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16.) Jey: Died too early to become a good character
15.) Toad: Jey but with a personality. The toad at the end doesn’t count sknce different personality
14.) Master: Yet another character with no personality dying early. Also forgot to make a choco lake reference for him :(
13.) Parakoopa: A later death that lacked personality. I seriously need to work on character personalities, don’t I
12.) Gamerlion: He just wanted no one to die
11.) Bj: He new what he had to do, but failed
10.) Tyshawn:  Yoy could change his name to Ashton, and no one would notice a difference
9.) Lemon: He was just a loyal friend of Kris
8.) Kris: He is just an upbeat character, who was downbeat during case 3. My least favourite survivor
7.) Luq: He either hated on Ralsei, or started a stupid group. Cool character though
6.) Yascamer: Liked how he was brain dead and sowed a lot of emotion
5.) Ralsei: He’s an absolute bitch
4.) Nudge: The genius who new how to end the killing game by poisoning himself to get everyone to leave him so he could secretly get the info
3.) Lely: A loveable yet emotional character. Saddest death of them all
2.) Max: Great character development. He started out as a character that doesn’t really stand out with emotion, but in case 2 you could sense anger, and until Lely’s death, his goal was to be useful
1.) Toady: Get pranked LOL. This season was actually fake. Real season at 69 followers
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Episode 17: Killing Game Finale

Max: N-nudge… he and Lely sacralised themselves for us, so we best make use of it
Ralsei: What did that final thing he said mean?
Luq: Probably means you’re gonna die next
Ralsei: HA! No way I’m going to die
???: convince yourself that all you like
Toady: Who is this mysterious voice?
???: Oh. Did you not remember me. Well, I suppose that makes sense, since I am simply making use of his body
Kris: Who’s there?
???: Oh. I’m not revealing myself until I get bored or you figure me out
Max: Who are you?
???: The mastermind
Luq: So YOU’RE the one responsible for this
???: Yep. I took over someone’s body, and your goal is to figure out who I am. If you fail, then I will have to execute ALL of you, well except Ralsei
Ralsei: Ok. Well I’m that case, I don’t feel like helping
Kris: Why does Ralsei get no punishment?
???: because he got away with murder , so while he did get caught, he doesn’t get a punishment. Don’t worry, because if you do get it, he will face execution by himself
Ralsei: I definitely don’t want to reveal your identity now
Luq: Ralsei, this world doesn’t revolve around you. Living life like only you matter isn’t going to help you
Ralsei: I don’t care. As long as I live, I’m happy
???: by the way, you only have 1 minute
Max: I don’t think it can be any of the executions, since all the bodies were crushed
Luq: And so was Gamerlion
Toady: Both Lely and Parakoopa involved explosions
Kris: Toad had his head ripped off
Ralsei: And that leaves the stabbed bitches
Max: Didn’t think you would actually help
Ralsei: Wait, ou think I’m helping?
Max: Saying they were stabbed is helping…
???: 30 seconds left
Ralsei: See?
Luq: I don’t think even in a new form, they would be able to survive the stab
Toady: And Lely wouldn’t have enough time to come here
Kris: So that leaves Toad and Parakoopa
Luq: Parakoopa had a severe explosion, but could survive when his his body was taken over
???: 10 seconds left
Max: But don’t koopas need their shell in order to walk normally?
Toady: Yeah. There is no way he could have made it to the bottom of Tick Tock Clock in that form
Everyone: So that means you are Toad
Ralsei: SHIT!!!
Toad: Yep. I am the mastermind. I took over Toad’s actual self along time ago, but he was able to fight me off, but at that point, it was too late. Since the killing game has already been hosted
Max: But why was any of this necessary in the first place?
Toad: To set up teams for round 2
Toady: Teams?
Toad: Yep. There are 3 teams: Victims, Culprits, Survivors. The Victims and the Culprits are at war with eachother. Your goal is to stop this war
Kris: But aren’t they dead?
Ralsei: Did you fucking forget what Nudge said to you?
Kris: Oh yeah. About how I will get to see Lemon again
Max: That means, another chance to see Lely
Ralsei: Yeah Yeah. Have fun bragging about how you get to see your friends like little bitches
Luq: What’s the problem? You do t have any?
Ralsei: No. It’s about how I’m about to be executed
Toad: This is your punishment for killing Lemon. For the last time, It’s Punishment Time!
*Ralsei then got trapped inside a room. Then, Toad got into a cage as it started heading towards Ralsei. Ralsei did whatever he could to stop the cage, and eventually it stop, until suddenly gaining a huge burst of speed, crushing Ralsei instantly, as Toad vanished*
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KrazeyKay wrote:
Lely wrote:
Where do I said I wanted to end the killing game :(
I'm unhappy because Nudge killed himself because he killed me before, I just wanted me to be alive,

You might have wanted to live, but your character was willing to scrafise himself. He is a hero.

He is also bad at writing English apparently.

Because he is French. It’s not even a big deal
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Lely wrote:
Where do I said I wanted to end the killing game :(
I'm unhappy because Nudge killed himself because he killed me before, I just wanted me to be alive,

You might have wanted to live, but your character was willing to scrafise himself. He is a hero.
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I have terrible news, which is that this is my third message on this topic in a row. I would like to apologise deeply to anyone that is offended by this act, and start the episode, knowing how this episode was such a horrible action

