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Messages 5322 - King Mario King Mario
vs46435 pts ★ Titan
battle6798 pts ★ Racer
United Kingdom
Can I join?

Funny and made a salad in 2nd Grade

What kind of funny? Funny jokes, which isn’t true, or hilariously stupid, which is EXTREMELY true
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Messages 313 - Peach Peach
vs15324 pts ★ Master
battle5000 pts ★ Novice
Canada
Can I join in? My personality is going to be obnoxious, but also pretty helpful, so then people can hate me but want me around LOL.
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Messages 370 - Luigi Luigi
vs10268 pts ★ Champion
battle4991 pts ★ Budding pilot
United States
Now we have 10 people now in this fanfic
Messages 1902 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs11652 pts ★ Champion
battle6099 pts ★ Racer
Ireland
Now we have 10 people now in this fanfic

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hopefully more people join :)
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Messages 1210 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
Now we have 10 people now in this fanfic

pog
hopefully more people join :)

Honestly, I didn't expect this many people to join
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Messages 1210 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
Well, it's Friday

I'm at school and don't have time but it will be out later today
Messages 1902 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs11652 pts ★ Champion
battle6099 pts ★ Racer
Ireland
Well, it's Friday

I'm at school and don't have time but it will be out later today

Really? Where I am (which is ironically not where I'm from) it's vacation :)
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the fanfic ^_^
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Messages 1210 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
Chapter 1: Super Mario Bros.
Everyone is in MKPC Duo Challenges.
Popplio: I'm bored, I'm going to teleport everyone to Super Mario Bros.
Ashton: Wait, what?
*teleports everyone to Super Mario Bros.*
Jey: Guess we're here now :s
Popplio: Hey wait, I'm not in the mall so I don't have the powers of a god
StarSplizz: Well, now that we're here, should we...try to beat Super Mario Bros. or something?

Everyone decided who does what.
Max and Lely: 1-1
Jey: 2-3
Chilli and StarSplizz: 3-1
Bj: 4-3
Ashton: 5-2
MarioKartGuy: 6-3
Toadyboy: 7-1
Popplio and Nudge: 8-4
At 1-1...
Max: *stomps a Goomba* This should be easy *walks right past the pipe*
Lely: *facepalms* Do you want to skip the entire level or not?
Meanwhile at 8-4...
Popplio: WHY DOES IT INFINITELY LOOP
Nudge: Have you not played Super Mario Bros? You go in this pipe
*they exit the pipe and Bowser stares at them*
Nudge: OK, that's not even how the level works
*Max, Lely, Nudge and Popplio finish their levels*
Meanwhile at 2-3...
Jey: Stupid fish
At 6-3...
MarioKartGuy: Wait, everyone else is struggling? I already beat the level lol
Over at 7-1...
Toadyboy: OK, this is pretty easy
*dies to literally the last enemy in the level*
Toadyboy: COME ON!!!
Jey and Toadyboy both finished around 5 minutes later.
At 3-1...
StarSplizz: Come on. I'm a Parakoopa. I can just fly over everything. Like... what else do I do?
Chilli: COULD USE SOME HELP HERE
StarSplizz: Doesn't matter, I finished so we both go out of the level
At 5-2...
Ashton: Why is there an underwater area?
Finally, at 4-3...
Bj: MUSHROOM
Ashton and Bj finish three minutes later
Popplio: Did everyone beat their levels?
*everyone says yes*
Lely: But Bowser didn't die... there are still seven of him on the loose.
Nudge: Good point
What will happen next? Will they track down the Bowsers? Will they succeed in their journey to beat Super Mario Bros? Find out in the next episode!

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I hope you guys liked it, if you want to change your colour or have any suggestions, be sure to tell me so I can make the fanfic better
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Messages 10849 - King Mario King Mario
vs35265 pts ★ Legend
battle6102 pts ★ Racer
France
Chapter 1: Super Mario Bros.
Everyone is in MKPC Duo Challenges.
Popplio: I'm bored, I'm going to teleport everyone to Super Mario Bros.
Ashton: Wait, what?
*teleports everyone to Super Mario Bros.*
Jey: Guess we're here now :s
Popplio: Hey wait, I'm not in the mall so I don't have the powers of a god
StarSplizz: Well, now that we're here, should we...try to beat Super Mario Bros. or something?

