[Fanfic] MKPC Gore (Current: MKPC Revival)

Episode 3: A Terrifying Procces

Nudge: Congratulations toad. You’ve successfully gotten yourself killed
*Lely passes out*
Gamerlion: We need to help Lely
Nudge: No we don’t. You need to investigate the crime scene
Gamerlion: We cant just leave him. We need to do something
Nudge: Ok sure. I’ll do 2 things.
1.) I’ll go down the slide since I have need to let other people have importance (and I need to sleep)
2.) I’ll take Lely with me so that you shut up
Max: I’ve finally managed to fit through the chimney. So, where is toad… Oh. WHO DID IT?!?!?!
Luq: Can’t have been someone in whomps fortress, so that means it wasn’t Nudge, Ralsei, Toady or Gamerlion
Max: Gamerlion?
Ralsei: Gamerlion decided to join us in whomps fortress since he had finished his areas in Jolly Rodger Bay and he felt like we were the most in danger. Makes sense though, since none of us can be trusted
Toady: I can confirm for you that this is a lie
Luq: The only lie that was said was what you just said
Toady: That was what I was saying. What I said was a lie
Yascamer: That not make sense
Toady: By the way, what was that loud noise?
Luq: Please don’t change the subject
Lemon: Actually, I think we understood what was going on with the whomps fortress thing. The noise should be able to clear my group, since the only way in and out of Bob-omb battlefield was through a super load teleportation that can be heard all throughout peaches castle
Luq: I can confirm that I only heard this twice, though shouldn't this be saved for the class trial?
Max: Class trial?
MonoBoiiiii: Did I forget to mention this or did you just forget? There will be a class trial for every murder that happens. I’m the trial, you will have to figure out who the murderer, also known as, the blackened is. If you are wrong, then the blackened escapes and you all get executed, but if you catch the blackened, then only he gets executed
Max: You forgot and how did you know about this Luq?
Luq: Because this is too similar to Danganronpa
Max: Oh ok. Now, who else could be the killer?
Luq: Me, You, Lely, Tyshawn, Parakoopa, Jey, Yascamer, Bj and Toad
Kris: How could toad be the killer, he is the literal victim
Ralsei: Probably killed himself lol
Max: Ralsei, don’t joke about that. This is a very serious thing
Ralsei: I’m sorry for having an idea. Should I also do my idea?
Max: NO!!! Now, I think we should move some people around to different places. We will go in pairs, plus one 3. I will stay here with Yascamer, and Luq can protect Nudge and Lely at the bottom. That leaves 10 people for 5 more places
Bj: Me and master can investigate jolly Rodger bay
Jey: I guess I can go to the secret slide with Gamerlion
Ralsei: I will investigate outside in Cool Cool mountain with Toady
Lemon: I think it would be better for Toady to go with me in the secret aquarium, and Kris with you
Ralsei: Fine
Parakoopa: That leaves me and Tyshawn in the light

Max: So, now that everyone has left, let’s start with the body
Yascamer: The mushroom is off, and it no have blood
Max: Strange. I would have expected more than just a removed mushroom. However, I have noticed that part of the wood contains a hole
Yascamer: The killer probably struggled with the victim. The hole would be good search place
Max: There seems to be a big rock in there. Maybe this was meant to be the murder weapon
Yascamer: Probably. These seems to be lack of evidence now

Master: It seems like Jolly Rodger Bay doesn’t have evidence

Jey: The slide is useless

Toady: With that evidence, we can come to the conclusion that Bj did it

Ralsei: The only info here is the chimney that broke when max went through it

Tyshawn: I guess i got scared for no reason

Monoboiiiii: DING!!! DONG!!! It is time for you to head over to the entrance door, and go through it

Nudge: So, any good evidence?
Toady: Bj did it
Bj: Why the random accusation?
Lely: Please stop arguing and just head through the door
They all went through the door, and discovered that it was an elevator to the Class Trial Court

Congratulations,
I like it. You have improved a lot in writing fanfics, your style is way more enjoyable to read than before. It used to be pretty messy, but it's very good now ^^

I'm with Ralsei, dude killed himself.

In all seriousness, you'd have to be a fucking genius to sneak a rock into CCM without being spotted. Everyone is goona die. R.I.P.

Does "light" mean Wing Cap Tower? Bc that starts  midair & Tyshawn would fall to his death.

Yes and Parakoopa does have the power to hold things, you know

Anyway, this probably has Scooby-Doo levels of random junk that make no sense a long the way but tuen works out at the vwry end or something, whivch I don't realy get.
Again with JRB, you can't sleep there.

You perfectly described danganronpa and how the evidence only makes sense during the trial.
Also, who cares if you can’t sleep in Rolly Rodger Bay, it was worth a shot

It really is Ace Attorney huh
I guess they aren't many levels that are safe to sleep in anyway, except THI.
I'm gonna assume it's the person with the least dialogue.

Basically I don't know anything about this game, but applying flawed SM64 logic.
We can easily mark off Lely, if he fainted now he would've fainted when he killed him & would probably still be unconscious when they found Toad.

Unless @Lelyiren is a good actor....
Anyway, enough of me disrupting/ruining your Fanfic. You guys(besides Nudge & Toadboiiii) may speculate in pieces, er, Peace.

How would they sleep on Tiny Huge Island when that’s later on in the castle (they only have access to the starting area) Also, @Lely, if you mean the SM64 Abbreviations, Then it’s jolly Rodger bay for JRB (and he was saying where could you sleep there?) and THI is Tiny Huge Island (Which is currently locked) and for the ‘light’ thing, that’s about how would Tyshawn not fall back down to peaches castle, and the other thing is about how the evidence doesn’t make sense until the case

There is 1 more easy mark off, but for the other 7, wait until episode 4

LBLJ, Mips clip. You also didn't specify OG or DS, & there are about 5 different ways to upwarp from JRB to Bowser in the Sky. I'm not putting it past anyone at this point.

