[fanfic] MKPC Heroes
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5368 pts ★ NoviceOn 2022-12-24 at 11:15:14
nah i dont like that color
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On 2022-12-24 at 11:18:21
nah i dont like that color
Yeah it is kinda wierd. 💀
On 2022-12-24 at 18:51:56
Come on I want to join but my color was already took by someone else 
And I don't want to be seen as another color...
And I don't want to be seen as another color...
Same and i was taken up by a knoah alt who the creator just chose also no offense to knoah but he is not smart i keep on asking him why is he still making alts but he keeps on telling me the same 2 things but i’m still going to sign up
Name sorbet
Color fuchsia because you gave knoah white which is my color but you could change his since i would prefer white and this would fit them better
Species shy guy
Personality very smart and kind but can get rude if needed
Abilities anything a ninja can do
On 2022-12-24 at 19:10:53
Overlapping colors isn't a problem lmfao
1On 2022-12-24 at 19:34:28
Name: Fiery
Species: Toad
Color: Green
personality: just how a toad acts in a mario game
skills: can teleport anyone anywhere and can disable gravity
Species: Toad
Color: Green
personality: just how a toad acts in a mario game
skills: can teleport anyone anywhere and can disable gravity
Can I please update my color to Aqua?
On 2022-12-24 at 21:23:26
Name: Fiery
Species: Toad
Color: Green
personality: just how a toad acts in a mario game
skills: can teleport anyone anywhere and can disable gravity
Species: Toad
Color: Green
personality: just how a toad acts in a mario game
skills: can teleport anyone anywhere and can disable gravity
Can I please update my color to Aqua?
Ya that's fine. You good if I leave the first episode colors the way they are for now?
Um I think I'm gonna stop accepting character applications at the end of today because I already have too many characters. @Ssg-132 your character is accepted.
On 2022-12-24 at 22:09:36
Name: Fiery
Species: Toad
Color: Green
personality: just how a toad acts in a mario game
skills: can teleport anyone anywhere and can disable gravity
Species: Toad
Color: Green
personality: just how a toad acts in a mario game
skills: can teleport anyone anywhere and can disable gravity
Can I please update my color to Aqua?
Ya that's fine. You good if I leave the first episode colors the way they are for now?
Um I think I'm gonna stop accepting character applications at the end of today because I already have too many characters. @Ssg-132 your character is accepted.
Can you swap my color with knoah since white is my color
1On 2022-12-29 at 14:01:53
I know it takes ages to write fanfics, but I do want to know when the next episode releases as it was an extremely great first episode.
Also could my personality have the addition of warming up to people if I work with then for ages and begin to genuinely enjoy their company.
Also could my personality have the addition of warming up to people if I work with then for ages and begin to genuinely enjoy their company.
On 2022-12-29 at 16:25:42
It's finally here! Episode #1; Unofficial Officials
MKPC members are chilling out at the MKPC Peach Gardens.
Popplio: Hey look! Sixteen bubbles in five seconds!
Toad: Yaaaaaaa…
K: OK, that’s cool.
MisterCringeh, Illuzhion, and Fiery are playing mariokart a little ways away.
MisterCringeh; Battery… dying… must, get, first! NOOOOOOO!
Illuzhion; HAHA!
Fiery; Ah good game, Illuzhion. If only my blue shell had been a little faster… Wait, why does it say MisterCringeh won?
MisterCringeh; I time travelled back to this morning when I was in my house and I plugged in the battery charger so my computer wouldn't die in the middle of this race.
Fiery; No fair!
Illuzhion; While I can’t say I approve of your strategy to win that race, I think that together we can defeat you in the next, right Fiery? Or I can defeat him alone if you give up.
Fiery; Oh, it’s on.
An explosion sounds in the distance.
K; What was that?
Popplio; No idea, we should go see.
They go in the direction of the sound and and arrive at the entrance to the official tracks. A crowd is grouped around the entrance.
Toad99; The portal has been blown up!
Noob; How did it happen? And what’s that black thing over there?
Melee; I’ll go check it out.[color]
[color=black]Dark; (Flies down from another part of the city) Wow, that’s a toadal disaster.
StarSplizz; Oh my head.
