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6102 pts ★ RacerOn 2022-10-06 at 00:54:20
It seems like this topic isn't working. What is your descion:
To this series to end?
Or the series to live on?
To this series to end?
Or the series to live on?
I want it to live on. You don't need to stop, you need to improve. And I can help you, but Nudge as well, Max as well etc.
On 2022-10-06 at 00:49:59
Time for a review
*sigh* well honestly, I'm not the biggest fan of this fanfic.
It lacks a concept, it lacks identity, something to stand out. The sentences are weird or cringe most of the time, sometimes they doesn't fit the character they're supposed to represent.
Also, some things are truly ridiculous. The way every character act. They don't have proper personnality and they all feel like the same. Plus some moments are truly ridiculous. I've never seen someone who's throwing himself out of the window, just because he wonders about something passing by, the colors were unfitting, the glow up was badly done...
Nice effort, keep going
*sigh* well honestly, I'm not the biggest fan of this fanfic.
It lacks a concept, it lacks identity, something to stand out. The sentences are weird or cringe most of the time, sometimes they doesn't fit the character they're supposed to represent.
Also, some things are truly ridiculous. The way every character act. They don't have proper personnality and they all feel like the same. Plus some moments are truly ridiculous. I've never seen someone who's throwing himself out of the window, just because he wonders about something passing by, the colors were unfitting, the glow up was badly done...
Nice effort, keep going
On 2022-10-06 at 00:44:02
The question is: Why would they steal this fanfic? Out of the 5 current ones, it is definitely the worst (nothing makes sense) so the only reason why I see him doing it is because he was a knoah alt (not garunteed, but highly likely) and wanted to steal the fanfic with him in it
its in 4th place...
Based on followers, yes, but based on my opinion, it’s in last (same with Lely (I think))
I agree. The results were pretty expected. You get the more because you're slightly more popular, definitively more mature, but also because your fanfic is better, and since it implicates more people, more people are staying tuned
The fact Fways still find himself in 2nd place nowadays is pretty startling at first. I mean the quality is absolutely godly, yet he's not as active as before so less people acknowledge him.
But between the old members who discover a sequel, and the new members who discover a new series,
the hype around it is pretty important and deserved in my opinion.
About the MysteryMan's one, we'll he's less popular, it doesn't implicates MKPC members so it's why it's got less followers, yet for me Twilightverse is pretty bad, there is a lot of issues, but it's still ok anyways
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1On 2022-10-06 at 00:38:17
ok since someone I copying my series I have to sacrifice the Anime kid
©Twilightverse
©Twilightverse
Do you think toxic people and rule breakers will suddenly stop stealing your fanfic/topic concept, just because you put a copyright in the title?
Agreed (also I just realised who made it)
But in that situation Ralsei is clearly freaking out. Okay "Lidelle" stole the title, but it has nothing to do with the Twilightverse tbh.
And anyways @-Ralsei- you truly have copyright obsession or what ? Stop spreading it everywhere, it doesn't have any utility
uh no I'm not. It justs feels right to copyright it, its a series.
Why do you have to copyright it ? It's forbidden to use a name, anyways, and whether if there is a copyright or no
+ bad guys don't care about a copyright sign
don't forget about lawsuits.. just saying.
Bro we're on a racing game community and you're talking about copyright and lawsuits 😭😭😭💀💀💀
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1On 2022-10-06 at 00:21:10
ok since someone I copying my series I have to sacrifice the Anime kid
©Twilightverse
©Twilightverse
Do you think toxic people and rule breakers will suddenly stop stealing your fanfic/topic concept, just because you put a copyright in the title?
Agreed (also I just realised who made it)
But in that situation Ralsei is clearly freaking out. Okay "Lidelle" stole the title, but it has nothing to do with the Twilightverse tbh.
And anyways @-Ralsei- you truly have copyright obsession or what ? Stop spreading it everywhere, it doesn't have any utility
uh no I'm not. It justs feels right to copyright it, its a series.
Why do you have to copyright it ? It's forbidden to use a name, anyways, and whether if there is a copyright or no
+ bad guys don't care about a copyright sign
22On 2022-10-05 at 22:18:58
ok since someone I copying my series I have to sacrifice the Anime kid
©Twilightverse
©Twilightverse
Do you think toxic people and rule breakers will suddenly stop stealing your fanfic/topic concept, just because you put a copyright in the title?
Agreed (also I just realised who made it)
But in that situation Ralsei is clearly freaking out. Okay "Lidelle" stole the title, but it has nothing to do with the Twilightverse tbh.
And anyways @-Ralsei- you truly have copyright obsession or what ? Stop spreading it everywhere, it doesn't have any utility
22On 2022-10-05 at 22:12:23
ok since someone I copying my series I have to sacrifice the Anime kid
©Twilightverse
©Twilightverse
Do you think toxic people and rule breakers will suddenly stop stealing your fanfic/topic concept, just because you put a copyright in the title?
22On 2022-09-24 at 00:39:08
Episode whatever: I’m ending the season myself to get season 2 ready for his unban
What happened last time:
Toadboiiiii: hi I’m evil
Nudge: SO, WHAT IS THE PLAN?!?!?!
Ralsei: YOU EXPECT ME TO KNOW?!?!?!
