[Fanfic] Alien Invasion

I keep forgetting she's LGBT

Chapter 4: Part 2
*In the sky*
Lely: What the hell, why am I in the sky!!! Illuzhion, where are we going?
Illuzhion: We're going to a cave. *turns towards Lely*
*Thinks to herself* Lely: Wait, Illuzhion has a different eye color, it's red...there's something wrong with him.
*They arrive*
*Illuzhion pushes Lely in*
Lely: W-w-where am I?
*Adviser talking to an alien doctor*
Adviser: So you're saying that the boss got kicked in the stomach hard so he's in a coma? Oh hello...PISS OFF DOC
Lely: WHO ARE YOU???
Adviser: That-is none of your business. Illuzhion, who's this?
Illuzhion: Lely.
Lely: ILLUZHION WTH?!
Adviser: I see...well, Lely, welcome to the aliens' secret base. Of course, we dont want you telling your puny friends so...we're gonna mind control you just like Illuzhion.
Illuzhion: Sir, I feel kinda hungry for blood, mind if I take a sip out of him.
Adviser: Sure!!!
Lely: HOLD ON WHAT?!
*Illuzhion bites Lely's neck*
Lely: HOLY SHIT!!! *squirms into a curl and screams* IT HURTS!!! AGHHHHHHHH.
Illuzhion: I want more!!! *Grabs his daggers and stabs him in Lely's abdomen*
Lely: IT HURTS!!! HELP!!! AHHHHHHHH
Adviser: ILLUZHION, WE'RE NOT SUPPOSED TO KILL HER!!! WE'RE GONNA GET ARRESTED!!! *treats wound*
Illuzhion: Sorry...
Adviser: Anyways, time to add the chip, I'll hide it in his hair.
Lely: What chip? Doritos?
Adviser: No dumbass, a microchip to mind control you.
Lely: Hold on what? *chip was put in his hair*
Lely: AHHHHHHH WTF, IT HURTS, WHAT'S THIS ENERGY AHHHHHHHHHHHH. *after like 30 seconds of pure agony, she becomes mind control*
What will happen in Chapter 5? Will Illuzhion and Lely be normal again? Find out on Chapter 5...

EDIT: Illuzhion wanted me to make Lely suffer...so...

I'll sum up what I think in one word:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Otherwise Lely is still a boy lmao

So is Lely a girl with LGBT or a boy??? Help💀

Inconsistent lol

Name: ER Mac
Species: Yoshi
Color: Green
Personality: Funny and Nice but sucks at science stuff