Dark: That wasn’t a very good joke was it
Xrunner48; Melee is coming back. I wonder what he found.
Melee: That black thing is a burned body. It looks like some guy was trying to get away from the portal as it exploded.
Xrunner48; Ooooh, that's really bad.
Toad99; So what was this person doing near the portal anyway? We need to figure out who they were.
Dietsoda: (drops out of a tree and pokes Toad99 on top of his head) He set the bomb off, that’s what he was doing here.
StarSplizz; How do you know that?
Dietsoda: I heard a sound and came here to see what was going on. No one ever goes to the tracks at this hour. I’ve already searched the area. There are prints of something being dragged away from the entrance, you muggles have probably wiped the tracks out by now stomping around the way you’ve been.
Toad: Whoa whoa whoa. That wasn’t very nice!
Nudge; But it was pretty funny!
Knoah: But whatever. It’s a clue. Where did the tracks lead?
Dietsoda: Toward the custom tracks portal area, but-
Toad: LET’S GOOO!!!
Nudge; HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA
Oskar: What about the official tracks entrance?
K: Stay behind with me, we’ll start repairing it. Dietsoda, can you follow the others? They’ll need help.
Dietsoda: Oh, young mayfly, I don’t do well with other people, I’m gonna follow these tracks alone. I am, officially, a loner.
Alrighty then, go ahead and give me some feedback, that was a little rough (I suddenly realized I had to introduce like 15 people simultaneously). Hope you enjoyed this!
MKPC members are chilling out at the MKPC Peach Gardens.
Popplio: Hey look! Sixteen bubbles in five seconds!
Toad: Yaaaaaaa…
K: OK, that’s cool.
MisterCringeh, Illuzhion, and Fiery are playing mariokart a little ways away.
MisterCringeh; Battery… dying… must, get, first! NOOOOOOO!
Illuzhion; HAHA!
Fiery; Ah good game, Illuzhion. If only my blue shell had been a little faster… Wait, why does it say MisterCringeh won?
MisterCringeh; I time travelled back to this morning when I was in my house and I plugged in the battery charger so my computer wouldn't die in the middle of this race.
Fiery; No fair!
Illuzhion; While I can’t say I approve of your strategy to win that race, I think that together we can defeat you in the next, right Fiery? Or I can defeat him alone if you give up.
Fiery; Oh, it’s on.
An explosion sounds in the distance.
K; What was that?
Popplio; No idea, we should go see.
They go in the direction of the sound and and arrive at the entrance to the official tracks. A crowd is grouped around the entrance.
Toad99; The portal has been blown up!
Noob; How did it happen? And what’s that black thing over there?
Melee; I’ll go check it out.[color]
[color=black]Dark; (Flies down from another part of the city) Wow, that’s a toadal disaster.
StarSplizz; Oh my head.
Dark: That wasn’t a very good joke was it
Xrunner48; Melee is coming back. I wonder what he found.
Melee: That black thing is a burned body. It looks like some guy was trying to get away from the portal as it exploded.
Xrunner48; Ooooh, that's really bad.
Toad99; So what was this person doing near the portal anyway? We need to figure out who they were.
Dietsoda: (drops out of a tree and pokes Toad99 on top of his head) He set the bomb off, that’s what he was doing here.
StarSplizz; How do you know that?
Dietsoda: I heard a sound and came here to see what was going on. No one ever goes to the tracks at this hour. I’ve already searched the area. There are prints of something being dragged away from the entrance, you muggles have probably wiped the tracks out by now stomping around the way you’ve been.
Toad: Whoa whoa whoa. That wasn’t very nice!
Nudge; But it was pretty funny!
Knoah: But whatever. It’s a clue. Where did the tracks lead?
Dietsoda: Toward the custom tracks portal area, but-
Toad: LET’S GOOO!!!
Nudge; HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA
Oskar: What about the official tracks entrance?
K: Stay behind with me, we’ll start repairing it. Dietsoda, can you follow the others? They’ll need help.
Dietsoda: Oh, young mayfly, I don’t do well with other people, I’m gonna follow these tracks alone. I am, officially, a loner.
Alrighty then, go ahead and give me some feedback, that was a little rough (I suddenly realized I had to introduce like 15 people simultaneously). Hope you enjoyed this!
