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6798 pts ★ RacerOn 2022-10-06 at 01:14:19
Off-topic: Ranking of the 5 current fanfics
1: MysteryMan's
2: TheNudgyHampter's
3: Lely's
4: Fways's
5: This
1: MysteryMan's
2: TheNudgyHampter's
3: Lely's
4: Fways's
5: This
Then we don't have the same tastes
To me, swearing isn't an issue at all and can make the fanfic more funny, or more sad, more exciting, I don't know. It's like a spice.
I also think MysteryMan's one is good, but I prefer Danganronpa and KohLanta to it pog
especially because I'm more familiar with 1) the style and 2) the roster of charactersTo me its more like
1) Koh-Lanta Mario 2022 10/10
2) Danganronpa MKPC 9,5/10
3) Toadal Drama n Knuckles 9/10
4) MKPC Archipel 4/10
5) The Twilightverse 3,99/10
Your fanfic is much better than that
Uh excuse me, I don't think it is. It's not well-written contrary to every other fanfic except Twilightverse, it's also very weird, boring, it fails the twists, it's not exciting at all, there's no suspense and there's no fun 😞
I like how it is more a different theme from the rest. While the others are about action, I feel like yours is more comedy, with a bit of action sprinkled in every so often
On 2022-10-06 at 01:12:13
Off-topic: Ranking of the 5 current fanfics
1: MysteryMan's
2: TheNudgyHampter's
3: Lely's
4: Fways's
5: This
1: MysteryMan's
2: TheNudgyHampter's
3: Lely's
4: Fways's
5: This
For me, it would be similar, but MysteryMan’s in 4th (don’t get me wrong, it’s good, but nothing special compared to the 3 above)
Your opinion is biased
On 2022-10-06 at 01:06:14
Off-topic: Ranking of the 5 current fanfics
1: MysteryMan's
2: TheNudgyHampter's
3: Lely's
4: Fways's
5: This
1: MysteryMan's
2: TheNudgyHampter's
3: Lely's
4: Fways's
5: This
For me, it would be similar, but MysteryMan’s in 4th (don’t get me wrong, it’s good, but nothing special compared to the 3 above)
On 2022-10-06 at 01:01:47
It seems like this topic isn't working. What is your descion:
To this series to end?
Or the series to live on?
To this series to end?
Or the series to live on?
Keep it going, but make things make sense, and have effect.
However, I’d say redo Season 2, Episode one, since some stuff feels weird, mainly max coming back, since that removes a lot of character development knowing someone that they almost managed to become friends with died
In episode 2 you'll find out why he managed to live.
Yes but it removes character development and is a boring twist
ngl I have to agree. I've read it 2 times, and thought to myself: Am I boring? Or do I suck at stories?
If you want advice for how to write fanfics, look at my episode for this fanfic, or re-read MKPC danganronpa
1On 2022-10-06 at 00:57:29
It seems like this topic isn't working. What is your descion:
To this series to end?
Or the series to live on?
To this series to end?
Or the series to live on?
Keep it going, but make things make sense, and have effect.
However, I’d say redo Season 2, Episode one, since some stuff feels weird, mainly max coming back, since that removes a lot of character development knowing someone that they almost managed to become friends with died
In episode 2 you'll find out why he managed to live.
Yes but it removes character development and is a boring twist
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1On 2022-10-06 at 00:55:58
It seems like this topic isn't working. What is your descion:
To this series to end?
Or the series to live on?
To this series to end?
Or the series to live on?
Keep it going, but make things make sense, and have effect.
However, I’d say redo Season 2, Episode one, since some stuff feels weird, mainly max coming back, since that removes a lot of character development knowing someone that they almost managed to become friends with died
On 2022-10-06 at 00:47:27
ok since someone I copying my series I have to sacrifice the Anime kid
©Twilightverse
©Twilightverse
Do you think toxic people and rule breakers will suddenly stop stealing your fanfic/topic concept, just because you put a copyright in the title?
