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Yoshi649 wrote:
Lely wrote:
Prologue : Dystopia


MKPCverse, Government Building.

9:29PM. There is an ongoing reunion in the government general quarter to decide what to do about the current state of the land. No violence has yet been observed, but a lot of tension has filled the air.

Wal68 : Since Peacegor has retired, I am required to be the president. But I really don't know what to do for the tension to stop. I don't believe we can reduce the tension in like, every city. That is impossible.
Max : I don't know either. This situation is way too much for me to handle.
Wal68 : We need to do something though. The citizens are getting angry at us, I'm pretty surprised no attack has been done yet--

As he says that, a huge bomb is seen flying towards the building. It breaks a window and ends up in the reunion room. A countdown starts.

10.

Wal68 : WHAT ?? WE HAVE BEEN ATTACKED !

9.

Max : Oh my God... RUN ! GET OUT OF THIS PLACE !

8.

Security guy : Hey ! I heard something-- A BOMB ??

7.

Max : Hurry up and get out while you still can!

6.

Wal68 : THERE IS STILL STUFF INSIDE !

5.

Max : SAVE THE MAIN COMPUTER ! THERE IS IMPORTANT DATA IN IT !

4.

Wal : runs towards the computer and grabs it

3.

Max : HURRY UP !!!!

2.

Wal : runs back and gets out along with Max

1.

Max : TO THE GROUND !!!!

0.


Mushrestaurant.

9:29PM. Lely is the only one cooking for the night as a lot of employees got sick. He is panicking and almost messing out some meals, but manages to make all of them correctly anyways.

Lely : has a breakdown in the kitchens I can't do this... all the customers are so picky... how do you make sushi without rice ? How do you do a lactose free ice cream ? Let's try to continue... wait, who the hell put oil on the stove ? IT'S GOING TO--

As he says that, the oil touches the fire, burning down a whole part of the kitchen. The fire alarm is triggered and water falls from the ceiling. In every room, though. So water falls on the customers. The boss of the restaurant arrives.

Boss : WHAT THE HELL LELY ? THE RESTAURANT IS FLOODED ! A LOT OF CUSTOMERS SAID THEY WOULD FILE A LAWSUIT AGAINST US ! WHY WEREN'T YOU IN THE KITCHEN HUH ?
Lely : I-I can't be in both the k-kitchen and in the waiting room at the s-same time... I'm truly sorry, I don't know who did this...
Boss : YOU. ARE. FIRED !!!

Lely is left sobbing alone, as a customer approaches him.

Miles : Hey... it's okay. You should check the security cameras. They'll tell you who dunnit.

Track Making Factory.

9:29PM, the employees are about to go home because their shift ended.

Babymario : We are making really good progress ! Cheep Cheep Cavern should be done soon, we just have to check the lighting of the track.
Blobby : For the lighting, it should be quite low, except on the outside of the cavern where it should be regular. The lighting in the cavern should be dim and natural, like with torches ?
Oscar : That's a really good idea ! What you're saying is really interesting.
SM7 : Who wants to test the track ? I could do it if you want--

As he said that, the racetrack they made started to break apart. Several bombs fell on the work of one whole month, and it broke apart slowly.

Babymario : WAIT- WAIT WHAT- WHERE IS IT COMING FROM ??
Blobby : I don't know... but we should get out, it seems dangerous.

Suddenly, a bigger bomb fell and it was slowly counting down.

Oscar : RUN !

3.

SM7 : OUR TRACK !! NO !!

2.

Babymario : There's no time !!

1.

Blobby : RUN !!!

0.

MKPC Mall.

9:29PM. Dudzi, working as a cashier in this huge mall, was ending the day with several customers that hurried their carts at him.

Dudzi : Would you like to pay by card, or by cash ? Man, I hate this job. What ? No, I didn't say anything. You must be dreaming. If only I could do something that I like... what ? No I still didn't say anything. You can go, someone else is waiting to collect their items. Man their voices are so useless I can't even hear what they're saying.
Customer : If you hear this, RUN.
Dudzi : I should probably get out of this place- Excuse me what?

Suddenly, a wall in the mall started breaking apart, seemingly because someone was hammering it. And the whole mall started tearing apart, falling down on itself slowly. Everybody started running.

Dudzi : Ah, finally some action. Wait, I might need to get out of here.

Dudzi started running out of the mall, reaching the exit in a few seconds. The mall crumbled on itself. A few people died in the remains. The police arrived, as well as some detective.

David : Yeah, they're dead ! Just like the dmps characters. Man, I love when people die. It makes my life useful and a little bit more exciting. Now I have to find out who did it. Let's accuse a random guy... yeah,you over there smirks while looking at Dudzi

Dudzi : WHAT ? I DIDN'T EVEN-- I DIDN'T EVEN STAND UP-- NO !! PLEASE !!!

Policeman : Excuse me, but you have to come with us. We will have some explaining to do. This is terrorism.

David : aw man, people are so gullible.


MKPC's Hospital

9:29PM. Fiery is running through the hallways, completely overworked.

Fiery : Man I literally just need to use the bathroom, but I have no time for that. I have been waiting 3 hours, enough is enough. I'm taking a break.

As he entered the bathrooms, he noticed something odd.

Fiery : Why... is the stall... overflowing... I can't even use it. Ah, shit. Let's put the out of order sign before someone--

As he said that, the sink exploded and flooded the room. Since the door was still open, the water started running in the hallways, Fiery being dragged by the wave.

Fiery : AHHHH !!!

The hospital was eventually flooded, hundreds of people died because they drowned in the flow, some survived because they fel into the pond next to the hospital, including Fiery.


News Presentation General Quarter.

9:34PM. Five accidents have occured in the kingdom. Nobody knows who did it. The news presentator is now alerting the rest of the citizens.

UraniumMan : Hello dear MKPCians. Breaking news : five terrorist attacks just occured in the land. Nobody knows who did it, there is no evidence. The only detective available, David, accused Dudzi. But the police interviewed him and he doesn't seem realistically capable of being the culprit. So who is it ? I don't know. Nobody does. The attacks are : a huge bomb thrown on the government's general quarter, oil poured near fire in Mushrestaurant, several bombs thrown into the Track Making Factory, several hammer blows on MKPC Mall and the canalisations of MKPC's Hospital being destroyed by someone. I will now leave you to Miles, a survivor of the accident in Mushrestaurant, who works for us and is now interviewing two celebrities to know their point of view on the situation.

Miles : So here I am, with Leadgaming and Scorchy. So, what do you both think about the ongoing... terror in MKPCverse?
Leadgaming : I don't really care. It had to burst at some point. I was a car ambassador owning many of these beautiful jewels, I still am. Terrorist attacks never affected me and they never will. Be a leader and you won't get hurt.
Miles : That mindset is terrible- UH I meant to say particular. Now Scorchy, what's your point of view on the situation?
Scorchy : Well I think this is absolutely TERRIFYING, the land is in complete doom right now, and I think I am lucky to not be a victim of any of these accidents. I was performing one of my songs, as usual since I am a singer, and I saw five places blow up and crumble under the sunset's colors. All were lit up by the city lights. It was a terrifying scene. The tension has won over the peace.
Miles : Indeed, this was such a frightening experience.

UraniumMan : So this concludes our news presentation as for today. Goodbye !


VC's house.

9:34PM, VC is sitting alone at the table.

VC : Hahaha... I... I'm not insane ! But. But ! The tension... and now the apocalypse... they have taken over me. I will now... become what I always hoped I wouldn't be... a ghost... Hahaha...

And just like that, she became a ghost.

VC : Wow, this actually makes my mind feel... peaceful. I will be haunting the town now, just like they haunted my mind. Haha...


Peacegor Street.

9:34PM, Dietsoda and K are walking peacefully in the streets.

K : Have you heard about the five... attacks ?
Dietsoda : Yeah, of course I did.
K : It just... scares me. What if me, and what if you... ended up in danger ?
Dietsoda : I'm telling you right now, I am doing EVERYTHING to survive.
K : Me too. I want to protect my friends, and the innocents as well.  
Dietsoda : Hah... personnally, I just want to die in a glorious combat.
K : I don't know. I have a bad feeling about this.
Dietsoda : Oh, I've always had a bad feeling since two months... everything felt so tense, now it all broke down. I don't know if that's for the best, though..

Is it for the best ?

Or will it get worse ?

Find out in the next chapter...


The Dark Ages of MKPC
Prologue


The end...

I liked my character in the plot, I hope Jason appears

Who... is Jason ?
But thank you anyways :)
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Lely wrote:
Yoshi649 wrote:
Lely wrote:
Prologue : Dystopia


MKPCverse, Government Building.

9:29PM. There is an ongoing reunion in the government general quarter to decide what to do about the current state of the land. No violence has yet been observed, but a lot of tension has filled the air.

Wal68 : Since Peacegor has retired, I am required to be the president. But I really don't know what to do for the tension to stop. I don't believe we can reduce the tension in like, every city. That is impossible.
Max : I don't know either. This situation is way too much for me to handle.
Wal68 : We need to do something though. The citizens are getting angry at us, I'm pretty surprised no attack has been done yet--

As he says that, a huge bomb is seen flying towards the building. It breaks a window and ends up in the reunion room. A countdown starts.

10.

Wal68 : WHAT ?? WE HAVE BEEN ATTACKED !

9.

Max : Oh my God... RUN ! GET OUT OF THIS PLACE !

8.

Security guy : Hey ! I heard something-- A BOMB ??

7.

Max : Hurry up and get out while you still can!

6.

Wal68 : THERE IS STILL STUFF INSIDE !

5.

Max : SAVE THE MAIN COMPUTER ! THERE IS IMPORTANT DATA IN IT !

4.

Wal : runs towards the computer and grabs it

3.

Max : HURRY UP !!!!

