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Episode 14 (part 2):Explosion, aftermath

Max: Nudge! Oh no. Someone sabotaged his secret area
Toady: What happened? And how are you here first
Ralsei: Because he killed Nudge
Max: THERE IS NO WAY I KILLED NUDGE!!!
Toady: So, how did you get here first?
Max: I finished searching early, so I came here to attempt to find out what was in his secret room, but then the explosion happened
Kris: What happened?
Luq: It would appear that someone has been blown up
Max: Nudge has
Luq: I suppose we now need to wait for Lely
Max: I’ll go get him
Ralsei: Go ahead. The least that will happen is that he will kill you
Max: HE WOULD NEVER DO THAT!!!
Ralsei: Yes he would
Max: NO HE WOULDN’T!!!
RalseiWhat makes you s-
Luq: Be quiet, Ralsei
Ralsei: Fine…
Max: Anyway, I’ll go get Lely now
Ralsei: Have fun dyi-
Luq: Silence
Toady: Anyway, any ideas on who put the bombs there?
*20 minutes later*
*BANG!!!*
Kris: Another one?
Ralsei: I guess Lely did kill him… or maybe it’s the other way round. Whoever did it, must be responsible for the explosion
Luq: I said, silence about that, didn’t I
Ralsei: Sorry…

*They went up stairs, but on the final floor, they saw shards of metal everywhere*

Kris: Why are there metal shards everywhere?
Luq: No idea. I think we should check the staircase

*As they walked in, they discovered the horrifying sight of a mysterious figure, standing next to the dead body of Lely*

"The next death will be the first death I planned" so you delayed my death 9 times. How expected. Anyways I'm kinda sad, I would have liked to appear in Season 2 as well if there is one, but I should be glad I survived that much.
If Max killed me, I'm reporting this fanfic :p

I didn't know you could report topics even if you're a corpse.

I'm not a corpse. How am I typing if I was a corpse.
Let's not tell them, but I'm reincarnated. I'm ready to kill y'all secretly and you won't heard about it. No just kidding. (danganronpa context, so the 10 year old kiddos won't say stupidities)

I don't think I've ever seen stupidity in the plural. Thank you very much, but the first part is sketch imo. What do they do if a dead person comes back from the afterlife? Surely that's happened atleast once?
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Lely wrote:
Episode 14 (part 2):Explosion, aftermath

Max: Nudge! Oh no. Someone sabotaged his secret area
Toady: What happened? And how are you here first
Ralsei: Because he killed Nudge
Max: THERE IS NO WAY I KILLED NUDGE!!!
Toady: So, how did you get here first?
Max: I finished searching early, so I came here to attempt to find out what was in his secret room, but then the explosion happened
Kris: What happened?
Luq: It would appear that someone has been blown up
Max: Nudge has
Luq: I suppose we now need to wait for Lely
Max: I’ll go get him
Ralsei: Go ahead. The least that will happen is that he will kill you
Max: HE WOULD NEVER DO THAT!!!
Ralsei: Yes he would
Max: NO HE WOULDN’T!!!
RalseiWhat makes you s-
Luq: Be quiet, Ralsei
Ralsei: Fine…
Max: Anyway, I’ll go get Lely now
Ralsei: Have fun dyi-
Luq: Silence
Toady: Anyway, any ideas on who put the bombs there?
*20 minutes later*
*BANG!!!*
Kris: Another one?
Ralsei: I guess Lely did kill him… or maybe it’s the other way round. Whoever did it, must be responsible for the explosion
Luq: I said, silence about that, didn’t I
Ralsei: Sorry…

*They went up stairs, but on the final floor, they saw shards of metal everywhere*

Kris: Why are there metal shards everywhere?
Luq: No idea. I think we should check the staircase

*As they walked in, they discovered the horrifying sight of a mysterious figure, standing next to the dead body of Lely*

"The next death will be the first death I planned" so you delayed my death 9 times. How expected. Anyways I'm kinda sad, I would have liked to appear in Season 2 as well if there is one, but I should be glad I survived that much.
If Max killed me, I'm reporting this fanfic :p

I didn't know you could report topics even if you're a corpse.
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Episode 14 (Part 1): The return

Lely: 9 people dead, and 1 person missing. All that’s left is… us 6
Max: Don’t cry. We just need to have hope
Lely: B-but, how am I mean to to have hope, when my friends are constantly killing eachother?
MonoBoi: Do whatever. Anyway, I’m going to leave you fools
Toady: Thank god he’s gone
MonoBoi: What are you doing in here?
Nudge: Isn’t it obvious? I’m finding out the secrets to the killing game

Lely: Nudge?!
MonoBoi: GET OUT OF HERE!!!
Nudge: No. I need to reveal the secrets to the killing game
MonoBoi: The you leave me with no choice. SELF DESTRUCT ACTIVATED!!!