Episode 16: The unofficial trial

Max: S-so, how will this work?
Nudge: Just like a normal trial. The catch is, I’m the one in charge of it, so I’ll make sure to keep you focused on the goal of you  ever get sidetracked
Kris: So, what should we talk about first?
Ralsei: About how Max did it
Max: W-why would you say that?
Ralsei:Dont deny it. All the evidence leads to you
Max: I-I promise you. I-I’m innocent
Ralsei: Can you prove it?
Nudge: How about we start by talking about the condition of the body. I don’t have information on it so I’ll leave you lot to do the talking
Toady: He looks like he had fallen down the stairs
Ralsei: If that is what happened, then we can call him the worlds biggest idiot
Luq: Silence. So, if he did fall down the stairs, then how?
Nudge: Maybe he was pushed down
Ralsei: Who else could have done that other than Max? He had the power, and the location
Luq: Now that we know how he died, let’s talk about alibis
Toady:I was with Ralsei
Kris: And I was with Luq
Nudge: So that leaves me, Max, and Lely… unless the murder happened after I was blown up
Toady: Not possible, unless done by Max
Nudge: So you guys stuck together after the explosion… I guess we now need to narrow done which of us three did it
Toady: We can already eliminate Lely because he is the vict-
Ralsei: You ever heard of suicide?
Toady: You ever heard of shutting up before I perform a deadly prank?
Luq: I guess I should point out how there was no sign of struggle
Nudge: That could be performed by an explosion. Honestly, I’m surprised how the explosion didn’t kill me.
Kris: Wait, shouldn’t you be in a weakened state?
Ralsei: Nope. I healed him right before we met up with you
Kris: Wait, if it was an explosion, then couldn’t anyone be the killer?
Nudge: Yep
Toady: Sorry, but I still think Lely, Nudge, Or Max did it
Ralsei: Same
Nudge: This would be the perfect time for one of the trial splits, but we can’t do that, so we will just have to debate normally
Luq: Well then, I guess I should start by saying that an explosion like that would be unlikely to kill someone’s, especially from the other room
Nudge: Not if they are undamaged, but Lely would have likely fallen down the stairs by the time the explosion went off
Ralsei: Yes but I want Max to be the culprit
Max: Why!?
Ralsei: Because you irritate me
Luq: Says the irritating one
Toady: Anyway, if the explosion didn’t kill Max, and the explosion didn’t kill Nudge, then it wouldn’t have killed Lely
Nudge: You raise a fair point
Max: Wait, if that’s true, and the killer isn’t me or Lely, then does that mean…
Nudge: Yeah. Your right. I did it
Max: So… IT’S TRUE!!!
Nudge: Of course it is
Max: But… why?!?!?!
Nudge: Because me and Lely wanted to end the killing game, and I have the information with tells me that the game need 2 more culprits, and 1 more victim. Once I’m dead, only 1 more culprit will be needed
Toady: The way you did do it isn’t clear to me. Please explain
Nudge: Alright. So, it started off after I left Ralsei’s room. Just before then, I had snuck a bomb into his room
Ralsei: So that’s where the bomb came from
Nudge: Next, I unlocked my secret room, before going to sleep. This morning, instead of going to bowser in the dark world, I went to Max’ room for a snorlax mech
Max: So you made use of my stuff for the murder on my best friend
Nudge: Oh yeah, almost forgot ti mention that after leaving Ralsei’s room, I had a private conversation with Lely about how we would scrapie’s ourselves for everyone, including the dead people
Kris: How could you help dead people?
Nudge: Because once the requirement is fulfilled, everyone will be revived, except the victims will be at war against the cult prints, each with a main rival
Kris: So I’ll get to see lemon again?!
Nudge: Yep. Moving on, after Max went to my room, he was the true one that got hit by the first explosion, and the mech suit I had was affected by the second
Ralsei: So that would explain the metal shards I saw everywhere
Nudge: At this point, I went to collect Lely, though it was more like throwing him down the stairs
Luq: So that’s how you killed Lely
Nudge: Yep. And now, it is time for my punishment, and also for someone to join me
Ralsei: NO! No one is joining you
Nudge: So you want to make it hard. I mean it doesn’t surprise me, especially baring in mind being an alive killer grants you attention
Ralsei: I DO NOT WANT ATTENTION YOU BITCH!!!
Nudge: Ralsei, your next
*As he said that, the wall opened up, revealing a giant sphere, which flew straight into Nudge, crushing him*

Don't worry if I don't say much it's because I don't really know what to say, great episode as always ^^

Thanks. Now just ignore that I killed your best friend :)

Ah yes it's true, but you too are dead :)

Until there is another culprit :)
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I have terrible news, which is that this is my third message on this topic in a row. I would like to apologise deeply to anyone that is offended by this act, and start the episode, knowing how this episode was such a horrible action

Episode 16: The unofficial trial

Max: S-so, how will this work?
Nudge: Just like a normal trial. The catch is, I’m the one in charge of it, so I’ll make sure to keep you focused on the goal of you  ever get sidetracked
Kris: So, what should we talk about first?
Ralsei: About how Max did it
Max: W-why would you say that?
Ralsei:Dont deny it. All the evidence leads to you
Max: I-I promise you. I-I’m innocent
Ralsei: Can you prove it?
Nudge: How about we start by talking about the condition of the body. I don’t have information on it so I’ll leave you lot to do the talking
Toady: He looks like he had fallen down the stairs
Ralsei: If that is what happened, then we can call him the worlds biggest idiot
Luq: Silence. So, if he did fall down the stairs, then how?
Nudge: Maybe he was pushed down
Ralsei: Who else could have done that other than Max? He had the power, and the location
Luq: Now that we know how he died, let’s talk about alibis
Toady:I was with Ralsei
Kris: And I was with Luq
Nudge: So that leaves me, Max, and Lely… unless the murder happened after I was blown up
Toady: Not possible, unless done by Max
Nudge: So you guys stuck together after the explosion… I guess we now need to narrow done which of us three did it
Toady: We can already eliminate Lely because he is the vict-
Ralsei: You ever heard of suicide?
Toady: You ever heard of shutting up before I perform a deadly prank?
Luq: I guess I should point out how there was no sign of struggle
Nudge: That could be performed by an explosion. Honestly, I’m surprised how the explosion didn’t kill me.
Kris: Wait, shouldn’t you be in a weakened state?
Ralsei: Nope. I healed him right before we met up with you
Kris: Wait, if it was an explosion, then couldn’t anyone be the killer?
Nudge: Yep
Toady: Sorry, but I still think Lely, Nudge, Or Max did it
Ralsei: Same
Nudge: This would be the perfect time for one of the trial splits, but we can’t do that, so we will just have to debate normally
Luq: Well then, I guess I should start by saying that an explosion like that would be unlikely to kill someone’s, especially from the other room
Nudge: Not if they are undamaged, but Lely would have likely fallen down the stairs by the time the explosion went off
Ralsei: Yes but I want Max to be the culprit
Max: Why!?
Ralsei: Because you irritate me
Luq: Says the irritating one
Toady: Anyway, if the explosion didn’t kill Max, and the explosion didn’t kill Nudge, then it wouldn’t have killed Lely
Nudge: You raise a fair point
Max: Wait, if that’s true, and the killer isn’t me or Lely, then does that mean…
Nudge: Yeah. Your right. I did it
Max: So… IT’S TRUE!!!
Nudge: Of course it is
Max: But… why?!?!?!
Nudge: Because me and Lely wanted to end the killing game, and I have the information with tells me that the game need 2 more culprits, and 1 more victim. Once I’m dead, only 1 more culprit will be needed
Toady: The way you did do it isn’t clear to me. Please explain
Nudge: Alright. So, it started off after I left Ralsei’s room. Just before then, I had snuck a bomb into his room
Ralsei: So that’s where the bomb came from
Nudge: Next, I unlocked my secret room, before going to sleep. This morning, instead of going to bowser in the dark world, I went to Max’ room for a snorlax mech
Max: So you made use of my stuff for the murder on my best friend
Nudge: Oh yeah, almost forgot ti mention that after leaving Ralsei’s room, I had a private conversation with Lely about how we would scrapie’s ourselves for everyone, including the dead people
Kris: How could you help dead people?
Nudge: Because once the requirement is fulfilled, everyone will be revived, except the victims will be at war against the cult prints, each with a main rival
Kris: So I’ll get to see lemon again?!
Nudge: Yep. Moving on, after Max went to my room, he was the true one that got hit by the first explosion, and the mech suit I had was affected by the second
Ralsei: So that would explain the metal shards I saw everywhere
Nudge: At this point, I went to collect Lely, though it was more like throwing him down the stairs
Luq: So that’s how you killed Lely
Nudge: Yep. And now, it is time for my punishment, and also for someone to join me
Ralsei: NO! No one is joining you
Nudge: So you want to make it hard. I mean it doesn’t surprise me, especially baring in mind being an alive killer grants you attention
Ralsei: I DO NOT WANT ATTENTION YOU BITCH!!!
Nudge: Ralsei, your next
*As he said that, the wall opened up, revealing a giant sphere, which flew straight into Nudge, crushing him*

