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Messages 11442 - King Mario King Mario
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VC wrote:
very very nice so far! kinda lost, though. maybe because we only have the names to go off of when imagining these scenarios... maybe give each pair a colour?

That's why I wanted at first. Sadly, when I wrote stories about Mario, it was kinda obvious which color goes to who. (Mario is RED due to his suit, Peach is PINK due to her personnality and suit, Yoshi is GREEN due to his skin, Max and Yascamer were BLUE as forum members, and Gamerlion was WHITE because he asked for it.) But I don't really know how to give a color to each pair.Any ideas ? Let me know ;)
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-BTS- wrote:
VC wrote:
very very nice so far! kinda lost, though. maybe because we only have the names to go off of when imagining these scenarios... maybe give each pair a colour?

That's why I wanted at first. Sadly, when I wrote stories about Mario, it was kinda obvious which color goes to who. (Mario is RED due to his suit, Peach is PINK due to her personnality and suit, Yoshi is GREEN due to his skin, Max and Yascamer were BLUE as forum members, and Gamerlion was WHITE because he asked for it.) But I don't really know how to give a color to each pair.Any ideas ? Let me know ;)

J'ai réfléchi, et je n'ai pas trouvé d'idée (cé fo)
Messages 11442 - King Mario King Mario
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France
-BTS- wrote:
VC wrote:
very very nice so far! kinda lost, though. maybe because we only have the names to go off of when imagining these scenarios... maybe give each pair a colour?

That's why I wanted at first. Sadly, when I wrote stories about Mario, it was kinda obvious which color goes to who. (Mario is RED due to his suit, Peach is PINK due to her personnality and suit, Yoshi is GREEN due to his skin, Max and Yascamer were BLUE as forum members, and Gamerlion was WHITE because he asked for it.) But I don't really know how to give a color to each pair.Any ideas ? Let me know ;)

J'ai réfléchi, et je n'ai pas trouvé d'idée (cé fo)

Oh, because I was teal in my old fanfic ?
Also, that could be a great idea, since I always write and green, otherwise you said you love blue ? Teal is between Green and Blue, that would indeed be fair, yup.

If I had to give colors :

Lely and Max
MysteryMan and VC
Hampter and Osc-Omb
Redshell and Gamerlion
DarkShell and Toadboi
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Messages 11442 - King Mario King Mario
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battle6102 pts ★ Racer
France
Chapter 1B : I'mma just end the second round.
Host : Packs done ? If so the explosion's coming ! 3, 2, 1...
*enormous explosion* 💥
VC : Ouch, our boat is shaking more than Toadboi's bed. 😖
MysteryMan : Let's break the rooftop as fast as possible. 🤛 We have to make our way to the shoreline. 🏝️
Lely : Max, are you ready ?
Max : Yeah I'm all ready.
Lely : Kick the roof out please. You're Snorlax, you're strong. 💪
Meanwhile Hampter and Osc-omb are struggling to break the whole iron protection they just put.
Hampter : I'm a little bunny, I can't break iron. Please cause another explosion.
Osc-omb : Sadly I can't, I would die.
Hampter : Try to go right through the wall !
Lely : We just have 5 meters to swim.
Max : We won the second round !
MysteryMan : I told you that Koopa's shells go fast on the water. We are 2nd, VC. Congrats.
VC : Yay ! 🥳
DarkShell : Noooooo !!!! This software needed more time to be created ! The host's gonna hear about me ! 🤬
Toadboi : We're so far from the shore. We need to hurry...
DarkShell : Shut up ! 🤬
Host : And the team of Hampter & Osc-omb just made their way to the shore ! The team of Toadboi and DarkShell has lost the round !
Lemme skip the violent moments and images we got for like, one hour.
Host : It's 4PM, but you have free time. This evening we're gonna talk. See ya at 6PM, in the huts.
Max : Lely, what do you want to do ?
Lely : Going straight to the huts... And to our bedroom. I need to rest, I'm tired.
Max : I'm coming with you.
Lely : Nice ! 😊
At the huts...
Lely : Wanna take a snack ?
Note : The first day they shared a fridge but they have now personal little (cute, as Lely would say) fridges.
Max : I'm hungry so yes. I'm gonna take some ice cream.
Lely : Wanna share mine ? I saw you don't have much remain.
Max : Sure then, which flavor ?
Lely : You choose.
Max : I'm gonna pick this.
Lely : Ok. I'm gonna take some too.
At the beach...
Toadboi : DarkShell, do you wanna play some beach sports ?
DarkShell : Sure, as long as it's virtual.
Toadboi : Ok then play against the computer. 😒
Redshell : Gamerlion, we messed up the two rounds. What are we gonna do.
Gamerlion : We have to face it, don't stop being motivated and we will atleast win one. I'm sure about that.
Redshell : Well, I trust you, but... 😶
Hampter : We were about to lose...
Osc-omb : Chill mate. I'm pretty sure we're gonna handle it as cake.

