingouin33
I change my name, now my name is: pingouin33
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Messages 212 - Toad Toad
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Yeah,what is the story basically : People will try to understand why bad peoples try to sow chaos in the world of MKPC, for that, they will try to travel in time: The past to understand what happened, and the future to see the consequences

If you want to join :

Your Name in the Fanfic (obligatory)

Personality and ability (Not obligatory)

And if you are in the :

Neutral :
Me (MisterCringeh) Im powerful, can make a lot of large elements appear: black hole, etc...
Goonoo, can't speak but read in the mind of people (since he didnt what team he is, he is Neutral
xrunner48, Noclip, Unmatched Reaction Times.

Bad team :
Nudge, good power and climbing
Popplio, Can blow bubbles with his nose
Brint, Can summon stuff like bridges and what not
Dietsoda, Very good eyesight, great with a bow, good at tracking.

Good team :
Cosmo, Can fly, can summon other Lumas to come fight.
Lely, switch to his stronger alter ego
Max,Can instantly heal someone but this power costs a lot of energy, to the point that sometimes it can even pass out, so I only use it in an emergency
and make things levitate but the heavier it is the more complicated it is


And your color

If you dont want to join I respect that

PS : I love saying "Bread."


Name: pingouin
Color: Cyan
Abilities: Can turn into an animal

Et tu es du coté : Équipe Gentille ou Méchante ? Sinon je te met dans les neutres si sa te convient?

Team gentille

Cool ! Bon je t'ajoute, et la suite arriveras cette après midi


Je change de nom, maintenant je m'appelle: pingouin33
I change my name, now my name is: pingouin33

Pourquoi c'étais bien avant?
Messages 5030 - King Mario King Mario
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Goonoo wrote:
Yeah,what is the story basically : People will try to understand why bad peoples try to sow chaos in the world of MKPC, for that, they will try to travel in time: The past to understand what happened, and the future to see the consequences

If you want to join :

Your Name in the Fanfic (obligatory)

Personality and ability (Not obligatory)

And if you are in the :

Neutral :
Me (MisterCringeh) Im powerful, can make a lot of large elements appear: black hole, etc...
Goonoo, can't speak but read in the mind of people (since he didnt what team he is, he is Neutral
xrunner48, Noclip, Unmatched Reaction Times.

Bad team :
Nudge, good power and climbing
Popplio, Can blow bubbles with his nose
Brint, Can summon stuff like bridges and what not
Dietsoda, Very good eyesight, great with a bow, good at tracking.

Good team :
Cosmo, Can fly, can summon other Lumas to come fight.
Lely, switch to his stronger alter ego
Max,Can instantly heal someone but this power costs a lot of energy, to the point that sometimes it can even pass out, so I only use it in an emergency
and make things levitate but the heavier it is the more complicated it is


And your color

If you dont want to join I respect that

PS : I love saying "Bread."


Name: pingouin
Color: Cyan
Abilities: Can turn into an animal

Et tu es du coté : Équipe Gentille ou Méchante ? Sinon je te met dans les neutres si sa te convient?

Team gentille

Cool ! Bon je t'ajoute, et la suite arriveras cette après midi


Je change de nom, maintenant je m'appelle: pingouin33
I change my name, now my name is: pingouin33

Pourquoi c'étais bien avant?

C'est vrai mais ya que 2 chiffres c'est tout
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Messages 10886 - King Mario King Mario
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France
Yeah,what is the story basically : People will try to understand why bad peoples try to sow chaos in the world of MKPC, for that, they will try to travel in time: The past to understand what happened, and the future to see the consequences

If you want to join :

Your Name in the Fanfic (obligatory)

Personality and ability (Not obligatory)

And if you are in the :

Neutral :
Me (MisterCringeh) Im powerful, can make a lot of large elements appear: black hole, etc...
Goonoo, can't speak but read in the mind of people (since he didnt what team he is, he is Neutral
xrunner48, Noclip, Unmatched Reaction Times.

Bad team :
Nudge, good power and climbing
Popplio, Can blow bubbles with his nose
Brint, Can summon stuff like bridges and what not
Dietsoda, Very good eyesight, great with a bow, good at tracking.

Good team :
Cosmo, Can fly, can summon other Lumas to come fight.
Lely, switch to his stronger alter ego
Max,Can instantly heal someone but this power costs a lot of energy, to the point that sometimes it can even pass out, so I only use it in an emergency
and make things levitate but the heavier it is the more complicated it is


And your color

If you dont want to join I respect that

PS : I love saying "Bread."


Name: pingouin
Color: Cyan
Abilities: Can turn into an animal

Et tu es du coté : Équipe Gentille ou Méchante ? Sinon je te met dans les neutres si sa te convient?

Team gentille

Cool ! Bon je t'ajoute, et la suite arriveras cette après midi


Je change de nom, maintenant je m'appelle: pingouin33
I change my name, now my name is: pingouin33

You don't need to tell eevryone wityh a message that you changed your nickname, even if it's only for this fanfic... You can tell him in PMs...
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Messages 5030 - King Mario King Mario
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Nepal
EPISODE 4 : The White World part 2

Nudge : MisterCringeh and Goonoo... Its your fault !

