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I’ve decided that I am now longer liking this show and am now starting a new one. @toadboiiiii, if you want to, you can take over this show to write yourself

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Episode 2
So last time, we met the five new people of this show, and six new medals appeared. The fire group, Nudge and Coolio, are looking for the fire medal in the desert.
Coolio: It’s so hot..
Nudge: We’ll, we are in the desert, so it would make sense. Oh. Here’s the clue:

Atop the peak is where you’ll seek
Your medal, blazing in the heat.
Watch out for Growlithes and you will find
The greatest medal of all time.
Nudge: This wants us to climb to the top. Let’s go.
Coolio: Okay, but when we find the medal, who should get it?
Nudge: We’ll play RPS for it.
Coolio: Hmmm. Fine, okay.


Meanwhile…
Max: How are we supposed to tell which of these, of hundreds of Magikarps, has our riddle tattooed underneath?
Tendo: Puhlease. Just kill them, and then read the bottoms!
Max: It’s violent, but not like I can think of a more efficient way to find our clue.


In the Soda Jungle, conflict arises, as two groups look for their clues there.
Shawn: Find your own area!
Lely: It was our first idea. It’s called the Soda Jungle for a reason.
Boi: UUGH! Just search here and if it’s not here, like I care. Just don’t get in our way.
Osc-omb: Well, don’t expect us to help you, Boi. We know your tricks.
Boi: I’m trying to be better, but so much stupidity is preventing that from happening.
Osc-omb: Okay, I’ve had enough of you. Shawn or Lely, hang him over the soda!
Lely: WHAT!? He may be a jerk, but he doesn’t deserve to be killed by the poison!

Shawn: Okay. (hangs Boi over poison)
Boi: LET GO OF ME YOU PRICK!! When I find the poison medal, I’LL KILL YOU!


While they did that, the air duo had relative ease understanding their clue.
Toad: Wow! This was really easy!
Red: I agree. But we still need to find where our medal is. All our clue says is this:

The tasty meringue located in the sky,
Is truly a delicate delight.
Atop the clouds you’ll see,
Your medal, floating freely.
Toad: This is a large area, but I think we’ll have good luck finding our medal!
Red: I hope. Anyways, at least it’s safe here.


Finally, the electric group, and their clue.
Gamer: Why is it raining in Electro Valley?
VC: That’s because- *thunder* lightning comes from storms. I think.
Gamer: It’s just special effects. Lemme see the clue real quick, eh? Okay, it says:

The storming valleys is where you go,
Despite the dangerous lightning, though.
Make sure to check every puddle well,
As your medal is under the water cells.
Gamer: That doesn't even make any sense. *thunder*
VC: Of course it doesn't to you.


After a long amount of climbing, the fire group finally reached the top.
Nudge: We- we're here.. *panting*
Coolio: That climb *panting* was so tiring... *gasps* The medal! It's right over there!
Nudge: Mine! *runs to it, and puts it on* Haha! Power!
Coolio: *takes medal* I will be taking that, thank you very much.
Nudge: No! It's mine *takes it back*
Coolio: You can't be trusted with this! *takes it*
Nudge: Mine!
Coolio: Mine!
Nudge: Mine!
Coolio: Mine
Nudge and Coolio: MINE!! *pant*


For now, that's it. I might add more later.
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Episode 2
So last time, we met the five new people of this show, and six new medals appeared. The fire group, Nudge and Coolio, are looking for the fire medal in the desert.
Coolio: It’s so hot..
Nudge: We’ll, we are in the desert, so it would make sense. Oh. Here’s the clue:

Atop the peak is where you’ll seek
Your medal, blazing in the heat.
Watch out for Growlithes and you will find
The greatest medal of all time.
Nudge: This wants us to climb to the top. Let’s go.
Coolio: Okay, but when we find the medal, who should get it?
Nudge: We’ll play RPS for it.
Coolio: Hmmm. Fine, okay.



Seriously, the chapter should have been longer by a bit
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Lely wrote:
Episode 2
So last time, we met the five new people of this show, and six new medals appeared. The fire group, Nudge and Coolio, are looking for the fire medal in the desert.
Coolio: It’s so hot..
Nudge: We’ll, we are in the desert, so it would make sense. Oh. Here’s the clue:

Atop the peak is where you’ll seek
Your medal, blazing in the heat.
Watch out for Growlithes and you will find
The greatest medal of all time.
Nudge: This wants us to climb to the top. Let’s go.
Coolio: Okay, but when we find the medal, who should get it?
Nudge: We’ll play RPS for it.
Coolio: Hmmm. Fine, okay.