Don't worry if I don't say much it's because I don't really know what to say, great episode as always ^^

Thanks. Now just ignore that I killed your best friend :)
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I have terrible news, which is that this is my third message on this topic in a row. I would like to apologise deeply to anyone that is offended by this act, and start the episode, knowing how this episode was such a horrible action

Episode 16: The unofficial trial

Max: S-so, how will this work?
Nudge: Just like a normal trial. The catch is, I’m the one in charge of it, so I’ll make sure to keep you focused on the goal of you  ever get sidetracked
Kris: So, what should we talk about first?
Ralsei: About how Max did it
Max: W-why would you say that?
Ralsei:Dont deny it. All the evidence leads to you
Max: I-I promise you. I-I’m innocent
Ralsei: Can you prove it?
Nudge: How about we start by talking about the condition of the body. I don’t have information on it so I’ll leave you lot to do the talking
Toady: He looks like he had fallen down the stairs
Ralsei: If that is what happened, then we can call him the worlds biggest idiot
Luq: Silence. So, if he did fall down the stairs, then how?
Nudge: Maybe he was pushed down
Ralsei: Who else could have done that other than Max? He had the power, and the location
Luq: Now that we know how he died, let’s talk about alibis
Toady:I was with Ralsei
Kris: And I was with Luq
Nudge: So that leaves me, Max, and Lely… unless the murder happened after I was blown up
Toady: Not possible, unless done by Max
Nudge: So you guys stuck together after the explosion… I guess we now need to narrow done which of us three did it
Toady: We can already eliminate Lely because he is the vict-
Ralsei: You ever heard of suicide?
Toady: You ever heard of shutting up before I perform a deadly prank?
Luq: I guess I should point out how there was no sign of struggle
Nudge: That could be performed by an explosion. Honestly, I’m surprised how the explosion didn’t kill me.
Kris: Wait, shouldn’t you be in a weakened state?
Ralsei: Nope. I healed him right before we met up with you
Kris: Wait, if it was an explosion, then couldn’t anyone be the killer?
Nudge: Yep
Toady: Sorry, but I still think Lely, Nudge, Or Max did it
Ralsei: Same
Nudge: This would be the perfect time for one of the trial splits, but we can’t do that, so we will just have to debate normally
Luq: Well then, I guess I should start by saying that an explosion like that would be unlikely to kill someone’s, especially from the other room
Nudge: Not if they are undamaged, but Lely would have likely fallen down the stairs by the time the explosion went off
Ralsei: Yes but I want Max to be the culprit
Max: Why!?
Ralsei: Because you irritate me
Luq: Says the irritating one
Toady: Anyway, if the explosion didn’t kill Max, and the explosion didn’t kill Nudge, then it wouldn’t have killed Lely
Nudge: You raise a fair point
Max: Wait, if that’s true, and the killer isn’t me or Lely, then does that mean…
Nudge: Yeah. Your right. I did it
Max: So… IT’S TRUE!!!
Nudge: Of course it is
Max: But… why?!?!?!
Nudge: Because me and Lely wanted to end the killing game, and I have the information with tells me that the game need 2 more culprits, and 1 more victim. Once I’m dead, only 1 more culprit will be needed
Toady: The way you did do it isn’t clear to me. Please explain
Nudge: Alright. So, it started off after I left Ralsei’s room. Just before then, I had snuck a bomb into his room
Ralsei: So that’s where the bomb came from
Nudge: Next, I unlocked my secret room, before going to sleep. This morning, instead of going to bowser in the dark world, I went to Max’ room for a snorlax mech
Max: So you made use of my stuff for the murder on my best friend
Nudge: Oh yeah, almost forgot ti mention that after leaving Ralsei’s room, I had a private conversation with Lely about how we would scrapie’s ourselves for everyone, including the dead people
Kris: How could you help dead people?
Nudge: Because once the requirement is fulfilled, everyone will be revived, except the victims will be at war against the cult prints, each with a main rival
Kris: So I’ll get to see lemon again?!
Nudge: Yep. Moving on, after Max went to my room, he was the true one that got hit by the first explosion, and the mech suit I had was affected by the second
Ralsei: So that would explain the metal shards I saw everywhere
Nudge: At this point, I went to collect Lely, though it was more like throwing him down the stairs
Luq: So that’s how you killed Lely
Nudge: Yep. And now, it is time for my punishment, and also for someone to join me
Ralsei: NO! No one is joining you
Nudge: So you want to make it hard. I mean it doesn’t surprise me, especially baring in mind being an alive killer grants you attention
Ralsei: I DO NOT WANT ATTENTION YOU BITCH!!!
Nudge: Ralsei, your next
*As he said that, the wall opened up, revealing a giant sphere, which flew straight into Nudge, crushing him*
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Episode 15: A devastating investigation

Ralsei: Guess I was right about one of them dying
Kris: L-Lely. He was a great friend to us. He cared about everyone. But now, he’s dead
Luq: As sad as it is, who is this other person?
???: M-Me?
Ralsei: No. We mean the dead person. OF COURSE IT’S FUCKING YOU
???: Y-You see, I’m M-Max
Toady: Max? I thought I was the one that was meant to do pranks
Max: T-this is no prank. I-I’m truly Max
Ralsei: Then why aren’t you a fat ass snorlax?
Max: I-I’ll explain later. I w-would like time to m-myself, if t-that’s alright
Luq: Go ahead. We will solve the tragic murder of Lely
Max: T-thanks
Ralsei: Let’s investigate who killed this bitch now that that bitch has gone
Luq: Yep. We certainly will. As for you, well…
Ralsei: Oh yeah, and don’t think about try to knock me out, since it won’t work
Luq: I swear, you are the most irritating person ever
*Luq tried striking Ralsei, only for Ralsei to pull out a bomb, blowing up Luq, knocking him out*
Kris: R-Ralsei. You horrible being
Ralsei: Do I look like I give a fuck?
Toady: You don’t, but we certainly do, bomber man
Ralsei: Nice. I’m a bomb wielding hero
Toady: Be quiet, bomber villain
Kris: S-since you can use bombs, p-please investigate Nudges explosion
Ralsei: Sure. That will let me not have to deal with bitches like you
Toady: Anyway, now that he is gone, what should we do?
Ralsei: Murder!
Kris: Toady!
Toady: Heheh. Anyway, what should we do?
Kris: I have no idea
Toady: I suppose we should just chat until we think of something to do
Kris: Ok. But first, I would like to talk about the metal shards. Do you have any idea on what they could be?
Toady: Nope
Max: H-hello. I’m nack
Kris: Toady![/colro]
[color=teal]Max: No. It’s g-genuinely me. Also, what h-happened to Luq?