Cosmo : Oh yeah funny that, cant you see what you do to-

Popplio : Bla bla bla !

MisterCringeh : Yeah? Who started all that chao? Like we see in the future, you created a chao Nudge? And Dietsoda, Popplio, Brint too

Brint : HEY !

Max : That true

xrunner48 : The real question is : Why Lely cheated?

Lely : I DIDNT !

pingouin33 : Why is everyone mad?

Dietsoda : Who are you?

pingouin33 : Your dad- no seriously, im just someone who is trying to know how the world turned White

MisterCringeh : Ask Goonoo

Goonoo : 😡😡

Cosmo : He cant talk

Nudge : We know

pingouin33 : By the way, does someone know how to reset the world

Cosmo : The only thing I found is that we can rebuild the city

MisterCringeh : With no object?

Max : Be realistic, we are stuck here

Goonoo : *Look around and saw a hole very high and point at it*

Brint : What? *look at the hole* Hey ! The thing behind the hole look familiar

Max : That the real world

Cosmo : I forgot I can fly

MisterCringeh : And us?

Cosmo : I'm not the type to take people when I fly

Lely : One by one?-

Popplio : HE SAID NO !

........

pingouin33 : I can become an animal, so if I become a strong animal that can fly-

Cosmo : Yes but no

MisterCringeh : How it happend? To create the white world

xrunner48 : Maybe everyone noclip because of that machine and that the black hole was here, I noclip at this moment, nah just idk

pingouin33 : So I become A cat

Cosmo : Not the moment

pingouin33 : You know why? *scratch Nudge*

Lely : So? We can make sure we can climb on each of us to the last

Cosmo : Not dumb

Nudge : Cool I can climb easely

pingouin33 : *meow*

Popplio : What?

Max : That mean : me too !

MisterCringeh : So now, we climb fast ! BECAUSE THE HOLE IS SHRIKING

YEAH !

Nudge : I go first ! Bye bye

Brint : Oh... that Nudge...

pingouin : Meow ! *climb*

Cosmo : Ouch ! The claws !

Goonoo : *ouch*

Dietsoda : OUCH !

pingouin33 : *Turn into his normal form (human)* That was cool !

So now everyone expect MisterCringeh is in the Normal World

Max : FASTER MISTERCRINGEH !

MisterCringeh : Its too small !

Lely : Pull on his hand!

Max : He is heavy !

MisterCringeh : Thanks *[, I don't eat much food !

Popplio : Ima try ! Get out

Brint : FASTER !

Dietsoda : Its too small

The hole is so small that it closes and MisterCringeh is stuck

All : NO !

MisterCringeh : Who forgot that I can summon something powerful or big like a teleporter?

And far away :

Nudge : What is that? Oh... The time machine. I HAVE AN IDEA ! I can choose who I can teleport, hehe... im doing this to all that people... Where? Im setting it in : The End of the World. Where a big meteor can destroy the world ! YEAH

*teleport the others to the year 5000*

5th episode (the bad end)soon...
Messages 212 - Toad Toad
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EPISODE 4 : The White World part 2

Nudge : MisterCringeh and Goonoo... Its your fault !

Cosmo : Oh yeah funny that, cant you see what you do to-

Popplio : Bla bla bla !

MisterCringeh : Yeah? Who started all that chao? Like we see in the future, you created a chao Nudge? And Dietsoda, Popplio, Brint too

Brint : HEY !

Max : That true

xrunner48 : The real question is : Why Lely cheated?

Lely : I DIDNT !

pingouin33 : Why is everyone mad?

Dietsoda : Who are you?

pingouin33 : Your dad- no seriously, im just someone who is trying to know how the world turned White

MisterCringeh : Ask Goonoo

Goonoo : 😡😡

Cosmo : He cant talk

Nudge : We know

pingouin33 : By the way, does someone know how to reset the world

Cosmo : The only thing I found is that we can rebuild the city

MisterCringeh : With no object?

Max : Be realistic, we are stuck here

Goonoo : *Look around and saw a hole very high and point at it*

Brint : What? *look at the hole* Hey ! The thing behind the hole look familiar

Max : That the real world

Cosmo : I forgot I can fly

MisterCringeh : And us?

Cosmo : I'm not the type to take people when I fly

Lely : One by one?-

Popplio : HE SAID NO !

........

pingouin33 : I can become an animal, so if I become a strong animal that can fly-

Cosmo : Yes but no

MisterCringeh : How it happend? To create the white world

xrunner48 : Maybe everyone noclip because of that machine and that the black hole was here, I noclip at this moment, nah just idk

pingouin33 : So I become A cat

Cosmo : Not the moment

pingouin33 : You know why? *scratch Nudge*

Lely : So? We can make sure we can climb on each of us to the last

Cosmo : Not dumb

Nudge : Cool I can climb easely

pingouin33 : *meow*

Popplio : What?