2.

Wal : runs back and gets out along with Max

1.

Max : TO THE GROUND !!!!

0.


Mushrestaurant.

9:29PM. Lely is the only one cooking for the night as a lot of employees got sick. He is panicking and almost messing out some meals, but manages to make all of them correctly anyways.

Lely : has a breakdown in the kitchens I can't do this... all the customers are so picky... how do you make sushi without rice ? How do you do a lactose free ice cream ? Let's try to continue... wait, who the hell put oil on the stove ? IT'S GOING TO--

As he says that, the oil touches the fire, burning down a whole part of the kitchen. The fire alarm is triggered and water falls from the ceiling. In every room, though. So water falls on the customers. The boss of the restaurant arrives.

Boss : WHAT THE HELL LELY ? THE RESTAURANT IS FLOODED ! A LOT OF CUSTOMERS SAID THEY WOULD FILE A LAWSUIT AGAINST US ! WHY WEREN'T YOU IN THE KITCHEN HUH ?
Lely : I-I can't be in both the k-kitchen and in the waiting room at the s-same time... I'm truly sorry, I don't know who did this...
Boss : YOU. ARE. FIRED !!!

Lely is left sobbing alone, as a customer approaches him.

Miles : Hey... it's okay. You should check the security cameras. They'll tell you who dunnit.

Track Making Factory.

9:29PM, the employees are about to go home because their shift ended.

Babymario : We are making really good progress ! Cheep Cheep Cavern should be done soon, we just have to check the lighting of the track.
Blobby : For the lighting, it should be quite low, except on the outside of the cavern where it should be regular. The lighting in the cavern should be dim and natural, like with torches ?
Oscar : That's a really good idea ! What you're saying is really interesting.
SM7 : Who wants to test the track ? I could do it if you want--

As he said that, the racetrack they made started to break apart. Several bombs fell on the work of one whole month, and it broke apart slowly.

Babymario : WAIT- WAIT WHAT- WHERE IS IT COMING FROM ??
Blobby : I don't know... but we should get out, it seems dangerous.

Suddenly, a bigger bomb fell and it was slowly counting down.

Oscar : RUN !

3.

SM7 : OUR TRACK !! NO !!

2.

Babymario : There's no time !!

1.

Blobby : RUN !!!

0.

MKPC Mall.

9:29PM. Dudzi, working as a cashier in this huge mall, was ending the day with several customers that hurried their carts at him.

Dudzi : Would you like to pay by card, or by cash ? Man, I hate this job. What ? No, I didn't say anything. You must be dreaming. If only I could do something that I like... what ? No I still didn't say anything. You can go, someone else is waiting to collect their items. Man their voices are so useless I can't even hear what they're saying.
Customer : If you hear this, RUN.
Dudzi : I should probably get out of this place- Excuse me what?

Suddenly, a wall in the mall started breaking apart, seemingly because someone was hammering it. And the whole mall started tearing apart, falling down on itself slowly. Everybody started running.

Dudzi : Ah, finally some action. Wait, I might need to get out of here.

Dudzi started running out of the mall, reaching the exit in a few seconds. The mall crumbled on itself. A few people died in the remains. The police arrived, as well as some detective.

David : Yeah, they're dead ! Just like the dmps characters. Man, I love when people die. It makes my life useful and a little bit more exciting. Now I have to find out who did it. Let's accuse a random guy... yeah,you over there smirks while looking at Dudzi

Dudzi : WHAT ? I DIDN'T EVEN-- I DIDN'T EVEN STAND UP-- NO !! PLEASE !!!

Policeman : Excuse me, but you have to come with us. We will have some explaining to do. This is terrorism.

David : aw man, people are so gullible.


MKPC's Hospital

9:29PM. Fiery is running through the hallways, completely overworked.

Fiery : Man I literally just need to use the bathroom, but I have no time for that. I have been waiting 3 hours, enough is enough. I'm taking a break.

As he entered the bathrooms, he noticed something odd.

Fiery : Why... is the stall... overflowing... I can't even use it. Ah, shit. Let's put the out of order sign before someone--

As he said that, the sink exploded and flooded the room. Since the door was still open, the water started running in the hallways, Fiery being dragged by the wave.

Fiery : AHHHH !!!

The hospital was eventually flooded, hundreds of people died because they drowned in the flow, some survived because they fel into the pond next to the hospital, including Fiery.


News Presentation General Quarter.

9:34PM. Five accidents have occured in the kingdom. Nobody knows who did it. The news presentator is now alerting the rest of the citizens.

UraniumMan : Hello dear MKPCians. Breaking news : five terrorist attacks just occured in the land. Nobody knows who did it, there is no evidence. The only detective available, David, accused Dudzi. But the police interviewed him and he doesn't seem realistically capable of being the culprit. So who is it ? I don't know. Nobody does. The attacks are : a huge bomb thrown on the government's general quarter, oil poured near fire in Mushrestaurant, several bombs thrown into the Track Making Factory, several hammer blows on MKPC Mall and the canalisations of MKPC's Hospital being destroyed by someone. I will now leave you to Miles, a survivor of the accident in Mushrestaurant, who works for us and is now interviewing two celebrities to know their point of view on the situation.

Miles : So here I am, with Leadgaming and Scorchy. So, what do you both think about the ongoing... terror in MKPCverse?
Leadgaming : I don't really care. It had to burst at some point. I was a car ambassador owning many of these beautiful jewels, I still am. Terrorist attacks never affected me and they never will. Be a leader and you won't get hurt.
Miles : That mindset is terrible- UH I meant to say particular. Now Scorchy, what's your point of view on the situation?
Scorchy : Well I think this is absolutely TERRIFYING, the land is in complete doom right now, and I think I am lucky to not be a victim of any of these accidents. I was performing one of my songs, as usual since I am a singer, and I saw five places blow up and crumble under the sunset's colors. All were lit up by the city lights. It was a terrifying scene. The tension has won over the peace.
Miles : Indeed, this was such a frightening experience.

UraniumMan : So this concludes our news presentation as for today. Goodbye !


VC's house.

9:34PM, VC is sitting alone at the table.

VC : Hahaha... I... I'm not insane ! But. But ! The tension... and now the apocalypse... they have taken over me. I will now... become what I always hoped I wouldn't be... a ghost... Hahaha...

And just like that, she became a ghost.

VC : Wow, this actually makes my mind feel... peaceful. I will be haunting the town now, just like they haunted my mind. Haha...


Peacegor Street.

9:34PM, Dietsoda and K are walking peacefully in the streets.

K : Have you heard about the five... attacks ?
Dietsoda : Yeah, of course I did.
K : It just... scares me. What if me, and what if you... ended up in danger ?
Dietsoda : I'm telling you right now, I am doing EVERYTHING to survive.
K : Me too. I want to protect my friends, and the innocents as well.  
Dietsoda : Hah... personnally, I just want to die in a glorious combat.
K : I don't know. I have a bad feeling about this.
Dietsoda : Oh, I've always had a bad feeling since two months... everything felt so tense, now it all broke down. I don't know if that's for the best, though..

Is it for the best ?

Or will it get worse ?

Find out in the next chapter...


The Dark Ages of MKPC
Prologue


The end...

I liked my character in the plot, I hope Jason appears

Who... is Jason ?
But thank you anyways :)

jason from friday the 13th
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Chapter 1 : Dark Waltz

10:00PM.
After all these five accidents occurred, these people are united.
They don't have much in common but all lived the same terrorist attacks.
All of them have survived.
But the straw broke the camel's back.
And now hell breaks loose.




MKPCverse's Police Station.

Policeman : So the only detective available accused you. Do you have any evidence to counter this accusation ?
Dudzi : Listen. I was just finishing my shift as a cashier. As I do every single day. I don't have any reason to destroy this mall. I wanted to change my job. I wanted to do something else, but I don't need to destroy the mall for that. And either way, there were customers. I was literally on my chair when I heard someone hit the wall.
Policeman : So there is no concrete proof that you didn't do it.
Dudzi : Does your detective have any concrete proof to accuse me ?
Policeman : ... No.
Dudzi : He doesn't seem very bright.
Policeman : He indeed isn't, but he's the only one.
Dudzi : ... So do I stay here ?
Policeman : ... I guess.



Mushrestaurant.

Lely : So now... I am jobless. But let's see who did that. I am curious, why would someone want me to get fired ? I'm just a poor cook... Ah. I really can't believe that. starts crying But I need to be strong, life ain't going to wait for me.

Lely penetrated the security room. He checked the cameras right before he went back to the kitchens.

??? : enters Hell yeah, this place is going down as well !

Lely : Who... the hell.

??? : I am gonna pour oil right next to the fire so he witnesses it burn... Haha. My job here is done. Let's go back to the GQ now.

And the video ended.

Lely : Wait... who was that ? Who wanted to do that ? And also... "as well" ? They might be a group...
??? : Indeed we are...
Lely : screams AHH ! WHO THE FUCK ARE YOU !
??? : I'm Moon. And you'll discover the rest of us now... come with me. chokes Lely and kidnaps him.
Lely : muffled MFFFF !!! MFFFF !!!!



Swan's Pond

Fiery : Oh my god... the whole hospital has been destroyed. How can we fight crivility now ? Ah shit, it's already nighttime. Time to go back home and quick.



Government Building (or what's left of it)

Max : THIS IS IMPOSSIBLE TO SWALLOW ! CRIMINALITY IS EVEN HIGHER NOW THAT THIS HAPPENED. THE CITY IS DOOMED !
Wal68 : Please quiet down ,I'm listening to the radio...

Through the radio...
UraniumMan : Breaking News : Criminality increased by 78%. Theft increased by 89%. Terrorism increased by 56%. The land is doomed.

Max : This is catastrophic...
Wal68 : We are weak in this situation. We cannot do anything...