Toady: Ralsei blew him up
Max: Th-that doesn’t surprise me
Kris: Didn’t you say you would explain what happened to you?
Max: Y-yes.
S-so, this is the form I’ve always b-been in.
E-every week, I would get into this s-snorlax mech.
N-never did I have any reason to use it, until k-know.
K-knowledge of this killing game c-caused me to stay in it.
O-obviously, something seems to have d-destroyed it

Toady: Must’ve been the explosion
Max: E-explosion?
Toady: Yeah. There was an explosion. Though maybe it launched you in a way that you banged your head and forgot what happened
Max: I-I guess
Kris: Anyway, what should we do now?
Luq: G-go get the o-others
Max: Oh! L-Luq, you’re up
Toady: Nope. Just a prank
Luq: No, I actually am up. Anyway, let’s go get the others

Ralsei: Oh look, you came back. Didn’t get much, other than a severely injured Nudge. Well, he was
Nudge: Hi guys
Max: H-hello
Nudge: Max? What’s happened to you? And we’re is Lely?
Max: I-I’ve exited my mech
Nudge: So, you are in a mech… Maybe that would be your talent that MonoBoi barely caused me to not find out. Anyway, what about Lely?
Ralsei: Oh yeah. I suppose I should have told you. That bitch died
Nudge: Damn. I was really hoping he’d be one of the survivors. Anyway, I guess we should hold an unofficial class trial
Kris: Unofficial class trial?
Nudge: Yeah. We want justice first Lely, right?
Luq: Yes. I suppose we should just go along with it. We won’t e able to have any interruptions from MonoBoi, so let’s go

*They went over to the elevator, and then got in, ready for the 5th class trial, even if unofficial*
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Lely wrote:
Episode 14 (part 2):Explosion, aftermath

Max: Nudge! Oh no. Someone sabotaged his secret area
Toady: What happened? And how are you here first
Ralsei: Because he killed Nudge
Max: THERE IS NO WAY I KILLED NUDGE!!!
Toady: So, how did you get here first?
Max: I finished searching early, so I came here to attempt to find out what was in his secret room, but then the explosion happened
Kris: What happened?
Luq: It would appear that someone has been blown up
Max: Nudge has
Luq: I suppose we now need to wait for Lely
Max: I’ll go get him
Ralsei: Go ahead. The least that will happen is that he will kill you
Max: HE WOULD NEVER DO THAT!!!
Ralsei: Yes he would
Max: NO HE WOULDN’T!!!
RalseiWhat makes you s-
Luq: Be quiet, Ralsei
Ralsei: Fine…
Max: Anyway, I’ll go get Lely now
Ralsei: Have fun dyi-
Luq: Silence
Toady: Anyway, any ideas on who put the bombs there?
*20 minutes later*
*BANG!!!*
Kris: Another one?
Ralsei: I guess Lely did kill him… or maybe it’s the other way round. Whoever did it, must be responsible for the explosion
Luq: I said, silence about that, didn’t I
Ralsei: Sorry…

*They went up stairs, but on the final floor, they saw shards of metal everywhere*

Kris: Why are there metal shards everywhere?
Luq: No idea. I think we should check the staircase

*As they walked in, they discovered the horrifying sight of a mysterious figure, standing next to the dead body of Lely*

"The next death will be the first death I planned" so you delayed my death 9 times. How expected. Anyways I'm kinda sad, I would have liked to appear in Season 2 as well if there is one, but I should be glad I survived that much.
If Max killed me, I'm reporting this fanfic :p

When i say 'planned', i mean which death i planned first, not which death i planned to come first. However, this was originally planned to be case 4, but decided that it woud be more interesting than the original case 5
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Episode 14 (part 2):Explosion, aftermath

Max: Nudge! Oh no. Someone sabotaged his secret area
Toady: What happened? And how are you here first
Ralsei: Because he killed Nudge
Max: THERE IS NO WAY I KILLED NUDGE!!!
Toady: So, how did you get here first?
Max: I finished searching early, so I came here to attempt to find out what was in his secret room, but then the explosion happened
Kris: What happened?
Luq: It would appear that someone has been blown up
Max: Nudge has
Luq: I suppose we now need to wait for Lely
Max: I’ll go get him
Ralsei: Go ahead. The least that will happen is that he will kill you
Max: HE WOULD NEVER DO THAT!!!
Ralsei: Yes he would
Max: NO HE WOULDN’T!!!
RalseiWhat makes you s-
Luq: Be quiet, Ralsei
Ralsei: Fine…
Max: Anyway, I’ll go get Lely now
Ralsei: Have fun dyi-
Luq: Silence
Toady: Anyway, any ideas on who put the bombs there?
*20 minutes later*
*BANG!!!*
Kris: Another one?
Ralsei: I guess Lely did kill him… or maybe it’s the other way round. Whoever did it, must be responsible for the explosion
Luq: I said, silence about that, didn’t I
Ralsei: Sorry…

*They went up stairs, but on the final floor, they saw shards of metal everywhere*

Kris: Why are there metal shards everywhere?
Luq: No idea. I think we should check the staircase

*As they walked in, they discovered the horrifying sight of a mysterious figure, standing next to the dead body of Lely*
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Episode 14 (Part 1): The return

Lely: 9 people dead, and 1 person missing. All that’s left is… us 6
Max: Don’t cry. We just need to have hope
Lely: B-but, how am I mean to to have hope, when my friends are constantly killing eachother?
MonoBoi: Do whatever. Anyway, I’m going to leave you fools
Toady: Thank god he’s gone
MonoBoi: What are you doing in here?
Nudge: Isn’t it obvious? I’m finding out the secrets to the killing game

Lely: Nudge?!
MonoBoi: GET OUT OF HERE!!!
Nudge: No. I need to reveal the secrets to the killing game
MonoBoi: The you leave me with no choice. SELF DESTRUCT ACTIVATED!!!

*BANG!!! The wall slid open and Nudge came flying out*
Lely: NUDGE!!! Not again!!!
Nudge: D-don’t worry. I’m f-fine
Luq: You don’t seem fine, but I can’t think of any way to heal you
Ralsei: I can
Max: NO!!! That is far too dangerous!
Ralsei: Fine. I’ll just leave Nudge to die from his injuries
Lely: NO!!! Please, save him
Nudge: You… guys are b-being way too dram-matic about… this
Kris: No, we aren’t. We can tell you are badly injured, and just want to help you
Nudge: I-I mean I guess I… will go, since it w-will make things easier
Max: But is it a good idea to let Ralsei take care of you?
Lely: YES!!! It is. Even if there is a chance of danger, Nudge needs healing
Max: But… Oh they’ve already left us…
Kris: I suppose we should get going too
Lely: Let’s go check the new area

Toady: So, it seems like the new area is a staircase to a painting. Let’s go inside
MonoBoi: Ding Dong.  It is now 10pm, so painting date no longer usable
Toady: So he decided to pre-record all the night time announcements
Lely: Let’s go to sleep now

