[FANFIC] Super MKPC World (MATURE CONTENT WARNING)
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4978 pts ★ Budding pilotOn 2024-05-09 at 13:47:36
can I join in? If not, then it’s ok but here is mine:
Name: Mike
Color: Tan Whiteish
Personality: sarcastic, nice,
Species: Human
Gender: he/him/his
Height: 5’11
Weight: Medium
Age: 14
Appearance:
Name: Mike
Color: Tan Whiteish
Personality: sarcastic, nice,
Species: Human
Gender: he/him/his
Height: 5’11
Weight: Medium
Age: 14
Appearance:
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On 2024-05-09 at 17:25:56
Chapter 4 is nearly out, not really as much as a TW this time but it does feature flashbacks to Chapter 2 so I'll likely censor the flashbacks with milder things or put them in a spoiler (only two little sections of a conversation, don't think it's too much)
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Season 1, Chapter 4: A Harrowing Ordeal
Kay-Kay: We're here now...
Pixel: What's up? I heard what happened with the people who disappeared...
Lely: That's not all, you guys took ages... my cheek hurts...
Alyssa: Oh yeah! I'm so sorry... (Treats Lely and Nudge's wounds) There, it should be much better now.
Lely: Thank you Illu... (Hugs)
Nudge: Yeah, thanks I guess... but who's the new girl?
Kay-Kay: My name's Kayleigh, or Kay-Kay for short. I hope you'll let me travel with you guys...
Osc: Kay-Kay-Kay?
Fiery: Oh my god... you did NOT...
D4rk: Oh mah gawd yars queen, slay girlypop. Sigma from Ohio.
Fiery: This is embarrassing...
Max: Wait, how exactly did you find us, Kay-Kay?
Kay-Kay: (Tears up) I... uhm...
Kay-Kay tells the gang her backstory and she breaks down crying. Some also started crying for her, others looked somber, and some were simply unbothered, however there was a general sense of sympathy in the air for the girl.
D4rk: That's giving depression. Fanum tax skibidi.
Fiery: Oh my days...
Alyssa: (Hugs Kay-Kay while crying) It's okay... you're safe now... you're safe now...
However, somewhat eerily, almost exactly after Kay-Kay had finished her story, Brint, the oldest of them all, returned to the gang, albeit he wasn't left unscathed.
Brint: Sorry about that guys, I was just looking around and found some place that'll take us in. Got a ton of splinters and spider bites though...
Lely: Ouch... that must've hurt.
D4rk: Naw, that's giving 3am challenges.
Everyone: OH MY GOD SHUT UP D4RK!
D4rk: Oh mah gawd that's bullying, cancel-
Before D4rk could say another word, Lely silences him with a glare, allowing Brint to speak up.
Brint: Anyway, here's some photos of the place I found... (Brint shows the gang pictures of the new place on MKPC Real Estate)
Chilli: Oooh, looks cool! I hope there's plenty of video games...
Brint: Yep, there's plenty of those.
Twilight: I'll absolutely demolish you, Chilli.
Chilli: No you won't! I'm a much better gamer than you!
Twilight: Say that to my 20% on Bloodbath as compared to your lame 5%.
Chilli: Why you little-!
Pixel: I can't wait!
Alyssa: Neither can I! Let's get going now!
Max: But how are we-
Before Max could finish his sentence, Alyssa pulls a large Kart easily able to seat 16 people out of the back of her jet.
Max: WHAT THE...
Nudge: WHAT THE...
Kay-Kay: Oh is that a Kart?
Lely: (Surprised that Kay-Kay knows about Karting) Yes, but... how do you know what a Kart is?
Kay-Kay: We actually have a huge Kart racing tournament that happens every year in Wyvernia! It's really fun, you guys should sign up!
Lely: I think Max would like that, and maybe Nudge too. As for me? Eh, I'm not that fussed.
Alyssa: (Hops in the Kart) Are you guys done with the small talk?
Lely: Oh, sorry.