Track Building Factory

Blobby : What a disaster...
Oscar : OUR POOR TRACK !!!
SM7 : Only crumbs are left now...
Babymario : All that work is... DOWN THE DRAIN NOW !!!

The four looked at the remains of their old track, devastated.
But there's nothing they could do.




Moon's Repair

Moon : Welcome... to our repair !
Lely : NO ! LEAVE ME ALONE !!!
Moon : Listen to me you little piece of trash, we make the rules here. We had enough power to destroy the peace of a whole land. How did we do ? We were united. That's what made us strong.
Lely : What did we even do to you...
Moon : Shush. If one more tear falls down from your eye, death will await you at the next turn. And what did you do to us ? You made us feel rejected. You always ruled this world with peace, smiles... but tension took over, and nobody blinked an eye. Now war took over, and the power is in our hands now.
Lely : I-I don't want to die...
??? : Oh, we have so much fun to have with you before we die ! How about... torture ?

Lely was traumatised. His feet and hands were tied. He could not do anything. The group approached him.

Moon : You will suffer 24 hours per day. This is a spiderweb. If we pull any string, even lightly, you will be drawn to us. And we will break you. You will belong to us, your mind, soul and body.
??? : Exactly ! We will manipulate you like a puppet... you're about to be imprisoned here forever...

Lely let them imprison him in a cell. He started to write a few words in his phone notes.

In a place where no rules are here to regulate the world, hell breaks loose. Terrible people unite and they become stronger. To be as strong as them, we need to unite.

When he was done, he eventually called the police, making sure to cut the noise. He described the place in an one minute call, before Moon woke up.

Moon : You little unworthy filthy garbage... you better not flinch an eye, because if you do so, that knife will end up right into your face.

Two minutes passed.

Policeman : Hey ! HANDS UP WHERE I CAN SEE THEM !
Moon : Oh my God... LELY YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS YOU ABSOLUTE BITCH !!!

As she said that, she shot towards Lely's cage. The blow didn't reach him as he dodged it, but she shot a few times more. It still didn't touch him.

Lely : AHHH ! SAVE MEEEE ! PLEASE SAVE MEEE !!!
Policeman : Goodbye, you absolute asshole.

He pointed the gun right towards Moon, closed his eyes and shot a bullet at her. She dropped on the floor, as blood was spilling out of her wound.

Moon : AHHHHHHH !!! screams in agony I-I *coughs* YOU WILL NOT GET US !!! I PROMISED TO MY SISTER THAT WE WOULD *coughs* MAKE A WORLD THAT *coughs* CAN FINALLY ACCEPT WHO WE ARE !! *coughs* IF I FAIL *coughs* NO, IF WE FAIL, THEN MY SISTER WILL HAVE DIED FOR NOTHING!
Policeman : Oh, too bad. shoots another bullet at her and kills her.
??? : NOOO ! MOON ! MY GIRLFRIEND !!! NOOOOOOO ! YOU... YOU BITCH ! YOU DESERVE PAIN AND SUFFERING ! DIEEEEEE !!!
Policeman : No, I will not. tries to shoot but the gun is empty Huh ?
??? : ARGGHHHHHHHH !!!! shoots qt the policeman who drops dead on the floor AND NOW YOUR TURN YOU WORM ! points gun at Lely who freed himself from the cage with the keys he found on the ground, but Lely flips it at the last second AHHHH- gets shot and dies as well

.

.

.


Lely : What... no... I am alone... please... someone... anybody... save me...

But suddenly...
Fiery : I AM NOW ARRIVING AT THE CRIME SCENE ! Wait... w-what ? AHHHH !!!! I HAVE A SERIAL KILLER IN FRONT OF ME !!! HE IS ALONE IN FRONT OF THREE CORPSES !!!!
Lely : WHAT ?? NOOOOOO ! I CAN PROMISE YOU THAT- I CAN PROMISE YOU THAT... faints
Fiery : What ? The blood formed a sentence... "WE NEVER DIE, WE ARE EVERYWHERE..." what the hell does that mean ??



The Dark Ages of MKPC
Chapter 1


The end...
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France
Yoshi649 wrote:
Lely wrote:
Yoshi649 wrote:
Lely wrote:
Prologue : Dystopia


MKPCverse, Government Building.

9:29PM. There is an ongoing reunion in the government general quarter to decide what to do about the current state of the land. No violence has yet been observed, but a lot of tension has filled the air.

Wal68 : Since Peacegor has retired, I am required to be the president. But I really don't know what to do for the tension to stop. I don't believe we can reduce the tension in like, every city. That is impossible.
Max : I don't know either. This situation is way too much for me to handle.
Wal68 : We need to do something though. The citizens are getting angry at us, I'm pretty surprised no attack has been done yet--

As he says that, a huge bomb is seen flying towards the building. It breaks a window and ends up in the reunion room. A countdown starts.

10.

Wal68 : WHAT ?? WE HAVE BEEN ATTACKED !

9.

Max : Oh my God... RUN ! GET OUT OF THIS PLACE !

8.

Security guy : Hey ! I heard something-- A BOMB ??

7.

Max : Hurry up and get out while you still can!

6.

Wal68 : THERE IS STILL STUFF INSIDE !

5.

Max : SAVE THE MAIN COMPUTER ! THERE IS IMPORTANT DATA IN IT !

4.

Wal : runs towards the computer and grabs it

3.

Max : HURRY UP !!!!

2.

Wal : runs back and gets out along with Max

1.

Max : TO THE GROUND !!!!

0.


Mushrestaurant.

9:29PM. Lely is the only one cooking for the night as a lot of employees got sick. He is panicking and almost messing out some meals, but manages to make all of them correctly anyways.

Lely : has a breakdown in the kitchens I can't do this... all the customers are so picky... how do you make sushi without rice ? How do you do a lactose free ice cream ? Let's try to continue... wait, who the hell put oil on the stove ? IT'S GOING TO--

As he says that, the oil touches the fire, burning down a whole part of the kitchen. The fire alarm is triggered and water falls from the ceiling. In every room, though. So water falls on the customers. The boss of the restaurant arrives.

Boss : WHAT THE HELL LELY ? THE RESTAURANT IS FLOODED ! A LOT OF CUSTOMERS SAID THEY WOULD FILE A LAWSUIT AGAINST US ! WHY WEREN'T YOU IN THE KITCHEN HUH ?
Lely : I-I can't be in both the k-kitchen and in the waiting room at the s-same time... I'm truly sorry, I don't know who did this...
Boss : YOU. ARE. FIRED !!!

Lely is left sobbing alone, as a customer approaches him.

Miles : Hey... it's okay. You should check the security cameras. They'll tell you who dunnit.

Track Making Factory.

9:29PM, the employees are about to go home because their shift ended.

Babymario : We are making really good progress ! Cheep Cheep Cavern should be done soon, we just have to check the lighting of the track.
Blobby : For the lighting, it should be quite low, except on the outside of the cavern where it should be regular. The lighting in the cavern should be dim and natural, like with torches ?
Oscar : That's a really good idea ! What you're saying is really interesting.
SM7 : Who wants to test the track ? I could do it if you want--

As he said that, the racetrack they made started to break apart. Several bombs fell on the work of one whole month, and it broke apart slowly.

Babymario : WAIT- WAIT WHAT- WHERE IS IT COMING FROM ??
Blobby : I don't know... but we should get out, it seems dangerous.

Suddenly, a bigger bomb fell and it was slowly counting down.

Oscar : RUN !

3.

SM7 : OUR TRACK !! NO !!

2.

Babymario : There's no time !!

1.

Blobby : RUN !!!

0.

MKPC Mall.

9:29PM. Dudzi, working as a cashier in this huge mall, was ending the day with several customers that hurried their carts at him.

Dudzi : Would you like to pay by card, or by cash ? Man, I hate this job. What ? No, I didn't say anything. You must be dreaming. If only I could do something that I like... what ? No I still didn't say anything. You can go, someone else is waiting to collect their items. Man their voices are so useless I can't even hear what they're saying.
Customer : If you hear this, RUN.
Dudzi : I should probably get out of this place- Excuse me what?

Suddenly, a wall in the mall started breaking apart, seemingly because someone was hammering it. And the whole mall started tearing apart, falling down on itself slowly. Everybody started running.

Dudzi : Ah, finally some action. Wait, I might need to get out of here.

Dudzi started running out of the mall, reaching the exit in a few seconds. The mall crumbled on itself. A few people died in the remains. The police arrived, as well as some detective.

David : Yeah, they're dead ! Just like the dmps characters. Man, I love when people die. It makes my life useful and a little bit more exciting. Now I have to find out who did it. Let's accuse a random guy... yeah,you over there smirks while looking at Dudzi

Dudzi : WHAT ? I DIDN'T EVEN-- I DIDN'T EVEN STAND UP-- NO !! PLEASE !!!

Policeman : Excuse me, but you have to come with us. We will have some explaining to do. This is terrorism.

David : aw man, people are so gullible.


MKPC's Hospital

9:29PM. Fiery is running through the hallways, completely overworked.

Fiery : Man I literally just need to use the bathroom, but I have no time for that. I have been waiting 3 hours, enough is enough. I'm taking a break.

As he entered the bathrooms, he noticed something odd.

Fiery : Why... is the stall... overflowing... I can't even use it. Ah, shit. Let's put the out of order sign before someone--

As he said that, the sink exploded and flooded the room. Since the door was still open, the water started running in the hallways, Fiery being dragged by the wave.

Fiery : AHHHH !!!

The hospital was eventually flooded, hundreds of people died because they drowned in the flow, some survived because they fel into the pond next to the hospital, including Fiery.


News Presentation General Quarter.

9:34PM. Five accidents have occured in the kingdom. Nobody knows who did it. The news presentator is now alerting the rest of the citizens.

