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Messages 283 - Toadsworth Toadsworth
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Lely wrote:
CyClops wrote:
Lely wrote:
To everyone here, would you rather :
- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, Krazey is mediumorchid, Max is teal) - react with mario facepalm
the rest?

What do you mean the rest ???

like Alyssia, ben, etc
Messages 10907 - King Mario King Mario
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CyClops wrote:
Lely wrote:
CyClops wrote:
Lely wrote:
To everyone here, would you rather :
- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, Krazey is mediumorchid, Max is teal) - react with mario facepalm
the rest?

What do you mean the rest ???

like Alyssia, ben, etc

Well yeah I am only giving a few examples...
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Messages 283 - Toadsworth Toadsworth
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Lely wrote:
CyClops wrote:
Lely wrote:
CyClops wrote:
Lely wrote:
To everyone here, would you rather :
- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, Krazey is mediumorchid, Max is teal) - react with mario facepalm
the rest?

What do you mean the rest ???

like Alyssia, ben, etc

Well yeah I am only giving a few examples...

k also do you wanna rank all the characters cause why not :p
Messages 10907 - King Mario King Mario
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CyClops wrote:
Lely wrote:
CyClops wrote:
Lely wrote:
CyClops wrote:
Lely wrote:
To everyone here, would you rather :
- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, [quote=CyClops][quote=Lely][color=green]To everyone here, would you rather :
- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, Krazey is mediumorchid, Max is teal) - react with mario facepalm
the rest?

What do you mean the rest ???

like Alyssia, ben, etc

Well yeah I am only giving a few examples...

k also do you wanna rank all the characters cause why not :p

Yeah I guess lol

13 - James
I literally struggle to find good lines for him. I failed to make a good personnality for him so he's just kind of an airhead in his own world I guess, but his character is my least favorite.


12 - Choco
They were an introvert and did not reveal much, so I decided to give them sort of the basic personnality. But that kind of character is good to balance things out and to have some normal lines I guess. Although individually, not much for them...


11 - Angrybird
Same for him but he has a lot more personnality on the forums so I guess it's my fault. I will give him a lot of character development later.


10 - Dayzi
The last of the NPCish characters. He doesn't give much of a fuck about anything though, which is a good personnality trait to add. He is also mostly sleepy so his lines can be more on the "idc do what you want lol" side instead of the boring side.


9. Noob
Okay, we did step forward. But not totally, which is the situation for our Nooby noob. I failed to give him the more... edgy personnality he can sometimes. But that is also my fault, a lot of development is planned.


8. Krazey
For a guy that has a lot of personnality, I used some, but not enough I think. On the other side though, his edgy pervert personnality does not fit the fanfic as much as MKPCverse which is much darker. So there is that too. He is still a fun character to write though.


7. Max
Despite being an OG I failed to reconstitute his personnality since it changed a lot, and his character is kind of lacking. He is protective and at the center of things, but that is actually about it. I expected more to be honest.


6. Eli
For the plot he is amazing, but I would have gotten tired of his violent personnality with time even if he wasn't kicked out. I never know how to moderate things without them becoming too peaceful, so there is that too.


5. Ben
Another character that is awesome for the plot. He is basically the brat that nobody likes, and a lot of character development is possible, but for now he is still not my favorite to work with.


4. Lely
My character is pretty sensitive as for now. I think me being the author of this fanfic, my character is not actually a huge crybaby, which is good. But I also feel like I could go further with my personnality. Since, I like writing my own character lmao.


3. Alice
An amazing character with the right amount of fire that I was able to stop with a transition episode. I think her being kind of sassy without being outright mean to people most of the time is an amazing character trait tbh.


2. VC
She is the favorite child, and I am not ashamed. I love working with her easy going personnality, I love the fact she gets overwhelmed by the fighting very quick and yet has some personnality. Her being an OG adds to that special feel I have, overall I love writing with her lmao. Call me biased I don't care.