Chapter 5: Fight in the Sky
*In the airship*
Popplio: I'm assuming I'm not the only one who heard Lely scream for help.
Max: Out of all the people, why Lely?!
Noob: I got out first, I saw Lely floating towards the mountains. I saw a black shadow.
K: What're we waiting for? We need to save Lely and Illuzhion!!!
StarSplizz: I'm gonna stay here and sle-
Dark: Oh no you don't, you're gonna fly there with me.
StarSplizz: Fine...*yawns*
TheOuchy1: I wanna come too, we can take the airship. Does anyone know how to fly it though?
Ssg: I do. I've had experience.
Fiery: Ok, so, Dark and StarSplizz will fly while we stay on the airship while SSG flies it.
Dark: Well we kinda need protection, so...we need someone to go on our backs to protect us. *grunts*
Nudge: On it! *On Dark's back*
Osc: Star, I'll get on you, I have a few bombs to shoot people.
Max: Alright, let's go save Lely!!!I mean, Lely and Illuzhion?
Dietsoda: Let's go!!!
Unknown to them, an alien spy was spying on them and rushed towards the cave.
*Meanwhile in the alien's cave*
*Alien spy comes in*
Alien Spy: The puny gang is coming to get their friends. What do we do?
Alien Leader: Interfere them with like 5 ships and Illuzhion and Lely.
Alien Spy: Okay, I'll get them.
Alien Spy: Alright Illuzhion, carry Lely towards Airship Fortress, we're gonna kill your friends.
Illuzhion: Alright I'll call her.
*Meanwhile with the gang*
Ssg: It's been like 30 minutes, where's the hideout?
Noob: I have no idea.
Osc: I see something, 5 round things and a vampire holding Lely- wait hold on.
*Aliens shoot rays at StarSplizz and Dark
Osc: HOLY SHIT.
Dark: Nudge, shoot the UFO!!!
StarSplizz: Osc, throw bombs!!!
With the teamwork of Nudge and Osc, the UFO falls to the ground and kills all the aliens
Nudge: The aliens landed on the ship, let's go!!!
*Illuzhion and Lely land on the airship*
Max: Lely!!! *Runs towards Lely*
*Lely kicks Max's stomach*
Max: Ow! What the heck?
Noob: They're evil!!! Fight back, wait I think they're mind controlled! They have red eyes!!!
Ssg: Thank God the airship has autopilot. Time to fight!!! *Hits Illuzhion on the face*
Lely: How dare you!!! *tries and punches Ssg*
*Ssg kicks Lely and she gets launched right next to Max*
Osc: I'm here. *Throws bomb to like 2 UFOs and both explode and kill the aliens*
K: Die you aliens!!! *Berserk shooting that kills literally all the remaining aliens*
Popplio: Bubble Blast
*Illuzhion blocks*
Illuzhion: I'm making this ship fall to the ground. *Turns off autopilot*
The ship falls and Illuzhion wasn't quick enough to turn into a bat so he falls as well. As everyone hits the ground, Lely and Illuzhion's chips break so they're no longer mind controlled. Luckily no one was injured.
Popplio: Ow my head...what happened?
Fiery: I don't know. I feel dizzy...
Nudge: Thank God my minigun's alright.
Lely: Is-is everyone ok?
Illuzhion: I know I am...
StarSplizz: Aren't you guys gonna attack us like on the ship???
Lely: What're you talking about?
Noob: I dont think they're mind controlled anymore, they must have been broken from the impact.
TheOuchy1: Thank God, I'm tired fighting. Great to have you back.
Max: Lely!!!
Lely: Max!!!
This isn't the end...what happened to the aliens? Will any other person get mind controlled? Find out on Chapter 6.

this may be to late but can i like.. join

name: kid

character: looks like kirby but poorly drawn has a mind of a 2 year old loves murdering people but is loyal if you do something good to him oh and he can murder people easily did i mention that