Everyone boards the Kart and Alyssa turns on the Minimap so she knows where to go. She's not a particularly fast driver as she had to modify the Kart a lot to even make it capable of reverse drifting, but she gets to where they need to be fairly quickly.
Nudge: Damn, you suck at reverse drifting.
Alyssa: (Frustratedly) I know... anyway this is the place right?
Brint: Yep, this is the place.
Alyssa: Alright, you lot go on ahead, I'll bring the bags in.
Everyone goes in excited apart from Kay-Kay, who seeks Alyssa's company.
Alyssa: Oh? What are you doing out here, Kay-Kay?
Kay-Kay: I... I need to tell you something... promise me you won't get mad...
Alyssa: Cinnte, dul ar aghaidh. [[Sure, go ahead.]] (Leans on the boot of the Kart and smiles)
Kay-Kay: Mé... mothaím go bhfuil rud éigin as... faoin buachaill Buzzy Beetle... [[I... I feel as though there's something... off... about the Buzzy Beetle guy...]]
Alyssa: (Shocked) Cad atá i gceist agat...? [[What do you mean...?]]
Kay-Kay: Cuimhnigh nuair a shábháil tú mé? [[Remember when you saved me?]]
Alyssa: ...Sea? [[...Yeah?]]
Kay-Kay: Agus nuair a bhí tú in aghaidh a chéile... [[And when you retaliated...]]
Alyssa: (Startled, but not angry) An bhfuil tú ag moladh cad atá á mholadh agam? [[Are you suggesting what I think you're suggesting?]]
Kay-Kay: (Sheds a tear) Tá brón orm, tá a fhios agam go bhfuil sé dúr... [[I'm sorry, I know it's stupid...]]
Alyssa: Ní hea ná bí buartha, is dóigh liom nach bhfuil le déanamh againn ach fanacht ar an am le hinsint... Tá amhras orm go pearsanta go ndéanfadh duine de mo chairde é sin go toilteanach áfach. Anois, níl mé ach ag fáil na málaí agus ansin beidh mé ar ais isteach, ceart go leor? [[No don't worry, I guess we just have to wait for time to tell... I personally doubt one of my friends would willingly do that though. Now, I'm just getting the bags and then I'll be back in, okay?]]
Kay-Kay: Ceart go leor, go raibh maith agat Alice! [[Okay, thanks Alice!]]
Alyssa: (Kisses Kay-Kay on the cheek) Tá fáilte romhat. [[You're welcome.]]
Kay-Kay runs back inside, and as Alyssa goes out to grab another few bags of luggage, she hears a frightened scream from within the house.
Alyssa: KAYLEIGH!
Alyssa runs back inside really quickly with the remaining bags of luggage and runs upstairs. Fairly soon after hearing Kay-Kay scream, Lely, Pixel, Max and Nudge follow.
Alyssa: What's wrong?! What happened?!
Kay-Kay: I... I saw him... trying to hurt me... again...
Alyssa sees Brint standing in the doorway with his cloak off and immediately realizes what Kay-Kay was talking about.
Pixel: WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU?!
Brint: Heh, so it took you that long to figure it out.
Lely: YOU PSYCHOPATH! WE ALL TRUSTED YOU!
Brint: So I'm the deal breaker huh? Why not tell that to your beloved little bitch Kayleigh, inviting her friends over without my permission?
Max: This has gone way too far! We take in someone who suffered such a harrowing ordeal, only to discover the abuser was one of our friends?!
Nudge: Guess the most guilty are those who never speak, huh, you absolute sadist?!
Brint: Alas, I am no sadist, I was merely doing what had to be done.
Nudge: What had to be done?! WHAT HAD TO BE DONE?! ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR FUCKING MIND?!
Brint: Says the one who's screaming at me.
Nudge: YOU SICK, TWISTED LUNATIC!
Fairly quickly, Nudge and Brint engage in a fight. After around half an hour of brawling, in a burst of rage, Nudge pushes Brint off the top of the stairs, the older boy's spine audibly cracking as he hits the floor, completely lifeless.