1. Nudge
Who the hell do you want at the top except Nudge ? Maybe he is not mean enough, yeah. But his personnality can be used a lot, mean and serious at the same time, and yet not a complete asshole with some moments where it is toned down. The coldness is quite balanced actually, which I guess is good. It's crazy how he hates me but he's my favorite character to write lol
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Messages 283 - Toadsworth Toadsworth
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Lely wrote:
CyClops wrote:
Lely wrote:
CyClops wrote:
Lely wrote:
CyClops wrote:
Lely wrote:
To everyone here, would you rather :
- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, [quote=CyClops][quote=Lely][color=green]To everyone here, would you rather :
- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, Krazey is mediumorchid, Max is teal) - react with mario facepalm
the rest?

What do you mean the rest ???

like Alyssia, ben, etc

Well yeah I am only giving a few examples...

k also do you wanna rank all the characters cause why not :p

Yeah I guess lol

13 - James
I literally struggle to find good lines for him. I failed to make a good personnality for him so he's just kind of an airhead in his own world I guess, but his character is my least favorite.


12 - Choco
They were an introvert and did not reveal much, so I decided to give them sort of the basic personnality. But that kind of character is good to balance things out and to have some normal lines I guess. Although individually, not much for them...


11 - Angrybird
Same for him but he has a lot more personnality on the forums so I guess it's my fault. I will give him a lot of character development later.


10 - Dayzi
The last of the NPCish characters. He doesn't give much of a fuck about anything though, which is a good personnality trait to add. He is also mostly sleepy so his lines can be more on the "idc do what you want lol" side instead of the boring side.


9. Noob
Okay, we did step forward. But not totally, which is the situation for our Nooby noob. I failed to give him the more... edgy personnality he can sometimes. But that is also my fault, a lot of development is planned.


8. Krazey
For a guy that has a lot of personnality, I used some, but not enough I think. On the other side though, his edgy pervert personnality does not fit the fanfic as much as MKPCverse which is much darker. So there is that too. He is still a fun character to write though.


7. Max
Despite being an OG I failed to reconstitute his personnality since it changed a lot, and his character is kind of lacking. He is protective and at the center of things, but that is actually about it. I expected more to be honest.


6. Eli
For the plot he is amazing, but I would have gotten tired of his violent personnality with time even if he wasn't kicked out. I never know how to moderate things without them becoming too peaceful, so there is that too.


5. Ben
Another character that is awesome for the plot. He is basically the brat that nobody likes, and a lot of character development is possible, but for now he is still not my favorite to work with.


4. Lely
My character is pretty sensitive as for now. I think me being the author of this fanfic, my character is not actually a huge crybaby, which is good. But I also feel like I could go further with my personnality. Since, I like writing my own character lmao.


3. Alice
An amazing character with the right amount of fire that I was able to stop with a transition episode. I think her being kind of sassy without being outright mean to people most of the time is an amazing character trait tbh.


2. VC
She is the favorite child, and I am not ashamed. I love working with her easy going personnality, I love the fact she gets overwhelmed by the fighting very quick and yet has some personnality. Her being an OG adds to that special feel I have, overall I love writing with her lmao. Call me biased I don't care.


1. Nudge
Who the hell do you want at the top except Nudge ? Maybe he is not mean enough, yeah. But his personnality can be used a lot, mean and serious at the same time, and yet not a complete asshole with some moments where it is toned down. The coldness is quite balanced actually, which I guess is good. It's crazy how he hates me but he's my favorite character to write lol

fight me but Ben is 1 otherwise just put Krazey higher
Messages 10907 - King Mario King Mario
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CyClops wrote:
Lely wrote:
CyClops wrote:
Lely wrote:
CyClops wrote:
Lely wrote:
CyClops wrote:
Lely wrote:
To everyone here, would you rather :
- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, [quote=CyClops][quote=Lely][color=green]To everyone here, would you rather :
- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, Krazey is mediumorchid, Max is teal) - react with mario facepalm
the rest?

What do you mean the rest ???

like Alyssia, ben, etc

Well yeah I am only giving a few examples...

k also do you wanna rank all the characters cause why not :p

Yeah I guess lol

13 - James
I literally struggle to find good lines for him. I failed to make a good personnality for him so he's just kind of an airhead in his own world I guess, but his character is my least favorite.


