FANFIC - MKPC ARCHIPEL

Oui, quant à Ralsei ça ne va pas rester comme ça...

Ralsei (basically) died LOL 😂

Nudge, you are definitively a PSYCHOPATH !
I'm hiding everything else.

No need to hide everything. The most I’ll be  able to do is throw a knife into someone’s chest if I’m lucky.

This is still ALOT. you will probably kill the person. Also I'm talking about hiding Ralsei's disappearance

Guess I’ll have to wait until later for a character death

I feel like I just read a novel

Actually, I also thought so. His self-description sounded a bit cringe and nerdy to me. "Always look cool" yeah that made me cringe, sorry Master8. That is also a problem. When people I don't know much send me personnalities, I can use it for the first episode. After this, I will especially try to make lines that fits the MKPCians. As an example, there is some sentences that would fit for you or Ralsei. I mean, they fit the MKPCian, but to a point where it would be realistic to see the MKPCian say that in real life.
It's why it's not easy to work with people like Flabebseth. I didn't see him often. The only thing he told off was that he loved waterslides, and was kind, but aside from that...
I'm also sorry for the people who "lack lines". Feel free to tell me when you would like to have more lines, but please do it politely.
As an example, those times I see Ralsei and Nudge's personalities a lot, so I know how to make lines who would fit them, but as an example I'm unable to find good lines for Max, Flabebseth,  MysteryMan, VC, Master8... when I make them interact it feels boring. Not because the person is boring. It's because I'm doing very simple and uninteresting moments for them, not because I don't care, because I'm not in ease with them.

bon euh je rejondre  histoire

Si tu veux, quelle couleur tu veuw utiliser pour te représenter ?

Gris ces mieux

waitwaitwait if yascamer can debut then can i rejoin?