Max : That mean : me too !

MisterCringeh : So now, we climb fast ! BECAUSE THE HOLE IS SHRIKING

YEAH !

Nudge : I go first ! Bye bye

Brint : Oh... that Nudge...

pingouin : Meow ! *climb*

Cosmo : Ouch ! The claws !

Goonoo : *ouch*

Dietsoda : OUCH !

pingouin33 : *Turn into his normal form (human)* That was cool !

So now everyone expect MisterCringeh is in the Normal World

Max : FASTER MISTERCRINGEH !

MisterCringeh : Its too small !

Lely : Pull on his hand!

Max : He is heavy !

MisterCringeh : Thanks *[, I don't eat much food !

Popplio : Ima try ! Get out

Brint : FASTER !

Dietsoda : Its too small

The hole is so small that it closes and MisterCringeh is stuck

All : NO !

MisterCringeh : Who forgot that I can summon something powerful or big like a teleporter?

And far away :

Nudge : What is that? Oh... The time machine. I HAVE AN IDEA ! I can choose who I can teleport, hehe... im doing this to all that people... Where? Im setting it in : The End of the World. Where a big meteor can destroy the world ! YEAH

*teleport the others to the year 5000*

5th episode (the bad end)soon...

Entre tput le monde, on est d'accord c'est bien les fanfic ou des gens peut y participer
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Messages 10886 - King Mario King Mario
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Goonoo wrote:
EPISODE 4 : The White World part 2

Nudge : MisterCringeh and Goonoo... Its your fault !

Cosmo : Oh yeah funny that, cant you see what you do to-

Popplio : Bla bla bla !

MisterCringeh : Yeah? Who started all that chao? Like we see in the future, you created a chao Nudge? And Dietsoda, Popplio, Brint too

Brint : HEY !

Max : That true

xrunner48 : The real question is : Why Lely cheated?

Lely : I DIDNT !

pingouin33 : Why is everyone mad?

Dietsoda : Who are you?

pingouin33 : Your dad- no seriously, im just someone who is trying to know how the world turned White

MisterCringeh : Ask Goonoo

Goonoo : 😡😡

Cosmo : He cant talk

Nudge : We know

pingouin33 : By the way, does someone know how to reset the world

Cosmo : The only thing I found is that we can rebuild the city

MisterCringeh : With no object?

Max : Be realistic, we are stuck here

Goonoo : *Look around and saw a hole very high and point at it*

Brint : What? *look at the hole* Hey ! The thing behind the hole look familiar

Max : That the real world

Cosmo : I forgot I can fly

MisterCringeh : And us?

Cosmo : I'm not the type to take people when I fly

Lely : One by one?-

Popplio : HE SAID NO !

........

pingouin33 : I can become an animal, so if I become a strong animal that can fly-

Cosmo : Yes but no

MisterCringeh : How it happend? To create the white world

xrunner48 : Maybe everyone noclip because of that machine and that the black hole was here, I noclip at this moment, nah just idk

pingouin33 : So I become A cat

Cosmo : Not the moment

pingouin33 : You know why? *scratch Nudge*

Lely : So? We can make sure we can climb on each of us to the last

Cosmo : Not dumb

Nudge : Cool I can climb easely

pingouin33 : *meow*

Popplio : What?

Max : That mean : me too !

MisterCringeh : So now, we climb fast ! BECAUSE THE HOLE IS SHRIKING

YEAH !

Nudge : I go first ! Bye bye

Brint : Oh... that Nudge...

pingouin : Meow ! *climb*

Cosmo : Ouch ! The claws !

Goonoo : *ouch*

Dietsoda : OUCH !

pingouin33 : *Turn into his normal form (human)* That was cool !

So now everyone expect MisterCringeh is in the Normal World

Max : FASTER MISTERCRINGEH !

MisterCringeh : Its too small !

Lely : Pull on his hand!

Max : He is heavy !

MisterCringeh : Thanks *[, I don't eat much food !

Popplio : Ima try ! Get out

Brint : FASTER !

Dietsoda : Its too small

The hole is so small that it closes and MisterCringeh is stuck

All : NO !

MisterCringeh : Who forgot that I can summon something powerful or big like a teleporter?

And far away :

Nudge : What is that? Oh... The time machine. I HAVE AN IDEA ! I can choose who I can teleport, hehe... im doing this to all that people... Where? Im setting it in : The End of the World. Where a big meteor can destroy the world ! YEAH

*teleport the others to the year 5000*

5th episode (the bad end)soon...

Entre tput le monde, on est d'accord c'est bien les fanfic ou des gens peut y participer

C'est vrai que c'est mieux, mais dit pas "entre tout le monde" comme si tout le monde était d'accord x)
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Messages 3486 - King Mario King Mario
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EPISODE 4 : The White World part 2

Nudge : MisterCringeh and Goonoo... Its your fault !

Cosmo : Oh yeah funny that, cant you see what you do to-

Popplio : Bla bla bla !