Agreed (also I just realised who made it)
But in that situation Ralsei is clearly freaking out. Okay "Lidelle" stole the title, but it has nothing to do with the Twilightverse tbh.
And anyways @-Ralsei- you truly have copyright obsession or what ? Stop spreading it everywhere, it doesn't have any utility
uh no I'm not. It justs feels right to copyright it, its a series.
Why do you have to copyright it ? It's forbidden to use a name, anyways, and whether if there is a copyright or no
+ bad guys don't care about a copyright sign
don't forget about lawsuits.. just saying.
Bro we're on a racing game community and you're talking about copyright and lawsuits 😭😭😭💀💀💀
you got a point... But still its not cool of Knoah to copy my fanfic.
It's not Knoah, Lidelle is not an alt
If you are basing it solely off tracks, then they still could, since
and Ralsei didn’t have the same tracks, yet we’re by the same person
Not wrong, at the same time MisterCoolSkin was my alt but the circuits were not shared
Forgot about that one…
why did he other one come to mind first ☠️☠️☠️
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1On 2022-10-06 at 00:42:12
ok since someone I copying my series I have to sacrifice the Anime kid
©Twilightverse
©Twilightverse
Do you think toxic people and rule breakers will suddenly stop stealing your fanfic/topic concept, just because you put a copyright in the title?
Agreed (also I just realised who made it)
But in that situation Ralsei is clearly freaking out. Okay "Lidelle" stole the title, but it has nothing to do with the Twilightverse tbh.
And anyways @-Ralsei- you truly have copyright obsession or what ? Stop spreading it everywhere, it doesn't have any utility
uh no I'm not. It justs feels right to copyright it, its a series.
Why do you have to copyright it ? It's forbidden to use a name, anyways, and whether if there is a copyright or no
+ bad guys don't care about a copyright sign
don't forget about lawsuits.. just saying.
Bro we're on a racing game community and you're talking about copyright and lawsuits 😭😭😭💀💀💀
you got a point... But still its not cool of Knoah to copy my fanfic.
It's not Knoah, Lidelle is not an alt
If you are basing it solely off tracks, then they still could, since
and Ralsei didn’t have the same tracks, yet we’re by the same person
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2On 2022-10-06 at 00:38:59
The question is: Why would they steal this fanfic? Out of the 5 current ones, it is definitely the worst (nothing makes sense) so the only reason why I see him doing it is because he was a knoah alt (not garunteed, but highly likely) and wanted to steal the fanfic with him in it
its in 4th place...
Based on followers, yes, but based on my opinion, it’s in last (same with Lely (I think))
12On 2022-10-06 at 00:35:43
The question is: Why would they steal this fanfic? Out of the 5 current ones, it is definitely the worst (nothing makes sense) so the only reason why I see him doing it is because he was a knoah alt (not garunteed, but highly likely) and wanted to steal the fanfic with him in it
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2On 2022-10-05 at 22:15:56
ok since someone I copying my series I have to sacrifice the Anime kid
©Twilightverse
©Twilightverse
Do you think toxic people and rule breakers will suddenly stop stealing your fanfic/topic concept, just because you put a copyright in the title?
Agreed (also I just realised who made it)
On 2022-10-05 at 22:10:31
ok since someone I copying my series I have to sacrifice the Anime kid
©Twilightverse
©Twilightverse
No one is copying your series, and if someone is, please say who it is, to prove that this isn’t just a message to increase your messages
1On 2022-09-24 at 00:20:27
Episode whatever: I’m ending the season myself to get season 2 ready for his unban
What happened last time:
Toadboiiiii: hi I’m evil
Nudge: SO, WHAT IS THE PLAN?!?!?!
Ralsei: YOU EXPECT ME TO KNOW?!?!?!
Nudge: I HAVE AN IDEA!!! I NEED TO GET INTO THE COMPUTER ROOM SAFELY AND THEN DO SOME HACKING!!!
