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drawing you pfp!

Messages 452 - Metal Luigi Metal Luigi
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Draw him like he looks in-game
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draw Georgie running from a Walmart with a switch 2
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DO MY PFP ITS 3D

CTGP-MEME TRACK SUBMISSIONS

Messages 452 - Metal Luigi Metal Luigi
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CTGP-Meme is a multi up featuring 32 meme tracks and 100 meme characters

Meme Tracks:
Mushroom Cup:
Flower Cup:
Star Cup:
bleach by @notgeorge
Special Cup:
SNES Rainbow Road but you can't see the track by @Mr_Manager
Shell Cup:
Banana Cup:
Leaf Cup:
Lightning Cup:
Ultimate Pick a Path by @Mr_Manager
Troll Maze by @Mr_Manager


Meme characters:

fanfic: Piggy x Forsaken x Frozen Soul Crossover[PROLOUGE PART 2]

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notgeorge wrote:
Prologue part 2:

Nash: *wakes up* where the hell am I-
Zizzy: WHO ARE YOU, AND WHY ARE YOU HERE!?
Nash: uh I’m Nasha-
Pony: How did you get here.
Nash: you didn’t let me me finish my sentence but okey, I just woke up in this world.
All: *bursts out laughing*
George:lollollol You really expect us to believe that?*continues laughing*
Giraffy: you just woke up here? LOL *continues laughing*
Pony: So you wake up for no reason? HAHAHAHAH
Nash: it’s not funny.
*world glitches*
Zizzy: huh, nothing happened.
Mimi: *looks out the window* who’s this red guy laying face-flat outside our building.
OUTSIDE OF SAFE PLACE:
c00lkid: *wakes up* what the what is going on!
CHAPTER 1 SOON

Yes, c00lkid is the gumball of the fanfic.
Messages 452 - Metal Luigi Metal Luigi
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Prologue part 2:

Nash: *wakes up* where the hell am I-
Zizzy: WHO ARE YOU, AND WHY ARE YOU HERE!?
Nash: uh I’m Nasha-
Pony: How did you get here.
Nash: you didn’t let me me finish my sentence but okey, I just woke up in this world.
All: *bursts out laughing*
George:lollollol You really expect us to believe that?*continues laughing*
Giraffy: you just woke up here? LOL *continues laughing*
Pony: So you wake up for no reason? HAHAHAHAH
Nash: it’s not funny.
*world glitches*
Zizzy: huh, nothing happened.
Mimi: *looks out the window* who’s this red guy laying face-flat outside our building.
OUTSIDE OF SAFE PLACE:
c00lkid: *wakes up* what the what is going on!
CHAPTER 1 SOON
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Prologue:

Nash: *somehow glitches into the piggy chapter nine while sleeping and then wakes up* Huh, where am I? *runs through the alleys until making it into the road* Whoah, where am I? *gets hit by a fucking car* OUCH THAT FELT SO REAL*
some random elephant dude: *gets out of his car* HEY!!! WATCH WHERE YOUR GOING NON-ANIMAL IDIOT!!
Nash: *starts crying because of how rude the elephant dude was and sees the grandma piggy sneaking up behind him* WATCH OUT!!
elephant: wha? *gets attacked by the grandma piggy and get infected*
Nash: *runs until she sees The Safe Place and jumps over the barrier and starts running towards the safe place and looks through a window*
INSIDE THE SAFE PLACE:

Zizzy: PONY!!!! DID YOU SERIOUSLY LEAVE YOUR DIRTY CLOTHES IN THE WASHER AND NOT START IT!!! geez he annoys me sometimes.
Pony: I’m cooked.
Georgie: *just sits there eating a pizza while looking at a picture of him and his family*
Mimi: what is going on -_-
BACK OUTSIDE OF SAFE PLACE:
Nash: *opens window and breaks in*
BACK INSIDE SAFE PLACE:
George: AHH WHO ARE YOU!!!!!!
Zizzy: *yelling from upstairs* ARE THEY INFECTED!? BECAUSE I HAVE GOT A FUCKING KATANA
Nash: oh sh*t.
PROLOGUE PART 2 SOON
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Frozen soul is a game where you go across multiple dreams and that’s it
mario_facepalm1
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Find YouTube videos on those games
mario_facepalm1
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Diet_Coke wrote:
The title isn't very descriptive. I don't know what any of those are, further than the basic knowledge of them being roblox games.