MisterCringeh : Yeah? Who started all that chao? Like we see in the future, you created a chao Nudge? And Dietsoda, Popplio, Brint too

Brint : HEY !

Max : That true

xrunner48 : The real question is : Why Lely cheated?

Lely : I DIDNT !

pingouin33 : Why is everyone mad?

Dietsoda : Who are you?

pingouin33 : Your dad- no seriously, im just someone who is trying to know how the world turned White

MisterCringeh : Ask Goonoo

Goonoo : 😡😡

Cosmo : He cant talk

Nudge : We know

pingouin33 : By the way, does someone know how to reset the world

Cosmo : The only thing I found is that we can rebuild the city

MisterCringeh : With no object?

Max : Be realistic, we are stuck here

Goonoo : *Look around and saw a hole very high and point at it*

Brint : What? *look at the hole* Hey ! The thing behind the hole look familiar

Max : That the real world

Cosmo : I forgot I can fly

MisterCringeh : And us?

Cosmo : I'm not the type to take people when I fly

Lely : One by one?-

Popplio : HE SAID NO !

........

pingouin33 : I can become an animal, so if I become a strong animal that can fly-

Cosmo : Yes but no

MisterCringeh : How it happend? To create the white world

xrunner48 : Maybe everyone noclip because of that machine and that the black hole was here, I noclip at this moment, nah just idk

pingouin33 : So I become A cat

Cosmo : Not the moment

pingouin33 : You know why? *scratch Nudge*

Lely : So? We can make sure we can climb on each of us to the last

Cosmo : Not dumb

Nudge : Cool I can climb easely

pingouin33 : *meow*

Popplio : What?

Max : That mean : me too !

MisterCringeh : So now, we climb fast ! BECAUSE THE HOLE IS SHRIKING

YEAH !

Nudge : I go first ! Bye bye

Brint : Oh... that Nudge...

pingouin : Meow ! *climb*

Cosmo : Ouch ! The claws !

Goonoo : *ouch*

Dietsoda : OUCH !

pingouin33 : *Turn into his normal form (human)* That was cool !

So now everyone expect MisterCringeh is in the Normal World

Max : FASTER MISTERCRINGEH !

MisterCringeh : Its too small !

Lely : Pull on his hand!

Max : He is heavy !

MisterCringeh : Thanks *[, I don't eat much food !

Popplio : Ima try ! Get out

Brint : FASTER !

Dietsoda : Its too small

The hole is so small that it closes and MisterCringeh is stuck

All : NO !

MisterCringeh : Who forgot that I can summon something powerful or big like a teleporter?

And far away :

Nudge : What is that? Oh... The time machine. I HAVE AN IDEA ! I can choose who I can teleport, hehe... im doing this to all that people... Where? Im setting it in : The End of the World. Where a big meteor can destroy the world ! YEAH

*teleport the others to the year 5000*

5th episode (the bad end)soon...

By soon it’s probably going to be 5 months or something
xd2
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Messages 212 - Toad Toad
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battle6186 pts ★ Racer
France
FieryToad wrote:
EPISODE 4 : The White World part 2

Nudge : MisterCringeh and Goonoo... Its your fault !

Cosmo : Oh yeah funny that, cant you see what you do to-

Popplio : Bla bla bla !

MisterCringeh : Yeah? Who started all that chao? Like we see in the future, you created a chao Nudge? And Dietsoda, Popplio, Brint too

Brint : HEY !

Max : That true

xrunner48 : The real question is : Why Lely cheated?

Lely : I DIDNT !

pingouin33 : Why is everyone mad?

Dietsoda : Who are you?

pingouin33 : Your dad- no seriously, im just someone who is trying to know how the world turned White

MisterCringeh : Ask Goonoo

Goonoo : 😡😡

Cosmo : He cant talk

Nudge : We know

pingouin33 : By the way, does someone know how to reset the world

Cosmo : The only thing I found is that we can rebuild the city

MisterCringeh : With no object?

Max : Be realistic, we are stuck here

Goonoo : *Look around and saw a hole very high and point at it*

Brint : What? *look at the hole* Hey ! The thing behind the hole look familiar

Max : That the real world

Cosmo : I forgot I can fly

MisterCringeh : And us?

Cosmo : I'm not the type to take people when I fly

Lely : One by one?-

Popplio : HE SAID NO !

........

pingouin33 : I can become an animal, so if I become a strong animal that can fly-

Cosmo : Yes but no

MisterCringeh : How it happend? To create the white world

xrunner48 : Maybe everyone noclip because of that machine and that the black hole was here, I noclip at this moment, nah just idk

pingouin33 : So I become A cat

Cosmo : Not the moment

pingouin33 : You know why? *scratch Nudge*

Lely : So? We can make sure we can climb on each of us to the last

Cosmo : Not dumb

Nudge : Cool I can climb easely

pingouin33 : *meow*

Popplio : What?

Max : That mean : me too !

MisterCringeh : So now, we climb fast ! BECAUSE THE HOLE IS SHRIKING

YEAH !