Lely: I have an idea. Please don’t get hurt
Ralsei: I HAVE AN IDEA!!! IM GOING TO ACT AS BAIT, SINCE IF I GET ATTACKED I CAN HEAL MYSELF!!!
Parakoopa: I have an idea. I’m going to fly nudge into the vent so that he can sneak in
Max: I have an idea! GIVE! ME! LELY!
Master8: I have an idea. I escape
ToadBoi: I have an idea, YOU STOP RECYCLING THE SAME JOKE OVER AND OVER
*Parakoopa flew Nudge into the vents and into the computer room*
Ralsei: Come here max. You know you want to kill me
Max: NO!!! I just want Lely
Lely: Why do you want me though? What did I do to you?
Max: THAT DOESNT MATTER!!! In order to get Lely, I suppose I’m going to need to deal with Ralsei
*He immedietly punched Ralsei to the ground, knocking him sword out of his hand*
ToadBoi: Good job Max. Now, take his sword and FINISH HIM OFF
*He did exactly that, but right as the sword was about to stab into him, he stopped*
ToadBoi: WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?!?!? I!!! SAID!!! KILL HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!
Max: NEVER!!! I have broken free from the curse you out on me
Nudge: So, did I manage to shut down the brain ship in Max?
MonoBoi: WHAT!!! HOW DID YOU KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nudge: it was actually quite obvious. Now, WE NEED TO RUN
Max: I’m afraid I can’t
Lely: Why not? You can come with us now that you aren’t trying to kill us
Max: You see… I have one last thing I need to do, and I’m going to need to to leave ahead of me
Lely: NO! I don’t want to go without you. I can’t leave any friends behind
Max: You really consider me a friend after all I just did to you?
Ralsei: Lely, just come with us. If it’s what he wants, then we should do as he pleases
Lely: Fine
*Everyone except left the castle*
Nudge: So, what shall we talk about while waiting for max?
Master8: I want to talk about that barrier around the castle
Lely: Barrier? Then how is max supposed to get out?
Max: I can’t
Lely: Why would you do this to yourself? Why don’t you want to join us?
Max: Truth is, this is the self destruct sequence. The barrier is set up around the castle when it is activated, to avoid explosions leaving the castle
Nudge: Will this castle make up its mind whether it is medieval or futuristic?
*As he said that, the explosions started going off*
Max: Goodbye everyone
Lely: NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
*as Lely started crying, the entirety of the castle blew up, killing everything in it, including Max*
What happened last time:
Toadboiiiii: hi I’m evil
Nudge: SO, WHAT IS THE PLAN?!?!?!
Ralsei: YOU EXPECT ME TO KNOW?!?!?!
Nudge: I HAVE AN IDEA!!! I NEED TO GET INTO THE COMPUTER ROOM SAFELY AND THEN DO SOME HACKING!!!
Lely: I have an idea. Please don’t get hurt
Ralsei: I HAVE AN IDEA!!! IM GOING TO ACT AS BAIT, SINCE IF I GET ATTACKED I CAN HEAL MYSELF!!!
Parakoopa: I have an idea. I’m going to fly nudge into the vent so that he can sneak in
Max: I have an idea! GIVE! ME! LELY!
Master8: I have an idea. I escape
ToadBoi: I have an idea, YOU STOP RECYCLING THE SAME JOKE OVER AND OVER
*Parakoopa flew Nudge into the vents and into the computer room*
Ralsei: Come here max. You know you want to kill me
Max: NO!!! I just want Lely
Lely: Why do you want me though? What did I do to you?
Max: THAT DOESNT MATTER!!! In order to get Lely, I suppose I’m going to need to deal with Ralsei
*He immedietly punched Ralsei to the ground, knocking him sword out of his hand*
ToadBoi: Good job Max. Now, take his sword and FINISH HIM OFF
*He did exactly that, but right as the sword was about to stab into him, he stopped*
ToadBoi: WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?!?!? I!!! SAID!!! KILL HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!