12 - Choco
They were an introvert and did not reveal much, so I decided to give them sort of the basic personnality. But that kind of character is good to balance things out and to have some normal lines I guess. Although individually, not much for them...


11 - Angrybird
Same for him but he has a lot more personnality on the forums so I guess it's my fault. I will give him a lot of character development later.


10 - Dayzi
The last of the NPCish characters. He doesn't give much of a fuck about anything though, which is a good personnality trait to add. He is also mostly sleepy so his lines can be more on the "idc do what you want lol" side instead of the boring side.


9. Noob
Okay, we did step forward. But not totally, which is the situation for our Nooby noob. I failed to give him the more... edgy personnality he can sometimes. But that is also my fault, a lot of development is planned.


8. Krazey
For a guy that has a lot of personnality, I used some, but not enough I think. On the other side though, his edgy pervert personnality does not fit the fanfic as much as MKPCverse which is much darker. So there is that too. He is still a fun character to write though.


7. Max
Despite being an OG I failed to reconstitute his personnality since it changed a lot, and his character is kind of lacking. He is protective and at the center of things, but that is actually about it. I expected more to be honest.


6. Eli
For the plot he is amazing, but I would have gotten tired of his violent personnality with time even if he wasn't kicked out. I never know how to moderate things without them becoming too peaceful, so there is that too.


5. Ben
Another character that is awesome for the plot. He is basically the brat that nobody likes, and a lot of character development is possible, but for now he is still not my favorite to work with.


4. Lely
My character is pretty sensitive as for now. I think me being the author of this fanfic, my character is not actually a huge crybaby, which is good. But I also feel like I could go further with my personnality. Since, I like writing my own character lmao.


3. Alice
An amazing character with the right amount of fire that I was able to stop with a transition episode. I think her being kind of sassy without being outright mean to people most of the time is an amazing character trait tbh.


2. VC
She is the favorite child, and I am not ashamed. I love working with her easy going personnality, I love the fact she gets overwhelmed by the fighting very quick and yet has some personnality. Her being an OG adds to that special feel I have, overall I love writing with her lmao. Call me biased I don't care.


1. Nudge
Who the hell do you want at the top except Nudge ? Maybe he is not mean enough, yeah. But his personnality can be used a lot, mean and serious at the same time, and yet not a complete asshole with some moments where it is toned down. The coldness is quite balanced actually, which I guess is good. It's crazy how he hates me but he's my favorite character to write lol

fight me but Ben is 1 otherwise just put Krazey higher

Krazey would have been higher if he had a personnality like in my other fanfics. Ben can be 1st if you are a reader like you, since he contrinutes a lot to the plot, but he is not the most enjoyable to write lol
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Messages 283 - Toadsworth Toadsworth
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Lely wrote:
CyClops wrote:
Lely wrote:
CyClops wrote:
Lely wrote:
CyClops wrote:
Lely wrote:
CyClops wrote:
Lely wrote:
To everyone here, would you rather :
- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, [quote=CyClops][quote=Lely][color=green]To everyone here, would you rather :
- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, Krazey is mediumorchid, Max is teal) - react with mario facepalm
the rest?

What do you mean the rest ???

like Alyssia, ben, etc

Well yeah I am only giving a few examples...

k also do you wanna rank all the characters cause why not :p

Yeah I guess lol

13 - James
I literally struggle to find good lines for him. I failed to make a good personnality for him so he's just kind of an airhead in his own world I guess, but his character is my least favorite.


12 - Choco
They were an introvert and did not reveal much, so I decided to give them sort of the basic personnality. But that kind of character is good to balance things out and to have some normal lines I guess. Although individually, not much for them...


11 - Angrybird
Same for him but he has a lot more personnality on the forums so I guess it's my fault. I will give him a lot of character development later.