Nudge : I go first ! Bye bye

Brint : Oh... that Nudge...

pingouin : Meow ! *climb*

Cosmo : Ouch ! The claws !

Goonoo : *ouch*

Dietsoda : OUCH !

pingouin33 : *Turn into his normal form (human)* That was cool !

So now everyone expect MisterCringeh is in the Normal World

Max : FASTER MISTERCRINGEH !

MisterCringeh : Its too small !

Lely : Pull on his hand!

Max : He is heavy !

MisterCringeh : Thanks *[, I don't eat much food !

Popplio : Ima try ! Get out

Brint : FASTER !

Dietsoda : Its too small

The hole is so small that it closes and MisterCringeh is stuck

All : NO !

MisterCringeh : Who forgot that I can summon something powerful or big like a teleporter?

And far away :

Nudge : What is that? Oh... The time machine. I HAVE AN IDEA ! I can choose who I can teleport, hehe... im doing this to all that people... Where? Im setting it in : The End of the World. Where a big meteor can destroy the world ! YEAH

*teleport the others to the year 5000*

5th episode (the bad end)soon...

By soon it’s probably going to be 5 months or something

No worries, I can continue it, he said I can
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Messages 212 - Toad Toad
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battle6186 pts ★ Racer
France
LAST EPISODE : The bad ending (since MisterCringeh said that I can continue the fanfic I will)

MisterCringeh : Wait? What happend?

Cosmo : Im scared

Lely : Bruh

Spoiler [ShowHide]
Max : Hey Lely look under there

Lely : Under where?

Max : Ahah I made you said under-

OOF


Max : By the way what happend

MisterCringeh : Hmmm...??? Oh no !

Popplio : What?

MisterCringeh : You know when Nudge was the first to exit that white world? I think he was where the Time Machine was at this moment and he send all of us in the End of the World

Dietsoda : What year?

MisterCringeh : WE DONT CA-

Brint : Calm down

pingouin33 : Can we just try to know how to get out of this

xrunner48 : But no, you know we can't go in the actual year if we doesn't have the Time Machine, plus, Nudge won't let us do that

Lely : So we are stuck here? With that meteor? On a small island?

pingouin33 : So we just have to swim, but actually you all...

Popplio : Yes because you can become a fish

Brint : Why not water?

Goonoo : *slap Brint*

xrunner48 : Ok im noclipping bye

MisterCringeh : Guys actually I can summon a teleporter, Bye !

Goonoo : *go with MisterCringeh*

Max : And us?

MisterCringeh : Come !

bruh

Popplio : Why does the teleporter disapear?

Lely : Wait, I can use my power to throw the meteor far away

Brint : What can you do for the others meteors?

...

And the side of Nudge

Nudge : They are gone, I can finally do what I want

MisterCringeh : Say him

Nudge : What???

MisterCringeh : You forgot uh?

Nudge : Ok? That it, I can go in another world with that Machine, bye !

MisterCringeh : I didnt have enough time bruh

The end
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xd1
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Messages 1210 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
Goonoo wrote:
LAST EPISODE : The bad ending (since MisterCringeh said that I can continue the fanfic I will)

MisterCringeh : Wait? What happend?

Cosmo : Im scared

Lely : Bruh

Spoiler [ShowHide]
Max : Hey Lely look under there

Lely : Under where?

Max : Ahah I made you said under-

OOF


Max : By the way what happend

MisterCringeh : Hmmm...??? Oh no !

Popplio : What?

MisterCringeh : You know when Nudge was the first to exit that white world? I think he was where the Time Machine was at this moment and he send all of us in the End of the World

Dietsoda : What year?

MisterCringeh : WE DONT CA-

Brint : Calm down

pingouin33 : Can we just try to know how to get out of this

xrunner48 : But no, you know we can't go in the actual year if we doesn't have the Time Machine, plus, Nudge won't let us do that

Lely : So we are stuck here? With that meteor? On a small island?

pingouin33 : So we just have to swim, but actually you all...

Popplio : Yes because you can become a fish

Brint : Why not water?

Goonoo : *slap Brint*

xrunner48 : Ok im noclipping bye

MisterCringeh : Guys actually I can summon a teleporter, Bye !

Goonoo : *go with MisterCringeh*

Max : And us?

MisterCringeh : Come !

bruh

Popplio : Why does the teleporter disappear?

Lely : Wait, I can use my power to throw the meteor far away

Brint : What can you do for the others meteors?

...

And the side of Nudge

Nudge : They are gone, I can finally do what I want

MisterCringeh : Say him

Nudge : What???

MisterCringeh : You forgot uh?

Nudge : Ok? That it, I can go in another world with that Machine, bye !

MisterCringeh : I didnt have enough time bruh

The end

Good ending, except you got my colour wrong

The ones near the top are good but the other one isn't. It should just be blue, and the one near the bottom is navy
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Goonoo wrote:
LAST EPISODE : The bad ending (since MisterCringeh said that I can continue the fanfic I will)

MisterCringeh : Wait? What happend?

