[FANFIC] Super MKPC World (MATURE CONTENT WARNING)
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On 2024-04-08 at 01:06:09
Decided not to do the poll thing, instead next episode, these are the new characters:
We replacing Cario since he ceased to exist
Really though, he just said something and Nudgy was being an absolute radical guy and made him cease to exist on this site too
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On 2024-04-08 at 01:19:22
Decided not to do the poll thing, instead next episode, these are the new characters:
We replacing Cario since he ceased to exist
Really though, he just said something and Nudgy was being an absolute radical guy and made him cease to exist on this site too
Hey, uh...
If there's ever an open spot, can I join?
1On 2024-04-08 at 02:07:23
Decided not to do the poll thing, instead next episode, these are the new characters:
We replacing Cario since he ceased to exist
Really though, he just said something and Nudgy was being an absolute radical guy and made him cease to exist on this site too
Hey, uh...
If there's ever an open spot, can I join?
Same with me
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On 2024-04-08 at 09:02:53
Wait Limey is banned now so does he die as he's banished from the realms of MKPC!?
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2On 2024-04-08 at 10:17:21
Wait Limey is banned now so does he die as he's banished from the realms of MKPC!?
I don’t think he dies I think he’ll just cease to exist like Cario
On 2024-04-08 at 12:22:17
Decided not to do the poll thing, instead next episode, these are the new characters:
Should I send my info here (by editing this message) or through pms?
Send it here since otherwise I'll probably forget lol
1On 2024-04-08 at 12:38:16
Name: Dietsoda
> Colour: deepskyblue
> Personality: Will take situations seriously. Will also engage in banter. No romance. Not emotional. Competent.
> Species: (high) elf
> Gender: your choice (between male or female)
> Colour: deepskyblue
> Personality: Will take situations seriously. Will also engage in banter. No romance. Not emotional. Competent.
> Species: (high) elf
> Gender: your choice (between male or female)
11On 2024-04-08 at 12:51:20
Decided not to do the poll thing, instead next episode, these are the new characters:
We replacing Cario since he ceased to exist
Really though, he just said something and Nudgy was being an absolute radical guy and made him cease to exist on this site too
Hey, uh...
If there's ever an open spot, can I join?
Saw the checkmark.
Locked and loaded when that moment happens.
On 2024-04-08 at 22:33:14
/!\ TRIGGER WARNING /!\
Just so you're aware, the next chapter will contain the following topics which some may find upsetting or disturbing:
If you find any of these topics upsetting or otherwise disquieting, I would highly advise to skip the next chapter when it releases (don't worry, a recap will be posted in the following chapter with these removed
)
I hope you continue to enjoy Super MKPC World!
Just so you're aware, the next chapter will contain the following topics which some may find upsetting or disturbing:
- Physical abuse (and no not just in a slap fighty sense)
- References to drug/alcohol abuse
- Domestic abuse
- Self-harm
- References to suicide
- References to drug/alcohol abuse
- Domestic abuse
- Self-harm
- References to suicide
If you find any of these topics upsetting or otherwise disquieting, I would highly advise to skip the next chapter when it releases (don't worry, a recap will be posted in the following chapter with these removed
)I hope you continue to enjoy Super MKPC World!
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1On 2024-04-14 at 18:22:41
Chapter 2 is out! Due to heavy theming, you have to click the spoiler to read the chapter 
Season 1, Chapter 2: Hello Wyvernia...?
Max: So we arrived at Wyvernia...
Alyssa: Yep! This is my hometown!
Nudge: Wait where's Cario? I miss having him around, he was fun to bully.
Limey: I think it's best he's not here and rather just faded into inexistence.
Lely: You were so good in Chapter 1... why waste it now?
Eli: Admit it Lely, you also wanted that perv gone.
Lely: No I didn't, I just wanted him to stop being a pervert is all.
As the gang begins to retrieve their luggage from the jet, some familiar faces appear.
???: Well, if it isn't my old pals!
Alyssa: Fiery? Dietsoda? xrunner? What are you guys doing here?
Dietsoda: Oh, we're just passing by on vacation. What about you guys?
Nudge: Illu broke the castle and felt bad so she abducted us and took us here.
Pixel: That's not what happened at all. The castle was as old as your ancestors anyway.
Fiery: The castle broke? Fucking hell... how did it break?