Nudge: I HAVE AN IDEA!!! I NEED TO GET INTO THE COMPUTER ROOM SAFELY AND THEN DO SOME HACKING!!!
Lely: I have an idea. Please don’t get hurt
Ralsei: I HAVE AN IDEA!!! IM GOING TO ACT AS BAIT, SINCE IF I GET ATTACKED I CAN HEAL MYSELF!!!
Parakoopa: I have an idea. I’m going to fly nudge into the vent so that he can sneak in
Max: I have an idea! GIVE! ME! LELY!
Master8: I have an idea. I escape
ToadBoi: I have an idea, YOU STOP RECYCLING THE SAME JOKE OVER AND OVER
*Parakoopa flew Nudge into the vents and into the computer room*
Ralsei: Come here max. You know you want to kill me
Max: NO!!! I just want Lely
Lely: Why do you want me though? What did I do to you?
Max: THAT DOESNT MATTER!!! In order to get Lely, I suppose I’m going to need to deal with Ralsei
*He immedietly punched Ralsei to the ground, knocking him sword out of his hand*
ToadBoi: Good job Max. Now, take his sword and FINISH HIM OFF
*He did exactly that, but right as the sword was about to stab into him, he stopped*
ToadBoi: WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?!?!? I!!! SAID!!! KILL HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!
Max: NEVER!!! I have broken free from the curse you out on me
Nudge: So, did I manage to shut down the brain ship in Max?
MonoBoi: WHAT!!! HOW DID YOU KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nudge: it was actually quite obvious. Now, WE NEED TO RUN
Max: I’m afraid I can’t
Lely: Why not? You can come with us now that you aren’t trying to kill us
Max: You see… I have one last thing I need to do, and I’m going to need to to leave ahead of me
Lely: NO! I don’t want to go without you. I can’t leave any friends behind
Max: You really consider me a friend after all I just did to you?
Ralsei: Lely, just come with us. If it’s what he wants, then we should do as he pleases
Lely: Fine
*Everyone except left the castle*
Nudge: So, what shall we talk about while waiting for max?
Master8: I want to talk about that barrier around the castle
Lely: Barrier? Then how is max supposed to get out?
Max: I can’t
Lely: Why would you do this to yourself? Why don’t you want to join us?
Max: Truth is, this is the self destruct sequence. The barrier is set up around the castle when it is activated, to avoid explosions leaving the castle
Nudge: Will this castle make up its mind whether it is medieval or futuristic?
*As he said that, the explosions started going off*
Max: Goodbye everyone
Lely: NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
*as Lely started crying, the entirety of the castle blew up, killing everything in it, including Max*
What happened last time:
Toadboiiiii: hi I’m evil
Nudge: SO, WHAT IS THE PLAN?!?!?!
Ralsei: YOU EXPECT ME TO KNOW?!?!?!
Nudge: I HAVE AN IDEA!!! I NEED TO GET INTO THE COMPUTER ROOM SAFELY AND THEN DO SOME HACKING!!!
Lely: I have an idea. Please don’t get hurt
Ralsei: I HAVE AN IDEA!!! IM GOING TO ACT AS BAIT, SINCE IF I GET ATTACKED I CAN HEAL MYSELF!!!
Parakoopa: I have an idea. I’m going to fly nudge into the vent so that he can sneak in
Max: I have an idea! GIVE! ME! LELY!
Master8: I have an idea. I escape
ToadBoi: I have an idea, YOU STOP RECYCLING THE SAME JOKE OVER AND OVER
*Parakoopa flew Nudge into the vents and into the computer room*
Ralsei: Come here max. You know you want to kill me
Max: NO!!! I just want Lely
Lely: Why do you want me though? What did I do to you?
Max: THAT DOESNT MATTER!!! In order to get Lely, I suppose I’m going to need to deal with Ralsei
*He immedietly punched Ralsei to the ground, knocking him sword out of his hand*
ToadBoi: Good job Max. Now, take his sword and FINISH HIM OFF
*He did exactly that, but right as the sword was about to stab into him, he stopped*
ToadBoi: WHAT ARE YOU DOING!?!?!? I!!! SAID!!! KILL HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!
Max: NEVER!!! I have broken free from the curse you out on me
Nudge: So, did I manage to shut down the brain ship in Max?
MonoBoi: WHAT!!! HOW DID YOU KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nudge: it was actually quite obvious. Now, WE NEED TO RUN
Max: I’m afraid I can’t
Lely: Why not? You can come with us now that you aren’t trying to kill us
Max: You see… I have one last thing I need to do, and I’m going to need to to leave ahead of me
Lely: NO! I don’t want to go without you. I can’t leave any friends behind
Max: You really consider me a friend after all I just did to you?
Ralsei: Lely, just come with us. If it’s what he wants, then we should do as he pleases
Lely: Fine
*Everyone except left the castle*
Nudge: So, what shall we talk about while waiting for max?
Master8: I want to talk about that barrier around the castle
Lely: Barrier? Then how is max supposed to get out?
Max: I can’t
Lely: Why would you do this to yourself? Why don’t you want to join us?
Max: Truth is, this is the self destruct sequence. The barrier is set up around the castle when it is activated, to avoid explosions leaving the castle
Nudge: Will this castle make up its mind whether it is medieval or futuristic?