Then actually play these 3
mario_facepalm1
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you read the title.
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fic: piggysaken

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Basically forsaken but with piggy characters and maps
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FANFIC: STAYING AT THE WORST HOTEL KNOWN TO MAN

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name: Moe Lester
age: 55
Color: Black
Personality: a horrible person, a dirty creep

THAT JUST SOUNDS LIKE MOL3STER
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name: Moe Lester
age: 55
Color: Black
Personality: a horrible person, a dirty creep

oh god-
thinking1
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List: 6/20
George
Nash
neptuno
Marcelo
Moe Lester
Zed
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When 20 MKPCians arrive at their vacation island, they look for a hotel but all of them in the best area of the vacation island are completely booked but the only one that isn’t booked at all is a place called “Best Inn” and they book it but when they get there there is poop everywhere in the parking lot and there’s graffiti everywhere on the walls(at least the back of it) and there’s graffiti everywhere and the rooms are just bad. And they get no refunds.  


This fanfic is based off a Roblox game called “STAY AT THE WORST HOTEL KNOWN TO MAN”


























































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I should stop making fanfics it’s making me go crazy and I might get alot of hate for this

FANFIC: Battle for Dream Island, MKPC edition!

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tbh this was a total waste of time and a scam.
cross2
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Episode 1: Revealations
Lakitu: Im bored
Nudgy: Me 2
Lakitu: Hey I haz idea
Nudgy: Whatg is idea
Lakitu: Lets make object show
Nudgy: Be our host pls
Me: SURE

Your first challenge is to find the pinecones
Neptuno: Can I have one
ME: Sure
GamerJax: Oh! Look! I Found Pinecone!

ME: So Neptuno and gamerjax pick teams, episodes daily
Episode 2 is 7/9?

Hell naw this is getting a H+
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My first fanfic wasn’t even this bad💀💀💀💀
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Episode 1: Revealations
Lakitu: Im bored
Nudgy: Me 2
Lakitu: Hey I haz idea
Nudgy: Whatg is idea
Lakitu: Lets make object show
Nudgy: Be our host pls
Me: SURE

Your first challenge is to find the pinecones
Neptuno: Can I have one
ME: Sure
GamerJax: Oh! Look! I Found Pinecone!

ME: So Neptuno and gamerjax pick teams, episodes daily
Episode 2 is 7/9?

…Ok, so, I… Er…

This isn’t the worst thing I’ve seen… But it’s also not the best.

Introducing another episode of… NASHATRA’S CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM CORNER!!!

Ok, so, lemme just summarized what happened in my own words:
-We are introduced to absolutely no one.
-Lakitu and Nudgey come up with an idea to host a show.
-First-ish challenge: Find a pinecone.
-Neptuno and GamerJax simply cheese it.
The end.

So, for the pros… There’s literally none I can give (sorry). There’s absolutely no context to what happened before this, only, like a handful of characters are introduced (which never happens to every other object show, the viewers get a taste of their personalities before the host appears and the show starts), and the challenge was probably simple just for times sake.

Some other problems are:
-There’s literally no plot whatsoever.
-The pacing is really quick.
But most importantly…
-A 4-year-old could come up with this (and the “episode”, if I were to animate it, would be, like, 12 seconds long).

Overall, I grade this episode…
D+ (kinda terrible).

Now, I know this was probably your first fic, which I totally understand, but the writing process takes time. You have to find a good plotline people can follow easily, not too complex, and not too rushed (you did the latter), try to take your time (maybe not make it daily?) and just what I do, but might help you: make a rough draft of said episode you’re going to make. After that, revise it a bit, ask ppl for opinions, and when ur confident in ur work, give out a release date (preferably 2-3 days after said release date is given) and touch the episode up a little bit. And then once that date hits, release it.

I really see potential in you, so maybe give some effort, will ya?

Thanks for listening, Nashatra Bealdhild tuning out, be good people ^_^

bro rushed art.

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