Chapter 4 : Cute night gone wrong
Lely : So... after this cute moment... What are we doing next ?
Nudge : We can wait on the Archipelago. I heard most of the MKPCians are gone, but VC didn't actually left. She decided to stay here with us, apparently. It's what she told me.
Max : What about Ralsei's lifeless body ? He's surely drown. Though the lagoon isn't deep. We can search him a bit. At least we will have his body
Lely : Sure. What about we stay awake this night. We will sleep tomorrow.
Nudge : Sure. I'm afraid of lacking sleep to the point where I'm completely exhausted and where I pass out in a burning pipe, but why not. Promise me I will be safe though. Today was already a big day.
Lely : Don't worry. We will be safe. This is now 8PM. Don't forget MKPC Archipel also works like that. Some people are awake at night, so the Archipelago is living at night. Let's go back to the huts though. We can take some rest then do our party night.
Nudge : Yes. Let's take 3 hours and a half to sleep. That's the bare minimum, but we will rest tomorrow anyways.
Max : Yeah. I'm going to put an alarm. 🙂
Lely : What about a sunset stroll on the beach ? That would be very cute and nice to start our night. 🥰
Ralsei : hell this sounds so gay
Max : WHO SAID THAT ???
Nudge : When you think he's dead, he's alive...
Ralsei : And why would I be dead ?
Lely : Well... I did a challenge where I launched everyone in the sky, but they went
too high and fainted (they reached an area where the things are weirdly deadly). You as well, and I didn't find your body.
Ralsei : Oh yeah. This was an illusion. I have magic powers since the Twilightverse era, don't you remember ? But I asked the gods if they could get my power changed.
Nudge : And what were you doing during all this time ?
Ralsei : You don't wanna know
Nudge : Yes I do
Ralsei : Max is gonna throw a tantrum
Max : I won't
Nudge : Go on Ralsei
Ralsei : I taught the Piantas to say revive and amogus 24/7
Max : Ok, you're not coming to our night party
Ralsei : Yes I will
Nudge : Then go get some sleep.
At the huts...
Lely : The sunset is now... I think we should actually go to it and come back to sleep a bit...
Max : What about we sleep on the beach ?
Lely : GENIUS
Nudge : This is really smart. Let's pack our bags and go.
Lely : I packed my bag, but something is left
Nudge : Then put it in your bag
Lely :*grabs Nudge and puts it in his bag*
Nudge : *scratches the bag* Lemme get out---- oh well. That's not so bad
Max : This is cute 😍
VC : Ummm. Hello...
Lely : Hello !
VC : Where are you going ?
Lely : To the beach, for a sunset stroll
VC : Can I join you ?
Lely : Sure !
Max : Well let's go then.
They took a path that passes through a maze. Happily they found out how to reach the beach.
Lely : Wow ! It's really really cute !
Max : I don't have any words, this is just beautiful.
Yascamer : Hi, what are you doing
Lely : How did you came here ?
Yascamer : Euh, je vis ici
Lely : Ah ok
Max : Anyways, what do you think of the sunset Nudge ?
Nudge : It's beautiful. I've never seen a bloody red sunset. That evocates death, pain and killing. Deliciously sinful.
Lely : I don't even want to understand if this is a kink or a weird obsession for something horrible.
Ralsei : What about sleeping a bit guys ? I'm tired.
Lely : Yeah, why not.
Yascamer : si vous voulez, je pense que c'est une bonne idée
Nudge : Yeah let's get some rest.
Max : 😴😴😴
Lely : POV : You're a Snorlax
Nudge : Correct. Plus we lived something... unusual, but that was so cool though.
Lely : I'm so sorry about that. Though, the sunset is beautiful!
VC : Agreed.
The calm waves that hitted the beach slowly, the soft breeze... it made Nudge, Lely, Max, Yascamer and VC asleep in a minute. Though, Ralsei prepared something...
Ralsei : I got banned from MKPCverse, thanks to those idiots. Let's get some revenge BAHAHAHAHAHA !
To realize the perfect crime, Ralsei paid some Piantas off to silently bring the squad to a peculiarly horrible place.
Nudge : Wait where are we ??? Oh noooo... not in this kind of place... hey ! Lely ! Wake up please! *his eyes are becoming watery*
Lely : Whats happening Nudge ? *worried voice tone*
Nudge : Don't you feel hot ? God HAPPILY Toadboi isn't here.
Lely : Yes I do... oh, did Ralsei... r---
Nudge : LELY !!! NOT THE TIME TO BE DUMB ! *cries and bites his lips*
Lely : Oh gosh... don't tell me we are AGAIN in a burning pipe
Nudge : Yes we are! 😭
Lely : Oh no Nudge. Don't cry. You're too cute to cry. I don't want you to be sad.
Max : no.
No. NO. NOOOOO. NOOOOOOOOOOOO. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO !
To be continued...
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Yeah. I always saw MKPC Archipel as a feel good fanfic. That's why I wanted to sugarcoat this episode. Though, I'm also interested by darker tones and stories.
Is there any questions or requests you have to send ? I'll respond to them.
I love how I'm progressing, but the plane needs to quit the ground. He's about to quit it but he's unable so far...
Anyways, have a good day/evening/night !
~ Lely / Invu

It looks like you’ve set it up perfoctky for a character death. Now just to wait and see who does die

I don't wanna hurt the feelings of the person who will die because I decided to...