*BANG!!! The wall slid open and Nudge came flying out*
Lely: NUDGE!!! Not again!!!
Nudge: D-don’t worry. I’m f-fine
Luq: You don’t seem fine, but I can’t think of any way to heal you
Ralsei: I can
Max: NO!!! That is far too dangerous!
Ralsei: Fine. I’ll just leave Nudge to die from his injuries
Lely: NO!!! Please, save him
Nudge: You… guys are b-being way too dram-matic about… this
Kris: No, we aren’t. We can tell you are badly injured, and just want to help you
Nudge: I-I mean I guess I… will go, since it w-will make things easier
Max: But is it a good idea to let Ralsei take care of you?
Lely: YES!!! It is. Even if there is a chance of danger, Nudge needs healing
Max: But… Oh they’ve already left us…
Kris: I suppose we should get going too
Lely: Let’s go check the new area

Toady: So, it seems like the new area is a staircase to a painting. Let’s go inside
MonoBoi: Ding Dong.  It is now 10pm, so painting date no longer usable
Toady: So he decided to pre-record all the night time announcements
Lely: Let’s go to sleep now

MonoBoi: Ding Dong. It is now, 7am, so access to the paintings is now re-allowed
Lely: Let’s go investigate the new paintings
Nudge: Ok. I’ll check the one on this floor
Kris: There’s one on this floor?
Nudge: Yep. There is one on every floor, though the basement does kind of have 3, being the cage, a water area, and a bowser room, and floor 2 has none
Max: I’ll check the bowser room in the basement
Lely: I’ll go check the one up top
Ralsei: I’ll check the haunted house
Toady: Same
Luq: So that leaves me and Kris in the water area

*After the search, an explosion could be heard in Bob-Omb Battlefield*

What even is this show?
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Episode 13: Mystery of the Clock

Lely: W-where’s Nudge?
MonoBoi: Why does that matter? You need to solve the murder, not solve where Nudge isn
Lely: But nudge is our friend. We can’t just leave him
MonoBoi: Anyway. Trial! BEGIN!!!
Luq: We can already narrow it down to 5 suspects.
Myself
Toady
Bj
Max
Parakoopa

Lely: We can eliminate max because-
Luq: This is about the power of our brains, not friendship. I know you want to believe in Max, but we still need to consider him a suspect
Lely: But-
Ralsei: Please, no bullshit
Max: What did you say about Lely?
Ralsei: To stop with the bullshit
Max: DONT!!!
Ralsei: Fine. If it will get you to shut up
Lely: Leave max alone!
Ralsei: Anyway, let’s talk about Toady
Toady: What about me?
Ralsei: How you and Parakoopa are the only known people to enter Tick Tock Clock before the incident
Toady: I promise I’m innocent
Bj: I can confirm he is
Kris: How?
Bj: Because I did it
Kris: WHY? What did Parakoopa do to you?
Bj: Nothing. The truth is, I was trying to confuse MonoBoi by killing myself
Max: YOU WHAT!?!?!?
Bj: I was hoping that killing myself would make MonoBoi see you as killers and let you all escape, but my plan failed when I ended up killing Parakoopa myself
MonoBoi: Hey! I haven’t split you in half yet

MonoBoi: Hey! You still need to debate. We can’t have a boring trial like this
Lely: We don’t care about how boring the trial is, and do not want to debate
MonoBoi: Hey! This trial isn’t about you
Max: This trial isn’t about you either
MonoBoi: You know what, let’s just end this trial, since you guys ruin EVERYTHING!!!
Bj: No, you ruin it for us, and cause us to murder like I did

MonoBoi: Bj, just die before I get EVEN MORE ANNOYED AT YOU!!!
Bj: Mo hesitation. You just want me dead. So, where is my cave?
MonoBoi: Just in there
Bj: It is time to get out of here. Goodbye people, and isn’t let another murder happen.
*After he said that, we walked into the cave and under a falling rock, getting crushed*

Bro, what a legend. Absolute GOAT.
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Episode 9: Investigation in the igloo

Kris: LEMON!!! Why did you have to die? I-I wanted to survive with you. I-I will m-make sure your murderer gets caught!
*However, the only thing he saw as he exited was Tyshawn’s dead body*
Kris: ANOTHER ONE!!! W-where are the others? I-I will avenge both of you

Max: Finally. We escaped. Now to find where Ralsei ran off to
*As he said that, Kris came running in crying*
Max: What’s wrong?
Nudge: Lemme guess. Another death?
Kris: Y-yes
Max: Where?
Kris: I-igloo
Nudge: Then let’s go to the igloo
Ralsei: Hi guys
Max: Where have you been?
Ralsei: That doesn’t matter. Nudge said we need to go to the igloo, so let’s get going

Max: Poor Tyshawn…
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. A dead body had been discovered. Please head over to the igloo
Kris: Th-that’s not all
Ralsei: OOH! A double kill
Nudge: So Lemon is also dead
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. A dead body had been discovered. Please head over to the igloo
Kris: Y-yes
Nudge: Can somebody get Toady? I want to ask him soemthing
Max: What do you want him for?
Nudge: I want to ask him about this string by Lemon’s body
Max: Ok. I’ll go get him
Ralsei: I think it is obvious what the murder weapon for both of them are
Kris: Th-the knifes?
Ralsei: Yep
Yascamer: Why… two announcements?
Kris: T-two dead bodies
Lely: Two dead bodies?!
*Lely then faints*
Luq: It seems like we will have to solve two different murders at once
MonoBoi: Actually, you only have to solve who commuted the first one
Nudge: So the second murderer gets away with no punishment?
MonoBoi: Yep. However, they also can’t make use of there murder to escape
Ralsei: So one of these deaths were completely worthless
Kris: D-don’t say that about a-anyone
Ralsei: Who cares?
Parakoopa: I care
Bj: Just ignore Ralsei
Ralsei: Committing that crime has severe consequences
Nudge: Attention Seeker
Ralsei: Who are you calling attenti-
Max: You. Also, I can’t find Toady
Nudge: Then we will have to ask him in the trial
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. Please head over to the entrance, so that we can start our third class trial
Luq: Clearly, there is nothing else to investigate

