[FANFIC] The past and future of MKPC (That actually too much FanFic)
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On 2023-01-14 at 11:29:08
If you want to join :
Your Name in the Fanfic (obligatory)
Personality and ability (Not obligatory)
And if you are in the :
Neutral :
Me (MisterCringeh) Im powerful, can make a lot of large elements appear: black hole, etc...
Goonoo, can't speak but read in the mind of people (since he didnt what team he is, he is Neutral
xrunner48, Noclip, Unmatched Reaction Times.
Bad team :
Nudge, good power and climbing
Popplio, Can blow bubbles with his nose
Brint, Can summon stuff like bridges and what not
Dietsoda, Very good eyesight, great with a bow, good at tracking.
Good team :
Cosmo, Can fly, can summon other Lumas to come fight.
Lely, switch to his stronger alter ego
Max,Can instantly heal someone but this power costs a lot of energy, to the point that sometimes it can even pass out, so I only use it in an emergency
and make things levitate but the heavier it is the more complicated it is
And your color
If you dont want to join I respect that
PS : I love saying "Bread."
Name: pingouin
Color: Cyan
Abilities: Can turn into an animal
Et tu es du coté : Équipe Gentille ou Méchante ? Sinon je te met dans les neutres si sa te convient?
Team gentille
Cool ! Bon je t'ajoute, et la suite arriveras cette après midi
Je change de nom, maintenant je m'appelle: pingouin33
I change my name, now my name is: pingouin33
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On 2023-01-14 at 13:33:50
If you want to join :
Your Name in the Fanfic (obligatory)
Personality and ability (Not obligatory)
And if you are in the :
Neutral :
Me (MisterCringeh) Im powerful, can make a lot of large elements appear: black hole, etc...
Goonoo, can't speak but read in the mind of people (since he didnt what team he is, he is Neutral
xrunner48, Noclip, Unmatched Reaction Times.
Bad team :
Nudge, good power and climbing
Popplio, Can blow bubbles with his nose
Brint, Can summon stuff like bridges and what not
Dietsoda, Very good eyesight, great with a bow, good at tracking.
Good team :
Cosmo, Can fly, can summon other Lumas to come fight.
Lely, switch to his stronger alter ego
Max,Can instantly heal someone but this power costs a lot of energy, to the point that sometimes it can even pass out, so I only use it in an emergency
and make things levitate but the heavier it is the more complicated it is
And your color
If you dont want to join I respect that
PS : I love saying "Bread."
Name: pingouin
Color: Cyan
Abilities: Can turn into an animal
Et tu es du coté : Équipe Gentille ou Méchante ? Sinon je te met dans les neutres si sa te convient?
Team gentille
Cool ! Bon je t'ajoute, et la suite arriveras cette après midi
Je change de nom, maintenant je m'appelle: pingouin33
I change my name, now my name is: pingouin33
Pourquoi c'étais bien avant?
On 2023-01-14 at 13:34:26
If you want to join :
Your Name in the Fanfic (obligatory)
Personality and ability (Not obligatory)
And if you are in the :
Neutral :
Me (MisterCringeh) Im powerful, can make a lot of large elements appear: black hole, etc...
Goonoo, can't speak but read in the mind of people (since he didnt what team he is, he is Neutral
xrunner48, Noclip, Unmatched Reaction Times.
Bad team :
Nudge, good power and climbing
Popplio, Can blow bubbles with his nose
Brint, Can summon stuff like bridges and what not
Dietsoda, Very good eyesight, great with a bow, good at tracking.
Good team :
Cosmo, Can fly, can summon other Lumas to come fight.
Lely, switch to his stronger alter ego
Max,Can instantly heal someone but this power costs a lot of energy, to the point that sometimes it can even pass out, so I only use it in an emergency
and make things levitate but the heavier it is the more complicated it is
And your color
If you dont want to join I respect that
PS : I love saying "Bread."
Name: pingouin
Color: Cyan
Abilities: Can turn into an animal
Et tu es du coté : Équipe Gentille ou Méchante ? Sinon je te met dans les neutres si sa te convient?
Team gentille
Cool ! Bon je t'ajoute, et la suite arriveras cette après midi
Je change de nom, maintenant je m'appelle: pingouin33
I change my name, now my name is: pingouin33
Pourquoi c'étais bien avant?
C'est vrai mais ya que 2 chiffres c'est tout
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On 2023-01-14 at 14:33:00
If you want to join :
Your Name in the Fanfic (obligatory)
Personality and ability (Not obligatory)
And if you are in the :
Neutral :
Me (MisterCringeh) Im powerful, can make a lot of large elements appear: black hole, etc...
Goonoo, can't speak but read in the mind of people (since he didnt what team he is, he is Neutral
xrunner48, Noclip, Unmatched Reaction Times.
Bad team :
Nudge, good power and climbing
Popplio, Can blow bubbles with his nose
Brint, Can summon stuff like bridges and what not
Dietsoda, Very good eyesight, great with a bow, good at tracking.
Good team :
Cosmo, Can fly, can summon other Lumas to come fight.
Lely, switch to his stronger alter ego
Max,Can instantly heal someone but this power costs a lot of energy, to the point that sometimes it can even pass out, so I only use it in an emergency
and make things levitate but the heavier it is the more complicated it is
And your color
If you dont want to join I respect that
PS : I love saying "Bread."
Name: pingouin
Color: Cyan
Abilities: Can turn into an animal
Et tu es du coté : Équipe Gentille ou Méchante ? Sinon je te met dans les neutres si sa te convient?