Nudge: (Spits over the top of the stairs) Fucking evil dipshit.
Lely: Wow. Just… wow.
Kay-Kay: (Breaks down crying again) I'm sorry... I should've told you guys sooner...
Lely & Alyssa: No, don't cry...
Lely and Alyssa both wrap their arms around Kay-Kay to comfort her.
Alyssa: Well at least you're safe, and that's all that matters.
Max: Yeah, actually we never would've known if you didn't call for help...
Alyssa hugs Kay-Kay tightly and Lely just looks shocked that Nudge did that. However, Pixel speaks up.
Pixel: Wait.
But what has she to say? Find out next time in Super MKPC World!
Kay-Kay: We're here now...
Pixel: What's up? I heard what happened with the people who disappeared...
Lely: That's not all, you guys took ages... my cheek hurts...
Alyssa: Oh yeah! I'm so sorry... (Treats Lely and Nudge's wounds) There, it should be much better now.
Lely: Thank you Illu... (Hugs)
Nudge: Yeah, thanks I guess... but who's the new girl?
Kay-Kay: My name's Kayleigh, or Kay-Kay for short. I hope you'll let me travel with you guys...
Osc: Kay-Kay-Kay?
Fiery: Oh my god... you did NOT...
D4rk: Oh mah gawd yars queen, slay girlypop. Sigma from Ohio.
Fiery: This is embarrassing...
Max: Wait, how exactly did you find us, Kay-Kay?
Kay-Kay: (Tears up) I... uhm...
Kay-Kay tells the gang her backstory and she breaks down crying. Some also started crying for her, others looked somber, and some were simply unbothered, however there was a general sense of sympathy in the air for the girl.
D4rk: That's giving depression. Fanum tax skibidi.
Fiery: Oh my days...
Alyssa: (Hugs Kay-Kay while crying) It's okay... you're safe now... you're safe now...
However, somewhat eerily, almost exactly after Kay-Kay had finished her story, Brint, the oldest of them all, returned to the gang, albeit he wasn't left unscathed.
Brint: Sorry about that guys, I was just looking around and found some place that'll take us in. Got a ton of splinters and spider bites though...
Lely: Ouch... that must've hurt.
D4rk: Naw, that's giving 3am challenges.
Everyone: OH MY GOD SHUT UP D4RK!
D4rk: Oh mah gawd that's bullying, cancel-
Before D4rk could say another word, Lely silences him with a glare, allowing Brint to speak up.
Brint: Anyway, here's some photos of the place I found... (Brint shows the gang pictures of the new place on MKPC Real Estate)
Chilli: Oooh, looks cool! I hope there's plenty of video games...
Brint: Yep, there's plenty of those.
Twilight: I'll absolutely demolish you, Chilli.
Chilli: No you won't! I'm a much better gamer than you!
Twilight: Say that to my 20% on Bloodbath as compared to your lame 5%.
Chilli: Why you little-!
Pixel: I can't wait!
Alyssa: Neither can I! Let's get going now!
Max: But how are we-
Before Max could finish his sentence, Alyssa pulls a large Kart easily able to seat 16 people out of the back of her jet.
Max: WHAT THE...
Nudge: WHAT THE...
Kay-Kay: Oh is that a Kart?
Lely: (Surprised that Kay-Kay knows about Karting) Yes, but... how do you know what a Kart is?
Kay-Kay: We actually have a huge Kart racing tournament that happens every year in Wyvernia! It's really fun, you guys should sign up!
Lely: I think Max would like that, and maybe Nudge too. As for me? Eh, I'm not that fussed.
Alyssa: (Hops in the Kart) Are you guys done with the small talk?
Lely: Oh, sorry.
Everyone boards the Kart and Alyssa turns on the Minimap so she knows where to go. She's not a particularly fast driver as she had to modify the Kart a lot to even make it capable of reverse drifting, but she gets to where they need to be fairly quickly.
Nudge: Damn, you suck at reverse drifting.
