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Messages 226 - Toad Toad
vs14712 pts ★ Champion
battle7089 pts ★ Racer
Canada
Invu wrote:
Chapter 4 : Cute night gone wrong
Lely : So... after this cute moment... What are we doing next ?
Nudge : We can wait on the Archipelago. I heard most of the MKPCians are gone, but VC didn't actually left. She decided to stay here with us, apparently. It's what she told me.
Max : What about Ralsei's lifeless body ? He's surely drown. Though the lagoon isn't deep. We can search him a bit. At least we will have his body
Lely : Sure. What about we stay awake this night. We will sleep tomorrow.
Nudge : Sure. I'm afraid of lacking sleep to the point where I'm completely exhausted and where I pass out in a burning pipe, but why not. Promise me I will be safe though. Today was already a big day.
Lely : Don't worry. We will be safe. This is now 8PM. Don't forget MKPC Archipel also works like that. Some people are awake at night, so the Archipelago is living at night. Let's go back to the huts though. We can take some rest then do our party night.
Nudge : Yes. Let's take 3 hours and a half to sleep. That's the bare minimum, but we will rest tomorrow anyways.
Max : Yeah. I'm going to put an alarm. πŸ™‚
Lely : What about a sunset stroll on the beach ? That would be very cute and nice to start our night. πŸ₯°
Ralsei : hell this sounds so gay
Max : WHO SAID THAT ???
Nudge : When you think he's dead, he's alive...
Ralsei : And why would I be dead ?
Lely : Well... I did a challenge where I launched everyone in the sky, but they went
too high and fainted (they reached an area where the things are weirdly deadly). You as well, and I didn't find your body.

Ralsei : Oh yeah. This was an illusion. I have magic powers since the Twilightverse era, don't you remember ? But I asked the gods if they could get my power changed.
Nudge : And what were you doing during all this time ?
Ralsei : You don't wanna know
Nudge : Yes I do
Ralsei : Max is gonna throw a tantrum
Max : I won't
Nudge : Go on Ralsei
Ralsei : I taught the Piantas to say revive and amogus 24/7
Max : Ok, you're not coming to our night party
Ralsei : Yes I will
Nudge : Then go get some sleep.
At the huts...
Lely : The sunset is now... I think we should actually go to it and come back to sleep a bit...
Max : What about we sleep on the beach ?
Lely : GENIUS 8)8)8)
Nudge : This is really smart. Let's pack our bags and go.
Lely : I packed my bag, but something is left
Nudge : Then put it in your bag
Lely :*grabs Nudge and puts it in his bag*
Nudge : *scratches the bag* Lemme get out---- oh well. That's not so bad
Max : This is cute 😍
VC : Ummm. Hello...
Lely : Hello !
VC : Where are you going ?
Lely : To the beach, for a sunset stroll
VC : Can I join you ?
Lely : Sure !
Max : Well let's go then.
They took a path that passes through a maze. Happily they found out how to reach the beach.
Lely : Wow ! It's really really cute !
Max : I don't have any words, this is just beautiful.
Yascamer : Hi, what are you doing
Lely : How did you came here ?
Yascamer : Euh, je vis ici
Lely : Ah ok
Max : Anyways, what do you think of the sunset Nudge ?
Nudge : It's beautiful. I've never seen a bloody red sunset. That evocates death, pain and killing. Deliciously sinful.
Lely : I don't even want to understand if this is a kink or a weird obsession for something horrible.
Ralsei : What about sleeping a bit guys ? I'm tired.
Lely : Yeah, why not.
Yascamer : si vous voulez, je pense que c'est une bonne idΓ©e
Nudge : Yeah let's get some rest.
Max : 😴😴😴
Lely : POV : You're a Snorlax
Nudge : Correct. Plus we lived something... unusual, but that was so cool though.
Lely : I'm so sorry about that. Though, the sunset is beautiful!
VC : Agreed.
The calm waves that hitted the beach slowly, the soft breeze... it made Nudge, Lely, Max, Yascamer and VC asleep in a minute. Though, Ralsei prepared something...
Ralsei : I got banned from MKPCverse, thanks to those idiots. Let's get some revenge BAHAHAHAHAHA !
To realize the perfect crime, Ralsei paid some Piantas off to silently bring the squad to a peculiarly horrible place.
Nudge : Wait where are we ??? Oh noooo... not in this kind of place... hey ! Lely ! Wake up please! *his eyes are becoming watery*
Lely : Whats happening Nudge ? *worried voice tone*
Nudge : Don't you feel hot ? God HAPPILY Toadboi isn't here.
Lely : Yes I do... oh, did Ralsei... r---
Nudge : LELY !!! NOT THE TIME TO BE DUMB ! *cries and bites his lips*
Lely : Oh gosh... don't tell me we are AGAIN in a burning pipe
Nudge : Yes we are! 😭
Lely : Oh no Nudge. Don't cry. You're too cute to cry. I don't want you to be sad.
Max : no.
No. NO. NOOOOO. NOOOOOOOOOOOO. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO !

To be continued...
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Yeah. I always saw MKPC Archipel as a feel good fanfic. That's why I wanted to sugarcoat this episode. Though, I'm also interested by darker tones and stories.
Is there any questions or requests you have to send ? I'll respond to them.
I love how I'm progressing, but the plane needs to quit the ground. He's about to quit it but he's unable so far...
Anyways, have a good day/evening/night ! ;)
~ Lely / Invu

It looks like you’ve set it up perfoctky for a character death. Now just to wait and see who does die

why are you so obsessed with character deaths?
Messages 226 - Toad Toad
vs14712 pts ★ Champion
battle7089 pts ★ Racer
Canada
Invu wrote:
Chapter 4 : Ralsei's revenge
Last time on MKPC Archipel... The heroes were trapped in a burning pipe by Ralsei, while they were sleeping.
Lely : Nudge, don't cry. I don't want you to cry. It's gonna be okay.
Nudge : 😭😭😭
Max : I have already seen times where it got canceled, but I didn't see any show with Lely, which was going wrong like this
Yascamer : ces une catastrophe *[
Ralsei : Be ready to fight... HAHAHAHAHAHA !
Nudge : Oh yes, we're getting out of this shitty pipe. We're fighting. I like it. Lely, stop hugging me and set me free.
Lely : Nudge, you're risking too much, due to your size. I'm 101% sure it's better for you to be in my arms
Nudge : But you're gonna fall
Lely : I don't want you to die, this is too dangerous for you and all of us know it
Nudge : Lely. Please.
Lely : *sighs* okay. Promise me to be careful, okay ?
Nudge : I'm stronger than you
Max : But
in this environment, you're risking more. However, this place is strange, I can feel something growing in my back  

Yascamer : max ton dos y  a des aile
Max : N'importe qu... QUOI ?
Lely : Some of the archipel's secret areas are really strange...
Max : definitively... Oh Lely. Your back as well, Nudge's one as well... everyone is getting wings
Lely : That is a great thing, the fight will be easier
Nudge : Exact
VC : Anyways, let's start. This volcano is burning hot and I want to get out.
Ralsei launched them out. He was in a flying Koopa machine, ready to launch his missiles.
Lely : You're doing that for a ban. Terrifying.
Nudge : Anyways, I will try to get on his flying car. I think it's possible, considering I'm now a bird bunny
Max : Be careful.
Ralsei : I've had enough! You guys were always pissing me off ! Max was telling me off, Nudge argued and Lely reported me ! Hellish trio ! But today, I'm going to flip the tables. It's me who will piss yall off. Well I'll even have a chance to end you ! That's a clever pleasure I deserved !
Lely : We're you supposed to look savage and cool ? You're kinda lacking abs and rejoinder
Ralsei : Shut up about the abs. You're fat.
Lely : Not much and anyways it's stupid. It won't make you smarter than me. I have to tell you I prefer being smart over being sportive
Ralsei : ENOUGH ! IM LAUCHING A MISSILE ON YOUR "BESTIE" !
Lely : NOOOOOO !!!!!!
Lely flied across the volcano to save Max and he took the missiles instead, causing his wings to burn and his head to get ached. He was about to fall in the volcano, but VC saved him.
Lely : si owe you one...
But VC accidentally let him fall. His weak body fel into the lava like the rocks thrower by kids fall in water. Some smoke exited that crual, terrifying ocean of lava, being in the shape of Lely.
Max : NOOOOOOOOOOOOO !!!!!
Nudge : Oh well πŸ˜•
VC : I'm so sorry 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Nudge : πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™
Max : 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Nudge : ☹πŸ₯ΊπŸ˜₯😒😭😭
Yascamer : What happened guys/girls
Max : Are you blind ? LELY DIED πŸ˜‘
Yascamer : ces triste mais bon on passe a  autre  chose
Nudge : Yascamer, you're not making sense. A human died and you want to move on...
Yascamer : bah en   meme temps Γ§a va ces t que  lely
VC : BUT THATS STILL A HUMAN ! I
SWEAR !

Max : RALSEEIIIII !!!! THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT !!!! 🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬
Ralsei : OH MY GAWSH DANG LOOK AT THIS BUNCH OF CRYBABIES GO CRY IN A TRASH NOBODY CARES ABOUT LELY HE IS AN ASSHOLE NOW LET ME KILL YOU AND STOP THE WHINING BECAUSE YOU LOOK LIKE DYING BITCHES
Max : I SWEAR WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU SAYING ! YOU WANTED TO KILL ME ! AND YOU KILLED MY BESTIE ! YOU TRAPPED US BECAUSE WE REPORTED YOU ON A WEBSITE ! BOOH HOOH HOOH !
Nudge : RALSEI I SWEAR HOW CAN YOU BE THIS OBNOXIOUS ! YOU KILLED SOMEONE WHO DESERVES TO LIVE AND YOU DONT HAVE ANY REGRETS ! YOUR MINDSET IS TERRIBLE ! WHAT IS THAT ! I LIKE FICTIONAL DEATHS BUT REAL DEATHS ARENT GOOD AT ALL !!!!
VC : YES I ACCIDENTALLY LET LELY FALL AND I WILL FEEL FOREVER GUILTY ABOUT THAT, BUT IF WE'RE INTO THIS CRAPPY PLACE, ITS BECAUSE YOU TRAPPED US ! YOURE THE PROBLEM IN THAT CASE !
Yascamer : Ah
d accord j ai compris
RALSEI TU VAS VOIR RAAAH