Oh yea, Max can't even fit.

Just a reminder that they involve defying the laws of physics, which only Mario, Luigi, Yoshi and Wario are able to do (Modded characters don’t count)

I still woulsn't put it past anyone, as dumb as it is.
That kinda limits the normal ppl to the start area of basically every level, it'd be impossible yto reach the top of Whomp's or BBF, nowhere in JRB.
And Peach's Castle already defies the laws of physics obc entering the paintings is physically imposdible.
Anyway, I'll stop ruining your fun, although Toad is the only one having rn, somewhere, up there maybe, waiting for you guys to catch the killer.

Episode 4: The first of many

MonoBoi: Welcome to the class trial, I have assigned places for all of you to go, so please may you go to them
Ralsei: No
MonoBoi: YOU DARE DEFY ME!!! Go to your space or else you will be EXECUTED!!!
Ralsei: Fine
MonoBoi: Now, just a quick reminder. In this trial, you will be solving the murder of toad, and based on the MonoBoi file I gave you, you will now that-
Nudge: What MonoBoi file?
MonoBoi: Did I not give them to you? Sorry. The information it has is that the murder took place at 7:00PM. Anyway, TRIAL, BEGIN!!!
Nudge: Well we can already clear me, toady, Ralsei, gamerlion, lemon, Kris, and master, and I think there are 2 more people we can easily clear
Lely: 2 more people?
Yascamer: Is me and Max?
Nudge: Close, but it’s actually Lely and Max, since we would have caught Lely at the seem of the crime passed out from the sight of a dead body, which didn’t even have blood, and max couldn’t even fit into the chimney
Max: This is one of the few times I’m glad snorlaxes are fat
Luq: So it has to be one of these 7 people: Me, Yascamer, Jey, Tyshawn, Parakoopa, Bj or Toad
Tyshawn: Toad is innocent since he is the victim
Ralsei: You ever heard of suicide?
Max: Have you ever heard of rocks?
Ralsei: Of course I have
Max: If he killed himself, then how did the rock get there?
Ralsei: He smacked himself with the rock
Max: That definitely would have caused blood
Ralsei: What if the blood dripped under the wood?
Max: There is no way all of the blood wood have done that, since the only big gap was the hole with the rock inside
Ralsei: I’m still convinced he killed himself
Nudge: Let’s take toad off the list of suspects. Now, how was the rock used?
Lely: As a weapon? Maybe he threw it and it ended up in the hole
Nudge: Or maybe he slammed the rock into the wood due to missed toad, and the impact broke the wood and he ended up dropping it to far through the wood to reach it
Lely: That makes more sense… Also, where did the rock come from?
Yascamer: Probably Cool Cool Mountain
Max: I can tell it doesn’t come from there, since I didn’t even recognise the rock when I found it by the body
Ralsei: I bet it comes from Jolly Rodger Bay since Yascamer seems to be trying to include himself into everything that benefits him
Yascamer:No
Bj: I agree with Ralsei, since there were plenty of rocks in Jolly Rodger Bay during my investigation
Ralsei: See? Yascamer did do it
Max: Yascamer wasn’t alone in Jolly Rodger Bay, since Jey was also there, and he has been awfully quiet this case
Jey: Why talk when I don’t have any information?
Lely: Well it’s between you and Yascamer, and I feel like it’s more likely to be you
Nudge: Sorry Jey, but Yascamer has been more helpful this investigation
Master: Actually, I suspect Yascamer
MonoBoi: Would you look at that, a split opinion. Guess I need to split you into half.

Ralsei: Let’s start by saying that Yascamer is acting very SUS
Lely: Drop the SUS among us reference please
Gamerlion: Yascamer was investing closer to the front, which was closer to they EXIT than Jey
Lemon But there are stars all over each place for an easy EXIT
Tyshawn: Ok but we’re there any STARS in the cave?
Bj: Actually, there was 1 STAR in the caves treasure chests
Parakoopa: Sure but, what patterns where on the ROCKS in the cave
Yascamer: From what me saw, it was the same as the ROCK in the slide
Jey: Ok but, if it was WET then Yascamer did it
Max: The thing is, it was not WET, Mr. Killer

Nudge: Well, it seems like the killer has practically confessed. That case was easier then most of the actual Danganronpa cases (Though the 11037 case was easy). But then again, we don’t have ultimate talents, so it makes sense that we would be worse
Jey: I swear, I’m innocent
MonoBoi: It’s voting time. Cast your vote and whoever has the most votes wins
Jey: Please. You have to believe me. It was just a slip up from me being nervous
Nudge: Why were you nervous?
Max: WHO WOULDNT?!?!?! However, I still believe that it is jey
MonoBoi: Wow. The votes are in already, and the worst part is, that you are Correct
Jey: I’m surprised you figured me out before you figured out HOW he was mur-
Nudge: His mushroom was ripped off. It’s kind of obvious
Jey: Well, MonoBoi, just execute me already. I don’t have a chance to redeem myself so might as well just die no, before I’m questioned
Lely: WAIT! I need to know why you did it
MonoBoi: No you don’t. You need to watch him get executed, because it’s, PUNISHMENT TIME!!!

*Jey was immediately attacked to a long chain around the neck, then got dragged towards a giant computer. The computer then turned around, and revealed ALL of the future events that would happen during the killing.m game. He tried shouting them to everyone, but he was too far away, and the noise detector heard him, immedietly slamming down the computer, crushing Jey*

Is "begging" a typo, or just a  show thing?

Typo (I meant to put 'Begin' )