Ashton's House (STORY MODE)
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17614 pts ★ Master
8812 pts ★ ExpertOn 2022-09-16 at 20:26:32
Boring! Booooring! No one will join it!. 
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On 2022-09-16 at 22:22:21
Boring! Booooring! No one will join it!.
Don't mock the fanfic. If you dislike it then say it in a constructive and respectful wau
On 2022-09-16 at 22:24:38
I mean, Why Make It SQUID GAME!? ITS CRINGE GAME
On 2022-09-16 at 22:30:09
I mean, Why Make It SQUID GAME!? ITS CRINGE GAME
It's not cringe,
but it's gore, disgusting, crual, scary, traumatizing, horrendous, terrifying
1On 2022-09-16 at 22:30:51
I mean, Why Make It SQUID GAME!? ITS CRINGE GAME
It's not cringe,
but it's gore, disgusting, crual, scary, traumatizing, horrendous, terrifying
TO YOU!
3On 2022-09-16 at 22:32:44
I mean, Why Make It SQUID GAME!? ITS CRINGE GAME
It's not cringe,
but it's gore, disgusting, crual, scary, traumatizing, horrendous, terrifying
TO YOU!
What ? Do you like it ?
Anyways, a lot of people are using the word cringe for everything and nothing. Cringe shouldn't be used for something you simply dislike, it's more complex than that
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On 2022-09-17 at 07:52:22
Previously
Everyone: What is your name whoever is driving that?
Lol248: I am Lol248 and my brother was Lol247 who is dead.
Lol248: Come in this big helicopter of mine!
Everyone: *Listens to Lol248*
Time for Part 5
Lol248: Now that you are in this helicopter, here is some snacks for you.
Everyone: *Eats the snacks*
45 minutes later
Lol248: Now that everyone is done with their sna- what is this body?
Lol248: *Looks at the body and finds a tag*
Lol248 Reading: Hi! My name is Ralsei123!
Lol248: Ralsei123?
Lol248: Who is that?
Follow me for Part 6!
Everyone: What is your name whoever is driving that?
Lol248: I am Lol248 and my brother was Lol247 who is dead.
Lol248: Come in this big helicopter of mine!
Everyone: *Listens to Lol248*
Time for Part 5
Lol248: Now that you are in this helicopter, here is some snacks for you.
Everyone: *Eats the snacks*
45 minutes later
Lol248: Now that everyone is done with their sna- what is this body?
Lol248: *Looks at the body and finds a tag*
Lol248 Reading: Hi! My name is Ralsei123!
Lol248: Ralsei123?
Lol248: Who is that?
Follow me for Part 6!
On 2022-09-17 at 09:07:35
I kind of feel like this fan fic is extremely uncalled for, besides, it's not that good. It literally turns into squid game and only 2/456 people die, thats more unrealistic than Wargor going over to somebody's house he doesnt know. I feel this could be interesting if it was only Ashton, people who wanted to be in his fanfic and maybe some fictional people.
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On 2022-09-17 at 09:11:51
💀 what even is this thread
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11On 2022-09-17 at 09:11:57
I mean like, Lol248 wanted to join, I'm fine with that, but 2/3 of the other people that you added said they didn't ask to join your fanfic and I really think you should just remove them from it.
On 2022-09-17 at 09:17:40
Out if all the fanfics on MKPC, This is my least favourite, due to it’s lack of effort. While fanfics like mine take over an hour to write, this looks like it takes 10 minutes
32On 2022-09-17 at 11:39:54
Please don't put me in your next part. I really don't want to end up within your fan-fic. Especially not as a corpse.
On 2022-09-17 at 12:17:13
Lack of effort
Lack of coherence
Lack of creativity
Lack of variety
Lack of humor
Lack of interesting things
Lack of suspense
Lack of content
Lack of adventure
Lack of everything
Lack of coherence
Lack of creativity
Lack of variety
Lack of humor
Lack of interesting things
Lack of suspense
Lack of content
Lack of adventure
Lack of everything
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5On 2022-09-17 at 12:35:59
Episode 1: An actual good episode
Ashton: Welcome to my house, everybody. I hope you enjoy all the fun activities you can do here
Nudge: Are there any games that involve death?
Master: Why would you want that?
Lol: Tbh, that kind of sounds fun
Max: I would rather start by making friends with you all
Nudge: I came here to have fun, not do random garbage like making friends
Max: Friendship is important, since how can you play games with other people you aren’t friends with in the same room?
