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Messages 2175 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
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Indian Ocean
Hi everyone! I've decided to give up on Twilightverse... But the good news is, I'm making a new series The Grieving! It's about the end of MKPC.
People dieing, Warpers war-
Hampter: Fix. The. Setenence.
Fine
The Warping, And so much more! Enjoy this series as the first episode is being made soon!
People who might want to join:
@Lely
@mememo
@-Kris-
@Gundham_Tanaka
@VC
@Max-Bros
@iBroxo
@Happy_Ryokun
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Messages 2175 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
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Indian Ocean
Eh I'mma make the first episode, Probally some people are gonna join:
Episode 1: No more peace
How could it come to be like this...
Hampter: BORING!
The Bloody Deaths..... The Knifed Heads
iBroxo: Some people went crazy over this, Like bums in the alleyways.
All because of one person...
Parakoopa: This guy... Is not human. How would he be? He has no feelings.
One person....
Kris: HE KILLED MY PARENTS!
But Fortunately, Some Team called The MKPCGuys lived here... His name was....
Hampter: Hey Ralsei!
Come look at the view!

Hampter: Ain't it pretty!? :D
Ralsei: YEAH SURE, SO PRETTY!
As they seen the volcano erupting, And the dead bodies everywhere.
Lely: Dude, when your going to stop being such a psychopath? You got to love things, and squeeze them till they burst!
Hampter: When you stop being such a mochi
Lely: When you stop being a psychopath
iBroxo: Hey! Guys! I'mma go see if they're any survivors left!
Hampter: K Random Dude
A few minutes later....
iBroxo: Huh, What a strange area
Survivor: Hey you, have you seen any Bloodmen around
iBroxo: No.... Why?
Survivor: Then you need to leave. Now.
iBroxo: Ok...
As he took the strangers advice, it might've been the bes advice he ever got...
When he got back home...
Hampter: Guys, have you ever seen that hole before?
Ralsei: No, why?
Lely: Please don't tell me we're gonna look in that hole, who knows what might be there.
Ralsei: I'mma look in it.
As he went to the hole, he found something that might just save there lives.
Ralsei: Hey guys! Check this out! Guns! very good ones too..
iBroxo: Wow, I was gone in only a minute and you found something from there?
Well, you get whats gonna happen now...
Ralsei: Well everyone, get a gun. because I think its time we get out of this weird house...
Lely: What is this clingy weirdo gonna do now
Max: Lets find out, then.
Find out in Episode 2!
NOW TELL ME, WAS THIS NOT CRINGE!!!!!!!!?????
check1
Messages 2206 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs6692 pts ★ Racer
battle5601 pts ★ Novice
United States
Ralsei wrote:
Eh I'mma make the first episode, Probally some people are gonna join:
Episode 1: No more peace
How could it come to be like this...
Hampter: It's like damn... Why did this happen now!?
The Bloody Deaths..... The Knifed Heads
iBroxo: Some people went crazy over this, Like bums in the alleyways.
All because of one person...
Parakoopa: This guy... Is not human. How would he be? He has no feelings.
One person....
Kris: HE KILLED MY PARENTS!
But Fortunately, Some Goat kid lived here... His name was....
Hampter: Hey Ralsei!
Come look at the view!

Hampter: Ain't it pretty!? :D
Ralsei: YEAH SURE, SO PRETTY!
As they seen the volcano erupting, And the dead bodies everywhere.
Lely: Dude, when your going to stop being such a psychopath? You got to love things, and squeeze them till they burst!
Hampter: When you stop being such a mochi
Lely: When you stop being a psychopath
iBroxo: Hey! Guys! I'mma go see if they're any survivors left!
Hampter: K Random Dude
A few minutes later....
iBroxo: Huh, What a strange area
Survivor: Hey you, have you seen any Bloodmen around
iBroxo: No.... Why?
Survivor: Then you need to leave. Now.
iBroxo: Ok...
As he took the strangers advice, it might've been the bes advice he ever got...
When he got back home...
Hampter: Guys, have you ever seen that hole before?
Ralsei: No, why?
Lely: Please don't tell me we're gonna look in that hole, who knows what might be there.
Ralsei: I'mma look in it.
As he went to the hole, he found something that might just save there lives.
Ralsei: Hey guys! Check this out! Guns! very good ones too..
iBroxo: Wow, I was gone in only a minute and you found something from there?
Well, you get whats gonna happen now...
Ralsei: Well everyone, get a gun. because I think its time we get out of this weird house...
Lely: What is this clingy weirdo gonna do now
Max: Lets find out, then.
Find out in Episode 2!
NOW TELL ME, WAS THIS NOT CRINGE!!!!!!!!?????

