List of comments from -Jade- (500)

It's in the description, Drag Me To Hell by Lesbian Bed Death

Forgot to rate this lolololololol

Time to do so now ig :p

Gameplay - 7/10
Some parts are quite confusing with the branching paths but the track itself is good to play, road could be a little wider but it's fine

Graphics - 4/5
Some of the best graphics I've seen in a Pixilart track whose design is inspired somewhat by SBOK6/SBOK7

Replayability - 3/5
Fun to drive around on but there's no real challenge

Theming - 3/5
Quite unique, I love the barrenness of the track but it doesn't sell the woodland theme too well

Decor - 0/3
There's literally none

Music - 1/1
Great for an empty but beautiful track

Personal bias - 1/1

Total - 19/30 (low 4 Stars)
To improve I'd suggest selling the woodland theming more and adding decor

If it's their early 2000s stuff sure, their new stuff sucks tho

Anyway this track is uh. It's a track, I'll give you that. Just a few gripes:
- There's far too many cannons
- It's quite easy to get stuck in a wall (which there are also quite a few too many of)
- The shortcut doesn't work
- The layout is quite scrambled

As it stands now 2/5 sorry, you'll improve with time though c:

Just added a description and changed the track prefix to match the new name of the multicup (Jade's Caffeine-Induced Racing)

More like Lava Dubstep lol
Anyway 4/5 it plays well but the graphics are a bit lacking

The route is:
- First use the cannon
- Jump onto the LIGHT brown path (the dark brown path has some checkpoint issues)
- Follow the river all the way across (don't use the cannon again)
- Complete the lap

I'll admit that zx didn't really do well in the communication department (and the visuals are quite. Yeah you can see for yourself) but aside from a minor checkpoint issue it's not terrible, 3/5

Holy shit Dee Ess Mayonnaise Circle remake, this is awesome 4.5/5 -> 5/5

The fact that you named yourself after this multicup 😭
Idk why I rated this 5/5 was I high- *2023 flashbacks*
But it's okay, everyone starts somewhere, and to be fair it's never particularly a great place, 3/5

Damn this is a fun track, some decor can feel a bit spammy at times but that's probably just my bad driving xD
5/5

Not a huge fan of the angular turns usually but HOLY SHIT is this track good, I guess the only thing I don't like is how you respawn after falling in a hole, but otherwise a solid 5/5 from me

I'm starting to see some flaws with the track like the opacity of the spore clouds but imo it's still 5/5 (also Gamerguy I'm like 90% sure it's supposed to be simple in theming)

This was actually quite fun to play! I love the more stylised aesthetic, though I can understand that the simplicity wouldn't be everyone's favourite thing. Overall 5/5 from me, some decor are a little out of place for my liking but it's great imo

I remember talking about this with you a few days ago in DMs, and holy shit did you deliver for a simplistic track. The gimmick is awesome and the theming is very unique, 5/5

Also correct me if I'm wrong but isn't this one of the only tracks for the TBC that actually uses mushrooms as its primary theming?

Oop Zelda thing
Also this reminds me of my first track idea
The Gambas look quite bad imo but the track is great so 5/5

Ooooo Touhou 1 and 2 mention! Great but the turns are quite angular, 4/5

I love the track and I feel that the basic theming is intentional, however the design and texturing is quite kitsch and there are a lot of sharp turns but I generally like it overall, 4/5 from me

Honestly if I had anything negative to say about this it'd be very much subjective and a minor nitpick, so 5/5 from me, and a high one at that (this has a great chance at winning the TBC btw, especially with how ambitious the theming is)

Hold up why is the music GAS GAS GAS from Initial D

The respawns are honestly terrible but the layout is alright (please indicate a linear path though) 3/5

Also this'd be far better suited for two laps or even just the one

- Never use obligatory holes, if you have something to enter that's below the track use a teleporter because it doesn't completely mess with the race
- Your visual communication could certainly be better, a lot of the time you're using the same graphics to show different things and vice versa
- The art direction is uh. Certainly existent (I don't care that it's bad honestly but if you're doing this properly you need to add good textures)
- The track width should remain fairly consistent, ideally it should be the same all the way through except if it's meant to be that way with minor width changes
- Make sure something's going on with areas that are very long, adding obstacles or boosts really helps spice up the gameplay (though make sure your boosts are visible on the track art)
- As it stands now I'm giving this 2/5, right now it's bad but you can make very easy improvements so I won't be too harsh