Max: No construction expert, but my guess is the walls just wouldn't hold in after all that time.
Nudge: Don't lie, it was Illu's fault. That castle was only built in 2001, Max.
Lely: So? Doesn't mean the walls are perfectly stable. There was fucking asbestos in the ceiling too, which by the way has been illegal to use in buildings since 1986 due to the lung issues it causes, it was a major health risk and personally I'm glad she saved, or as you say, abducted us.
Nudge: Shut the hell up nerd.
Max: Speak for yourself, straight A student.
Nudge: Well at least I don't get ungraded in each test since I'm not retarded.
Alyssa: All of you stop it. Lely's right, asbestos and faulty walls aren't an ideal mix. And Nudge, watch your fucking language.
Nudge: Okay tra-
Eli: DON'T YOU DARE INSULT MY COUSIN!
Eli jumps on Nudge, punching the rabbit repetitively in the face, drawing tons of blood.
Eli: I'LL FUCKING KILL YOU!
Lely: (Trying to pull Eli off of Nudge) HEY! STOP IT! VIOLENCE IS NOT THE ANSWER!
Eli: (Punches Lely in the face, drawing blood) DON'T DEFEND THAT SLUT! YOU HEARD WHAT HE CALLED ALYSSA! I FUCKING HATE YOU! HATE YOU ALL! I HOPE YOU ALL DROP THE FUCK DEAD!
Eli storms off and Lely starts crying from the shock and pain of the punch.
xrunner: Wow, what a jerk...
Alyssa: Oh shit, you two're bleeding! Here, lemme get you some- (Fumbles in her pocket) Fuck's sake, I must've left the antiseptic cream on the jet...
Osc: (Giggling) Cream?
Alyssa: You know what kind of cream I'm talking about, now get your mind out of the pigsty and go get it for me please-
???: Looking for this?
The mysterious figure holds up the bottle of antiseptic cream, as if they know Alyssa needs it somehow.
xrunner: Oh great, we have unwanted airport security... bro, you up for some fighting?
As xrunner says that, the figure somersaults into the air and runs off.
xrunner: DAMN IT!
Pixel: Babe, should we go follow them?
Alyssa: Sure thing precious. Max, look after Lely and Nudge while we're gone. I'll look for Eli afterwards.
Twilight: I could go look for him if you want.
Alyssa: Actually yeah, thanks Choco.
Twilight: You're welcome.
Twilight runs off to find Eli as Alyssa and Pixel pursue the elusive thief.
Eli: THAT FUCKING WHORISH DICKHEAD! (Punches the sand in anger)
Twilight: Hey. Eli, calm down.
Eli: (Gets even angrier) CALM DOWN?! WHO THE BLEEDING FUCK ARE YOU TO TELL ME TO CALM DOWN?!
Twilight: Look, I get you were mad at Nudge for calling Alyssa a slur, but you did NOT need to hit Lely too. You made his face bleed.
Eli: (Snarls) HE WAS DEFENDING NUDGE! THEY SHOULD BOTH HANG THEMSELVES FROM A FUCKING TREE!
Twilight: NO HE WASN'T! AND NO THEY SHOULDN'T! AND SO WHAT IF HE WAS?! IT DOES NOT GIVE YOU THE RIGHT TO HIT HIM AND DRAW BLOOD!
Eli: (Calms down) You... you're right... I should've been more careful... I need to apologize...
Twilight: I'd save it for later. Some random dumbass just ran off with the antiseptic cream so now Lely and Nudge are just bleeding loads.
Eli: Okay... thank you Choco...
Twilight: (Smiles) You're welcome.
Meanwhile, further into Wyvernia...
Pixel: What the hell?! How are you not running out of energy with all this chasing?
Alyssa: Flying actually requires much less energy for walking, which is why I should fly more, but then I'd risk becoming severely unhealthy.
Pixel: I guess... (Gasps for breath and continues running)
Alyssa and Pixel eventually reach an abandoned building in the southern outskirts of Arachne Town, where they hope to retrieve the antiseptic.
Alyssa: I'll go in through the top, you go in through the main door. Got it?
Pixel: Got it.
Alyssa: (Lifts the window open) Time to go in and get the antiseptic back...
They enter the building and see a girl crying on her bed with the antiseptic on her table.
