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[Fanfic] A Normal Trip

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vs40368 pts ★ Titan
battle7083 pts ★ Racer
United Kingdom
The nameless door was fully open now.

No one remembered it opening.

It just… was.

The thing inside didn’t step out this time.

It waited.

Like it knew they would come to it eventually.



No one spoke at first.

Frank was still on his knees, breathing hard, staring at his hands like they didn’t belong to him.

Melissa kept glancing at the doors—counting them, recounting them, like the number might stabilize if she tried hard enough.

It didn’t.

Sebastian finally broke the silence.

…We’re missing more people.

Jake scoffed, but it came out weaker than before.

Yeah? Then name them.

Sebastian opened his mouth—

And froze.

Because he couldn’t.

Not a single name.

Just a feeling.

Like a word on the tip of his tongue that refused to exist.

Nommanic spoke quietly.

…That’s the point. It doesn’t just remove them. It removes the space they occupied.

Neptuno looked at his DSi again.

PLAYER COUNT: 10

He swallowed.

What happens when it hits zero?

No one answered.



A new sound filled the hallway.

Footsteps.

Not theirs.

Coming from behind them.

Slow.

Uneven.

Dragging.

They all turned at once.

At the far end of the hallway—

Something stood there.

A figure.

Familiar.

Too familiar.

It was… one of them.

But wrong.

Its proportions stretched slightly too long. Its head tilted at an impossible angle. Its smile didn’t move with the rest of its face.

And the worst part—

No one could agree on who it looked like.

Jake took a step back.

…Who is that?

Melissa shook her head rapidly.

I don’t know—I don’t—I feel like I should—

Koroshi’s hands tightened around his sticker printer.

It’s not copying one of us. It’s copying all of us.

The figure took a step forward.

Then another.

Each step slightly out of sync with the sound it made.

Sebastian raised his flashlight.

Don’t move.

The figure stopped.

Then—

It spoke.

Not in one voice.

In many.

“YOU FORGOT ME.”

The lights flickered.

Gordo growled, backing away.

Grrrr…

Frank staggered to his feet.

We didn’t forget anyone!

The figure’s head snapped toward him.

“YOU DID.”



Neptuno’s DSi glitched violently.

NEW OBJECTIVE:

IDENTIFY THE LIAR.



Jake blinked.

…Excuse me?

Nommanic’s expression darkened.

That’s new.

Koroshi looked at his latest sticker.

…One of us isn’t just “extra.” One of us is wrong.

Melissa’s voice shook.

What’s the difference?

No one answered.

Because they all knew.



The distorted figure in the hallway started walking again.

Faster now.

“YOU LIED.”

“YOU LEFT.”

“YOU CHOSE WRONG.”

Sebastian stepped forward.

Stop!

It paused.

Nommanic spoke again.

A lie creates a contradiction. Something this place can’t stabilize.

Jake frowned.

So what, we just… confess stuff now?!

Neptuno looked down.

00:59
00:58
00:57

We don’t have time!

Frank clenched his fists.

Fine. I said I didn’t leave the stove on… but I wasn’t sure.

00:41

Koroshi stepped forward.

I said the logo didn’t exist… but I recognized it.

00:32

Melissa shut her eyes.

I said my room was safe… but I knew it wasn’t.

00:25

The figure twitched.

“STILL WRONG.”



Sebastian’s voice lowered.

It’s not small lies.

Nommanic nodded.

Something bigger.

Jake crossed his arms.

…Okay. This is dumb.

The timer continued.

00:14

Koroshi stared.

…You haven’t said anything.

Jake shrugged.

Yeah, because I didn’t lie.

Silence.

Heavy.

Wrong.

Nommanic stepped closer.

Jake. Say something.

Jake snapped.

I already did!

00:08

Neptuno’s screen flickered.

WARNING: CONTRADICTION DETECTED.



Sebastian stepped forward slowly.

…You grabbed the gun first.

Jake glared.

So?

You said it was yours. But you hesitated.

Jake’s expression flickered.

No I didn’t.

00:03

Koroshi raised the sticker.

The distorted figure—

Was Jake.



00:02

…No.

00:01

The figure lunged—



00:00



Everything stopped.

Neptuno’s screen:

LIAR IDENTIFIED.



Jake screamed.

I DIDN’T— I DIDN’T— I DIDN’T—

His body flickered.

Versions overlapping.

One holding the gun.

One hesitating.

One smiling.

One terrified.

Sebastian reached out.

Jake!

Jake looked at him.

For one moment—

Normal.

…It wasn’t mine.

The hallway breathed in.

Jake—

Vanished.



Silence.



PLAYER COUNT: 9



This time—

They remembered.