Max: NEVER!!! I have broken free from the curse you out on me
Nudge: So, did I manage to shut down the brain ship in Max?
MonoBoi: WHAT!!! HOW DID YOU KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nudge: it was actually quite obvious. Now, WE NEED TO RUN
Max: I’m afraid I can’t
Lely: Why not? You can come with us now that you aren’t trying to kill us
Max: You see… I have one last thing I need to do, and I’m going to need to to leave ahead of me
Lely: NO! I don’t want to go without you. I can’t leave any friends behind
Max: You really consider me a friend after all I just did to you?
Ralsei: Lely, just come with us. If it’s what he wants, then we should do as he pleases
Lely: Fine
*Everyone except left the castle*
Nudge: So, what shall we talk about while waiting for max?
Master8: I want to talk about that barrier around the castle
Lely: Barrier? Then how is max supposed to get out?
Max: I can’t
Lely: Why would you do this to yourself? Why don’t you want to join us?
Max: Truth is, this is the self destruct sequence. The barrier is set up around the castle when it is activated, to avoid explosions leaving the castle
Nudge: Will this castle make up its mind whether it is medieval or futuristic?
*As he said that, the explosions started going off*
Max: Goodbye everyone
Lely: NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
*as Lely started crying, the entirety of the castle blew up, killing everything in it, including Max*
2On 2022-09-23 at 08:42:25
What is going to happen to this topic since Ralsei is banned?
We wait until he is unbanned
22On 2022-09-17 at 18:56:05
Why does nobody except toadboiiiii have the right personality? And why do i hate freemasons?
you don't. You are scared of freemasons. Freemasons or the goverment.
Why though? Also, in season 2, PLEASE FIX THE PERSONALITIES!!!
On 2022-09-17 at 18:53:17
Why does nobody except toadboiiiii have the right personality? And why do i hate freemasons?
On 2022-09-16 at 23:59:39
Why am I navy? It would make more sense if I was red
Yes but Ralsei is incapable of making good decisions (I’m sorry but it’s sort of true)
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1On 2022-09-16 at 22:08:48
Hampter: Last time on The Twlightverse!
Hampter:And Now Back To The Twilight Zone!
Ralsei: Ugh.... What happene- YO THE GUYS ARE BACK!
Hampter: Woah! How did they come back....?
Hampter: What...? WHY I'M WEARING A SKIRT!????
The Great Gods: BAHAHAHAHA!
Knoah: Ugh.... What Happened!
Hampter: Apparently Me, Quorzel, And Tendo Got Renamed, And We Have Powers.
???: Hello? Hey You!
Both: Lely!?
Lely: How I ran into you guys!?
Both: IDK!
Max-Bros: It's Been so long!
Lely: Wow! Your Not Snorlax Anymore!
Max-Bros: Yep! I'm now Senko!
Lely: Cooooool!
Both: *High-five*
Kay: Damn, I can't believe your here..!
Ralsei: You seem hurt... Luckily, I have a power that can heal people, the spell is called Heal Prayer!
*Heals*
Lely: Thanks!
Ralsei: No problem! Want to join our adventure to the Twilight Zone?
Lely: Sure!
Lely has joined the gang.
Ralsei: Lets go! We have a full team now! Ok, Back to the adventure!
Parakoopa: Yeyyyyy!
Master: Lets Gooo!
Hampter: And Now Back To The Twilightverse!
Season 1: Chapter 5. The final Comfrontation.
Ralsei: Guys! Its The Twilight Zone!
Lely: I've found it! This is another area For The K-Prophecy!
Ralsei: The Hell Is That!?
Lely: Its Apparently supposed to be when the great gods form a powerful titan... No one knows of it... But I do think there K-pop stars!
Master: Hahaha.... You're here.. I MUST FOLLOW KINGS COMMAND!!!