UraniumMan : Hello dear MKPCians. Breaking news : five terrorist attacks just occured in the land. Nobody knows who did it, there is no evidence. The only detective available, David, accused Dudzi. But the police interviewed him and he doesn't seem realistically capable of being the culprit. So who is it ? I don't know. Nobody does. The attacks are : a huge bomb thrown on the government's general quarter, oil poured near fire in Mushrestaurant, several bombs thrown into the Track Making Factory, several hammer blows on MKPC Mall and the canalisations of MKPC's Hospital being destroyed by someone. I will now leave you to Miles, a survivor of the accident in Mushrestaurant, who works for us and is now interviewing two celebrities to know their point of view on the situation.

Miles : So here I am, with Leadgaming and Scorchy. So, what do you both think about the ongoing... terror in MKPCverse?
Leadgaming : I don't really care. It had to burst at some point. I was a car ambassador owning many of these beautiful jewels, I still am. Terrorist attacks never affected me and they never will. Be a leader and you won't get hurt.
Miles : That mindset is terrible- UH I meant to say particular. Now Scorchy, what's your point of view on the situation?
Scorchy : Well I think this is absolutely TERRIFYING, the land is in complete doom right now, and I think I am lucky to not be a victim of any of these accidents. I was performing one of my songs, as usual since I am a singer, and I saw five places blow up and crumble under the sunset's colors. All were lit up by the city lights. It was a terrifying scene. The tension has won over the peace.
Miles : Indeed, this was such a frightening experience.

UraniumMan : So this concludes our news presentation as for today. Goodbye !


VC's house.

9:34PM, VC is sitting alone at the table.

VC : Hahaha... I... I'm not insane ! But. But ! The tension... and now the apocalypse... they have taken over me. I will now... become what I always hoped I wouldn't be... a ghost... Hahaha...

And just like that, she became a ghost.

VC : Wow, this actually makes my mind feel... peaceful. I will be haunting the town now, just like they haunted my mind. Haha...


Peacegor Street.

9:34PM, Dietsoda and K are walking peacefully in the streets.

K : Have you heard about the five... attacks ?
Dietsoda : Yeah, of course I did.
K : It just... scares me. What if me, and what if you... ended up in danger ?
Dietsoda : I'm telling you right now, I am doing EVERYTHING to survive.
K : Me too. I want to protect my friends, and the innocents as well.  
Dietsoda : Hah... personnally, I just want to die in a glorious combat.
K : I don't know. I have a bad feeling about this.
Dietsoda : Oh, I've always had a bad feeling since two months... everything felt so tense, now it all broke down. I don't know if that's for the best, though..

Is it for the best ?

Or will it get worse ?

Find out in the next chapter...


The Dark Ages of MKPC
Prologue


The end...

I liked my character in the plot, I hope Jason appears

Who... is Jason ?
But thank you anyways :)

jason from friday the 13th

I don't even know who that is, and no he won't appear
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Moon : You will suffer 24 hours per day.

Now, this could be a typo, or a funny way of saying 24/7, but in case it's actually relevant, I've got the conversion rates for each planet in our solar system.
59 Earth Days = 1 Mercury Day
243 Earth Days = 1 Venus Day
1 Earth Day & 37 Earth Seconds = 1 Mars Day
9 Earth Hours & 56 Earth Minutes = 1 Jupiter Day
10 Earth Hours & 34 Earth Minutes = 1 Saturn Day
17 Earth Hours & 14 Earth Minutes = 1 Uranus Day
16 Earth Hours & 6 Earth Minutes = 1 Neptune Day
Which knocks out 4 planets(the Gas Planets). Venus is 100% uninhabitable, which leaves 2 planets: Mercury & Mars. Either Lely was going to get 37 seconds of rest every day or several months. A 50/50 gamble.
Would you take it?
Also Fiery announcing his arrival like some kind of DJ was incredible
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Prologue : Dystopia


MKPCverse, Government Building.

9:29PM. There is an ongoing reunion in the government general quarter to decide what to do about the current state of the land. No violence has yet been observed, but a lot of tension has filled the air.

Wal68 : Since Peacegor has retired, I am required to be the president. But I really don't know what to do for the tension to stop. I don't believe we can reduce the tension in like, every city. That is impossible.
Max : I don't know either. This situation is way too much for me to handle.
Wal68 : We need to do something though. The citizens are getting angry at us, I'm pretty surprised no attack has been done yet--

As he says that, a huge bomb is seen flying towards the building. It breaks a window and ends up in the reunion room. A countdown starts.

10.

Wal68 : WHAT ?? WE HAVE BEEN ATTACKED !

9.

Max : Oh my God... RUN ! GET OUT OF THIS PLACE !

8.

Security guy : Hey ! I heard something-- A BOMB ??

7.

Max : Hurry up and get out while you still can!

6.

Wal68 : THERE IS STILL STUFF INSIDE !

5.

Max : SAVE THE MAIN COMPUTER ! THERE IS IMPORTANT DATA IN IT !

4.

Wal : runs towards the computer and grabs it

3.

Max : HURRY UP !!!!

2.

Wal : runs back and gets out along with Max

1.

Max : TO THE GROUND !!!!

0.


Mushrestaurant.

9:29PM. Lely is the only one cooking for the night as a lot of employees got sick. He is panicking and almost messing out some meals, but manages to make all of them correctly anyways.

Lely : has a breakdown in the kitchens I can't do this... all the customers are so picky... how do you make sushi without rice ? How do you do a lactose free ice cream ? Let's try to continue... wait, who the hell put oil on the stove ? IT'S GOING TO--

As he says that, the oil touches the fire, burning down a whole part of the kitchen. The fire alarm is triggered and water falls from the ceiling. In every room, though. So water falls on the customers. The boss of the restaurant arrives.

Boss : WHAT THE HELL LELY ? THE RESTAURANT IS FLOODED ! A LOT OF CUSTOMERS SAID THEY WOULD FILE A LAWSUIT AGAINST US ! WHY WEREN'T YOU IN THE KITCHEN HUH ?
Lely : I-I can't be in both the k-kitchen and in the waiting room at the s-same time... I'm truly sorry, I don't know who did this...
Boss : YOU. ARE. FIRED !!!

Lely is left sobbing alone, as a customer approaches him.

Miles : Hey... it's okay. You should check the security cameras. They'll tell you who dunnit.

Track Making Factory.

9:29PM, the employees are about to go home because their shift ended.

Babymario : We are making really good progress ! Cheep Cheep Cavern should be done soon, we just have to check the lighting of the track.
Blobby : For the lighting, it should be quite low, except on the outside of the cavern where it should be regular. The lighting in the cavern should be dim and natural, like with torches ?
Oscar : That's a really good idea ! What you're saying is really interesting.
SM7 : Who wants to test the track ? I could do it if you want--

As he said that, the racetrack they made started to break apart. Several bombs fell on the work of one whole month, and it broke apart slowly.

Babymario : WAIT- WAIT WHAT- WHERE IS IT COMING FROM ??
Blobby : I don't know... but we should get out, it seems dangerous.

Suddenly, a bigger bomb fell and it was slowly counting down.

Oscar : RUN !

3.

SM7 : OUR TRACK !! NO !!

2.

Babymario : There's no time !!

1.

Blobby : RUN !!!

0.

MKPC Mall.

9:29PM. Dudzi, working as a cashier in this huge mall, was ending the day with several customers that hurried their carts at him.

Dudzi : Would you like to pay by card, or by cash ? Man, I hate this job. What ? No, I didn't say anything. You must be dreaming. If only I could do something that I like... what ? No I still didn't say anything. You can go, someone else is waiting to collect their items. Man their voices are so useless I can't even hear what they're saying.
Customer : If you hear this, RUN.
Dudzi : I should probably get out of this place- Excuse me what?

Suddenly, a wall in the mall started breaking apart, seemingly because someone was hammering it. And the whole mall started tearing apart, falling down on itself slowly. Everybody started running.

Dudzi : Ah, finally some action. Wait, I might need to get out of here.

Dudzi started running out of the mall, reaching the exit in a few seconds. The mall crumbled on itself. A few people died in the remains. The police arrived, as well as some detective.

David : Yeah, they're dead ! Just like the dmps characters. Man, I love when people die. It makes my life useful and a little bit more exciting. Now I have to find out who did it. Let's accuse a random guy... yeah,you over there smirks while looking at Dudzi

Dudzi : WHAT ? I DIDN'T EVEN-- I DIDN'T EVEN STAND UP-- NO !! PLEASE !!!

Policeman : Excuse me, but you have to come with us. We will have some explaining to do. This is terrorism.

David : aw man, people are so gullible.


MKPC's Hospital

9:29PM. Fiery is running through the hallways, completely overworked.

Fiery : Man I literally just need to use the bathroom, but I have no time for that. I have been waiting 3 hours, enough is enough. I'm taking a break.

As he entered the bathrooms, he noticed something odd.

Fiery : Why... is the stall... overflowing... I can't even use it. Ah, shit. Let's put the out of order sign before someone--

As he said that, the sink exploded and flooded the room. Since the door was still open, the water started running in the hallways, Fiery being dragged by the wave.

Fiery : AHHHH !!!

The hospital was eventually flooded, hundreds of people died because they drowned in the flow, some survived because they fel into the pond next to the hospital, including Fiery.


News Presentation General Quarter.

9:34PM. Five accidents have occured in the kingdom. Nobody knows who did it. The news presentator is now alerting the rest of the citizens.

UraniumMan : Hello dear MKPCians. Breaking news : five terrorist attacks just occured in the land. Nobody knows who did it, there is no evidence. The only detective available, David, accused Dudzi. But the police interviewed him and he doesn't seem realistically capable of being the culprit. So who is it ? I don't know. Nobody does. The attacks are : a huge bomb thrown on the government's general quarter, oil poured near fire in Mushrestaurant, several bombs thrown into the Track Making Factory, several hammer blows on MKPC Mall and the canalisations of MKPC's Hospital being destroyed by someone. I will now leave you to Miles, a survivor of the accident in Mushrestaurant, who works for us and is now interviewing two celebrities to know their point of view on the situation.