Team gentille
Cool ! Bon je t'ajoute, et la suite arriveras cette après midi
Je change de nom, maintenant je m'appelle: pingouin33
I change my name, now my name is: pingouin33
You don't need to tell eevryone wityh a message that you changed your nickname, even if it's only for this fanfic... You can tell him in PMs...
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On 2023-01-14 at 15:26:33
EPISODE 4 : The White World part 2
Nudge : MisterCringeh and Goonoo... Its your fault !
Cosmo : Oh yeah funny that, cant you see what you do to-
Popplio : Bla bla bla !
MisterCringeh : Yeah? Who started all that chao? Like we see in the future, you created a chao Nudge? And Dietsoda, Popplio, Brint too
Brint : HEY !
Max : That true
xrunner48 : The real question is : Why Lely cheated?
Lely : I DIDNT !
pingouin33 : Why is everyone mad?
Dietsoda : Who are you?
pingouin33 : Your dad- no seriously, im just someone who is trying to know how the world turned White
MisterCringeh : Ask Goonoo
Goonoo : 😡😡
Cosmo : He cant talk
Nudge : We know
pingouin33 : By the way, does someone know how to reset the world
Cosmo : The only thing I found is that we can rebuild the city
MisterCringeh : With no object?
Max : Be realistic, we are stuck here
Goonoo : *Look around and saw a hole very high and point at it*
Brint : What? *look at the hole* Hey ! The thing behind the hole look familiar
Max : That the real world
Cosmo : I forgot I can fly
MisterCringeh : And us?
Cosmo : I'm not the type to take people when I fly
Lely : One by one?-
Popplio : HE SAID NO !
........
pingouin33 : I can become an animal, so if I become a strong animal that can fly-
Cosmo : Yes but no
MisterCringeh : How it happend? To create the white world
xrunner48 : Maybe everyone noclip because of that machine and that the black hole was here, I noclip at this moment, nah just idk
pingouin33 : So I become A cat
Cosmo : Not the moment
pingouin33 : You know why? *scratch Nudge*
Lely : So? We can make sure we can climb on each of us to the last
Cosmo : Not dumb
Nudge : Cool I can climb easely
pingouin33 : *meow*
Popplio : What?
Max : That mean : me too !
MisterCringeh : So now, we climb fast ! BECAUSE THE HOLE IS SHRIKING
YEAH !
Nudge : I go first ! Bye bye
Brint : Oh... that Nudge...
pingouin : Meow ! *climb*
Cosmo : Ouch ! The claws !
Goonoo : *ouch*
Dietsoda : OUCH !
pingouin33 : *Turn into his normal form (human)* That was cool !
So now everyone expect MisterCringeh is in the Normal World
Max : FASTER MISTERCRINGEH !
MisterCringeh : Its too small !
Lely : Pull on his hand!
Max : He is heavy !
MisterCringeh : Thanks , I don't eat much food !
Popplio : Ima try ! Get out
Brint : FASTER !
Dietsoda : Its too small
The hole is so small that it closes and MisterCringeh is stuck
All : NO !
MisterCringeh : Who forgot that I can summon something powerful or big like a teleporter?
And far away :
Nudge : What is that? Oh... The time machine. I HAVE AN IDEA ! I can choose who I can teleport, hehe... im doing this to all that people... Where? Im setting it in : The End of the World. Where a big meteor can destroy the world ! YEAH
*teleport the others to the year 5000*
5th episode (the bad end)soon...
Nudge : MisterCringeh and Goonoo... Its your fault !
Cosmo : Oh yeah funny that, cant you see what you do to-
Popplio : Bla bla bla !
MisterCringeh : Yeah? Who started all that chao? Like we see in the future, you created a chao Nudge? And Dietsoda, Popplio, Brint too
Brint : HEY !
Max : That true
xrunner48 : The real question is : Why Lely cheated?
Lely : I DIDNT !
pingouin33 : Why is everyone mad?
Dietsoda : Who are you?
pingouin33 : Your dad- no seriously, im just someone who is trying to know how the world turned White
MisterCringeh : Ask Goonoo
Goonoo : 😡😡
Cosmo : He cant talk
Nudge : We know
pingouin33 : By the way, does someone know how to reset the world
Cosmo : The only thing I found is that we can rebuild the city
MisterCringeh : With no object?
Max : Be realistic, we are stuck here
Goonoo : *Look around and saw a hole very high and point at it*
Brint : What? *look at the hole* Hey ! The thing behind the hole look familiar
Max : That the real world
Cosmo : I forgot I can fly
MisterCringeh : And us?
Cosmo : I'm not the type to take people when I fly
Lely : One by one?-
Popplio : HE SAID NO !
........
pingouin33 : I can become an animal, so if I become a strong animal that can fly-
Cosmo : Yes but no
MisterCringeh : How it happend? To create the white world
xrunner48 : Maybe everyone noclip because of that machine and that the black hole was here, I noclip at this moment, nah just idk
pingouin33 : So I become A cat
Cosmo : Not the moment
pingouin33 : You know why? *scratch Nudge*
Lely : So? We can make sure we can climb on each of us to the last
Cosmo : Not dumb
Nudge : Cool I can climb easely
pingouin33 : *meow*
Popplio : What?
Max : That mean : me too !
MisterCringeh : So now, we climb fast ! BECAUSE THE HOLE IS SHRIKING
YEAH !
Nudge : I go first ! Bye bye
Brint : Oh... that Nudge...
pingouin : Meow ! *climb*
Cosmo : Ouch ! The claws !
Goonoo : *ouch*
Dietsoda : OUCH !
pingouin33 : *Turn into his normal form (human)* That was cool !
So now everyone expect MisterCringeh is in the Normal World
Max : FASTER MISTERCRINGEH !
MisterCringeh : Its too small !