Max : I DONT WANT TO KILL YOU ! BUT I ALMOST DO ! AND I SWEAR ! YOURE GONNA PAY A PRICE ! I DONT KNOW WHAT WILL THE PRICE BE, BUT YOU WONT GET OUT OF THIS WITHOUT ANY PROBLEMS ! TRUST ME, IM DOING WHAT IM SAYING !
Nudge : ENOUGH OF THE PUNCHLINE FIGHT ! COME HERE RALSEI ! WE WILL FIX THIS WITH CLAWS, PAWS, HANDS, FISTS, TEETH AND NAILS !
Ralsei : Let's go ! Anyways I don't care, I'LL WIN ! YOU'RE JUST GONNA DIE LIKE LELY DID !
Nudge : I DON'T CARE !!! *jumps straight to Ralsei*
Nudge reached Ralsei's flying ship. Ralsei was protected from any damage, but Bunny was smart enough to sneak in. After only 5 minutes he found Ralsei. Ralsei pushed him in another room of the ship, and made the ship shake. That caused Bunny's head to be hurt many times. Ralsei went in every direction. Happily, Max slapped the fragile glass with his Snorlax hands. Ralsei almost fell in lava and screamed a lot. Though, he managed to jump off from the plane. Nudge was unlocking him out but the ship sunk in lava and Bunny burnt like Lely did, with smoke getting out.
Max : NOOOO !!!! *cries* RALSEI YOU ARE DONE. NOW YOUR SHIP SUNK, WE WILL TRULY FIGHT IN EQUAL POSITIONS. I DONT CARE ABOUT DYING. TONIGHT WILL BE DEPRESSING ANYWAYS SINCE YOU KILLED NUDGE AND LELY, MY TWO BEST FRIENDS. VC AND YASCAMER ARE EVEN UNABLE TO FIGHT BECAUSE THE HOTNESS OF THIS AREA IS CAUSING THEM HEADACHES. SO NOW IT'S 1V1. THE TWO OF US. NO MORE SHIP. NO MORE FRIENDS. I WANT TO TAKE MY REVENGE
ON YOU, SO TONIGHT I CAN GIVE MYSELF DEATH, BUT WHILE BEING HAPPY ! IF I EVER GIVE MYSELF DEATH WITHOUT WINNING OVER YOU, THEN YOU'LL CONTINUE TO BE PROUD OF YOURSELF, OF YOUR HORRIBLE ACTIONS. I SWEAR I WILL MAKE YOU UNDERSTAND.

Ralsei : IM READY IM READY ! IM ONLY WAITING FOR THAT YOU IDIOT !
An intense fight started between Max and Ralsei started. Max hitted Ralsei strongly many times,  and it didn't left Ralsei safe. Though, he had healing potions in his pockets, which rubbed out the pain from him. Max was hitting Ralsei passionately, without ever thinking it would stop someday. He was taking the revenge he deserved. Though he was going hard on Ralsei. Ralsei couldn't help it, but only tried to defend himself from Max. Max noticed Ralsei's potions and threw them in the volcano. The color of the lava turned green, and the weather was now pretty cool. It gave some chills to the fighters.
What Max did would actually help the next chapter of this story a lot. Though the fight continued, continued, and Ralsei was more and more exhausted. Though, he ripped Max's wings off, and Max fell down from where he was. He started to scream alot, and Yascamer, plus VC, screamed as well. It sounded done for them. Ralsei had won.
Though Ralsei fell off as well. Max could touch him and he pushed him under himself. (Max pushed Ralsei under himself) it caused Ralsei to be a boat for Max, and Max was able to reach a shore before Ralsei sunk under Max's snorlax weight. As soon as he reached it, he fainted for 5 minutes. When he woke up, he was sweating and he was still on the same shoreline. All the lava was drained though. Max had a headache and several injuries, but he was able to walk. He went to VC and Yascamer, who went pretty well since then. The trio was very sad of how it turned out. They found Lely, Nudge and Ralsei laying on the ground. They took the three bodies, and Max called the hospital and the firemen. Both helped them to get out of the volcano. It was now 11PM and Piantas were partying. The Archipelago looked so nice but without their friends, it felt weird and sad. So Max, VC and Yascamer carried the dead bodies into the cold water. While the sky was rosΓ© from the last remains of the sunset, they bathed the bodies in cold water, then they dried them. They brought them back at the huts and put them on the beds.

Max : Guys, let's take a snack. It will comfort us a bit.
VC : Agreed...
Max cried, thinking to Lely and Nudge, and to all the people who left. They just wanted to have fun and spend some time together, they ended up seeing some of them dead, some of them leaving, some of them fainting...
What was that?
They would hope for better days in the future. They would like Lely and Nudge to wake up. But life doesn't works like that. Sadly, you have sometimes to face the worst shits you haven't deserved.

Max : 😭😭😭
🎢But tonight I'll be the happiest girl in the world,
You'll see it, like it doesn't matters
Tonight, I'll be the happiest girl in the world
You'll see it, like it never happened🎢
Lely : Ouch... what just happened...
Nudge : Do you think I know ?
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please tell me this isn't the end. please.
Messages 11442 - King Mario King Mario
vs35065 pts ★ Legend
battle6102 pts ★ Racer
France
VC wrote:
Invu wrote:
Chapter 4 : Ralsei's revenge
Last time on MKPC Archipel... The heroes were trapped in a burning pipe by Ralsei, while they were sleeping.
Lely : Nudge, don't cry. I don't want you to cry. It's gonna be okay.
Nudge : 😭😭😭
Max : I have already seen times where it got canceled, but I didn't see any show with Lely, which was going wrong like this
Yascamer : ces une catastrophe *[
Ralsei : Be ready to fight... HAHAHAHAHAHA !
Nudge : Oh yes, we're getting out of this shitty pipe. We're fighting. I like it. Lely, stop hugging me and set me free.
Lely : Nudge, you're risking too much, due to your size. I'm 101% sure it's better for you to be in my arms
Nudge : But you're gonna fall
Lely : I don't want you to die, this is too dangerous for you and all of us know it
Nudge : Lely. Please.
Lely : *sighs* okay. Promise me to be careful, okay ?
Nudge : I'm stronger than you
Max : But
in this environment, you're risking more. However, this place is strange, I can feel something growing in my back  

Yascamer : max ton dos y  a des aile
Max : N'importe qu... QUOI ?
Lely : Some of the archipel's secret areas are really strange...
Max : definitively... Oh Lely. Your back as well, Nudge's one as well... everyone is getting wings
Lely : That is a great thing, the fight will be easier
Nudge : Exact
VC : Anyways, let's start. This volcano is burning hot and I want to get out.
Ralsei launched them out. He was in a flying Koopa machine, ready to launch his missiles.
Lely : You're doing that for a ban. Terrifying.
Nudge : Anyways, I will try to get on his flying car. I think it's possible, considering I'm now a bird bunny
Max : Be careful.
Ralsei : I've had enough! You guys were always pissing me off ! Max was telling me off, Nudge argued and Lely reported me ! Hellish trio ! But today, I'm going to flip the tables. It's me who will piss yall off. Well I'll even have a chance to end you ! That's a clever pleasure I deserved !
Lely : We're you supposed to look savage and cool ? You're kinda lacking abs and rejoinder
Ralsei : Shut up about the abs. You're fat.
Lely : Not much and anyways it's stupid. It won't make you smarter than me. I have to tell you I prefer being smart over being sportive
Ralsei : ENOUGH ! IM LAUCHING A MISSILE ON YOUR "BESTIE" !
Lely : NOOOOOO !!!!!!
Lely flied across the volcano to save Max and he took the missiles instead, causing his wings to burn and his head to get ached. He was about to fall in the volcano, but VC saved him.
Lely : si owe you one...
But VC accidentally let him fall. His weak body fel into the lava like the rocks thrower by kids fall in water. Some smoke exited that crual, terrifying ocean of lava, being in the shape of Lely.
Max : NOOOOOOOOOOOOO !!!!!
Nudge : Oh well πŸ˜•
VC : I'm so sorry 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Nudge : πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™
Max : 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Nudge : ☹πŸ₯ΊπŸ˜₯😒😭😭
Yascamer : What happened guys/girls
Max : Are you blind ? LELY DIED πŸ˜‘
Yascamer : ces triste mais bon on passe a  autre  chose
Nudge : Yascamer, you're not making sense. A human died and you want to move on...
Yascamer : bah en   meme temps Γ§a va ces t que  lely
VC : BUT THATS STILL A HUMAN ! I
SWEAR !

Max : RALSEEIIIII !!!! THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT !!!! 🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬
Ralsei : OH MY GAWSH DANG LOOK AT THIS BUNCH OF CRYBABIES GO CRY IN A TRASH NOBODY CARES ABOUT LELY HE IS AN ASSHOLE NOW LET ME KILL YOU AND STOP THE WHINING BECAUSE YOU LOOK LIKE DYING BITCHES
Max : I SWEAR WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU SAYING ! YOU WANTED TO KILL ME ! AND YOU KILLED MY BESTIE ! YOU TRAPPED US BECAUSE WE REPORTED YOU ON A WEBSITE ! BOOH HOOH HOOH !
Nudge : RALSEI I SWEAR HOW CAN YOU BE THIS OBNOXIOUS ! YOU KILLED SOMEONE WHO DESERVES TO LIVE AND YOU DONT HAVE ANY REGRETS ! YOUR MINDSET IS TERRIBLE ! WHAT IS THAT ! I LIKE FICTIONAL DEATHS BUT REAL DEATHS ARENT GOOD AT ALL !!!!
VC : YES I ACCIDENTALLY LET LELY FALL AND I WILL FEEL FOREVER GUILTY ABOUT THAT, BUT IF WE'RE INTO THIS CRAPPY PLACE, ITS BECAUSE YOU TRAPPED US ! YOURE THE PROBLEM IN THAT CASE !
Yascamer : Ah
d accord j ai compris
RALSEI TU VAS VOIR RAAAH

Max : I DONT WANT TO KILL YOU ! BUT I ALMOST DO ! AND I SWEAR ! YOURE GONNA PAY A PRICE ! I DONT KNOW WHAT WILL THE PRICE BE, BUT YOU WONT GET OUT OF THIS WITHOUT ANY PROBLEMS ! TRUST ME, IM DOING WHAT IM SAYING !
Nudge : ENOUGH OF THE PUNCHLINE FIGHT ! COME HERE RALSEI ! WE WILL FIX THIS WITH CLAWS, PAWS, HANDS, FISTS, TEETH AND NAILS !
Ralsei : Let's go ! Anyways I don't care, I'LL WIN ! YOU'RE JUST GONNA DIE LIKE LELY DID !
Nudge : I DON'T CARE !!! *jumps straight to Ralsei*
Nudge reached Ralsei's flying ship. Ralsei was protected from any damage, but Bunny was smart enough to sneak in. After only 5 minutes he found Ralsei. Ralsei pushed him in another room of the ship, and made the ship shake. That caused Bunny's head to be hurt many times. Ralsei went in every direction. Happily, Max slapped the fragile glass with his Snorlax hands. Ralsei almost fell in lava and screamed a lot. Though, he managed to jump off from the plane. Nudge was unlocking him out but the ship sunk in lava and Bunny burnt like Lely did, with smoke getting out.
Max : NOOOO !!!! *cries* RALSEI YOU ARE DONE. NOW YOUR SHIP SUNK, WE WILL TRULY FIGHT IN EQUAL POSITIONS. I DONT CARE ABOUT DYING. TONIGHT WILL BE DEPRESSING ANYWAYS SINCE YOU KILLED NUDGE AND LELY, MY TWO BEST FRIENDS. VC AND YASCAMER ARE EVEN UNABLE TO FIGHT BECAUSE THE HOTNESS OF THIS AREA IS CAUSING THEM HEADACHES. SO NOW IT'S 1V1. THE TWO OF US. NO MORE SHIP. NO MORE FRIENDS. I WANT TO TAKE MY REVENGE
ON YOU, SO TONIGHT I CAN GIVE MYSELF DEATH, BUT WHILE BEING HAPPY ! IF I EVER GIVE MYSELF DEATH WITHOUT WINNING OVER YOU, THEN YOU'LL CONTINUE TO BE PROUD OF YOURSELF, OF YOUR HORRIBLE ACTIONS. I SWEAR I WILL MAKE YOU UNDERSTAND.