The end.

The leaderboard (1st wins 10 and 5th wins 0. Which means 2nd win 8, 3rd win 6, but 4th win only 2.

So...

1. Lely-Bros : 20 points
2. VCMan : 10 points
3. Jeyboi : 8 points
3. CoolOmb2009 : 8 points
5. Gamered : 0 point

List of things I noticed :
- I wanted to make a friendship between Max and I since it's my best friend. However it will end up with everyone shipping us and the situation being cringey.
- Toadboi was created to be stupid, but he became perv somehow while I wasn't planning it. Though in this chapter, not really.
- the Line distribution is horrendous. It's basically MKPC Archipel - Lely and Max ft. DarkShell and Toadboi, Special thanks to Redshell and Gamerlion for their participation, uncredited lines by some members called as "CoolHampter2009", "Osc-Omb", "MysteryMan", "VC".

- the chapters' titles are so bad since I don't have any english ideas.
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Messages 579 - Mario Mario
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United States
how about balling
Messages 579 - Mario Mario
vs12748 pts ★ Champion
battle5000 pts ★ Novice
United States
-BTS- wrote:
Launching chapter
Host : Hello to you all. I'm glad to see people there, it's been long since I didn't have anyone to tortu*cough* play with !
Redshell : And what we doing there ?
VC : You accepted to come, bruh.
Redshell : Dude I just wanna know what we doing there.
VC : So shut up and let's listen to him.
Redshell : But what we doing there ?
VC : You stupid.
Host : So yeah, welcome to MKPC Archipel. That's a tropical island where you can eat a lot of exotic fruits and stuff... It has verdant forests and you can walk on beaches when sun is setting.
Max : ... but ?
Host : You'll be paired, yup. With whoever you want. You'll have to showdown sometimes. But you'll have free time too. So... Have a nice day finding your huts by yourself. They're pretty comfortable, but you'll have to sleep together--
Toadboi : 😏😏😏
Lely : That's absolutely disgusting. 😒
Max : Ew. I'm not sleeping with you Toadboi.
Arrived to the huts...
Max : Well they're simple but they looks so comfortable ! Look at this sofa !
😴...
DarkShell : I'm gonna take the biggest room, I need personal space.
Gamerlion : Please stop being savage. I wanna be friend with you... 🥺
DarkShell : Get outta my view ! 😤
Gamerlion : 😭
Lely : Hey ! Be nice to him or else ! 🤬
DarkShell : You wouldn't cause much damage, you're 11 years old, kidass. 😒
Lely : ⚒️😘
DarkShell : What could you do to me LMAO.
Lely : Ummm... Death, several injuries, aches, being in pain while moving... 🤔
MysteryMan : Guys please stop. Lely, please leave this rude ass be. DarkShell, frick off.
VC : Or else we're throwing your dark shell outta here and it will broke in a million pieces.
Osc-omb : Hey let's chill. It's 12AM. Wanna take a snack ? 😋
Toadboi : The only snack is me 😏😏😏
Hampter : Sorry but you're not even cute or anything. 😘
Toadboi : Shut up, I'm so hot. 🤤🥵
Max : Didn't knew he is forced to tell the opposite of what he is...
Toadboi : Roast me harder, daddy 😏
Lely : Stop it...
MysteryMan : They left 🍣 and some fried meat.
Lely : Lemme eat all the sushis or you'll become one 🤬
Max : Sure Lely.
Fways : Sushi shouldn't be edible lol
Lely : How is he here ? 😱
Everyone : Who ? 🧐
Lely : Guess I'm becoming crazier and crazier... 😐
