[Given up]
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6102 pts ★ RacerOn 2022-07-03 at 13:19:10
Chapter 1B : I'mma just end the second round.
Host : Packs done ? If so the explosion's coming ! 3, 2, 1...
*enormous explosion* 💥
VC : Ouch, our boat is shaking more than Toadboi's bed. 😖
MysteryMan : Let's break the rooftop as fast as possible. 🤛 We have to make our way to the shoreline. 🏝️
Lely : Max, are you ready ?
Max : Yeah I'm all ready.
Lely : Kick the roof out please. You're Snorlax, you're strong. 💪
Meanwhile Hampter and Osc-omb are struggling to break the whole iron protection they just put.
Hampter : I'm a little bunny, I can't break iron. Please cause another explosion.
Osc-omb : Sadly I can't, I would die.
Hampter : Try to go right through the wall !
Lely : We just have 5 meters to swim.
Max : We won the second round !
MysteryMan : I told you that Koopa's shells go fast on the water. We are 2nd, VC. Congrats.
VC : Yay ! 🥳
DarkShell : Noooooo !!!! This software needed more time to be created ! The host's gonna hear about me ! 🤬
Toadboi : We're so far from the shore. We need to hurry...
DarkShell : Shut up ! 🤬
Host : And the team of Hampter & Osc-omb just made their way to the shore ! The team of Toadboi and DarkShell has lost the round !
Lemme skip the violent moments and images we got for like, one hour.
Host : It's 4PM, but you have free time. This evening we're gonna talk. See ya at 6PM, in the huts.
Max : Lely, what do you want to do ?
Lely : Going straight to the huts... And to our bedroom. I need to rest, I'm tired.
Max : I'm coming with you.
Lely : Nice ! 😊
At the huts...
Lely : Wanna take a snack ?
Note : The first day they shared a fridge but they have now personal little (cute, as Lely would say) fridges.
Max : I'm hungry so yes. I'm gonna take some ice cream.
Lely : Wanna share mine ? I saw you don't have much remain.
Max : Sure then, which flavor ?
Lely : You choose.
Max : I'm gonna pick this.
Lely : Ok. I'm gonna take some too.
At the beach...
Toadboi : DarkShell, do you wanna play some beach sports ?
DarkShell : Sure, as long as it's virtual.
Toadboi : Ok then play against the computer. 😒
Redshell : Gamerlion, we messed up the two rounds. What are we gonna do.
Gamerlion : We have to face it, don't stop being motivated and we will atleast win one. I'm sure about that.
Redshell : Well, I trust you, but... 😶
Hampter : We were about to lose...
Osc-omb : Chill mate. I'm pretty sure we're gonna handle it as cake.
The end.
The leaderboard (1st wins 10 and 5th wins 0. Which means 2nd win 8, 3rd win 6, but 4th win only 2.
So...
1. Lely-Bros : 20 points
2. VCMan : 10 points
3. Jeyboi : 8 points
3. CoolOmb2009 : 8 points
5. Gamered : 0 point
List of things I noticed :
- I wanted to make a friendship between Max and I since it's my best friend. However it will end up with everyone shipping us and the situation being cringey.
- Toadboi was created to be stupid, but he became perv somehow while I wasn't planning it. Though in this chapter, not really.
- the Line distribution is horrendous. It's basically MKPC Archipel - Lely and Max ft. DarkShell and Toadboi, Special thanks to Redshell and Gamerlion for their participation, uncredited lines by some members called as "CoolHampter2009", "Osc-Omb", "MysteryMan", "VC".
- the chapters' titles are so bad since I don't have any english ideas.
Host : Packs done ? If so the explosion's coming ! 3, 2, 1...
*enormous explosion* 💥
VC : Ouch, our boat is shaking more than Toadboi's bed. 😖
MysteryMan : Let's break the rooftop as fast as possible. 🤛 We have to make our way to the shoreline. 🏝️
Lely : Max, are you ready ?
Max : Yeah I'm all ready.