*knockout*
Hampter: Where are we!?
Knoah: I don't know...? Hey, where is Max-bros??
Max: Bahahahaha! I tricked you!!!!
Kay: So thats the weird feeling I got from Max And Master..!
Max-Bros: You've been setenced to life for trying to break into the Holy area!! But to be honest, I would've been more fun watching you die in pain by the roaring!
Lely: Why you're doing this max...
Max-Bros: I'm sorry... but I can't lose this job.
Lely: WHYYYY!!!
*Max-Bros runs away*
Hampter: Huh. Weird- Wait, Where is Ralsei!?
*overhears Ralsei and Toadboiii*
Ralsei: Yall Guys in jail SHUT UP!!
Toadboiiii: Yea!!
Hampter: Toadboiiii!? Ralsei!? What you're doing here!?
Ralsei: Trying to figure out the code to unlock your jailcell! Now hush! Lemme figure it out!....
*Unlocks the Code*
*Jailroom Unlocks*
Hampter: We got out! Thanks, Ralsei And Toadboiiii!
Both: You're welcome!
Toadboiiii: NOW LETS GET THE KING!!!
Parakoopa: Yea!.... But.. Don't we need a plan?
Toadboiiii: Yeah, Lets figure out a Plan!
To Be Continued...
Hampter:And Now Back To The Twilight Zone!
Ralsei: Ugh.... What happene- YO THE GUYS ARE BACK!
Hampter: Woah! How did they come back....?
Hampter: What...? WHY I'M WEARING A SKIRT!????
The Great Gods: BAHAHAHAHA!
Knoah: Ugh.... What Happened!
Hampter: Apparently Me, Quorzel, And Tendo Got Renamed, And We Have Powers.
???: Hello? Hey You!
Both: Lely!?
Lely: How I ran into you guys!?
Both: IDK!
Max-Bros: It's Been so long!
Lely: Wow! Your Not Snorlax Anymore!
Max-Bros: Yep! I'm now Senko!
Lely: Cooooool!
Both: *High-five*
Kay: Damn, I can't believe your here..!
Ralsei: You seem hurt... Luckily, I have a power that can heal people, the spell is called Heal Prayer!
*Heals*
Lely: Thanks!
Ralsei: No problem! Want to join our adventure to the Twilight Zone?
Lely: Sure!
Lely has joined the gang.
Ralsei: Lets go! We have a full team now! Ok, Back to the adventure!
Parakoopa: Yeyyyyy!
Master: Lets Gooo!
Hampter: And Now Back To The Twilightverse!
Season 1: Chapter 5. The final Comfrontation.
Ralsei: Guys! Its The Twilight Zone!
Lely: I've found it! This is another area For The K-Prophecy!
Ralsei: The Hell Is That!?
Lely: Its Apparently supposed to be when the great gods form a powerful titan... No one knows of it... But I do think there K-pop stars!
Master: Hahaha.... You're here.. I MUST FOLLOW KINGS COMMAND!!!
*knockout*
Hampter: Where are we!?
Knoah: I don't know...? Hey, where is Max-bros??
Max: Bahahahaha! I tricked you!!!!
Kay: So thats the weird feeling I got from Max And Master..!
Max-Bros: You've been setenced to life for trying to break into the Holy area!! But to be honest, I would've been more fun watching you die in pain by the roaring!
Lely: Why you're doing this max...
Max-Bros: I'm sorry... but I can't lose this job.
Lely: WHYYYY!!!
*Max-Bros runs away*
Hampter: Huh. Weird- Wait, Where is Ralsei!?
*overhears Ralsei and Toadboiii*
Ralsei: Yall Guys in jail SHUT UP!!
Toadboiiii: Yea!!
Hampter: Toadboiiii!? Ralsei!? What you're doing here!?
Ralsei: Trying to figure out the code to unlock your jailcell! Now hush! Lemme figure it out!....