Everyone decided who does what.
Max and Lely: 1-1
Jey: 2-3
Chilli and StarSplizz: 3-1
Bj: 4-3
Ashton: 5-2
MarioKartGuy: 6-3
Toadyboy: 7-1
Popplio and Nudge: 8-4
At 1-1...
Max: *stomps a Goomba* This should be easy *walks right past the pipe*
Lely: *facepalms* Do you want to skip the entire level or not?
Meanwhile at 8-4...
Popplio: WHY DOES IT INFINITELY LOOP
Nudge: Have you not played Super Mario Bros? You go in this pipe
*they exit the pipe and Bowser stares at them*
Nudge: OK, that's not even how the level works
*Max, Lely, Nudge and Popplio finish their levels*
Meanwhile at 2-3...
Jey: Stupid fish
At 6-3...
MarioKartGuy: Wait, everyone else is struggling? I already beat the level lol
Over at 7-1...
Toadyboy: OK, this is pretty easy
*dies to literally the last enemy in the level*
Toadyboy: COME ON!!!
Jey and Toadyboy both finished around 5 minutes later.
At 3-1...
StarSplizz: Come on. I'm a Parakoopa. I can just fly over everything. Like... what else do I do?
Chilli: COULD USE SOME HELP HERE
StarSplizz: Doesn't matter, I finished so we both go out of the level
At 5-2...
Ashton: Why is there an underwater area?
Finally, at 4-3...
Bj: MUSHROOM
Ashton and Bj finish three minutes later
Popplio: Did everyone beat their levels?
*everyone says yes*
Lely: But Bowser didn't die... there are still seven of him on the loose.
Nudge: Good point
What will happen next? Will they track down the Bowsers? Will they succeed in their journey to beat Super Mario Bros? Find out in the next episode!

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I hope you guys liked it, if you want to change your colour or have any suggestions, be sure to tell me so I can make the fanfic better

That's very good, it's a great start. I don't see much things wrong, and I'm sure these flaws will fix themselves as you progress. Good luck !
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Messages 1210 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
Episode 2: Lost Levels to 3
One day after Episode 1...
Lely: OK guys, I figured out one of the seven Bowsers are in SMB: The Lost Levels
Nudge: There could be more in SMB2 and SMB3
Everyone decided who goes where.
Popplio and Nudge: SMBTLL 8-4
Jey: SMB2 1-2
Max and Lely: SMB2 7-3
Toadyboy: SMB3 1-1
Bj and Ashton: SMB3 7-1
MarioKartGuy and Chilli: SMB3 8-Airship
StarSplizz: SMB3 8-Castle
At Lost Levels...
Popplio: This should be easy, we already beat Bowser
Nudge: *bites Bowser*
Bowser: OW *dies*
Meanwhile at 1-2...
Jey: GET OVER HERE YOU STUPID BIRD THIS LEVEL SUCKS
(he eventually beat it)
At 7-3...
Max: Wait, we have to win by throwing vegetables in this guy's mouth?
Lely: Terrible influence *finishes Wart off*
Meanwhile, uhh...
Toadyboy, Bj, Ashton, Chilli and MarioKartGuy: Wait, was that supposed to be hard?
Finally, at 8-Castle...
StarSplizz *notices Bowser isn't there* Where's Bowser? On lunch break? Eh, I guess I'll just fly over the arena then
Everybody came back to MKPC Duo Challenges
Chilli: Well, did everyone beat their leve- *Popplio lifts him in the air* AAAAAAAAA
Popplio: I love this
Lely: *facepalms* Well, I think everyone beat their levels. Did anyone find Bowser?
Nudge: Just us I think

What will happen next? They beat Super Mario Bros. (last episode lol, that was my mistake), what's next? Will they track down the last 6 Bowsers? Stay tuned to find out!

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Again, if you have any feedback, be sure to tell me
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Messages 10849 - King Mario King Mario
vs35265 pts ★ Legend
battle6102 pts ★ Racer
France
Episode 2: Lost Levels to 3
One day after Episode 1...
Lely: OK guys, I figured out one of the seven Bowsers are in SMB: The Lost Levels
Nudge: There could be more in SMB2 and SMB3
Everyone decided who goes where.
Popplio and Nudge: SMBTLL 8-4
Jey: SMB2 1-2
Max and Lely: SMB2 7-3
Toadyboy: SMB3 1-1
Bj and Ashton: SMB3 7-1
MarioKartGuy and Chilli: SMB3 8-Airship
StarSplizz: SMB3 8-Castle
At Lost Levels...
Popplio: This should be easy, we already beat Bowser
Nudge: *bites Bowser*
Bowser: OW *dies*
Meanwhile at 1-2...
Jey: GET OVER HERE YOU STUPID BIRD THIS LEVEL SUCKS
(he eventually beat it)
At 7-3...
Max: Wait, we have to win by throwing vegetables in this guy's mouth?
Lely: Terrible influence *finishes Wart off*
Meanwhile, uhh...
Toadyboy, Bj, Ashton, Chilli and MarioKartGuy: Wait, was that supposed to be hard?
Finally, at 8-Castle...
StarSplizz *notices Bowser isn't there* Where's Bowser? On lunch break? Eh, I guess I'll just fly over the arena then
Everybody came back to MKPC Duo Challenges
Chilli: Well, did everyone beat their leve- *Popplio lifts him in the air* AAAAAAAAA
Popplio: I love this
Lely: *facepalms* Well, I think everyone beat their levels. Did anyone find Bowser?
Nudge: Just us I think