Cosmo : Im scared

Lely : Bruh

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Max : Hey Lely look under there

Lely : Under where?

Max : Ahah I made you said under-

OOF


Max : By the way what happend

MisterCringeh : Hmmm...??? Oh no !

Popplio : What?

MisterCringeh : You know when Nudge was the first to exit that white world? I think he was where the Time Machine was at this moment and he send all of us in the End of the World

Dietsoda : What year?

MisterCringeh : WE DONT CA-

Brint : Calm down

pingouin33 : Can we just try to know how to get out of this

xrunner48 : But no, you know we can't go in the actual year if we doesn't have the Time Machine, plus, Nudge won't let us do that

Lely : So we are stuck here? With that meteor? On a small island?

pingouin33 : So we just have to swim, but actually you all...

Popplio : Yes because you can become a fish

Brint : Why not water?

Goonoo : *slap Brint*

xrunner48 : Ok im noclipping bye

MisterCringeh : Guys actually I can summon a teleporter, Bye !

Goonoo : *go with MisterCringeh*

Max : And us?

MisterCringeh : Come !

bruh

Popplio : Why does the teleporter disapear?

Lely : Wait, I can use my power to throw the meteor far away

Brint : What can you do for the others meteors?

...

And the side of Nudge

Nudge : They are gone, I can finally do what I want

MisterCringeh : Say him

Nudge : What???

MisterCringeh : You forgot uh?

Nudge : Ok? That it, I can go in another world with that Machine, bye !

MisterCringeh : I didnt have enough time bruh

The end

Okay so now that the fanfic has ended I'm going to write a feedback about it. The fanfic was pretty short and confusing. It was hard to understand some parts of the story, and we're hardly attached to the characters. The ending feels kinda rushed, it does not look like a proper ending, or like tha bad of an ending, the fanfic was really short, but anyways now that Cringeh has left it couldn't last for very long. Anyays this fanfic was very mid, it felt short and confusing. Letting more time for it to develop would have been better ; for now, I can't really say that I liked it, but that wasn't the worst fanfic neither.
Edit : @Goonoo please don't feel sad. That's just my honest thoughts on the fanfic. It's true that I talked about the nagtive side, the positive side is that it was pretty active, plus I'm gonna thank you for putting an end to this fanfic, most fanfics nowadays don't even get a proper ending and are stopped in the middle of nowhere, so congrats, at least there's a beginning and an end.
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in addition I had planned next episodes but no.
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EPISODE 4 : The White World part 2

Nudge : MisterCringeh and Goonoo... Its your fault !

Cosmo : Oh yeah funny that, cant you see what you do to-

Popplio : Bla bla bla !

MisterCringeh : Yeah? Who started all that chao? Like we see in the future, you created a chao Nudge? And Dietsoda, Popplio, Brint too

Brint : HEY !

Max : That true

xrunner48 : The real question is : Why Lely cheated?

Lely : I DIDNT !

pingouin33 : Why is everyone mad?

Dietsoda : Who are you?

pingouin33 : Your dad- no seriously, im just someone who is trying to know how the world turned White

MisterCringeh : Ask Goonoo

Goonoo : 😡😡

Cosmo : He cant talk

Nudge : We know

pingouin33 : By the way, does someone know how to reset the world

Cosmo : The only thing I found is that we can rebuild the city

MisterCringeh : With no object?

Max : Be realistic, we are stuck here

Goonoo : *Look around and saw a hole very high and point at it*

Brint : What? *look at the hole* Hey ! The thing behind the hole look familiar

Max : That the real world

Cosmo : I forgot I can fly

MisterCringeh : And us?

Cosmo : I'm not the type to take people when I fly

Lely : One by one?-

Popplio : HE SAID NO !

........

pingouin33 : I can become an animal, so if I become a strong animal that can fly-

Cosmo : Yes but no

MisterCringeh : How it happend? To create the white world

xrunner48 : Maybe everyone noclip because of that machine and that the black hole was here, I noclip at this moment, nah just idk

pingouin33 : So I become A cat

Cosmo : Not the moment

pingouin33 : You know why? *scratch Nudge*

Lely : So? We can make sure we can climb on each of us to the last

Cosmo : Not dumb

Nudge : Cool I can climb easely

pingouin33 : *meow*

Popplio : What?

Max : That mean : me too !

MisterCringeh : So now, we climb fast ! BECAUSE THE HOLE IS SHRIKING

YEAH !

Nudge : I go first ! Bye bye

Brint : Oh... that Nudge...

pingouin : Meow ! *climb*

Cosmo : Ouch ! The claws !

Goonoo : *ouch*

Dietsoda : OUCH !

pingouin33 : *Turn into his normal form (human)* That was cool !

So now everyone expect MisterCringeh is in the Normal World

Max : FASTER MISTERCRINGEH !

MisterCringeh : Its too small !

Lely : Pull on his hand!

Max : He is heavy !

MisterCringeh : Thanks *[, I don't eat much food !