colour red = 255 green = 209 blue = 243

Chapter 6: Friends and a New Plan
Alien Leader: DAMMIT! THOSE PUNY BITCHES BROKE THE CHIPS, NOW WE CAN'T USE THEM AS SERVANTS, DAMMIT!!! WHAT THE HELL DO WE DO!!!
Adviser: Sir, you don't have to worry, remember when we visited the graveyard in our planet? I grabbed an evil alien ghost. We can use it to possess it.
Alien Leader: Ah yes! We shall possess them with the ghost! What a wonderful idea I've made.
Adviser: Sometimes in life, I still wonder what I exist.
Alien Leader: So where's the ghost?
Adviser: In the science room of the cave.
He grabs the jar and releases the ghost.
Ghost: Who has woken me up from my slumber?
Alien Leader: Hello, you're currently in planet...ok I don't give a crap about the name. So I want you to possess one of these people in this picture. *shows picture* Then make em do badass stuff by kicking their ass.
Ghost: Okay, what do I get in return?
Alien Leader: Some grass for you to touch.
Ghost: Ok, I'm gonna go now, adios mfs.
Meanwhile, the gang made a makeshift raft and a few oars from the airship's wood and rowed away into the sea. After 4 hours of no food, no water, and constant rowing, they've arrived at the GCN Yoshi Circuit port where ER Mac and Kid were staying.
Osc: Finally, we arrived at Yoshi Circuit. Now I can buy some food and a bo'oh o' wa'er.
TheOuchy1: Home sweet home.
Fiery: Let's go to the supermarket. I'll pay.
ER Mac is talking with kid in the supermarket.
ER Mac: So then, I told him to SHUT THE FUCK UP OR ELSE I'M KICKING YO A-oh hey guys, didn't see you guys😅
IlluZhion: Hello ER Mac, hello kid, what're you guys doing here?
ER Mac: I live here and kid came here for vacation. Want to go to my house? We're heading back since it's dusk.
Popplio: Sure, I'm starving right now! Let's go!
After eating dinner and watching random shows on YouTube, they went to bed. In the middle of the night, this happened...
BOOM!!!
Lely: HOLY SHIT WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?!
Ssg: I'm scared...
Kid: It looks like a UFO crashed in to someone's house...all the aliens died except for 1, he's terrorizing the city.
Max: We have to evacuate. Nudge, K, kill that alien.
Nudge: DIE!!! *massive shooting*
Alien dies
K: He died, COULDN'T YOU AT LEAST GIVEN ME THE SATISFACTION KILL THAT ALIEN?!
Nudge: No.
Popplio: I'll extinguish the fire. Water Gun!!!
Dietsoda: Let's head back to sleep.
At 4:30am...Max wakes up
Max: *Yawns* Jeez, it's pretty dark outside...what time is it??? *looks at clock* WTF?! 4:30AM?!
StarSplizz: Gm Max.
Dark: Gm man.
Max: What the heck? You guys are already awake.
StarSplizz: I just went to piss, I'm going back to sleep. Gn.
Dark: I wake up hella early, depends on my body when I wanna sleep. I was gonna go for an early morning walk. Wanna come? I got a flashlight.
Max: Sure.
Dark and Max left the house. Unluckily for them, the ghost had just arrived at Yoshi Circuit and sees them walking.
Ghost: I see that demon and that...foxgirl thing??? Eh whatever, I'll just eenie meenie minee mo to choose who to possess.
The ghost rushes at Dark and Max and enters Max's body.
Max: Dark, I feel weir-*Falls to the ground*
Dark: Oh my god!!! Are you ok Max??? Are you breathing? Do you need air support? Speak to me...MAX, MAX, MAX!!!
Max: D-Dar-Dark, I'm being pos-.
Max stands up, ready to attack Dark...
Dark: You're? Oh hey you're back. We better head back before you-*gets kicked* AGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Everyone in ER Mac's house hears Dark's scream for help.
Noob: Was that Dark?
Osc: What if he's in danger? We must save him!
StarSplizz: Actually, Max and Dark took a morning walk.
Lely: MAX?! WHAT IF HE'S ALSO IN DANGER? HURRY!!!
They ran as fast as they could and saw Max going to punch Dark who's on the floor
Dark: WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU? ARE YOU INSANE?
Max: Fool! I never wanted you as a friend...you're just a stupid little mf that somehow existed in my life.
Nudge: MAX?! ARE YOU OK???
Max: Shut up. I'm going to finish this devil and send him to where he came from, hell.
IlluZhion: Oh hell nah!!! YOU AIN'T GETTING CLOSE TO HIM!!! *Kicks Max*
Dark: Thanks.
Fiery: Dark's badly bruised. He might have to be taken to the hospital. Is Max mind controlled?
Noob: No...his eyes aren't red...what's with him anyways...
Max: YOU'RE GONNA REGRET KICKING ME!!!
Max uses telekinesis to levitate objects to throw them at the gang. Totally didn't search what powers Senko has
TheOuchy1: Max is going crazy, now he's using telekinesis to yeet all of those stuff towards us!!!
Osc: We must escape!!! We might get hit!!!
Everyone runs away except for Lely
Kid: LELY, WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!
Lely: It's risky...but...I'm gonna calm Max down.
Fiery: Are you stupid?! you might die!!!
Lely: I'm gonna try anyways!!! Max, chill down. You don't have to fight! What's wrong with you?
Max: You dare to act brave? You have made a big mistake.
Lely: Max, please! Tell me! Is that even you?
Max: It's me. You're just being a fool!
Lely: Max, you're not acting yourself, please come back to your senses.
Max: I'M DONE WASTING TIME, I'M GOING TO END YOU.
Max levitates with his fist headed towards Lely, Lely is in a state of shock that she can't move. What happens to Lely. Will Max be free from the ghost. Find out on Chapter 7...

Lol first Lemon and Nudge are possessed and almost kill Max
Then Max is possessed and goes into fucking feral mode

Yes and my guy you got so hyped waiting for Chapter 6, you DMed me twice to see if I'm writing it🤣

EDIT: Max has become a very mad foxgirl thingSenko.

3 lines but that aside good episode

You have been chosen to be bullied with little to no lines

Those two parts got me lol

uh i forgot to mention kid could not talk i guess its too late now also i did mention he loves murder and has no common sense and is immortal right? RIGHT?

You’re lucky I only got 2….

now you know how it feels being the most underused character in a fanfic

You know that this is a

Amateurs. One line. That's it.