MysteryMan : You eat whatever you want. They also put some veggie things, in case any of us would want to eat this.
VC : Anyways, do I look pretty ? 🤔
Max : Sort of.
Redshell : Yeah.
Gamerlion : Yes you really do. 🤩
VC : Awww, thanks. 🥰
DarkShell : No, you look 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
Max : Stop it DarkShell ! That's not nice ! 😤
DarkShell : Come on I'm not a crybaby, I'm afraid of nothing. 😎
Hampter : Uh, why is there a spider on your shoulder ? 😖
DarkShell : Haaa ! 😰
Lely : AAAAAAAAEEEEEEE 😱😱😱😱😱
Max : It's enormous and it's... Horrendous. 😨
Osc-omb : Come on guys. Take a quick snack and let's go to the beach. Our host is certainly waiting us right there.
MysteryMan : Sure Baby Bomb. 🙂
Osc-omb : I'm not a baby ! 😑
Arrived to the beach...
Host : You like the place ?
Lely : Yeah, it feels like Gelato Beach.
Max : Anyways, what's the challenge ?
Host : That's simple. You see those wooden bars over the sea ?
Everybody : Yep. 🤔
Host : You'll have to stand there for the longest possible time. The last who falls is winning.
Max : And what do we win ?
Host : You'll see later. Now... See you later !
Everybody appeared on the bars. The challenge is starting.
After 2 hours...
MysteryMan : Aish, my arms are so tired. 😩
Max : Let's say I have another problem.
Lely : What's the problem Max ? 🙁
Max : Look, I have to go to the bathroom really bad. It's painful to stay here, while hearing the waves moving. 😖
Lely : Guess you'll have to hold it... 😕
Max : It's really hard though, it's pressuring on my abs, while I'm stucked on this freaking bar... 😑
Lely : Look, I also have to go to the bathroom... But we can't leave like this. And I'm not gonna lose this for a freaking stupid need.
Hours later...
Max : Lely, I feel like I'm dying by inside...😣
Lely : Me too but we're the two last. We just have to wait DarkShell to fall--
*DarkShell falling*
Max : Yay ! 😓
Host : Congrats to Max and Lely because they have won... Ah yeah, I forgot to mention : there is 2 winners per round. Now you're free, take a break !
*Max and Lely arguing on their way back home while walking fast*
Max : I was focused on this freaking stupid need during all the round so I think we did incredible, without realizing it.
Lely : But getting stucked on a bar was a bad experience. And let's say we weren't in the best settings to do this. Anyways Max, you okay with us pairing ? Because I have to admit, I like you...
Max : No, I was about to suggest it to you. ^^
Lely : Nice ! Thanks. 😁
Max : Anything for you to be happy. Wanna do something this evening ?
Lely : Nothing special, just spending time together. I don't feel in ease with the others, I don't know why. Oh look, there's a cute crab over here !
After a sunset stroll on the beach, and various activities, everybody got back to the camp.
During the dinner...

DarkShell : I and Toadboi decided to pair !
Lely : I'm gonna avoid this team as much as possible.
Max : I paired with Lely, he's very nice ! 😁
*Lely's blushing*
Redshell : I don't paired with anyone so far...
Hampter : I paired with Osc-omb, he's genius like me.
VC : And I paired with MysteryMan.

This evening, let's say they were having fun. It would be less fun tomorrow, but after all, let them have fun. It was a nice evening for everbuddy and the pairs slept together (so Redshell paired with Gamerlion). They're all sleeping and that's why I'm whispering. See you tomorrow... For the next chapter !