Alyssa: Uhm... hey... are you okay...?
???: (Crying) I'm so sorry!
Alyssa: (Looks at Pixel, who nods her head) What are you apologizing for? (Picks up the antiseptic cream) Did you take this from me?
???: (Nods, then shakes her head) Yeah I took that... but that's not why I'm crying... you two should probably be going...
Pixel: Why? Is this a trap?
???: No...
The girl breaks down sobbing, and Alyssa strokes her hair to comfort her.
Alyssa: You don't have anything to be afraid of, it's okay...
???: No but... I do...
The girl shows Alyssa a cut on her arm, it looks fresh and deep.
Alyssa: (Gasps in shock) Oh my Goddess...
Pixel: WHAT?! Who did this to you?!
???: (Scared of telling Alyssa and Pixel) I... it's not... it's not that bad...
Alyssa: It's deeper than the rift in the mountain in Shamrock Isle...
???: Fuck, I guess having a shit ton of weed really does numb the pain...
Pixel: You do that?! You don't look that old...
???: I'm 17... and my boyfriend doesn't give a shit... in fact he'd rather just yell at me and tell me I'm a worthless slut... (Cries some more)
Pixel: (Whispering to Alyssa) I think we should give her some space for a little...
Alyssa: (Whispering back) Agreed, I don't wanna seem like we're just here to extract info from her...
Back at the beach...
Lely: (Crying) Why would Eli do this to us all of a sudden?!
Nudge: (Mockingly) Haha, Lely's crying. Boo hoo, look at me, I'm Lely the fucking wimp.
Osc: Being serious, you don't even have the right to say anything. You started this.
Dietsoda: Honestly I agree with Osc. You were the one to call Alyssa that slur, and then acted surprised when her cousin jumped on you and tore your fur out. Now I'm not defending violence or anything, but you really should tread much more carefully next time.
Max: Wait what about Lely? He didn't do anything wrong!
Dietsoda: And I never said anything on the contrary to that. Lely was simply trying to get Eli to stop, which I commend.
Lely: I just hope Illu returns with the antiseptic...
Nudge: She's probably covering Pixel in it and pretending it's something weird.
Dietsoda: And that is exactly why you were attacked. Are you blind or just an overall jackass?
Nudge: Are you a simp for karma or just an overall dickhead?
xrunner: Hey. I'm not going to randomly attack you but you do NOT talk to my brother in that way.
In the heat of all this, Twilight returns with Eli.
Nudge: Well look who's back. Here to try and murder us all again?
Eli: No... I just wanted to say I'm sorry-
Nudge: Sorry? Sorry?! Do you think sorry fucking cuts it?! You made me lose around a gallon of blood and all you can say is sorry?!
Max: Nudge, wait-
Nudge: Don't tell me what to do you stupid furry. That piece of ape shit scarred my cheek and shoulder, do you think sorry is even a good enough apology?!
Lely: Nudge, you're being way too harsh. Just be patient and wait for Illu to-
Nudge: Wait for Illu to come back?! She fucking abandoned us again! And she left us all here with her psychopath of a so-called cousin, do you think I'd wait for her to come back?!
D4rk: That is so not giving queen.
Limey: Oh, you can shut up too.
D4rk: Nawww that's giving skibidi gyatt Ohio depression for real, what a beta male queen.
Nudge: Well I think that both of those sluts should fucking get it over with and die. How dare our fucking savior Illu leave us with the devil that is her cousin, the plague and misery of our lives.
Dietsoda: Wow. You're being far too harsh. Stop being a bitch to everyone over your face being ever so slightly cut.
Eli: (Crying) ...Nudge is right... I should die...
Eli solemnly trudges over to the shore and falls somewhat leisurely into the sea.
Max: ELI!
Nudge: Not my problem.
Max: YES IT IS! HE COULD'VE KILLED HIMSELF FOR ALL YOU CARE!
Lely: Wow... this is not it. "Our fucking savior Illu?" "The devil that is her cousin?" "The plague and misery of our lives?" I swear to God, that's way too far over a simple cut.
Max: I'm going in after him, and Nudge, you had better apologize regardless of whether I return with or without him.
Max dives into the sea fearlessly, and returns in due with a half-conscious Eli in tow.
Fiery: Thank fuck you're both alive...
Nudge: Uggghhh...