Great first episode but I found it difficult to read bc the colours were too bright. Maybe try making them a little darker, but still keeping the same colour.
On 2022-12-29 at 22:17:40
I know it takes ages to write fanfics, but I do want to know when the next episode releases as it was an extremely great first episode.
Also could my personality have the addition of warming up to people if I work with then for ages and begin to genuinely enjoy their company.
Also could my personality have the addition of warming up to people if I work with then for ages and begin to genuinely enjoy their company.
Got it. Sorry it's taking so long, I haven't had many opportunities to write this past week. Next episode should be here in a couple days.
12On 2022-12-29 at 22:21:26
It's finally here! Episode #1; Unofficial Officials
MKPC members are chilling out at the MKPC Peach Gardens.
Popplio: Hey look! Sixteen bubbles in five seconds!
Toad: Yaaaaaaa…
K: OK, that’s cool.
MisterCringeh, Illuzhion, and Fiery are playing mariokart a little ways away.
MisterCringeh; Battery… dying… must, get, first! NOOOOOOO!
Illuzhion; HAHA!
Fiery; Ah good game, Illuzhion. If only my blue shell had been a little faster… Wait, why does it say MisterCringeh won?
MisterCringeh; I time travelled back to this morning when I was in my house and I plugged in the battery charger so my computer wouldn't die in the middle of this race.
Fiery; No fair!
Illuzhion; While I can’t say I approve of your strategy to win that race, I think that together we can defeat you in the next, right Fiery? Or I can defeat him alone if you give up.
Fiery; Oh, it’s on.
An explosion sounds in the distance.
K; What was that?
Popplio; No idea, we should go see.
They go in the direction of the sound and and arrive at the entrance to the official tracks. A crowd is grouped around the entrance.
Toad99; The portal has been blown up!
Noob; How did it happen? And what’s that black thing over there?
Melee; I’ll go check it out.[color]
[color=black]Dark; (Flies down from another part of the city) Wow, that’s a toadal disaster.
StarSplizz; Oh my head.
Dark: That wasn’t a very good joke was it
Xrunner48; Melee is coming back. I wonder what he found.
Melee: That black thing is a burned body. It looks like some guy was trying to get away from the portal as it exploded.
Xrunner48; Ooooh, that's really bad.
Toad99; So what was this person doing near the portal anyway? We need to figure out who they were.
Dietsoda: (drops out of a tree and pokes Toad99 on top of his head) He set the bomb off, that’s what he was doing here.
StarSplizz; How do you know that?
Dietsoda: I heard a sound and came here to see what was going on. No one ever goes to the tracks at this hour. I’ve already searched the area. There are prints of something being dragged away from the entrance, you muggles have probably wiped the tracks out by now stomping around the way you’ve been.
Toad: Whoa whoa whoa. That wasn’t very nice!
Nudge; But it was pretty funny!
Knoah: But whatever. It’s a clue. Where did the tracks lead?
Dietsoda: Toward the custom tracks portal area, but-
Toad: LET’S GOOO!!!
Nudge; HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA
Oskar: What about the official tracks entrance?
K: Stay behind with me, we’ll start repairing it. Dietsoda, can you follow the others? They’ll need help.
Dietsoda: Oh, young mayfly, I don’t do well with other people, I’m gonna follow these tracks alone. I am, officially, a loner.
Alrighty then, go ahead and give me some feedback, that was a little rough (I suddenly realized I had to introduce like 15 people simultaneously). Hope you enjoyed this!
MKPC members are chilling out at the MKPC Peach Gardens.
Popplio: Hey look! Sixteen bubbles in five seconds!
Toad: Yaaaaaaa…
K: OK, that’s cool.
MisterCringeh, Illuzhion, and Fiery are playing mariokart a little ways away.
MisterCringeh; Battery… dying… must, get, first! NOOOOOOO!
Illuzhion; HAHA!
Fiery; Ah good game, Illuzhion. If only my blue shell had been a little faster… Wait, why does it say MisterCringeh won?
MisterCringeh; I time travelled back to this morning when I was in my house and I plugged in the battery charger so my computer wouldn't die in the middle of this race.
Fiery; No fair!