Max: Before we go in, I want to say that me and Nudge are innocent, since we were in the volcano together
*After he said that, they all got into the elevator, ready for the third lass trial*

It looks like Lely can be relied on to go down everytime.
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KrazeyKay wrote:
KrazeyKay wrote:
KrazeyKay wrote:
Episode 8 (Part 1): Additional house space

MonoBoi: Now that Master is dead, it is time for your talents.
Nudge, you are the ultimate mathematician.
Lely, you are the ultimate animal protector.
Yascamer, you are the ultimate racer.
Luq, you are the ultimate protector.
Bj, you are the ultimate caver.
Tyshawn, you are the ultimate park designer.
Parakoopa, you are the ultimate pilot.
Lemon, you are the ultimate gardener
Jey was the ultimate game developer
Toad was the ultimate royal servant.
Kris, you were the ultimate mayor
Max, you have no talent. The only reason you came is because Lely begged for peach to let you come

Max: I’m here because Lely begged me?
Lely: I did?
Ralsei: So max is a talentless loser. Surprised he has made it this far
Lely: Leave him alone!
Ralsei: You aren’t related to me so don’t boss me around!
Lely: So I should just let you be annoying?
Ralsei: Yeah. I can do what you want, so if you don’t want to get involved, then piss of
Max: Why are you like this
Toady: He probably wants to steal the attention I get from my pranks
Ralsei: HEY!!! I’m not an attention seeker!
Nudge: Let’s go back to our rooms. I’m tired
MonoBoi Already? It’s only 6:00pm. You still have 4 hours until you need to sleep
Nudge: Well I certainly will
MonoBoi: Well then, I guess I best tell you that I have opened up an extra room for each of you under your rooms. They also have an extra room for personal stuff
Nudge: I’ll make sure to check that out before I go to sleep
Ralsei: Honestly, same
Kris: Before we go, please may I say something?
Lemon: What would that be?
Kris: About how I was the ultimate mayor
MonoBoi: That’s because you got tired of everyone going to you for help, so you resigned
Ralsei: That doesn’t sound like a very good mayor to me
Kris: Wait, so if I no longer am that, then why was I invited?
MonoBoi: Since the population in the castle is significantly smaller
Parakoopa: Me, Bj, and Tyshawn will be investigating the new floor while you do that

Ralsei: Have fun checking your rooms everyone. I’m going to make sure to find a good weapon to deal with mr. talentless
Max: Why do you want to kill me?!
Ralsei: Because talentless people like you don’t belong here
Lely: Learn respect for once
Ralsei: Last time I tried that I fell asleep for a while week
Luq: Max, I want to speak to you later.
Max: Ok

Max: So, what did you want to speak to me about?
Luq: It’s about how your ‘talentless.’ While I might not be right, I feel like that was a lie to make sure another murder happens
Max: What do you mean?
Luq: It’s an attempt to mentally weaken you, making you susceptible to an attack, which will keep the killing game alive
Max: Honestly, the only problem I have with being talentless is Ralsei
Luq: Also, i have an idea to help prevent a murder
Max: What would that be?
Luq: We need to get everyone to reveal what there secret item/s are
Max: Ok. For me, it was just filled with snorlax statues
Luq: I had close ranged weapons[/colod]
[color=teal]Max: I’m going to try getting Lely to join. See you next time

Luq: I’ll try getting Yascamer, to make our group ‘The French Preventers’

Lely: Hi max. So, what to you want to talk about?
Max:  A group me and Luq made named ‘The French Preventers’ where we do what we can to prevent a killing from happening
Lely: Yes please. What do I need to do?
Max: Check everyone’s secret room
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. It is now 10pm. Paintings will no longer be usable unless leaving an area or going to bob-omb battlefield
Lely: Of course that got in our way… but anyway, isn’t that an invasion of privacy?
Max: In situations like this, we need to make exceptions
Lely: Then I guess I’m in
Luq: Glad that you accepted it. I managed to get Yascamer, though he being quite quiet
Lely: I suppose I should say what is in my room. In there, is a giant animal cage filled with the cutest animals
Yascamer: Me… have… race… maps…
Luq: Yascamer, I just want to say something. I know the death of your 2 best friends hurts a lot, but I’m the situation we are in, we have to adapt. We can’t spend our entire lives here depressed. We have to move last thisendeaths, and make them mere memories
Yascamer:Oh… ok
Lely: Anyway, let’s go to sleep

You messed up the letter color near the end? (Luq & Max)
F for Max the Talentless.

Fixed
L for Mr. Talentless

(Insert 12th letter of the alphabet here)
As someone who knows nothing about the show or the games(or any anime)how much sense will the ending make?

The ending should make some sense, since it will follow up into a season 2 (won’t reveal what it is about yet)

The ending makes sense without a 10 minute explanation? Finally, something that doesn't make me feel stupid.