Chapter 4 : Ralsei's revenge
Last time on MKPC Archipel... The heroes were trapped in a burning pipe by Ralsei, while they were sleeping.
Lely : Nudge, don't cry. I don't want you to cry. It's gonna be okay.
Nudge : 😭😭😭
Max : I have already seen times where it got canceled, but I didn't see any show with Lely, which was going wrong like this
Yascamer : ces une catastrophe
Ralsei : Be ready to fight... HAHAHAHAHAHA !
Nudge : Oh yes, we're getting out of this shitty pipe. We're fighting. I like it. Lely, stop hugging me and set me free.
Lely : Nudge, you're risking too much, due to your size. I'm 101% sure it's better for you to be in my arms
Nudge : But you're gonna fall
Lely : I don't want you to die, this is too dangerous for you and all of us know it
Nudge : Lely. Please.
Lely : *sighs* okay. Promise me to be careful, okay ?
Nudge : I'm stronger than you
Max : But
in this environment, you're risking more. However, this place is strange, I can feel something growing in my back  
Yascamer : max ton dos y  a des aile
Max : N'importe qu... QUOI ?
Lely : Some of the archipel's secret areas are really strange...
Max : definitively... Oh Lely. Your back as well, Nudge's one as well... everyone is getting wings
Lely : That is a great thing, the fight will be easier
Nudge : Exact
VC : Anyways, let's start. This volcano is burning hot and I want to get out.
Ralsei launched them out. He was in a flying Koopa machine, ready to launch his missiles.
Lely : You're doing that for a ban. Terrifying.
Nudge : Anyways, I will try to get on his flying car. I think it's possible, considering I'm now a bird bunny
Max : Be careful.
Ralsei : I've had enough! You guys were always pissing me off ! Max was telling me off, Nudge argued and Lely reported me ! Hellish trio ! But today, I'm going to flip the tables. It's me who will piss yall off. Well I'll even have a chance to end you ! That's a clever pleasure I deserved !
Lely : We're you supposed to look savage and cool ? You're kinda lacking abs and rejoinder
Ralsei : Shut up about the abs. You're fat.
Lely : Not much and anyways it's stupid. It won't make you smarter than me. I have to tell you I prefer being smart over being sportive
Ralsei : ENOUGH ! IM LAUCHING A MISSILE ON YOUR "BESTIE" !
Lely : NOOOOOO !!!!!!
Lely flied across the volcano to save Max and he took the missiles instead, causing his wings to burn and his head to get ached. He was about to fall in the volcano, but VC saved him.
Lely : si owe you one...
But VC accidentally let him fall. His weak body fel into the lava like the rocks thrower by kids fall in water. Some smoke exited that crual, terrifying ocean of lava, being in the shape of Lely.
Max : NOOOOOOOOOOOOO !!!!!
Nudge : Oh well 😕
VC : I'm so sorry 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Nudge : 🙁🙁🙁
Max : 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Nudge : ☹🥺😥😢😭😭
Yascamer : What happened guys/girls
Max : Are you blind ? LELY DIED 😑
Yascamer : ces triste mais bon on passe a  autre  chose
Nudge : Yascamer, you're not making sense. A human died and you want to move on...
Yascamer : bah en   meme temps ça va ces t que  lely
VC : BUT THATS STILL A HUMAN ! I
SWEAR !
Max : RALSEEIIIII !!!! THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT !!!! 🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬
Ralsei : OH MY GAWSH DANG LOOK AT THIS BUNCH OF CRYBABIES GO CRY IN A TRASH NOBODY CARES ABOUT LELY HE IS AN ASSHOLE NOW LET ME KILL YOU AND STOP THE WHINING BECAUSE YOU LOOK LIKE DYING BITCHES
Max : I SWEAR WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU SAYING ! YOU WANTED TO KILL ME ! AND YOU KILLED MY BESTIE ! YOU TRAPPED US BECAUSE WE REPORTED YOU ON A WEBSITE ! BOOH HOOH HOOH !
Nudge : RALSEI I SWEAR HOW CAN YOU BE THIS OBNOXIOUS ! YOU KILLED SOMEONE WHO DESERVES TO LIVE AND YOU DONT HAVE ANY REGRETS ! YOUR MINDSET IS TERRIBLE ! WHAT IS THAT ! I LIKE FICTIONAL DEATHS BUT REAL DEATHS ARENT GOOD AT ALL !!!!
VC : YES I ACCIDENTALLY LET LELY FALL AND I WILL FEEL FOREVER GUILTY ABOUT THAT, BUT IF WE'RE INTO THIS CRAPPY PLACE, ITS BECAUSE YOU TRAPPED US ! YOURE THE PROBLEM IN THAT CASE !
Yascamer : Ah
d accord j ai compris
RALSEI TU VAS VOIR RAAAH
Max : I DONT WANT TO KILL YOU ! BUT I ALMOST DO ! AND I SWEAR ! YOURE GONNA PAY A PRICE ! I DONT KNOW WHAT WILL THE PRICE BE, BUT YOU WONT GET OUT OF THIS WITHOUT ANY PROBLEMS ! TRUST ME, IM DOING WHAT IM SAYING !
Nudge : ENOUGH OF THE PUNCHLINE FIGHT ! COME HERE RALSEI ! WE WILL FIX THIS WITH CLAWS, PAWS, HANDS, FISTS, TEETH AND NAILS !
Ralsei : Let's go ! Anyways I don't care, I'LL WIN ! YOU'RE JUST GONNA DIE LIKE LELY DID !
