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EP10 - SECTION 2

At Toy Tracks Galaxy...

???: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!
BJ: Bowser Jr.! I should've known!
Bowser Jr.: Now that I've got this Power Star, there's nothing you can do!
Dietsoda: Hand it over, you little dipshit!
Bowser Jr.: No way! This Power Star is mine! Terror Train, attack these freaks! HAHAHAHAHAHAH!
*Bowser Jr. retreats in his Koopa Clown Car*
Dietsoda: Yeah, that's it, run you scumbag!
BJ: I think I've heard enough swearing for one day... Ah, I'm going off topic. Let's destroy this tin can!

Meanwhile, at Bluegrass Galaxy...

Saguantuan: Wow, Elija would love it here...
Nudge: Yeah, like he's actually into Irish folk music. He likes J-Rock, K-Pop, death metal and trap. Anyway, we're not supposed to be lounging around and talking about music. We've got ourselves a universe to-
???: Hey guys! Looking for a Power Star?
Nudge POV: Wow, that was quick.
xrunner: Hi people! I'm back! Meet my best pal, Yoshi!
Yoshi: Yoshi Yoshi!

At Melty Magma Galaxy...

???: YOU! YOU'RE WORKING FOR THAT TURTLE DEMON AND THAT JESTER, AREN'T YA?!
Krazey: No! We need the Power Star so we can defeat them!
Paratroopa: Please, help us!
???: GAH, FINE. BUT IF I FIND OUT-
Krazey: For the last time! We're not working for Dimentio and Bowser!

Back at Starman Fort Galaxy...

RUMBLERUMBLERUMBLERUMBLERUMBLE...
Elija: Grrr...
Lemon: Hiss...
Max and Lely: Uh-oh...
Toad: BUP!
CREEEEEEAAAAAKKK...
Elija: MEOW!
*Elija repeatedly bashes Bosscrab*
VOOOOOM.
Lely:... What?
Lemon: Yay! We got a Power Star!

Everyone made it back to base unscathed (for the most part).

Jey and 5072: Wow, we got all 7 Power Stars.
Dimentio: So sorry to intercept your moment of celebration.
Elija: Seriously?
Bowser: GWAHAHAHAHAHA!
Lemon POV: Bowser's here? Didn't Elija kill him?
Lavadra: SO THEY WEREN'T LYING...
Toad: BUP!
Yoshi: YOSHI!
Dimentio: We'll be taking those!
Lely: Hey!
Bowser: Bye for now! HAHAHAHAHAHA!

Bowser and Dimentio have stolen the Power Stars! Now everyone has to reclaim them! What will happen next? Find out in Part 2 of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising, coming next week!
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I'll join.
Personality: Funny guy, smart yet stupid
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Messages 1998 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
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I'll join.
Personality: Funny guy, smart yet stupid

Ok then, but what team do you want to be on? Besides you'll have to wait until next week when I release Part 2
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I'll join.
Personality: Funny guy, smart yet stupid

Ok then, but what team do you want to be on? Besides you'll have to wait until next week when I release Part 2

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Hi guys!
Sorry it's been a while, but I'm making the first episode of Season 2 right now.
I was hooked up with A LOT (and most of you know why)
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S2EP1

Last time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising, the 7 Power Stars were stolen! In an effort to reclaim them, Elija split them up again. This time, however, there would be another roadblock in The Heroes’ way…

???: Sorry I'm late guys!
Nudge: Dark? What took you so long?
DarkDemon: I don't know, I just wound up here all of a sudden.
Elija: Well at least someone's here on our side.
DarkDemon: Uhhh... what?
Lemon: Max, Lely and the others didn't agree with our plan. Me and Elija suggested looking for the Power Stars immediately, but they didn't want to! Can you believe it? And that's coming from Lely's mouth!
Yoshi: I don't usually talk, but these guys are right. Those Stars were stolen from right under our noses, but Max and Lely were too lazy to do anything.
DarkDemon: So, uhhh... what's the plan?
Lavadra: WE WERE THINKING OF STOPPING THEM IN OUR TRACKS. PARATROOPA SAID IT WOULD BE BETTER IF WE AMBUSHED THEM SOMEHOW.
Elija: Then we've no time to waste. Let's get going.