Alyssa: (Frustratedly) I know... anyway this is the place right?
Brint: Yep, this is the place.
Alyssa: Alright, you lot go on ahead, I'll bring the bags in.
Everyone goes in excited apart from Kay-Kay, who seeks Alyssa's company.
Alyssa: Oh? What are you doing out here, Kay-Kay?
Kay-Kay: I... I need to tell you something... promise me you won't get mad...
Alyssa: Cinnte, dul ar aghaidh. [[Sure, go ahead.]] (Leans on the boot of the Kart and smiles)
Kay-Kay: Mé... mothaím go bhfuil rud éigin as... faoin buachaill Buzzy Beetle... [[I... I feel as though there's something... off... about the Buzzy Beetle guy...]]
Alyssa: (Shocked) Cad atá i gceist agat...? [[What do you mean...?]]
Kay-Kay: Cuimhnigh nuair a shábháil tú mé? [[Remember when you saved me?]]
???: Kay-Kay! What are you doing inviting your stupid friends over?!
Kay-Kay: I... I... (She looks visibly spooked)
???: YOU BITCH! I TOLD YOU NOT TO HAVE FRIENDS OVER AND YOU DIDN'T LISTEN AS ALWAYS!
Alyssa: That is NOT cool at all. You'd be lucky if I didn't gut you alive at this point, you do NOT hit a woman.
???: (Gets haughty) And what if I do? I'm her boyfriend, you're just some worthless lowlife who thinks you can manipulate her against me.
Kay-Kay: I... I... (She looks visibly spooked)
???: YOU BITCH! I TOLD YOU NOT TO HAVE FRIENDS OVER AND YOU DIDN'T LISTEN AS ALWAYS!
Alyssa: That is NOT cool at all. You'd be lucky if I didn't gut you alive at this point, you do NOT hit a woman.
???: (Gets haughty) And what if I do? I'm her boyfriend, you're just some worthless lowlife who thinks you can manipulate her against me.
Alyssa: ...Sea? [[...Yeah?]]
Kay-Kay: Agus nuair a bhí tú in aghaidh a chéile... [[And when you retaliated...]]
???: OWWWW! ARE YOU TRYING TO MURDER ME?!
Alyssa: No, I'm trying to get you to realize that what you're doing is wrong. Now I think Kay-Kay deserves much better than whatever the hell you are, so we're leaving.
???: Grrr... my shell... I'll get you pests back... I'll get... my revenge... (Smirks) Just you wait...
Alyssa: No, I'm trying to get you to realize that what you're doing is wrong. Now I think Kay-Kay deserves much better than whatever the hell you are, so we're leaving.
???: Grrr... my shell... I'll get you pests back... I'll get... my revenge... (Smirks) Just you wait...
Alyssa: (Startled, but not angry) An bhfuil tú ag moladh cad atá á mholadh agam? [[Are you suggesting what I think you're suggesting?]]
Kay-Kay: (Sheds a tear) Tá brón orm, tá a fhios agam go bhfuil sé dúr... [[I'm sorry, I know it's stupid...]]
Alyssa: Ní hea ná bí buartha, is dóigh liom nach bhfuil le déanamh againn ach fanacht ar an am le hinsint... Tá amhras orm go pearsanta go ndéanfadh duine de mo chairde é sin go toilteanach áfach. Anois, níl mé ach ag fáil na málaí agus ansin beidh mé ar ais isteach, ceart go leor? [[No don't worry, I guess we just have to wait for time to tell... I personally doubt one of my friends would willingly do that though. Now, I'm just getting the bags and then I'll be back in, okay?]]
Kay-Kay: Ceart go leor, go raibh maith agat Alice! [[Okay, thanks Alice!]]
Alyssa: (Kisses Kay-Kay on the cheek) Tá fáilte romhat. [[You're welcome.]]
Kay-Kay runs back inside, and as Alyssa goes out to grab another few bags of luggage, she hears a frightened scream from within the house.
Alyssa: KAYLEIGH!