Miles : So here I am, with Leadgaming and Scorchy. So, what do you both think about the ongoing... terror in MKPCverse?
Leadgaming : I don't really care. It had to burst at some point. I was a car ambassador owning many of these beautiful jewels, I still am. Terrorist attacks never affected me and they never will. Be a leader and you won't get hurt.
Miles : That mindset is terrible- UH I meant to say particular. Now Scorchy, what's your point of view on the situation?
Scorchy : Well I think this is absolutely TERRIFYING, the land is in complete doom right now, and I think I am lucky to not be a victim of any of these accidents. I was performing one of my songs, as usual since I am a singer, and I saw five places blow up and crumble under the sunset's colors. All were lit up by the city lights. It was a terrifying scene. The tension has won over the peace.
Miles : Indeed, this was such a frightening experience.

UraniumMan : So this concludes our news presentation as for today. Goodbye !


VC's house.

9:34PM, VC is sitting alone at the table.

VC : Hahaha... I... I'm not insane ! But. But ! The tension... and now the apocalypse... they have taken over me. I will now... become what I always hoped I wouldn't be... a ghost... Hahaha...

And just like that, she became a ghost.

VC : Wow, this actually makes my mind feel... peaceful. I will be haunting the town now, just like they haunted my mind. Haha...


Peacegor Street.

9:34PM, Dietsoda and K are walking peacefully in the streets.

K : Have you heard about the five... attacks ?
Dietsoda : Yeah, of course I did.
K : It just... scares me. What if me, and what if you... ended up in danger ?
Dietsoda : I'm telling you right now, I am doing EVERYTHING to survive.
K : Me too. I want to protect my friends, and the innocents as well.  
Dietsoda : Hah... personnally, I just want to die in a glorious combat.
K : I don't know. I have a bad feeling about this.
Dietsoda : Oh, I've always had a bad feeling since two months... everything felt so tense, now it all broke down. I don't know if that's for the best, though..

Is it for the best ?

Or will it get worse ?

Find out in the next chapter...


The Dark Ages of MKPC
Prologue


The end...

I liked my character in the plot, I hope Jason appears

Who... is Jason ?
But thank you anyways :)

jason from friday the 13th

I don't even know who that is, and no he won't appear

You've never heard of Jason Voorhees???
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Chapter 1 : Dark Waltz

10:00PM.
After all these five accidents occurred, these people are united.
They don't have much in common but all lived the same terrorist attacks.
All of them have survived.
But the straw broke the camel's back.
And now hell breaks loose.




MKPCverse's Police Station.

Policeman : So the only detective available accused you. Do you have any evidence to counter this accusation ?
Dudzi : Listen. I was just finishing my shift as a cashier. As I do every single day. I don't have any reason to destroy this mall. I wanted to change my job. I wanted to do something else, but I don't need to destroy the mall for that. And either way, there were customers. I was literally on my chair when I heard someone hit the wall.
Policeman : So there is no concrete proof that you didn't do it.
Dudzi : Does your detective have any concrete proof to accuse me ?
Policeman : ... No.
Dudzi : He doesn't seem very bright.
Policeman : He indeed isn't, but he's the only one.
Dudzi : ... So do I stay here ?
Policeman : ... I guess.



Mushrestaurant.

Lely : So now... I am jobless. But let's see who did that. I am curious, why would someone want me to get fired ? I'm just a poor cook... Ah. I really can't believe that. starts crying But I need to be strong, life ain't going to wait for me.

Lely penetrated the security room. He checked the cameras right before he went back to the kitchens.

??? : enters Hell yeah, this place is going down as well !

Lely : Who... the hell.

??? : I am gonna pour oil right next to the fire so he witnesses it burn... Haha. My job here is done. Let's go back to the GQ now.

And the video ended.

Lely : Wait... who was that ? Who wanted to do that ? And also... "as well" ? They might be a group...
??? : Indeed we are...
Lely : screams AHH ! WHO THE FUCK ARE YOU !
??? : I'm Moon. And you'll discover the rest of us now... come with me. chokes Lely and kidnaps him.
Lely : muffled MFFFF !!! MFFFF !!!!



Swan's Pond

Fiery : Oh my god... the whole hospital has been destroyed. How can we fight crivility now ? Ah shit, it's already nighttime. Time to go back home and quick.



Government Building (or what's left of it)

Max : THIS IS IMPOSSIBLE TO SWALLOW ! CRIMINALITY IS EVEN HIGHER NOW THAT THIS HAPPENED. THE CITY IS DOOMED !
Wal68 : Please quiet down ,I'm listening to the radio...

Through the radio...
UraniumMan : Breaking News : Criminality increased by 78%. Theft increased by 89%. Terrorism increased by 56%. The land is doomed.

Max : This is catastrophic...
Wal68 : We are weak in this situation. We cannot do anything...


Track Building Factory

Blobby : What a disaster...
Oscar : OUR POOR TRACK !!!
SM7 : Only crumbs are left now...
Babymario : All that work is... DOWN THE DRAIN NOW !!!

The four looked at the remains of their old track, devastated.
But there's nothing they could do.




Moon's Repair

Moon : Welcome... to our repair !
Lely : NO ! LEAVE ME ALONE !!!
Moon : Listen to me you little piece of trash, we make the rules here. We had enough power to destroy the peace of a whole land. How did we do ? We were united. That's what made us strong.
Lely : What did we even do to you...
Moon : Shush. If one more tear falls down from your eye, death will await you at the next turn. And what did you do to us ? You made us feel rejected. You always ruled this world with peace, smiles... but tension took over, and nobody blinked an eye. Now war took over, and the power is in our hands now.
Lely : I-I don't want to die...
??? : Oh, we have so much fun to have with you before we die ! How about... torture ?

Lely was traumatised. His feet and hands were tied. He could not do anything. The group approached him.

Moon : You will suffer 24 hours per day. This is a spiderweb. If we pull any string, even lightly, you will be drawn to us. And we will break you. You will belong to us, your mind, soul and body.
??? : Exactly ! We will manipulate you like a puppet... you're about to be imprisoned here forever...

Lely let them imprison him in a cell. He started to write a few words in his phone notes.

In a place where no rules are here to regulate the world, hell breaks loose. Terrible people unite and they become stronger. To be as strong as them, we need to unite.

When he was done, he eventually called the police, making sure to cut the noise. He described the place in an one minute call, before Moon woke up.

Moon : You little unworthy filthy garbage... you better not flinch an eye, because if you do so, that knife will end up right into your face.

Two minutes passed.

Policeman : Hey ! HANDS UP WHERE I CAN SEE THEM !
Moon : Oh my God... LELY YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS YOU ABSOLUTE BITCH !!!

As she said that, she shot towards Lely's cage. The blow didn't reach him as he dodged it, but she shot a few times more. It still didn't touch him.

Lely : AHHH ! SAVE MEEEE ! PLEASE SAVE MEEE !!!
Policeman : Goodbye, you absolute asshole.

He pointed the gun right towards Moon, closed his eyes and shot a bullet at her. She dropped on the floor, as blood was spilling out of her wound.

Moon : AHHHHHHH !!! screams in agony I-I *coughs* YOU WILL NOT GET US !!! I PROMISED TO MY SISTER THAT WE WOULD *coughs* MAKE A WORLD THAT *coughs* CAN FINALLY ACCEPT WHO WE ARE !! *coughs* IF I FAIL *coughs* NO, IF WE FAIL, THEN MY SISTER WILL HAVE DIED FOR NOTHING!
Policeman : Oh, too bad. shoots another bullet at her and kills her.
??? : NOOO ! MOON ! MY GIRLFRIEND !!! NOOOOOOO ! YOU... YOU BITCH ! YOU DESERVE PAIN AND SUFFERING ! DIEEEEEE !!!
Policeman : No, I will not. tries to shoot but the gun is empty Huh ?
??? : ARGGHHHHHHHH !!!! shoots qt the policeman who drops dead on the floor AND NOW YOUR TURN YOU WORM ! points gun at Lely who freed himself from the cage with the keys he found on the ground, but Lely flips it at the last second AHHHH- gets shot and dies as well

.

.

.


Lely : What... no... I am alone... please... someone... anybody... save me...

But suddenly...
Fiery : I AM NOW ARRIVING AT THE CRIME SCENE ! Wait... w-what ? AHHHH !!!! I HAVE A SERIAL KILLER IN FRONT OF ME !!! HE IS ALONE IN FRONT OF THREE CORPSES !!!!
Lely : WHAT ?? NOOOOOO ! I CAN PROMISE YOU THAT- I CAN PROMISE YOU THAT... faints
Fiery : What ? The blood formed a sentence... "WE NEVER DIE, WE ARE EVERYWHERE..." what the hell does that mean ??



The Dark Ages of MKPC
Chapter 1


The end...

I love how I'm just like 'Breaking news! We're all going to die!'
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Lely wrote:
Chapter 1 : Dark Waltz

10:00PM.
After all these five accidents occurred, these people are united.
They don't have much in common but all lived the same terrorist attacks.
All of them have survived.
But the straw broke the camel's back.
And now hell breaks loose.




MKPCverse's Police Station.

Policeman : So the only detective available accused you. Do you have any evidence to counter this accusation ?
Dudzi : Listen. I was just finishing my shift as a cashier. As I do every single day. I don't have any reason to destroy this mall. I wanted to change my job. I wanted to do something else, but I don't need to destroy the mall for that. And either way, there were customers. I was literally on my chair when I heard someone hit the wall.
Policeman : So there is no concrete proof that you didn't do it.
Dudzi : Does your detective have any concrete proof to accuse me ?
Policeman : ... No.
Dudzi : He doesn't seem very bright.
Policeman : He indeed isn't, but he's the only one.
Dudzi : ... So do I stay here ?
Policeman : ... I guess.