Seriously, the chapter should have been longer by a bit

Don’t you know? My style is releasing episodes in pieces
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Lely wrote:
Episode 2
So last time, we met the five new people of this show, and six new medals appeared. The fire group, Nudge and Coolio, are looking for the fire medal in the desert.
Coolio: It’s so hot..
Nudge: We’ll, we are in the desert, so it would make sense. Oh. Here’s the clue:

Atop the peak is where you’ll seek
Your medal, blazing in the heat.
Watch out for Growlithes and you will find
The greatest medal of all time.
Nudge: This wants us to climb to the top. Let’s go.
Coolio: Okay, but when we find the medal, who should get it?
Nudge: We’ll play RPS for it.
Coolio: Hmmm. Fine, okay.



Seriously, the chapter should have been longer by a bit

He does his chapters a bit at a time. This isn’t all of it
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Lely wrote:
Episode 2
So last time, we met the five new people of this show, and six new medals appeared. The fire group, Nudge and Coolio, are looking for the fire medal in the desert.
Coolio: It’s so hot..
Nudge: We’ll, we are in the desert, so it would make sense. Oh. Here’s the clue:

Atop the peak is where you’ll seek
Your medal, blazing in the heat.
Watch out for Growlithes and you will find
The greatest medal of all time.
Nudge: This wants us to climb to the top. Let’s go.
Coolio: Okay, but when we find the medal, who should get it?
Nudge: We’ll play RPS for it.
Coolio: Hmmm. Fine, okay.



Seriously, the chapter should have been longer by a bit

He does his chapters a bit at a time. This isn’t all of it

Well he should take time to write longer episodes instead of doing that but fine
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Episode 3
Last time, we saw what all of our groups were doing. Most were making progress on finding the medal, Nudge and Coolio were even able to find their medal already. But the grass and poison groups are in a conflict. So, in the Jungle, Boi is hanging over poisonous soda, and could fall to his death. However,
Lely: Shawn! Stop this now!
Osc-omb: He will only stop when he wants to stop.

Shawn: I want to stop.
Osc-omb: Lame.
Boi is let back on the ground, able to live.
Boi: Hmm. Thanks. I guess we could work together to find our medals.
Lely: I can live with that.. Okay!

Back to the water group...
Tendo: UUGH!! We've killed almost all of the Magikarps, and not ONE has our hint.
Max: I think it's time we give this idea a rest.
Tendo: NO! I refuse to give up. *kills another Magikarp* I believe that- AHA! I knew it would be here. It's kinda washed out, but looks like it's saying:

Fltig in te ocn of Yoi's Id,
You shl fin our tr bured tre.
Wh out for feaome Gyros,
Oter than tht, foe wil be re.
Actual Message:
Floating in the ocean of Yoshi's Island,
You shall find your treasure buried there.
Watch out for fearsome Gyrados,
Other than that, foes will be rare.

Max: I think it's talking about Choco Island. We'll check the second one first.
Tendo: Fine.


What's happening with the fire group?
Nudge: Give it up! I need it more than you do!
Coolio: It's called trust. I don't trust you with it. It's mine.
Nudge: Give it up, or I'll remove your wings.
Coolio: You wouldn't.
Nudge: TRY ME.
Coolio: Take it. *hands it over*
Nudge: Finally. I control your fire-breath now.
Coolio: I'm gonna take that medal, and push you off the peak.
Nudge: DO IT! You won't. *takes medal* It’s mine.


What’s up with the air group?
Red: So. The air medal is going to be floating, somewhere above these clouds. There’s a lot of area, so we gotta cover as much area as possible.
Toad: Right. Right. So, how exactly are we supposed to see a flying medal.. in the middle of a white cloudy sky.
Red: Well, it won’t be too hard to find the medal. The guy who hid them is kinda dumb.


The electric group is still trying to understand their puzzle, but the water group has made an interesting discovery at Choco Island 2.
Tendo: What do you mean that there’s no medal here? We looked at our clue and it says-
DK: Um, yeah. No. We had that riddle a couple days back, I’m pretty sure it was talking about Yoshi’s Island.
Max: Thinking about it, it makes more sense. C’mon Tendo, we’ve got a medal to find.

While they travel there, the grass and poison duo finally make progress.
Boi: Here’s our riddle. Nice. It’s saying:
Not below, but excruciatingly high,
Is where you’ll find your poison paradise.
You’re toxic, but don’t try slipping under,
After all, don’t you know that you’re toxic?
Boi: So. Basically it wants us to climb the Mountain of Excruciating Pain. And then it was specifically directed at me by calling me “toxic”. Meh. I can live with that. Alright, we better get climbing now.
Lely: What about our riddle?
Osc-omb: Yeah!