Someplace far from The Villains' base...

Ashton: What's taking Elija and the others so long?
Dietsoda: Boring.
Max: They disagreed with our plan, and Elija had a fight with Chilli. What do you expect? Now let's-
Paratroopa: Hold it right there, suckers!
Lely: Paratroopa? What's gotten into you? You're not usually like this.
Nudge: Save it, Lely. Save it for the boss.
Yoshi: YOSHI YOSHI!
Chilli: ...Bruh.
Lemon: YEAH THAT'S RIGHT YA SUPERLOSERS! CRANK UP THE VOLUME!
BJ: Whaaa...
*Flowering Nights starts playing and Elija enters from the electronic stage*
DarkDemon: You'll be sorry, losers!
Elija: HEYA LOSERS!
Chilli: Uhhh... what?
Max: What's gotten into you lot?
Lemon: NOW PREPARE... TO FIGHT!
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S2EP2

After the rivalry with The Heroes, The Villains make haste in an effort to reclaim the stolen Power Stars. But will they succeed? Are The Heroes itching for a rematch? Or is it something more bizarre? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

Lemon: Hey Elija. Anything wrong?
Elija: Nah...
Lemon: You sure? You've been kinda anxious lately.
Elija: It's just... nah, I'll be OK.
Nudge: Won't talk to ya, huh?
Lemon: Nah... Do you think he's really OK?
Nudge: That's the boss for ya.
Lemon: You don't think maybe-
Nudge: I don't know. Perhaps. But I doubt it.
DarkDemon: Heeeeyy, Lemon's got a crush!
*Lemon gets embarrassed*
Lemon: No I don't!
DarkDemon: Yeeeaah, sure, that's why ya look at him like that, isn't it?
Lemon: Who?
DarkDemon: Heh, I was just messin' with ya. Let's go.

Meanwhile...

Max: Owwwwww...
BJ: I was not expecting that...
Toad: WAAAAAA!
Lely: Why would they do that though?
Chilli: I have no idea, but I doubt I'll wanna find out anytime soon...

Back at The Villains' base...

Popplio: Wow, Elija sure seems agitated...
xrunner: Maybe it's true.
Popplio: What?
xrunner: You haven't heard the rumors? Are you serious?
Paratroopa: Do you honestly believe those?
xrunner: Eh... maybe.
Elija: THE HOLY COW IS THAT?
The Villains: Huh?
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Sort of off topic, but  hb, @LemoNeko_IlluZhion786_68! I'm excited for the next episode.
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xrunner48 wrote:
Sort of off topic, but  hb, @LemoNeko_IlluZhion786_68! I'm excited for the next episode.

Thanks broski :D
The next episode is coming today :)
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S2EP3

Last time on Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising, Elija ran into an unknown object! What secrets does it hold? What secrets are Lemon and Elija hiding? Find out in today's episode of Super MKPC Galaxy: The Uprising!

Elija: ...Huh?
The Villains: AAARGH! A WORMHOLE!
???: WAAAAH!
The Villains: Uhhh...
???: Hey, what's-a going on?
???: Where-a even are-a we?
???: Let's, uhh...
???: NO FAIR! LET'S JUST ASK THESE RANDOM PEOPLE AND GET THE HELL OUTTA-
???: Just- gah, Daisy, calm down.
???: Daisy's-a right, Peach. We-a have no-a idea how we'll-a get back home.
???: But-a how, Mario?
Peach: I have an idea. Mario, Luigi, Daisy, follow me.
Daisy: SERIOUSLY?! WE ALWAYS FOLLOW YOU!
Peach: Just lie low and keep silent, Daisy.
Daisy: Crap.

Meanwhile, far from the cockpit...