Lely : Kick the roof out please. You're Snorlax, you're strong. 💪
Meanwhile Hampter and Osc-omb are struggling to break the whole iron protection they just put.
Hampter : I'm a little bunny, I can't break iron. Please cause another explosion.
Osc-omb : Sadly I can't, I would die.
Hampter : Try to go right through the wall !
Lely : We just have 5 meters to swim.
Max : We won the second round !
MysteryMan : I told you that Koopa's shells go fast on the water. We are 2nd, VC. Congrats.
VC : Yay ! 🥳
DarkShell : Noooooo !!!! This software needed more time to be created ! The host's gonna hear about me ! 🤬
Toadboi : We're so far from the shore. We need to hurry...
DarkShell : Shut up ! 🤬
Host : And the team of Hampter & Osc-omb just made their way to the shore ! The team of Toadboi and DarkShell has lost the round !
Lemme skip the violent moments and images we got for like, one hour.
Host : It's 4PM, but you have free time. This evening we're gonna talk. See ya at 6PM, in the huts.
Max : Lely, what do you want to do ?
Lely : Going straight to the huts... And to our bedroom. I need to rest, I'm tired.
Max : I'm coming with you.
Lely : Nice ! 😊
At the huts...
Lely : Wanna take a snack ?
Note : The first day they shared a fridge but they have now personal little (cute, as Lely would say) fridges.
Max : I'm hungry so yes. I'm gonna take some ice cream.
Lely : Wanna share mine ? I saw you don't have much remain.
Max : Sure then, which flavor ?
Lely : You choose.
Max : I'm gonna pick this.
Lely : Ok. I'm gonna take some too.
At the beach...
Toadboi : DarkShell, do you wanna play some beach sports ?
DarkShell : Sure, as long as it's virtual.
Toadboi : Ok then play against the computer. 😒
Redshell : Gamerlion, we messed up the two rounds. What are we gonna do.
Gamerlion : We have to face it, don't stop being motivated and we will atleast win one. I'm sure about that.
Redshell : Well, I trust you, but... 😶
Hampter : We were about to lose...
Osc-omb : Chill mate. I'm pretty sure we're gonna handle it as cake.
The end.
The leaderboard (1st wins 10 and 5th wins 0. Which means 2nd win 8, 3rd win 6, but 4th win only 2.
So...
1. Lely-Bros : 20 points
2. VCMan : 10 points
3. Jeyboi : 8 points
3. CoolOmb2009 : 8 points
5. Gamered : 0 point
List of things I noticed :
- I wanted to make a friendship between Max and I since it's my best friend. However it will end up with everyone shipping us and the situation being cringey.
- Toadboi was created to be stupid, but he became perv somehow while I wasn't planning it. Though in this chapter, not really.
- the Line distribution is horrendous. It's basically MKPC Archipel - Lely and Max ft. DarkShell and Toadboi, Special thanks to Redshell and Gamerlion for their participation, uncredited lines by some members called as "CoolHampter2009", "Osc-Omb", "MysteryMan", "VC".
- the chapters' titles are so bad since I don't have any english ideas.
I’ve had a look at my 3 lines and the first 2 are accurate, but the last one sounds like I am demotivated which I normally wouldn’t be. Also I am NOT a quiet person. Having just 3 lines in the whole chapter definitely doesn’t fit me
You aren't demotivated, you're like : :|
Also yes, if I didn't give you much lines it's because you left, now that you're back I will not be lazy about your lines.
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On 2022-07-03 at 18:18:55
Actually, you're becoming a solo person that hates teamwork, but for now, no assassin, and no healing factor.
My character not yours
But just get rid of my weird flirty crap
3On 2022-07-03 at 18:37:48
Actually, you're becoming a solo person that hates teamwork, but for now, no assassin, and no healing factor.
My character not yours
But just get rid of my weird flirty crap
I said I would.
And this is MY fanfic not YOURS.
I know I have to respect your choices about your character, but that would change the storyline.
If you don't like, don't read.