Shawn: F off. We’ve got our riddle.
Boi: Weeeeeell….. the thing is that we already found your riddle. *tosses down their riddle* So, happy searching!

Lely: Hmm.. I think we need to stick near Boi. We can’t trust him to have possession of the medals.
Osc-omb: I would agree, but it’s better we get our medal now. The riddle says:

The jungle’s graveyard is one sad memory,
Find Kraze, and you’ll see the medal, glimmering.
It’s one mossy path, so stay alert,
You wouldn’t want to encounter an animal that goes bezerk.
Osc-omb: Not too useful, but we can work with it.

The water group have finally arrived at Yoshi’s Island.
Max: So, we need scuba stuff so we can get our medal. Do you got any?
Yoshi: No, we hate water! Buuut, an anchor got stuck at sea, so find the anchor, and you’ll find the medal.
Tendo. Alright.
Max: I’ll swim to the medal. You try to see if anyone else tries to find our medal.

The electric group have finally figured out what to do.
VC: So, uh, how are we supposed to find our medal?
Gamer: Well, I don’t have any leads.
VC: It’s talking about some sort of puddle. So just splash in every puddle ‘till you find it.


The water group is now in possession of their medal, but…
Max: I can feel it… Yes! I have it! I’m coming back to shore now. *swims back*
Tendo: Nice. Now I have the water medal.
Max: I should get it because I had to swim for it. I’m not too good at swimming you know..
Tendo: Want it? Then brave the waves!
Max: Come on. This always happens to me.

Tendo rides a boat away.

That’s all.
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Ep 4 soon
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Episode 4
Last episode we learned that both the fire and water group have found their medals, and are fighting over it. Lely and Shawn kept Boi alive, and the electric and air groups made minimal progress.
Lely: So, if we need to look for Kraze’s body, we should ask people who saw them die, so we can actually find the medal. I think we need to ask Boi.
Osc-omb: Like that’ll work.


Meanwhile, at the bottom of the Parched Peaks..
Tendo: Hey, Nudge! I need you to give me the fire medal.
Nudge: Yea… no. Can’t do that. This medal is mine, not yours, so f*ck off.
Tendo: Welp. You forced me to do this. *Forms a tidal wave taller than Mt Everest.* Now, give me the medal, or you, Coolio, and anyone else nearby will drown to my superior wave!
Coolio: You have issues, man.
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@toadboiiiii I have read these episodes and I have decided I don’t really like them. Let me explain
Characters
Nudge: this is mostly like me, except I don’t swear so swearing in this doesn’t fit me
Coolio: he doesn’t seem chill like in his description
Max: he seems more like an idiot with the choco island mistake
Tendo: boring villain. All he does is tag along with max then take the medal. That would be more accurate to season 1 Boi
Lely: your ignoring the cute things
Osc-omb: would be too kind to want to hang Boi
Air and electric: boring forgettable sections
Boi: too boring of character development. All he did was get hung and now he cares about people???
Shawn: would be too scared to hang Boi
Riddles
These sucked. They didn’t rhyme and basically gave the answer away from the start

Because of this, I’m taking back in charge and will go back to episode 2 and write from there. Next episode will probably be tonight
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@toadboiiiii I have read these episodes and I have decided I don’t really like them. Let me explain
Characters
Nudge: this is mostly like me, except I don’t swear so swearing in this doesn’t fit me
Coolio: he doesn’t seem chill like in his description
Max: he seems more like an idiot with the choco island mistake
Tendo: boring villain. All he does is tag along with max then take the medal. That would be more accurate to season 1 Boi
Lely: your ignoring the cute things
Osc-omb: would be too kind to want to hang Boi
Air and electric: boring forgettable sections
Boi: too boring of character development. All he did was get hung and now he cares about people???
Shawn: would be too scared to hang Boi
Riddles
These sucked. They didn’t rhyme and basically gave the answer away from the start

Because of this, I’m taking back in charge and will go back to episode 2 and write from there. Next episode will probably be tonight

That’s fine. Farfetch’d ees nuts
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You're missing my character completely. I have no personnality...
My personnality is being a gluestick obsessed by cuteness and all of it blah blah
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Tbh I was just following the death order of season two remember I know the lore (and you all need to hand over the medals I want or good luck living)