Meanwhile, with Alyssa and the girls...
Alyssa: So... how did you get those scars on your arm...?
???: I... I can't tell you... you'd only get mad at me... like everyone else...
Pixel: We won't, we swear upon the goddess. (Strokes the girl's back)
???: Okay... Well... I... I did this myself... (Crying)
Alyssa: Oh shit... one second...
Alyssa places a dollop of antiseptic on the scar and bandages it up, after which the girl breaks down again and hugs her.
???: Thank you so much...
Alyssa: (Reciprocates the hug) You're welcome... by the way if you need anything from me again just ask, you don't have to steal it...
Pixel: Wait, why exactly did you hurt yourself?
As the girl goes to speak a tall teenage boy, easily around twice Lely's height, emerges from the doorway.
???: Kay-Kay! What are you doing inviting your stupid friends over?!
Kay-Kay: I... I... (She looks visibly spooked)
???: YOU WHORE! I TOLD YOU NOT TO HAVE FRIENDS OVER AND YOU DIDN'T FUCKING LISTEN AS ALWAYS!
The boy grabs a belt from the desk and attempts to strike Kay-Kay with it, but Alyssa manages to save her by grabbing the belt and tearing it in half before it can cause any harm.
???: What the-
Alyssa: That is NOT cool at all. You'd be lucky if I didn't gut you alive at this point, you do NOT hit a woman.
???: (Gets haughty) And what if I do? I'm her boyfriend, you're just some worthless slut who thinks you can manipulate her against me. (Grabs a knife) You know, your blood would certainly look amazing all over this floor...
Despite the threat, Alyssa remains unfazed by the sight of the knife and stands her ground.
Alyssa: You think a puny kitchen knife would scare me? No, I stand my ground, you do not hit a woman you lowlife, it's even worse that she's your own girlfriend.
???: DON'T TELL ME WHAT TO DO! (Tries to stab Alyssa but the faerie flies upwards and dodges it easily) WHAT THE FUCK?! COME DOWN HERE RIGHT NOW AND LET ME SPLIT YOUR BRAIN IN HALF!
Pixel sneaks up behind Kay-Kay's so-called boyfriend and floors him easily, then Alyssa flies down and stabs him right in the arm with his own knife.
???: OWWWW! ARE YOU TRYING TO FUCKING MURDER ME?!
Alyssa: No, I'm trying to get you to realize that what you're doing is wrong. Now I think Kay-Kay deserves much better than whatever the hell you are, so we're leaving.
Alyssa leaves with Pixel and Kay-Kay in tow, having successfully managed to retrieve the antiseptic. But will they get to Lely and Nudge in time? Find out next time in Super MKPC World!
Max: So we arrived at Wyvernia...
Alyssa: Yep! This is my hometown!
Nudge: Wait where's Cario? I miss having him around, he was fun to bully.
Limey: I think it's best he's not here and rather just faded into inexistence.
Lely: You were so good in Chapter 1... why waste it now?
Eli: Admit it Lely, you also wanted that perv gone.
Lely: No I didn't, I just wanted him to stop being a pervert is all.
As the gang begins to retrieve their luggage from the jet, some familiar faces appear.
???: Well, if it isn't my old pals!
Alyssa: Fiery? Dietsoda? xrunner? What are you guys doing here?
Dietsoda: Oh, we're just passing by on vacation. What about you guys?
Nudge: Illu broke the castle and felt bad so she abducted us and took us here.
Pixel: That's not what happened at all. The castle was as old as your ancestors anyway.
Fiery: The castle broke? Fucking hell... how did it break?
Max: No construction expert, but my guess is the walls just wouldn't hold in after all that time.
Nudge: Don't lie, it was Illu's fault. That castle was only built in 2001, Max.
Lely: So? Doesn't mean the walls are perfectly stable. There was fucking asbestos in the ceiling too, which by the way has been illegal to use in buildings since 1986 due to the lung issues it causes, it was a major health risk and personally I'm glad she saved, or as you say, abducted us.
Nudge: Shut the hell up nerd.
Max: Speak for yourself, straight A student.
Nudge: Well at least I don't get ungraded in each test since I'm not retarded.
Alyssa: All of you stop it. Lely's right, asbestos and faulty walls aren't an ideal mix. And Nudge, watch your fucking language.