Nudge: You don’t need to be friends to play with the people. Not that a snorlax like you would know
Max: HEY! I may be a snorlax but I am actually the smartest snorlax
Ashton: Please stop fighting in my house. Does anyone want to watch squid game?
Nudge: It has death in it so yes
Lol: While I do want to watch it, why do you like the sound of death so much?
Nudge: Because watching fictional characters die is funny
Master: That sounds like we are going to die
*As Ashton turned on squid game, everyone started floating*
Lol: Uhm, what is going on?
Master: I don’t want to die
Ashton: Did you really think this was going to be normal? The reality of this situation is: IM FORCING YOU ALL INTO SQUID GAME!!!
Lol: Even yourself?
Ashton: YES! Even myself
Master: Why would you do this to us though? And why force yourself into the game?
Ashton: Well I need something to do, so I thought I’d do this just for fun. That’s also why I’m participating
*As he said that, everyone got sucked into the TV, scared as they were about to participate in squid game*
Ashton: Welcome to my house, everybody. I hope you enjoy all the fun activities you can do here
Nudge: Are there any games that involve death?
Master: Why would you want that?
Lol: Tbh, that kind of sounds fun
Max: I would rather start by making friends with you all
Nudge: I came here to have fun, not do random garbage like making friends
Max: Friendship is important, since how can you play games with other people you aren’t friends with in the same room?
Nudge: You don’t need to be friends to play with the people. Not that a snorlax like you would know
Max: HEY! I may be a snorlax but I am actually the smartest snorlax
Ashton: Please stop fighting in my house. Does anyone want to watch squid game?
Nudge: It has death in it so yes
Lol: While I do want to watch it, why do you like the sound of death so much?
Nudge: Because watching fictional characters die is funny
Master: That sounds like we are going to die
*As Ashton turned on squid game, everyone started floating*
Lol: Uhm, what is going on?
Master: I don’t want to die
Ashton: Did you really think this was going to be normal? The reality of this situation is: IM FORCING YOU ALL INTO SQUID GAME!!!
Lol: Even yourself?
Ashton: YES! Even myself
Master: Why would you do this to us though? And why force yourself into the game?
Ashton: Well I need something to do, so I thought I’d do this just for fun. That’s also why I’m participating
*As he said that, everyone got sucked into the TV, scared as they were about to participate in squid game*
1On 2022-09-17 at 12:45:01
Episode 1: An actual good episode
Ashton: Welcome to my house, everybody. I hope you enjoy all the fun activities you can do here
Nudge: Are there any games that involve death?
Master: Why would you want that?
Lol: Tbh, that kind of sounds fun
Max: I would rather start by making friends with you all
Nudge: I came here to have fun, not do random garbage like making friends
Max: Friendship is important, since how can you play games with other people you aren’t friends with in the same room?
Nudge: You don’t need to be friends to play with the people. Not that a snorlax like you would know
Max: HEY! I may be a snorlax but I am actually the smartest snorlax
Ashton: Please stop fighting in my house. Does anyone want to watch squid game?
Nudge: It has death in it so yes
Lol: While I do want to watch it, why do you like the sound of death so much?
Nudge: Because watching fictional characters die is funny
Master: That sounds like we are going to die
*As Ashton turned on squid game, everyone started floating*
Lol: Uhm, what is going on?
Master: I don’t want to die
Ashton: Did you really think this was going to be normal? The reality of this situation is: IM FORCING YOU ALL INTO SQUID GAME!!!
Lol: Even yourself?
Ashton: YES! Even myself
Master: Why would you do this to us though? And why force yourself into the game?
Ashton: Well I need something to do, so I thought I’d do this just for fun. That’s also why I’m participating
*As he said that, everyone got sucked into the TV, scared as they were about to participate in squid game*
Ashton: Welcome to my house, everybody. I hope you enjoy all the fun activities you can do here
Nudge: Are there any games that involve death?
Master: Why would you want that?
Lol: Tbh, that kind of sounds fun
Max: I would rather start by making friends with you all
Nudge: I came here to have fun, not do random garbage like making friends
Max: Friendship is important, since how can you play games with other people you aren’t friends with in the same room?
Nudge: You don’t need to be friends to play with the people. Not that a snorlax like you would know
Max: HEY! I may be a snorlax but I am actually the smartest snorlax
Ashton: Please stop fighting in my house. Does anyone want to watch squid game?
Nudge: It has death in it so yes
Lol: While I do want to watch it, why do you like the sound of death so much?