*As he said that, the explosions started going off*
Max: Goodbye everyone
Lely: NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
*as Lely started crying, the entirety of the castle blew up, killing everything in it, including Max*
This was so good that I thought it was Danganronpa. Though what a sad end.
11On 2022-09-17 at 21:57:19
My color : is horrendous and unfitting
1On 2022-09-16 at 22:17:50
MAX DID NOT KILL YOU !
He said he would have had more fun if he did so, so he wanted it. So yeah, it's pretty interesting to have plot twist,
but implement them correctly and make them realistic
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122On 2022-09-16 at 22:14:51
First, I thought we should stop treating him like that because that's not cute and that's mean, but I guess he likes it if we thinks he's badass, it's his point
2On 2022-09-16 at 22:12:57
But Like the plot twist with Toadboiiii?
The plot twist have to be realistic. Toadboi as a nice person is as irrealistic as me disliking kpop and cute things,
or Max killing me
11On 2022-09-16 at 22:11:20
Hampter: Last time on The Twlightverse!
Hampter:And Now Back To The Twilight Zone!
Ralsei: Ugh.... What happene- YO THE GUYS ARE BACK!
Hampter: Woah! How did they come back....?
Hampter: What...? WHY I'M WEARING A SKIRT!????
The Great Gods: BAHAHAHAHA!
Knoah: Ugh.... What Happened!
Hampter: Apparently Me, Quorzel, And Tendo Got Renamed, And We Have Powers.
???: Hello? Hey You!
Both: Lely!?
Lely: How I ran into you guys!?
Both: IDK!
Max-Bros: It's Been so long!
Lely: Wow! Your Not Snorlax Anymore!
Max-Bros: Yep! I'm now Senko!
Lely: Cooooool!
Both: *High-five*
Kay: Damn, I can't believe your here..!
Ralsei: You seem hurt... Luckily, I have a power that can heal people, the spell is called Heal Prayer!
*Heals*
Lely: Thanks!
Ralsei: No problem! Want to join our adventure to the Twilight Zone?
Lely: Sure!
Lely has joined the gang.
Ralsei: Lets go! We have a full team now! Ok, Back to the adventure!
Parakoopa: Yeyyyyy!
Master: Lets Gooo!
Hampter: And Now Back To The Twilightverse!
Season 1: Chapter 5. The final Comfrontation.
Ralsei: Guys! Its The Twilight Zone!
Lely: I've found it! This is another area For The K-Prophecy!
Ralsei: The Hell Is That!?
Lely: Its Apparently supposed to be when the great gods form a powerful titan... No one knows of it... But I do think there K-pop stars!
Master: Hahaha.... You're here.. I MUST FOLLOW KINGS COMMAND!!!
*knockout*
Hampter: Where are we!?
Knoah: I don't know...? Hey, where is Max-bros??
Max: Bahahahaha! I tricked you!!!!
Kay: So thats the weird feeling I got from Max And Master..!
Max-Bros: You've been setenced to life for trying to break into the Holy area!! But to be honest, I would've been more fun watching you die in pain by the roaring!
Lely: Why you're doing this max...
Max-Bros: I'm sorry... but I can't lose this job.
Lely: WHYYYY!!!
*Max-Bros runs away*
Hampter: Huh. Weird- Wait, Where is Ralsei!?
*overhears Ralsei and Toadboiii*
Ralsei: Yall Guys in jail SHUT UP!!
Toadboiiii: Yea!!
Hampter: Toadboiiii!? Ralsei!? What you're doing here!?
Ralsei: Trying to figure out the code to unlock your jailcell! Now hush! Lemme figure it out!....
*Unlocks the Code*
*Jailroom Unlocks*
Hampter: We got out! Thanks, Ralsei And Toadboiiii!
Both: You're welcome!
Toadboiiii: NOW LETS GET THE KING!!!
Parakoopa: Yea!.... But.. Don't we need a plan?
Toadboiiii: Yeah, Lets figure out a Plan!
To Be Continued...
Hampter:And Now Back To The Twilight Zone!
Ralsei: Ugh.... What happene- YO THE GUYS ARE BACK!
Hampter: Woah! How did they come back....?
Hampter: What...? WHY I'M WEARING A SKIRT!????
The Great Gods: BAHAHAHAHA!
Knoah: Ugh.... What Happened!
Hampter: Apparently Me, Quorzel, And Tendo Got Renamed, And We Have Powers.
???: Hello? Hey You!
Both: Lely!?
Lely: How I ran into you guys!?
Both: IDK!
Max-Bros: It's Been so long!
Lely: Wow! Your Not Snorlax Anymore!
Max-Bros: Yep! I'm now Senko!
Lely: Cooooool!
Both: *High-five*
Kay: Damn, I can't believe your here..!
Ralsei: You seem hurt... Luckily, I have a power that can heal people, the spell is called Heal Prayer!
*Heals*
Lely: Thanks!
Ralsei: No problem! Want to join our adventure to the Twilight Zone?
Lely: Sure!
Lely has joined the gang.
Ralsei: Lets go! We have a full team now! Ok, Back to the adventure!
Parakoopa: Yeyyyyy!
Master: Lets Gooo!
Hampter: And Now Back To The Twilightverse!
Season 1: Chapter 5. The final Comfrontation.