Mushrestaurant.

Lely : So now... I am jobless. But let's see who did that. I am curious, why would someone want me to get fired ? I'm just a poor cook... Ah. I really can't believe that. starts crying But I need to be strong, life ain't going to wait for me.

Lely penetrated the security room. He checked the cameras right before he went back to the kitchens.

??? : enters Hell yeah, this place is going down as well !

Lely : Who... the hell.

??? : I am gonna pour oil right next to the fire so he witnesses it burn... Haha. My job here is done. Let's go back to the GQ now.

And the video ended.

Lely : Wait... who was that ? Who wanted to do that ? And also... "as well" ? They might be a group...
??? : Indeed we are...
Lely : screams AHH ! WHO THE FUCK ARE YOU !
??? : I'm Moon. And you'll discover the rest of us now... come with me. chokes Lely and kidnaps him.
Lely : muffled MFFFF !!! MFFFF !!!!



Swan's Pond

Fiery : Oh my god... the whole hospital has been destroyed. How can we fight crivility now ? Ah shit, it's already nighttime. Time to go back home and quick.



Government Building (or what's left of it)

Max : THIS IS IMPOSSIBLE TO SWALLOW ! CRIMINALITY IS EVEN HIGHER NOW THAT THIS HAPPENED. THE CITY IS DOOMED !
Wal68 : Please quiet down ,I'm listening to the radio...

Through the radio...
UraniumMan : Breaking News : Criminality increased by 78%. Theft increased by 89%. Terrorism increased by 56%. The land is doomed.

Max : This is catastrophic...
Wal68 : We are weak in this situation. We cannot do anything...


Track Building Factory

Blobby : What a disaster...
Oscar : OUR POOR TRACK !!!
SM7 : Only crumbs are left now...
Babymario : All that work is... DOWN THE DRAIN NOW !!!

The four looked at the remains of their old track, devastated.
But there's nothing they could do.




Moon's Repair

Moon : Welcome... to our repair !
Lely : NO ! LEAVE ME ALONE !!!
Moon : Listen to me you little piece of trash, we make the rules here. We had enough power to destroy the peace of a whole land. How did we do ? We were united. That's what made us strong.
Lely : What did we even do to you...
Moon : Shush. If one more tear falls down from your eye, death will await you at the next turn. And what did you do to us ? You made us feel rejected. You always ruled this world with peace, smiles... but tension took over, and nobody blinked an eye. Now war took over, and the power is in our hands now.
Lely : I-I don't want to die...
??? : Oh, we have so much fun to have with you before we die ! How about... torture ?

Lely was traumatised. His feet and hands were tied. He could not do anything. The group approached him.

Moon : You will suffer 24 hours per day. This is a spiderweb. If we pull any string, even lightly, you will be drawn to us. And we will break you. You will belong to us, your mind, soul and body.
??? : Exactly ! We will manipulate you like a puppet... you're about to be imprisoned here forever...

Lely let them imprison him in a cell. He started to write a few words in his phone notes.

In a place where no rules are here to regulate the world, hell breaks loose. Terrible people unite and they become stronger. To be as strong as them, we need to unite.

When he was done, he eventually called the police, making sure to cut the noise. He described the place in an one minute call, before Moon woke up.

Moon : You little unworthy filthy garbage... you better not flinch an eye, because if you do so, that knife will end up right into your face.

Two minutes passed.

Policeman : Hey ! HANDS UP WHERE I CAN SEE THEM !
Moon : Oh my God... LELY YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS YOU ABSOLUTE BITCH !!!

As she said that, she shot towards Lely's cage. The blow didn't reach him as he dodged it, but she shot a few times more. It still didn't touch him.

Lely : AHHH ! SAVE MEEEE ! PLEASE SAVE MEEE !!!
Policeman : Goodbye, you absolute asshole.

He pointed the gun right towards Moon, closed his eyes and shot a bullet at her. She dropped on the floor, as blood was spilling out of her wound.

Moon : AHHHHHHH !!! screams in agony I-I *coughs* YOU WILL NOT GET US !!! I PROMISED TO MY SISTER THAT WE WOULD *coughs* MAKE A WORLD THAT *coughs* CAN FINALLY ACCEPT WHO WE ARE !! *coughs* IF I FAIL *coughs* NO, IF WE FAIL, THEN MY SISTER WILL HAVE DIED FOR NOTHING!
Policeman : Oh, too bad. shoots another bullet at her and kills her.
??? : NOOO ! MOON ! MY GIRLFRIEND !!! NOOOOOOO ! YOU... YOU BITCH ! YOU DESERVE PAIN AND SUFFERING ! DIEEEEEE !!!
Policeman : No, I will not. tries to shoot but the gun is empty Huh ?
??? : ARGGHHHHHHHH !!!! shoots qt the policeman who drops dead on the floor AND NOW YOUR TURN YOU WORM ! points gun at Lely who freed himself from the cage with the keys he found on the ground, but Lely flips it at the last second AHHHH- gets shot and dies as well

.

.

.


Lely : What... no... I am alone... please... someone... anybody... save me...

But suddenly...
Fiery : I AM NOW ARRIVING AT THE CRIME SCENE ! Wait... w-what ? AHHHH !!!! I HAVE A SERIAL KILLER IN FRONT OF ME !!! HE IS ALONE IN FRONT OF THREE CORPSES !!!!
Lely : WHAT ?? NOOOOOO ! I CAN PROMISE YOU THAT- I CAN PROMISE YOU THAT... faints
Fiery : What ? The blood formed a sentence... "WE NEVER DIE, WE ARE EVERYWHERE..." what the hell does that mean ??



The Dark Ages of MKPC
Chapter 1


The end...

I love how I'm just like 'Breaking news! We're all going to die!'

now i have that one “We are fucking under attack!” image in my mind. thanks ig.
Messages 1422 - Golden Mario Golden Mario
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Puerto Rico
Lely wrote:
Chapter 1 : Dark Waltz

10:00PM.
After all these five accidents occurred, these people are united.
They don't have much in common but all lived the same terrorist attacks.
All of them have survived.
But the straw broke the camel's back.
And now hell breaks loose.




MKPCverse's Police Station.

Policeman : So the only detective available accused you. Do you have any evidence to counter this accusation ?
Dudzi : Listen. I was just finishing my shift as a cashier. As I do every single day. I don't have any reason to destroy this mall. I wanted to change my job. I wanted to do something else, but I don't need to destroy the mall for that. And either way, there were customers. I was literally on my chair when I heard someone hit the wall.
Policeman : So there is no concrete proof that you didn't do it.
Dudzi : Does your detective have any concrete proof to accuse me ?
Policeman : ... No.
Dudzi : He doesn't seem very bright.
Policeman : He indeed isn't, but he's the only one.
Dudzi : ... So do I stay here ?
Policeman : ... I guess.



Mushrestaurant.

Lely : So now... I am jobless. But let's see who did that. I am curious, why would someone want me to get fired ? I'm just a poor cook... Ah. I really can't believe that. starts crying But I need to be strong, life ain't going to wait for me.

Lely penetrated the security room. He checked the cameras right before he went back to the kitchens.

??? : enters Hell yeah, this place is going down as well !

Lely : Who... the hell.

??? : I am gonna pour oil right next to the fire so he witnesses it burn... Haha. My job here is done. Let's go back to the GQ now.

And the video ended.

Lely : Wait... who was that ? Who wanted to do that ? And also... "as well" ? They might be a group...
??? : Indeed we are...
Lely : screams AHH ! WHO THE FUCK ARE YOU !
??? : I'm Moon. And you'll discover the rest of us now... come with me. chokes Lely and kidnaps him.
Lely : muffled MFFFF !!! MFFFF !!!!



Swan's Pond

Fiery : Oh my god... the whole hospital has been destroyed. How can we fight crivility now ? Ah shit, it's already nighttime. Time to go back home and quick.



Government Building (or what's left of it)

Max : THIS IS IMPOSSIBLE TO SWALLOW ! CRIMINALITY IS EVEN HIGHER NOW THAT THIS HAPPENED. THE CITY IS DOOMED !
Wal68 : Please quiet down ,I'm listening to the radio...

Through the radio...
UraniumMan : Breaking News : Criminality increased by 78%. Theft increased by 89%. Terrorism increased by 56%. The land is doomed.

Max : This is catastrophic...
Wal68 : We are weak in this situation. We cannot do anything...


Track Building Factory

Blobby : What a disaster...
Oscar : OUR POOR TRACK !!!
SM7 : Only crumbs are left now...
Babymario : All that work is... DOWN THE DRAIN NOW !!!

The four looked at the remains of their old track, devastated.
But there's nothing they could do.




Moon's Repair

Moon : Welcome... to our repair !
Lely : NO ! LEAVE ME ALONE !!!
Moon : Listen to me you little piece of trash, we make the rules here. We had enough power to destroy the peace of a whole land. How did we do ? We were united. That's what made us strong.
Lely : What did we even do to you...
Moon : Shush. If one more tear falls down from your eye, death will await you at the next turn. And what did you do to us ? You made us feel rejected. You always ruled this world with peace, smiles... but tension took over, and nobody blinked an eye. Now war took over, and the power is in our hands now.
Lely : I-I don't want to die...
??? : Oh, we have so much fun to have with you before we die ! How about... torture ?

Lely was traumatised. His feet and hands were tied. He could not do anything. The group approached him.