Ralsei : IM READY IM READY ! IM ONLY WAITING FOR THAT YOU IDIOT !
An intense fight started between Max and Ralsei started. Max hitted Ralsei strongly many times,  and it didn't left Ralsei safe. Though, he had healing potions in his pockets, which rubbed out the pain from him. Max was hitting Ralsei passionately, without ever thinking it would stop someday. He was taking the revenge he deserved. Though he was going hard on Ralsei. Ralsei couldn't help it, but only tried to defend himself from Max. Max noticed Ralsei's potions and threw them in the volcano. The color of the lava turned green, and the weather was now pretty cool. It gave some chills to the fighters.
What Max did would actually help the next chapter of this story a lot. Though the fight continued, continued, and Ralsei was more and more exhausted. Though, he ripped Max's wings off, and Max fell down from where he was. He started to scream alot, and Yascamer, plus VC, screamed as well. It sounded done for them. Ralsei had won.
Though Ralsei fell off as well. Max could touch him and he pushed him under himself. (Max pushed Ralsei under himself) it caused Ralsei to be a boat for Max, and Max was able to reach a shore before Ralsei sunk under Max's snorlax weight. As soon as he reached it, he fainted for 5 minutes. When he woke up, he was sweating and he was still on the same shoreline. All the lava was drained though. Max had a headache and several injuries, but he was able to walk. He went to VC and Yascamer, who went pretty well since then. The trio was very sad of how it turned out. They found Lely, Nudge and Ralsei laying on the ground. They took the three bodies, and Max called the hospital and the firemen. Both helped them to get out of the volcano. It was now 11PM and Piantas were partying. The Archipelago looked so nice but without their friends, it felt weird and sad. So Max, VC and Yascamer carried the dead bodies into the cold water. While the sky was rosΓ© from the last remains of the sunset, they bathed the bodies in cold water, then they dried them. They brought them back at the huts and put them on the beds.

Max : Guys, let's take a snack. It will comfort us a bit.
VC : Agreed...
Max cried, thinking to Lely and Nudge, and to all the people who left. They just wanted to have fun and spend some time together, they ended up seeing some of them dead, some of them leaving, some of them fainting...
What was that?
They would hope for better days in the future. They would like Lely and Nudge to wake up. But life doesn't works like that. Sadly, you have sometimes to face the worst shits you haven't deserved.

Max : 😭😭😭
🎢But tonight I'll be the happiest girl in the world,
You'll see it, like it doesn't matters
Tonight, I'll be the happiest girl in the world
You'll see it, like it never happened🎢
Lely : Ouch... what just happened...
Nudge : Do you think I know ?
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Please share your thoughts
β€πŸ§‘πŸ’›πŸ’šπŸ’™πŸ’œπŸ’–

please tell me this isn't the end. please.

Not at all. MKPC Archipel is gonna be a long as ride. I think it's gonna last at least 20 episodes, it's my goal, and it could last... I don't know, but that's not the end.
There's even a hint about it
Messages 226 - Toad Toad
vs14712 pts ★ Champion
battle7089 pts ★ Racer
Canada
Invu wrote:
VC wrote:
Invu wrote:
Chapter 4 : Ralsei's revenge
Last time on MKPC Archipel... The heroes were trapped in a burning pipe by Ralsei, while they were sleeping.
Lely : Nudge, don't cry. I don't want you to cry. It's gonna be okay.
Nudge : 😭😭😭
Max : I have already seen times where it got canceled, but I didn't see any show with Lely, which was going wrong like this
Yascamer : ces une catastrophe *[
Ralsei : Be ready to fight... HAHAHAHAHAHA !
Nudge : Oh yes, we're getting out of this shitty pipe. We're fighting. I like it. Lely, stop hugging me and set me free.
Lely : Nudge, you're risking too much, due to your size. I'm 101% sure it's better for you to be in my arms
Nudge : But you're gonna fall
Lely : I don't want you to die, this is too dangerous for you and all of us know it
Nudge : Lely. Please.
Lely : *sighs* okay. Promise me to be careful, okay ?
Nudge : I'm stronger than you
Max : But
in this environment, you're risking more. However, this place is strange, I can feel something growing in my back  

Yascamer : max ton dos y  a des aile
Max : N'importe qu... QUOI ?
Lely : Some of the archipel's secret areas are really strange...
Max : definitively... Oh Lely. Your back as well, Nudge's one as well... everyone is getting wings
Lely : That is a great thing, the fight will be easier
Nudge : Exact
VC : Anyways, let's start. This volcano is burning hot and I want to get out.
Ralsei launched them out. He was in a flying Koopa machine, ready to launch his missiles.
Lely : You're doing that for a ban. Terrifying.
Nudge : Anyways, I will try to get on his flying car. I think it's possible, considering I'm now a bird bunny
Max : Be careful.
Ralsei : I've had enough! You guys were always pissing me off ! Max was telling me off, Nudge argued and Lely reported me ! Hellish trio ! But today, I'm going to flip the tables. It's me who will piss yall off. Well I'll even have a chance to end you ! That's a clever pleasure I deserved !
Lely : We're you supposed to look savage and cool ? You're kinda lacking abs and rejoinder
Ralsei : Shut up about the abs. You're fat.
Lely : Not much and anyways it's stupid. It won't make you smarter than me. I have to tell you I prefer being smart over being sportive
Ralsei : ENOUGH ! IM LAUCHING A MISSILE ON YOUR "BESTIE" !
Lely : NOOOOOO !!!!!!
Lely flied across the volcano to save Max and he took the missiles instead, causing his wings to burn and his head to get ached. He was about to fall in the volcano, but VC saved him.
Lely : si owe you one...
But VC accidentally let him fall. His weak body fel into the lava like the rocks thrower by kids fall in water. Some smoke exited that crual, terrifying ocean of lava, being in the shape of Lely.
Max : NOOOOOOOOOOOOO !!!!!
Nudge : Oh well πŸ˜•
VC : I'm so sorry 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Nudge : πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™
Max : 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Nudge : ☹πŸ₯ΊπŸ˜₯😒😭😭
Yascamer : What happened guys/girls
Max : Are you blind ? LELY DIED πŸ˜‘
Yascamer : ces triste mais bon on passe a  autre  chose
Nudge : Yascamer, you're not making sense. A human died and you want to move on...
Yascamer : bah en   meme temps Γ§a va ces t que  lely
VC : BUT THATS STILL A HUMAN ! I
SWEAR !

Max : RALSEEIIIII !!!! THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT !!!! 🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬
Ralsei : OH MY GAWSH DANG LOOK AT THIS BUNCH OF CRYBABIES GO CRY IN A TRASH NOBODY CARES ABOUT LELY HE IS AN ASSHOLE NOW LET ME KILL YOU AND STOP THE WHINING BECAUSE YOU LOOK LIKE DYING BITCHES
Max : I SWEAR WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU SAYING ! YOU WANTED TO KILL ME ! AND YOU KILLED MY BESTIE ! YOU TRAPPED US BECAUSE WE REPORTED YOU ON A WEBSITE ! BOOH HOOH HOOH !
Nudge : RALSEI I SWEAR HOW CAN YOU BE THIS OBNOXIOUS ! YOU KILLED SOMEONE WHO DESERVES TO LIVE AND YOU DONT HAVE ANY REGRETS ! YOUR MINDSET IS TERRIBLE ! WHAT IS THAT ! I LIKE FICTIONAL DEATHS BUT REAL DEATHS ARENT GOOD AT ALL !!!!
VC : YES I ACCIDENTALLY LET LELY FALL AND I WILL FEEL FOREVER GUILTY ABOUT THAT, BUT IF WE'RE INTO THIS CRAPPY PLACE, ITS BECAUSE YOU TRAPPED US ! YOURE THE PROBLEM IN THAT CASE !
Yascamer : Ah
d accord j ai compris
RALSEI TU VAS VOIR RAAAH

Max : I DONT WANT TO KILL YOU ! BUT I ALMOST DO ! AND I SWEAR ! YOURE GONNA PAY A PRICE ! I DONT KNOW WHAT WILL THE PRICE BE, BUT YOU WONT GET OUT OF THIS WITHOUT ANY PROBLEMS ! TRUST ME, IM DOING WHAT IM SAYING !
Nudge : ENOUGH OF THE PUNCHLINE FIGHT ! COME HERE RALSEI ! WE WILL FIX THIS WITH CLAWS, PAWS, HANDS, FISTS, TEETH AND NAILS !
Ralsei : Let's go ! Anyways I don't care, I'LL WIN ! YOU'RE JUST GONNA DIE LIKE LELY DID !
Nudge : I DON'T CARE !!! *jumps straight to Ralsei*
Nudge reached Ralsei's flying ship. Ralsei was protected from any damage, but Bunny was smart enough to sneak in. After only 5 minutes he found Ralsei. Ralsei pushed him in another room of the ship, and made the ship shake. That caused Bunny's head to be hurt many times. Ralsei went in every direction. Happily, Max slapped the fragile glass with his Snorlax hands. Ralsei almost fell in lava and screamed a lot. Though, he managed to jump off from the plane. Nudge was unlocking him out but the ship sunk in lava and Bunny burnt like Lely did, with smoke getting out.
Max : NOOOO !!!! *cries* RALSEI YOU ARE DONE. NOW YOUR SHIP SUNK, WE WILL TRULY FIGHT IN EQUAL POSITIONS. I DONT CARE ABOUT DYING. TONIGHT WILL BE DEPRESSING ANYWAYS SINCE YOU KILLED NUDGE AND LELY, MY TWO BEST FRIENDS. VC AND YASCAMER ARE EVEN UNABLE TO FIGHT BECAUSE THE HOTNESS OF THIS AREA IS CAUSING THEM HEADACHES. SO NOW IT'S 1V1. THE TWO OF US. NO MORE SHIP. NO MORE FRIENDS. I WANT TO TAKE MY REVENGE
ON YOU, SO TONIGHT I CAN GIVE MYSELF DEATH, BUT WHILE BEING HAPPY ! IF I EVER GIVE MYSELF DEATH WITHOUT WINNING OVER YOU, THEN YOU'LL CONTINUE TO BE PROUD OF YOURSELF, OF YOUR HORRIBLE ACTIONS. I SWEAR I WILL MAKE YOU UNDERSTAND.