It should make sense to where ou don’t need a 10 minute/hour/day explanation

On behalf of other "dumb" people, much appreciated.
xd1
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KrazeyKay wrote:
KrazeyKay wrote:
Episode 8 (Part 1): Additional house space

MonoBoi: Now that Master is dead, it is time for your talents.
Nudge, you are the ultimate mathematician.
Lely, you are the ultimate animal protector.
Yascamer, you are the ultimate racer.
Luq, you are the ultimate protector.
Bj, you are the ultimate caver.
Tyshawn, you are the ultimate park designer.
Parakoopa, you are the ultimate pilot.
Lemon, you are the ultimate gardener
Jey was the ultimate game developer
Toad was the ultimate royal servant.
Kris, you were the ultimate mayor
Max, you have no talent. The only reason you came is because Lely begged for peach to let you come

Max: I’m here because Lely begged me?
Lely: I did?
Ralsei: So max is a talentless loser. Surprised he has made it this far
Lely: Leave him alone!
Ralsei: You aren’t related to me so don’t boss me around!
Lely: So I should just let you be annoying?
Ralsei: Yeah. I can do what you want, so if you don’t want to get involved, then piss of
Max: Why are you like this
Toady: He probably wants to steal the attention I get from my pranks
Ralsei: HEY!!! I’m not an attention seeker!
Nudge: Let’s go back to our rooms. I’m tired
MonoBoi Already? It’s only 6:00pm. You still have 4 hours until you need to sleep
Nudge: Well I certainly will
MonoBoi: Well then, I guess I best tell you that I have opened up an extra room for each of you under your rooms. They also have an extra room for personal stuff
Nudge: I’ll make sure to check that out before I go to sleep
Ralsei: Honestly, same
Kris: Before we go, please may I say something?
Lemon: What would that be?
Kris: About how I was the ultimate mayor
MonoBoi: That’s because you got tired of everyone going to you for help, so you resigned
Ralsei: That doesn’t sound like a very good mayor to me
Kris: Wait, so if I no longer am that, then why was I invited?
MonoBoi: Since the population in the castle is significantly smaller
Parakoopa: Me, Bj, and Tyshawn will be investigating the new floor while you do that

Ralsei: Have fun checking your rooms everyone. I’m going to make sure to find a good weapon to deal with mr. talentless
Max: Why do you want to kill me?!
Ralsei: Because talentless people like you don’t belong here
Lely: Learn respect for once
Ralsei: Last time I tried that I fell asleep for a while week
Luq: Max, I want to speak to you later.
Max: Ok

Max: So, what did you want to speak to me about?
Luq: It’s about how your ‘talentless.’ While I might not be right, I feel like that was a lie to make sure another murder happens
Max: What do you mean?
Luq: It’s an attempt to mentally weaken you, making you susceptible to an attack, which will keep the killing game alive
Max: Honestly, the only problem I have with being talentless is Ralsei
Luq: Also, i have an idea to help prevent a murder
Max: What would that be?
Luq: We need to get everyone to reveal what there secret item/s are
Max: Ok. For me, it was just filled with snorlax statues
Luq: I had close ranged weapons[/colod]
[color=teal]Max: I’m going to try getting Lely to join. See you next time

Luq: I’ll try getting Yascamer, to make our group ‘The French Preventers’

Lely: Hi max. So, what to you want to talk about?
Max:  A group me and Luq made named ‘The French Preventers’ where we do what we can to prevent a killing from happening
Lely: Yes please. What do I need to do?
Max: Check everyone’s secret room
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. It is now 10pm. Paintings will no longer be usable unless leaving an area or going to bob-omb battlefield
Lely: Of course that got in our way… but anyway, isn’t that an invasion of privacy?
Max: In situations like this, we need to make exceptions
Lely: Then I guess I’m in
Luq: Glad that you accepted it. I managed to get Yascamer, though he being quite quiet
Lely: I suppose I should say what is in my room. In there, is a giant animal cage filled with the cutest animals
Yascamer: Me… have… race… maps…
Luq: Yascamer, I just want to say something. I know the death of your 2 best friends hurts a lot, but I’m the situation we are in, we have to adapt. We can’t spend our entire lives here depressed. We have to move last thisendeaths, and make them mere memories
Yascamer:Oh… ok
Lely: Anyway, let’s go to sleep

You messed up the letter color near the end? (Luq & Max)
F for Max the Talentless.

Fixed
L for Mr. Talentless

(Insert 12th letter of the alphabet here)
As someone who knows nothing about the show or the games(or any anime)how much sense will the ending make?

The ending should make some sense, since it will follow up into a season 2 (won’t reveal what it is about yet)

The ending makes sense without a 10 minute explanation? Finally, something that doesn't make me feel stupid.
xd1
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KrazeyKay wrote:
Episode 8 (Part 1): Additional house space

MonoBoi: Now that Master is dead, it is time for your talents.
Nudge, you are the ultimate mathematician.
Lely, you are the ultimate animal protector.
Yascamer, you are the ultimate racer.
Luq, you are the ultimate protector.
Bj, you are the ultimate caver.
Tyshawn, you are the ultimate park designer.
Parakoopa, you are the ultimate pilot.
Lemon, you are the ultimate gardener
Jey was the ultimate game developer
Toad was the ultimate royal servant.
Kris, you were the ultimate mayor
Max, you have no talent. The only reason you came is because Lely begged for peach to let you come