Illuzhion; While I can’t say I approve of your strategy to win that race, I think that together we can defeat you in the next, right Fiery? Or I can defeat him alone if you give up.
Fiery; Oh, it’s on.
An explosion sounds in the distance.
K; What was that?
Popplio; No idea, we should go see.
They go in the direction of the sound and and arrive at the entrance to the official tracks. A crowd is grouped around the entrance.
Toad99; The portal has been blown up!
Noob; How did it happen? And what’s that black thing over there?
Melee; I’ll go check it out.[color]
[color=black]Dark; (Flies down from another part of the city) Wow, that’s a toadal disaster.
StarSplizz; Oh my head.
Dark: That wasn’t a very good joke was it
Xrunner48; Melee is coming back. I wonder what he found.
Melee: That black thing is a burned body. It looks like some guy was trying to get away from the portal as it exploded.
Xrunner48; Ooooh, that's really bad.
Toad99; So what was this person doing near the portal anyway? We need to figure out who they were.
Dietsoda: (drops out of a tree and pokes Toad99 on top of his head) He set the bomb off, that’s what he was doing here.
StarSplizz; How do you know that?
Dietsoda: I heard a sound and came here to see what was going on. No one ever goes to the tracks at this hour. I’ve already searched the area. There are prints of something being dragged away from the entrance, you muggles have probably wiped the tracks out by now stomping around the way you’ve been.
Toad: Whoa whoa whoa. That wasn’t very nice!
Nudge; But it was pretty funny!
Knoah: But whatever. It’s a clue. Where did the tracks lead?
Dietsoda: Toward the custom tracks portal area, but-
Toad: LET’S GOOO!!!
Nudge; HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA
Oskar: What about the official tracks entrance?
K: Stay behind with me, we’ll start repairing it. Dietsoda, can you follow the others? They’ll need help.
Dietsoda: Oh, young mayfly, I don’t do well with other people, I’m gonna follow these tracks alone. I am, officially, a loner.
Alrighty then, go ahead and give me some feedback, that was a little rough (I suddenly realized I had to introduce like 15 people simultaneously). Hope you enjoyed this!
Great first episode but I found it difficult to read bc the colours were too bright. Maybe try making them a little darker, but still keeping the same colour.
Ummm let's see ... I could do that. The characters chose their own colors though , so let's do a vote. Everyone plz react with up arrow if you want colors darker, down if you want them the same.
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1On 2022-12-29 at 23:25:05
kind of want knoah to be eradicated from the fanfic because why not xd
1On 2022-12-29 at 23:36:41
kind of want knoah to be eradicated from the fanfic because why not xd
He’s already getting a color change because white is my color and he didn’t choose white
On 2022-12-29 at 23:37:16
kind of want knoah to be eradicated from the fanfic because why not xd
He’s already getting a color change because white is my color and he didn’t choose white
i mean story wise, lets just say he is a hallucination
1On 2022-12-29 at 23:38:53
kind of want knoah to be eradicated from the fanfic because why not xd
He’s already getting a color change because white is my color and he didn’t choose white
i mean story wise, lets just say he is a hallucination
Also he should be very dumb because it’s knoah but the clones make sense
On 2022-12-30 at 02:08:43
kind of want knoah to be eradicated from the fanfic because why not xd
He’s already getting a color change because white is my color and he didn’t choose white
i mean story wise, lets just say he is a hallucination
Also he should be very dumb because it’s knoah but the clones make sense
And that is a hilarious fact. Can you give me a chance with him?
On 2022-12-30 at 12:44:46
kind of want knoah to be eradicated from the fanfic because why not xd
He’s already getting a color change because white is my color and he didn’t choose white
i mean story wise, lets just say he is a hallucination
Also he should be very dumb because it’s knoah but the clones make sense
And that is a hilarious fact. Can you give me a chance with him?
1On 2022-12-31 at 03:37:10
Alright, big reveal here. I'm planning to use actual tracks, official and custom, as locations in this fanfic. If you want one of your tracks or arenas to be in the story, plz DM me a link to the creation.
Sorry to anyone who is annoyed by the potential promotion here, Ima try not to advertise them too much.
Sorry to anyone who is annoyed by the potential promotion here, Ima try not to advertise them too much.