What will happen next? They beat Super Mario Bros. (last episode lol, that was my mistake), what's next? Will they track down the last 6 Bowsers? Stay tuned to find out!

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Again, if you have any feedback, be sure to tell me

If I have troubles finishing Bowser fights, I'm gonna call Nudge
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Messages 1902 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs11652 pts ★ Champion
battle6099 pts ★ Racer
Ireland
I'm loving this fanfic, but I feel like my role is a little too minor lol
Besides, can I please have a toxic claw ability? That would help the others a ton :p
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Messages 1210 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
I'm loving this fanfic, but I feel like my role is a little too minor lol
Besides, can I please have a toxic claw ability? That would help the others a ton :p

Thanks, I'll try to feature you more

The toxic claw should help with that lol
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Messages 370 - Luigi Luigi
vs10268 pts ★ Champion
battle4991 pts ★ Budding pilot
United States
I wonder what will happen at the final fight will look like
Messages 1902 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs11652 pts ★ Champion
battle6099 pts ★ Racer
Ireland
I'm loving this fanfic, but I feel like my role is a little too minor lol
Besides, can I please have a toxic claw ability? That would help the others a ton :p

Thanks, I'll try to feature you more

The toxic claw should help with that lol

Nice, besides can I be an antagonist? Or at least an antihero?
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Messages 1210 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
I'm loving this fanfic, but I feel like my role is a little too minor lol
Besides, can I please have a toxic claw ability? That would help the others a ton :p

Thanks, I'll try to feature you more

The toxic claw should help with that lol

Nice, besides can I be an antagonist? Or at least an antihero?

I'll plan something special for that ;)
Messages 4356 - King Mario King Mario
vs76568 pts ★ Titan
battle12573 pts ★ Champion
France
I'm loving this fanfic, but I feel like my role is a little too minor lol
Besides, can I please have a toxic claw ability? That would help the others a ton :p

Thanks, I'll try to feature you more

The toxic claw should help with that lol

Nice, besides can I be an antagonist? Or at least an antihero?

I'll plan something special for that ;)

Off topic why did you put CG in your name, knowing it's the tag for a Pro League team?
Messages 5322 - King Mario King Mario
vs46435 pts ★ Titan
battle6798 pts ★ Racer
United Kingdom
I'm loving this fanfic, but I feel like my role is a little too minor lol
Besides, can I please have a toxic claw ability? That would help the others a ton :p

Thanks, I'll try to feature you more

The toxic claw should help with that lol

Nice, besides can I be an antagonist? Or at least an antihero?

I'll plan something special for that ;)

Off topic why did you put CG in your name, knowing it's the tag for a Pro League team?

I think everyone thinks it’s a trend at this point, like Chilli, who starts with rncg (right now celestial guardian)
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Messages 1210 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
I'm loving this fanfic, but I feel like my role is a little too minor lol
Besides, can I please have a toxic claw ability? That would help the others a ton :p

Thanks, I'll try to feature you more

The toxic claw should help with that lol

Nice, besides can I be an antagonist? Or at least an antihero?

I'll plan something special for that ;)

Off topic why did you put CG in your name, knowing it's the tag for a Pro League team?

I think everyone thinks it’s a trend at this point, like Chilli, who starts with rncg (right now celestial guardian)

Pretty much, yeah
Messages 5322 - King Mario King Mario
vs46435 pts ★ Titan
battle6798 pts ★ Racer
United Kingdom
I'm loving this fanfic, but I feel like my role is a little too minor lol
Besides, can I please have a toxic claw ability? That would help the others a ton :p

Thanks, I'll try to feature you more

The toxic claw should help with that lol

Nice, besides can I be an antagonist? Or at least an antihero?

I'll plan something special for that ;)

Off topic why did you put CG in your name, knowing it's the tag for a Pro League team?

I think everyone thinks it’s a trend at this point, like Chilli, who starts with rncg (right now celestial guardian)

Pretty much, yeah

Well it’s not good when done by people who aren’t in the Pro League, since the tags represent which team you’re in
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