Ralsei: Guys! Its The Twilight Zone!
Lely: I've found it! This is another area For The K-Prophecy!
Ralsei: The Hell Is That!?
Lely: Its Apparently supposed to be when the great gods form a powerful titan... No one knows of it... But I do think there K-pop stars!
Master: Hahaha.... You're here.. I MUST FOLLOW KINGS COMMAND!!!
*knockout*
Hampter: Where are we!?
Knoah: I don't know...? Hey, where is Max-bros??
Max: Bahahahaha! I tricked you!!!!
Kay: So thats the weird feeling I got from Max And Master..!
Max-Bros: You've been setenced to life for trying to break into the Holy area!! But to be honest, I would've been more fun watching you die in pain by the roaring!
Lely: Why you're doing this max...
Max-Bros: I'm sorry... but I can't lose this job.
Lely: WHYYYY!!!
*Max-Bros runs away*
Hampter: Huh. Weird- Wait, Where is Ralsei!?
*overhears Ralsei and Toadboiii*
Ralsei: Yall Guys in jail SHUT UP!!
Toadboiiii: Yea!!
Hampter: Toadboiiii!? Ralsei!? What you're doing here!?
Ralsei: Trying to figure out the code to unlock your jailcell! Now hush! Lemme figure it out!....
*Unlocks the Code*
*Jailroom Unlocks*
Hampter: We got out! Thanks, Ralsei And Toadboiiii!
Both: You're welcome!
Toadboiiii: NOW LETS GET THE KING!!!
Parakoopa: Yea!.... But.. Don't we need a plan?
Toadboiiii: Yeah, Lets figure out a Plan!
To Be Continued...
You posted it twice
On 2022-09-16 at 22:08:54
Hampter: Last time on The Twlightverse!
Hampter:And Now Back To The Twilight Zone!
Ralsei: Ugh.... What happene- YO THE GUYS ARE BACK!
Hampter: Woah! How did they come back....?
Hampter: What...? WHY I'M WEARING A SKIRT!????
The Great Gods: BAHAHAHAHA!
Knoah: Ugh.... What Happened!
Hampter: Apparently Me, Quorzel, And Tendo Got Renamed, And We Have Powers.
???: Hello? Hey You!
Both: Lely!?
Lely: How I ran into you guys!?
Both: IDK!
Max-Bros: It's Been so long!
Lely: Wow! Your Not Snorlax Anymore!
Max-Bros: Yep! I'm now Senko!
Lely: Cooooool!
Both: *High-five*
Kay: Damn, I can't believe your here..!
Ralsei: You seem hurt... Luckily, I have a power that can heal people, the spell is called Heal Prayer!
*Heals*
Lely: Thanks!
Ralsei: No problem! Want to join our adventure to the Twilight Zone?
Lely: Sure!
Lely has joined the gang.
Ralsei: Lets go! We have a full team now! Ok, Back to the adventure!
Parakoopa: Yeyyyyy!
Master: Lets Gooo!
Hampter: And Now Back To The Twilightverse!
Season 1: Chapter 5. The final Comfrontation.
Ralsei: Guys! Its The Twilight Zone!
Lely: I've found it! This is another area For The K-Prophecy!
Ralsei: The Hell Is That!?
Lely: Its Apparently supposed to be when the great gods form a powerful titan... No one knows of it... But I do think there K-pop stars!
Master: Hahaha.... You're here.. I MUST FOLLOW KINGS COMMAND!!!
*knockout*
Hampter: Where are we!?
Knoah: I don't know...? Hey, where is Max-bros??
Max: Bahahahaha! I tricked you!!!!
Kay: So thats the weird feeling I got from Max And Master..!
Max-Bros: You've been setenced to life for trying to break into the Holy area!! But to be honest, I would've been more fun watching you die in pain by the roaring!
Lely: Why you're doing this max...
Max-Bros: I'm sorry... but I can't lose this job.
Lely: WHYYYY!!!
*Max-Bros runs away*
Hampter: Huh. Weird- Wait, Where is Ralsei!?
*overhears Ralsei and Toadboiii*
Ralsei: Yall Guys in jail SHUT UP!!
Toadboiiii: Yea!!
Hampter: Toadboiiii!? Ralsei!? What you're doing here!?
Ralsei: Trying to figure out the code to unlock your jailcell! Now hush! Lemme figure it out!....
*Unlocks the Code*
*Jailroom Unlocks*
Hampter: We got out! Thanks, Ralsei And Toadboiiii!
Both: You're welcome!
Toadboiiii: NOW LETS GET THE KING!!!
Parakoopa: Yea!.... But.. Don't we need a plan?
Toadboiiii: Yeah, Lets figure out a Plan!
To Be Continued...
Hampter:And Now Back To The Twilight Zone!
Ralsei: Ugh.... What happene- YO THE GUYS ARE BACK!
Hampter: Woah! How did they come back....?
Hampter: What...? WHY I'M WEARING A SKIRT!????
The Great Gods: BAHAHAHAHA!
Knoah: Ugh.... What Happened!
Hampter: Apparently Me, Quorzel, And Tendo Got Renamed, And We Have Powers.
???: Hello? Hey You!
Both: Lely!?
Lely: How I ran into you guys!?
Both: IDK!