ADD ME AS Chilli
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Messages 2175 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs17614 pts ★ Master
battle8812 pts ★ Expert
Indian Ocean
Ralsei wrote:
Eh I'mma make the first episode, Probally some people are gonna join:
Episode 1: No more peace
How could it come to be like this...
Hampter: It's like damn... Why did this happen now!?
The Bloody Deaths..... The Knifed Heads
iBroxo: Some people went crazy over this, Like bums in the alleyways.
All because of one person...
Parakoopa: This guy... Is not human. How would he be? He has no feelings.
One person....
Kris: HE KILLED MY PARENTS!
But Fortunately, Some Goat kid lived here... His name was....
Hampter: Hey Ralsei!
Come look at the view!

Hampter: Ain't it pretty!? :D
Ralsei: YEAH SURE, SO PRETTY!
As they seen the volcano erupting, And the dead bodies everywhere.
Lely: Dude, when your going to stop being such a psychopath? You got to love things, and squeeze them till they burst!
Hampter: When you stop being such a mochi
Lely: When you stop being a psychopath
iBroxo: Hey! Guys! I'mma go see if they're any survivors left!
Hampter: K Random Dude
A few minutes later....
iBroxo: Huh, What a strange area
Survivor: Hey you, have you seen any Bloodmen around
iBroxo: No.... Why?
Survivor: Then you need to leave. Now.
iBroxo: Ok...
As he took the strangers advice, it might've been the bes advice he ever got...
When he got back home...
Hampter: Guys, have you ever seen that hole before?
Ralsei: No, why?
Lely: Please don't tell me we're gonna look in that hole, who knows what might be there.
Ralsei: I'mma look in it.
As he went to the hole, he found something that might just save there lives.
Ralsei: Hey guys! Check this out! Guns! very good ones too..
iBroxo: Wow, I was gone in only a minute and you found something from there?
Well, you get whats gonna happen now...
Ralsei: Well everyone, get a gun. because I think its time we get out of this weird house...
Lely: What is this clingy weirdo gonna do now
Max: Lets find out, then.
Find out in Episode 2!
NOW TELL ME, WAS THIS NOT CRINGE!!!!!!!!?????

ADD ME AS Chilli

You'll be in the next episode
ok1
Messages 2376 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs71844 pts ★ Titan
battle15632 pts ★ Master
Japan
I never said I wanted to join, also I'm not "Parakoopa" anymore
ok1
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Messages 2175 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs17614 pts ★ Master
battle8812 pts ★ Expert
Indian Ocean
I never said I wanted to join, also I'm not "Parakoopa" anymore

But do you want to join?
Yay
check1
Messages 2376 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs71844 pts ★ Titan
battle15632 pts ★ Master
Japan
Ralsei wrote:
I never said I wanted to join, also I'm not "Parakoopa" anymore

But do you want to join?