2On 2022-07-03 at 18:42:39
Actually, you're becoming a solo person that hates teamwork, but for now, no assassin, and no healing factor.
My character not yours
But just get rid of my weird flirty crap
Just be happy your even in it I’m the first place
On 2022-07-03 at 20:19:50
Okay so since Toadboi's complaining about his character, while he want a weird personnality - I only agree to change a bit the personnality, but I won't make a personnality that could change the storyline too much. - So I decided to do a personnality revamp.
Lely : - obsessed by cute things
- likes to be friendly with others, but it end up sounding like he's flirty
- can be very very smart
- has a lot of faces that everybody want to discover
- happy guy but overreacts all the time
Max : - calm or lazy ?
- (un)funny jokes is what he likes to do
- very mature
- very friendly
DarkShell : - did he really evolved ?
- hates Lely
- more obsessed by softwares than Lely by cute things
- saying nonsense and senseful things in the same time
Toadboi : - not a perv anymore
- he often wants to kill other people
- going solo
- very annoying
Hampter : - pretend to be a genius but makes dumb choices
- NEVER GONNA GIVE YOU UP NEVER GONNA LET YOU DOWN
- cute and little bunny that scratches people everytime when he's annoyed... But they won't stop to hug him lol
- line distribution be like :
VC : - she don't talk anymore like he used to do
- hopes she's pretty
- not shining in any domain but good enough in every domain
MysteryMan : - genius
- not a lot of lines, but I can tell that's VERY LONG LINES
- kinda lazy but a nice person to everybuddy
Gamerlion : - he lies everytimes just to be polite but it end up making misunderstandings.
- very nice person. Though, he's being carried by his mate in scary situations.
Redshell : - very brave.
- kinda lazy but competent. Has potential but throws it out.
- likes to play
Osc-omb : - ...
Lely : - obsessed by cute things
- likes to be friendly with others, but it end up sounding like he's flirty
- can be very very smart
- has a lot of faces that everybody want to discover
- happy guy but overreacts all the time
Max : - calm or lazy ?
- (un)funny jokes is what he likes to do
- very mature
- very friendly
DarkShell : - did he really evolved ?
- hates Lely
- more obsessed by softwares than Lely by cute things
- saying nonsense and senseful things in the same time
Toadboi : - not a perv anymore
- he often wants to kill other people
- going solo
- very annoying
Hampter : - pretend to be a genius but makes dumb choices
- NEVER GONNA GIVE YOU UP NEVER GONNA LET YOU DOWN
- cute and little bunny that scratches people everytime when he's annoyed... But they won't stop to hug him lol
- line distribution be like :
VC : - she don't talk anymore like he used to do
- hopes she's pretty
- not shining in any domain but good enough in every domain
MysteryMan : - genius
- not a lot of lines, but I can tell that's VERY LONG LINES
- kinda lazy but a nice person to everybuddy
Gamerlion : - he lies everytimes just to be polite but it end up making misunderstandings.
- very nice person. Though, he's being carried by his mate in scary situations.
Redshell : - very brave.
- kinda lazy but competent. Has potential but throws it out.
- likes to play
Osc-omb : - ...
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1On 2022-07-03 at 20:33:34
Hampter : - pretend to be a genius but makes dumb choices
That’s just me going easy on people. If I made the right choices, then I would be finished way before everyone and have nothing for my (probably) ADHD mind to do
On 2022-07-03 at 20:48:08
Hampter : - pretend to be a genius but makes dumb choices
That’s just me going easy on people. If I made the right choices, then I would be finished way before everyone and have nothing for my (probably) ADHD mind to do
No you're not going easy on people lol. There is genius-er people that you here. (in the fanfic)
On 2022-07-06 at 19:21:16
Alright people, so guess what I didn't have much ideas, but I'mma give you some hints about the next chapter... And I'mma reveal some things.
- the personnality revamp will be caused right in the night. At the start of the chapter, Toadboi will still be kinda dirty-minded, and the rest of the personnalities won't change as well.