Max-Bros: It's Been so long!
Lely: Wow! Your Not Snorlax Anymore!
Max-Bros: Yep! I'm now Senko!
Lely: Cooooool!
Both: *High-five*
Kay: Damn, I can't believe your here..!
Ralsei: You seem hurt... Luckily, I have a power that can heal people, the spell is called Heal Prayer!
*Heals*
Lely: Thanks!
Ralsei: No problem! Want to join our adventure to the Twilight Zone?
Lely: Sure!
Lely has joined the gang.
Ralsei: Lets go! We have a full team now! Ok, Back to the adventure!
Parakoopa: Yeyyyyy!
Master: Lets Gooo!
Hampter: And Now Back To The Twilightverse!
Season 1: Chapter 5. The final Comfrontation.
Ralsei: Guys! Its The Twilight Zone!
Lely: I've found it! This is another area For The K-Prophecy!
Ralsei: The Hell Is That!?
Lely: Its Apparently supposed to be when the great gods form a powerful titan... No one knows of it... But I do think there K-pop stars!
Master: Hahaha.... You're here.. I MUST FOLLOW KINGS COMMAND!!!
*knockout*
Hampter: Where are we!?
Knoah: I don't know...? Hey, where is Max-bros??
Max: Bahahahaha! I tricked you!!!!
Kay: So thats the weird feeling I got from Max And Master..!
Max-Bros: You've been setenced to life for trying to break into the Holy area!! But to be honest, I would've been more fun watching you die in pain by the roaring!
Lely: Why you're doing this max...
Max-Bros: I'm sorry... but I can't lose this job.
Lely: WHYYYY!!!
*Max-Bros runs away*
Hampter: Huh. Weird- Wait, Where is Ralsei!?
*overhears Ralsei and Toadboiii*
Ralsei: Yall Guys in jail SHUT UP!!
Toadboiiii: Yea!!
Hampter: Toadboiiii!? Ralsei!? What you're doing here!?
Ralsei: Trying to figure out the code to unlock your jailcell! Now hush! Lemme figure it out!....
*Unlocks the Code*
*Jailroom Unlocks*
Hampter: We got out! Thanks, Ralsei And Toadboiiii!
Both: You're welcome!
Toadboiiii: NOW LETS GET THE KING!!!
Parakoopa: Yea!.... But.. Don't we need a plan?
Toadboiiii: Yeah, Lets figure out a Plan!
To Be Continued...
Why did you put me in teal, you in green and Max in blue?
Because Now I'm Green, You feel like a teal to me, and Max Feels like a bue color to me
I always write in green and teal doesn't fit me. I still protest about my color. I'm unhappy
+ Max would NEVER kill me for a stupid ass job so this is inaccurate. Or else, he's not my bestie anymore 🐶
211On 2022-09-16 at 22:06:31
Hampter: Last time on The Twlightverse!
Hampter:And Now Back To The Twilight Zone!
Ralsei: Ugh.... What happene- YO THE GUYS ARE BACK!
Hampter: Woah! How did they come back....?
Hampter: What...? WHY I'M WEARING A SKIRT!????
The Great Gods: BAHAHAHAHA!
Knoah: Ugh.... What Happened!
Hampter: Apparently Me, Quorzel, And Tendo Got Renamed, And We Have Powers.
???: Hello? Hey You!
Both: Lely!?
Lely: How I ran into you guys!?
Both: IDK!
Max-Bros: It's Been so long!
Lely: Wow! Your Not Snorlax Anymore!
Max-Bros: Yep! I'm now Senko!
Lely: Cooooool!
Both: *High-five*
Kay: Damn, I can't believe your here..!
Ralsei: You seem hurt... Luckily, I have a power that can heal people, the spell is called Heal Prayer!
*Heals*
Lely: Thanks!
Ralsei: No problem! Want to join our adventure to the Twilight Zone?
Lely: Sure!
Lely has joined the gang.
Ralsei: Lets go! We have a full team now! Ok, Back to the adventure!
Parakoopa: Yeyyyyy!
Master: Lets Gooo!
Hampter: And Now Back To The Twilightverse!
Season 1: Chapter 5. The final Comfrontation.
Ralsei: Guys! Its The Twilight Zone!
Lely: I've found it! This is another area For The K-Prophecy!
Ralsei: The Hell Is That!?
Lely: Its Apparently supposed to be when the great gods form a powerful titan... No one knows of it... But I do think there K-pop stars!
Master: Hahaha.... You're here.. I MUST FOLLOW KINGS COMMAND!!!
*knockout*
Hampter: Where are we!?
Knoah: I don't know...? Hey, where is Max-bros??
Max: Bahahahaha! I tricked you!!!!
Kay: So thats the weird feeling I got from Max And Master..!
Max-Bros: You've been setenced to life for trying to break into the Holy area!! But to be honest, I would've been more fun watching you die in pain by the roaring!
Lely: Why you're doing this max...
Max-Bros: I'm sorry... but I can't lose this job.
Lely: WHYYYY!!!
*Max-Bros runs away*
Hampter: Huh. Weird- Wait, Where is Ralsei!?
*overhears Ralsei and Toadboiii*
Ralsei: Yall Guys in jail SHUT UP!!
Toadboiiii: Yea!!