Of course
But please ask me first
ok1
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vs14712 pts ★ Champion
battle7089 pts ★ Racer
Canada
you lost me at gore.
i'm not joining.
xd3
Messages 4859 - King Mario King Mario
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battle12573 pts ★ Champion
France
Ralsei wrote:
Spoiler [ShowHide]
Eh I'mma make the first episode, Probally some people are gonna join:
Episode 1: No more peace
How could it come to be like this...
Hampter: It's like damn... Why did this happen now!?
The Bloody Deaths..... The Knifed Heads
iBroxo: Some people went crazy over this, Like bums in the alleyways.
All because of one person...
Parakoopa: This guy... Is not human. How would he be? He has no feelings.
One person....
Kris: HE KILLED MY PARENTS!
But Fortunately, Some Goat kid lived here... His name was....
Hampter: Hey Ralsei!
Come look at the view!

Hampter: Ain't it pretty!? :D
Ralsei: YEAH SURE, SO PRETTY!
As they seen the volcano erupting, And the dead bodies everywhere.
Lely: Dude, when your going to stop being such a psychopath? You got to love things, and squeeze them till they burst!
Hampter: When you stop being such a mochi
Lely: When you stop being a psychopath
iBroxo: Hey! Guys! I'mma go see if they're any survivors left!
Hampter: K Random Dude
A few minutes later....
iBroxo: Huh, What a strange area
Survivor: Hey you, have you seen any Bloodmen around
iBroxo: No.... Why?
Survivor: Then you need to leave. Now.
iBroxo: Ok...
As he took the strangers advice, it might've been the bes advice he ever got...
When he got back home...
Hampter: Guys, have you ever seen that hole before?
Ralsei: No, why?
Lely: Please don't tell me we're gonna look in that hole, who knows what might be there.
Ralsei: I'mma look in it.
As he went to the hole, he found something that might just save there lives.
Ralsei: Hey guys! Check this out! Guns! very good ones too..
iBroxo: Wow, I was gone in only a minute and you found something from there?
Well, you get whats gonna happen now...
Ralsei: Well everyone, get a gun. because I think its time we get out of this weird house...
Lely: What is this clingy weirdo gonna do now
Max: Lets find out, then.
Find out in Episode 2!
NOW TELL ME, WAS THIS NOT CRINGE!!!!!!!!?????

If you want to put me in your story, at least PUT THE RIGHT COLOR
xd1
up1
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Messages 3135 - King Mario King Mario
vs62993 pts ★ Titan
battle11947 pts ★ Champion
Barbados
Max-Bros wrote:
Ralsei wrote:
Spoiler [ShowHide]
Eh I'mma make the first episode, Probally some people are gonna join:
Episode 1: No more peace
How could it come to be like this...
Hampter: It's like damn... Why did this happen now!?
The Bloody Deaths..... The Knifed Heads
iBroxo: Some people went crazy over this, Like bums in the alleyways.
All because of one person...
Parakoopa: This guy... Is not human. How would he be? He has no feelings.
One person....
Kris: HE KILLED MY PARENTS!
But Fortunately, Some Goat kid lived here... His name was....
Hampter: Hey Ralsei!
Come look at the view!

Hampter: Ain't it pretty!? :D
Ralsei: YEAH SURE, SO PRETTY!
As they seen the volcano erupting, And the dead bodies everywhere.
Lely: Dude, when your going to stop being such a psychopath? You got to love things, and squeeze them till they burst!
Hampter: When you stop being such a mochi
Lely: When you stop being a psychopath
iBroxo: Hey! Guys! I'mma go see if they're any survivors left!
Hampter: K Random Dude
A few minutes later....
iBroxo: Huh, What a strange area
Survivor: Hey you, have you seen any Bloodmen around
iBroxo: No.... Why?
Survivor: Then you need to leave. Now.
iBroxo: Ok...
As he took the strangers advice, it might've been the bes advice he ever got...
When he got back home...
Hampter: Guys, have you ever seen that hole before?
Ralsei: No, why?
Lely: Please don't tell me we're gonna look in that hole, who knows what might be there.
Ralsei: I'mma look in it.
As he went to the hole, he found something that might just save there lives.
Ralsei: Hey guys! Check this out! Guns! very good ones too..
iBroxo: Wow, I was gone in only a minute and you found something from there?
Well, you get whats gonna happen now...
Ralsei: Well everyone, get a gun. because I think its time we get out of this weird house...
Lely: What is this clingy weirdo gonna do now
Max: Lets find out, then.
Find out in Episode 2!
NOW TELL ME, WAS THIS NOT CRINGE!!!!!!!!?????