Nudge: Because watching fictional characters die is funny
Master: That sounds like we are going to die
*As Ashton turned on squid game, everyone started floating*
Lol: Uhm, what is going on?
Master: I don’t want to die
Ashton: Did you really think this was going to be normal? The reality of this situation is: IM FORCING YOU ALL INTO SQUID GAME!!!
Lol: Even yourself?
Ashton: YES! Even myself
Master: Why would you do this to us though? And why force yourself into the game?
Ashton: Well I need something to do, so I thought I’d do this just for fun. That’s also why I’m participating
*As he said that, everyone got sucked into the TV, scared as they were about to participate in squid game*
That is alot better with characters who actually have character traits and everything makes sense. Sadly the fact Master and LOL were in it makes it slightly inaccurate to the original although it makes more narrative sense for them to have been there from the start.
243On 2022-09-17 at 17:36:21
Lack of effort
Lack of coherence
Lack of creativity
Lack of variety
Lack of humor
Lack of interesting things
Lack of suspense
Lack of content
Lack of adventure
Lack of everything
Lack of coherence
Lack of creativity
Lack of variety
Lack of humor
Lack of interesting things
Lack of suspense
Lack of content
Lack of adventure
Lack of everything
Lack of realism
2On 2022-09-17 at 17:37:44
💀 what even is this thread
good question 💀💀💀
On 2022-09-17 at 17:47:57
Episode 1: An actual good episode
Ashton: Welcome to my house, everybody. I hope you enjoy all the fun activities you can do here
Nudge: Are there any games that involve death?
Master: Why would you want that?
Lol: Tbh, that kind of sounds fun
Max: I would rather start by making friends with you all
Nudge: I came here to have fun, not do random garbage like making friends
Max: Friendship is important, since how can you play games with other people you aren’t friends with in the same room?
Nudge: You don’t need to be friends to play with the people. Not that a snorlax like you would know
Max: HEY! I may be a snorlax but I am actually the smartest snorlax
Ashton: Please stop fighting in my house. Does anyone want to watch squid game?
Nudge: It has death in it so yes
Lol: While I do want to watch it, why do you like the sound of death so much?
Nudge: Because watching fictional characters die is funny
Master: That sounds like we are going to die
*As Ashton turned on squid game, everyone started floating*
Lol: Uhm, what is going on?
Master: I don’t want to die
Ashton: Did you really think this was going to be normal? The reality of this situation is: IM FORCING YOU ALL INTO SQUID GAME!!!
Lol: Even yourself?
Ashton: YES! Even myself
Master: Why would you do this to us though? And why force yourself into the game?
Ashton: Well I need something to do, so I thought I’d do this just for fun. That’s also why I’m participating
*As he said that, everyone got sucked into the TV, scared as they were about to participate in squid game*
Ashton: Welcome to my house, everybody. I hope you enjoy all the fun activities you can do here
Nudge: Are there any games that involve death?
Master: Why would you want that?
Lol: Tbh, that kind of sounds fun
Max: I would rather start by making friends with you all
Nudge: I came here to have fun, not do random garbage like making friends
Max: Friendship is important, since how can you play games with other people you aren’t friends with in the same room?
Nudge: You don’t need to be friends to play with the people. Not that a snorlax like you would know
Max: HEY! I may be a snorlax but I am actually the smartest snorlax
Ashton: Please stop fighting in my house. Does anyone want to watch squid game?
Nudge: It has death in it so yes
Lol: While I do want to watch it, why do you like the sound of death so much?
Nudge: Because watching fictional characters die is funny
Master: That sounds like we are going to die
*As Ashton turned on squid game, everyone started floating*
Lol: Uhm, what is going on?
Master: I don’t want to die
Ashton: Did you really think this was going to be normal? The reality of this situation is: IM FORCING YOU ALL INTO SQUID GAME!!!
Lol: Even yourself?
Ashton: YES! Even myself
Master: Why would you do this to us though? And why force yourself into the game?
Ashton: Well I need something to do, so I thought I’d do this just for fun. That’s also why I’m participating
*As he said that, everyone got sucked into the TV, scared as they were about to participate in squid game*
This will become the new Nudge fanfic lol
On 2022-09-17 at 18:04:56
In the corner of This video by Ashton, it is shown that he is using an account called "lol247".
hmm...
the "dead brother" of @lol248?
great question
.
hmm...
the "dead brother" of @lol248?
great question
.