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Messages 11441 - King Mario King Mario
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2-4 : Nudgy's legacy
Previously...
Lely, StarSplizz, Nudge, VC and Jey passed out.
The castle squad is discussing about a weird rumor though, they don't know anything about how badly JRB squad is doing...
Max : Nice birthday...
Chilli : Hey ! They just gave us a hint ! Let's actually try to guess why they're doing all of this ! GUYS PLEASE ! HURRY BEFORE THEY ACTUALLY ATTACK !
mememo : everything's chill ! calm down please, you're making such a noise out of nothing !
Ralsei : Wow, that was kinder than usual
mememo : Don't try me, I can kill you if I want
Ralsei : Nevermind, forgot what I said.
Mystery : Guys. Let's call the Cool Cool Mountain's squad to see if they are done with their stars and to ask for some help if it's possible, because the situation is pretty critical rn.
Luq : I agree. For now, someone needs to discuss with the pirates, to kep them distracted
Ashton : YOU GUYS ARE SO MEAN ! I BET THE MILKMAN IS IN THERE !
??? : Yes he is. Chill kiddo.
mememo : they are so calm...
Max : Mystery ! What is CCM squad saying ?
Mystery : They're saying they're finishing their debate about Lely and Nudge dating, then they're coming.
Max : Tell them we need help ASAP, plus this debate is such a stupidity, so tell them to HURRY UP please
Mystery : Guess what, those idiots cutted the call out...
Ralsei : what a bunch of bitches
Max : Give me that please
Mystery : Sure...
Max : *agressively calls them again* HEY ! HURRY PLEASE !
mememo : Everything's chill until they decide to be assholes
Luq : THE PIRATES ARE LAUNCHING A BULLET ! PROTECT YOURSELVES !
Everyone did, and Mystery's phone ended up electrifying Max, which caused out MysteryMan to be both angry against the pirates but also worried for Max, who obviously passed out.
mememo : we don't have any way to communicate with the CCM squad...
Chilli : CAN SOMEONE HELP ME TO FIGURE OUT WHAT THE 11 NUMBERS ARE STANDING FOR !!!
Ralsei : Something that's pretty gore I guess..
Ashton : Look at the title, I'm sure it could give a hint
Mystery : wait a minute... ASHTON YOU'RE A GENIUS
Luq : what ?
Mystery : D-A-N-G-A-N-R-O-N-P-A
Chilli : OMG YES
So is that what they were searching for ? Find out in the next mini episode ! (probably will be released tonight lol)
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Crumbs. Danganronpa. I'm dead.
Messages 11441 - King Mario King Mario
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VC wrote:
Crumbs. Danganronpa. I'm dead.

You haven't passed out yet. However it's gonna be a long fight
Messages 11441 - King Mario King Mario
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2-5 : The end
MysteryMan : D-A-N-G-A-N-R-O-N-P-A
Chilli : OMG YES
What ?
Danganronpa what ?

Nudge : This is gonna be my last fanfic for a while... Danganronpa MKPC...
Chilli : Help me to remove that yucky dust from here !
MysteryMan : Alright here it is.
Nudge : This is gonna be my last fanfic for a while... Danganronpa MKPC...
Chilli : Now let's get out of this secret room, before someone actually notices us---
Oh yes. They arrived in a secret room and they found out this sentence from Nudge.
MysteryMan : What point does it serve though ?
Chilli : Maybe we have to write it somewhere ?
MysteryMan : Wait, how would we arrive here ?
Chilli : I don't know, my mind's a blur...
MysteryMan : Was it... an attack from the...
Mystery and Chilli swallowed some toxic gas, which caused them to faint. The pirates warped them in that room and rubbed it off from MysteryMan and Chilli's minds.
VC : wait a minute. where are Mystery and Chilli.
Luq : This has to be the nightmare... I want to wake up...
*proceeds to faint instead*