Nudge: Okay tra-
Eli: DON'T YOU DARE INSULT MY COUSIN!
Eli jumps on Nudge, punching the rabbit repetitively in the face, drawing tons of blood.
Eli: I'LL FUCKING KILL YOU!
Lely: (Trying to pull Eli off of Nudge) HEY! STOP IT! VIOLENCE IS NOT THE ANSWER!
Eli: (Punches Lely in the face, drawing blood) DON'T DEFEND THAT SLUT! YOU HEARD WHAT HE CALLED ALYSSA! I FUCKING HATE YOU! HATE YOU ALL! I HOPE YOU ALL DROP THE FUCK DEAD!
Eli storms off and Lely starts crying from the shock and pain of the punch.
xrunner: Wow, what a jerk...
Alyssa: Oh shit, you two're bleeding! Here, lemme get you some- (Fumbles in her pocket) Fuck's sake, I must've left the antiseptic cream on the jet...
Osc: (Giggling) Cream?
Alyssa: You know what kind of cream I'm talking about, now get your mind out of the pigsty and go get it for me please-
???: Looking for this?
The mysterious figure holds up the bottle of antiseptic cream, as if they know Alyssa needs it somehow.
xrunner: Oh great, we have unwanted airport security... bro, you up for some fighting?
As xrunner says that, the figure somersaults into the air and runs off.
xrunner: DAMN IT!
Pixel: Babe, should we go follow them?
Alyssa: Sure thing precious. Max, look after Lely and Nudge while we're gone. I'll look for Eli afterwards.
Twilight: I could go look for him if you want.
Alyssa: Actually yeah, thanks Choco.
Twilight: You're welcome.
Twilight runs off to find Eli as Alyssa and Pixel pursue the elusive thief.
Eli: THAT FUCKING WHORISH DICKHEAD! (Punches the sand in anger)
Twilight: Hey. Eli, calm down.
Eli: (Gets even angrier) CALM DOWN?! WHO THE BLEEDING FUCK ARE YOU TO TELL ME TO CALM DOWN?!
Twilight: Look, I get you were mad at Nudge for calling Alyssa a slur, but you did NOT need to hit Lely too. You made his face bleed.
Eli: (Snarls) HE WAS DEFENDING NUDGE! THEY SHOULD BOTH HANG THEMSELVES FROM A FUCKING TREE!
Twilight: NO HE WASN'T! AND NO THEY SHOULDN'T! AND SO WHAT IF HE WAS?! IT DOES NOT GIVE YOU THE RIGHT TO HIT HIM AND DRAW BLOOD!
Eli: (Calms down) You... you're right... I should've been more careful... I need to apologize...
Twilight: I'd save it for later. Some random dumbass just ran off with the antiseptic cream so now Lely and Nudge are just bleeding loads.
Eli: Okay... thank you Choco...
Twilight: (Smiles) You're welcome.
Meanwhile, further into Wyvernia...
Pixel: What the hell?! How are you not running out of energy with all this chasing?
Alyssa: Flying actually requires much less energy for walking, which is why I should fly more, but then I'd risk becoming severely unhealthy.
Pixel: I guess... (Gasps for breath and continues running)
Alyssa and Pixel eventually reach an abandoned building in the southern outskirts of Arachne Town, where they hope to retrieve the antiseptic.
Alyssa: I'll go in through the top, you go in through the main door. Got it?
Pixel: Got it.
Alyssa: (Lifts the window open) Time to go in and get the antiseptic back...
They enter the building and see a girl crying on her bed with the antiseptic on her table.
Alyssa: Uhm... hey... are you okay...?
???: (Crying) I'm so sorry!
Alyssa: (Looks at Pixel, who nods her head) What are you apologizing for? (Picks up the antiseptic cream) Did you take this from me?
???: (Nods, then shakes her head) Yeah I took that... but that's not why I'm crying... you two should probably be going...
Pixel: Why? Is this a trap?
???: No...
The girl breaks down sobbing, and Alyssa strokes her hair to comfort her.
Alyssa: You don't have anything to be afraid of, it's okay...
???: No but... I do...
The girl shows Alyssa a cut on her arm, it looks fresh and deep.
Alyssa: (Gasps in shock) Oh my Goddess...
Pixel: WHAT?! Who did this to you?!