MonoBoi: Ding Dong. It is now, 7am, so access to the paintings is now re-allowed
Lely: Let’s go investigate the new paintings
Nudge: Ok. I’ll check the one on this floor
Kris: There’s one on this floor?
Nudge: Yep. There is one on every floor, though the basement does kind of have 3, being the cage, a water area, and a bowser room, and floor 2 has none
Max: I’ll check the bowser room in the basement
Lely: I’ll go check the one up top
Ralsei: I’ll check the haunted house
Toady: Same
Luq: So that leaves me and Kris in the water area

*After the search, an explosion could be heard in Bob-Omb Battlefield*
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Episode 13: Mystery of the Clock

Lely: W-where’s Nudge?
MonoBoi: Why does that matter? You need to solve the murder, not solve where Nudge isn
Lely: But nudge is our friend. We can’t just leave him
MonoBoi: Anyway. Trial! BEGIN!!!
Luq: We can already narrow it down to 5 suspects.
Myself
Toady
Bj
Max
Parakoopa

Lely: We can eliminate max because-
Luq: This is about the power of our brains, not friendship. I know you want to believe in Max, but we still need to consider him a suspect
Lely: But-
Ralsei: Please, no bullshit
Max: What did you say about Lely?
Ralsei: To stop with the bullshit
Max: DONT!!!
Ralsei: Fine. If it will get you to shut up
Lely: Leave max alone!
Ralsei: Anyway, let’s talk about Toady
Toady: What about me?
Ralsei: How you and Parakoopa are the only known people to enter Tick Tock Clock before the incident
Toady: I promise I’m innocent
Bj: I can confirm he is
Kris: How?
Bj: Because I did it
Kris: WHY? What did Parakoopa do to you?
Bj: Nothing. The truth is, I was trying to confuse MonoBoi by killing myself
Max: YOU WHAT!?!?!?
Bj: I was hoping that killing myself would make MonoBoi see you as killers and let you all escape, but my plan failed when I ended up killing Parakoopa myself
MonoBoi: Hey! I haven’t split you in half yet

MonoBoi: Hey! You still need to debate. We can’t have a boring trial like this
Lely: We don’t care about how boring the trial is, and do not want to debate
MonoBoi: Hey! This trial isn’t about you
Max: This trial isn’t about you either
MonoBoi: You know what, let’s just end this trial, since you guys ruin EVERYTHING!!!
Bj: No, you ruin it for us, and cause us to murder like I did

MonoBoi: Bj, just die before I get EVEN MORE ANNOYED AT YOU!!!
Bj: Mo hesitation. You just want me dead. So, where is my cave?
MonoBoi: Just in there
Bj: It is time to get out of here. Goodbye people, and isn’t let another murder happen.
*After he said that, we walked into the cave and under a falling rock, getting crushed*
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Episode 12: Simulation Investigation

Lely: PARAKOOPA!!!
Max: Another death…
Toady: Something’s off
Bj: Of course something is off. Another one of our friends has died
Nudge: He means about Lely…
Lely: NUDGE! You’re back! Please help us solve this murd- Oh. It’s just Toady…
Ralsei: Of course something is off about him. He is using half of his braincells, so one
Max: WHO ARE YOU CALLING STUPID!!!
Ralsei: Lely
Toady: Actually, that is not what I meant…
Luq: You man the fact that he hasn’t collapsed yet?
*As he said that, Lely fainted*
Toady: Nevermind. It doesn’t matter anymore
Kris: What does matter is solving who killed Parakoopa
Max: MONOKUMA!!! He was the one who gave Parakoopa a prize known as death
MonoBoi: How dare you accuse me. Because of that, you aren’t allowed to investigate
Max: WHAT!!!
*Max immedietly disappeared*
Lely: HOW DARE YOU DO THAT TO MAX!!!
Kris: Didn’t you just faint…?
Toady: Of course I didn't
Ralsei: Maybe it would have been better if you went to prank them at the igloo instead
Kris: NEVER WISH THAT UPON SOMEONE!!!
Ralsei: You probably wish I killed someone else, don’t you
Luq: Ralsei, cut it out. We need to focus on investigating.
Bj: Sadly, we can’t check for information with the headset, since that got blown up
Toady: Then what else can we check
Ralsei: Your dead body!
Luq: Ralsei, I just told you to stop
Ralsei: Don’t care + didn’t ask
Luq: Fine then, for the sake of the rest of us
*Luq immediately knocked Ralsei out*
Kris: Wow. This really has turned into a small investigation group
Toady: Let’s start with alibis for who could have sabotaged it
Luq: Your deduction if it being sabotaged seams logical. As for alibis, I checked the useless room with Lely and Max
Kris: I have a question, why did we get the biggest group to investigate useless room?
Toady: That was my idea
Kris: Why though?
Luq: Why doesn’t matter. What matters is who
Kris: Sorry
Toady: Anyway. Me and Parakoopa were in Tick Tock Clock, I investigated the bottom while Parakoopa flew up to the top
Bj: This morning, we went looking for Nudge. I went to the second floor, Luq went to the third floor, Parakoopa stayed on the first floor with Kris, while Lely and Toady were in the basement
Ralsei: Don’t forget me[:color]
[color=lime]Luq: I though that you were knocked out to not disturb us

*Luq then knocked out Toady*
Kris: You just got rid of another person…
Bj: At least it will be easier to investigate
Luq: From that, I gathered 5 suspects, from most to least likely
Myself,
Toady,
Bj,
Max,
And Parakoopa

Kris: You consider yourself most suspicious?
Luq: Based on those possibilities, I am the most likely
Bj: I like your honesty, but I think Toady is more suspicious than you
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. Please head over to the entrance to start the fourth class trial

Toady: Why did you knock me out?
Luq: Because you voice pranked as Ralsei
Lely: I’ve just realised, we might get a chance so see Nudge again
*They all got into elevator, but when they got to the bottom, nobody appeared outside the elevator door*
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Episode 11 (Part 2): Simulation Clock

MonoBoi: Ding Dong. It is now 7am, so you now have access to paintings again
Max: So, what shall we do today?
Lely: First, I want to look for Nudge
Parakoopa: Why? There is no use. We aren’t going to fin-
Bj: We should still try anyway, just in case
Toady: I agree. We should still look just incase we do find him
Ralsei: I’m not going to look for him. It’s a waste of time. I’m going to use my time for more valuable things
Max: Then I’m going with you
Ralsei: No you aren’t
*As he said that, he took out some poison*
Lely: MAX!!! Leave him alone
Max: Fine!
Lely: Remember what I said. It’s not about being useful, it’s about being part of the group
Max: Fair. I think I’m going to go to my room and try to relax
Lely: Anyway, I’m going to check the basement

Lely: I guess I should start in Leathal Lava Land
Nudge: Hi Lely
Lely: Nudge?
Nudge: Yeah. Look to your left
Lely: There is nothing there…
Nudge: Sorry. I meant right
Lely: I don’t see you there either… WAIT TOADY!!!
Toady: He isn’t here. Sorry
Lely: That wasn’t funny!
Ralsei: Yes it was
Lely: What are you doing here?
Ralsei: I was giving Toady an audience
Toady: Anyway, we should head back now

*10 minutes later*
Luq: So, what now?
Bj: How about we try the simulation out
Parakoopa: That sounds fun