*Unlocks the Code*
*Jailroom Unlocks*
Hampter: We got out! Thanks, Ralsei And Toadboiiii!
Both: You're welcome!
Toadboiiii: NOW LETS GET THE KING!!!
Parakoopa: Yea!.... But.. Don't we need a plan?
Toadboiiii: Yeah, Lets figure out a Plan!
To Be Continued...
Why did you put me in teal, you in green and Max in blue?
Because Now I'm Green, You feel like a teal to me, and Max Feels like a bue color to me
Let people have what colors they want, and anyway, Lely is a green for nature, max is teal kind (except in this fanfic apparently) snorlax, and you a blue to have a dark color
1On 2022-09-10 at 21:59:07
Hampter turns to anime, And Tendo turns into A FURRY.... Part 2:
Hampter: Last time on The Twilight Zone!
The Great Gods: Quorzel, Hampter, Tendo. You are changing for a reason. Tendo. You'll be good use for healing if someone gets hurt. Hampter. I think you might like what I turn you into! Quorzel. By flying, you can distract the enemies you face.....
The Great Gods:
Your
Names
Are
Ralsei, TheNudgyHampter, Parakoopa! NOW TRANSFORM, LET YOUR BODY TAKE YOU!!!
*Transforms*
Hampter:And Now Back To The Twilight Zone!
Ralsei: Ugh.... What happene- YO THE GUYS ARE BACK!
Hampter: Woah! How did they come back....?
Knoah: Ugh.... What Happened!
Hampter: Apparently Me, Quorzel, And Tendo Got Renamed, And We Have Powers.
???: Hello? Hey You!
Both: Lely!?
Lely: How I ran into you guys!?
Both: IDK!
Max-Bros: It's Been so long!
*Manhugs*
Kay: Damn, I can't believe your here..!
Ralsei: You seem hurt... Luckily, I have apower that can heal people, the spell is called Heal Prayer
*Heals*
Lely: Thanks!
Ralsei: No problem! Want to join our adventure to the Twilight Zone?
Lely: Sure!
Lely has joined the gang.
Ralsei: Lets go! We have a full team now! Ok, Back to the adventure!
Parakoopa: Yeyyyyy!
To Be Continued...
Hampter: Last time on The Twilight Zone!
The Great Gods: Quorzel, Hampter, Tendo. You are changing for a reason. Tendo. You'll be good use for healing if someone gets hurt. Hampter. I think you might like what I turn you into! Quorzel. By flying, you can distract the enemies you face.....
The Great Gods:
Your
Names
Are
Ralsei, TheNudgyHampter, Parakoopa! NOW TRANSFORM, LET YOUR BODY TAKE YOU!!!
*Transforms*
Hampter:And Now Back To The Twilight Zone!
Ralsei: Ugh.... What happene- YO THE GUYS ARE BACK!
Hampter: Woah! How did they come back....?
Knoah: Ugh.... What Happened!
Hampter: Apparently Me, Quorzel, And Tendo Got Renamed, And We Have Powers.
???: Hello? Hey You!
Both: Lely!?
Lely: How I ran into you guys!?
Both: IDK!
Max-Bros: It's Been so long!
*Manhugs*
Kay: Damn, I can't believe your here..!
Ralsei: You seem hurt... Luckily, I have apower that can heal people, the spell is called Heal Prayer
*Heals*
Lely: Thanks!
Ralsei: No problem! Want to join our adventure to the Twilight Zone?
Lely: Sure!
Lely has joined the gang.
Ralsei: Lets go! We have a full team now! Ok, Back to the adventure!
Parakoopa: Yeyyyyy!
To Be Continued...
I hate the colors used for this. It should be:
Nudge
Max
Lely
Parakoopa
Ralsei
Kay
Knoah
Also where’s the part where I question why I’m wearing a skirt?
On 2022-07-30 at 00:47:48
What you think of the story though??
It’s ok, I guess