Ralsei : HELP
Ashton : This has to be a joke but I ain't laughing. Or maybe I'm laughing. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA !
Ralsei decided to stab Ashton with a knife he has found on the original pirate boat, but mememo decided to stab Ralsei for that with a knife he just brought from MKPCverse and got hitted by a bullet the pirates launched.
VC : AAAHHH HELP ME THIS IS GORE AND DISGUSTING. THE WATER IS TURNING RED. THE CORPSES ARE GOING TO SINK. OH ACTUALLY THEY GOT WARPED TO THE BEACH BUT THEY ARE STILL IN THE SAME STATE. SO YEAH. EVERY BODY IS AT THE BEACH. LELY PASSED OUT. MAX AS WELL. NUDGE AS WELL.THE CCM SQUAD IS UNREACHABLE. THE THREE IDIOTS STABBED EACH OTHER AND ONE GOT HITTED. WHAT. I'M ON MY OWN AGAINST PIRATES THAT WANT ME TO BE HARMED. HELP !!!
??? : Okay. So as you noticed, every of your friends, or whatever they are, passed out for some reason. They all got warped at the beach, even the one we kidnapped. We all planned this, we controlled the situation and we controlled everything who happened. Because we wanted to kill you, VC. But before we proceed, let's actually get to know. I'm presenting myself first. I'm called Tenko. I'm working for Bowser, since I'm young, and I killed my parents at 5. Yeah I'm a stereotype. Of the big evil villain. However, this is for a reason. Your parents are the ones who corrupted my mind. Yeah it's a stereotype.
VC : W-What the hell are you assuming about my parents ?
??? : Your parents corrupted Tenko's mind. As you can guess, I'm Tenko's girlfriend, I'm called Mina. I was born before him, I'm 5 years younger. One day, I got kidnapped at the age of 5, by the parents of Tenko. And I saw your parents, discussing with Tenko's parents. I saw everything. Tenko's parents got Tenko... well, they don't wanted him, they wanted some pleasure, they got it, but they also got Tenko. And yes, they asked your parents to kill Tenko. And your parents did. But somehow, even after the ab***ion, Tenko survived, but his brain was highly damaged, and guess what happened next.
VC : NONE OF THIS IS TRUE ! I WOULD HAVE KNOWN IT IF IT TRULY HAPPENED ! I WOULD HAVE KNOWN IT ! PLUS HOW YOU DARE KILLING ME AND CAUSING HARM TP MY FRIENDS, IF ITS MY PARENTS !
Tenko : VC. You're taking what you deserve. Some things are unforgivable.
Mina : Because you're young. Killing you will hurt your parents more than being killed themselves. Now let's proceed.
A bullet got launched on VC at light's speed, which caused her to blow away without leaving anything. However, a grave appeared on the beach, next to Lely's head, which caused to wake Lely up.
THE END.
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Messages 226 - Toad Toad
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I was not told there would be blood (ㅠ﹏ㅠ)
I WASN'T EVEN PROMISED I WOULD DIE raah
Messages 11441 - King Mario King Mario
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VC wrote:
I was not told there would be blood (ㅠ﹏ㅠ)
I WASN'T EVEN PROMISED I WOULD DIE raah

Don't worry, your pain is done, you'll rest in peace, because the fanfic has ended
Messages 5400 - King Mario King Mario
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POSOTIVES
- Character Deaths
- Danganronpa Reference

NEGETIVES
- End of Fanfic

OTHER
As a danganronpa fan, seeing a character named Tenko kill a girl is weird
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Messages 226 - Toad Toad
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POSITIVES
- Character Deaths
- Danganronpa Reference

NEGATIVES
- End of Fanfic

OTHER
As a danganronpa fan, seeing a character named Tenko kill a girl is weird

Your bloodthirst truly knows no bounds, does it?
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Messages 5400 - King Mario King Mario
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VC wrote:
POSITIVES
- Character Deaths
- Danganronpa Reference

NEGATIVES
- End of Fanfic

OTHER
As a danganronpa fan, seeing a character named Tenko kill a girl is weird

Your bloodthirst truly knows no bounds, does it?

Who needs boundaries for FICTIONAL deaths?
Messages 11441 - King Mario King Mario
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Arc 2 : MKPC War
3-0 : Intro
Faraway in MKPCverse...
Lely : I had to take VC out from the grave... WHO KILLED HER ! WHAT HAPPENED !
VC : Can you do me a favor ?
Lely : I'm listening
VC : I heard Ralsei, mememo and Ashton got revived by a doctor. Though, Tenko and Mina arrived at MKPCverse, and they caused chaos. All of us went at war, apparently.
Lely : Yep. They're gone, they wanted to avenge themselves.
VC : Can you help me to collect the stars at the castle? I don't want to be implicated in the gore side of MKPCverse.
Lely : Of course!
In the meanwhile...
Tenko : I want to kill everyone. Finally killing my worst enemy has made me thirsty for more blood.
Mina : But please... killing one person is okay, but I don't want to...
Tenko : Shut up or I'll kill you !
Mina : Ok...
Nudge : I love Tenko. I just learnt about him and he loves blood as well. We should do something tonight
mememo : GET OUTTA MY WAY I ALSO WANT BLOOD
Ralsei : I WANNA KILL KILL KILL
Max : I'm sorry, I'm not coming
Nudge : But you are part of MKPCverse's central circle! We can't just let you go !
Max : I don't want to fight, and Lely is not even there
Nudge : Fine...
In front of the castle...
Lely : Please tell me what is going on... 😭
Yeah that was the end of the arc not the end of the fanfic...
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Invu wrote:
Nudge : I love Tenko. I just learnt about him and he loves blood as well. We should do something tonight

I can’t tell if this is a sex joke, or preparation for a mass genocide (the latter one is the only good one)
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Invu wrote:
Nudge : I love Tenko. I just learnt about him and he loves blood as well. We should do something tonight