If you want to put me in your story, at least PUT THE RIGHT COLOR

Max has a family heirloom color, only to be used by him & his decendants.
xd1
genius1
Messages 3135 - King Mario King Mario
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battle11947 pts ★ Champion
Barbados
Referring to the savior as some GOAT kid sounds like some Halloweenbound story. If I don't have to do anything myself, I'd like to join.
I don't really have a color though. Probably just Max's old one.
Messages 11441 - King Mario King Mario
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battle6102 pts ★ Racer
France
VC wrote:
you lost me at gore.
i'm not joining.

Then you probably won't join my new fanfic, even if there's not any blood, there's a lot of cruelty, but you might join it after the first arc
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Messages 2175 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs17614 pts ★ Master
battle8812 pts ★ Expert
Indian Ocean
Unfortunately, Episode 2 is delayed. It will be here on Sunday though!
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Messages 2175 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
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Indian Ocean
Episode 2 - The escape
Hampter: Everyone ready to go?
Everyone execpt Ralsei: Yea!
iBroxo: What about you, Ralsei?
Ralsei: Can't be bothered.
Hampter: Please don't tell me you're about to do a-
Ralsei: Reviv-
Max: /mute Ralsei
Ralsei: (Mind) Bruh
Ralsei: *Nods that hes ready to go*
Hampter: Ok! Lets go!
*Door opens*
*Closes*
Hampter: Ok, so now what?
Max-Bros: Maybe we should look for people
???: What about me?
Hampter: Who is this sus weirdo
Kraze: Guys its me kraze
Hampter: Oh, weird. When the end of the world happened, you just seemed to dissappear.
Kraze: Doesn't matter! Let's find some injured people
???: REVIVAMOGUS REVIVAMOGUS REVIVAMOGUS
Max-Bros: Now I'm Definitely Not Unmuting Ralsei
RedYoshi: Hey guys! Its me Red Yoshi!
Kraze: Ok now lets go.
Max-Bros: Yeah let's go before RedYoshi Starts again
Kraze: Alright1 Let's go!
To be continued...
Messages 11441 - King Mario King Mario
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battle6102 pts ★ Racer
France
The opening looks like my MKPCverse (old attempt) opening, with Nudge literally saying the same thing at the same time, the italic sentences alternated with the character's lines.... yes
Anyways it's okay, it sounds easier to understand than Twlightverse,
but it still sounds pretty bland and uninspired, however keep it up Ralsei
Messages 3135 - King Mario King Mario
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battle11947 pts ★ Champion
Barbados
Ralsei wrote:
Episode 2 - The escape
Hampter: Everyone ready to go?
Everyone execpt Ralsei: Yea!
iBroxo: What about you, Ralsei?
Ralsei: Can't be bothered.
Hampter: Please don't tell me you're about to do a-
Ralsei: Reviv-
Max: /mute Ralsei
Ralsei: (Mind) Bruh
Ralsei: *Nods that hes ready to go*
Hampter: Ok! Lets go!
*Door opens*
*Closes*
Hampter: Ok, so now what?
Max-Bros: Maybe we should look for people
???: What about me?
Hampter: Who is this sus weirdo
Kraze: Guys its me kraze
Hampter: Oh, weird. When the end of the world happened, you just seemed to dissappear.
Kraze: Doesn't matter! Let's find some injured people
???: REVIVAMOGUS REVIVAMOGUS REVIVAMOGUS
Max-Bros: Now I'm Definitely Not Unmuting Ralsei
RedYoshi: Hey guys! Its me Red Yoshi!
Kraze: Ok now lets go.
Max-Bros: Yeah let's go before RedYoshi Starts again
Kraze: Alright1 Let's go!
To be continued...

I don't know why I thought Among Us would not be in this.

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