On 2022-12-31 at 03:52:12
kind of want knoah to be eradicated from the fanfic because why not xd
And why ? I mean he's maybe not very relevant for the plot but is that really a good reason ?
1On 2022-12-31 at 18:42:48
Ep#2 Nasty Surprises
At the entrance to the quick mode tracks;
Fiery; The tracks lead through the entrance. Something was dragged through here.
Nudge; So we follow them. Who’s with me?
Illuzhion; Okay, let’s go.
Melee; Alright. The marks are leading toward the portal leading to the track called ‘GBA Riverside Park.’ It looks like the one Toad made.
Toad; Oh you guys are gonna looove this track. We should stop for a race!
Popplio; Did you install a waterslide? Cuz I’ll totally go!
Knoah; HERE WE GO!!!
Nudge; What the… Why are you yelling so loud, you idiot? If someone involved with that bomber is at this track, now they know we’re here.
Knoah; Uh, sorry.
Illuzhion; Well, let’s just go in and get it over with.
StarSplizz; There’s no one here, as far as I can tell.
Sorbet; There’s some sort of pounding noise coming from the tunnel. We should go see what’s up.
Everyone goes to the cave.
Dark; Well then, here we are.
MisterCringeh; Wow, that pounding is very loud. What's going on in there?
Knoah; Go on, we’ve got to go look.
Everyone goes in. Knoah creates a clone and sends it in. He waits outside.
Noob; AAAHHH! Thwomps! Everyone get out of the way!
Xrunner48; Move!
Toad; What are these things doing here? I didn’t bring them! YOWCH!!!
StarSplizz; Toad’s been crushed!
Nudge; He’s half vampire, he’ll be fine.
Noob; What? OOF.
MisterCringeh; Noob, are you okay?
Fiery; He’s just unconscious. Let’s get out of here.
Xrunner48; I’ll carry Noob out. StarSplizz, can you get Toad?
Melee; I’ve got him.
Then the thwomps at near the entrances started hitting the ceiling instead.
MisterCringeh; Aaaand the ceiling is coming down.
Illuzhion; Great, just perfect.
The entrances collapsed, trapping many of the MKPCians inside. Xrunner48 managed to get out with Noob. Popplio slipped out through a gap before it closed.
Knoah; What happened in there? Are you alright?
Dietsoda; No time for that. We need to get out of here. There’s some sort of army coming out of the water.
Noob; Ooow. Wait, what about the others?
Dietsoda; We’ll come back for them. Now move, shorty.
A mob of green-blue creatures walking on two legs approached from the water. Their eyes were pale white and their huge hands held clubs. The MKPCians ran toward the portal, but some of the creatures reached it first.
Dietsoda; We’ll have to fight our way through.
Popplio; Uuuh, I don’t know about this.
Xrunner48; EEEYAAAH!
Xrunner48 charged and killed the creatures before they could capture the MKPCians. Dietsoda fired an arrow and hit a distant one between the eyes.
Xrunner48; Let’s go. We’ll get K and Oskar and they can help us free the others.
They went through the portal. Behind them, Knoah looked at the creatures bodies and snarled angrily. Then he followed.
Meanwhile, at the entrance to the official tracks;
K; We’re almost through. If we can just repair the control mechanism we can reactivate the portal.
Oskar; It’s kinda late, can we just go to sleep and finish in the morning?
???; You’re never going to finish this job. No one must see what is on the other side of the portal!
Oskar; Huh? Who’s talking?
A cloaked figure appeared out of the shadows, leading something that looked like a huge, hairless dog.
K; What is that thing!? Aaargh!
The dog attacked them, pulling them down and dragging them away. K dropped a small metal box on the ground before the dog beat him.
???; Quickly, we need to get these two to ‘Bowser Catwalk.’ We will dispose of them there…
Inside the cave, the MKPCians are confused and worried.
Dark; At least the thwomps have stopped. We need to get out of here. Anyone got a plan?
Sorbet;I've got an idea. Listen, here's what we need to do...
What in the name of Wargor is going on in MKPC?! Who is this person to control particularly ugly mutant dog-monsters? Will the trapped MKPCians be able to escape the cave? And what is up with Knoah?