I can’t tell if this is a sex joke, or preparation for a mass genocide (the latter one is the only good one)

Wait a minute
Hold on
Whatever... anyways it's not a sex joke lmfao, you love him, like idk, I love BTS as an example
And no I'm not crushing on BTS lol
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Invu wrote:
Invu wrote:
Nudge : I love Tenko. I just learnt about him and he loves blood as well. We should do something tonight

I can’t tell if this is a sex joke, or preparation for a mass genocide (the latter one is the only good one)

Wait a minute
Hold on
Whatever... anyways it's not a sex joke lmfao, you love him, like idk, I love BTS as an example
And no I'm not crushing on BTS lol

How could you have a crush on BTS If you want to know why I thought that, it was because of the ‘Tonight’ part Also Off-Topic but I now use Comic Sans
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Messages 11441 - King Mario King Mario
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Invu wrote:
Invu wrote:
Nudge : I love Tenko. I just learnt about him and he loves blood as well. We should do something tonight

I can’t tell if this is a sex joke, or preparation for a mass genocide (the latter one is the only good one)

Wait a minute
Hold on
Whatever... anyways it's not a sex joke lmfao, you love him, like idk, I love BTS as an example
And no I'm not crushing on BTS lol

How could you have a crush on BTS If you want to know why I thought that, it was because of the ‘Tonight’ part Also Off-Topic but I now use Comic Sans

I DONT HAVE A CRUSH ON BTS No seriously I don't

And for the tonight I talked about something like discussing about blood while eating pizza, like normal people do, I didn't even saw it could be interpreted as something that's dirty
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Invu wrote:
Invu wrote:
Invu wrote:
Nudge : I love Tenko. I just learnt about him and he loves blood as well. We should do something tonight

I can’t tell if this is a sex joke, or preparation for a mass genocide (the latter one is the only good one)

Wait a minute
Hold on
Whatever... anyways it's not a sex joke lmfao, you love him, like idk, I love BTS as an example
And no I'm not crushing on BTS lol

How could you have a crush on BTS If you want to know why I thought that, it was because of the ‘Tonight’ part Also Off-Topic but I now use Comic Sans

I DONT HAVE A CRUSH ON BTS No seriously I don't

And for the tonight I talked about something like discussing about blood while eating pizza, like normal people do, I didn't even saw it could be interpreted as something that's dirty

Who eats pizza (or any food) at night???
Messages 11441 - King Mario King Mario
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Invu wrote:
Invu wrote:
Invu wrote:
Nudge : I love Tenko. I just learnt about him and he loves blood as well. We should do something tonight

I can’t tell if this is a sex joke, or preparation for a mass genocide (the latter one is the only good one)

Wait a minute
Hold on
Whatever... anyways it's not a sex joke lmfao, you love him, like idk, I love BTS as an example
And no I'm not crushing on BTS lol

How could you have a crush on BTS If you want to know why I thought that, it was because of the ‘Tonight’ part Also Off-Topic but I now use Comic Sans

I DONT HAVE A CRUSH ON BTS No seriously I don't

And for the tonight I talked about something like discussing about blood while eating pizza, like normal people do, I didn't even saw it could be interpreted as something that's dirty

Who eats pizza (or any food) at night???

When I'm saying tonight I'm meaning evening, or something like that
First dates are often at 7PM... what about... 🤭
Messages 11441 - King Mario King Mario
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ANNOUNCEMENT
MKPCverse has so much potential, so that's why I'm not giving it up, but I'm really close from doing it. I've never felt that burnt out and forced about a fanfic. Making the episodes is less and less fun. It has became a chore, not because of the homework increasing, since I do the episodes at hours where I couldn't do any homework, but because I can hardly find any motivation, something that would refresh me. At first I wanted to refresh the fanfic from the third Arc, but I'm sure some of you would have mistaken it for a whole new fanfic, and some of you would have made a hissy fit out of it. I'm saying this because it happened to me. The persons I'm talking about should recognize themselves rn. Anyways I don't wanna start anything new, since I know it will fail miserably as well, and that would mean giving up repeatedly.


So I'm giving this fanfic a hiatus. If you want to take opportunity of this break to leave the fanfic, because you're disappointed, or to join, because you want to, then go ahead. Everyone can join now. I'm also listening to people if they're not satisfied about their personalities, or colors.

I already did a break precedently, but not an inactive break. So yes. Take opportunity of this break to do whatever you want, that you wouldn't have done if the hiatus didn't happen.
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I just noticed that Ashton and Max have the same colour.
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I just noticed that Ashton and Max have the same colour.

It used to be, now we got different colors
Messages 11441 - King Mario King Mario
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I just noticed that Ashton and Max have the same colour.

No, I changed your color to this to be more accurate to what you asked

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