Ralsei : IM READY IM READY ! IM ONLY WAITING FOR THAT YOU IDIOT !
An intense fight started between Max and Ralsei started. Max hitted Ralsei strongly many times,  and it didn't left Ralsei safe. Though, he had healing potions in his pockets, which rubbed out the pain from him. Max was hitting Ralsei passionately, without ever thinking it would stop someday. He was taking the revenge he deserved. Though he was going hard on Ralsei. Ralsei couldn't help it, but only tried to defend himself from Max. Max noticed Ralsei's potions and threw them in the volcano. The color of the lava turned green, and the weather was now pretty cool. It gave some chills to the fighters.
What Max did would actually help the next chapter of this story a lot. Though the fight continued, continued, and Ralsei was more and more exhausted. Though, he ripped Max's wings off, and Max fell down from where he was. He started to scream alot, and Yascamer, plus VC, screamed as well. It sounded done for them. Ralsei had won.
Though Ralsei fell off as well. Max could touch him and he pushed him under himself. (Max pushed Ralsei under himself) it caused Ralsei to be a boat for Max, and Max was able to reach a shore before Ralsei sunk under Max's snorlax weight. As soon as he reached it, he fainted for 5 minutes. When he woke up, he was sweating and he was still on the same shoreline. All the lava was drained though. Max had a headache and several injuries, but he was able to walk. He went to VC and Yascamer, who went pretty well since then. The trio was very sad of how it turned out. They found Lely, Nudge and Ralsei laying on the ground. They took the three bodies, and Max called the hospital and the firemen. Both helped them to get out of the volcano. It was now 11PM and Piantas were partying. The Archipelago looked so nice but without their friends, it felt weird and sad. So Max, VC and Yascamer carried the dead bodies into the cold water. While the sky was rosΓ© from the last remains of the sunset, they bathed the bodies in cold water, then they dried them. They brought them back at the huts and put them on the beds.

Max : Guys, let's take a snack. It will comfort us a bit.
VC : Agreed...
Max cried, thinking to Lely and Nudge, and to all the people who left. They just wanted to have fun and spend some time together, they ended up seeing some of them dead, some of them leaving, some of them fainting...
What was that?
They would hope for better days in the future. They would like Lely and Nudge to wake up. But life doesn't works like that. Sadly, you have sometimes to face the worst shits you haven't deserved.

Max : 😭😭😭
🎢But tonight I'll be the happiest girl in the world,
You'll see it, like it doesn't matters
Tonight, I'll be the happiest girl in the world
You'll see it, like it never happened🎢
Lely : Ouch... what just happened...
Nudge : Do you think I know ?
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please tell me this isn't the end. please.

Not at all. MKPC Archipel is gonna be a long as ride. I think it's gonna last at least 20 episodes, it's my goal, and it could last... I don't know, but that's not the end.
There's even a hint about it

also: sidenote: what's the song at the end of this episode?
Messages 518 - Mario Mario
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Invu wrote:
Chapter 4 : Ralsei's revenge
Last time on MKPC Archipel... The heroes were trapped in a burning pipe by Ralsei, while they were sleeping.
Lely : Nudge, don't cry. I don't want you to cry. It's gonna be okay.
Nudge : 😭😭😭
Max : I have already seen times where it got canceled, but I didn't see any show with Lely, which was going wrong like this
Yascamer : ces une catastrophe *[
Ralsei : Be ready to fight... HAHAHAHAHAHA !
Nudge : Oh yes, we're getting out of this shitty pipe. We're fighting. I like it. Lely, stop hugging me and set me free.
Lely : Nudge, you're risking too much, due to your size. I'm 101% sure it's better for you to be in my arms
Nudge : But you're gonna fall
Lely : I don't want you to die, this is too dangerous for you and all of us know it
Nudge : Lely. Please.
Lely : *sighs* okay. Promise me to be careful, okay ?
Nudge : I'm stronger than you
Max : But
in this environment, you're risking more. However, this place is strange, I can feel something growing in my back  

Yascamer : max ton dos y  a des aile
Max : N'importe qu... QUOI ?
Lely : Some of the archipel's secret areas are really strange...
Max : definitively... Oh Lely. Your back as well, Nudge's one as well... everyone is getting wings
Lely : That is a great thing, the fight will be easier
Nudge : Exact
VC : Anyways, let's start. This volcano is burning hot and I want to get out.
Ralsei launched them out. He was in a flying Koopa machine, ready to launch his missiles.
Lely : You're doing that for a ban. Terrifying.
Nudge : Anyways, I will try to get on his flying car. I think it's possible, considering I'm now a bird bunny
Max : Be careful.
Ralsei : I've had enough! You guys were always pissing me off ! Max was telling me off, Nudge argued and Lely reported me ! Hellish trio ! But today, I'm going to flip the tables. It's me who will piss yall off. Well I'll even have a chance to end you ! That's a clever pleasure I deserved !
Lely : We're you supposed to look savage and cool ? You're kinda lacking abs and rejoinder
Ralsei : Shut up about the abs. You're fat.
Lely : Not much and anyways it's stupid. It won't make you smarter than me. I have to tell you I prefer being smart over being sportive
Ralsei : ENOUGH ! IM LAUCHING A MISSILE ON YOUR "BESTIE" !
Lely : NOOOOOO !!!!!!
Lely flied across the volcano to save Max and he took the missiles instead, causing his wings to burn and his head to get ached. He was about to fall in the volcano, but VC saved him.
Lely : si owe you one...
But VC accidentally let him fall. His weak body fel into the lava like the rocks thrower by kids fall in water. Some smoke exited that crual, terrifying ocean of lava, being in the shape of Lely.
Max : NOOOOOOOOOOOOO !!!!!
Nudge : Oh well πŸ˜•
VC : I'm so sorry 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Nudge : πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™
Max : 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Nudge : ☹πŸ₯ΊπŸ˜₯😒😭😭
Yascamer : What happened guys/girls
Max : Are you blind ? LELY DIED πŸ˜‘
Yascamer : ces triste mais bon on passe a  autre  chose
Nudge : Yascamer, you're not making sense. A human died and you want to move on...
Yascamer : bah en   meme temps Γ§a va ces t que  lely
VC : BUT THATS STILL A HUMAN ! I
SWEAR !

Max : RALSEEIIIII !!!! THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT !!!! 🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬
Ralsei : OH MY GAWSH DANG LOOK AT THIS BUNCH OF CRYBABIES GO CRY IN A TRASH NOBODY CARES ABOUT LELY HE IS AN ASSHOLE NOW LET ME KILL YOU AND STOP THE WHINING BECAUSE YOU LOOK LIKE DYING BITCHES
Max : I SWEAR WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU SAYING ! YOU WANTED TO KILL ME ! AND YOU KILLED MY BESTIE ! YOU TRAPPED US BECAUSE WE REPORTED YOU ON A WEBSITE ! BOOH HOOH HOOH !
Nudge : RALSEI I SWEAR HOW CAN YOU BE THIS OBNOXIOUS ! YOU KILLED SOMEONE WHO DESERVES TO LIVE AND YOU DONT HAVE ANY REGRETS ! YOUR MINDSET IS TERRIBLE ! WHAT IS THAT ! I LIKE FICTIONAL DEATHS BUT REAL DEATHS ARENT GOOD AT ALL !!!!
VC : YES I ACCIDENTALLY LET LELY FALL AND I WILL FEEL FOREVER GUILTY ABOUT THAT, BUT IF WE'RE INTO THIS CRAPPY PLACE, ITS BECAUSE YOU TRAPPED US ! YOURE THE PROBLEM IN THAT CASE !
Yascamer : Ah
d accord j ai compris
RALSEI TU VAS VOIR RAAAH

Max : I DONT WANT TO KILL YOU ! BUT I ALMOST DO ! AND I SWEAR ! YOURE GONNA PAY A PRICE ! I DONT KNOW WHAT WILL THE PRICE BE, BUT YOU WONT GET OUT OF THIS WITHOUT ANY PROBLEMS ! TRUST ME, IM DOING WHAT IM SAYING !
Nudge : ENOUGH OF THE PUNCHLINE FIGHT ! COME HERE RALSEI ! WE WILL FIX THIS WITH CLAWS, PAWS, HANDS, FISTS, TEETH AND NAILS !
Ralsei : Let's go ! Anyways I don't care, I'LL WIN ! YOU'RE JUST GONNA DIE LIKE LELY DID !
Nudge : I DON'T CARE !!! *jumps straight to Ralsei*
Nudge reached Ralsei's flying ship. Ralsei was protected from any damage, but Bunny was smart enough to sneak in. After only 5 minutes he found Ralsei. Ralsei pushed him in another room of the ship, and made the ship shake. That caused Bunny's head to be hurt many times. Ralsei went in every direction. Happily, Max slapped the fragile glass with his Snorlax hands. Ralsei almost fell in lava and screamed a lot. Though, he managed to jump off from the plane. Nudge was unlocking him out but the ship sunk in lava and Bunny burnt like Lely did, with smoke getting out.
Max : NOOOO !!!! *cries* RALSEI YOU ARE DONE. NOW YOUR SHIP SUNK, WE WILL TRULY FIGHT IN EQUAL POSITIONS. I DONT CARE ABOUT DYING. TONIGHT WILL BE DEPRESSING ANYWAYS SINCE YOU KILLED NUDGE AND LELY, MY TWO BEST FRIENDS. VC AND YASCAMER ARE EVEN UNABLE TO FIGHT BECAUSE THE HOTNESS OF THIS AREA IS CAUSING THEM HEADACHES. SO NOW IT'S 1V1. THE TWO OF US. NO MORE SHIP. NO MORE FRIENDS. I WANT TO TAKE MY REVENGE
ON YOU, SO TONIGHT I CAN GIVE MYSELF DEATH, BUT WHILE BEING HAPPY ! IF I EVER GIVE MYSELF DEATH WITHOUT WINNING OVER YOU, THEN YOU'LL CONTINUE TO BE PROUD OF YOURSELF, OF YOUR HORRIBLE ACTIONS. I SWEAR I WILL MAKE YOU UNDERSTAND.

Ralsei : IM READY IM READY ! IM ONLY WAITING FOR THAT YOU IDIOT !
An intense fight started between Max and Ralsei started. Max hitted Ralsei strongly many times,  and it didn't left Ralsei safe. Though, he had healing potions in his pockets, which rubbed out the pain from him. Max was hitting Ralsei passionately, without ever thinking it would stop someday. He was taking the revenge he deserved. Though he was going hard on Ralsei. Ralsei couldn't help it, but only tried to defend himself from Max. Max noticed Ralsei's potions and threw them in the volcano. The color of the lava turned green, and the weather was now pretty cool. It gave some chills to the fighters.
What Max did would actually help the next chapter of this story a lot. Though the fight continued, continued, and Ralsei was more and more exhausted. Though, he ripped Max's wings off, and Max fell down from where he was. He started to scream alot, and Yascamer, plus VC, screamed as well. It sounded done for them. Ralsei had won.
Though Ralsei fell off as well. Max could touch him and he pushed him under himself. (Max pushed Ralsei under himself) it caused Ralsei to be a boat for Max, and Max was able to reach a shore before Ralsei sunk under Max's snorlax weight. As soon as he reached it, he fainted for 5 minutes. When he woke up, he was sweating and he was still on the same shoreline. All the lava was drained though. Max had a headache and several injuries, but he was able to walk. He went to VC and Yascamer, who went pretty well since then. The trio was very sad of how it turned out. They found Lely, Nudge and Ralsei laying on the ground. They took the three bodies, and Max called the hospital and the firemen. Both helped them to get out of the volcano. It was now 11PM and Piantas were partying. The Archipelago looked so nice but without their friends, it felt weird and sad. So Max, VC and Yascamer carried the dead bodies into the cold water. While the sky was rosΓ© from the last remains of the sunset, they bathed the bodies in cold water, then they dried them. They brought them back at the huts and put them on the beds.