10 - Dayzi
The last of the NPCish characters. He doesn't give much of a fuck about anything though, which is a good personnality trait to add. He is also mostly sleepy so his lines can be more on the "idc do what you want lol" side instead of the boring side.


9. Noob
Okay, we did step forward. But not totally, which is the situation for our Nooby noob. I failed to give him the more... edgy personnality he can sometimes. But that is also my fault, a lot of development is planned.


8. Krazey
For a guy that has a lot of personnality, I used some, but not enough I think. On the other side though, his edgy pervert personnality does not fit the fanfic as much as MKPCverse which is much darker. So there is that too. He is still a fun character to write though.


7. Max
Despite being an OG I failed to reconstitute his personnality since it changed a lot, and his character is kind of lacking. He is protective and at the center of things, but that is actually about it. I expected more to be honest.


6. Eli
For the plot he is amazing, but I would have gotten tired of his violent personnality with time even if he wasn't kicked out. I never know how to moderate things without them becoming too peaceful, so there is that too.


5. Ben
Another character that is awesome for the plot. He is basically the brat that nobody likes, and a lot of character development is possible, but for now he is still not my favorite to work with.


4. Lely
My character is pretty sensitive as for now. I think me being the author of this fanfic, my character is not actually a huge crybaby, which is good. But I also feel like I could go further with my personnality. Since, I like writing my own character lmao.


3. Alice
An amazing character with the right amount of fire that I was able to stop with a transition episode. I think her being kind of sassy without being outright mean to people most of the time is an amazing character trait tbh.


2. VC
She is the favorite child, and I am not ashamed. I love working with her easy going personnality, I love the fact she gets overwhelmed by the fighting very quick and yet has some personnality. Her being an OG adds to that special feel I have, overall I love writing with her lmao. Call me biased I don't care.


1. Nudge
Who the hell do you want at the top except Nudge ? Maybe he is not mean enough, yeah. But his personnality can be used a lot, mean and serious at the same time, and yet not a complete asshole with some moments where it is toned down. The coldness is quite balanced actually, which I guess is good. It's crazy how he hates me but he's my favorite character to write lol

fight me but Ben is 1 otherwise just put Krazey higher

Krazey would have been higher if he had a personnality like in my other fanfics. Ben can be 1st if you are a reader like you, since he contrinutes a lot to the plot, but he is not the most enjoyable to write lol

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Messages 31 - Koopa Koopa
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I think that @TheNudgyHampter
@Senko
@Dietsoda
@Xx-Alyssa-xX
@osc-omb
@Noob68
@NotThatKrazey
@VC
@Dayzi_MK
@TwilightGD
make excellent and top quality tracks, don't you think?
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Messages 529 - Mario Mario
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I think that @TheNudgyHampter
@Senko
@Dietsoda
@Xx-Alyssa-xX
@osc-omb
@Noob68
@NotThatKrazey
@VC
@Dayzi_MK
@TwilightGD
make excellent and top quality tracks, don't you think?


Um wrong topic? And that's a lot of pings
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Messages 10907 - King Mario King Mario
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France
I think that @TheNudgyHampter
@Senko
@Dietsoda
@Xx-Alyssa-xX
@osc-omb
@Noob68
@NotThatKrazey
@VC
@Dayzi_MK
@TwilightGD
make excellent and top quality tracks, don't you think?

C'mon bro that's my topic, you could've at least mentioned me.

More seriously, this is not the place
Messages 10907 - King Mario King Mario
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Lely wrote:
To everyone here, would you rather :
- have the members in their team colors (Nudge is green, I am green, Krazey is teal, Max is teal) - react with Koopa
- have the members in their own colors (Nudge is orange, I am green, Krazey is mediumorchid, Max is teal) - react with mario facepalm

The vote has ended. 6 people who are in the fanfic voted for the first option and 2 voted for the second option.

I will be having every member in their team color for Chapter 8.
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Messages 435 - Metal Luigi Metal Luigi
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I think that @TheNudgyHampter
@Senko
@Dietsoda
@Xx-Alyssa-xX
@osc-omb
@Noob68
@NotThatKrazey
@VC
@Dayzi_MK
@TwilightGD
make excellent and top quality tracks, don't you think?