A low sound broke it.

Ruh…?

They turned.

Gordo stood frozen.

Staring at the nameless door.



From inside—

Something moved.

Low to the ground.

Same size.

Same shape.



Another dog stepped forward.

Identical to Gordo.



Melissa gasped.

…Gordo?

The real Gordo whimpered.

Ruh…

The copy tilted its head.

Roo…?

Sebastian stepped forward slightly.

Don’t go near it.



The copy moved closer.

Its motion lagged unnaturally.

Koroshi whispered—

It’s not copying him… it’s replacing him.



Gordo backed away.

Closer to the door.

Rrr… no…



Something shifted behind the copy.

Massive.

Watching.



Nommanic spoke immediately.

That’s the real threat.

Neptuno trembled.

It wants us to choose…



“THEN HE STAYS.”



Gordo looked at them.

Desperate.

Ruh… help…



Both dogs moved at the same time.

Mirroring.

Perfectly.



Melissa panicked.

We can’t leave him!

Koroshi shook.

We don’t know which one he is!



For one second—

One dog glitched.

Its jaw stretched too far—



Too late.



The thing surged forward.

One of the Gordos was yanked back—

Dragged into darkness—

RUH—!



The other collapsed.

Shaking.

Alive.



The door slammed shut.



Silence.



No one spoke.

Because no one knew—

Which one remained.



Neptuno’s screen flickered.

ENTITY HAS TAKEN ONE.



Sebastian stepped forward slowly.

…Gordo?



The dog looked up.



For a split second—

His eyes didn’t match.



Then they blinked.

Normal.



The nameless door was gone.

Only a wall remained.



Carved deep into it:

YOU ARE STILL LATE.



End of Episode 3


How do ya like it? 2 more episodes to go and the series will be over.

where did i go bro
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vs30478 pts ★ Legend
battle7144 pts ★ Racer
United States
finale:

The air felt wrong the moment they stepped in.

Sebastian: This place… it’s too quiet.
Frank: We’ve handled worse, right?
Melissa: …Have we?
Gordo (Scooby): Ruh… ruh-roh…
Koroshi: Something is watching.
Opulent: …This place feels off.
Keinieo: Then let it watch. We’re leaving anyway.

A low sound echoed through the area.

Then—

Frank: Did you guys see—

Gone.

Melissa: FRANK?!

The group broke into a run.

The walls stretched in ways that didn’t make sense. Shadows bent and twisted as if they were alive.

Gordo (Scooby): Raaaah!

Gone.

Koroshi: It’s picking us off.
Sebastian: Don’t stop running!

A loud crash—

Silence.

Melissa slowed for a second.

Melissa: I can’t—

Gone.

Opulent: This isn’t right—

Gone.

Only three left.

Koroshi: We’re not going to outrun it.
Keinieo: We don’t need to. The exit’s close.

Sebastian said nothing.

They kept moving.

Something metallic scraped lightly under Sebastian’s foot.

He looked down.

A gun.

Left behind.

From earlier.

From someone who didn’t make it.

Sebastian picked it up.

Sebastian: This will be nice.

Koroshi: Keep moving!

They ran.

The air slowly grew lighter.

Then—

Koroshi stopped.

Koroshi: It’s here.

The presence filled the space.

Heavy. Unseen.

Koroshi stepped forward.

Koroshi: Go.

Sebastian: What?
Koroshi: I’ll hold it.

Keinieo hesitated.

Keinieo: You won’t make it.
Koroshi: None of us were supposed to.

Koroshi turned—

Gone.

Only Sebastian and Keinieo remained.

They ran.

Light appeared ahead.

The edge.

Freedom.

They slowed as they reached it.

Keinieo: …We made it.

Sebastian didn’t respond.

Keinieo: What’s wrong?

Sebastian tightened his grip on the gun.

Sebastian: I get it now.
Keinieo: Get what?
Sebastian: Why it let us get this far.

The air shifted.

Keinieo stepped back.

Keinieo: Sebastian…?

Sebastian raised the gun.

Sebastian: One of us was supposed to become one of them.

Keinieo: …What?

Sebastian: It’s you.

Keinieo shook his head.

Keinieo: No—that’s not—

Sebastian fired.

Keinieo fell.

Silence.

Sebastian stood there, breathing hard.

Sebastian: …I made it.

He stepped past the edge.

Out.

Everything went quiet.

Too quiet.

Sebastian walked forward slowly.

No voices.

No movement.

Nothing followed him.

Behind him, the boundary stayed still.

No shapes.

No changes.

No proof.

Sebastian stopped walking.

Just for a moment.

Sebastian:

He didn’t turn back.