Alyssa runs back inside really quickly with the remaining bags of luggage and runs upstairs. Fairly soon after hearing Kay-Kay scream, Lely, Pixel, Max and Nudge follow.
Alyssa: What's wrong?! What happened?!
Kay-Kay: I... I saw him... trying to hurt me... again...
Alyssa sees Brint standing in the doorway with his cloak off and immediately realizes what Kay-Kay was talking about.
Pixel: WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU?!
Brint: Heh, so it took you that long to figure it out.
Lely: YOU PSYCHOPATH! WE ALL TRUSTED YOU!
Brint: So I'm the deal breaker huh? Why not tell that to your beloved little bitch Kayleigh, inviting her friends over without my permission?
Max: This has gone way too far! We take in someone who suffered such a harrowing ordeal, only to discover the abuser was one of our friends?!
Nudge: Guess the most guilty are those who never speak, huh, you absolute sadist?!
Brint: Alas, I am no sadist, I was merely doing what had to be done.
Nudge: What had to be done?! WHAT HAD TO BE DONE?! ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR FUCKING MIND?!
Brint: Says the one who's screaming at me.
Nudge: YOU SICK, TWISTED LUNATIC!
Fairly quickly, Nudge and Brint engage in a fight. After around half an hour of brawling, in a burst of rage, Nudge pushes Brint off the top of the stairs, the older boy's spine audibly cracking as he hits the floor, completely lifeless.
Nudge: (Spits over the top of the stairs) Fucking evil dipshit.
Lely: Wow. Just… wow.
Kay-Kay: (Breaks down crying again) I'm sorry... I should've told you guys sooner...
Lely & Alyssa: No, don't cry...
Lely and Alyssa both wrap their arms around Kay-Kay to comfort her.
Alyssa: Well at least you're safe, and that's all that matters.
Max: Yeah, actually we never would've known if you didn't call for help...
Alyssa hugs Kay-Kay tightly and Lely just looks shocked that Nudge did that. However, Pixel speaks up.
Pixel: Wait.
But what has she to say? Find out next time in Super MKPC World!
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On 2024-05-10 at 10:56:22
Okay I loved thi, but I think some things are weird, like Nudge would probably keep his cool with Brint. But the villain is well set up, everything works pretty fairly. I think the villain surviving or another one existing would help the fanfic though. But anyways, the episode is really great
1On 2024-05-10 at 12:21:54
Okay I loved thi, but I think some things are weird, like Nudge would probably keep his cool with Brint. But the villain is well set up, everything works pretty fairly. I think the villain surviving or another one existing would help the fanfic though. But anyways, the episode is really great
I think it'll make more sense when the game releases but yeah there's a reason why I killed off Brint
1On 2024-05-10 at 17:31:10
Again a plot-heavy episode, so the line distribution is unfair (note that the line for everyone counts as a line for everyone apart from D4rk (who was being talked to) and Brint (who somehow didn't know D4rk's name), which is why even characters who don't have any standalone lines still have one):
Alyssa: 20
Kay-Kay: 15
Brint: 13
Lely: 10
Nudge: 8
Max: 6
Pixel: 5
Chilli: 4
D4rk: 4
Fiery: 4
Twilight: 3
Osc: 2
Dietsoda: 1
Eli: 1
Limey: 1
xrunner: 1
Total: 84
Alyssa: 20
Kay-Kay: 15
Brint: 13
Lely: 10
Nudge: 8
Max: 6
Pixel: 5
Chilli: 4
D4rk: 4
Fiery: 4
Twilight: 3
Osc: 2
Dietsoda: 1
Eli: 1
Limey: 1
xrunner: 1
Total: 84
2On 2024-05-10 at 18:14:35
Pixel: Wait.
But what has she to say? Find out next time in Super MKPC World!
But what has she to say? Find out next time in Super MKPC World!
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3On 2024-05-10 at 18:46:16
Pixel: Wait.
But what has she to say? Find out next time in Super MKPC World!
But what has she to say? Find out next time in Super MKPC World!
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