Lely : Pull on his hand!
Max : He is heavy !
MisterCringeh : Thanks , I don't eat much food !
Popplio : Ima try ! Get out
Brint : FASTER !
Dietsoda : Its too small
The hole is so small that it closes and MisterCringeh is stuck
All : NO !
MisterCringeh : Who forgot that I can summon something powerful or big like a teleporter?
And far away :
Nudge : What is that? Oh... The time machine. I HAVE AN IDEA ! I can choose who I can teleport, hehe... im doing this to all that people... Where? Im setting it in : The End of the World. Where a big meteor can destroy the world ! YEAH
*teleport the others to the year 5000*
5th episode (the bad end)soon...
On 2023-01-14 at 16:04:09
Nudge : MisterCringeh and Goonoo... Its your fault !
Cosmo : Oh yeah funny that, cant you see what you do to-
Popplio : Bla bla bla !
MisterCringeh : Yeah? Who started all that chao? Like we see in the future, you created a chao Nudge? And Dietsoda, Popplio, Brint too
Brint : HEY !
Max : That true
xrunner48 : The real question is : Why Lely cheated?
Lely : I DIDNT !
pingouin33 : Why is everyone mad?
Dietsoda : Who are you?
pingouin33 : Your dad- no seriously, im just someone who is trying to know how the world turned White
MisterCringeh : Ask Goonoo
Goonoo : 😡😡
Cosmo : He cant talk
Nudge : We know
pingouin33 : By the way, does someone know how to reset the world
Cosmo : The only thing I found is that we can rebuild the city
MisterCringeh : With no object?
Max : Be realistic, we are stuck here
Goonoo : *Look around and saw a hole very high and point at it*
Brint : What? *look at the hole* Hey ! The thing behind the hole look familiar
Max : That the real world
Cosmo : I forgot I can fly
MisterCringeh : And us?
Cosmo : I'm not the type to take people when I fly
Lely : One by one?-
Popplio : HE SAID NO !
........
pingouin33 : I can become an animal, so if I become a strong animal that can fly-
Cosmo : Yes but no
MisterCringeh : How it happend? To create the white world
xrunner48 : Maybe everyone noclip because of that machine and that the black hole was here, I noclip at this moment, nah just idk
pingouin33 : So I become A cat
Cosmo : Not the moment
pingouin33 : You know why? *scratch Nudge*
Lely : So? We can make sure we can climb on each of us to the last
Cosmo : Not dumb
Nudge : Cool I can climb easely
pingouin33 : *meow*
Popplio : What?
Max : That mean : me too !
MisterCringeh : So now, we climb fast ! BECAUSE THE HOLE IS SHRIKING
YEAH !
Nudge : I go first ! Bye bye
Brint : Oh... that Nudge...
pingouin : Meow ! *climb*
Cosmo : Ouch ! The claws !
Goonoo : *ouch*
Dietsoda : OUCH !
pingouin33 : *Turn into his normal form (human)* That was cool !
So now everyone expect MisterCringeh is in the Normal World
Max : FASTER MISTERCRINGEH !
MisterCringeh : Its too small !
Lely : Pull on his hand!
Max : He is heavy !
MisterCringeh : Thanks , I don't eat much food !
Popplio : Ima try ! Get out
Brint : FASTER !
Dietsoda : Its too small
The hole is so small that it closes and MisterCringeh is stuck
All : NO !
MisterCringeh : Who forgot that I can summon something powerful or big like a teleporter?
And far away :
Nudge : What is that? Oh... The time machine. I HAVE AN IDEA ! I can choose who I can teleport, hehe... im doing this to all that people... Where? Im setting it in : The End of the World. Where a big meteor can destroy the world ! YEAH
*teleport the others to the year 5000*
5th episode (the bad end)soon...
Entre tput le monde, on est d'accord c'est bien les fanfic ou des gens peut y participer
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On 2023-01-14 at 16:07:11
Nudge : MisterCringeh and Goonoo... Its your fault !
Cosmo : Oh yeah funny that, cant you see what you do to-
Popplio : Bla bla bla !
MisterCringeh : Yeah? Who started all that chao? Like we see in the future, you created a chao Nudge? And Dietsoda, Popplio, Brint too
Brint : HEY !
Max : That true
xrunner48 : The real question is : Why Lely cheated?
Lely : I DIDNT !
pingouin33 : Why is everyone mad?
Dietsoda : Who are you?
pingouin33 : Your dad- no seriously, im just someone who is trying to know how the world turned White
MisterCringeh : Ask Goonoo
Goonoo : 😡😡
Cosmo : He cant talk
Nudge : We know
pingouin33 : By the way, does someone know how to reset the world
Cosmo : The only thing I found is that we can rebuild the city
MisterCringeh : With no object?
Max : Be realistic, we are stuck here
Goonoo : *Look around and saw a hole very high and point at it*
Brint : What? *look at the hole* Hey ! The thing behind the hole look familiar
Max : That the real world
Cosmo : I forgot I can fly
MisterCringeh : And us?
Cosmo : I'm not the type to take people when I fly
Lely : One by one?-
Popplio : HE SAID NO !
........
pingouin33 : I can become an animal, so if I become a strong animal that can fly-
Cosmo : Yes but no
MisterCringeh : How it happend? To create the white world
xrunner48 : Maybe everyone noclip because of that machine and that the black hole was here, I noclip at this moment, nah just idk
pingouin33 : So I become A cat
Cosmo : Not the moment
pingouin33 : You know why? *scratch Nudge*
Lely : So? We can make sure we can climb on each of us to the last
Cosmo : Not dumb
Nudge : Cool I can climb easely
pingouin33 : *meow*
Popplio : What?