- Hampter will have a lot of lines.
- the chapter will be during the night, and the chapter 3 will skip all the next day and the next night (people need to sleep)
- the personnality revamp will be caused right in the night. At the start of the chapter, Toadboi will still be kinda dirty-minded, and the rest of the personnalities won't change as well.
- Hampter will have a lot of lines.
- the chapter will be during the night, and the chapter 3 will skip all the next day and the next night (people need to sleep)
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1On 2022-07-08 at 11:19:51
Here's some stuff to make you wait
They akll got free time until 6PM. At 6PM, the host asked them to talk. Host : So yeah, I learnt that apparently DarkShell cheated in the previous chapter : at the start of the round, he used a (weird ?) software to push all the boats faraway from the shore. However it only worked with the one of Osc-Omb and Hampter, so I'm giving them second place' points, along with VC and MysteryMan : so the team hampter & Osc-omb are now in 2nd place, with 14 points ! And I'm deleting the points of the Jeyboi team.
Toadboi : Look at what you've done !
DarkShell : And how would you learnt it ?
Host : There is a thing called cameras, stupid.
Hampter : So basically we got 14 points and we're so far at 2nd place ? Wow that's good.
Osc-Omb : Nice.
Hampter : And... What's the next challenge ?
Host : You'll see. I just needed to talk to you all about that. Now, do whatever you want.
Lely : For now I'm just going to sleep. I don't know why, but I feel like this night, I won't be able too. I know it sounds weird, but bye.
16Bits : What on Earth-
DarkShell : It's true that babies need to sleep a lot.
Max : Don't call him baby !
MysteryMan : Shut up DarkShell. And calm down Max-Bros.
Lely : *screams*
VC : What's up ?
Lely : I found a spider in my bed. And the spider is enormous ! It's not even cute. I'm not sleeping there !
Gamerlion : Calm down Lely. What-- Oh, yes, it's horrendous.
Lely : Do you guys want ice cream ?
Redshell : No thanks.
Gamerlion : Sorry, i don't like ice cream. *yet staring at the ice cream containers with shiny eyes*
Lely : Liar, I can see it in your eyes.
Gamerlion : I-I'm so sorry...
Can I have some ice cream though ?
Lely : Duh. No, sorry. You're a liar, I won't give you ice cream. LOL. Of course, you can have some. If I'm proposing ice cream--
Toadboi : You're proposing ice cream ?
Lely : Can you stop being a perv ?
Toadboi : Maybe the night will change us
Lely : Oh, nice song.
They akll got free time until 6PM. At 6PM, the host asked them to talk. Host : So yeah, I learnt that apparently DarkShell cheated in the previous chapter : at the start of the round, he used a (weird ?) software to push all the boats faraway from the shore. However it only worked with the one of Osc-Omb and Hampter, so I'm giving them second place' points, along with VC and MysteryMan : so the team hampter & Osc-omb are now in 2nd place, with 14 points ! And I'm deleting the points of the Jeyboi team.
Toadboi : Look at what you've done !
DarkShell : And how would you learnt it ?
Host : There is a thing called cameras, stupid.
Hampter : So basically we got 14 points and we're so far at 2nd place ? Wow that's good.
Osc-Omb : Nice.
Hampter : And... What's the next challenge ?
Host : You'll see. I just needed to talk to you all about that. Now, do whatever you want.
Lely : For now I'm just going to sleep. I don't know why, but I feel like this night, I won't be able too. I know it sounds weird, but bye.
16Bits : What on Earth-
DarkShell : It's true that babies need to sleep a lot.
Max : Don't call him baby !
MysteryMan : Shut up DarkShell. And calm down Max-Bros.
Lely : *screams*
VC : What's up ?
Lely : I found a spider in my bed. And the spider is enormous ! It's not even cute. I'm not sleeping there !
Gamerlion : Calm down Lely. What-- Oh, yes, it's horrendous.
Lely : Do you guys want ice cream ?
Redshell : No thanks.