???: (Scared of telling Alyssa and Pixel) I... it's not... it's not that bad...
Alyssa: It's deeper than the rift in the mountain in Shamrock Isle...
???: Fuck, I guess having a shit ton of weed really does numb the pain...
Pixel: You do that?! You don't look that old...
???: I'm 17... and my boyfriend doesn't give a shit... in fact he'd rather just yell at me and tell me I'm a worthless slut... (Cries some more)
Pixel: (Whispering to Alyssa) I think we should give her some space for a little...
Alyssa: (Whispering back) Agreed, I don't wanna seem like we're just here to extract info from her...
Back at the beach...
Lely: (Crying) Why would Eli do this to us all of a sudden?!
Nudge: (Mockingly) Haha, Lely's crying. Boo hoo, look at me, I'm Lely the fucking wimp.
Osc: Being serious, you don't even have the right to say anything. You started this.
Dietsoda: Honestly I agree with Osc. You were the one to call Alyssa that slur, and then acted surprised when her cousin jumped on you and tore your fur out. Now I'm not defending violence or anything, but you really should tread much more carefully next time.
Max: Wait what about Lely? He didn't do anything wrong!
Dietsoda: And I never said anything on the contrary to that. Lely was simply trying to get Eli to stop, which I commend.
Lely: I just hope Illu returns with the antiseptic...
Nudge: She's probably covering Pixel in it and pretending it's something weird.
Dietsoda: And that is exactly why you were attacked. Are you blind or just an overall jackass?
Nudge: Are you a simp for karma or just an overall dickhead?
xrunner: Hey. I'm not going to randomly attack you but you do NOT talk to my brother in that way.
In the heat of all this, Twilight returns with Eli.
Nudge: Well look who's back. Here to try and murder us all again?
Eli: No... I just wanted to say I'm sorry-
Nudge: Sorry? Sorry?! Do you think sorry fucking cuts it?! You made me lose around a gallon of blood and all you can say is sorry?!
Max: Nudge, wait-
Nudge: Don't tell me what to do you stupid furry. That piece of ape shit scarred my cheek and shoulder, do you think sorry is even a good enough apology?!
Lely: Nudge, you're being way too harsh. Just be patient and wait for Illu to-
Nudge: Wait for Illu to come back?! She fucking abandoned us again! And she left us all here with her psychopath of a so-called cousin, do you think I'd wait for her to come back?!
D4rk: That is so not giving queen.
Limey: Oh, you can shut up too.
D4rk: Nawww that's giving skibidi gyatt Ohio depression for real, what a beta male queen.
Nudge: Well I think that both of those sluts should fucking get it over with and die. How dare our fucking savior Illu leave us with the devil that is her cousin, the plague and misery of our lives.
Dietsoda: Wow. You're being far too harsh. Stop being a bitch to everyone over your face being ever so slightly cut.
Eli: (Crying) ...Nudge is right... I should die...
Eli solemnly trudges over to the shore and falls somewhat leisurely into the sea.
Max: ELI!
Nudge: Not my problem.
Max: YES IT IS! HE COULD'VE KILLED HIMSELF FOR ALL YOU CARE!
Lely: Wow... this is not it. "Our fucking savior Illu?" "The devil that is her cousin?" "The plague and misery of our lives?" I swear to God, that's way too far over a simple cut.
Max: I'm going in after him, and Nudge, you had better apologize regardless of whether I return with or without him.
Max dives into the sea fearlessly, and returns in due with a half-conscious Eli in tow.
Fiery: Thank fuck you're both alive...
Nudge: Uggghhh...
Meanwhile, with Alyssa and the girls...
Alyssa: So... how did you get those scars on your arm...?
???: I... I can't tell you... you'd only get mad at me... like everyone else...
Pixel: We won't, we swear upon the goddess. (Strokes the girl's back)
???: Okay... Well... I... I did this myself... (Crying)
Alyssa: Oh shit... one second...
Alyssa places a dollop of antiseptic on the scar and bandages it up, after which the girl breaks down again and hugs her.
???: Thank you so much...
Alyssa: (Reciprocates the hug) You're welcome... by the way if you need anything from me again just ask, you don't have to steal it...
Pixel: Wait, why exactly did you hurt yourself?
As the girl goes to speak a tall teenage boy, easily around twice Lely's height, emerges from the doorway.