Yeah I did it.
That's done. I'm not respecting personnalities you gave, sorry.
Give a feedback please !

why is this so gay? besides like i said i dont care you hurt my feewings so idc also i dont care bout dat i just like saying stupid stuff
Messages 579 - Mario Mario
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Here's a more accurate trait description of ya boi:

- Basically Deadpool, so if i lose my legs, they grow back. But unlike him, it grows back slower.

- Hates working in groups, would rather be a lone wolf.

- Can breathe underwater for up to a day.

- Somewhat quick and strong

- a little sexist (has a minimal preferrence of males over females)

- No flirting.

- Agile with all weapons

- 4th wall breaker
mario_facepalm1
Messages 579 - Mario Mario
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battle5000 pts ★ Novice
United States
imma make up how it would go

Toadpool: imma go underwater and stick knives through peoples boats >:] ;)
the guy im with: W/hat NO WTF NO YOU IDIOT
Toadpool: L+ratio and i didnt ask
(does the thing to someones boat [not hampter tho])
that guy: Hey! get away from our boat idiot!
Toadpool: what are you gonna do bout it?
that guy: Well I - . I could - Huh. I could kill. you.
Toadpool: You cant loser +ratio (swims away, but also throws a knife out backwards. it misses.)
Messages 579 - Mario Mario
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battle5000 pts ★ Novice
United States
this show is very goofy aah
Messages 11442 - King Mario King Mario
vs35065 pts ★ Legend
battle6102 pts ★ Racer
France
-BTS- wrote:
Launching chapter
Host : Hello to you all. I'm glad to see people there, it's been long since I didn't have anyone to tortu*cough* play with !
Redshell : And what we doing there ?
VC : You accepted to come, bruh.
Redshell : Dude I just wanna know what we doing there.
VC : So shut up and let's listen to him.
Redshell : But what we doing there ?
VC : You stupid.
Host : So yeah, welcome to MKPC Archipel. That's a tropical island where you can eat a lot of exotic fruits and stuff... It has verdant forests and you can walk on beaches when sun is setting.
Max : ... but ?
Host : You'll be paired, yup. With whoever you want. You'll have to showdown sometimes. But you'll have free time too. So... Have a nice day finding your huts by yourself. They're pretty comfortable, but you'll have to sleep together--
Toadboi : 😏😏😏
Lely : That's absolutely disgusting. 😒
Max : Ew. I'm not sleeping with you Toadboi.
Arrived to the huts...
Max : Well they're simple but they looks so comfortable ! Look at this sofa !
😴...
DarkShell : I'm gonna take the biggest room, I need personal space.
Gamerlion : Please stop being savage. I wanna be friend with you... 🥺
DarkShell : Get outta my view ! 😤
Gamerlion : 😭
Lely : Hey ! Be nice to him or else ! 🤬
DarkShell : You wouldn't cause much damage, you're 11 years old, kidass. 😒
Lely : ⚒️😘
DarkShell : What could you do to me LMAO.
Lely : Ummm... Death, several injuries, aches, being in pain while moving... 🤔
MysteryMan : Guys please stop. Lely, please leave this rude ass be. DarkShell, frick off.
VC : Or else we're throwing your dark shell outta here and it will broke in a million pieces.
Osc-omb : Hey let's chill. It's 12AM. Wanna take a snack ? 😋
Toadboi : The only snack is me 😏😏😏
Hampter : Sorry but you're not even cute or anything. 😘
Toadboi : Shut up, I'm so hot. 🤤🥵
Max : Didn't knew he is forced to tell the opposite of what he is...
Toadboi : Roast me harder, daddy 😏
Lely : Stop it...
MysteryMan : They left 🍣 and some fried meat.
Lely : Lemme eat all the sushis or you'll become one 🤬
Max : Sure Lely.
Fways : Sushi shouldn't be edible lol
Lely : How is he here ? 😱
Everyone : Who ? 🧐
Lely : Guess I'm becoming crazier and crazier... 😐
MysteryMan : You eat whatever you want. They also put some veggie things, in case any of us would want to eat this.
VC : Anyways, do I look pretty ? 🤔
Max : Sort of.
Redshell : Yeah.
Gamerlion : Yes you really do. 🤩
VC : Awww, thanks. 🥰
DarkShell : No, you look 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
Max : Stop it DarkShell ! That's not nice ! 😤
DarkShell : Come on I'm not a crybaby, I'm afraid of nothing. 😎
Hampter : Uh, why is there a spider on your shoulder ? 😖
DarkShell : Haaa ! 😰
Lely : AAAAAAAAEEEEEEE 😱😱😱😱😱
Max : It's enormous and it's... Horrendous. 😨
Osc-omb : Come on guys. Take a quick snack and let's go to the beach. Our host is certainly waiting us right there.
MysteryMan : Sure Baby Bomb. 🙂
Osc-omb : I'm not a baby ! 😑
Arrived to the beach...
Host : You like the place ?
Lely : Yeah, it feels like Gelato Beach.
Max : Anyways, what's the challenge ?
Host : That's simple. You see those wooden bars over the sea ?
Everybody : Yep. 🤔
Host : You'll have to stand there for the longest possible time. The last who falls is winning.
Max : And what do we win ?
Host : You'll see later. Now... See you later !
Everybody appeared on the bars. The challenge is starting.
After 2 hours...
MysteryMan : Aish, my arms are so tired. 😩
Max : Let's say I have another problem.
Lely : What's the problem Max ? 🙁
Max : Look, I have to go to the bathroom really bad. It's painful to stay here, while hearing the waves moving. 😖
Lely : Guess you'll have to hold it... 😕
Max : It's really hard though, it's pressuring on my abs, while I'm stucked on this freaking bar... 😑
Lely : Look, I also have to go to the bathroom... But we can't leave like this. And I'm not gonna lose this for a freaking stupid need.
Hours later...
Max : Lely, I feel like I'm dying by inside...😣
Lely : Me too but we're the two last. We just have to wait DarkShell to fall--
*DarkShell falling*
Max : Yay ! 😓
Host : Congrats to Max and Lely because they have won... Ah yeah, I forgot to mention : there is 2 winners per round. Now you're free, take a break !
*Max and Lely arguing on their way back home while walking fast*
Max : I was focused on this freaking stupid need during all the round so I think we did incredible, without realizing it.
Lely : But getting stucked on a bar was a bad experience. And let's say we weren't in the best settings to do this. Anyways Max, you okay with us pairing ? Because I have to admit, I like you...
Max : No, I was about to suggest it to you. ^^
Lely : Nice ! Thanks. 😁
Max : Anything for you to be happy. Wanna do something this evening ?
Lely : Nothing special, just spending time together. I don't feel in ease with the others, I don't know why. Oh look, there's a cute crab over here !
After a sunset stroll on the beach, and various activities, everybody got back to the camp.
During the dinner...