Gamerlion : Sorry, i don't like ice cream. *yet staring at the ice cream containers with shiny eyes*
Lely : Liar, I can see it in your eyes.
Gamerlion : I-I'm so sorry...
Can I have some ice cream though ?Lely : Duh. No, sorry. You're a liar, I won't give you ice cream. LOL. Of course, you can have some. If I'm proposing ice cream--
Toadboi : You're proposing ice cream ?
Lely : Can you stop being a perv ?
Toadboi : Maybe the night will change us
Lely : Oh, nice song.
3On 2022-07-09 at 00:54:13
I'm pausing it since I don't have any ideas si far.
On 2022-07-09 at 00:55:56
Boi: How bout a bomb?
*kills 2/3 the cast at random*
Lely: Oh no!1!11!1!!11! Death!11!!!11
D:
Boi/Boi's ghost: Use my Recovery Center Machine :]
(recovers everyone, but they all have amnesia)
Host: If they have amnesia, well all hope's lost. Might as well give them a better personality.
*kills 2/3 the cast at random*
Lely: Oh no!1!11!1!!11! Death!11!!!11
D:Boi/Boi's ghost: Use my Recovery Center Machine :]
(recovers everyone, but they all have amnesia)
Host: If they have amnesia, well all hope's lost. Might as well give them a better personality.
3On 2022-07-09 at 00:56:55
Oh no!1!11!1!!11! Death!11!!!11
I'm not getting the meaning behind this
On 2022-07-09 at 00:58:16
Oh no!1!11!1!!11! Death!11!!!11
I'm not getting the meaning behind this
What else would you expect from him? It’s one of his most useful messages
On 2022-07-09 at 00:59:00
Oh no!1!11!1!!11! Death!11!!!11
I'm not getting the meaning behind this
What else would you expect from him? It’s one of his most useful messages
Well, I guess I'll ignore that.
On 2022-07-09 at 00:59:33
Oh no!1!11!1!!11! Death!11!!!11
I'm not getting the meaning behind this
What else would you expect from him? It’s one of his most useful messages
Well, I guess I'll ignore that.
No read the finished message its useful like fr
On 2022-07-09 at 01:00:17
Oh no!1!11!1!!11! Death!11!!!11
I'm not getting the meaning behind this
What else would you expect from him? It’s one of his most useful messages
Well, I guess I'll ignore that.
No read the finished message its useful like fr
No it’s called something happened but nobody knew, therefore nothing happened
On 2022-07-09 at 01:00:44
Oh no!1!11!1!!11! Death!11!!!11
I'm not getting the meaning behind this
What else would you expect from him? It’s one of his most useful messages
Well, I guess I'll ignore that.
No read the finished message its useful like fr
This don't makes sense at all. I'd suggest you to quit this topic until you found how to write a sentence that's more worth it than the silence.
On 2022-07-09 at 01:01:56
Boi: How bout a bomb?
*kills 2/3 the cast at random*
Lely: Oh no!1!11!1!!11! Death!11!!!11 D:
Boi/Boi's ghost: Use my Recovery Center Machine :]
(recovers everyone, but they all have amnesia)
Host: If they have amnesia, well all hope's lost. Might as well give them a better personality.
*kills 2/3 the cast at random*
Lely: Oh no!1!11!1!!11! Death!11!!!11
D:Boi/Boi's ghost: Use my Recovery Center Machine :]
(recovers everyone, but they all have amnesia)
Host: If they have amnesia, well all hope's lost. Might as well give them a better personality.
A bomb drops from the sky and kills the cast, but only the host knows. so he uses my Recovery Center Machine to revive everyone, but we lost some of our memories. So he fixes them to make them new and improved. He also makes us forget us dying.
On 2022-07-09 at 01:05:23
Idea for episode 2.) it’s on a crumbling mountain and the goal is to not fall off
On 2022-07-09 at 01:09:13
Idea for episode 2.) it’s on a crumbling mountain and the goal is to not fall off
EPISODE 2? i thought this was like episode 5