Well yes. You are correct but this is the wrong topic for this.
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Messages 31 - Koopa Koopa
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Mexico
god dammit
Messages 324 - Peach Peach
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can i join?

name: golend (last name: emerdal)

colour:#6c2791 (hex code)

personality: kind but can be mean

species: idk something to do with dragons?

annoyed by: being told carrots are good for your I sight and being defeated by weak attacks

gender: Female (but they are GAY)
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Messages 10907 - King Mario King Mario
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can i join?

name: golend (last name: emerdal)

colour:#6c2791 (hex code)

personality: kind but can be mean

species: idk something to do with dragons?

annoyed by: being told carrots are good for your I sight and being defeated by weak attacks

gender: Female (but they are GAY)

No spots left. And even if there were it would be first came first served, so RedPikmin
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Messages 324 - Peach Peach
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Lely wrote:
can i join?

name: golend (last name: emerdal)

colour:#6c2791 (hex code)

personality: kind but can be mean

species: idk something to do with dragons?

annoyed by: being told carrots are good for your I sight and being defeated by weak attacks

gender: Female (but they are GAY)

No spots left. And even if there were it would be first came first served, so RedPikmin


whatever but a fanfic shouldnt have a limit on people
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Messages 10907 - King Mario King Mario
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Lely wrote:
can i join?

name: golend (last name: emerdal)

colour:#6c2791 (hex code)

personality: kind but can be mean

species: idk something to do with dragons?

annoyed by: being told carrots are good for your I sight and being defeated by weak attacks

gender: Female (but they are GAY)

No spots left. And even if there were it would be first came first served, so RedPikmin


whatever but a fanfic shouldnt have a limit on people

Yes it should. Last time I literally had 36 people on the roster. How am I supposed to remember all of them ?? To give all of them good lines ?? And it is super pissy to write overall.
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Messages 170 - Bowser Bowser
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Lely wrote:
Lely wrote:
can i join?

name: golend (last name: emerdal)

colour:#6c2791 (hex code)

personality: kind but can be mean

species: idk something to do with dragons?

annoyed by: being told carrots are good for your I sight and being defeated by weak attacks

gender: Female (but they are GAY)

No spots left. And even if there were it would be first came first served, so RedPikmin


whatever but a fanfic shouldnt have a limit on people

Yes it should. Last time I literally had 36 people on the roster. How am I supposed to remember all of them ?? To give all of them good lines ?? And it is super pissy to write overall.

And I'm over here with 20+ people in mine lol 💀
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Messages 283 - Toadsworth Toadsworth
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Mario100 wrote:
Lely wrote:
Lely wrote:
can i join?

name: golend (last name: emerdal)

colour:#6c2791 (hex code)

personality: kind but can be mean

species: idk something to do with dragons?

annoyed by: being told carrots are good for your I sight and being defeated by weak attacks

gender: Female (but they are GAY)

No spots left. And even if there were it would be first came first served, so RedPikmin


whatever but a fanfic shouldnt have a limit on people

Yes it should. Last time I literally had 36 people on the roster. How am I supposed to remember all of them ?? To give all of them good lines ?? And it is super pissy to write overall.

And I'm over here with 20+ people in mine lol 💀

which fanfic?
Messages 10907 - King Mario King Mario
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France
CyClops wrote:
Mario100 wrote:
Lely wrote:
Lely wrote:
can i join?

name: golend (last name: emerdal)

colour:#6c2791 (hex code)

personality: kind but can be mean

species: idk something to do with dragons?

annoyed by: being told carrots are good for your I sight and being defeated by weak attacks

gender: Female (but they are GAY)

No spots left. And even if there were it would be first came first served, so RedPikmin


whatever but a fanfic shouldnt have a limit on people

Yes it should. Last time I literally had 36 people on the roster. How am I supposed to remember all of them ?? To give all of them good lines ?? And it is super pissy to write overall.

And I'm over here with 20+ people in mine lol 💀

which fanfic?

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