Moon : You will suffer 24 hours per day. This is a spiderweb. If we pull any string, even lightly, you will be drawn to us. And we will break you. You will belong to us, your mind, soul and body.
??? : Exactly ! We will manipulate you like a puppet... you're about to be imprisoned here forever...

Lely let them imprison him in a cell. He started to write a few words in his phone notes.

In a place where no rules are here to regulate the world, hell breaks loose. Terrible people unite and they become stronger. To be as strong as them, we need to unite.

When he was done, he eventually called the police, making sure to cut the noise. He described the place in an one minute call, before Moon woke up.

Moon : You little unworthy filthy garbage... you better not flinch an eye, because if you do so, that knife will end up right into your face.

Two minutes passed.

Policeman : Hey ! HANDS UP WHERE I CAN SEE THEM !
Moon : Oh my God... LELY YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS YOU ABSOLUTE BITCH !!!

As she said that, she shot towards Lely's cage. The blow didn't reach him as he dodged it, but she shot a few times more. It still didn't touch him.

Lely : AHHH ! SAVE MEEEE ! PLEASE SAVE MEEE !!!
Policeman : Goodbye, you absolute asshole.

He pointed the gun right towards Moon, closed his eyes and shot a bullet at her. She dropped on the floor, as blood was spilling out of her wound.

Moon : AHHHHHHH !!! screams in agony I-I *coughs* YOU WILL NOT GET US !!! I PROMISED TO MY SISTER THAT WE WOULD *coughs* MAKE A WORLD THAT *coughs* CAN FINALLY ACCEPT WHO WE ARE !! *coughs* IF I FAIL *coughs* NO, IF WE FAIL, THEN MY SISTER WILL HAVE DIED FOR NOTHING!
Policeman : Oh, too bad. shoots another bullet at her and kills her.
??? : NOOO ! MOON ! MY GIRLFRIEND !!! NOOOOOOO ! YOU... YOU BITCH ! YOU DESERVE PAIN AND SUFFERING ! DIEEEEEE !!!
Policeman : No, I will not. tries to shoot but the gun is empty Huh ?
??? : ARGGHHHHHHHH !!!! shoots qt the policeman who drops dead on the floor AND NOW YOUR TURN YOU WORM ! points gun at Lely who freed himself from the cage with the keys he found on the ground, but Lely flips it at the last second AHHHH- gets shot and dies as well

.

.

.


Lely : What... no... I am alone... please... someone... anybody... save me...

But suddenly...
Fiery : I AM NOW ARRIVING AT THE CRIME SCENE ! Wait... w-what ? AHHHH !!!! I HAVE A SERIAL KILLER IN FRONT OF ME !!! HE IS ALONE IN FRONT OF THREE CORPSES !!!!
Lely : WHAT ?? NOOOOOO ! I CAN PROMISE YOU THAT- I CAN PROMISE YOU THAT... faints
Fiery : What ? The blood formed a sentence... "WE NEVER DIE, WE ARE EVERYWHERE..." what the hell does that mean ??



The Dark Ages of MKPC
Chapter 1


The end...

also, i need some clarification:
was Lely still alive when he was shot?
and if he was alive, did Fiery think that he was the person who killed Moon, the policeman, and ???
and how did Fiery find where Lely was captured?
Messages 11378 - King Mario King Mario
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France
Lely wrote:
Chapter 1 : Dark Waltz

10:00PM.
After all these five accidents occurred, these people are united.
They don't have much in common but all lived the same terrorist attacks.
All of them have survived.
But the straw broke the camel's back.
And now hell breaks loose.




MKPCverse's Police Station.

Policeman : So the only detective available accused you. Do you have any evidence to counter this accusation ?
Dudzi : Listen. I was just finishing my shift as a cashier. As I do every single day. I don't have any reason to destroy this mall. I wanted to change my job. I wanted to do something else, but I don't need to destroy the mall for that. And either way, there were customers. I was literally on my chair when I heard someone hit the wall.
Policeman : So there is no concrete proof that you didn't do it.
Dudzi : Does your detective have any concrete proof to accuse me ?
Policeman : ... No.
Dudzi : He doesn't seem very bright.
Policeman : He indeed isn't, but he's the only one.
Dudzi : ... So do I stay here ?
Policeman : ... I guess.



Mushrestaurant.

Lely : So now... I am jobless. But let's see who did that. I am curious, why would someone want me to get fired ? I'm just a poor cook... Ah. I really can't believe that. starts crying But I need to be strong, life ain't going to wait for me.

Lely penetrated the security room. He checked the cameras right before he went back to the kitchens.

??? : enters Hell yeah, this place is going down as well !

Lely : Who... the hell.

??? : I am gonna pour oil right next to the fire so he witnesses it burn... Haha. My job here is done. Let's go back to the GQ now.

And the video ended.

Lely : Wait... who was that ? Who wanted to do that ? And also... "as well" ? They might be a group...
??? : Indeed we are...
Lely : screams AHH ! WHO THE FUCK ARE YOU !
??? : I'm Moon. And you'll discover the rest of us now... come with me. chokes Lely and kidnaps him.
Lely : muffled MFFFF !!! MFFFF !!!!



Swan's Pond

Fiery : Oh my god... the whole hospital has been destroyed. How can we fight crivility now ? Ah shit, it's already nighttime. Time to go back home and quick.



Government Building (or what's left of it)

Max : THIS IS IMPOSSIBLE TO SWALLOW ! CRIMINALITY IS EVEN HIGHER NOW THAT THIS HAPPENED. THE CITY IS DOOMED !
Wal68 : Please quiet down ,I'm listening to the radio...

Through the radio...
UraniumMan : Breaking News : Criminality increased by 78%. Theft increased by 89%. Terrorism increased by 56%. The land is doomed.

Max : This is catastrophic...
Wal68 : We are weak in this situation. We cannot do anything...


Track Building Factory

Blobby : What a disaster...
Oscar : OUR POOR TRACK !!!
SM7 : Only crumbs are left now...
Babymario : All that work is... DOWN THE DRAIN NOW !!!

The four looked at the remains of their old track, devastated.
But there's nothing they could do.




Moon's Repair

Moon : Welcome... to our repair !
Lely : NO ! LEAVE ME ALONE !!!
Moon : Listen to me you little piece of trash, we make the rules here. We had enough power to destroy the peace of a whole land. How did we do ? We were united. That's what made us strong.
Lely : What did we even do to you...
Moon : Shush. If one more tear falls down from your eye, death will await you at the next turn. And what did you do to us ? You made us feel rejected. You always ruled this world with peace, smiles... but tension took over, and nobody blinked an eye. Now war took over, and the power is in our hands now.
Lely : I-I don't want to die...
??? : Oh, we have so much fun to have with you before we die ! How about... torture ?

Lely was traumatised. His feet and hands were tied. He could not do anything. The group approached him.

Moon : You will suffer 24 hours per day. This is a spiderweb. If we pull any string, even lightly, you will be drawn to us. And we will break you. You will belong to us, your mind, soul and body.
??? : Exactly ! We will manipulate you like a puppet... you're about to be imprisoned here forever...

Lely let them imprison him in a cell. He started to write a few words in his phone notes.

In a place where no rules are here to regulate the world, hell breaks loose. Terrible people unite and they become stronger. To be as strong as them, we need to unite.

When he was done, he eventually called the police, making sure to cut the noise. He described the place in an one minute call, before Moon woke up.

Moon : You little unworthy filthy garbage... you better not flinch an eye, because if you do so, that knife will end up right into your face.

Two minutes passed.

Policeman : Hey ! HANDS UP WHERE I CAN SEE THEM !
Moon : Oh my God... LELY YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS YOU ABSOLUTE BITCH !!!

As she said that, she shot towards Lely's cage. The blow didn't reach him as he dodged it, but she shot a few times more. It still didn't touch him.

Lely : AHHH ! SAVE MEEEE ! PLEASE SAVE MEEE !!!
Policeman : Goodbye, you absolute asshole.

He pointed the gun right towards Moon, closed his eyes and shot a bullet at her. She dropped on the floor, as blood was spilling out of her wound.

Moon : AHHHHHHH !!! screams in agony I-I *coughs* YOU WILL NOT GET US !!! I PROMISED TO MY SISTER THAT WE WOULD *coughs* MAKE A WORLD THAT *coughs* CAN FINALLY ACCEPT WHO WE ARE !! *coughs* IF I FAIL *coughs* NO, IF WE FAIL, THEN MY SISTER WILL HAVE DIED FOR NOTHING!
Policeman : Oh, too bad. shoots another bullet at her and kills her.
??? : NOOO ! MOON ! MY GIRLFRIEND !!! NOOOOOOO ! YOU... YOU BITCH ! YOU DESERVE PAIN AND SUFFERING ! DIEEEEEE !!!
Policeman : No, I will not. tries to shoot but the gun is empty Huh ?
??? : ARGGHHHHHHHH !!!! shoots qt the policeman who drops dead on the floor AND NOW YOUR TURN YOU WORM ! points gun at Lely who freed himself from the cage with the keys he found on the ground, but Lely flips it at the last second AHHHH- gets shot and dies as well

.

.

.


Lely : What... no... I am alone... please... someone... anybody... save me...

But suddenly...
Fiery : I AM NOW ARRIVING AT THE CRIME SCENE ! Wait... w-what ? AHHHH !!!! I HAVE A SERIAL KILLER IN FRONT OF ME !!! HE IS ALONE IN FRONT OF THREE CORPSES !!!!
Lely : WHAT ?? NOOOOOO ! I CAN PROMISE YOU THAT- I CAN PROMISE YOU THAT... faints
Fiery : What ? The blood formed a sentence... "WE NEVER DIE, WE ARE EVERYWHERE..." what the hell does that mean ??



The Dark Ages of MKPC
Chapter 1


The end...

also, i need some clarification:
was Lely still alive when he was shot?
and if he was alive, did Fiery think that he was the person who killed Moon, the policeman, and ???
and how did Fiery find where Lely was captured?