Popplio : Ima try ! Get out

Brint : FASTER !

Dietsoda : Its too small

The hole is so small that it closes and MisterCringeh is stuck

All : NO !

MisterCringeh : Who forgot that I can summon something powerful or big like a teleporter?

And far away :

Nudge : What is that? Oh... The time machine. I HAVE AN IDEA ! I can choose who I can teleport, hehe... im doing this to all that people... Where? Im setting it in : The End of the World. Where a big meteor can destroy the world ! YEAH

*teleport the others to the year 5000*

5th episode (the bad end)soon...

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EPISODE 4 : The White World part 2

Nudge : MisterCringeh and Goonoo... Its your fault !

Cosmo : Oh yeah funny that, cant you see what you do to-

Popplio : Bla bla bla !

MisterCringeh : Yeah? Who started all that chao? Like we see in the future, you created a chao Nudge? And Dietsoda, Popplio, Brint too

Brint : HEY !

Max : That true

xrunner48 : The real question is : Why Lely cheated?

Lely : I DIDNT !

pingouin33 : Why is everyone mad?

Dietsoda : Who are you?

pingouin33 : Your dad- no seriously, im just someone who is trying to know how the world turned White

MisterCringeh : Ask Goonoo

Goonoo : 😡😡

Cosmo : He cant talk

Nudge : We know

pingouin33 : By the way, does someone know how to reset the world

Cosmo : The only thing I found is that we can rebuild the city

MisterCringeh : With no object?

Max : Be realistic, we are stuck here

Goonoo : *Look around and saw a hole very high and point at it*

Brint : What? *look at the hole* Hey ! The thing behind the hole look familiar

Max : That the real world

Cosmo : I forgot I can fly

MisterCringeh : And us?

Cosmo : I'm not the type to take people when I fly

Lely : One by one?-

Popplio : HE SAID NO !

........

pingouin33 : I can become an animal, so if I become a strong animal that can fly-

Cosmo : Yes but no

MisterCringeh : How it happend? To create the white world

xrunner48 : Maybe everyone noclip because of that machine and that the black hole was here, I noclip at this moment, nah just idk

pingouin33 : So I become A cat

Cosmo : Not the moment

pingouin33 : You know why? *scratch Nudge*

Lely : So? We can make sure we can climb on each of us to the last

Cosmo : Not dumb

Nudge : Cool I can climb easely

pingouin33 : *meow*

Popplio : What?

Max : That mean : me too !

MisterCringeh : So now, we climb fast ! BECAUSE THE HOLE IS SHRIKING

YEAH !

Nudge : I go first ! Bye bye

Brint : Oh... that Nudge...

pingouin : Meow ! *climb*

Cosmo : Ouch ! The claws !

Goonoo : *ouch*

Dietsoda : OUCH !

pingouin33 : *Turn into his normal form (human)* That was cool !

So now everyone expect MisterCringeh is in the Normal World

Max : FASTER MISTERCRINGEH !

MisterCringeh : Its too small !

Lely : Pull on his hand!

Max : He is heavy !

MisterCringeh : Thanks *[, I don't eat much food !

Popplio : Ima try ! Get out

Brint : FASTER !

Dietsoda : Its too small

The hole is so small that it closes and MisterCringeh is stuck

All : NO !

MisterCringeh : Who forgot that I can summon something powerful or big like a teleporter?

And far away :

Nudge : What is that? Oh... The time machine. I HAVE AN IDEA ! I can choose who I can teleport, hehe... im doing this to all that people... Where? Im setting it in : The End of the World. Where a big meteor can destroy the world ! YEAH

*teleport the others to the year 5000*

5th episode (the bad end)soon...

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EPISODE 4 : The White World part 2

Nudge : MisterCringeh and Goonoo... Its your fault !

Cosmo : Oh yeah funny that, cant you see what you do to-

Popplio : Bla bla bla !

MisterCringeh : Yeah? Who started all that chao? Like we see in the future, you created a chao Nudge? And Dietsoda, Popplio, Brint too

Brint : HEY !

Max : That true

xrunner48 : The real question is : Why Lely cheated?

Lely : I DIDNT !

pingouin33 : Why is everyone mad?

Dietsoda : Who are you?

pingouin33 : Your dad- no seriously, im just someone who is trying to know how the world turned White

MisterCringeh : Ask Goonoo

Goonoo : 😡😡

Cosmo : He cant talk

Nudge : We know

pingouin33 : By the way, does someone know how to reset the world

Cosmo : The only thing I found is that we can rebuild the city

MisterCringeh : With no object?

Max : Be realistic, we are stuck here

Goonoo : *Look around and saw a hole very high and point at it*

Brint : What? *look at the hole* Hey ! The thing behind the hole look familiar

Max : That the real world

Cosmo : I forgot I can fly

MisterCringeh : And us?

Cosmo : I'm not the type to take people when I fly

Lely : One by one?-

Popplio : HE SAID NO !