DarkShell : I and Toadboi decided to pair !
Lely : I'm gonna avoid this team as much as possible.
Max : I paired with Lely, he's very nice ! 😁
*Lely's blushing*
Redshell : I don't paired with anyone so far...
Hampter : I paired with Osc-omb, he's genius like me.
VC : And I paired with MysteryMan.

This evening, let's say they were having fun. It would be less fun tomorrow, but after all, let them have fun. It was a nice evening for everbuddy and the pairs slept together (so Redshell paired with Gamerlion). They're all sleeping and that's why I'm whispering. See you tomorrow... For the next chapter !

Yeah I did it.
That's done. I'm not respecting personnalities you gave, sorry.
Give a feedback please !

why is this so gay? besides like i said i dont care you hurt my feewings so idc also i dont care bout dat i just like saying stupid stuff

You're not necessarily gay. You're just a perv, flirting with everyone.
Messages 2487 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
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I am intrigued as to how you got my personality right with how silent I am on the forum
Messages 2376 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
vs71844 pts ★ Titan
battle15632 pts ★ Master
Japan
more accurate personality
- brave
- competitive (not too competitive)
- somewhat childish
- competent
- lazy
Messages 11442 - King Mario King Mario
vs35065 pts ★ Legend
battle6102 pts ★ Racer
France
16Bits wrote:
more accurate personality
- brave
- competitive (not too competitive)
- somewhat childish
- competent
- lazy