Parakoopa: So this is the simulation
Bj: Yep. Let’s put our VR headset on and start

Lely: So this is a survival game
Luq: Seems like it
MonoBoi: Max has been eliminated
Max: So we have to deal with him during every elimination
Ralsei: How are you out already?
MonoBoi: Ralsei has Ben eliminated
Bj: How are you out already?
Ralsei: Bruh my game glitched
MonoBoi: That is impossible, since this is glitchless
Ralsei: Then how did I lose?
MonoBoi: Because you suck.
Lely has been eliminated

Lely: That was tough. I wonder how much longer they will last
MonoBoi: Bj has been eliminated
Toady has been eliminated

Bj: Damn. A lot of bad luck at one moment
Toady: Go Luq. Go Parakoopa. Go Luq. Go Parakoopa
Ralsei: Who are you even rooting for? Choose one you idiot!
MonoBoi: Luq has been eliminated. Congratulations Parakoopa, here is your reward
*After that, Parakoopa’s headset exploded, smashing his shell, and dropping him dead onto the ground*
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Episode 11 (Part 1): The final floor

Lely: W-why did he betray us?
Ralsei: Wasn’t you listening, or have you gone deaf?
Max: Leave Lely alone!
Ralsei: I can do whatever I want, you talentless bitch
Lely: NEVER SAY THAT TO MY BEST FRIENDS!!!
Nudge: I think I’m going to stay behind
MonoBoi: Why? Do you want to spend time with me?
Nudge: I would rather poison myself
Toady: Why do you want to stay behind?
Nudge: None of your business!
Bj: Let’s just lea-
Max: NO! We can’t let him be by himself when he hasn’t identified what is in his secret room
Luq: Max. There is no need for that anymore
Max: Why?
Luq: Because if  it didn’t work last time, then it won’t work again
Max: But, I still need to keep an eye on him
Nudge: No you don’t!
Lely: Max! Leave him
Max: No. I need to do something. I need to show that I’m just a talentless snorlax
*As he said that, Nudge took out poison and drunk it all, collapsing to the ground*
Lely: NUDGE!!!
Parakoopa: Just leave him. There is no way that Nudge would give up that easily. For now, let’s just head back
Lely: I CANT JUST LEAVE HIM!!! He is about to die so I nee-
Bj: Parakoopa is right. We just need to have hope

Lely: Poor Nudge. I hope he is ok
Max: I don’t care if he is or not. He is a big threat, and if he is dead, then we know who killed him
Lely: M-max. What has happened to you. Ever since you learnt your talentless, you have been focusing solely on dealing with threats
Max: I just want to be useful, and prevent any murders from happening
Luq: Remember what I said, about how you should ignore the fact that you are talentless
Max: Yes but I… I just wan-
Ralsei: What is all this bullshit you are spewing?  What do you have against max being useful. Anyway, Toady, Kris, Bj, and Parakoopa shall go investigate the final floor. You 3 can fight it out down here while I help keep it alive
Max: SHUT UP!!! All you do is cause problems. We make an attempt to have piece, and you just have to come at us and say NO!!! We will go investigate the final floor aswell, while you will be staying here by yourself, waiting for your so called ‘friend’ to show up!!!
Ralsei: Nice. I’m in a conflict.
Luq: Attention seeker

Max: Now that we have checked out the new rooms, does anyone have anything to share?
Parakoopa: Tick Tock Clock seems to have a giant simulator at the top. Maybe we should try it out at some point
Bj: Rainbow Ride was filled with random floating things, with the only think notable was a steerable ship
Lely: There was nothing interesting in our room
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. It is now 10:00PM, so paintings are now disabled

You really nail this fanfic more than the others. I don't know, it's just more passionating. I'm looking at every line carefully, more than once... the fanfics that make me do that are very rare
Anyways, I also like the character development.
And I have a fact to spill... FDJ, aka DaisyFan370, aka DaisyandToad, wanted to be a character but he never appeared in the fanfic

I could only have a max of 17 characters (16 if you don’t count MonoBoi) so I had to get rid of him and XBOX since i felt like they wouldn’t have good characters/ too similar to others (specifically with Tyshawn for XBOX, and Ralsei for DaisyFan)
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Episode 11 (Part 1): The final floor

Lely: W-why did he betray us?
Ralsei: Wasn’t you listening, or have you gone deaf?
Max: Leave Lely alone!
Ralsei: I can do whatever I want, you talentless bitch
Lely: NEVER SAY THAT TO MY BEST FRIENDS!!!
Nudge: I think I’m going to stay behind
MonoBoi: Why? Do you want to spend time with me?
Nudge: I would rather poison myself
Toady: Why do you want to stay behind?
Nudge: None of your business!
Bj: Let’s just lea-
Max: NO! We can’t let him be by himself when he hasn’t identified what is in his secret room
Luq: Max. There is no need for that anymore
Max: Why?
Luq: Because if  it didn’t work last time, then it won’t work again
Max: But, I still need to keep an eye on him
Nudge: No you don’t!
Lely: Max! Leave him
Max: No. I need to do something. I need to show that I’m just a talentless snorlax
*As he said that, Nudge took out poison and drunk it all, collapsing to the ground*
Lely: NUDGE!!!
Parakoopa: Just leave him. There is no way that Nudge would give up that easily. For now, let’s just head back
Lely: I CANT JUST LEAVE HIM!!! He is about to die so I nee-
Bj: Parakoopa is right. We just need to have hope

Lely: Poor Nudge. I hope he is ok
Max: I don’t care if he is or not. He is a big threat, and if he is dead, then we know who killed him
Lely: M-max. What has happened to you. Ever since you learnt your talentless, you have been focusing solely on dealing with threats
Max: I just want to be useful, and prevent any murders from happening
Luq: Remember what I said, about how you should ignore the fact that you are talentless
Max: Yes but I… I just wan-
Ralsei: What is all this bullshit you are spewing?  What do you have against max being useful. Anyway, Toady, Kris, Bj, and Parakoopa shall go investigate the final floor. You 3 can fight it out down here while I help keep it alive
Max: SHUT UP!!! All you do is cause problems. We make an attempt to have piece, and you just have to come at us and say NO!!! We will go investigate the final floor aswell, while you will be staying here by yourself, waiting for your so called ‘friend’ to show up!!!
Ralsei: Nice. I’m in a conflict.
Luq: Attention seeker

Max: Now that we have checked out the new rooms, does anyone have anything to share?
Parakoopa: Tick Tock Clock seems to have a giant simulator at the top. Maybe we should try it out at some point
Bj: Rainbow Ride was filled with random floating things, with the only think notable was a steerable ship
Lely: There was nothing interesting in our room
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. It is now 10:00PM, so paintings are now disabled
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Episode 10: Dual Mysteries