Max: I’m here because Lely begged me?
Lely: I did?
Ralsei: So max is a talentless loser. Surprised he has made it this far
Lely: Leave him alone!
Ralsei: You aren’t related to me so don’t boss me around!
Lely: So I should just let you be annoying?
Ralsei: Yeah. I can do what you want, so if you don’t want to get involved, then piss of
Max: Why are you like this
Toady: He probably wants to steal the attention I get from my pranks
Ralsei: HEY!!! I’m not an attention seeker!
Nudge: Let’s go back to our rooms. I’m tired
MonoBoi Already? It’s only 6:00pm. You still have 4 hours until you need to sleep
Nudge: Well I certainly will
MonoBoi: Well then, I guess I best tell you that I have opened up an extra room for each of you under your rooms. They also have an extra room for personal stuff
Nudge: I’ll make sure to check that out before I go to sleep
Ralsei: Honestly, same
Kris: Before we go, please may I say something?
Lemon: What would that be?
Kris: About how I was the ultimate mayor
MonoBoi: That’s because you got tired of everyone going to you for help, so you resigned
Ralsei: That doesn’t sound like a very good mayor to me
Kris: Wait, so if I no longer am that, then why was I invited?
MonoBoi: Since the population in the castle is significantly smaller
Parakoopa: Me, Bj, and Tyshawn will be investigating the new floor while you do that

Ralsei: Have fun checking your rooms everyone. I’m going to make sure to find a good weapon to deal with mr. talentless
Max: Why do you want to kill me?!
Ralsei: Because talentless people like you don’t belong here
Lely: Learn respect for once
Ralsei: Last time I tried that I fell asleep for a while week
Luq: Max, I want to speak to you later.
Max: Ok

Max: So, what did you want to speak to me about?
Luq: It’s about how your ‘talentless.’ While I might not be right, I feel like that was a lie to make sure another murder happens
Max: What do you mean?
Luq: It’s an attempt to mentally weaken you, making you susceptible to an attack, which will keep the killing game alive
Max: Honestly, the only problem I have with being talentless is Ralsei
Luq: Also, i have an idea to help prevent a murder
Max: What would that be?
Luq: We need to get everyone to reveal what there secret item/s are
Max: Ok. For me, it was just filled with snorlax statues
Luq: I had close ranged weapons[/colod]
[color=teal]Max: I’m going to try getting Lely to join. See you next time

Luq: I’ll try getting Yascamer, to make our group ‘The French Preventers’

Lely: Hi max. So, what to you want to talk about?
Max:  A group me and Luq made named ‘The French Preventers’ where we do what we can to prevent a killing from happening
Lely: Yes please. What do I need to do?
Max: Check everyone’s secret room
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. It is now 10pm. Paintings will no longer be usable unless leaving an area or going to bob-omb battlefield
Lely: Of course that got in our way… but anyway, isn’t that an invasion of privacy?
Max: In situations like this, we need to make exceptions
Lely: Then I guess I’m in
Luq: Glad that you accepted it. I managed to get Yascamer, though he being quite quiet
Lely: I suppose I should say what is in my room. In there, is a giant animal cage filled with the cutest animals
Yascamer: Me… have… race… maps…
Luq: Yascamer, I just want to say something. I know the death of your 2 best friends hurts a lot, but I’m the situation we are in, we have to adapt. We can’t spend our entire lives here depressed. We have to move last thisendeaths, and make them mere memories
Yascamer:Oh… ok
Lely: Anyway, let’s go to sleep

You messed up the letter color near the end? (Luq & Max)
F for Max the Talentless.

Fixed
L for Mr. Talentless

(Insert 12th letter of the alphabet here)
As someone who knows nothing about the show or the games(or any anime)how much sense will the ending make?
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Episode 8 (Part 1): Additional house space

MonoBoi: Now that Master is dead, it is time for your talents.
Nudge, you are the ultimate mathematician.
Lely, you are the ultimate animal protector.
Yascamer, you are the ultimate racer.
Luq, you are the ultimate protector.
Bj, you are the ultimate caver.
Tyshawn, you are the ultimate park designer.
Parakoopa, you are the ultimate pilot.
Lemon, you are the ultimate gardener
Jey was the ultimate game developer
Toad was the ultimate royal servant.
Kris, you were the ultimate mayor
Max, you have no talent. The only reason you came is because Lely begged for peach to let you come

Max: I’m here because Lely begged me?
Lely: I did?
Ralsei: So max is a talentless loser. Surprised he has made it this far
Lely: Leave him alone!
Ralsei: You aren’t related to me so don’t boss me around!
Lely: So I should just let you be annoying?
Ralsei: Yeah. I can do what you want, so if you don’t want to get involved, then piss of
Max: Why are you like this
Toady: He probably wants to steal the attention I get from my pranks
Ralsei: HEY!!! I’m not an attention seeker!
Nudge: Let’s go back to our rooms. I’m tired
MonoBoi Already? It’s only 6:00pm. You still have 4 hours until you need to sleep
Nudge: Well I certainly will
MonoBoi: Well then, I guess I best tell you that I have opened up an extra room for each of you under your rooms. They also have an extra room for personal stuff
Nudge: I’ll make sure to check that out before I go to sleep
Ralsei: Honestly, same
Kris: Before we go, please may I say something?
Lemon: What would that be?
Kris: About how I was the ultimate mayor
MonoBoi: That’s because you got tired of everyone going to you for help, so you resigned
Ralsei: That doesn’t sound like a very good mayor to me
Kris: Wait, so if I no longer am that, then why was I invited?
MonoBoi: Since the population in the castle is significantly smaller
Parakoopa: Me, Bj, and Tyshawn will be investigating the new floor while you do that