Max : That mean : me too !
MisterCringeh : So now, we climb fast ! BECAUSE THE HOLE IS SHRIKING
YEAH !
Nudge : I go first ! Bye bye
Brint : Oh... that Nudge...
pingouin : Meow ! *climb*
Cosmo : Ouch ! The claws !
Goonoo : *ouch*
Dietsoda : OUCH !
pingouin33 : *Turn into his normal form (human)* That was cool !
So now everyone expect MisterCringeh is in the Normal World
Max : FASTER MISTERCRINGEH !
MisterCringeh : Its too small !
Lely : Pull on his hand!
Max : He is heavy !
MisterCringeh : Thanks , I don't eat much food !
Popplio : Ima try ! Get out
Brint : FASTER !
Dietsoda : Its too small
The hole is so small that it closes and MisterCringeh is stuck
All : NO !
MisterCringeh : Who forgot that I can summon something powerful or big like a teleporter?
And far away :
Nudge : What is that? Oh... The time machine. I HAVE AN IDEA ! I can choose who I can teleport, hehe... im doing this to all that people... Where? Im setting it in : The End of the World. Where a big meteor can destroy the world ! YEAH
*teleport the others to the year 5000*
5th episode (the bad end)soon...
Entre tput le monde, on est d'accord c'est bien les fanfic ou des gens peut y participer
C'est vrai que c'est mieux, mais dit pas "entre tout le monde" comme si tout le monde était d'accord x)
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On 2023-01-14 at 18:16:29
Nudge : MisterCringeh and Goonoo... Its your fault !
Cosmo : Oh yeah funny that, cant you see what you do to-
Popplio : Bla bla bla !
MisterCringeh : Yeah? Who started all that chao? Like we see in the future, you created a chao Nudge? And Dietsoda, Popplio, Brint too
Brint : HEY !
Max : That true
xrunner48 : The real question is : Why Lely cheated?
Lely : I DIDNT !
pingouin33 : Why is everyone mad?
Dietsoda : Who are you?
pingouin33 : Your dad- no seriously, im just someone who is trying to know how the world turned White
MisterCringeh : Ask Goonoo
Goonoo : 😡😡
Cosmo : He cant talk
Nudge : We know
pingouin33 : By the way, does someone know how to reset the world
Cosmo : The only thing I found is that we can rebuild the city
MisterCringeh : With no object?
Max : Be realistic, we are stuck here
Goonoo : *Look around and saw a hole very high and point at it*
Brint : What? *look at the hole* Hey ! The thing behind the hole look familiar
Max : That the real world
Cosmo : I forgot I can fly
MisterCringeh : And us?
Cosmo : I'm not the type to take people when I fly
Lely : One by one?-
Popplio : HE SAID NO !
........
pingouin33 : I can become an animal, so if I become a strong animal that can fly-
Cosmo : Yes but no
MisterCringeh : How it happend? To create the white world
xrunner48 : Maybe everyone noclip because of that machine and that the black hole was here, I noclip at this moment, nah just idk
pingouin33 : So I become A cat
Cosmo : Not the moment
pingouin33 : You know why? *scratch Nudge*
Lely : So? We can make sure we can climb on each of us to the last
Cosmo : Not dumb
Nudge : Cool I can climb easely
pingouin33 : *meow*
Popplio : What?
Max : That mean : me too !
MisterCringeh : So now, we climb fast ! BECAUSE THE HOLE IS SHRIKING
YEAH !
Nudge : I go first ! Bye bye
Brint : Oh... that Nudge...
pingouin : Meow ! *climb*
Cosmo : Ouch ! The claws !
Goonoo : *ouch*
Dietsoda : OUCH !
pingouin33 : *Turn into his normal form (human)* That was cool !
So now everyone expect MisterCringeh is in the Normal World
Max : FASTER MISTERCRINGEH !
MisterCringeh : Its too small !
Lely : Pull on his hand!
Max : He is heavy !
MisterCringeh : Thanks , I don't eat much food !
Popplio : Ima try ! Get out
Brint : FASTER !
Dietsoda : Its too small
The hole is so small that it closes and MisterCringeh is stuck
All : NO !
MisterCringeh : Who forgot that I can summon something powerful or big like a teleporter?
And far away :
Nudge : What is that? Oh... The time machine. I HAVE AN IDEA ! I can choose who I can teleport, hehe... im doing this to all that people... Where? Im setting it in : The End of the World. Where a big meteor can destroy the world ! YEAH
*teleport the others to the year 5000*
5th episode (the bad end)soon...
By soon it’s probably going to be 5 months or something
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On 2023-01-14 at 18:35:20
Nudge : MisterCringeh and Goonoo... Its your fault !
Cosmo : Oh yeah funny that, cant you see what you do to-
Popplio : Bla bla bla !
MisterCringeh : Yeah? Who started all that chao? Like we see in the future, you created a chao Nudge? And Dietsoda, Popplio, Brint too
Brint : HEY !
Max : That true
xrunner48 : The real question is : Why Lely cheated?
Lely : I DIDNT !
pingouin33 : Why is everyone mad?
Dietsoda : Who are you?
pingouin33 : Your dad- no seriously, im just someone who is trying to know how the world turned White
MisterCringeh : Ask Goonoo
Goonoo : 😡😡
Cosmo : He cant talk
Nudge : We know
pingouin33 : By the way, does someone know how to reset the world
Cosmo : The only thing I found is that we can rebuild the city
MisterCringeh : With no object?
Max : Be realistic, we are stuck here
Goonoo : *Look around and saw a hole very high and point at it*
Brint : What? *look at the hole* Hey ! The thing behind the hole look familiar
Max : That the real world
Cosmo : I forgot I can fly
MisterCringeh : And us?