Hampter: Toadboiiii!? Ralsei!? What you're doing here!?
Ralsei: Trying to figure out the code to unlock your jailcell! Now hush! Lemme figure it out!....
*Unlocks the Code*
*Jailroom Unlocks*
Hampter: We got out! Thanks, Ralsei And Toadboiiii!
Both: You're welcome!
Toadboiiii: NOW LETS GET THE KING!!!
Parakoopa: Yea!.... But.. Don't we need a plan?
Toadboiiii: Yeah, Lets figure out a Plan!
To Be Continued...
Hampter:And Now Back To The Twilight Zone!
Ralsei: Ugh.... What happene- YO THE GUYS ARE BACK!
Hampter: Woah! How did they come back....?
Hampter: What...? WHY I'M WEARING A SKIRT!????
The Great Gods: BAHAHAHAHA!
Knoah: Ugh.... What Happened!
Hampter: Apparently Me, Quorzel, And Tendo Got Renamed, And We Have Powers.
???: Hello? Hey You!
Both: Lely!?
Lely: How I ran into you guys!?
Both: IDK!
Max-Bros: It's Been so long!
Lely: Wow! Your Not Snorlax Anymore!
Max-Bros: Yep! I'm now Senko!
Lely: Cooooool!
Both: *High-five*
Kay: Damn, I can't believe your here..!
Ralsei: You seem hurt... Luckily, I have a power that can heal people, the spell is called Heal Prayer!
*Heals*
Lely: Thanks!
Ralsei: No problem! Want to join our adventure to the Twilight Zone?
Lely: Sure!
Lely has joined the gang.
Ralsei: Lets go! We have a full team now! Ok, Back to the adventure!
Parakoopa: Yeyyyyy!
Master: Lets Gooo!
Hampter: And Now Back To The Twilightverse!
Season 1: Chapter 5. The final Comfrontation.
Ralsei: Guys! Its The Twilight Zone!
Lely: I've found it! This is another area For The K-Prophecy!
Ralsei: The Hell Is That!?
Lely: Its Apparently supposed to be when the great gods form a powerful titan... No one knows of it... But I do think there K-pop stars!
Master: Hahaha.... You're here.. I MUST FOLLOW KINGS COMMAND!!!
*knockout*
Hampter: Where are we!?
Knoah: I don't know...? Hey, where is Max-bros??
Max: Bahahahaha! I tricked you!!!!
Kay: So thats the weird feeling I got from Max And Master..!
Max-Bros: You've been setenced to life for trying to break into the Holy area!! But to be honest, I would've been more fun watching you die in pain by the roaring!
Lely: Why you're doing this max...
Max-Bros: I'm sorry... but I can't lose this job.
Lely: WHYYYY!!!
*Max-Bros runs away*
Hampter: Huh. Weird- Wait, Where is Ralsei!?
*overhears Ralsei and Toadboiii*
Ralsei: Yall Guys in jail SHUT UP!!
Toadboiiii: Yea!!
Hampter: Toadboiiii!? Ralsei!? What you're doing here!?
Ralsei: Trying to figure out the code to unlock your jailcell! Now hush! Lemme figure it out!....
*Unlocks the Code*
*Jailroom Unlocks*
Hampter: We got out! Thanks, Ralsei And Toadboiiii!
Both: You're welcome!
Toadboiiii: NOW LETS GET THE KING!!!
Parakoopa: Yea!.... But.. Don't we need a plan?
Toadboiiii: Yeah, Lets figure out a Plan!
To Be Continued...
Why did you put me in teal, you in green and Max in blue.
3On 2022-09-10 at 23:15:45
Hampter turns to anime, And Tendo turns into A FURRY.... Part 2:
Hampter: Last time on The Twilight Zone!
The Great Gods: Quorzel, Hampter, Tendo. You are changing for a reason. Tendo. You'll be good use for healing if someone gets hurt. Hampter. I think you might like what I turn you into! Quorzel. By flying, you can distract the enemies you face.....
The Great Gods:
Your
Names
Are
Ralsei, TheNudgyHampter, Parakoopa! NOW TRANSFORM, LET YOUR BODY TAKE YOU!!!
*Transforms*
Hampter:And Now Back To The Twilight Zone!
Ralsei: Ugh.... What happene- YO THE GUYS ARE BACK!
Hampter: Woah! How did they come back....?
Hampter: What...? WHY I'M WEARING A SKIRT!????
The Great Gods: BAHAHAHAHA!
Knoah: Ugh.... What Happened!
Hampter: Apparently Me, Quorzel, And Tendo Got Renamed, And We Have Powers.
???: Hello? Hey You!
Both: Lely!?
Lely: How I ran into you guys!?
Both: IDK!
Max-Bros: It's Been so long!
Lely: Wow! Your Not Snorlax Anymore!
Max-Bros: Yep! I'm now Senko!
Lely: Cooooool!
Both: *High-five*
Kay: Damn, I can't believe your here..!
Ralsei: You seem hurt... Luckily, I have a power that can heal people, the spell is called Heal Prayer!
*Heals*
Lely: Thanks!
Ralsei: No problem! Want to join our adventure to the Twilight Zone?
Lely: Sure!
Lely has joined the gang.
Ralsei: Lets go! We have a full team now! Ok, Back to the adventure!