Max : Guys, let's take a snack. It will comfort us a bit.
VC : Agreed...
Max cried, thinking to Lely and Nudge, and to all the people who left. They just wanted to have fun and spend some time together, they ended up seeing some of them dead, some of them leaving, some of them fainting...
What was that?
They would hope for better days in the future. They would like Lely and Nudge to wake up. But life doesn't works like that. Sadly, you have sometimes to face the worst shits you haven't deserved.

Max : 😭😭😭
🎢But tonight I'll be the happiest girl in the world,
You'll see it, like it doesn't matters
Tonight, I'll be the happiest girl in the world
You'll see it, like it never happened🎢
Lely : Ouch... what just happened...
Nudge : Do you think I know ?
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I hope the other wake up at some point after the boat challenge.
thinking1
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battle6102 pts ★ Racer
France
Master8 wrote:
Invu wrote:
Chapter 4 : Ralsei's revenge
Last time on MKPC Archipel... The heroes were trapped in a burning pipe by Ralsei, while they were sleeping.
Lely : Nudge, don't cry. I don't want you to cry. It's gonna be okay.
Nudge : 😭😭😭
Max : I have already seen times where it got canceled, but I didn't see any show with Lely, which was going wrong like this
Yascamer : ces une catastrophe *[
Ralsei : Be ready to fight... HAHAHAHAHAHA !
Nudge : Oh yes, we're getting out of this shitty pipe. We're fighting. I like it. Lely, stop hugging me and set me free.
Lely : Nudge, you're risking too much, due to your size. I'm 101% sure it's better for you to be in my arms
Nudge : But you're gonna fall
Lely : I don't want you to die, this is too dangerous for you and all of us know it
Nudge : Lely. Please.
Lely : *sighs* okay. Promise me to be careful, okay ?
Nudge : I'm stronger than you
Max : But
in this environment, you're risking more. However, this place is strange, I can feel something growing in my back  

Yascamer : max ton dos y  a des aile
Max : N'importe qu... QUOI ?
Lely : Some of the archipel's secret areas are really strange...
Max : definitively... Oh Lely. Your back as well, Nudge's one as well... everyone is getting wings
Lely : That is a great thing, the fight will be easier
Nudge : Exact
VC : Anyways, let's start. This volcano is burning hot and I want to get out.
Ralsei launched them out. He was in a flying Koopa machine, ready to launch his missiles.
Lely : You're doing that for a ban. Terrifying.
Nudge : Anyways, I will try to get on his flying car. I think it's possible, considering I'm now a bird bunny
Max : Be careful.
Ralsei : I've had enough! You guys were always pissing me off ! Max was telling me off, Nudge argued and Lely reported me ! Hellish trio ! But today, I'm going to flip the tables. It's me who will piss yall off. Well I'll even have a chance to end you ! That's a clever pleasure I deserved !
Lely : We're you supposed to look savage and cool ? You're kinda lacking abs and rejoinder
Ralsei : Shut up about the abs. You're fat.
Lely : Not much and anyways it's stupid. It won't make you smarter than me. I have to tell you I prefer being smart over being sportive
Ralsei : ENOUGH ! IM LAUCHING A MISSILE ON YOUR "BESTIE" !
Lely : NOOOOOO !!!!!!
Lely flied across the volcano to save Max and he took the missiles instead, causing his wings to burn and his head to get ached. He was about to fall in the volcano, but VC saved him.
Lely : si owe you one...
But VC accidentally let him fall. His weak body fel into the lava like the rocks thrower by kids fall in water. Some smoke exited that crual, terrifying ocean of lava, being in the shape of Lely.
Max : NOOOOOOOOOOOOO !!!!!
Nudge : Oh well πŸ˜•
VC : I'm so sorry 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Nudge : πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™
Max : 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Nudge : ☹πŸ₯ΊπŸ˜₯😒😭😭
Yascamer : What happened guys/girls
Max : Are you blind ? LELY DIED πŸ˜‘
Yascamer : ces triste mais bon on passe a  autre  chose
Nudge : Yascamer, you're not making sense. A human died and you want to move on...
Yascamer : bah en   meme temps Γ§a va ces t que  lely
VC : BUT THATS STILL A HUMAN ! I
SWEAR !

Max : RALSEEIIIII !!!! THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT !!!! 🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬🀬
Ralsei : OH MY GAWSH DANG LOOK AT THIS BUNCH OF CRYBABIES GO CRY IN A TRASH NOBODY CARES ABOUT LELY HE IS AN ASSHOLE NOW LET ME KILL YOU AND STOP THE WHINING BECAUSE YOU LOOK LIKE DYING BITCHES
Max : I SWEAR WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU SAYING ! YOU WANTED TO KILL ME ! AND YOU KILLED MY BESTIE ! YOU TRAPPED US BECAUSE WE REPORTED YOU ON A WEBSITE ! BOOH HOOH HOOH !
Nudge : RALSEI I SWEAR HOW CAN YOU BE THIS OBNOXIOUS ! YOU KILLED SOMEONE WHO DESERVES TO LIVE AND YOU DONT HAVE ANY REGRETS ! YOUR MINDSET IS TERRIBLE ! WHAT IS THAT ! I LIKE FICTIONAL DEATHS BUT REAL DEATHS ARENT GOOD AT ALL !!!!
VC : YES I ACCIDENTALLY LET LELY FALL AND I WILL FEEL FOREVER GUILTY ABOUT THAT, BUT IF WE'RE INTO THIS CRAPPY PLACE, ITS BECAUSE YOU TRAPPED US ! YOURE THE PROBLEM IN THAT CASE !
Yascamer : Ah
d accord j ai compris
RALSEI TU VAS VOIR RAAAH

Max : I DONT WANT TO KILL YOU ! BUT I ALMOST DO ! AND I SWEAR ! YOURE GONNA PAY A PRICE ! I DONT KNOW WHAT WILL THE PRICE BE, BUT YOU WONT GET OUT OF THIS WITHOUT ANY PROBLEMS ! TRUST ME, IM DOING WHAT IM SAYING !
Nudge : ENOUGH OF THE PUNCHLINE FIGHT ! COME HERE RALSEI ! WE WILL FIX THIS WITH CLAWS, PAWS, HANDS, FISTS, TEETH AND NAILS !
Ralsei : Let's go ! Anyways I don't care, I'LL WIN ! YOU'RE JUST GONNA DIE LIKE LELY DID !
Nudge : I DON'T CARE !!! *jumps straight to Ralsei*
Nudge reached Ralsei's flying ship. Ralsei was protected from any damage, but Bunny was smart enough to sneak in. After only 5 minutes he found Ralsei. Ralsei pushed him in another room of the ship, and made the ship shake. That caused Bunny's head to be hurt many times. Ralsei went in every direction. Happily, Max slapped the fragile glass with his Snorlax hands. Ralsei almost fell in lava and screamed a lot. Though, he managed to jump off from the plane. Nudge was unlocking him out but the ship sunk in lava and Bunny burnt like Lely did, with smoke getting out.
Max : NOOOO !!!! *cries* RALSEI YOU ARE DONE. NOW YOUR SHIP SUNK, WE WILL TRULY FIGHT IN EQUAL POSITIONS. I DONT CARE ABOUT DYING. TONIGHT WILL BE DEPRESSING ANYWAYS SINCE YOU KILLED NUDGE AND LELY, MY TWO BEST FRIENDS. VC AND YASCAMER ARE EVEN UNABLE TO FIGHT BECAUSE THE HOTNESS OF THIS AREA IS CAUSING THEM HEADACHES. SO NOW IT'S 1V1. THE TWO OF US. NO MORE SHIP. NO MORE FRIENDS. I WANT TO TAKE MY REVENGE
ON YOU, SO TONIGHT I CAN GIVE MYSELF DEATH, BUT WHILE BEING HAPPY ! IF I EVER GIVE MYSELF DEATH WITHOUT WINNING OVER YOU, THEN YOU'LL CONTINUE TO BE PROUD OF YOURSELF, OF YOUR HORRIBLE ACTIONS. I SWEAR I WILL MAKE YOU UNDERSTAND.

Ralsei : IM READY IM READY ! IM ONLY WAITING FOR THAT YOU IDIOT !
An intense fight started between Max and Ralsei started. Max hitted Ralsei strongly many times,  and it didn't left Ralsei safe. Though, he had healing potions in his pockets, which rubbed out the pain from him. Max was hitting Ralsei passionately, without ever thinking it would stop someday. He was taking the revenge he deserved. Though he was going hard on Ralsei. Ralsei couldn't help it, but only tried to defend himself from Max. Max noticed Ralsei's potions and threw them in the volcano. The color of the lava turned green, and the weather was now pretty cool. It gave some chills to the fighters.
What Max did would actually help the next chapter of this story a lot. Though the fight continued, continued, and Ralsei was more and more exhausted. Though, he ripped Max's wings off, and Max fell down from where he was. He started to scream alot, and Yascamer, plus VC, screamed as well. It sounded done for them. Ralsei had won.
Though Ralsei fell off as well. Max could touch him and he pushed him under himself. (Max pushed Ralsei under himself) it caused Ralsei to be a boat for Max, and Max was able to reach a shore before Ralsei sunk under Max's snorlax weight. As soon as he reached it, he fainted for 5 minutes. When he woke up, he was sweating and he was still on the same shoreline. All the lava was drained though. Max had a headache and several injuries, but he was able to walk. He went to VC and Yascamer, who went pretty well since then. The trio was very sad of how it turned out. They found Lely, Nudge and Ralsei laying on the ground. They took the three bodies, and Max called the hospital and the firemen. Both helped them to get out of the volcano. It was now 11PM and Piantas were partying. The Archipelago looked so nice but without their friends, it felt weird and sad. So Max, VC and Yascamer carried the dead bodies into the cold water. While the sky was rosΓ© from the last remains of the sunset, they bathed the bodies in cold water, then they dried them. They brought them back at the huts and put them on the beds.

Max : Guys, let's take a snack. It will comfort us a bit.
VC : Agreed...
Max cried, thinking to Lely and Nudge, and to all the people who left. They just wanted to have fun and spend some time together, they ended up seeing some of them dead, some of them leaving, some of them fainting...
What was that?
They would hope for better days in the future. They would like Lely and Nudge to wake up. But life doesn't works like that. Sadly, you have sometimes to face the worst shits you haven't deserved.