???: Kay-Kay! What are you doing inviting your stupid friends over?!
Kay-Kay: I... I... (She looks visibly spooked)
???: YOU WHORE! I TOLD YOU NOT TO HAVE FRIENDS OVER AND YOU DIDN'T FUCKING LISTEN AS ALWAYS!
The boy grabs a belt from the desk and attempts to strike Kay-Kay with it, but Alyssa manages to save her by grabbing the belt and tearing it in half before it can cause any harm.
???: What the-
Alyssa: That is NOT cool at all. You'd be lucky if I didn't gut you alive at this point, you do NOT hit a woman.
???: (Gets haughty) And what if I do? I'm her boyfriend, you're just some worthless slut who thinks you can manipulate her against me. (Grabs a knife) You know, your blood would certainly look amazing all over this floor...
Despite the threat, Alyssa remains unfazed by the sight of the knife and stands her ground.
Alyssa: You think a puny kitchen knife would scare me? No, I stand my ground, you do not hit a woman you lowlife, it's even worse that she's your own girlfriend.
???: DON'T TELL ME WHAT TO DO! (Tries to stab Alyssa but the faerie flies upwards and dodges it easily) WHAT THE FUCK?! COME DOWN HERE RIGHT NOW AND LET ME SPLIT YOUR BRAIN IN HALF!
Pixel sneaks up behind Kay-Kay's so-called boyfriend and floors him easily, then Alyssa flies down and stabs him right in the arm with his own knife.
???: OWWWW! ARE YOU TRYING TO FUCKING MURDER ME?!
Alyssa: No, I'm trying to get you to realize that what you're doing is wrong. Now I think Kay-Kay deserves much better than whatever the hell you are, so we're leaving.
Alyssa leaves with Pixel and Kay-Kay in tow, having successfully managed to retrieve the antiseptic. But will they get to Lely and Nudge in time? Find out next time in Super MKPC World!
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2On 2024-04-14 at 19:09:28
(Apologies for the triple post) Probably the least fair line distribution but since it was a very plot-heavy episode I don't really care
Eli - 23
Alyssa - 22
Nudge - 16
Kay-Kay - 12
Pixel - 11
Lely - 8
Max - 8
Twilight - 7
Unnamed character - 6
Dietsoda - 5
xrunner - 4
Fiery - 3
D4rk - 2
Limey - 2
Osc - 2
Total - 131
Eli - 23
Alyssa - 22
Nudge - 16
Kay-Kay - 12
Pixel - 11
Lely - 8
Max - 8
Twilight - 7
Unnamed character - 6
Dietsoda - 5
xrunner - 4
Fiery - 3
D4rk - 2
Limey - 2
Osc - 2
Total - 131
On 2024-04-14 at 19:45:48
I am happy that the episode is finally out, but I do have some criticism.
First of all, why doesn't Nudge give a fuck about being cut when he is with me but suddenly overreacts when Eli comes ?
Second of all, why is that girl being added to the story ? It feels like the main plot is already really dark and dramatic, so I don't know if we truly need the depressive girl and the abusive prick, but the scene is okay anyways. Well written.
I think more people should side with Nudge, in a situation like this, realistically, there are people who will defend Nudge and me because we got cut. While here, most people mainly blame Nudge for sparking the argument and for reacting that way and saying some shit about Pixel and Eli. I think the problem was well handled but also held back by both Nudge's inconsistency and also the fact that everyone is going for Nudge, barely caring that Eli actually cut us. Idk. In real life, it seems like most people would get offended at the one hitting. But it's still good.
Overall a good episode but I had my little criticism. I still like it and am looking forward to the rest.
First of all, why doesn't Nudge give a fuck about being cut when he is with me but suddenly overreacts when Eli comes ?
Second of all, why is that girl being added to the story ? It feels like the main plot is already really dark and dramatic, so I don't know if we truly need the depressive girl and the abusive prick, but the scene is okay anyways. Well written.
I think more people should side with Nudge, in a situation like this, realistically, there are people who will defend Nudge and me because we got cut. While here, most people mainly blame Nudge for sparking the argument and for reacting that way and saying some shit about Pixel and Eli. I think the problem was well handled but also held back by both Nudge's inconsistency and also the fact that everyone is going for Nudge, barely caring that Eli actually cut us. Idk. In real life, it seems like most people would get offended at the one hitting. But it's still good.