MonoBoi: Get ready for the 3rd trial, where you will have to figure out who commuted the murder first, or if the murderer of each victim are the same. TRIAL! BEGIN!!!
Nudge: Before we start throwing blame on each other, I would like to know what Toady was doing at the time of the murder
Toady: I was waiting for Tyshawn to come back to the top of the mountain. Before then, we were just hanging out, and I even taught him one of my pranks
Lely: Which would be?
Toady: Tripping somebody with a string
Nudge: That would match up to what was found near Lemon’s body. Now, why didn’t you go to the igloo?
Toady: Because what use am I going to have at the igloo? I may be a prankster, but I don’t want to interfere with death
Ralsei: That sounds boring
Toady: Anyway, does anyone have any ideas on who killed Tyshawn?
Ralsei: Why do you suddenly care about trials?
Toady: I cared before, just didn’t need to say anything, since I had no importance. But this trial, I feel like I’m more needed, so I’m going to make sure to help
Kris: D-does anyone have any ideas o-on who killed lemon?
Bj: I think it would have to be someone who wasn’t with someone else
Max: So me and Nudge, and we can eliminate Lely, since there is no way he would manage a murder
Toady: Question, what was Kris doing at the time of the murders?
Kris: B-bathroom
Bj: Can anyone confirm this?
Ralsei: I can
Max: You can?
Ralsei: Yes. After all, it is obvious that the killer can confirm a suspects innocence
Kris: WHAT!!!
Ralsei: Yeah. I killed Lemon. It’s not a big deal, since we are meant to be solving the murder that came first
Kris: DUMB LOGIC LIKE THAT WONT SOLVE ANYTHING!!!
Nudge: Let’s not get ahead of ourselves. Ralsei is right. While he may have murdered lemon, how do we know it came first?
Max: There is no way Ralsei is getting away with this
MonoBoi: Ooh. Is that a controversial opinion I see? Get split in half, you lot

Kris: Ralsei deserves execution
Ralsei: No. Only the person who killed first deserves execution
Max: No way you didn’t kill first
Nudge: Is there any proof he did kill first?
Luq: Who else would kill anyone baring in mind our plan?
Bj: Me, Parakoopa, Toady, or a traitor could all kill
Lely: There is no way anyone would betray us
Bj: I only said there was a chance that someone betrayed you
Yascamer: Who else… at igloo
Parakoopa: There could have been quite a few people at the igloo
Luq: Based on the evidence we have, the only person it could have been is Ralsei
Ralsei: Oh, but it isn’t me. After all, my evidence is that I witnessed it
Kris: You’re obviously lying
Toady: How do we know that he is lying

Luq: If you really did witness it, then tell us who did it?
Ralsei: No because that would ruin the fun
Max: You’re only saying that since you don’t know a good person to frame
Ralsei: Would you like a hint?
Kris: NO!!! WE NEED TO GET RID OF YOU!!!
Ralsei: But then the killer of Tyshawn will survive
Luq: Give us the hint
Ralsei: Sure. The killer is French
Max: You must… be lying
Ralsei: Believe that all you want. All that will get you is death
Max: Th-then it’s true?
Luq: Ignore him. He’s just trying to get in the way
Nudge: Actually, you’re the one getting in my way
Luq: HOW?!
Nudge: Simple. You are trying to take me along the wrong path
Toady: So, what are you hiding?
Luq: Nothing. I’m innocent
Parakoopa: Ralsei, can you confirm this?
Ralsei: Yep. Luq didn’t do ir
Nudge: So now, it’s between Yascamer and Ralsei
Ralsei: Oops. Wasn’t meant to reveal that Yascamer did it
Yascamer: Me… No… do it
Lely: You must be lying
Parakoopa: I trust Ralsei
Kris: HOW!?!?!?
Ralsei: I suppose I should explain how it happened.
It started when Kris went to the bathroom. I decide to sneak in, and caught Lemon on the floor. I was about to stab him, but I heard something in g from behind. Ut was Yascamer. I then threw the knife at him, but he caught it. Then, Tyshawn showed up. I didn’t know what happened between those 2 at the time. After they did whatever they did, I then killed Lemon, then as I went to exit, realised Yascamer had already killed Tyshawn

Max: There is no way this is true
Yascamer: It-it is
Lely: Why did you do it? We agreed not to kill anyone
Yascamer: I-i was scared. I though he was going to accuse me of killing Lemon so I panicked and threw the knife
MonoBoi: That’s right. It’s time for the punishment
Parakoopa: What about voting time?
MonoBoi: It’s way to late for that. We need to get Yascamer killed asap since I need to recharge
*Yascamer then got forced into a race car, but as he tried driving towards everyone, traps came from everywhere. In the end, a crusher from toads factory Andes up squishing him, and his car*

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But...
Kris, next time, just hold it in and DONT GO TO THE BATHROOM

Dont forget that Toady should never teach anyone his pranks again
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Episode 10: Dual Mysteries

MonoBoi: Get ready for the 3rd trial, where you will have to figure out who commuted the murder first, or if the murderer of each victim are the same. TRIAL! BEGIN!!!
Nudge: Before we start throwing blame on each other, I would like to know what Toady was doing at the time of the murder
Toady: I was waiting for Tyshawn to come back to the top of the mountain. Before then, we were just hanging out, and I even taught him one of my pranks
Lely: Which would be?
Toady: Tripping somebody with a string
Nudge: That would match up to what was found near Lemon’s body. Now, why didn’t you go to the igloo?
Toady: Because what use am I going to have at the igloo? I may be a prankster, but I don’t want to interfere with death
Ralsei: That sounds boring
Toady: Anyway, does anyone have any ideas on who killed Tyshawn?
Ralsei: Why do you suddenly care about trials?
Toady: I cared before, just didn’t need to say anything, since I had no importance. But this trial, I feel like I’m more needed, so I’m going to make sure to help
Kris: D-does anyone have any ideas o-on who killed lemon?
Bj: I think it would have to be someone who wasn’t with someone else
Max: So me and Nudge, and we can eliminate Lely, since there is no way he would manage a murder
Toady: Question, what was Kris doing at the time of the murders?
Kris: B-bathroom
Bj: Can anyone confirm this?
Ralsei: I can
Max: You can?
Ralsei: Yes. After all, it is obvious that the killer can confirm a suspects innocence
Kris: WHAT!!!
Ralsei: Yeah. I killed Lemon. It’s not a big deal, since we are meant to be solving the murder that came first
Kris: DUMB LOGIC LIKE THAT WONT SOLVE ANYTHING!!!
Nudge: Let’s not get ahead of ourselves. Ralsei is right. While he may have murdered lemon, how do we know it came first?
Max: There is no way Ralsei is getting away with this
MonoBoi: Ooh. Is that a controversial opinion I see? Get split in half, you lot

Kris: Ralsei deserves execution
Ralsei: No. Only the person who killed first deserves execution
Max: No way you didn’t kill first
Nudge: Is there any proof he did kill first?
Luq: Who else would kill anyone baring in mind our plan?
Bj: Me, Parakoopa, Toady, or a traitor could all kill
Lely: There is no way anyone would betray us
Bj: I only said there was a chance that someone betrayed you
Yascamer: Who else… at igloo
Parakoopa: There could have been quite a few people at the igloo
Luq: Based on the evidence we have, the only person it could have been is Ralsei
Ralsei: Oh, but it isn’t me. After all, my evidence is that I witnessed it
Kris: You’re obviously lying
Toady: How do we know that he is lying

