The Plot Twist Game

So, this came into my mind some time ago, a story that anyone here can change, the plot twist game

What will happen here: I'll make the introduction for a story, someone will make a plot twist, a message starting with "but then", then next person does a plot twist for the plot twist, and well, it will keep going until 14 linear plot twists are made (15 messages a story). When a story ends, I'll make a new one, you can give ideas for introductions if you want too.

Things worth knowing:
-to deny spam, a person can only write one plot twist per story
-the twists will be reviewed by me, if I give a check mark reaction it means it's now official to the story
-check if the plot twist you are twisting was checked by me or if the writer has wrote another one before, your message will only be checked if the one you're twisting was checked too
-if I Rob Dab a message it means that's the end of the story
-if a story is not getting many messages, it can be ended with a minimum of 6 twists
-try doing a paragraph, yes, short lines and essays will still be acceptable, but I recommend that so the story don't end up too short, but neither too long
-short messages need to bring really game changing plot twists to be accepted
-the entire story will be put on the introduction message of said story, so you can read it entirely
-this comment will also show in which pages each story starts
-at the end of each story I'll make a poll to decide the story's name

STORY 1
One day, three miners were on a cave full of crystals, it looked magical, they were looking around, until one of them, Jack, decided to mine one of these ores...


STORY SO FAR


Any questions? Ask me, I'll answer when I can

but then, the crystal Jack mined turned out to be... the evil crystal

i dont know how to make a good plot twist, but then...