........

pingouin33 : I can become an animal, so if I become a strong animal that can fly-

Cosmo : Yes but no

MisterCringeh : How it happend? To create the white world

xrunner48 : Maybe everyone noclip because of that machine and that the black hole was here, I noclip at this moment, nah just idk

pingouin33 : So I become A cat

Cosmo : Not the moment

pingouin33 : You know why? *scratch Nudge*

Lely : So? We can make sure we can climb on each of us to the last

Cosmo : Not dumb

Nudge : Cool I can climb easely

pingouin33 : *meow*

Popplio : What?

Max : That mean : me too !

MisterCringeh : So now, we climb fast ! BECAUSE THE HOLE IS SHRIKING

YEAH !

Nudge : I go first ! Bye bye

Brint : Oh... that Nudge...

pingouin : Meow ! *climb*

Cosmo : Ouch ! The claws !

Goonoo : *ouch*

Dietsoda : OUCH !

pingouin33 : *Turn into his normal form (human)* That was cool !

So now everyone expect MisterCringeh is in the Normal World

Max : FASTER MISTERCRINGEH !

MisterCringeh : Its too small !

Lely : Pull on his hand!

Max : He is heavy !

MisterCringeh : Thanks *[, I don't eat much food !

Popplio : Ima try ! Get out

Brint : FASTER !

Dietsoda : Its too small

The hole is so small that it closes and MisterCringeh is stuck

All : NO !

MisterCringeh : Who forgot that I can summon something powerful or big like a teleporter?

And far away :

Nudge : What is that? Oh... The time machine. I HAVE AN IDEA ! I can choose who I can teleport, hehe... im doing this to all that people... Where? Im setting it in : The End of the World. Where a big meteor can destroy the world ! YEAH

*teleport the others to the year 5000*

5th episode (the bad end)soon...

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EPISODE 4 : The White World part 2

Nudge : MisterCringeh and Goonoo... Its your fault !

Cosmo : Oh yeah funny that, cant you see what you do to-

Popplio : Bla bla bla !

MisterCringeh : Yeah? Who started all that chao? Like we see in the future, you created a chao Nudge? And Dietsoda, Popplio, Brint too

Brint : HEY !

Max : That true

xrunner48 : The real question is : Why Lely cheated?

Lely : I DIDNT !

pingouin33 : Why is everyone mad?

Dietsoda : Who are you?

pingouin33 : Your dad- no seriously, im just someone who is trying to know how the world turned White

MisterCringeh : Ask Goonoo

Goonoo : 😡😡

Cosmo : He cant talk

Nudge : We know

pingouin33 : By the way, does someone know how to reset the world

Cosmo : The only thing I found is that we can rebuild the city

MisterCringeh : With no object?

Max : Be realistic, we are stuck here

Goonoo : *Look around and saw a hole very high and point at it*

Brint : What? *look at the hole* Hey ! The thing behind the hole look familiar

Max : That the real world

Cosmo : I forgot I can fly

MisterCringeh : And us?

Cosmo : I'm not the type to take people when I fly

Lely : One by one?-

Popplio : HE SAID NO !

........

pingouin33 : I can become an animal, so if I become a strong animal that can fly-

Cosmo : Yes but no

MisterCringeh : How it happend? To create the white world

xrunner48 : Maybe everyone noclip because of that machine and that the black hole was here, I noclip at this moment, nah just idk

pingouin33 : So I become A cat

Cosmo : Not the moment

pingouin33 : You know why? *scratch Nudge*

Lely : So? We can make sure we can climb on each of us to the last

Cosmo : Not dumb

Nudge : Cool I can climb easely

pingouin33 : *meow*

Popplio : What?

Max : That mean : me too !

MisterCringeh : So now, we climb fast ! BECAUSE THE HOLE IS SHRIKING

YEAH !

Nudge : I go first ! Bye bye

Brint : Oh... that Nudge...

pingouin : Meow ! *climb*

Cosmo : Ouch ! The claws !

Goonoo : *ouch*

Dietsoda : OUCH !

pingouin33 : *Turn into his normal form (human)* That was cool !

So now everyone expect MisterCringeh is in the Normal World

Max : FASTER MISTERCRINGEH !

MisterCringeh : Its too small !

Lely : Pull on his hand!

Max : He is heavy !

MisterCringeh : Thanks *[, I don't eat much food !

Popplio : Ima try ! Get out

Brint : FASTER !

Dietsoda : Its too small

The hole is so small that it closes and MisterCringeh is stuck

All : NO !

MisterCringeh : Who forgot that I can summon something powerful or big like a teleporter?

And far away :

Nudge : What is that? Oh... The time machine. I HAVE AN IDEA ! I can choose who I can teleport, hehe... im doing this to all that people... Where? Im setting it in : The End of the World. Where a big meteor can destroy the world ! YEAH

*teleport the others to the year 5000*

5th episode (the bad end)soon...

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Non mais en vrai d'abord avat toute chose
Bonjour ?

Non mais c'est que j'ai fais un topic a propos de mon retour c'est bien un bonjour sa non?
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