Oh, and @tyshawn, if you wanna try to steal the poison medal from me, well… *pushes off cliff*
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Actually @toadboiiiii can keep it, since I have a better fanfic
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Boi: I’m so glad that Gamer’s dead!
Lely: What happened to your character development?
Boi: Character development holds nothing against my AK-47!!
Max: Wow, Boi. You’ve changed, and not in a good way.
Boi: I’m SORYY!!
Max: Yea, sure. Whaaatever Wha- whaatever. I don’t care.
Red: This show is losing control, considering all the medals self- destructed. We naturally assumed that Gamer and Tendo died because that happened three days ago, and we haven’t found them yet. Also, where did Nudge go?
VC: Probably dead, I don’t know.
Nudge: I’m right here.
Boi: So is your mom! Hah, gottem.
Shawn: Not funny.
Boi: Your death wasn’t funny.
Shawn: What are you gonna do? Kill me?
Boi: You don’t stand a chance. I still have this AK-47 and I’m just gonna shoot.
Max: Well, now that this game is cancelled, what should we do?
Toad: Join my competition show! I’m hosting a game called MKPC City Clash!
Boi: What’s the prize?
Toad: An MKPC show.
Boi: Meh. Not interested.
Max: Can you bring people back?
Toad: If their bodies remain I can try performing a ritual to recover them.
Max: I’m in. Here’s Lely. Recover them.
Toad: Okay, so. Dees nuts.
Lely: Woah, I’m back.. Thanks! I’m gonna join your show.
Boi: I don’t see a reason to join. I’m going back to my life now.
Toad: I’ll throw in 1,000 dollars..
Boi: Not now. Maybe in the future. Face it. If you can’t offer a good prize, then I’m saying sayanora to you.
VC: I agree. These prizes aren’t worth competing for.
Nudge: I’ll join your show, Toad.
Red: Me too!
Osc-omb: Well, the prizes suck, but I’ll join, I guess.
Toad: Nice!
Coolio: Are you sure that you can’t offer anything better than a “A BFDI” ripoff, and a small amount of money? These prizes are not so appealing…
Toad: If you don’t join, I can’t protect you from death.
Coolio: That’s a risk I’ll take.
Toad: Hey Shawn, wanna join?
Shawn: Dying felt weird. Also, I’m not joining your show.
Toad: So, now that everyone but Boi, VC, Coolio, and Shawn are gonna be in my show, let’s begin BFMKPCS!

Later..
Boi: Hey Toad… can you bring back BJ? I have his body, so you could bring him back.
Toad: Well, you aren’t in my show, but I will bring him back.
*Recovers BJ*
Boi: Thanks.
Bj: Where am I now? Another death hell?
Boi: I recovered you. You’re alive again, and now Toad is hosting a show.
Toad: Do you wanna join?
Bj: Hmm.. okay.
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Boi: I’m so glad that Gamer’s dead!
Lely: What happened to your character development?
Boi: Character development holds nothing against my AK-47!!
Max: Wow, Boi. You’ve changed, and not in a good way.
Boi: I’m SORYY!!
Max: Yea, sure. Whaaatever Wha- whaatever. I don’t care.
Red: This show is losing control, considering all the medals self- destructed. We naturally assumed that Gamer and Tendo died because that happened three days ago, and we haven’t found them yet. Also, where did Nudge go?

I don’t understand any of this. Why have you suddenly cut to the end of the season?
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Boi: I’m so glad that Gamer’s dead!
Lely: What happened to your character development?
Boi: Character development holds nothing against my AK-47!!
Max: Wow, Boi. You’ve changed, and not in a good way.
Boi: I’m SORYY!!
Max: Yea, sure. Whaaatever Wha- whaatever. I don’t care.
Red: This show is losing control, considering all the medals self- destructed. We naturally assumed that Gamer and Tendo died because that happened three days ago, and we haven’t found them yet. Also, where did Nudge go?

I don’t understand any of this. Why have you suddenly cut to the end of the season?

Budget cuts.
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Boi: I’m so glad that Gamer’s dead!
Lely: What happened to your character development?
Boi: Character development holds nothing against my AK-47!!
Max: Wow, Boi. You’ve changed, and not in a good way.
Boi: I’m SORYY!!
Max: Yea, sure. Whaaatever Wha- whaatever. I don’t care.
Red: This show is losing control, considering all the medals self- destructed. We naturally assumed that Gamer and Tendo died because that happened three days ago, and we haven’t found them yet. Also, where did Nudge go?

I don’t understand any of this. Why have you suddenly cut to the end of the season?

Budget cuts.

Also from what has happened in your plans for it, it is boring
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Battle for Mario Kart PC Show
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And thus begins BFMKPCS AKA THE MKPCS CONCLUSION


Plan:
5 Episodes
All but 2/3 die
One of three protagonists (Max/??/??) is guaranteed survival, and the other two have an increased chance of survival.

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