Max : 😭😭😭
🎢But tonight I'll be the happiest girl in the world,
You'll see it, like it doesn't matters
Tonight, I'll be the happiest girl in the world
You'll see it, like it never happened🎢
Lely : Ouch... what just happened...
Nudge : Do you think I know ?
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I hope the other wake up at some point after the boat challenge.

I don't understand what you're saying
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Chapter 5 : Super Max-Bro Odyssey
Max : 😭😭😭
VC : Cheer up Max. Maybe they survived. Maybe they will knock at the door someday.
Yascamer : un pianta   a dit que tout ce qui tombait dans le volcan allait reapparaitre quelque part sur l ile
Max : We can't search them across the whole archipelago. We risk the death if we do, considering how weird is this place.
VC : We're in need of other people. Sadly, everybody left---
Flabebseth : Hello there. I came back because I was forced to. Don't even expect me to participate again
David : Oh come on. Who said it was going to be bad.
Gamerlion : I heard about you three. MKPCverse's Piantas who decided to live there talked with us. Apparently, "three lost MKPCians" were sad about the deaths of their friends, and they needed help. We're here now :)
Master8 : Yeah, what ever. I don't see why we would help someone who almost killed us, but okay
Max : Because you're supposed to be "brave", "bold", and you're supposed to always look cool. If you don't help someone who almost killed you, but saved you from death afterwards, then you don't look cool
Master8 : He wanted to spice up things, I think. Yet, while doing so, he almost killed us and no, he didn't save us.
MysteryMan : Master8, I agree with you, that was a bit traumatizing. I think it's not that traumatizing,  it's just scary, but anyways. Lely DID SAVED YOU. We fell in the sea, maybe it was his fault, but he didn't intend to kill us and while we were out of breath, he brought us back to the shore.
Parakoopa : That's true. And anyways let's save them. Nudge did nothing to us, and Lely didn't intend to.
Master8 : I still protest.
Gamerlion : Please help us, we need to save Lely and Nudge πŸ₯Ί
Master8 : Yes, YOU need to save Nudge. Let Lely die.
Max : Indeed, you're very brave... you look very cool... yea
Master : Thanks
MysteryMan : You are DEFINITIVELY DUMB.
Master : Why would you force me ?
Max : Why aren't you trying to save a human being ? If it's so, we'll let you suffer next time you're in trouble. You'll get the payback in your face and you'll understand.
Master8 : You are rude. I'm going back to my chocolate lake.
Max : Now you are ridiculous.
Master8 : Lely goes to hell to get some pain
Max : HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA no seriously. This is old, unfun and inappropriate. The way you're being such a dumbass is absolutely horrible. I just want to slap you.
MysteryMan : Eh, Max. He is too dumb anyways. Let's let him do what the fu** he wants. Let's actually help people instead. Let's be useful. Let's be kind. Let's not be like Master8.
Master8 : stfu
Flabebseth : Well... this argument kinda opened my eyes. Thank you. I think I'm going to help y'all too.
David : Never gonna let them die
Max : Never gonna say goodbye
Master8 : IM GONNA RUN AROUND AND DESERT YOU
Parakoopa : Do whatever you want but leave us alone. We are going to search Lely and Nudge across the island, we aren't changing our mind because you think it's stupid. Especially when you have no arguments.
VC : ooh, that was savage. Anyways let's head to anywhere. Where do we start our odyssey ?
Max : How many are we now ? 1
David : 2
Flabebseth : 3
Parakoopa : 4
MysteryMan : 5
Gamerlion : 6
VC : 7
Yascamer : 8
Max : Then, we're gonna make pairs. I'm gonna pair with Parakoopa.
Parakoopa : :)
Gamerlion : I'm going to pair with Yascamer ! :D
Yascamer : super
Flabebseth : I think David and me are a great match
MysteryMan : VC, are you okay with pairing ?
VC : Obviously ;)
Max : Parakoopa and me are heading to the mountains. VC and MysteryMan, you should go to West, Flabebseth and David are going to East and Gamerlion plus Yascamer will head to South. Ready guys ?
Everyone: Let's go !
Mountains (Max, Parakoopa)
MΓ©ribel
Max : This ski slope reminds me of a MKPCverse location...
Parakoopa : It's because it is. They recreated this from a real MKPC location. I wouldn't go on that, the slope goes very fast, the turns are cornered up, and the path is super thin !
Max : That's not the matter. Anyways, why is there red marks on certain places ?
Parakoopa : I think they're the places where Lely and Nudge could have respawned.
Max : I don't see them on any red marks. Maybe we should go into this restaurant,
there could be a red mark inside  

Parakoopa : Agreed.
Pianta : *throwing a tantrum*
Parakoopa : Chill. What just happened ?
Pianta : 2 dead peoples, a kiddo and a bunny appeared in my melted cheese ! They ruined the taste of it and the pan burnt down ! They disappeared afterwards !
Max : OOH, that's the persons we've been looking all over for !
Pianta : Are you from the police ?
Parakoopa : No, we're their friends.
Pianta : Then... YOURE GONNA PAY ALL THE MONEY BACK !!!! COME HERE YOU DISRESPECTFUL BRATS !!!
Max : Wow, he was really passive aggessive 😬😬😬
West
Grey'n'green Gorges
VC : I think they appeared in the river below. We need to go in the river's bed. Though, it will be tough, considering the path to it is... made for monkeys???
MysteryMan : I'm sure this is dangerous, but let's go
VC : The parkour is starting with a zipline. However, the zipline is going up, so we'll have to use our hands to progress.
VC : *struggles*
MysteryMan : Come... on... hmph... we... can... make... it..  to the top...
VC : I-I will slide down everything I c-clim-climbed
MysteryMan : For Waluigi's sake, please don't. We really need to be done with this zipline. We will get some rest before the next challenge.
VC : How much meters to go ?
MysteryMan : I think we did 75% of it
VC : *frowns*
MysteryMan : Come on, we got this. 1, 2. 1
2. 1, 2.

vC : Tell me we're almost there... please...
MM : Please, a last effort for Lely and Nudge.
VC : I'm gonna die of exhaustion... hmph... *sounds of struggle*
MysteryMan : Just a last step !
VC : *does the last step* MYSTERYMAN TELL ME WERE DONE NOW.
MysteryMan : I just need to reach that freaking platform...
*makes it to the platform*
VC : What are we doing now ?
MysteryMan : I don't even want to look at this...
VC : TELL ME THIS IS A FAKE. YOURE FAKING IT. HAHAHAHAHA. PLEASE.
East
Underwater tunnel
Flabebseth : We're gonna faint ! Even if we just try this! We're gonna die ! Im not gonna go in this !
David : I'm going inside anyways. I'm going alone if you don't come, that doll be the same anyways. *swims as fast as he cans*
Flabebseth : You won't make it to the end ! I'm sure you're gonna faint !
David : *starts to lack a bit of breath*
Flabebseth : I'm not even watching this. I'm getting away. Bye.
David : NOO PLEASE STAY, I NEED YOU
Flabebseth : *whistling peacefully*
David : Help !!!!
*Flabebseth has left the beach*
David : I-I do not feel so well πŸ€•
He was almost at the end of the tunnel...
David : I-I w-will f-fa-faint πŸ₯ΆπŸ˜–
*faints, in front of...
Lely's dead body

South
Shiveria
Gamerlion : I bet we're gonna find one of the two dead bodies----- *faints*
Yascamer (corrected) : Something fell on your head and it looks like Nudge
Shiverian : Here's a dead bunny we just found in the snow patch the other day. We saved it, but the poor thing was freezed and somehow had fever. Take care of it please.
Yascamer : YESSS 😁😁😁
While David fainted in front of Lely's dead body, Nudge has been found in Shiveria. Will VC Nad MysteryMan be able to get out of the challenge safely? Will Max and Parakoopa escape the Pianta?
You will find out soon in...

MKPC ARCHIPEL CHAPTER 6
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Messages 11442 - King Mario King Mario
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No, I'm not giving up this fanfic, but I'm taking decisions.

I just realized there is 5 main fanfics currently. Fways's one, Nudge's one, MysteryMan's one, Ralsei's one and this one.

And I'm almost the worst out of those. Why ? Because I decided to go out of the original scheme : challenges on an archipel. Though everytime I try to make action scenes it fails. Now I'm stucked up in a situation where I don't know what to do, I just want a fresh start, but I don't wanna lose the progress.

Nudgenius has found a good idea though. He will end the series, and probably save it, and then I'll offer better content πŸ™‚
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So when you're gonna revive this topic
and make stories again?
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Well my new fanfic was over my expectations. Clearly it has more potential than this, I'm clearly not succeeding at this concept, so I'm giving up this.
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Lely wrote:
Chapter 1 : Arrival at the island
Lely : Welcome to you all, every one of you. First off, I had to tell you about something important. Like, an actual groundbreaking message. The Earth will be so shocked. Here. Y'all are cute ! Yeah ! That was fire ! I really had to told you about that ! πŸ₯°
Ralsei : Who is this clingy weirdo in the airpods
Nudge : RALSEI ! I TOLD YOU TO BE NICE ! AND YOU KNOW FREAKING WELL THIS IS LELY !
Ralsei : Ok, ok... Jeez, calm down !
Max : My bestie is hostie ? 🀩
David : Yes he is... by the way, where are we going ???
VC : We are going to MKPC Archipel. Islands where we will be competing.
David : How do you know that ?
Max : Uh, because we already came here. The competition failed though.
Flabebseth : So, we are going to this place, to give the show a second chance ? I'm excited !
Nudge : If this is like the 1st season, lemme explain you the scheme. The huts are very nice----
The plane started to shake severely, causing people to panic.
Gamerlion : AAAHHHH !!! SEND SOME HELP ! 😭😭😭😭
Max : 😱 seriously, who bought the plane ?
MysteryMan : The problem is not coming from the plane. It's coming from where we are. The pilot is doing a mess. Everybody knows that this area is full of tornados and horrors, yet they're going in to save the MagiKPC (the thing that's making every vehicle on MKPCverse working), and save some money as well.
Parakoopa : Calm down guys. It happen everytime. Let's sing something
instead ! πŸ˜„

Nudge : Wow, this is pretty exciting. Though the popcorn I had, dumped into the whole plane...
Ralsei : This is a literal apocalypse, how y'all are staying so calm ?
Pilot : We took that path on purpose. To prepare you for the challenges.
Ralsei : Ooh, this makes a lot of sense ! 😲
...
THOUGH PLEASE GET US OUT OF HERE NOW !!!!