Because there was nothing there.

He kept walking.

Alone.

The only one left.

End.
vs19618 pts ★ Master
battle5240 pts ★ Novice
United Kingdom
finale:

The air felt wrong the moment they stepped in.

Sebastian: This place… it’s too quiet.
Frank: We’ve handled worse, right?
Melissa: …Have we?
Gordo (Scooby): Ruh… ruh-roh…
Koroshi: Something is watching.
Keinieo: Then let it watch. We’re leaving anyway.

A low sound echoed through the area.

Then—

Frank: Did you guys see—

Gone.

Melissa: FRANK?!

The group broke into a run.

The walls stretched in ways that didn’t make sense. Shadows bent and twisted as if they were alive.

Gordo (Scooby): Raaaah!

Gone.

Koroshi: It’s picking us off.
Sebastian: Don’t stop running!

A loud crash—

Silence.

Melissa slowed for a second.

Melissa: I can’t—

Gone.

Only three left.

Koroshi: We’re not going to outrun it.
Keinieo: We don’t need to. The exit’s close.

Sebastian said nothing.

They kept moving, with blood on the walls, everywhere, splattered on the ceiling, floor, and the walls.

Something metallic scraped lightly under Sebastian’s foot.

He looked down.

A gun.

Left behind.

From earlier.

From someone who didn’t make it.

Sebastian picked it up.

Sebastian: This will be nice.

Koroshi: Keep moving!

They ran.

The air slowly grew lighter.

Then—

Koroshi stopped.

Koroshi: It’s here.

The presence filled the space.

Heavy. Unseen.

Koroshi stepped forward.

Koroshi: Go.

Sebastian: What?
Koroshi: I’ll hold it.

Keinieo hesitated.

Keinieo: You won’t make it.
Koroshi: None of us were supposed to.

Koroshi turned—

Gone.

Only Sebastian and Keinieo remained.

They ran.

Light appeared ahead.

The edge.

Freedom.

They slowed as they reached it.

Keinieo: …We made it.

Sebastian didn’t respond.

Keinieo: What’s wrong?

Sebastian tightened his grip on the gun.

Sebastian: I get it now.
Keinieo: Get what?
Sebastian: Why it let us get this far.

The air shifted.

Keinieo stepped back.

Keinieo: Sebastian…?

Sebastian raised the gun.

Sebastian: One of us was supposed to become one of them.

Keinieo: …What?

Sebastian: It’s you.

Keinieo shook his head.

Keinieo: No—that’s not—

Sebastian fired.

Keinieo fell.

Silence.

Sebastian stood there, breathing hard.

Sebastian: …I made it.

He stepped past the edge.

Out.

Everything went quiet.

Too quiet.

Sebastian walked forward slowly.

No voices.

No movement.

Nothing followed him.

Behind him, the boundary stayed still.

No shapes.

No changes.

No proof.

Sebastian stopped walking.

Just for a moment.

Sebastian:

He didn’t turn back.

Because there was nothing there.

He kept walking.

Alone.

The only one left.

End.

R.I.P Everyone except Sebastian. Especially Jake, My beloved.
vs64308 pts ★ Titan
battle13464 pts ★ Champion
China
finale:

The air felt wrong the moment they stepped in.

Sebastian: This place… it’s too quiet.
Frank: We’ve handled worse, right?
Melissa: …Have we?
Gordo (Scooby): Ruh… ruh-roh…
Koroshi: Something is watching.
Keinieo: Then let it watch. We’re leaving anyway.

A low sound echoed through the area.

Then—

Frank: Did you guys see—

Gone.

Melissa: FRANK?!

The group broke into a run.

The walls stretched in ways that didn’t make sense. Shadows bent and twisted as if they were alive.

Gordo (Scooby): Raaaah!

Gone.

Koroshi: It’s picking us off.
Sebastian: Don’t stop running!

A loud crash—

Silence.

Melissa slowed for a second.

Melissa: I can’t—

Gone.

Only three left.

Koroshi: We’re not going to outrun it.
Keinieo: We don’t need to. The exit’s close.

Sebastian said nothing.

They kept moving, with blood on the walls, everywhere, splattered on the ceiling, floor, and the walls.

Something metallic scraped lightly under Sebastian’s foot.

He looked down.

A gun.

Left behind.

From earlier.

From someone who didn’t make it.

Sebastian picked it up.

Sebastian: This will be nice.

Koroshi: Keep moving!

They ran.

The air slowly grew lighter.

Then—

Koroshi stopped.

Koroshi: It’s here.

The presence filled the space.

Heavy. Unseen.

Koroshi stepped forward.

Koroshi: Go.