So since the vote was very much in favor of not changing the colors, all colors are the same, except for when people wanted their own colors changed. Hope you liked this episode, #3 should be a bit better. Right now I'm sorta just getting the plot moving.
At the entrance to the quick mode tracks;
Fiery; The tracks lead through the entrance. Something was dragged through here.
Nudge; So we follow them. Who’s with me?
Illuzhion; Okay, let’s go.
Melee; Alright. The marks are leading toward the portal leading to the track called ‘GBA Riverside Park.’ It looks like the one Toad made.
Toad; Oh you guys are gonna looove this track. We should stop for a race!
Popplio; Did you install a waterslide? Cuz I’ll totally go!
Knoah; HERE WE GO!!!
Nudge; What the… Why are you yelling so loud, you idiot? If someone involved with that bomber is at this track, now they know we’re here.
Knoah; Uh, sorry.
Illuzhion; Well, let’s just go in and get it over with.
StarSplizz; There’s no one here, as far as I can tell.
Sorbet; There’s some sort of pounding noise coming from the tunnel. We should go see what’s up.
Everyone goes to the cave.
Dark; Well then, here we are.
MisterCringeh; Wow, that pounding is very loud. What's going on in there?
Knoah; Go on, we’ve got to go look.
Everyone goes in. Knoah creates a clone and sends it in. He waits outside.
Noob; AAAHHH! Thwomps! Everyone get out of the way!
Xrunner48; Move!
Toad; What are these things doing here? I didn’t bring them! YOWCH!!!
StarSplizz; Toad’s been crushed!
Nudge; He’s half vampire, he’ll be fine.
Noob; What? OOF.
MisterCringeh; Noob, are you okay?
Fiery; He’s just unconscious. Let’s get out of here.
Xrunner48; I’ll carry Noob out. StarSplizz, can you get Toad?
Melee; I’ve got him.
Then the thwomps at near the entrances started hitting the ceiling instead.
MisterCringeh; Aaaand the ceiling is coming down.
Illuzhion; Great, just perfect.
The entrances collapsed, trapping many of the MKPCians inside. Xrunner48 managed to get out with Noob. Popplio slipped out through a gap before it closed.
Knoah; What happened in there? Are you alright?
Dietsoda; No time for that. We need to get out of here. There’s some sort of army coming out of the water.
Noob; Ooow. Wait, what about the others?
Dietsoda; We’ll come back for them. Now move, shorty.
A mob of green-blue creatures walking on two legs approached from the water. Their eyes were pale white and their huge hands held clubs. The MKPCians ran toward the portal, but some of the creatures reached it first.
Dietsoda; We’ll have to fight our way through.
Popplio; Uuuh, I don’t know about this.
Xrunner48; EEEYAAAH!
Xrunner48 charged and killed the creatures before they could capture the MKPCians. Dietsoda fired an arrow and hit a distant one between the eyes.
Xrunner48; Let’s go. We’ll get K and Oskar and they can help us free the others.
They went through the portal. Behind them, Knoah looked at the creatures bodies and snarled angrily. Then he followed.
Meanwhile, at the entrance to the official tracks;
K; We’re almost through. If we can just repair the control mechanism we can reactivate the portal.
Oskar; It’s kinda late, can we just go to sleep and finish in the morning?
???; You’re never going to finish this job. No one must see what is on the other side of the portal!
Oskar; Huh? Who’s talking?
A cloaked figure appeared out of the shadows, leading something that looked like a huge, hairless dog.
K; What is that thing!? Aaargh!
The dog attacked them, pulling them down and dragging them away. K dropped a small metal box on the ground before the dog beat him.
???; Quickly, we need to get these two to ‘Bowser Catwalk.’ We will dispose of them there…
Inside the cave, the MKPCians are confused and worried.
Dark; At least the thwomps have stopped. We need to get out of here. Anyone got a plan?
Sorbet;I've got an idea. Listen, here's what we need to do...
What in the name of Wargor is going on in MKPC?! Who is this person to control particularly ugly mutant dog-monsters? Will the trapped MKPCians be able to escape the cave? And what is up with Knoah?
So since the vote was very much in favor of not changing the colors, all colors are the same, except for when people wanted their own colors changed. Hope you liked this episode, #3 should be a bit better. Right now I'm sorta just getting the plot moving.
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