Cosmo : I'm not the type to take people when I fly
Lely : One by one?-
Popplio : HE SAID NO !
........
pingouin33 : I can become an animal, so if I become a strong animal that can fly-
Cosmo : Yes but no
MisterCringeh : How it happend? To create the white world
xrunner48 : Maybe everyone noclip because of that machine and that the black hole was here, I noclip at this moment, nah just idk
pingouin33 : So I become A cat
Cosmo : Not the moment
pingouin33 : You know why? *scratch Nudge*
Lely : So? We can make sure we can climb on each of us to the last
Cosmo : Not dumb
Nudge : Cool I can climb easely
pingouin33 : *meow*
Popplio : What?
Max : That mean : me too !
MisterCringeh : So now, we climb fast ! BECAUSE THE HOLE IS SHRIKING
YEAH !
Nudge : I go first ! Bye bye
Brint : Oh... that Nudge...
pingouin : Meow ! *climb*
Cosmo : Ouch ! The claws !
Goonoo : *ouch*
Dietsoda : OUCH !
pingouin33 : *Turn into his normal form (human)* That was cool !
So now everyone expect MisterCringeh is in the Normal World
Max : FASTER MISTERCRINGEH !
MisterCringeh : Its too small !
Lely : Pull on his hand!
Max : He is heavy !
MisterCringeh : Thanks , I don't eat much food !
Popplio : Ima try ! Get out
Brint : FASTER !
Dietsoda : Its too small
The hole is so small that it closes and MisterCringeh is stuck
All : NO !
MisterCringeh : Who forgot that I can summon something powerful or big like a teleporter?
And far away :
Nudge : What is that? Oh... The time machine. I HAVE AN IDEA ! I can choose who I can teleport, hehe... im doing this to all that people... Where? Im setting it in : The End of the World. Where a big meteor can destroy the world ! YEAH
*teleport the others to the year 5000*
5th episode (the bad end)soon...
By soon it’s probably going to be 5 months or something
No worries, I can continue it, he said I can
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On 2023-01-15 at 16:03:26
LAST EPISODE : The bad ending (since MisterCringeh said that I can continue the fanfic I will)
MisterCringeh : Wait? What happend?
Cosmo : Im scared
Lely : Bruh
Max : By the way what happend
MisterCringeh : Hmmm...??? Oh no !
Popplio : What?
MisterCringeh : You know when Nudge was the first to exit that white world? I think he was where the Time Machine was at this moment and he send all of us in the End of the World
Dietsoda : What year?
MisterCringeh : WE DONT CA-
Brint : Calm down
pingouin33 : Can we just try to know how to get out of this
xrunner48 : But no, you know we can't go in the actual year if we doesn't have the Time Machine, plus, Nudge won't let us do that
Lely : So we are stuck here? With that meteor? On a small island?
pingouin33 : So we just have to swim, but actually you all...
Popplio : Yes because you can become a fish
Brint : Why not water?
Goonoo : *slap Brint*
xrunner48 : Ok im noclipping bye
MisterCringeh : Guys actually I can summon a teleporter, Bye !
Goonoo : *go with MisterCringeh*
Max : And us?
MisterCringeh : Come !
bruh
Popplio : Why does the teleporter disapear?
Lely : Wait, I can use my power to throw the meteor far away
Brint : What can you do for the others meteors?
...
And the side of Nudge
Nudge : They are gone, I can finally do what I want
MisterCringeh : Say him
Nudge : What???
MisterCringeh : You forgot uh?
Nudge : Ok? That it, I can go in another world with that Machine, bye !
MisterCringeh : I didnt have enough time bruh
The end
MisterCringeh : Wait? What happend?
Cosmo : Im scared
Lely : Bruh
Max : Hey Lely look under there
Lely : Under where?
Max : Ahah I made you said under-
OOF
Lely : Under where?
Max : Ahah I made you said under-
OOF
Max : By the way what happend
MisterCringeh : Hmmm...??? Oh no !
Popplio : What?
MisterCringeh : You know when Nudge was the first to exit that white world? I think he was where the Time Machine was at this moment and he send all of us in the End of the World
Dietsoda : What year?
MisterCringeh : WE DONT CA-
Brint : Calm down
pingouin33 : Can we just try to know how to get out of this
xrunner48 : But no, you know we can't go in the actual year if we doesn't have the Time Machine, plus, Nudge won't let us do that
Lely : So we are stuck here? With that meteor? On a small island?
pingouin33 : So we just have to swim, but actually you all...
Popplio : Yes because you can become a fish
Brint : Why not water?
Goonoo : *slap Brint*
xrunner48 : Ok im noclipping bye
MisterCringeh : Guys actually I can summon a teleporter, Bye !
Goonoo : *go with MisterCringeh*
Max : And us?
MisterCringeh : Come !
bruh
Popplio : Why does the teleporter disapear?
Lely : Wait, I can use my power to throw the meteor far away
Brint : What can you do for the others meteors?
...
And the side of Nudge
Nudge : They are gone, I can finally do what I want
MisterCringeh : Say him
Nudge : What???
MisterCringeh : You forgot uh?
Nudge : Ok? That it, I can go in another world with that Machine, bye !
MisterCringeh : I didnt have enough time bruh
The end
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On 2023-01-15 at 17:12:07
MisterCringeh : Wait? What happend?
Cosmo : Im scared
Lely : Bruh
Max : Hey Lely look under there
Lely : Under where?
Max : Ahah I made you said under-
OOF
Lely : Under where?
Max : Ahah I made you said under-
OOF
Max : By the way what happend
MisterCringeh : Hmmm...??? Oh no !