Parakoopa: Yeyyyyy!
Master: Lets Gooo!
To Be Continued...
Hampter: Last time on The Twilight Zone!
The Great Gods: Quorzel, Hampter, Tendo. You are changing for a reason. Tendo. You'll be good use for healing if someone gets hurt. Hampter. I think you might like what I turn you into! Quorzel. By flying, you can distract the enemies you face.....
The Great Gods:
Your
Names
Are
Ralsei, TheNudgyHampter, Parakoopa! NOW TRANSFORM, LET YOUR BODY TAKE YOU!!!
*Transforms*
Hampter:And Now Back To The Twilight Zone!
Ralsei: Ugh.... What happene- YO THE GUYS ARE BACK!
Hampter: Woah! How did they come back....?
Hampter: What...? WHY I'M WEARING A SKIRT!????
The Great Gods: BAHAHAHAHA!
Knoah: Ugh.... What Happened!
Hampter: Apparently Me, Quorzel, And Tendo Got Renamed, And We Have Powers.
???: Hello? Hey You!
Both: Lely!?
Lely: How I ran into you guys!?
Both: IDK!
Max-Bros: It's Been so long!
Lely: Wow! Your Not Snorlax Anymore!
Max-Bros: Yep! I'm now Senko!
Lely: Cooooool!
Both: *High-five*
Kay: Damn, I can't believe your here..!
Ralsei: You seem hurt... Luckily, I have a power that can heal people, the spell is called Heal Prayer!
*Heals*
Lely: Thanks!
Ralsei: No problem! Want to join our adventure to the Twilight Zone?
Lely: Sure!
Lely has joined the gang.
Ralsei: Lets go! We have a full team now! Ok, Back to the adventure!
Parakoopa: Yeyyyyy!
Master: Lets Gooo!
To Be Continued...
I got a french version for ya
Hampter se transforme en personnage d'anime, et Tendo se transforme en FURET...
Partie 2 :
Hampter : Précédemment dans The Twilight Zone...
Les Dieux : Quorzel, Hampter, Tendo, vous êtes en train de vous transformer pour une bonne raison. Tendo, tu seras utile pour soigner les blessures si quelqu'un se fait mal. Hampter, je pense que tu pourrais aimer ce que nous allons te donner comme nouveau corps ! Quorzel. En volant, tu pourras distraire les ennemis auxquels tu fais face...
Vos
noms
sont
Ralsei, TheNudgyHampter et Parakoopa ! MAINTENANT, QUE LA MAGIE VOUS TRANSFORME, LAISSEZ VOTRE CORPS VOUS ABSORBER ET SE TRANSFORMER !
Hampter : Et maintenant, nous voici de retour à The Twilight Zone !
Ralsei : Hmpf... que s'est il pas-- YO MES AMIS SONT DE RETOUR !
Hampter : Wow ! Comment sont-ils revenus ?
Attendez, POURQUOI JE PORTE UNE JUPE ?
Les Dieux : 🤣🤣🤣
Knoah : Euh... que s'est il passé ?
Hampter : Apparemment, moi, Quorzel et Tendo avons été renommés et nous avons maintenant des pouvoirs... hors du commun
Lely : Salut ! Hey, comment ça va ?
Knoah et Hampter : Lely ???
Lely : Comment ai-je pu vous rentrer dedans ?
Knoah et Hampter : Aucune idée...
Max-Bros : Oh, ça fait super longtemps qu'on ne s'est pas vu !
Lely : Oh, mais tu as changé ! Tu n'es plus Snorlax !
Max : Yep ! Je suis Senko maintenant !
*Tope-là*
Kraze : Oh putain... j'ai du mal à croire que tu es là !
Ralsei : Oh, on dirait que tu as mal. Heureusement, j'ai un pouvoir qui peut soigner les blessures ! Le pouvoir est nommé Heal Prayer !
*soigne Lely
Lely : Merci !
Ralsei : Pas de problème, de rien. Veux-tu faire partie de notre aventure ?
Lely : Bien sûr !
Lely a rejoint le groupe.
Ralsei : Super ! On est vraiment une équipe maintenant ! Bref, retournons à l'aventure !
Parakoopa : Yeah !
Master8 : C'est parti !
À suivre...
Partie 2 :
Hampter : Précédemment dans The Twilight Zone...
Les Dieux : Quorzel, Hampter, Tendo, vous êtes en train de vous transformer pour une bonne raison. Tendo, tu seras utile pour soigner les blessures si quelqu'un se fait mal. Hampter, je pense que tu pourrais aimer ce que nous allons te donner comme nouveau corps ! Quorzel. En volant, tu pourras distraire les ennemis auxquels tu fais face...
Vos
noms
sont
Ralsei, TheNudgyHampter et Parakoopa ! MAINTENANT, QUE LA MAGIE VOUS TRANSFORME, LAISSEZ VOTRE CORPS VOUS ABSORBER ET SE TRANSFORMER !
Hampter : Et maintenant, nous voici de retour à The Twilight Zone !
Ralsei : Hmpf... que s'est il pas-- YO MES AMIS SONT DE RETOUR !
Hampter : Wow ! Comment sont-ils revenus ?
Attendez, POURQUOI JE PORTE UNE JUPE ?