Pilot : We are almost arrived. 15 seconds left.
Master8 : Ok guys, let's do a countdown! 1 !
Ralsei : How is he even looking cool while a mess is happening *[ 2
Gamerlion : 3 😭
Nudge : 4 πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„
Max : Nudge, you are a sociopath. 5 😨😨😨
Parakoopa : 6, 7, 8 πŸ™‚ Come on guys! We're there soon !
Flabebseth : 9 😢 I hope we're landing into water! We will get out of the planes by waterslides ! πŸ„β€β™€οΈ
VC : 11, 12
MysteryMan : 13, 14, 15 !!! πŸ˜“πŸ˜“πŸ˜“
The plane landed in water.
Pilot : Swim to the shore !
Flabebseth : Yeah ! Swimming πŸŠβ€β™‚οΈ and watersliding ! πŸ„β€β™€οΈ
Nudge : Have you ever heard about bunnies, cause I'm stucked here. Oh no, I forgot I could turn into an anime character. Then let's go !
Parakoopa : The water is sparkling ! 🀩
Max : And we're in a beautiful lagoon 🀩
When the 10 MKPCians arrived to the shore !
Lely : Hello cuties ! Oh, you finally made it there. I'm sorry, I didn't want the plane to hurt you, but the pilots were doing a mess πŸ˜’ I'mma fire you, you made them exhausted
Pilot : what ever, never mind
Lely : Anyways cuties. *gets scratched by Nudge* ow. Calm down CuteBunny2009. Anyways,
let's get right into it. You're in MKPC Archipel. A show. Every of you will be competing, and that's it. Now I'm going to give you this map of the island.

The Main Island
The most interesting and important island. You can find a city in the middle, with some Piantas. The beaches are beautiful, with sparkling water. You will also find the huts.
The Wild Island
Welcome to the Wild Island, which is not a nice island. The beaches have a lot of sharks, a volcano can be found in the middle. The sand, the grass, the rocks and the dirt are very rough and they hurt the foot.
The Heaven Island
This island is a free ticket to heaven. The beaches are beautiful,
calming, the water is clear and sparkling. The sand is also pretty white.
Everything is very smooth. It feels like you're walking on fluff. Come here to relax.

Ralsei : And why is the rest of the island a blur?
Nudge : We'll discover those islands later I guess
Lely : Correct! πŸ‘
The squad is heading to the huts...
At the huts...

Max : This is a five star hotel 🀯
Nudge : Lowkey highkey nice asf 😁
MysteryMan : This is literally amazing. The dorms are huge and comfortable. There's so much rooms to do whatever you want.
Lely : Let me show you in detail ! So here is the kitchen and the living room. You have sofas, you have everything, and you still feel like in a hut. You can also go in the video game room, where there is obviously a lot of video games ! There is also the game room. There's many funny mazes, ziplines over artificial rivers, a lot of little challenges, and there is the dorms.
Max : I think the challenges are really harsh. That would explain why this place is so comfortable. I don't want to GO HOME 😭😭😭
Nudge : Me as well...
Lely : We will be in the hut next to yours. Now enjoy yourself ! And at 7PM, come at the restaurant.
Master8 : That's amazing. I hope there is a chocolate lake in the island !
Lely : There is one πŸ˜€
Master8 : AMAZING
Flabebseth : This is dope ! Is there natural waterslides ?
Lely : Of course !
8 minutes passed...
Max : Hey Gamerlion ! Want to do a match on MKPC ?
Gamerlion : Of course 😁
Nudge : VC, do you want to go to the game room ? I think we could try to figure out how to clear the first maze...
VC : I'm up for it !
MysteryMan : I'm going to the dorms, I want to take some rest.
Flabebseth : I'm gonna go to the natural waterslides 😁
Master8 : YOOOOO I just went to the chocolate lake and it's amazing! It's huge !
David : Uh... let's go in the video game room. I want to play to MKPC.
Max : I'm finally at 40k 😁😁😁😁πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³
Gamerlion : CONGRATS ! 😲
In the meanwhile...
Ralsei : HA ! PIANTAS LOVE THE REVIVE AND THE AMOGUS. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA !!!!! NO ONE CAN DEFEAT ME NOW HAHAHAHA
THEY SAY ENJOY YOURSELF, IM ENJOYING MYSELF 😈😈😈

To be continued...

I want to bury myself so bad after reading this
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Lely wrote:
Lely wrote:
Chapter 1 : Arrival at the island
Lely : Welcome to you all, every one of you. First off, I had to tell you about something important. Like, an actual groundbreaking message. The Earth will be so shocked. Here. Y'all are cute ! Yeah ! That was fire ! I really had to told you about that ! πŸ₯°
Ralsei : Who is this clingy weirdo in the airpods
Nudge : RALSEI ! I TOLD YOU TO BE NICE ! AND YOU KNOW FREAKING WELL THIS IS LELY !
Ralsei : Ok, ok... Jeez, calm down !
Max : My bestie is hostie ? 🀩
David : Yes he is... by the way, where are we going ???
VC : We are going to MKPC Archipel. Islands where we will be competing.
David : How do you know that ?
Max : Uh, because we already came here. The competition failed though.
Flabebseth : So, we are going to this place, to give the show a second chance ? I'm excited !
Nudge : If this is like the 1st season, lemme explain you the scheme. The huts are very nice----
The plane started to shake severely, causing people to panic.
Gamerlion : AAAHHHH !!! SEND SOME HELP ! 😭😭😭😭
Max : 😱 seriously, who bought the plane ?
MysteryMan : The problem is not coming from the plane. It's coming from where we are. The pilot is doing a mess. Everybody knows that this area is full of tornados and horrors, yet they're going in to save the MagiKPC (the thing that's making every vehicle on MKPCverse working), and save some money as well.
Parakoopa : Calm down guys. It happen everytime. Let's sing something
instead ! πŸ˜„

Nudge : Wow, this is pretty exciting. Though the popcorn I had, dumped into the whole plane...
Ralsei : This is a literal apocalypse, how y'all are staying so calm ?
Pilot : We took that path on purpose. To prepare you for the challenges.
Ralsei : Ooh, this makes a lot of sense ! 😲
...
THOUGH PLEASE GET US OUT OF HERE NOW !!!!

Pilot : We are almost arrived. 15 seconds left.
Master8 : Ok guys, let's do a countdown! 1 !
Ralsei : How is he even looking cool while a mess is happening *[ 2
Gamerlion : 3 😭
Nudge : 4 πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„
Max : Nudge, you are a sociopath. 5 😨😨😨
Parakoopa : 6, 7, 8 πŸ™‚ Come on guys! We're there soon !
Flabebseth : 9 😢 I hope we're landing into water! We will get out of the planes by waterslides ! πŸ„β€β™€οΈ
VC : 11, 12
MysteryMan : 13, 14, 15 !!! πŸ˜“πŸ˜“πŸ˜“
The plane landed in water.
Pilot : Swim to the shore !
Flabebseth : Yeah ! Swimming πŸŠβ€β™‚οΈ and watersliding ! πŸ„β€β™€οΈ
Nudge : Have you ever heard about bunnies, cause I'm stucked here. Oh no, I forgot I could turn into an anime character. Then let's go !
Parakoopa : The water is sparkling ! 🀩
Max : And we're in a beautiful lagoon 🀩
When the 10 MKPCians arrived to the shore !
Lely : Hello cuties ! Oh, you finally made it there. I'm sorry, I didn't want the plane to hurt you, but the pilots were doing a mess πŸ˜’ I'mma fire you, you made them exhausted
Pilot : what ever, never mind
Lely : Anyways cuties. *gets scratched by Nudge* ow. Calm down CuteBunny2009. Anyways,
let's get right into it. You're in MKPC Archipel. A show. Every of you will be competing, and that's it. Now I'm going to give you this map of the island.

The Main Island
The most interesting and important island. You can find a city in the middle, with some Piantas. The beaches are beautiful, with sparkling water. You will also find the huts.
The Wild Island
Welcome to the Wild Island, which is not a nice island. The beaches have a lot of sharks, a volcano can be found in the middle. The sand, the grass, the rocks and the dirt are very rough and they hurt the foot.
The Heaven Island
This island is a free ticket to heaven. The beaches are beautiful,
calming, the water is clear and sparkling. The sand is also pretty white.
Everything is very smooth. It feels like you're walking on fluff. Come here to relax.

Ralsei : And why is the rest of the island a blur?
Nudge : We'll discover those islands later I guess
Lely : Correct! πŸ‘
The squad is heading to the huts...
At the huts...

Max : This is a five star hotel 🀯
Nudge : Lowkey highkey nice asf 😁
MysteryMan : This is literally amazing. The dorms are huge and comfortable. There's so much rooms to do whatever you want.
Lely : Let me show you in detail ! So here is the kitchen and the living room. You have sofas, you have everything, and you still feel like in a hut. You can also go in the video game room, where there is obviously a lot of video games ! There is also the game room. There's many funny mazes, ziplines over artificial rivers, a lot of little challenges, and there is the dorms.
Max : I think the challenges are really harsh. That would explain why this place is so comfortable. I don't want to GO HOME 😭😭😭
Nudge : Me as well...
Lely : We will be in the hut next to yours. Now enjoy yourself ! And at 7PM, come at the restaurant.
Master8 : That's amazing. I hope there is a chocolate lake in the island !
Lely : There is one πŸ˜€
Master8 : AMAZING
Flabebseth : This is dope ! Is there natural waterslides ?
Lely : Of course !
8 minutes passed...
Max : Hey Gamerlion ! Want to do a match on MKPC ?
Gamerlion : Of course 😁
Nudge : VC, do you want to go to the game room ? I think we could try to figure out how to clear the first maze...
VC : I'm up for it !
MysteryMan : I'm going to the dorms, I want to take some rest.
Flabebseth : I'm gonna go to the natural waterslides 😁
Master8 : YOOOOO I just went to the chocolate lake and it's amazing! It's huge !
David : Uh... let's go in the video game room. I want to play to MKPC.
Max : I'm finally at 40k 😁😁😁😁πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³
Gamerlion : CONGRATS ! 😲
In the meanwhile...
Ralsei : HA ! PIANTAS LOVE THE REVIVE AND THE AMOGUS. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA !!!!! NO ONE CAN DEFEAT ME NOW HAHAHAHA
THEY SAY ENJOY YOURSELF, IM ENJOYING MYSELF 😈😈😈

To be continued...

I want to bury myself so bad after reading this

l'Γ©poque oΓΉ j'Γ©tais hardstuck sur mes 40k points online... je me sens plus vieux d'un coup
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Novenko wrote:
Lely wrote:
Chapter 1 : Arrival at the island
Lely : Welcome to you all, every one of you. First off, I had to tell you about something important. Like, an actual groundbreaking message. The Earth will be so shocked. Here. Y'all are cute ! Yeah ! That was fire ! I really had to told you about that ! πŸ₯°
Ralsei : Who is this clingy weirdo in the airpods
Nudge : RALSEI ! I TOLD YOU TO BE NICE ! AND YOU KNOW FREAKING WELL THIS IS LELY !
Ralsei : Ok, ok... Jeez, calm down !
Max : My bestie is hostie ? 🀩
David : Yes he is... by the way, where are we going ???
VC : We are going to MKPC Archipel. Islands where we will be competing.
David : How do you know that ?
Max : Uh, because we already came here. The competition failed though.
Flabebseth : So, we are going to this place, to give the show a second chance ? I'm excited !
Nudge : If this is like the 1st season, lemme explain you the scheme. The huts are very nice----
The plane started to shake severely, causing people to panic.
Gamerlion : AAAHHHH !!! SEND SOME HELP ! 😭😭😭😭
Max : 😱 seriously, who bought the plane ?
MysteryMan : The problem is not coming from the plane. It's coming from where we are. The pilot is doing a mess. Everybody knows that this area is full of tornados and horrors, yet they're going in to save the MagiKPC (the thing that's making every vehicle on MKPCverse working), and save some money as well.
Parakoopa : Calm down guys. It happen everytime. Let's sing something
instead ! πŸ˜„

Nudge : Wow, this is pretty exciting. Though the popcorn I had, dumped into the whole plane...
Ralsei : This is a literal apocalypse, how y'all are staying so calm ?
Pilot : We took that path on purpose. To prepare you for the challenges.
Ralsei : Ooh, this makes a lot of sense ! 😲
...
THOUGH PLEASE GET US OUT OF HERE NOW !!!!