Popplio : What?
MisterCringeh : You know when Nudge was the first to exit that white world? I think he was where the Time Machine was at this moment and he send all of us in the End of the World
Dietsoda : What year?
MisterCringeh : WE DONT CA-
Brint : Calm down
pingouin33 : Can we just try to know how to get out of this
xrunner48 : But no, you know we can't go in the actual year if we doesn't have the Time Machine, plus, Nudge won't let us do that
Lely : So we are stuck here? With that meteor? On a small island?
pingouin33 : So we just have to swim, but actually you all...
Popplio : Yes because you can become a fish
Brint : Why not water?
Goonoo : *slap Brint*
xrunner48 : Ok im noclipping bye
MisterCringeh : Guys actually I can summon a teleporter, Bye !
Goonoo : *go with MisterCringeh*
Max : And us?
MisterCringeh : Come !
bruh
Popplio : Why does the teleporter disappear?
Lely : Wait, I can use my power to throw the meteor far away
Brint : What can you do for the others meteors?
...
And the side of Nudge
Nudge : They are gone, I can finally do what I want
MisterCringeh : Say him
Nudge : What???
MisterCringeh : You forgot uh?
Nudge : Ok? That it, I can go in another world with that Machine, bye !
MisterCringeh : I didnt have enough time bruh
The end
Good ending, except you got my colour wrong
The ones near the top are good but the other one isn't. It should just be blue, and the one near the bottom is navy
On 2023-01-15 at 19:22:44
MisterCringeh : Wait? What happend?
Cosmo : Im scared
Lely : Bruh
Max : Hey Lely look under there
Lely : Under where?
Max : Ahah I made you said under-
OOF
Lely : Under where?
Max : Ahah I made you said under-
OOF
Max : By the way what happend
MisterCringeh : Hmmm...??? Oh no !
Popplio : What?
MisterCringeh : You know when Nudge was the first to exit that white world? I think he was where the Time Machine was at this moment and he send all of us in the End of the World
Dietsoda : What year?
MisterCringeh : WE DONT CA-
Brint : Calm down
pingouin33 : Can we just try to know how to get out of this
xrunner48 : But no, you know we can't go in the actual year if we doesn't have the Time Machine, plus, Nudge won't let us do that
Lely : So we are stuck here? With that meteor? On a small island?
pingouin33 : So we just have to swim, but actually you all...
Popplio : Yes because you can become a fish
Brint : Why not water?
Goonoo : *slap Brint*
xrunner48 : Ok im noclipping bye
MisterCringeh : Guys actually I can summon a teleporter, Bye !
Goonoo : *go with MisterCringeh*
Max : And us?
MisterCringeh : Come !
bruh
Popplio : Why does the teleporter disapear?
Lely : Wait, I can use my power to throw the meteor far away
Brint : What can you do for the others meteors?
...
And the side of Nudge
Nudge : They are gone, I can finally do what I want
MisterCringeh : Say him
Nudge : What???
MisterCringeh : You forgot uh?
Nudge : Ok? That it, I can go in another world with that Machine, bye !
MisterCringeh : I didnt have enough time bruh
The end
Okay so now that the fanfic has ended I'm going to write a feedback about it. The fanfic was pretty short and confusing. It was hard to understand some parts of the story, and we're hardly attached to the characters. The ending feels kinda rushed, it does not look like a proper ending, or like tha bad of an ending, the fanfic was really short, but anyways now that Cringeh has left it couldn't last for very long. Anyays this fanfic was very mid, it felt short and confusing. Letting more time for it to develop would have been better ; for now, I can't really say that I liked it, but that wasn't the worst fanfic neither.
Edit : @Goonoo please don't feel sad. That's just my honest thoughts on the fanfic. It's true that I talked about the nagtive side, the positive side is that it was pretty active, plus I'm gonna thank you for putting an end to this fanfic, most fanfics nowadays don't even get a proper ending and are stopped in the middle of nowhere, so congrats, at least there's a beginning and an end.
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On 2023-02-01 at 14:21:59
Nudge : MisterCringeh and Goonoo... Its your fault !
Cosmo : Oh yeah funny that, cant you see what you do to-
Popplio : Bla bla bla !
MisterCringeh : Yeah? Who started all that chao? Like we see in the future, you created a chao Nudge? And Dietsoda, Popplio, Brint too
Brint : HEY !
Max : That true
xrunner48 : The real question is : Why Lely cheated?
Lely : I DIDNT !
pingouin33 : Why is everyone mad?
Dietsoda : Who are you?
pingouin33 : Your dad- no seriously, im just someone who is trying to know how the world turned White
MisterCringeh : Ask Goonoo
Goonoo : 😡😡
Cosmo : He cant talk
Nudge : We know
pingouin33 : By the way, does someone know how to reset the world
Cosmo : The only thing I found is that we can rebuild the city
MisterCringeh : With no object?
Max : Be realistic, we are stuck here
Goonoo : *Look around and saw a hole very high and point at it*
Brint : What? *look at the hole* Hey ! The thing behind the hole look familiar
Max : That the real world
Cosmo : I forgot I can fly
MisterCringeh : And us?
Cosmo : I'm not the type to take people when I fly
Lely : One by one?-
Popplio : HE SAID NO !
........
pingouin33 : I can become an animal, so if I become a strong animal that can fly-
Cosmo : Yes but no
MisterCringeh : How it happend? To create the white world
xrunner48 : Maybe everyone noclip because of that machine and that the black hole was here, I noclip at this moment, nah just idk
pingouin33 : So I become A cat
Cosmo : Not the moment
pingouin33 : You know why? *scratch Nudge*
Lely : So? We can make sure we can climb on each of us to the last
Cosmo : Not dumb
Nudge : Cool I can climb easely
pingouin33 : *meow*
Popplio : What?