I was actually never touched by any of the bullets, and yeah Fiery did think that. For the third point though, I can't reveal that.
Messages 11378 - King Mario King Mario
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France
Moon : You will suffer 24 hours per day.

Now, this could be a typo, or a funny way of saying 24/7, but in case it's actually relevant, I've got the conversion rates for each planet in our solar system.
59 Earth Days = 1 Mercury Day
243 Earth Days = 1 Venus Day
1 Earth Day & 37 Earth Seconds = 1 Mars Day
9 Earth Hours & 56 Earth Minutes = 1 Jupiter Day
10 Earth Hours & 34 Earth Minutes = 1 Saturn Day
17 Earth Hours & 14 Earth Minutes = 1 Uranus Day
16 Earth Hours & 6 Earth Minutes = 1 Neptune Day
Which knocks out 4 planets(the Gas Planets). Venus is 100% uninhabitable, which leaves 2 planets: Mercury & Mars. Either Lely was going to get 37 seconds of rest every day or several months. A 50/50 gamble.
Would you take it?
Also Fiery announcing his arrival like some kind of DJ was incredible

It was actually a typo lmfao, I meant to type 24/7, but I thought it needed more flair lmao.
Messages 11378 - King Mario King Mario
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France
Also, the reason why Chapter 1 is really confusing is because I intended it to spread confusion. Bit Chapter 2 will completely clear up everything.
ok1
Messages 11378 - King Mario King Mario
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France
lely, can you make me scared of anything to do with the apocalypse (like so much i either freeze or flee to the nearby yoshious empire because of it) and also maybe make the yoshious empire a safe place and important in some other part of the story (if you do do it maybe make me the main character in the part, well me and any other yoshis in it)
just ideas of mine, do what you want idk + idc

No Yoshious empire, that has literally no link to the story and I don't feel like having a "safe place" in an apocalyptic fanfic that kinda ruins the point.

And also why would it be an important part of the story ?? Lmfao
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Australia
idk just a really stupid thought lol
Messages 11378 - King Mario King Mario
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France
Chapter 2 : Unhealed Wounds

11PM. Fiery stood there, not understanding what might have happened. Blood everywhere, nobody knows who did it. Dead people all over the floor. It was a ghoulish spectacle. And an enigma.

Fiery : Oh my God... what happened... and why am I here ? Oh my... blood is all over my shoe. I should probably just let them know where it is and then leave.

Not knowing what to do, he just waited there for the police to arrive. He alerted them that he had no evidence of anything that occurred. And he left.


The next day, 8AM, Max's house

Max was sitting in front of a table along with Wal68. Both had been talking about how bad the situation had gotten. The day was cold, rain was falling outside, leaving a thin layer of water all over the ground. Both were drinking hot chocolate.

Max : What should we do ? Actually, I know. We should rest to feel better, but we cannot.
Wal68 : As much as I'd like to rest, our duty is very important as of right now. We have meetings planned for tomorrow. Today, we have a day off. Let's just be at peace today. We need that.
Max : You're right, by the way, do you want something to warm you up ? I don't want you catching a cold around here. The isolation is not really good.
Wal68 : If you have a oversized hoodie, that might actually be nice. I guess I can invite you at my place tomorrow, but we need to remain together. We are the only ones single handedly deciding what the country will do, so let's stick together.


8:30AM, News Presentation Set

UraniumMan : Hello everyone, welcome to MKPCTV again. Today, we decided to invited several people to interview them about the current situation. You shall now come forward !
Dudzi : It's absolutely unacceptable. We need to find out who is behind all this. Five attacks occured at a very precise hour, 9:29PM. And we need to figure out why. It's probably a group. Someone has to know, but the information needs to spread. And if they do know, they must be traumatized.
SM7 : Violence has never been this high. Since the five attacks, including one that hugely damaged our track making factory, criminality has raised. I agree with Dudzi, it has to be a group. And this group had the courage to step forward and cause havoc. And now, all the little villains in the shadow are unveiling slowly, one by one. And the land is in doom.
K : Personnally, I can hardly think of anything as of right now. Some tension was definitively growing and an outburst has occurred. We all witnessed it. Is it for the best ? I don't know. If people, innocent people died, then no it's for the worse.
UraniumMan : Thank you for your views on the situation, I hope it can help people move forward. Also I don't know if I should say this but... Lely has been found last night, surrounded with blood and corpses. Nobody knows if he committed these crimes, but the police is investigating.


MKPC's Police Station

The policemen were in front of Lely, facing him.

Jake : Can you recall killing these people ? Or can you recall someone killing anyone ?
Lely : I swear... i-it wasn't me. It was a group... s-some girl n-named Moon. And her boyfriend as well. These two h-had a repair... somewhere... they kidnapped me...
Jake : shows the picture of the policeman that tried to rescue Lely Do you recall seeing this man ?
Lely : A-actually... yes I-I do...
Asher : He the murderer bro, he the murderer. I know it. I seen it. I am sure. All the evidence points to him.
Jake : Oh my God, shut the hell up. I don't even know why you're here. You cannot form a sentence with proper grammar. We can go without your opinion.
Lely : Umm, I don't think I-I can properly speak... so I'll write it down on a note.
Jake : Sure !

Lely starts writing. After a good minute of careful writing, he handed the note to Jake.

I was crying in the Mushrestaurant until a customer came up to me. They told me to check the cameras. When I did so, a girl named Moon broke into the room and kidnapped me. She brought me to her repair, where her boyfriend started to threaten me. They locked me up in a cage. I wrote something in my phone notes, and then I called the police. The policeman shot Moon, but that woke up her boyfriend who shot the policeman. And as he was about to kill me, I flipped the gun and he pulled the trigger. It was self defense, trust me.

Jake read the note. Asher seemed to laugh at it, but Jake was serious.

Jake : You did not pull the trigger and you did not intend to kill. Since we have no proof of what you said, you are now free to go, but we will still go over your case and contact you if anything's wrong.
Lely : T-thank you so much. Goodbye.

As he got out of the station, a younger guy approached him. It was the man he met at Moon's Repair last night.

Fiery : So they let you go ?
Lely : Listen, I don't know who you are and why you were there last night but I am not guilty. I feel broken and traumatized by this. This has to stop.
Fiery : I guess, you don't seem like a violent guy. I am Fiery btw.
Lely : I'm Lely, nice to meet you. Should I fix you a drink ?
Fiery : Oh no, sorry. I have a very strict and precise boycott plan.
Lely : Oh, no. By that I mean a cocktail. I used to work at a restaurant but it was attacked. And despite me being in charge of the meals, I have some skills to actually prepare drinks.
Fiery : That sounds... acceptable.

And after that, they decided to sit, talk and drink. They didn't know much about each other yet, but they knew they had something in common.

That will to save people.


MKPC's Sunken Town

9AM. In this very dark and mysterious place, VC was roaming around.

VC : My mind... will not find peace if I don't haunt towns. And this one is very fun. Underwater, it's even easier to scare people... Hahaha...

In the meanwhile, Dietsoda was exploring the sunken town to find any trace of the group that people were talking about.

Dietsoda : There doesn't seem to be anybody... the houses are all empty. he dives again, and this time he sees VC. oh my God, what the hell is that...
VC : I am... your worst nightmare ! I died in this city... I drowned and called out for help... but HAHAHA ! Nobody came, so I became... a ghost,
and I haunt this place.

Dietsoda : I think you're insane.
VC : Insane ? I was not insane... I became insane. Because of the apocalypse... I unveil as a new form... HAHAHAHA !
Dietsoda : I know some good therapists if you want.
VC : No... hahaha... hahahahaha... No... Nooo... NOOOO... HAHAHAHAHA ! I DON'T NEED THERAPISTS ! NONEEE !
Dietsoda : This is really lame and boring now, I expected some action, like in Warhammer. But this thing is just completely insane. When water gets in your brain, it must cause a lot of damage.
VC : Damage... damage, damage pouring on my heart ! Falling like knives... breaking through as I... fly and fall down... HAHAHAHAHA !
Dietsoda : I wonder if I should kill her for her own mental health. She is probably suffering from such a mind as of right now.
VC : Yeah... I'm going down.... hahaha...

And with that, she just disappeared, leaving Dietsoda confused.

Dietsoda : What was that...

After her interference, he just stood there for a minute, then kept exploring the town, until...

Dietsoda : Huh ? What's that ?

As he grabs the diamond collar and decides to wear it around his neck, the water reveals a message written on a wall.

We will find a place to hide. We are everywhere, all around the world...

We shall look for the remaining pieces...

The Dark Ages of MKPC
Chapter 2

The end
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2 chapters and i still dont appear?
oh, i must be a minor character.
annoying!
mario_dead4
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2 chapters and i still dont appear?
oh, i must be a minor character.
annoying!

You did have a line, and if you find it annoying, you can just ignore the episodes.
Messages 349 - Peach Peach
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Lely wrote:
2 chapters and i still dont appear?
oh, i must be a minor character.
annoying!

You did have a line, and if you find it annoying, you can just ignore the episodes.

not in chapter 1 or 2
also, do the people who are in fanfics alot get bigger roles?
Messages 11378 - King Mario King Mario
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Lely wrote:
2 chapters and i still dont appear?
oh, i must be a minor character.
annoying!

You did have a line, and if you find it annoying, you can just ignore the episodes.

not in chapter 1 or 2
also, do the people who are in fanfics alot get bigger roles?

No, it's about personnality. VC was here in like 93% of my fanfics and she has a pretty minor role here, in comparison to Wal which has a very important role despite this being his first appearance.

Ah and yes, I thought you ignored your line from the prologue.
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ok but i still dont entirely understand...
you don't need to explain

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