Pilot : We are almost arrived. 15 seconds left.
Master8 : Ok guys, let's do a countdown! 1 !
Ralsei : How is he even looking cool while a mess is happening *[ 2
Gamerlion : 3 😭
Nudge : 4 πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„
Max : Nudge, you are a sociopath. 5 😨😨😨
Parakoopa : 6, 7, 8 πŸ™‚ Come on guys! We're there soon !
Flabebseth : 9 😢 I hope we're landing into water! We will get out of the planes by waterslides ! πŸ„β€β™€οΈ
VC : 11, 12
MysteryMan : 13, 14, 15 !!! πŸ˜“πŸ˜“πŸ˜“
The plane landed in water.
Pilot : Swim to the shore !
Flabebseth : Yeah ! Swimming πŸŠβ€β™‚οΈ and watersliding ! πŸ„β€β™€οΈ
Nudge : Have you ever heard about bunnies, cause I'm stucked here. Oh no, I forgot I could turn into an anime character. Then let's go !
Parakoopa : The water is sparkling ! 🀩
Max : And we're in a beautiful lagoon 🀩
When the 10 MKPCians arrived to the shore !
Lely : Hello cuties ! Oh, you finally made it there. I'm sorry, I didn't want the plane to hurt you, but the pilots were doing a mess πŸ˜’ I'mma fire you, you made them exhausted
Pilot : what ever, never mind
Lely : Anyways cuties. *gets scratched by Nudge* ow. Calm down CuteBunny2009. Anyways,
let's get right into it. You're in MKPC Archipel. A show. Every of you will be competing, and that's it. Now I'm going to give you this map of the island.

The Main Island
The most interesting and important island. You can find a city in the middle, with some Piantas. The beaches are beautiful, with sparkling water. You will also find the huts.
The Wild Island
Welcome to the Wild Island, which is not a nice island. The beaches have a lot of sharks, a volcano can be found in the middle. The sand, the grass, the rocks and the dirt are very rough and they hurt the foot.
The Heaven Island
This island is a free ticket to heaven. The beaches are beautiful,
calming, the water is clear and sparkling. The sand is also pretty white.
Everything is very smooth. It feels like you're walking on fluff. Come here to relax.

Ralsei : And why is the rest of the island a blur?
Nudge : We'll discover those islands later I guess
Lely : Correct! πŸ‘
The squad is heading to the huts...
At the huts...

Max : This is a five star hotel 🀯
Nudge : Lowkey highkey nice asf 😁
MysteryMan : This is literally amazing. The dorms are huge and comfortable. There's so much rooms to do whatever you want.
Lely : Let me show you in detail ! So here is the kitchen and the living room. You have sofas, you have everything, and you still feel like in a hut. You can also go in the video game room, where there is obviously a lot of video games ! There is also the game room. There's many funny mazes, ziplines over artificial rivers, a lot of little challenges, and there is the dorms.
Max : I think the challenges are really harsh. That would explain why this place is so comfortable. I don't want to GO HOME 😭😭😭
Nudge : Me as well...
Lely : We will be in the hut next to yours. Now enjoy yourself ! And at 7PM, come at the restaurant.
Master8 : That's amazing. I hope there is a chocolate lake in the island !
Lely : There is one πŸ˜€
Master8 : AMAZING
Flabebseth : This is dope ! Is there natural waterslides ?
Lely : Of course !
8 minutes passed...
Max : Hey Gamerlion ! Want to do a match on MKPC ?
Gamerlion : Of course 😁
Nudge : VC, do you want to go to the game room ? I think we could try to figure out how to clear the first maze...
VC : I'm up for it !
MysteryMan : I'm going to the dorms, I want to take some rest.
Flabebseth : I'm gonna go to the natural waterslides 😁
Master8 : YOOOOO I just went to the chocolate lake and it's amazing! It's huge !
David : Uh... let's go in the video game room. I want to play to MKPC.
Max : I'm finally at 40k 😁😁😁😁πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³
Gamerlion : CONGRATS ! 😲
In the meanwhile...
Ralsei : HA ! PIANTAS LOVE THE REVIVE AND THE AMOGUS. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA !!!!! NO ONE CAN DEFEAT ME NOW HAHAHAHA
THEY SAY ENJOY YOURSELF, IM ENJOYING MYSELF 😈😈😈

To be continued...

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Lely wrote:
Chapter 1 : Arrival at the island
Lely : Welcome to you all, every one of you. First off, I had to tell you about something important. Like, an actual groundbreaking message. The Earth will be so shocked. Here. Y'all are cute ! Yeah ! That was fire ! I really had to told you about that ! πŸ₯°
Ralsei : Who is this clingy weirdo in the airpods
Nudge : RALSEI ! I TOLD YOU TO BE NICE ! AND YOU KNOW FREAKING WELL THIS IS LELY !
Ralsei : Ok, ok... Jeez, calm down !
Max : My bestie is hostie ? 🀩
David : Yes he is... by the way, where are we going ???
VC : We are going to MKPC Archipel. Islands where we will be competing.
David : How do you know that ?
Max : Uh, because we already came here. The competition failed though.
Flabebseth : So, we are going to this place, to give the show a second chance ? I'm excited !
Nudge : If this is like the 1st season, lemme explain you the scheme. The huts are very nice----
The plane started to shake severely, causing people to panic.
Gamerlion : AAAHHHH !!! SEND SOME HELP ! 😭😭😭😭
Max : 😱 seriously, who bought the plane ?
MysteryMan : The problem is not coming from the plane. It's coming from where we are. The pilot is doing a mess. Everybody knows that this area is full of tornados and horrors, yet they're going in to save the MagiKPC (the thing that's making every vehicle on MKPCverse working), and save some money as well.
Parakoopa : Calm down guys. It happen everytime. Let's sing something
instead ! πŸ˜„

Nudge : Wow, this is pretty exciting. Though the popcorn I had, dumped into the whole plane...
Ralsei : This is a literal apocalypse, how y'all are staying so calm ?
Pilot : We took that path on purpose. To prepare you for the challenges.
Ralsei : Ooh, this makes a lot of sense ! 😲
...
THOUGH PLEASE GET US OUT OF HERE NOW !!!!

Pilot : We are almost arrived. 15 seconds left.
Master8 : Ok guys, let's do a countdown! 1 !
Ralsei : How is he even looking cool while a mess is happening *[ 2
Gamerlion : 3 😭
Nudge : 4 πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„
Max : Nudge, you are a sociopath. 5 😨😨😨
Parakoopa : 6, 7, 8 πŸ™‚ Come on guys! We're there soon !
Flabebseth : 9 😢 I hope we're landing into water! We will get out of the planes by waterslides ! πŸ„β€β™€οΈ
VC : 11, 12
MysteryMan : 13, 14, 15 !!! πŸ˜“πŸ˜“πŸ˜“
The plane landed in water.
Pilot : Swim to the shore !
Flabebseth : Yeah ! Swimming πŸŠβ€β™‚οΈ and watersliding ! πŸ„β€β™€οΈ
Nudge : Have you ever heard about bunnies, cause I'm stucked here. Oh no, I forgot I could turn into an anime character. Then let's go !
Parakoopa : The water is sparkling ! 🀩
Max : And we're in a beautiful lagoon 🀩
When the 10 MKPCians arrived to the shore !
Lely : Hello cuties ! Oh, you finally made it there. I'm sorry, I didn't want the plane to hurt you, but the pilots were doing a mess πŸ˜’ I'mma fire you, you made them exhausted
Pilot : what ever, never mind
Lely : Anyways cuties. *gets scratched by Nudge* ow. Calm down CuteBunny2009. Anyways,
let's get right into it. You're in MKPC Archipel. A show. Every of you will be competing, and that's it. Now I'm going to give you this map of the island.

The Main Island
The most interesting and important island. You can find a city in the middle, with some Piantas. The beaches are beautiful, with sparkling water. You will also find the huts.
The Wild Island
Welcome to the Wild Island, which is not a nice island. The beaches have a lot of sharks, a volcano can be found in the middle. The sand, the grass, the rocks and the dirt are very rough and they hurt the foot.
The Heaven Island
This island is a free ticket to heaven. The beaches are beautiful,
calming, the water is clear and sparkling. The sand is also pretty white.
Everything is very smooth. It feels like you're walking on fluff. Come here to relax.

Ralsei : And why is the rest of the island a blur?
Nudge : We'll discover those islands later I guess
Lely : Correct! πŸ‘
The squad is heading to the huts...
At the huts...

Max : This is a five star hotel 🀯
Nudge : Lowkey highkey nice asf 😁
MysteryMan : This is literally amazing. The dorms are huge and comfortable. There's so much rooms to do whatever you want.
Lely : Let me show you in detail ! So here is the kitchen and the living room. You have sofas, you have everything, and you still feel like in a hut. You can also go in the video game room, where there is obviously a lot of video games ! There is also the game room. There's many funny mazes, ziplines over artificial rivers, a lot of little challenges, and there is the dorms.
Max : I think the challenges are really harsh. That would explain why this place is so comfortable. I don't want to GO HOME 😭😭😭
Nudge : Me as well...
Lely : We will be in the hut next to yours. Now enjoy yourself ! And at 7PM, come at the restaurant.
Master8 : That's amazing. I hope there is a chocolate lake in the island !
Lely : There is one πŸ˜€
Master8 : AMAZING
Flabebseth : This is dope ! Is there natural waterslides ?
Lely : Of course !
8 minutes passed...
Max : Hey Gamerlion ! Want to do a match on MKPC ?
Gamerlion : Of course 😁
Nudge : VC, do you want to go to the game room ? I think we could try to figure out how to clear the first maze...
VC : I'm up for it !
MysteryMan : I'm going to the dorms, I want to take some rest.
Flabebseth : I'm gonna go to the natural waterslides 😁
Master8 : YOOOOO I just went to the chocolate lake and it's amazing! It's huge !
David : Uh... let's go in the video game room. I want to play to MKPC.
Max : I'm finally at 40k 😁😁😁😁πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³
Gamerlion : CONGRATS ! 😲
In the meanwhile...
Ralsei : HA ! PIANTAS LOVE THE REVIVE AND THE AMOGUS. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA !!!!! NO ONE CAN DEFEAT ME NOW HAHAHAHA
THEY SAY ENJOY YOURSELF, IM ENJOYING MYSELF 😈😈😈

To be continued...

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