Max : That mean : me too !
MisterCringeh : So now, we climb fast ! BECAUSE THE HOLE IS SHRIKING
YEAH !
Nudge : I go first ! Bye bye
Brint : Oh... that Nudge...
pingouin : Meow ! *climb*
Cosmo : Ouch ! The claws !
Goonoo : *ouch*
Dietsoda : OUCH !
pingouin33 : *Turn into his normal form (human)* That was cool !
So now everyone expect MisterCringeh is in the Normal World
Max : FASTER MISTERCRINGEH !
MisterCringeh : Its too small !
Lely : Pull on his hand!
Max : He is heavy !
MisterCringeh : Thanks , I don't eat much food !
Popplio : Ima try ! Get out
Brint : FASTER !
Dietsoda : Its too small
The hole is so small that it closes and MisterCringeh is stuck
All : NO !
MisterCringeh : Who forgot that I can summon something powerful or big like a teleporter?
And far away :
Nudge : What is that? Oh... The time machine. I HAVE AN IDEA ! I can choose who I can teleport, hehe... im doing this to all that people... Where? Im setting it in : The End of the World. Where a big meteor can destroy the world ! YEAH
*teleport the others to the year 5000*
5th episode (the bad end)soon...
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On 2023-02-01 at 14:25:08
Nudge : MisterCringeh and Goonoo... Its your fault !
Cosmo : Oh yeah funny that, cant you see what you do to-
Popplio : Bla bla bla !
MisterCringeh : Yeah? Who started all that chao? Like we see in the future, you created a chao Nudge? And Dietsoda, Popplio, Brint too
Brint : HEY !
Max : That true
xrunner48 : The real question is : Why Lely cheated?
Lely : I DIDNT !
pingouin33 : Why is everyone mad?
Dietsoda : Who are you?
pingouin33 : Your dad- no seriously, im just someone who is trying to know how the world turned White
MisterCringeh : Ask Goonoo
Goonoo : 😡😡
Cosmo : He cant talk
Nudge : We know
pingouin33 : By the way, does someone know how to reset the world
Cosmo : The only thing I found is that we can rebuild the city
MisterCringeh : With no object?
Max : Be realistic, we are stuck here
Goonoo : *Look around and saw a hole very high and point at it*
Brint : What? *look at the hole* Hey ! The thing behind the hole look familiar
Max : That the real world
Cosmo : I forgot I can fly
MisterCringeh : And us?
Cosmo : I'm not the type to take people when I fly
Lely : One by one?-
Popplio : HE SAID NO !
........
pingouin33 : I can become an animal, so if I become a strong animal that can fly-
Cosmo : Yes but no
MisterCringeh : How it happend? To create the white world
xrunner48 : Maybe everyone noclip because of that machine and that the black hole was here, I noclip at this moment, nah just idk
pingouin33 : So I become A cat
Cosmo : Not the moment
pingouin33 : You know why? *scratch Nudge*
Lely : So? We can make sure we can climb on each of us to the last
Cosmo : Not dumb
Nudge : Cool I can climb easely
pingouin33 : *meow*
Popplio : What?
Max : That mean : me too !
MisterCringeh : So now, we climb fast ! BECAUSE THE HOLE IS SHRIKING
YEAH !
Nudge : I go first ! Bye bye
Brint : Oh... that Nudge...
pingouin : Meow ! *climb*
Cosmo : Ouch ! The claws !
Goonoo : *ouch*
Dietsoda : OUCH !
pingouin33 : *Turn into his normal form (human)* That was cool !
So now everyone expect MisterCringeh is in the Normal World
Max : FASTER MISTERCRINGEH !
MisterCringeh : Its too small !
Lely : Pull on his hand!
Max : He is heavy !
MisterCringeh : Thanks , I don't eat much food !
Popplio : Ima try ! Get out
Brint : FASTER !
Dietsoda : Its too small
The hole is so small that it closes and MisterCringeh is stuck
All : NO !
MisterCringeh : Who forgot that I can summon something powerful or big like a teleporter?
And far away :
Nudge : What is that? Oh... The time machine. I HAVE AN IDEA ! I can choose who I can teleport, hehe... im doing this to all that people... Where? Im setting it in : The End of the World. Where a big meteor can destroy the world ! YEAH
*teleport the others to the year 5000*
5th episode (the bad end)soon...
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C'est très tard que tu le dis ... tu viens de revive le topic, et puis Google Traduction (même si pas très fiable) existe
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On 2023-02-01 at 14:27:50
Nudge : MisterCringeh and Goonoo... Its your fault !
Cosmo : Oh yeah funny that, cant you see what you do to-
Popplio : Bla bla bla !
MisterCringeh : Yeah? Who started all that chao? Like we see in the future, you created a chao Nudge? And Dietsoda, Popplio, Brint too
Brint : HEY !
Max : That true
xrunner48 : The real question is : Why Lely cheated?
Lely : I DIDNT !
pingouin33 : Why is everyone mad?
Dietsoda : Who are you?
pingouin33 : Your dad- no seriously, im just someone who is trying to know how the world turned White
MisterCringeh : Ask Goonoo
Goonoo : 😡😡
Cosmo : He cant talk
Nudge : We know
pingouin33 : By the way, does someone know how to reset the world
Cosmo : The only thing I found is that we can rebuild the city
MisterCringeh : With no object?
Max : Be realistic, we are stuck here
Goonoo : *Look around and saw a hole very high and point at it*
Brint : What? *look at the hole* Hey ! The thing behind the hole look familiar
Max : That the real world
Cosmo : I forgot I can fly
MisterCringeh : And us?
