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[FANFIC] The Fall of MKPC

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Messages 1210 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
SN_pianta wrote:
btw if "stronger" means more experienced with mkpc then i wouldn't have been dead for sure
im better than nudgy online but he's way better than me in time trial

Fanfic isn't a video game, it's irl
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SN_pianta wrote:
btw if "stronger" means more experienced with mkpc then i wouldn't have been dead for sure
im better than nudgy online but he's way better than me in time trial

Idk why i'm brought up but ok
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Messages 1210 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
SN_pianta wrote:
the line of the murderers sounded kinda weird to be honest but that would make kinda sense cuz im not active on the forums

anyway great fanfic, still waiting for another prologue!

Sorry, I didn't have time for a prologue yesterday :(

But I'll try and get one done later today

EDIT: Just realized how many people have joined, these prologues will take a while lol
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SN_pianta wrote:
the line of the murderers sounded kinda weird to be honest but that would make kinda sense cuz im not active on the forums

anyway great fanfic, still waiting for another prologue!

Sorry, I didn't have time for a prologue yesterday :(

But I'll try and get one done later today

EDIT: Just realized how many people have joined, these prologues will take a while lol

Take your time dude, it's a lot to do. Liking what I've seen so far w/ regards to story-telling though.
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SN_pianta wrote:
the line of the murderers sounded kinda weird to be honest but that would make kinda sense cuz im not active on the forums

anyway great fanfic, still waiting for another prologue!

Sorry, I didn't have time for a prologue yesterday :(

But I'll try and get one done later today

EDIT: Just realized how many people have joined, these prologues will take a while lol


I know right. I still have to do like 5 or 6 people and I've been doing my fanfic for almost 1 month.
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Dietsoda wrote:
SN_pianta wrote:
the line of the murderers sounded kinda weird to be honest but that would make kinda sense cuz im not active on the forums

anyway great fanfic, still waiting for another prologue!

Sorry, I didn't have time for a prologue yesterday :(

But I'll try and get one done later today

EDIT: Just realized how many people have joined, these prologues will take a while lol


I know right. I still have to do like 5 or 6 people and I've been doing my fanfic for almost 1 month.

*cries in magma island*
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Name: DX
Personality: An arrogant person who gets agitated easily if things don't go his way, and a lack in physical strength but has good social skills.
Power: Can hack into any online service
Species: Robot
Colour:Maroon
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SN_pianta wrote:
SN_pianta wrote:
the line of the murderers sounded kinda weird to be honest but that would make kinda sense cuz im not active on the forums

anyway great fanfic, still waiting for another prologue!

Sorry, I didn't have time for a prologue yesterday :(

But I'll try and get one done later today

EDIT: Just realized how many people have joined, these prologues will take a while lol


you could collab with somebody

what if they spoil the killer?
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SN_pianta wrote:
the line of the murderers sounded kinda weird to be honest but that would make kinda sense cuz im not active on the forums

anyway great fanfic, still waiting for another prologue!

Sorry, I didn't have time for a prologue yesterday :(

But I'll try and get one done later today

EDIT: Just realized how many people have joined, these prologues will take a while lol

Why don't you make prologues be in groups? Eg: Max and Lely
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Messages 1210 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
xrunner48 wrote:
SN_pianta wrote:
the line of the murderers sounded kinda weird to be honest but that would make kinda sense cuz im not active on the forums

anyway great fanfic, still waiting for another prologue!

Sorry, I didn't have time for a prologue yesterday :(

But I'll try and get one done later today

EDIT: Just realized how many people have joined, these prologues will take a while lol

Why don't you make prologues be in groups? Eg: Max and Lely

That's a good idea, but it would mess up the prologues being in order

Or they wouldn't make much sense as paired prologues (for the most part)

I'll try though
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xrunner48 wrote:
SN_pianta wrote:
the line of the murderers sounded kinda weird to be honest but that would make kinda sense cuz im not active on the forums

anyway great fanfic, still waiting for another prologue!

Sorry, I didn't have time for a prologue yesterday :(

But I'll try and get one done later today

EDIT: Just realized how many people have joined, these prologues will take a while lol

Why don't you make prologues be in groups? Eg: Max and Lely

It's always Max and me when it comes to a pair lol 😂
Good idea though
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Messages 1210 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
Sry everyone, have some homework this week I can't get around. I'll try to get the prologue out but it might not happen until the weekend. :(
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Messages 1210 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
I've been silent on this topic awhile so I'm announcing the next episode, coming later todayI totally didn't forget this topic's existence
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Messages 1210 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
Prologue: xrunner48
It's a normal day in Wariopolis. Xrunner is noclipping over to his fridge to get a drink.
xrunner48: Darn it I'm out of apple juice. I guess I'll just have water.
The news comes on, and xrunner decides to watch.
News lady: ATTENTION ALL MKPCIANS!
xrunner48: Yeah, yeah. Breaking news. The news is always breaking.
News lady: We have received reports that an unknown MKPC member is trying to destroy MKPC! We are unsure of the details at the moment, but a member named Lely may have more info. Lely witnessed this unknown member murder an MKPCian named Pianta!
xrunner48: Oh OK it's actually kind of important this time. Interesting. *calls Dietsoda*
Dietsoda: Hi mayfly. Why are you calling me?
xrunner48: Have you seen the news?
Dietsoda: Yeah. So? We're all in mortal danger. Who cares.
xrunner48: ...what? Are YOU the murderer?
Dietsoda: I wish I was, but no. I think the killer lives here though. Wariopolis is where Pianta was killed.
Popplio: *hacks into the call* Hey xrun- Oh hi, Dietsoda
xrunner48: WHAT HOW DID YOU DO THAT
Dietsoda: THAT'S A GOOD QUESTION
Popplio: I got info from Lely. Or at least I tried until I realized I was talking to the killer. (or maybe it was Max idk)
Max: *also hacks the call* I am not. And I'd probably be dead if it was Lely lol
Dietsoda: You make a point with Lely, but how do we know it's not YOU?
IlluZhion: *also hacks the call* Hi guys, do you have info on the murderer?
xrunner48: This is getting weirder by the minute. I'm leaving the call and I'm just going to assume it's you, Max. Bye.
IlluZhion: Idk how we came to this conclusion but I'll go with it. See ya.
Dietsoda: I agree. Bye you mayflies.
Popplio: Two times I've called you, and two times I got evidence against you. Let's just say I'm not on the best terms with you at the moment. Bye.
Max: Wait! Everyone, I can explain!
*everyone leaves*

Is Max the murderer? Is the killer in Wariopolis? Will IlluZhion figure out why Max is sus? Find out next time!
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I hope you guys enjoyed this (very delayed) prologue. Any feedback you give me I will take into account for the next one
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