Overall a good episode but I had my little criticism. I still like it and am looking forward to the rest.
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On 2024-04-14 at 20:27:14
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IM INSTANTLY POSTING MY INFO AFTER KNOWING THIS INFORMATION33On 2024-04-14 at 21:20:21
I am happy that the episode is finally out, but I do have some criticism.
First of all, why doesn't Nudge give a fuck about being cut when he is with me but suddenly overreacts when Eli comes ?
Second of all, why is that girl being added to the story ? It feels like the main plot is already really dark and dramatic, so I don't know if we truly need the depressive girl and the abusive prick, but the scene is okay anyways. Well written.
I think more people should side with Nudge, in a situation like this, realistically, there are people who will defend Nudge and me because we got cut. While here, most people mainly blame Nudge for sparking the argument and for reacting that way and saying some shit about Pixel and Eli. I think the problem was well handled but also held back by both Nudge's inconsistency and also the fact that everyone is going for Nudge, barely caring that Eli actually cut us. Idk. In real life, it seems like most people would get offended at the one hitting. But it's still good.
Overall a good episode but I had my little criticism. I still like it and am looking forward to the rest.
First of all, why doesn't Nudge give a fuck about being cut when he is with me but suddenly overreacts when Eli comes ?
Second of all, why is that girl being added to the story ? It feels like the main plot is already really dark and dramatic, so I don't know if we truly need the depressive girl and the abusive prick, but the scene is okay anyways. Well written.
I think more people should side with Nudge, in a situation like this, realistically, there are people who will defend Nudge and me because we got cut. While here, most people mainly blame Nudge for sparking the argument and for reacting that way and saying some shit about Pixel and Eli. I think the problem was well handled but also held back by both Nudge's inconsistency and also the fact that everyone is going for Nudge, barely caring that Eli actually cut us. Idk. In real life, it seems like most people would get offended at the one hitting. But it's still good.
Overall a good episode but I had my little criticism. I still like it and am looking forward to the rest.
I understand your criticism but yes the girl and the abusive lover are absolutely necessary, it will explain the absence of a key character in the plot
As for the Nudge/Eli situation I wanted to view it from a more liberal perspective as in "yes what Eli did was wrong and we should never commend that behavior, but what Nudge did in response was crossing the line majorly", rather than a more authoritarian viewpoint which would commend everything Nudge said over Eli's seemingly harsh actions
Also, the reason Nudge only gives a fuck when Eli is present is because he was using a sarcastic façade about the cut despite the fact that he was still bitter about what Eli did
On 2024-04-14 at 21:27:10
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Just so you're aware, the next chapter will contain the following topics which some may find upsetting or disturbing:
- Physical abuse (and no not just in a slap fighty sense)
- References to drug/alcohol abuse
- Domestic abuse
- Self-harm
- References to suicide
- References to drug/alcohol abuse
- Domestic abuse
- Self-harm
- References to suicide
If you find any of these topics upsetting or otherwise disquieting, I would highly advise to skip the next chapter when it releases (don't worry, a recap will be posted in the following chapter with these removed
)I hope you continue to enjoy Super MKPC World!
A fucking game for children
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/!\ TRIGGER WARNING /!\
Just so you're aware, the next chapter will contain the following topics which some may find upsetting or disturbing:
If you find any of these topics upsetting or otherwise disquieting, I would highly advise to skip the next chapter when it releases (don't worry, a recap will be posted in the following chapter with these removed)
I hope you continue to enjoy Super MKPC World!
Just so you're aware, the next chapter will contain the following topics which some may find upsetting or disturbing:
- Physical abuse (and no not just in a slap fighty sense)
- References to drug/alcohol abuse
- Domestic abuse
- Self-harm
- References to suicide
- References to drug/alcohol abuse
- Domestic abuse
- Self-harm
- References to suicide
If you find any of these topics upsetting or otherwise disquieting, I would highly advise to skip the next chapter when it releases (don't worry, a recap will be posted in the following chapter with these removed
)I hope you continue to enjoy Super MKPC World!
A fucking game for children
You say that and you're literally 20, so you can respectfully get off this site by that logic, plus you cannot stop me from making something mature, I've posted more than enough content warnings, thank you