Ralsei: Have fun checking your rooms everyone. I’m going to make sure to find a good weapon to deal with mr. talentless
Max: Why do you want to kill me?!
Ralsei: Because talentless people like you don’t belong here
Lely: Learn respect for once
Ralsei: Last time I tried that I fell asleep for a while week
Luq: Max, I want to speak to you later.
Max: Ok

Max: So, what did you want to speak to me about?
Luq: It’s about how your ‘talentless.’ While I might not be right, I feel like that was a lie to make sure another murder happens
Max: What do you mean?
Luq: It’s an attempt to mentally weaken you, making you susceptible to an attack, which will keep the killing game alive
Max: Honestly, the only problem I have with being talentless is Ralsei
Luq: Also, i have an idea to help prevent a murder
Max: What would that be?
Luq: We need to get everyone to reveal what there secret item/s are
Max: Ok. For me, it was just filled with snorlax statues
Luq: I had close ranged weapons[/colod]
[color=teal]Max: I’m going to try getting Lely to join. See you next time

Luq: I’ll try getting Yascamer, to make our group ‘The French Preventers’

Lely: Hi max. So, what to you want to talk about?
Max:  A group me and Luq made named ‘The French Preventers’ where we do what we can to prevent a killing from happening
Lely: Yes please. What do I need to do?
Max: Check everyone’s secret room
MonoBoi: Ding Dong. It is now 10pm. Paintings will no longer be usable unless leaving an area or going to bob-omb battlefield
Lely: Of course that got in our way… but anyway, isn’t that an invasion of privacy?
Max: In situations like this, we need to make exceptions
Lely: Then I guess I’m in
Luq: Glad that you accepted it. I managed to get Yascamer, though he being quite quiet
Lely: I suppose I should say what is in my room. In there, is a giant animal cage filled with the cutest animals
Yascamer: Me… have… race… maps…
Luq: Yascamer, I just want to say something. I know the death of your 2 best friends hurts a lot, but I’m the situation we are in, we have to adapt. We can’t spend our entire lives here depressed. We have to move last thisendeaths, and make them mere memories
Yascamer:Oh… ok
Lely: Anyway, let’s go to sleep

You messed up the letter color near the end? (Luq & Max)
F for Max the Talentless.
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Is "begging" a typo, or just a  show thing?
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KrazeyKay wrote:
KrazeyKay wrote:
KrazeyKay wrote:
Anyway, this probably has Scooby-Doo levels of random junk that make no sense a long the way but tuen works out at the vwry end or something, whivch I don't realy get.
Again with JRB, you can't sleep thete.

You perfectly described danganronpa and how the evidence only makes sense during the trial.
Also, who cares if you can’t sleep in Rolly Rodger Bay, it was worth a shot

It really is Ace Attorney huh
I guess they aren't many levels that are safe to sleep in anyway, except THI.
I'm gonna assume it's the person with the least dialogue.

How would they sleep on Tiny Huge Island when that’s later on in the castle (they only have access to the starting area) Also, @Lely, if you mean the SM64 Abbreviations, Then it’s jolly Rodger bay for JRB (and he was saying where could you sleep there?) and THI is Tiny Huge Island (Which is currently locked) and for the ‘light’ thing, that’s about how would Tyshawn not fall back down to peaches castle, and the other thing is about how the evidence doesn’t make sense until the case

LBLJ, Mips clip. You also didn't specify OG or DS, & there are about 5 different ways to upwarp from JRB to Bowser in the Sky. I'm not putting it past anyone at this point.

Just a reminder that they involve defying the laws of physics, which only Mario, Luigi, Yoshi and Wario are able to do (Modded characters don’t count)

I still woulsn't put it past anyone, as dumb as it is.
That kinda limits the normal ppl to the start area of basically every level, it'd be impossible yto reach the top of Whomp's or BBF, nowhere in JRB.
And Peach's Castle already defies the laws of physics obc entering the paintings is physically imposdible.
Anyway, I'll stop ruining your fun, although Toad is the only one having rn, somewhere, up there maybe, waiting for you guys to catch the killer.
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KrazeyKay wrote:
Lelyiren wrote:
I'm not getting any of what you guys are discussing about

Basically I don't know anything about this game, but applying flawed SM64 logic.
We can easily mark off Lely, if he fainted now he would've fainted when he killed him & would probably still be unconscious when they found Toad.

There is 1 more easy mark off, but for the other 7, wait until episode 4

Oh yea, Max can't even fit.
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KrazeyKay wrote:
KrazeyKay wrote:
Anyway, this probably has Scooby-Doo levels of random junk that make no sense a long the way but tuen works out at the vwry end or something, whivch I don't realy get.
Again with JRB, you can't sleep thete.

You perfectly described danganronpa and how the evidence only makes sense during the trial.
Also, who cares if you can’t sleep in Rolly Rodger Bay, it was worth a shot

It really is Ace Attorney huh
I guess they aren't many levels that are safe to sleep in anyway, except THI.
I'm gonna assume it's the person with the least dialogue.