Sebastian: What?
Koroshi: I’ll hold it.

Keinieo hesitated.

Keinieo: You won’t make it.
Koroshi: None of us were supposed to.

Koroshi turned—

Gone.

Only Sebastian and Keinieo remained.

They ran.

Light appeared ahead.

The edge.

Freedom.

They slowed as they reached it.

Keinieo: …We made it.

Sebastian didn’t respond.

Keinieo: What’s wrong?

Sebastian tightened his grip on the gun.

Sebastian: I get it now.
Keinieo: Get what?
Sebastian: Why it let us get this far.

The air shifted.

Keinieo stepped back.

Keinieo: Sebastian…?

Sebastian raised the gun.

Sebastian: One of us was supposed to become one of them.

Keinieo: …What?

Sebastian: It’s you.

Keinieo shook his head.

Keinieo: No—that’s not—

Sebastian fired.

Keinieo fell.

Silence.

Sebastian stood there, breathing hard.

Sebastian: …I made it.

He stepped past the edge.

Out.

Everything went quiet.

Too quiet.

Sebastian walked forward slowly.

No voices.

No movement.

Nothing followed him.

Behind him, the boundary stayed still.

No shapes.

No changes.

No proof.

Sebastian stopped walking.

Just for a moment.

Sebastian:

He didn’t turn back.

Because there was nothing there.

He kept walking.

Alone.

The only one left.

End.

where did i go bro
vs30478 pts ★ Legend
battle7144 pts ★ Racer
United States
OCM wrote:
finale:

The air felt wrong the moment they stepped in.

Sebastian: This place… it’s too quiet.
Frank: We’ve handled worse, right?
Melissa: …Have we?
Gordo (Scooby): Ruh… ruh-roh…
Koroshi: Something is watching.
Keinieo: Then let it watch. We’re leaving anyway.

A low sound echoed through the area.

Then—

Frank: Did you guys see—

Gone.

Melissa: FRANK?!

The group broke into a run.

The walls stretched in ways that didn’t make sense. Shadows bent and twisted as if they were alive.

Gordo (Scooby): Raaaah!

Gone.

Koroshi: It’s picking us off.
Sebastian: Don’t stop running!

A loud crash—

Silence.

Melissa slowed for a second.

Melissa: I can’t—

Gone.

Only three left.

Koroshi: We’re not going to outrun it.
Keinieo: We don’t need to. The exit’s close.

Sebastian said nothing.

They kept moving, with blood on the walls, everywhere, splattered on the ceiling, floor, and the walls.

Something metallic scraped lightly under Sebastian’s foot.

He looked down.

A gun.

Left behind.

From earlier.

From someone who didn’t make it.

Sebastian picked it up.

Sebastian: This will be nice.

Koroshi: Keep moving!

They ran.

The air slowly grew lighter.

Then—

Koroshi stopped.

Koroshi: It’s here.

The presence filled the space.

Heavy. Unseen.

Koroshi stepped forward.

Koroshi: Go.

Sebastian: What?
Koroshi: I’ll hold it.

Keinieo hesitated.

Keinieo: You won’t make it.
Koroshi: None of us were supposed to.

Koroshi turned—

Gone.

Only Sebastian and Keinieo remained.

They ran.

Light appeared ahead.

The edge.

Freedom.

They slowed as they reached it.

Keinieo: …We made it.

Sebastian didn’t respond.

Keinieo: What’s wrong?

Sebastian tightened his grip on the gun.

Sebastian: I get it now.
Keinieo: Get what?
Sebastian: Why it let us get this far.

The air shifted.

Keinieo stepped back.

Keinieo: Sebastian…?

Sebastian raised the gun.

Sebastian: One of us was supposed to become one of them.

Keinieo: …What?

Sebastian: It’s you.

Keinieo shook his head.

Keinieo: No—that’s not—

Sebastian fired.

Keinieo fell.

Silence.

Sebastian stood there, breathing hard.

Sebastian: …I made it.

He stepped past the edge.

Out.

Everything went quiet.

Too quiet.

Sebastian walked forward slowly.

No voices.

No movement.

Nothing followed him.

Behind him, the boundary stayed still.

No shapes.

No changes.

No proof.

Sebastian stopped walking.

Just for a moment.

Sebastian:

He didn’t turn back.

Because there was nothing there.

He kept walking.

Alone.

The only one left.

End.

where did i go bro

shit lemme edit it
vs30478 pts ★ Legend
battle7144 pts ★ Racer
United States
Sorry about not mentioning a few people, I swear when I finished writing it on notepad and highlighted the whole episode and pasted it here, I thought that those characters came in but there must have been smt i didnt do right, i have no idea, anyways sorry

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