I'll try to.
ok1
Messages 222 - Toad Toad
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Can I write a mini chapter (I’ll remove it if you hate it :/)
Chapter Who Cares: I Forgor ☠️
(Takes place after the twist of the shared rooms is revealed.)
Helly: Share rooms together hah LOL +ratio and L
Ya Boi: Ew. That’s the gay part. Oh. Hello. Your probably wondering how I got into this hellhole. Well, their name rhymes with Helly. They even tried to saw off my balls! So… I pulled out my kniverinos. But, they still sacked me and some others onto this ghetto dump. And that’s it. It’s kinda… sus.
Max: I agree, this show be goofy ahh
Helly: No one cares about you.
Max : :( :( :( :(
Ya Boi: Can I be with myself? I’m better of alone. Also it’s still goofy ahh.
Helly: No.
Darkshell: Uuuuuh YOU SUCK and I uh think you smell like ass, Toadboi.
Ya Boi: Oh come on! I wash my ass at least twice a week! Also, I refuse to take those seriously if they forget my triumphant “i”s. All five.
Osc-omb: Guys! Someone’s missing!
Helly: It’s CoolHampter, he left.
VC: Wait wait wait. We can just.. leave?
Helly: No. he left before this began. The nine of you are still stuck.
Ya Boi: Wanna bet? (Pulls out the knives.)


D E L E T E   T H I S

(It's subjective)
Messages 11442 - King Mario King Mario
vs35065 pts ★ Legend
battle6102 pts ★ Racer
France
Can I write a mini chapter (I’ll remove it if you hate it :/)
Chapter Who Cares: I Forgor ☠️
(Takes place after the twist of the shared rooms is revealed.)
Host: Share rooms together hah LOL +ratio and L
Ya Boi: Ew. That’s the gay part. Oh. Hello. Your probably wondering how I got into this hellhole. Well, their name rhymes with Helly. They even tried to saw off my balls! So… I pulled out my kniverinos. But, they still sacked me and some others onto this ghetto dump. And that’s it. It’s kinda… sus.
Max: I agree, this show be goofy ahh
Host: No one cares about you.
Max : :( :( :( :(
Ya Boi: Can I be with myself? I’m better of alone. Also it’s still goofy ahh.
Helly: No.
Darkshell: Uuuuuh YOU SUCK and I uh think you smell like ass, Toadboi.
Ya Boi: Oh come on! I wash my ass at least twice a week! Also, I refuse to take those seriously if they forget my triumphant “i”s. All five.
Osc-omb: Guys! Someone’s missing!
Lely: It’s CoolHampter, he left.
VC: Wait wait wait. We can just.. leave?
Host: No. he left before this began. The nine of you are still stuck.
Ya Boi: Wanna bet? (Pulls out the knives.)
16Bits: What is going on here?
Lely: I dont know. Some conflict about the shared rooms.
VC: Well, if we must..
Host: Yea. You do.
Ya Boi: You win, I guess. Well, who will- aaand everyone already paired up. Welp. Looks like I'm stuck with DarkShell. Wait, how is Hampter back?
Host: Cloner.
Osc-omb: Oh. That makes more sense.