How would they sleep on Tiny Huge Island when that’s later on in the castle (they only have access to the starting area) Also, @Lely, if you mean the SM64 Abbreviations, Then it’s jolly Rodger bay for JRB (and he was saying where could you sleep there?) and THI is Tiny Huge Island (Which is currently locked) and for the ‘light’ thing, that’s about how would Tyshawn not fall back down to peaches castle, and the other thing is about how the evidence doesn’t make sense until the case

LBLJ, Mips clip. You also didn't specify OG or DS, & there are about 5 different ways to upwarp from JRB to Bowser in the Sky. I'm not putting it past anyone at this point.
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Unless @Lelyiren is a good actor....
Anyway, enough of me disrupting/ruining your Fanfic. You guys(besides Nudge & Toadboiiii) may speculate in pieces, er, Peace.
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Lelyiren wrote:
I'm not getting any of what you guys are discussing about

Basically I don't know anything about this game, but applying flawed SM64 logic.
We can easily mark off Lely, if he fainted now he would've fainted when he killed him & would probably still be unconscious when they found Toad.
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KrazeyKay wrote:
Anyway, this probably has Scooby-Doo levels of random junk that make no sense a long the way but tuen works out at the vwry end or something, whivch I don't realy get.
Again with JRB, you can't sleep thete.

You perfectly described danganronpa and how the evidence only makes sense during the trial.
Also, who cares if you can’t sleep in Rolly Rodger Bay, it was worth a shot

It really is Ace Attorney huh
I guess they aren't many levels that are safe to sleep in anyway, except THI.
I'm gonna assume it's the person with the least dialogue.
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Anyway, this probably has Scooby-Doo levels of random junk that make no sense a long the way but tuen works out at the vwry end or something, whivch I don't realy get.
Again with JRB, you can't sleep there.
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Does "light" mean Wing Cap Tower? Bc that starts  midair & Tyshawn would fall to his death.
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Episode 3: A Terrifying Procces

Nudge: Congratulations toad. You’ve successfully gotten yourself killed
*Lely passes out*
Gamerlion: We need to help Lely
Nudge: No we don’t. You need to investigate the crime scene
Gamerlion: We cant just leave him. We need to do something
Nudge: Ok sure. I’ll do 2 things.
1.) I’ll go down the slide since I have need to let other people have importance (and I need to sleep)
2.) I’ll take Lely with me so that you shut up

Max: I’ve finally managed to fit through the chimney. So, where is toad… Oh. WHO DID IT?!?!?!
Luq: Can’t have been someone in whomps fortress, so that means it wasn’t Nudge, Ralsei, Toady or Gamerlion
Max: Gamerlion?
Ralsei: Gamerlion decided to join us in whomps fortress since he had finished his areas in Jolly Rodger Bay and he felt like we were the most in danger. Makes sense though, since none of us can be trusted
Toady: I can confirm for you that this is a lie
Luq: The only lie that was said was what you just said
Toady: That was what I was saying. What I said was a lie
Yascamer: That not make sense
Toady: By the way, what was that loud noise?
Luq: Please don’t change the subject
Lemon: Actually, I think we understood what was going on with the whomps fortress thing. The noise should be able to clear my group, since the only way in and out of Bob-omb battlefield was through a super load teleportation that can be heard all throughout peaches castle
Luq: I can confirm that I only heard this twice, though shouldn't this be saved for the class trial?
Max: Class trial?
MonoBoiiiii: Did I forget to mention this or did you just forget? There will be a class trial for every murder that happens. I’m the trial, you will have to figure out who the murderer, also known as, the blackened is. If you are wrong, then the blackened escapes and you all get executed, but if you catch the blackened, then only he gets executed
Max: You forgot and how did you know about this Luq?
Luq: Because this is too similar to Danganronpa
Max: Oh ok. Now, who else could be the killer?
Luq: Me, You, Lely, Tyshawn, Parakoopa, Jey, Yascamer, Bj and Toad
Kris: How could toad be the killer, he is the literal victim
Ralsei: Probably killed himself lol
Max: Ralsei, don’t joke about that. This is a very serious thing
Ralsei: I’m sorry for having an idea. Should I also do my idea?
Max: NO!!! Now, I think we should move some people around to different places. We will go in pairs, plus one 3. I will stay here with Yascamer, and Luq can protect Nudge and Lely at the bottom. That leaves 10 people for 5 more places
Bj: Me and master can investigate jolly Rodger bay
Jey: I guess I can go to the secret slide with Gamerlion
Ralsei: I will investigate outside in Cool Cool mountain with Toady
Lemon: I think it would be better for Toady to go with me in the secret aquarium, and Kris with you
Ralsei: Fine
Parakoopa: That leaves me and Tyshawn in the light

Max: So, now that everyone has left, let’s start with the body
Yascamer: The mushroom is off, and it no have blood
Max: Strange. I would have expected more than just a removed mushroom. However, I have noticed that part of the wood contains a hole
Yascamer: The killer probably struggled with the victim. The hole would be good search place
Max: There seems to be a big rock in there. Maybe this was meant to be the murder weapon
Yascamer: Probably. These seems to be lack of evidence now

Master: It seems like Jolly Rodger Bay doesn’t have evidence

Jey: The slide is useless

Toady: With that evidence, we can come to the conclusion that Bj did it

Ralsei: The only info here is the chimney that broke when max went through it

Tyshawn: I guess i got scared for no reason

Monoboiiiii: DING!!! DONG!!! It is time for you to head over to the entrance door, and go through it

Nudge: So, any good evidence?
Toady: Bj did it
Bj: Why the random accusation?
Lely: Please stop arguing and just head through the door
They all went through the door, and discovered that it was an elevator to the Class Trial Court

I'm with Ralsei, dude killed himself.