Luq: If you really did witness it, then tell us who did it?
Ralsei: No because that would ruin the fun
Max: You’re only saying that since you don’t know a good person to frame
Ralsei: Would you like a hint?
Kris: NO!!! WE NEED TO GET RID OF YOU!!!
Ralsei: But then the killer of Tyshawn will survive
Luq: Give us the hint
Ralsei: Sure. The killer is French
Max: You must… be lying
Ralsei: Believe that all you want. All that will get you is death
Max: Th-then it’s true?
Luq: Ignore him. He’s just trying to get in the way
Nudge: Actually, you’re the one getting in my way
Luq: HOW?!
Nudge: Simple. You are trying to take me along the wrong path
Toady: So, what are you hiding?
Luq: Nothing. I’m innocent
Parakoopa: Ralsei, can you confirm this?
Ralsei: Yep. Luq didn’t do ir
Nudge: So now, it’s between Yascamer and Ralsei
Ralsei: Oops. Wasn’t meant to reveal that Yascamer did it
Yascamer: Me… No… do it
Lely: You must be lying
Parakoopa: I trust Ralsei
Kris: HOW!?!?!?
Ralsei: I suppose I should explain how it happened.
It started when Kris went to the bathroom. I decide to sneak in, and caught Lemon on the floor. I was about to stab him, but I heard something in g from behind. Ut was Yascamer. I then threw the knife at him, but he caught it. Then, Tyshawn showed up. I didn’t know what happened between those 2 at the time. After they did whatever they did, I then killed Lemon, then as I went to exit, realised Yascamer had already killed Tyshawn

Max: There is no way this is true
Yascamer: It-it is
Lely: Why did you do it? We agreed not to kill anyone
Yascamer: I-i was scared. I though he was going to accuse me of killing Lemon so I panicked and threw the knife
MonoBoi: That’s right. It’s time for the punishment
Parakoopa: What about voting time?
MonoBoi: It’s way to late for that. We need to get Yascamer killed asap since I need to recharge
*Yascamer then got forced into a race car, but as he tried driving towards everyone, traps came from everywhere. In the end, a crusher from toads factory Andes up squishing him, and his car*
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Episode 9: Investigation in the igloo

Kris: LEMON!!! Why did you have to die? I-I wanted to survive with you. I-I will m-make sure your murderer gets caught!
*However, the only thing he saw as he exited was Tyshawn’s dead body*
Kris: ANOTHER ONE!!! W-where are the others? I-I will avenge both of you

Max: Finally. We escaped. Now to find where Ralsei ran off to
*As he said that, Kris came running in crying*
Max: What’s wrong?
Nudge: Lemme guess. Another death?
Kris: Y-yes
Max: Where?
Kris: I-igloo
Nudge: Then let’s go to the igloo
Ralsei: Hi guys
Max: Where have you been?
Ralsei: That doesn’t matter. Nudge said we need to go to the igloo, so let’s get going

Max: Poor Tyshawn…
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. A dead body had been discovered. Please head over to the igloo
Kris: Th-that’s not all
Ralsei: OOH! A double kill
Nudge: So Lemon is also dead
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. A dead body had been discovered. Please head over to the igloo
Kris: Y-yes
Nudge: Can somebody get Toady? I want to ask him soemthing
Max: What do you want him for?
Nudge: I want to ask him about this string by Lemon’s body
Max: Ok. I’ll go get him
Ralsei: I think it is obvious what the murder weapon for both of them are
Kris: Th-the knifes?
Ralsei: Yep
Yascamer: Why… two announcements?
Kris: T-two dead bodies
Lely: Two dead bodies?!
*Lely then faints*
Luq: It seems like we will have to solve two different murders at once
MonoBoi: Actually, you only have to solve who commuted the first one
Nudge: So the second murderer gets away with no punishment?
MonoBoi: Yep. However, they also can’t make use of there murder to escape
Ralsei: So one of these deaths were completely worthless
Kris: D-don’t say that about a-anyone
Ralsei: Who cares?
Parakoopa: I care
Bj: Just ignore Ralsei
Ralsei: Committing that crime has severe consequences
Nudge: Attention Seeker
Ralsei: Who are you calling attenti-
Max: You. Also, I can’t find Toady
Nudge: Then we will have to ask him in the trial
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. Please head over to the entrance, so that we can start our third class trial
Luq: Clearly, there is nothing else to investigate

Max: Before we go in, I want to say that me and Nudge are innocent, since we were in the volcano together
*After he said that, they all got into the elevator, ready for the third lass trial*
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Episode 8 (Part 2): Chilling in the igloo

MonoBoi: Ding Dong. It is now 7am, so you are free to use paintings again
Parakoopa: Good morning everyone. Now, here is the information we got about the third floor
Tyshawn: There is a giant water town to have fun in
Bj: There was also an island that changes size whenever you enter a pipe.
Parakoopa: There is also a giant mountain
Tyshawn: It even has a slide
Bj: Finally, there is also another snow area filled with snowmen, and even has a big igloo
Kris: Hey Lemon, want to go to the igloo?
Lemon: Sure
Toady: I’m going to climb to the top of the mountain
Ralsei: To push someone off? If you do I’ll give you all the money I have on me
Lely: And how much would that be?
Ralsei: 0 Dollars
Toady: Sounds like a good deal
Luq: Before you all go, we need to check what is in everyone’s secret room
Kris: Why? I’m sure going to the igloo is more important
Max: Safety reasons
Nudge: Safety? What dangerous stiff wool be in our secret room? Anyway, I’m going to be going to the volcano
Lely: I’m sorry but, we need to be safe. We were told that our room would have things we really want, so we need to make sure people don’t have weapons
Nudge: And? The only person I see having weapons is Luq
Luq: I have them to defend someone when they are being attacked
Nudge: Yeah, I don’t feel like wasting my time with you
Ralsei: Same. I’d rather go to the volcano then follow along with this garbage
Max: Then I’ll go with you
Lely: But Max! Isn’t that dangerous?
Max: If I die, it will be obvious that one of them did it
Lely: But… I don’t want the risk of you dying
Max: Look. I need to show Ralsei that I’m more than a talentless fool and also need to teach him respect
Ralsei: Oh, I’ve already realised that
Max: Oh, so you will show some respect to me?
Ralsei: Of course I won’t, bitchless
Max: Is this what I’m going to have to put up with?
Ralsei: Yep
Lemon: Before I go, just felt like saying that all that is in my secret room is giant storage of plants
Kris: All I have is a statue of my inspiration
Luq: Can we have your secret key to confirm it?
Lemon: Sure

Ralsei: Let’s get into the volcano
Max: I’ll go first
Nudge: I’ll go next
Ralsei: And I’ll go never
Max: Great. He’s abandoned us

Lemon: This place is cool
Kris: Yep. What a cool place
Lemon: So, what shall we do?
Kris: I don’t know, but first, I want to go to the bathroom
Lemon: I’ll wait around the corner for you

Kris: Were is he? Wait, he said around the corner
*But the only thing around the corner, was Lemons dead body*
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