Cosmo : I'm not the type to take people when I fly
Lely : One by one?-
Popplio : HE SAID NO !
........
pingouin33 : I can become an animal, so if I become a strong animal that can fly-
Cosmo : Yes but no
MisterCringeh : How it happend? To create the white world
xrunner48 : Maybe everyone noclip because of that machine and that the black hole was here, I noclip at this moment, nah just idk
pingouin33 : So I become A cat
Cosmo : Not the moment
pingouin33 : You know why? *scratch Nudge*
Lely : So? We can make sure we can climb on each of us to the last
Cosmo : Not dumb
Nudge : Cool I can climb easely
pingouin33 : *meow*
Popplio : What?
Max : That mean : me too !
MisterCringeh : So now, we climb fast ! BECAUSE THE HOLE IS SHRIKING
YEAH !
Nudge : I go first ! Bye bye
Brint : Oh... that Nudge...
pingouin : Meow ! *climb*
Cosmo : Ouch ! The claws !
Goonoo : *ouch*
Dietsoda : OUCH !
pingouin33 : *Turn into his normal form (human)* That was cool !
So now everyone expect MisterCringeh is in the Normal World
Max : FASTER MISTERCRINGEH !
MisterCringeh : Its too small !
Lely : Pull on his hand!
Max : He is heavy !
MisterCringeh : Thanks , I don't eat much food !
Popplio : Ima try ! Get out
Brint : FASTER !
Dietsoda : Its too small
The hole is so small that it closes and MisterCringeh is stuck
All : NO !
MisterCringeh : Who forgot that I can summon something powerful or big like a teleporter?
And far away :
Nudge : What is that? Oh... The time machine. I HAVE AN IDEA ! I can choose who I can teleport, hehe... im doing this to all that people... Where? Im setting it in : The End of the World. Where a big meteor can destroy the world ! YEAH
*teleport the others to the year 5000*
5th episode (the bad end)soon...
Pourrais-tu traduire tes chapitre?
C'est très tard que tu le dis ... tu viens de revive le topic, et puis Google Traduction (même si pas très fiable) existe
Non mais en vrai d'abord avat toute chose
Bonjour ?
On 2023-02-01 at 14:31:31
Nudge : MisterCringeh and Goonoo... Its your fault !
Cosmo : Oh yeah funny that, cant you see what you do to-
Popplio : Bla bla bla !
MisterCringeh : Yeah? Who started all that chao? Like we see in the future, you created a chao Nudge? And Dietsoda, Popplio, Brint too
Brint : HEY !
Max : That true
xrunner48 : The real question is : Why Lely cheated?
Lely : I DIDNT !
pingouin33 : Why is everyone mad?
Dietsoda : Who are you?
pingouin33 : Your dad- no seriously, im just someone who is trying to know how the world turned White
MisterCringeh : Ask Goonoo
Goonoo : 😡😡
Cosmo : He cant talk
Nudge : We know
pingouin33 : By the way, does someone know how to reset the world
Cosmo : The only thing I found is that we can rebuild the city
MisterCringeh : With no object?
Max : Be realistic, we are stuck here
Goonoo : *Look around and saw a hole very high and point at it*
Brint : What? *look at the hole* Hey ! The thing behind the hole look familiar
Max : That the real world
Cosmo : I forgot I can fly
MisterCringeh : And us?
Cosmo : I'm not the type to take people when I fly
Lely : One by one?-
Popplio : HE SAID NO !
........
pingouin33 : I can become an animal, so if I become a strong animal that can fly-
Cosmo : Yes but no
MisterCringeh : How it happend? To create the white world
xrunner48 : Maybe everyone noclip because of that machine and that the black hole was here, I noclip at this moment, nah just idk
pingouin33 : So I become A cat
Cosmo : Not the moment
pingouin33 : You know why? *scratch Nudge*
Lely : So? We can make sure we can climb on each of us to the last
Cosmo : Not dumb
Nudge : Cool I can climb easely
pingouin33 : *meow*
Popplio : What?
Max : That mean : me too !
MisterCringeh : So now, we climb fast ! BECAUSE THE HOLE IS SHRIKING
YEAH !
Nudge : I go first ! Bye bye
Brint : Oh... that Nudge...
pingouin : Meow ! *climb*
Cosmo : Ouch ! The claws !
Goonoo : *ouch*
Dietsoda : OUCH !
pingouin33 : *Turn into his normal form (human)* That was cool !
So now everyone expect MisterCringeh is in the Normal World
Max : FASTER MISTERCRINGEH !
MisterCringeh : Its too small !
Lely : Pull on his hand!
Max : He is heavy !
MisterCringeh : Thanks , I don't eat much food !
Popplio : Ima try ! Get out
Brint : FASTER !
Dietsoda : Its too small
The hole is so small that it closes and MisterCringeh is stuck
All : NO !
MisterCringeh : Who forgot that I can summon something powerful or big like a teleporter?
And far away :
Nudge : What is that? Oh... The time machine. I HAVE AN IDEA ! I can choose who I can teleport, hehe... im doing this to all that people... Where? Im setting it in : The End of the World. Where a big meteor can destroy the world ! YEAH
*teleport the others to the year 5000*
5th episode (the bad end)soon...
Pourrais-tu traduire tes chapitre?
C'est très tard que tu le dis ... tu viens de revive le topic, et puis Google Traduction (même si pas très fiable) existe
Non mais en vrai d'abord avat toute chose
Bonjour ?
Non mais c'est que j'ai fais un topic a propos de mon retour c'est bien un bonjour sa non?
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