Nudge : I DON'T CARE !!! *jumps straight to Ralsei*
Nudge reached Ralsei's flying ship. Ralsei was protected from any damage, but Bunny was smart enough to sneak in. After only 5 minutes he found Ralsei. Ralsei pushed him in another room of the ship, and made the ship shake. That caused Bunny's head to be hurt many times. Ralsei went in every direction. Happily, Max slapped the fragile glass with his Snorlax hands. Ralsei almost fell in lava and screamed a lot. Though, he managed to jump off from the plane. Nudge was unlocking him out but the ship sunk in lava and Bunny burnt like Lely did, with smoke getting out.
Max : NOOOO !!!! *cries* RALSEI YOU ARE DONE. NOW YOUR SHIP SUNK, WE WILL TRULY FIGHT IN EQUAL POSITIONS. I DONT CARE ABOUT DYING. TONIGHT WILL BE DEPRESSING ANYWAYS SINCE YOU KILLED NUDGE AND LELY, MY TWO BEST FRIENDS. VC AND YASCAMER ARE EVEN UNABLE TO FIGHT BECAUSE THE HOTNESS OF THIS AREA IS CAUSING THEM HEADACHES. SO NOW IT'S 1V1. THE TWO OF US. NO MORE SHIP. NO MORE FRIENDS. I WANT TO TAKE MY REVENGE
ON YOU, SO TONIGHT I CAN GIVE MYSELF DEATH, BUT WHILE BEING HAPPY ! IF I EVER GIVE MYSELF DEATH WITHOUT WINNING OVER YOU, THEN YOU'LL CONTINUE TO BE PROUD OF YOURSELF, OF YOUR HORRIBLE ACTIONS. I SWEAR I WILL MAKE YOU UNDERSTAND.
Ralsei : IM READY IM READY ! IM ONLY WAITING FOR THAT YOU IDIOT !
An intense fight started between Max and Ralsei started. Max hitted Ralsei strongly many times,  and it didn't left Ralsei safe. Though, he had healing potions in his pockets, which rubbed out the pain from him. Max was hitting Ralsei passionately, without ever thinking it would stop someday. He was taking the revenge he deserved. Though he was going hard on Ralsei. Ralsei couldn't help it, but only tried to defend himself from Max. Max noticed Ralsei's potions and threw them in the volcano. The color of the lava turned green, and the weather was now pretty cool. It gave some chills to the fighters.
What Max did would actually help the next chapter of this story a lot. Though the fight continued, continued, and Ralsei was more and more exhausted. Though, he ripped Max's wings off, and Max fell down from where he was. He started to scream alot, and Yascamer, plus VC, screamed as well. It sounded done for them. Ralsei had won.
Though Ralsei fell off as well. Max could touch him and he pushed him under himself. (Max pushed Ralsei under himself) it caused Ralsei to be a boat for Max, and Max was able to reach a shore before Ralsei sunk under Max's snorlax weight. As soon as he reached it, he fainted for 5 minutes. When he woke up, he was sweating and he was still on the same shoreline. All the lava was drained though. Max had a headache and several injuries, but he was able to walk. He went to VC and Yascamer, who went pretty well since then. The trio was very sad of how it turned out. They found Lely, Nudge and Ralsei laying on the ground. They took the three bodies, and Max called the hospital and the firemen. Both helped them to get out of the volcano. It was now 11PM and Piantas were partying. The Archipelago looked so nice but without their friends, it felt weird and sad. So Max, VC and Yascamer carried the dead bodies into the cold water. While the sky was rosé from the last remains of the sunset, they bathed the bodies in cold water, then they dried them. They brought them back at the huts and put them on the beds.
Max : Guys, let's take a snack. It will comfort us a bit.
VC : Agreed...
Max cried, thinking to Lely and Nudge, and to all the people who left. They just wanted to have fun and spend some time together, they ended up seeing some of them dead, some of them leaving, some of them fainting...
What was that?
They would hope for better days in the future. They would like Lely and Nudge to wake up. But life doesn't works like that. Sadly, you have sometimes to face the worst shits you haven't deserved.
Max : 😭😭😭
🎶But tonight I'll be the happiest girl in the world,
You'll see it, like it doesn't matters
Tonight, I'll be the happiest girl in the world
You'll see it, like it never happened🎶
Lely : Ouch... what just happened...
Nudge : Do you think I know ?
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Please share your thoughts
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Super, comme toujours, même si c'est triste...
Le combat face à Ralsei c'est épique, même si j'ai pas trop compris la fin, je vais relire cette partie pour voir
Et je ne suis plus un Ronflex mdr, 15 fois que je le répète XD, mais pas grave

Now I get to experience the afterlife Wargor set up for us

What are you talking about----- oh nevermind