Elija: Uhhh...
Elija POV: This is kinda awkward...
Lemon: E-Elija? Are you OK? You said you needed to tell me something...
Elija: Uhhh... it doesn't matter. Just check the cockpit for anything out of the usual.
Lemon POV: What is he hiding from me? Maybe he also... nah, I'll save that for later.
Lemon: OK. If you need to talk, just call me.
Nudge: OK Elija, what's going on? Don't dismiss this as nothing. Are the rumors true?
Elija POV: Yeah.
Elija: No.
Nudge: OK...
Popplio: Look Elija, don't mind Nudge (or anyone for that matter). We're all kinda stressed right now. After that security breach-
Elija: WHAT?!
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https://docs.google.com/forms/d/1Nj09HFRaiGfgfLaL2rrlNhA64yThWRbGiZvpHjBWgDo/viewform?chromeless=1&edit_requested=false
This is just a survey about what you think of the story so far :)
To be honest, I should've done this when the story actually started but I couldn't be asked lol
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Is this still being written? I know it's hard to write fanfics, but I just want to know.
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xrunner48 wrote:
Is this still being written? I know it's hard to write fanfics, but I just want to know.

Yeah, I'm thinking of a plot
But it's hard when you've got girls lusting after you, a severe crush and tons of artwork lol
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xrunner48 wrote:
Is this still being written? I know it's hard to write fanfics, but I just want to know.

Yeah, I'm thinking of a plot
But it's hard when you've got girls lusting after you, a severe crush and tons of artwork lol

I understand. I just didn't want this topic to get too old and make sure it's still being made.
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xrunner48 wrote:
Is this still being written? I know it's hard to write fanfics, but I just want to know.

Yeah, I'm thinking of a plot
But it's hard when you've got girls lusting after you, a severe crush and tons of artwork lol

Yeah, I u derstand, and anyways quality > quantity so if you don't have any ideas or inspiration it's fine! Just wait for it. If you force yourself
the result will be garbage (I experienced it myself). It's better to wait for the right time than to force yourself, and disgust yourself of it while posting bad content lol.
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Guys I'm sorry but for now I'm not writing a plot. My crush (who if you hadn't already figured out is Lemon) is extremely stressed out by recent events on Discord.
I'll come back to this in a few days, though (maybe)
I'm not lying, right now I just wanna give her a hug and a kiss and tell her that I'm there for her snif
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Messages 11442 - King Mario King Mario
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Guys I'm sorry but for now I'm not writing a plot. My crush (who if you hadn't already figured out is Lemon) is extremely stressed out by recent events on Discord.
I'll come back to this in a few days, though (maybe)
I'm not lying, right now I just wanna give her a hug and a kiss and tell her that I'm there for her snif

Completely understand you, those weirdos went way too far and it's honestly worrying to see they're threatening younger people to die and stalk them without any second thought. Honestly, they need to be stopped.
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Chiminie wrote:
Guys I'm sorry but for now I'm not writing a plot. My crush (who if you hadn't already figured out is Lemon) is extremely stressed out by recent events on Discord.
I'll come back to this in a few days, though (maybe)
I'm not lying, right now I just wanna give her a hug and a kiss and tell her that I'm there for her snif

Completely understand you, those weirdos went way too far and it's honestly worrying to see they're threatening younger people to die and stalk them without any second thought. Honestly, they need to be stopped.

They're not even adults, they're like 16 at maximum
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Chiminie wrote:
Guys I'm sorry but for now I'm not writing a plot. My crush (who if you hadn't already figured out is Lemon) is extremely stressed out by recent events on Discord.
I'll come back to this in a few days, though (maybe)
I'm not lying, right now I just wanna give her a hug and a kiss and tell her that I'm there for her snif

Completely understand you, those weirdos went way too far and it's honestly worrying to see they're threatening younger people to die and stalk them without any second thought. Honestly, they need to be stopped.

They're not even adults, they're like 16 at maximum

Damn, it's it's worse lol
So they act like grown ups but Max is almost as old as them
Nice "unintenlligence"
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Chiminie wrote:
Chiminie wrote:
Guys I'm sorry but for now I'm not writing a plot. My crush (who if you hadn't already figured out is Lemon) is extremely stressed out by recent events on Discord.
I'll come back to this in a few days, though (maybe)
I'm not lying, right now I just wanna give her a hug and a kiss and tell her that I'm there for her snif

Completely understand you, those weirdos went way too far and it's honestly worrying to see they're threatening younger people to die and stalk them without any second thought. Honestly, they need to be stopped.

They're not even adults, they're like 16 at maximum

Damn, it's it's worse lol
So they act like grown ups but Max is almost as old as them
Nice "unintenlligence"

It's even worse considering some of them are as young as 11
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