Les Dieux : 🤣🤣🤣
Knoah : Euh... que s'est il passé ?
Hampter : Apparemment, moi, Quorzel et Tendo avons été renommés et nous avons maintenant des pouvoirs... hors du commun
Lely : Salut ! Hey, comment ça va ?
Knoah et Hampter : Lely ???
Lely : Comment ai-je pu vous rentrer dedans ?
Knoah et Hampter : Aucune idée...
Max-Bros : Oh, ça fait super longtemps qu'on ne s'est pas vu !
Lely : Oh, mais tu as changé ! Tu n'es plus Snorlax !
Max : Yep ! Je suis Senko maintenant !
*Tope-là*
Kraze : Oh putain... j'ai du mal à croire que tu es là !
Ralsei : Oh, on dirait que tu as mal. Heureusement, j'ai un pouvoir qui peut soigner les blessures ! Le pouvoir est nommé Heal Prayer !
*soigne Lely
Lely : Merci !
Ralsei : Pas de problème, de rien. Veux-tu faire partie de notre aventure ?
Lely : Bien sûr !
Lely a rejoint le groupe.
Ralsei : Super ! On est vraiment une équipe maintenant ! Bref, retournons à l'aventure !
Parakoopa : Yeah !
Master8 : C'est parti !
À suivre...
On 2022-09-09 at 23:24:42
Part 1 of chapter 4: Hampter turns to anime, And Tendo turns into A FURRY....
Tendo: uhhh, something seems off about Hampter....
CoolHampter2009: I feel not so good.
Knoah: We better put him on a rock!
Tendo: I'm starting to not feel well either now.... Whats going on!?
Both:Something is happening, Are we transforming???
Knoah: so is Quorzel!
The Great Gods: Quorzel, Hampter, Tendo. You are changing for a reason. Tendo. You'll be good use for healing if someone gets hurt. Hampter. I think you might like what I turn you into! Quorzel. By flying, you can distract the enemies you face.....
The Great Gods:
Your
Names
Are
Ralsei, TheNudgyHampter, Parakoopa! NOW TRANSFORM, LET YOUR BODY TAKE YOU!!!
*Transforms*
To be continued...
Tendo: uhhh, something seems off about Hampter....
CoolHampter2009: I feel not so good.
Knoah: We better put him on a rock!
Tendo: I'm starting to not feel well either now.... Whats going on!?
Both:Something is happening, Are we transforming???
Knoah: so is Quorzel!
The Great Gods: Quorzel, Hampter, Tendo. You are changing for a reason. Tendo. You'll be good use for healing if someone gets hurt. Hampter. I think you might like what I turn you into! Quorzel. By flying, you can distract the enemies you face.....
The Great Gods:
Your
Names
Are
Ralsei, TheNudgyHampter, Parakoopa! NOW TRANSFORM, LET YOUR BODY TAKE YOU!!!
*Transforms*
To be continued...
Don't forget me
It's only a short part of Chapter 4. Toadboi, Kraze, Master and more didn't get any lines in that part neither.
Yeah Lely btw want to join this??? also max bros ur in part 2.
Why not, I'm wondering a bit about how it plays out
1On 2022-09-09 at 23:22:57
Part 1 of chapter 4: Hampter turns to anime, And Tendo turns into A FURRY....
Tendo: uhhh, something seems off about Hampter....
CoolHampter2009: I feel not so good.
Knoah: We better put him on a rock!
Tendo: I'm starting to not feel well either now.... Whats going on!?
Both:Something is happening, Are we transforming???
Knoah: so is Quorzel!
The Great Gods: Quorzel, Hampter, Tendo. You are changing for a reason. Tendo. You'll be good use for healing if someone gets hurt. Hampter. I think you might like what I turn you into! Quorzel. By flying, you can distract the enemies you face.....
The Great Gods:
Your
Names
Are
Ralsei, TheNudgyHampter, Parakoopa! NOW TRANSFORM, LET YOUR BODY TAKE YOU!!!
*Transforms*
To be continued...
Tendo: uhhh, something seems off about Hampter....
CoolHampter2009: I feel not so good.
Knoah: We better put him on a rock!
Tendo: I'm starting to not feel well either now.... Whats going on!?
Both:Something is happening, Are we transforming???
Knoah: so is Quorzel!
The Great Gods: Quorzel, Hampter, Tendo. You are changing for a reason. Tendo. You'll be good use for healing if someone gets hurt. Hampter. I think you might like what I turn you into! Quorzel. By flying, you can distract the enemies you face.....
The Great Gods:
Your
Names
Are
Ralsei, TheNudgyHampter, Parakoopa! NOW TRANSFORM, LET YOUR BODY TAKE YOU!!!
*Transforms*
To be continued...
Don't forget me
It's only a short part of Chapter 4. Toadboi, Kraze, Master and more didn't get any lines in that part neither.
On 2022-09-09 at 23:04:27
There's no point at reviving a fanfic if you got no ideas and if you're not taking any decisions
On 2022-07-28 at 01:42:41
Fair enough, but the fact there is shards...
The story will be different of course, but why wouldn't you take your own thing ?
The story will be different of course, but why wouldn't you take your own thing ?
litteraly i wasn't thinking of nudgy's fanfic
Bruh. What a coincidence, two fanfics include shards and they are
both recent...