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FANFIC: Battle for Dream Island, MKPC edition!
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6084 pts ★ Racer
5000 pts ★ NoviceOn 2025-07-08 at 09:06:00
Episode 1: Revealations
Lakitu: Im bored
Nudgy: Me 2
Lakitu: Hey I haz idea
Nudgy: Whatg is idea
Lakitu: Lets make object show
Nudgy: Be our host pls
Me: SURE
Your first challenge is to find the pinecones
Neptuno: Can I have one
ME: Sure
GamerJax: Oh! Look! I Found Pinecone!
ME: So Neptuno and gamerjax pick teams, episodes daily
Episode 2 is 7/9?
Lakitu: Im bored
Nudgy: Me 2
Lakitu: Hey I haz idea
Nudgy: Whatg is idea
Lakitu: Lets make object show
Nudgy: Be our host pls
Me: SURE
Your first challenge is to find the pinecones
Neptuno: Can I have one
ME: Sure
GamerJax: Oh! Look! I Found Pinecone!
ME: So Neptuno and gamerjax pick teams, episodes daily
Episode 2 is 7/9?
…Ok, so, I… Er…
This isn’t the worst thing I’ve seen… But it’s also not the best.
Introducing another episode of… NASHATRA’S CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM CORNER!!!
Ok, so, lemme just summarized what happened in my own words:
-We are introduced to absolutely no one.
-Lakitu and Nudgey come up with an idea to host a show.
-First-ish challenge: Find a pinecone.
-Neptuno and GamerJax simply cheese it.
The end.
So, for the pros… There’s literally none I can give (sorry). There’s absolutely no context to what happened before this, only, like a handful of characters are introduced (which never happens to every other object show, the viewers get a taste of their personalities before the host appears and the show starts), and the challenge was probably simple just for times sake.
Some other problems are:
-There’s literally no plot whatsoever.
-The pacing is really quick.
But most importantly…
-A 4-year-old could come up with this (and the “episode”, if I were to animate it, would be, like, 12 seconds long).
Overall, I grade this episode…
D+ (kinda terrible).
Now, I know this was probably your first fic, which I totally understand, but the writing process takes time. You have to find a good plotline people can follow easily, not too complex, and not too rushed (you did the latter), try to take your time (maybe not make it daily?) and just what I do, but might help you: make a rough draft of said episode you’re going to make. After that, revise it a bit, ask ppl for opinions, and when ur confident in ur work, give out a release date (preferably 2-3 days after said release date is given) and touch the episode up a little bit. And then once that date hits, release it.
I really see potential in you, so maybe give some effort, will ya?
Thanks for listening, Nashatra Bealdhild tuning out, be good people ^_^
bro rushed art.
On 2025-07-08 at 05:12:11
Episode 1: Revealations
Lakitu: Im bored
Nudgy: Me 2
Lakitu: Hey I haz idea
Nudgy: Whatg is idea
Lakitu: Lets make object show
Nudgy: Be our host pls
Me: SURE
Your first challenge is to find the pinecones
Neptuno: Can I have one
ME: Sure
GamerJax: Oh! Look! I Found Pinecone!
ME: So Neptuno and gamerjax pick teams, episodes daily
Episode 2 is 7/9?
Lakitu: Im bored
Nudgy: Me 2
Lakitu: Hey I haz idea
Nudgy: Whatg is idea
Lakitu: Lets make object show
Nudgy: Be our host pls
Me: SURE
Your first challenge is to find the pinecones
Neptuno: Can I have one
ME: Sure
GamerJax: Oh! Look! I Found Pinecone!
ME: So Neptuno and gamerjax pick teams, episodes daily
Episode 2 is 7/9?
What was this episode lol
Choco Mountain, but it looks more like a dirt bike arena
On 2025-07-07 at 23:49:54
I pointed that out lol
[Fic] Countryballs x Mario Kart EP. 2
On 2025-07-07 at 05:20:37
If Brazil ever happens to appear make him say “YOURGOINGTOBRAZIL
1bullet bill suggestion
On 2025-07-07 at 17:51:56
on the beach map, make it so that bullet bill doesn't try taking shortcut over the water.
i don't like getting forcefully stuffed into water and having to respawn
i don't like getting forcefully stuffed into water and having to respawn
ok
Hellish Trial Maps
On 2025-07-07 at 06:47:19
most dead project:
1On 2025-05-16 at 05:01:44
someone wanted to submit this
The creator doesn't have an mkpc account so I can't even properly credit them and also their track looks like there was no effort put into it
So hi, IM THE CREATOR OF THE NARROW RING TRACK
Narrow Ring Remastered if you fall of even once no matter your progress, you respawn at the beginning
MKPC Stupid Feature Suggestions
On 2025-07-07 at 05:09:57
They should add MKDD, 3DS, and Wii tracks trust
I agree but that’s a good update suggestion, not a stupid update suggestion
You see, the stupid part is how many people beg for them to add.
They’re never happening, it’s why track maker exists.
Oops, my bad
On 2025-07-07 at 05:06:55
They should add MKDD, 3DS, and Wii tracks trust
I agree but that’s a good update suggestion, not a stupid update suggestion
1On 2025-07-07 at 04:23:46
The paintbrush item, when used it turns the entire track image into a failed ms paint drawing
DS Wario Stadium, Peach Stadium, or Mario Kart Stadium?
On 2025-07-07 at 04:30:25
Mario kart stadium, it stands out from all the other starter courses in the series
PROJECT: Meme Kart
On 2025-07-06 at 01:14:41
Meme Kart is a project where creators can submit their meme tracks and I will put them in an 8-cup multi cup, moderators/admins who submit tracks will be getting a gold tag in the list below. Regular people will get a blue tag. The creator aka me will get a blue sky tag.
Mushroom Cup:
Flower Cup:
Star Cup:
bleach By notgeorge
Special Cup:
Shell Cup:
Banana Cup:
Leaf Cup:
Lightning Cup:
Mushroom Cup:
Flower Cup:
Star Cup:
bleach By notgeorge
Special Cup:
Shell Cup:
Banana Cup:
Leaf Cup:
Lightning Cup:
DK Pass, Starview Peak, or Sky High Sundae?
On 2025-07-05 at 17:08:01
Ds pass
I think I just started something with the local-multiplayer mode.
On 2025-07-05 at 20:13:54
I made something kinda like that https://mkpc.malahieude.net/map.php?i=185326
I edited some custom characters because why not
On 2025-05-30 at 20:47:19
smash ness looks like boyfriend from fnf💀💀💀💀💀
Bro...
On 2025-05-23 at 17:35:37
i roasted sneed
4
2What is the best fanfic in all of MKPC
On 2025-06-21 at 19:49:03
I’m just wondering
Happy Birthday MKPC!!
On 2025-06-20 at 15:04:09
Happy 15th Anniversary MKPC!!!!!!
15 Toads for the years that this game existed.
15 Toads for the years that this game existed.
MKPC Summer Vacation!
On 2025-06-08 at 02:33:06
my fanfic got so popular that people are now making Camp MKPC inspired fanfics.
Reccomend Me DLC Tracks If I Finished Making My Cups
On 2025-06-05 at 17:57:36
Wii Toad's Factory or Wii U Bone Dry Dunes