In all seriousness, you'd have to be a fucking genius to sneak a rock into CCM without being spotted. Everyone is goona die. R.I.P.
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Episode 2: A Terrifying Sight

Nudge: So, where are we meant to sleep?
Lely:How about we sleep in… I don’t know. We should search different paintings
Nudge: I’m going to check whomps fortress with Ralsei and Toady
Max: Lely and I will be checking cool cool mountain
Toad: I’ll check the slide there
Yascamer: Me will check jolly Rodger bay with Jey and gamerlion
Lemon: I guess I will stay here with Kris and Master
luq: I guess I’ll check the light in the main hall
Parakoopa: I’ll be checking the slide
Tyshawn: Aw man. I wanted to check the slide
Parakoopa: Well it would be a good place for me so I can check up high. Actually, what is in the light?
Luq: It seems to be the sky
Max: Logic
Parakoopa: Wouldn’t it make more sense for me to be in the sky since I can fly?
Max: Logic
Ralsei: Shut up max
Lely: Don’t tell max to shut up for no reason
Nudge: He was being annoying, like you on a daily basis
Lely: Leave me alone. What did I do to you?
Nudge: Be a human unfortunate enough to be in my life
Lely: What do you have against humans? You’re literally half human.
Nudge: Half humans, aren’t full humans, so a half human, half bunny like me doesn’t count
Lely: #TousHumains
Nudge: #NonHumains
Max: Could you two stop fighting?
Lely: We aren’t
Nudge: nO. We aREn’T fIgHTiNg. Stop saying that every time. And max, you are the one who caused this fight so shut up
Lely: Don’t blame max for what you did
Nudge: Nice joke. Max caused the argument, Ralsei responded to what he said and you answered back at him, turning it into an argument. In no way did I cause it.
Luq: Nudge, we get it. You think your a great person…
Nudge: I AM A GREAT BUNNY
Ralsei: Self centered Hampter
Lely: Nudge, please stop, and Ralsei, what do you mean by Hampter?
Ralsei: Nudge told me that it is the combination of a rabbit and a hamster. So he is half human, quarter rabbit, and quarter hamster
Bj: So he’s mainly human
Nudge: HEY!!! NO I’M NOT!!!
Bj: I’m not stupid, I can tell that it means you are mostly human
Nudge: DO I NEED TO GIVE ALL THE GOD DAM DETAILS ABOUT MY PARENTS???
Bj: I’m sure this will be a waste of time, but fine
Lely: No thank you
Nudge: I care more about the buzzy beetle’s opinion than your’s, so let me explain.
It all started when a rabbit had sex with a hamster

Lely: too much information
Nudge: Be quiet, no one asked for you to speak. Then, my dad, a human, had sex with the hampter
Lely: Me and max will be going now, since I don’t like this conversation
Max: It’s not even that bad but ok
Nudge: Now for the part why I hate humans, which is because my dad ate my mum (Before someone asks, both my parents are actually still alive)
Bj: Sorry but I really don’t care. I think I’m just going to go to the aquarium
Parakoopa: I’m going to go into the light now
Tyshawn: That means I can check the slide
Jey: My group will be heading off now. Bye
luq So that leaves me checking that room in the corner… Wait, it’s locked
Nudge: Just wait in here and make sure nobody leaves there area
Luq: Sounds good
Toady: I guess mine and the other group shall start checking now. See you later
Kris: Might as well, since there is no point standing around in here
Master: Who put glue on the door?
Kris: Probably Toady, knowing him
Lemon: So, how will we get in?
MonoBoi: It would appear that someone asked a question I have an answer to
Master: What is the answer?
MonoBoi: Teleportation. I will teleport you in, and then teleport you out when you want to. Sadly, it does make a really annoying noise that can be heard all around the castle, but if you ignore it, things should be fine
Kris: This sounds stupid, but it’s the best thing we’ve got

*1 hour of investigating later*

Lely: So did anyone find a place to sleep, so that we don’t have to kill each-other?
Gamerlion: Before that, shouldn’t we wait for toad?
Nudge: What about looking for him? That would be better since it would take into account the potential chance of him being murdered
Luq: That seems a bit early for a danganronpa character.
Lely: there is no way he would be dead. Maybe he just got lost
Max; We still need to check, since even if he is alive, at least we know he is safe. He said we was going to the cool cool mountain slide, so let’s go there

Lely: We’ve made it here, so I guess he should just be down there trying to find a way out?
Nudge: Stop being optimistic. Im going in to see if he is dead.
Lely: Leave me alone
Nudge: EVERYONE!!! I HAVE SOME NEWS!!! HE IS STILL ALIVE BUT VERY SCARED!!! JUMP IN AND COMFORT HIM
They all jumped down, and witnessed, the true horror, of looking at a dead body

The only problem I have? No LBLJ, 0/10.
And sleeping in JRB? Questionable.

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