Well I was about to refuse anyways but sorry. This chapter is horrendous to me. It doesn't fit AT ALL. The perv side has to be implicit or else it'll be very cringe. The host shouldn't be rude. Some sentences are either stupid, either poorly wrote. "Ya boi" That's a no no. Plus you're adding completely random characters to the story. The issue with collaborative fanfics : if I let someone co-write the story, the story is gonna take a direction I don't want to be taken. The personnalities are off and random, they sounds like they're changing every sentence. So now...
THAT'S A NO NO
Messages 579 - Mario Mario
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Can you at least fix my personality I would much rather be a solo assassin who can’t die than some.. pervert. If you don’t… well..
ok1
Messages 226 - Toad Toad
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Canada
you can't be immortal. that's cheating.
Messages 579 - Mario Mario
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United States
Well I can die, but I have my healing factor. I think brain damage would kill me. And maybe burning.
cross2
Messages 11442 - King Mario King Mario
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battle6102 pts ★ Racer
France
Actually, you're becoming a solo person that hates teamwork, but for now, no assassin, and no healing factor.
Messages 5404 - King Mario King Mario
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battle6798 pts ★ Racer
United Kingdom
-BTS- wrote:
Chapter 1B : I'mma just end the second round.
Host : Packs done ? If so the explosion's coming ! 3, 2, 1...
*enormous explosion* 💥
VC : Ouch, our boat is shaking more than Toadboi's bed. 😖
MysteryMan : Let's break the rooftop as fast as possible. 🤛 We have to make our way to the shoreline. 🏝️
Lely : Max, are you ready ?
Max : Yeah I'm all ready.
Lely : Kick the roof out please. You're Snorlax, you're strong. 💪
Meanwhile Hampter and Osc-omb are struggling to break the whole iron protection they just put.
Hampter : I'm a little bunny, I can't break iron. Please cause another explosion.
Osc-omb : Sadly I can't, I would die.
Hampter : Try to go right through the wall !
Lely : We just have 5 meters to swim.
Max : We won the second round !
MysteryMan : I told you that Koopa's shells go fast on the water. We are 2nd, VC. Congrats.
VC : Yay ! 🥳
DarkShell : Noooooo !!!! This software needed more time to be created ! The host's gonna hear about me ! 🤬
Toadboi : We're so far from the shore. We need to hurry...
DarkShell : Shut up ! 🤬
Host : And the team of Hampter & Osc-omb just made their way to the shore ! The team of Toadboi and DarkShell has lost the round !
Lemme skip the violent moments and images we got for like, one hour.
Host : It's 4PM, but you have free time. This evening we're gonna talk. See ya at 6PM, in the huts.
Max : Lely, what do you want to do ?
Lely : Going straight to the huts... And to our bedroom. I need to rest, I'm tired.
Max : I'm coming with you.
Lely : Nice ! 😊
At the huts...
Lely : Wanna take a snack ?
Note : The first day they shared a fridge but they have now personal little (cute, as Lely would say) fridges.
Max : I'm hungry so yes. I'm gonna take some ice cream.
Lely : Wanna share mine ? I saw you don't have much remain.
Max : Sure then, which flavor ?
Lely : You choose.
Max : I'm gonna pick this.
Lely : Ok. I'm gonna take some too.
At the beach...
Toadboi : DarkShell, do you wanna play some beach sports ?
DarkShell : Sure, as long as it's virtual.
Toadboi : Ok then play against the computer. 😒
Redshell : Gamerlion, we messed up the two rounds. What are we gonna do.
Gamerlion : We have to face it, don't stop being motivated and we will atleast win one. I'm sure about that.
Redshell : Well, I trust you, but... 😶
Hampter : We were about to lose...
Osc-omb : Chill mate. I'm pretty sure we're gonna handle it as cake.

The end.

The leaderboard (1st wins 10 and 5th wins 0. Which means 2nd win 8, 3rd win 6, but 4th win only 2.

So...

1. Lely-Bros : 20 points
2. VCMan : 10 points
3. Jeyboi : 8 points
3. CoolOmb2009 : 8 points
5. Gamered : 0 point

List of things I noticed :
- I wanted to make a friendship between Max and I since it's my best friend. However it will end up with everyone shipping us and the situation being cringey.
- Toadboi was created to be stupid, but he became perv somehow while I wasn't planning it. Though in this chapter, not really.
- the Line distribution is horrendous. It's basically MKPC Archipel - Lely and Max ft. DarkShell and Toadboi, Special thanks to Redshell and Gamerlion for their participation, uncredited lines by some members called as "CoolHampter2009", "Osc-Omb", "MysteryMan", "VC".

- the chapters' titles are so bad since I don't have any english ideas.

I’ve had a look at my 3 lines and the first 2 are accurate, but the last one sounds like I am demotivated which I normally wouldn’t be. Also I am NOT a quiet person. Having just 3 lines in the whole chapter definitely doesn’t fit me

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